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Malfoy Manor Redemption
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Redemption

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Epilogue

Redemption

phoenix

160 Reviews   |   160 Ratings, 0 Likes, 109 Favorites )

Mystery/Suspense Drama Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Malfoy Manor 89,112 Words 25 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Ludovic Bagman Ronald Weasley Luna Lovegood Madam Malkin Madam Rosmerta Marcus Flint Millicent Bulstrode Minerva McGonagall Moaning Myrtle Molly Weasley Mr. Ollivander Mrs. Norris Mulciber (Death Eater) Mundungus Fletcher Nagini Narcissa Malfoy

Lucius Malfoy has finally realized the Dark Lord has been spinning nothing but lies. Unfortunately, it took him losing his family to realize this. Now, he is trying to atone for his sins. Will anyone trust him? Will anyone help him regain his place in society? He has a plan. Set after HBP. Rating is for later chapters. Additionally, there are two chapters that have some torture, but nothing overly graphic. Nominated for Feb 2006 Multifaceted Awards in Best Dramatic and Best Het (Adult) Fics

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Chapters (25)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Epilogue


About phoenix

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phoenix

Member Since 2006  |  54 Stories  |  Favorited by 136  |  1,108 Reviews Written  |  1,209 Review Responses

I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal

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Reviews for Redemption

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10/10

severuslover

Uh-oh!! Who's the mystery guest? I'm guessing...Snape or Bellatrix. I gotta read more to find out so, great job and I'll try to make my next review longer.~Jen

0/10

MollysSister

What about the BABY????

10/10

severuslover

Great job again!! I love this story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!! But man, Ron's insensitive! I mean, come on, some respect for the dead?! ~Jen

0/10

MollysSister

oH no I think this was the worst cliffhanger ever!!!

0/10

MollysSister

No more secrets where Lucius is concerned then. Meep!

10/10

MollysSister

Clearly Snape should have pinned the note to the front of her chest!! I have goose bumps on my arms, this chapter has creeped me out!

0/10

MollysSister

Oh you are evil! What a cliff hanger! I was sure Ginny was going to be yelling at Harry for allowing Hermione to drain her magic to the point of being defenseless!

10/10

severuslover

Great job! I can't wait to see what happens!!! Sorry for the shortest, but I just gotta keep reading.~Jen

10/10

severuslover

Very nice...great job!! I love how you portray Hermione's emotions and personality. Keep up the wonderful writing!~Jen

0/10

MollysSister

I enjoyed Remus and Lucius getting drunk together. What better way for them to bond?

0/10

MollysSister

DAMN I was hoping there would be naughty sex in the laundry room up against a wall. Ginny is annoying the hell out of me. Why cant she mind her own bees wax?

0/10

MollysSister

I like how Lucius is making these plans for his second family. If only he gets there! Is there a happy ending planned?

0/10

MollysSister

I wonder is your Snape a spy for the light or truely a supporter of the dark. Not knowing makes it all the more fun.

0/10

MollysSister

Is the dark shadow my man Snape????Squeeeeee!

0/10

MollysSister

Now what was Lucius talking about when he said "secrets about the estate" I wonder what Ron would think if he knew that his behavior at the mannor was actually working for a LM/HG relationship?

0/10

MollysSister

I am curious about the note that Lucius doesnt want to be found too quickly...

10/10

MollysSister

Poor Hermione is in far over her head isnt she? Its like leading a lamb to slaughter.

10/10

MollysSister

You had Lucius cleaning toliets? He may never forgive you! I like hearing his POV and how they all fall victim to his little plots and ploys.

10/10

severuslover

Great start! I didn't really think I'd enjoy reading this pairing much either, but after reading a few fics about them...they've grown on me. Anyway, wonderful opening chapter!~Jen

10/10

severuslover

Another wonderful chapter! This story is full of everything that makes a story truly amazing! I love this story SO much! ~Jen

0/10

MollysSister

And the plot thickens even more!!

0/10

TenaciousGirl

I loved it.. Lucius as always.. quite the diplomat.:)

Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)

Thank you. I'm really quite proud of this one, and I just love the idea of Lucius redeemed, finally being able to prove to folks that he had been a victim of his birth with being a Death Eater. Though I really think it's because he's an opportunist who thought it would be best for him.

Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)

Thank you. I'm really quite proud of this one, and I just love the idea of Lucius redeemed, finally being able to prove to folks that he had been a victim of his birth with being a Death Eater. Though I really think it's because he's an opportunist who thought it would be best for him.

0/10

lucyferina

Good story!

Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)

Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. :D Even shrot ones like this are greatly appreciated. It's nice to see that folks are enjoying the story. :)

10/10

Morganna

That was an awesome story you wrote and thank you so much for sharing with us all.Wicked me I have sat here since 4am and done barely a thing other than get the kiddie's fed and off to school.I will have to wait to read The Price of Glory since I really do have to get dressed some time today.Huggles and keep up the great work****

Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)

Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)

LOL Sorry to have resulted in such an unprductive day, though at least you did get the kiddies off to school. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D I do know how hard it can be to put down an addictive fic. I've been there.

Thanks again for your review and rest assured that I am still writing, though not as frequently as I would like. 

10/10

tatiana

Wow, I just read this entire story in one sitting and I have to say that there is such a lack of well written Lucius/Hermione fics out there and it was so wonderful to read this. I loved your characterizations of Lucius and Hermione, the way you brought them together was very believable. I think that this pairing is always hard to pull off, but you managed it very well.  There were so many twists and turns in the plot, but no holes and the pace moved very nicely.  This will be up there on my list of favorites and no doubt I will read it again and again. Thank you! 

Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)

Thank you so much for your high praise,

Response from phoenix (Author of Redemption)

. I'm always glad to see that people are enjoying this story. So far, it is the favorite of the ones I've written. I hope that it will continue to bring you much enjoyment. :)

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