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Razor's Edge
Keppiehed86 Reviews | 7.53/10 (86 Ratings, 0 Likes, 19 Favorites )
Hermione has a secret that leaves her deeply indebted to an enemy. Can she turn the tables on him?
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Hermione was very lucky to have found the eager knight elf (who, by the way, was very funny). Snape's reaaction to Hermione's request was interesting. I am pleased that he didn't give her any grief about it though.*Looks both ways before crossing the tracks* Still no train wreck in sight. But, I will admit to wondering how it will all wrap up in one more chapter (I think you said ten). So far so good. Keep it up!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Did you like the little elf? I thought he was lame. And yeah! That train wreck is on its way. So watch out, I am thinking the story unravels in the last chapter, which is coming up next week. (I remember writing this and it felt ... soooooo ... long *laughs*). So don't get your hopes up. I'm basically like: Um, and then it all worked out, the end. Or something.But thanks for reading so far!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Well, I thought the elf was funny while he was Hermione's problem. If I was dealing with him, I would have gotten annoyed and forced some clothing on him. Or maybe drowning would be easier. No, definitely clothing. Oh now I am all excited for the wonderful (or dreadful, the jury is still out) conclusion!
So, Draco is still evil, but at least Snape has saved Hermione and still needs her for... something. I'm sure all will become clear in time.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
It's true, it kills me to write punkass!Draco! *cries* And yes, the next chapter is where the big explanations come in. Thanks for hanging in here with me and for sticking with it!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
I guess he has to start somewhere, before he grows up to be gorgeous & suave.And what are you doing up at this time of night, lass?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You're so right. I just love my flawed but lovable Draco! And It's morning here! With 5 kids, there's no rest around here, not even in the summer. Ugh!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Morning? True? Geez, my world clock's confused.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
It's okay. It feels too early to be called even morning here. *searches for coffee*
Nice turn of events with Pansy as Hermione's savior. Although I sure hope that she wants him for his money and status only, because how could you be interested in a relationship with someone like that?I also hope that Snape is more forthcoming with info if he expects Hermione to help him with his plan... whatever it is.Three weeks is a long time. A lot can happen, really. Looking forward to seeing how this plays out!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
LOL! I love your reasoning about Pansy. Who knew you were worried about her and her motivations for liking him? (actually, you know it kills me to write nasty!Draco like this!)All shall become clear in the next chapter, I promise. And then, watch out for that promised train wreck. AHHH! And I owe you a giant e-mail. On my way now!
Well that went better than expected. Would it have been too much trouble for him to just tell her what he meant? I think he enjoys seeing her sweat a bit. Although she is just assuming this is the heart that he means * insert evil music* Your Hagrid is well done and it is typical of him to save the day and not have a clue he did :)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You are reading one of my earlier pieces, don't forget, before I went quite so dark. If I wrote it today, you can only imagine the true sacrificial slaughter I would unfurl upon the audience. Thank goodness I was more tender-hearted, and apparently more creative! Although we aren't done yet .. *cue evil music of my own*
Nice twist on the heart aspect.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Why, thank you! This was my very first longfic, when I was new to fanfiction. I think I was a lot more cretaive back in those days! *laughs* I seem to have abandoned plot more recently for Harry/Draco antics. I am reminded that a good story was fun to write, and I should get back to my roots. Thanks for the compliment!
Can I go and slap Severus? Please? :0
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
LOL! At least in the end it is going to turn out without as much violence as we thought it might, right? that's a relief all around. I was wondering how I was going to write that scene, and it wsn't looking pretty ...
Oh, good twist that she doesn't have to kill a Thestral! Loved how you wrote Hagrid!Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm glad that you liked Hagrid, and I was really worried myself about how to resolve the thestral, so I am glad I figured it out!The rest of the chapters are at my beta, so I am just waiting on that. Thanks, again, for your interest in the story and your reviews! I really appreciate it!
You've written Hagrid so well! It was as if Robby Coltrain was right here next to me. It makes a fic more believable when the characters are written as they are meant to be.I am so glad Hermione doesn't need an actual thestral heart in the last chapater I was a little worried when Severus requested an elf. Great update hope to see more soon.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Aw, thanks so much for the compliment! I am really pleased that you find my characterization to be good. I try my best to get it right. I will admit that my beta helped me with that, as I had tended towards making him a wee bit pirate-y or veering towards the leprauchaun, but in the end, I was happy with him. I am glad that you were, too!Thanks for reading and fr leaving such a great review! I really appreciate it!
Thank goodness there was no need to slay a thestral - would have been kind of tricky if she couldn't see what she was trying to kill. And Hagrid saves the day again in his own inimitable way. Don't you just want to hug him (then wash & de-flea yourself afterwards, perhaps.)
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Re: Princes in exile - that Draco really is a bit wet, eh? Please, get the boys together before I feel the need to come round there and explain a few things to them.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I know, I was thinking about how I was going to get out of scenes of mass, bloody, invisible carnage. Thank goodness my Muse came and saved the day, or this might have turned into some story on how Hermione butchers something, and trust we none of us wanted to read about that! LOL!As for PIE, I am so glad that you are liking it! *laughs* Don't worry, the deed will get done, but not without more than a few cringing moments. And, of course, some massive misunderstandings. And I can say this without giving the game away: just about EVERYONE figures it out before Draco does, poor guy!
Great story! It looks like poor Hermione needs to learn to have faith.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm glad you are still liking it! I was worried that it was moving too slowly. Thanks so much for sticking with me, and for reviewing!
Leave it to Snape to ask for an animal's heart and not explain what it really is. Poor girl, thinking all this time that she would have to kill the invisible beast to retrieve one.That's Snape for you.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
LOL! I know. I was totally relieved my self when I finally figured that one out! *whew* I didn't want scenes of carnage in the story, and I was starting to sweat! Thanks for reading!
Very good chapter. I especially like the little speech Dumbledore gave Hermione,I'm wondering if she will start to trust her in heart as well as use her logic to solve something. Time will tell I guess.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Well, Hermione still has a lot to learn! I think we are all hoping that she will allow our favorite potions' master to be the one to do it! *winks* Time will tell indeed ... Thanks so much for reading, and for continuing to stay with the story. I appreciate your comments!
I'm so glad that Snape will recover. And I am so glad that Hermione will finally listen to her heart and trust that Snape's need for the Thestral Heart is not an evil one.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, don't worry. Our favorite potions prof. will be around for at least a few more battles yet!As far as Hermione goes, she may be learning to trust, but it's a long road ahead. I am glad you are enjoying it so far! Thanks for your reviews and for reading it!
Woot! Another great chapter, you have made my morning. Thanks!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
With your review, you have made mine! *smiles* Thanks so much for reading and liking it!
Hmmm... Marshmallow Peeps. Did Hermione follow up her explaination of the Easter Bunny with a lecture on muggle cavities?I'm glad she got her wits about her, and was able to get Snape to Madam Pomfrey. For a minute there, you had me worried that she was going to continue to try to heal him herself. When he died, she wouldn't want anyone to see her as a failure, so she would stash the body somewhere until nightfall where she could sneek out unseen and bury the body somewhere that noone would ever find it. Maybe the room or requirement would let her hide it in the junk room that everyone else uses. Yeah, that's it. Oh, sorry. I got carried away and forgot myself. This is your story *sheepishly sets down pen*Anyhow, I feel better about things now that Dumbleddore has heard what is going on, and is still unconcerned. Unless of course he is in on things, and he and Snape are planning world domination. Dammit, I'm doing it again. My brain just feels really goofy tonight *runs off to check the carbon monoxide detector*Ok, seriously this time, I am still enjoying this a lot and look forward to finding out how things go when she has to start her punishment. Hopefully they won't kill each other before all is said and done. At least she can relax about whether or not she should trust him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I knew you had a secret wish to be a writer! LOL! Maybe you and I could round robin the next one, whaddaya say? Sounds like an awesome plan to me!As far as trust goes, Hermione still has a long way to go. But I can promise that there will be no visits to the dentist in this narrative, so you can rest assured on that score! ;)Thanks for your lovely reviews, as always. But this isn't the one you're supposed to be reading. Go read PIE! It's a lot more fun!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Yeah, yeah, yeah. I read PIE when it came out, but just didn't make it around to commenting, I promise. It's on my to do list (have you seen the size of that thing!?) And, if I recall correctly, the chapter was ok. KIDDING, you know I loved it. I've been duly chastised so I will go right the wrongs of the world by giving a proper review, LOL.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
*twiddling thumbs, waiting on ego stroke* Oh, wait! My to-do list includes an e-mail to you! *runs off to spew to you in private format*
What a dilemma! If Snape is using the ingredient for good, then I hope Hermione's sense of justice wins out and she helps prove that he is a good guy after all. On the other hand, if he has bad intentions for it, I hope she doesn't play into his hands and help him. How to decide which is the case? But don't worry about me. I'll just be sitting here hoping for the best, but expecting the worst!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Hahahaha! You sure you don't want to take me up on that earlier offer? *winks* Actually, this was my very first real story, and I am totally embarrassed by it and cringing, so don't judge me too harshly for it. It kind of sputters and falls off the cliff. Just warning you. That's why I decided to go to drabble school and learn how to write something. Anyway, you are too kind to give it a read! Thanks for the support!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
Oh, just try to stop me from reading your stuff! And if this is truly embarrasing (which I don't see will be the case) then it might be good to have something to hold over your head, in case you get out of line down then road, LOL. Seriously though, still enjoyinig this. You know I'll tell you if it goes bad (gently of course).
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Okay, that's a deal. You can keep me from a ginormously swelled head! :)
This is getting even more interesting. Hermione will be so busy trying to find out what Snape wants with the heart that she will never get around to getting it. lol Look forward to next chapter and see if she actually completes the task.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I am so pleased that you are liking this! I am worried that I am going to drop the ball on the plot! *freaks out* Don't worry, the whole thing is completed, now to get it through the queue! Thanks for your patience and for your review! They mean a lot to me!
Ooooh, another great chapter, yay! Snape is up to something, I believe it's up to Hermione to find out. Waiting for the next chapter.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, I am so glad that you are enjoying it! Yes, of course our Snape has a plan... muahahaha! Thanks for sticking with it and for the review, I really appreciate it!
And the plot thickens. I'm intrigued by the mystery and darkness of this story. Nice job, keppiehed.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Thanks so much! I am hoping that that darned queue will speed up already so you guys don't forget what's going on! LOL! Thanks so much for sticking with it, I am really glad you remembered and wrote such a nice review!
Wow! Two very different uses indeed! But for him to expect Hermione to kill a Thestral? That's a bit over the top. He must expect her to figure out another way. Perhaps find one still-born or dying anyway. Perhaps Hagrid could help her with that problem. Or the Knockturn Alley idea, but she would probably have to find a way to make her purchase without letting anyone know her identity. Sounds like more poly-juice would come in handy, but she no longer has time enought left to brew it.I can hardly wait to see how you resolve this one. Will he use it after Dumbledore dies? Or on Lily Potter? I love a good mystery. ;)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm so glad I managed to pique your interest! I was worried that I might have dropped the ball after the first chapter, especially with the long wait in queue!Let me just say that you are on the right track... with one of your suggestions! LOL As for which one, you'll have to wait and see!Thanks so much for your enthusiastic review. I really appreciate it!
I must be the only one that didn't think Hermione was that much of an idiot here. Okay, wait, what she did was idiotic in hindsight, but you actually fooled me. I guess I'm as naive as Hermione, I thought Draco's desire for revenge was genuine in the sense that he'd exploit her seeming rift with the boys by getting her to conspire with him on some plan to humiliate Harry. That made sense to me!It was only when she entered their territory that I got uneasy, and then when she was heading for their dorm, that was when I started shrieking at her to get out of there. >_< Oh, Hermione! I hope Draco isn't irredeemably evil here- I don't need him to become the Trio's BFF but I do like fics where he's a little more three-dimensional than just 'evil git', because as HBP showed, he's not committed to being a raping, murdering Death Eater, although I respect that this is your fic and AU, so it could go anyway you want.But with this chapter, I think it's in-character, we've seen from Hermione in OotP, for instance, that when she acts impulsively, she doesn't think through all the consequences, she's rather blind to the implications of what she's doing because she's so goal-oriented that other nuances slip by her.And now I am off to the new chapter, filled with trepidation at what awaits me...I take comfort from the fact that there are no warnings for non-con, so...yes. *inches forward cautiously*
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I am really delighted by your in-depth review! I have to say that I would have been like Hermione. We, the audience, have the benefit of seeing the full picture, but as an innocent, she really had no reason to think that anything really untoward would happen to her. So I would have been in her shoes right along with her, unfortunately.As for our resident villain, I don't usually write Draco this way, so please forgive me. If you go check out "Finding Draco", I can promise to give him a MUCH more mulit-dimensional treatment to make up for the slights here. And if you will care to chance it more, I beg you to check out my real pride and joy, "Princes in Exile", written with LiteraryBeauty. Okay, pimping session over! I thank you for reading this far. It was my very first longfic, and I am both fond of it and slightly embarrassed by it at the same time. Thanks so much for being kind, and I hope you like what is to come!
Response from borgprincess (Reviewer)
Ohai, thar, that was very quick. ^_^We, the audience, have the benefit of seeing the full picture, but as an innocent, she really had no reason to think that anything really untoward would happen to herI agree, I think her past dealings with him left her confident that she could handle herself, I mean, last time they literally came to blows, she flattened him, so I don't think she sees him as a real enemy. He didn't strike back that time, so she probably sees him as the same blustering snarly kid that doesn't back up his words with actions. And at the end of the day, he's her classmate- a nasty Slytherin kid, to be sure, but still, she sits in the same classroom as him every week, it's not like he's someone she would be aware of as a real menacing threat that she should fear for her safety with, y'know?And lol, thanks for the recs, I might check them out when I'm eager for new fics, but I'm kinda just into my OTP and not much else...although the idea of Draco and Luna, was it, is interesting. She's so aloof in canon I have a hard time figuring out how she'd let anyone in enough to have a relationship with them. Hmm. *ponders* Maybe I will save that now to read later on, but yeah, I'm all about SSHG, lol. It was my very first longficWait, wait- was? So...you've finished it? This is exciting, if so! And longfic, hurray! *bounces*
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Exactly! I'm so glad to see that we are on the same page! You have a great grasp of the characters and motivations!And yeah, I finished this one quite some time ago, I'm only just now getting around to publishing it here. By longfic, though, don't get too excited. It's only 10 chapters, which for me was a big deal! LOLThe Draco/Luna wasn't explicit or a romance,as such, but I definitely understand the appeal of staying with your OTP. I have a lot of other little stories, but the only other SS/HG I have is Deductions, and I don't know that that is worth even looking up. At any rate, I appreciate keen readers, and it is always a pleasure to have good feelback. Thanks so much for giving me your thoughts!
Sounds like Snape had a fair idea of how Hermione ended up in the Slytherin quarters. Wonder what the potion is for. :)
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Ah, you know Snape knows what's going on. And he lets Hermione in on some things before too much longer, promise. Thanks for keeping up with it!
Glad to see she made it out of Draco's room - for now. Did Snape suspects more was at stake? It never really was addressed what Snape wanted Draco for, as it seem the cleaning seemed an afterthought in response to Draco's comment to Hermione.Interesting task he's set out for her in the training a house-elf for their purposes. Looking forward to seeing how Hermione manages it!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I think it is safe to assume that Snape knows more than he lets on. But exactly how much may become clear in the following chapters. Until then, I thank you very much for your continued interest in the story, and for your great comments. They really keep me going!
Whew! That was a close one. So Hermione was saved by Pansy's jelousy and possessiveness. For once those vices were used for a virtuous reason. I doubt Hermione cares, so long as someone came to her rescue. Now I can't help but wish that Snape will find out somehow without Hermione actually coming out and telling him. Legilimency perhaps? Used on Draco, Crabb or Goyle?Don't mind me. I love to speculate. This story is so much fun. Keep up the good work.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
<3 I love that you are enjoying it so much! That does wonders for my self-esteem, I tell you! Thanks so much for your enthusiastic reviews, I always really look forward to them, and I hope that the story continues to delight!
Oh, my giddy aunt! Hermione is thick and Draco is evil. Snape needs her, but where is Snape when she needs rescuing? The plot thickens and squirms, causing me to mix my metaphores.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
This made me laugh. I hope I can deliver on plot, which I am doubting by the minute. Thanks for reading, though. Your reviews crack me up, they really do!