Chapter 7
Chapter 7 of 10
KeppiehedHermione has a secret that leaves her deeply indebted to an enemy. Can she turn the tables on him?
ReviewedDisclaimer: All this belongs to J.K. Rowling, as always, with an exception this time: I borrowed one line from Tolkien. So sorry, people. It's kind of a groaner.
A/N: Many thanks to my beta, Mel.
The day was dragging. This was a new experience for Hermione, who usually reveled in her classes and loved her work. Each minute felt like an hour, and she could almost hear the seconds thrumming in her veins in time to the beat of her heart. She was distracted. This could not be allowed. She steeled herself to focus and pay attention to her work. The day finally passed, but it felt like an eternity.
The previous night she had returned to the Gryffindor common room, deciding it was too late to put up with Professor Snape and the strange hold he seemed to have over her. She was tired, and she went to bed after securing the thestral heart. She needn't have bothered trying to get any rest. Hermione usually slept as purposefully as she did everything else in life, but last night was an exception. Her dreams kept her from any real rest; she was just on the cusp of sleep all night. The dreams teased her with images she couldn't quite make out. She wanted something, but she didn't know what. When she woke in the morning, she was cranky and unrefreshed, with a sort of longing that felt as if she had just lost something and couldn't quite remember where it was. It was extremely vexing!
Since Hermione was awake before everyone in the school anyway, she decided to drop the heart off at Snape's; then she could go about her classes in peace. She made her way to the same entry door she'd used previously and knocked, her bad mood evident in the strident tone her knuckles made upon the wood. That there was no immediate answer rankled her unreasonably, and she knocked again...louder and with faster rhythm...until she was practically beating upon his door in a rage. When it finally swung open, she was so involved she was almost surprised, and had to quickly snatch her fist back so as not to punch Snape as he stood there.
"Yes, what?" Snape bit out, having obviously been disturbed. He was wearing a robe (in Slytherin green, which may have amused her at any other time, a small part of her made note) and was in an unusual state of dishabille. She must have roused him from bed, which was understandable, given that he was recovering, but she had not considered that. Suddenly faced with his utter humanity, her senses were assailed and she could think of nothing else. Her eyes seemed to take on a life of their own and gave Snape a good once-over, drinking in the sight of him standing there in his pajamas. Hermione could see that although he was slender, he obviously was well-muscled, and she wondered why she'd never seen that before. She yearned for nothing more than to have him pull her into his strong arms and embrace her. That thought was so shocking that it managed to break the reverie into which she had fallen. Her cheeks stained the brightest crimson she was sure they had ever been, but at least the tableaux was broken. She cleared her throat. "Uh, sorry to disturb you. I have something for you, Professor."
If he had noticed her overeager perusal of his person, Snape gave no sign. "Come in, Miss Granger. The damage is done; you may as well enter. Although, in the future," here he gazed at her as she brushed past him, "perhaps you may do well to ... draw less attention to yourself?" He said the last part laconically with a bit of a smile. Hermione looked down and just hurried past him. Why did she always make such an idiot of herself around him?
Snape shut the door and led her into the same sitting room as before. They both took the same chairs. Hermione had intended to hand off the item and storm out. She was not really mad about anything, but she was tired from a night with no sleep, and the whole situation was feeling contrived and coerced to her. Well, perhaps not contrived, but she was definitely a pawn in a game she didn't want to play, and she wanted out. Now. She preferred to be on a playing field with opponents she could understand, and she wasn't so sure about what was going on with Snape. This made her uneasy. In fact, why was she still sitting here?
"What did you bring for me, Miss Granger? Was my confidence in you well placed? Don't dare to tell me that in the short span of a few hours you managed to bring me my ... heart's desire, as it were?" Snape sneered a little.
Hermione rummaged in her bag and brandished the thestral heart without preamble. It looked worse in the light of day, out of the crudity of Hagrid's hut and surrounded by the finer things in Snape's quarters. She didn't meet Snape's eyes. "You might have given me a bit of a clue, Professor, if you wanted it that badly. I thought I had to slaughter a wild animal!" She couldn't help sounding a little indignant.
Snape's eyes glowed a little as he reached for it. "Ah, Hermione, you do deserve all the accolades that have been bestowed upon you!"
Hermione reeled from hearing her name from his lips. She had to get ahold of herself! She was acting like a silly schoolgirl with a crush! On Professor Snape, of all people...it was embarrassing. She sneaked a glance at him and saw him gently examining it. His black pajamas under the green robe were not buttoned up as far as his formal robes usually came, allowing her a glimpse of his chest. It was alabaster, even paler than his hands, but the skin was flawless as marble, and she wanted to see more. He was talking. She had better stop this ridiculous mooning and listen.
"I didn't think you would be resourceful enough to find one, actually," Snape was saying in wonder. "This is much better for our purposes, and I am glad that you were able to succeed without bloodshed." His eyes snapped up to her face and he nodded curtly. "Well done, Miss Granger," he stood abruptly. "Now I need to see to the potion. You will stop by after your classes; it should be ready by then. I will have the next part of your instructions in place, and you will find out what I need from you then."
Hermione stood up. "I got you this impossible thing. Can't you ask someone else now?"
Snape was already past her and holding the door open. "There is no one but you."
Hermione ignored the thrill those words gave her and headed to her first class of the day.
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Never had she had such an interminably long day, and she blamed Professor Snape entirely for her lack of enthusiasm for subjects which had previously held adequate fascination. Since both he and his demands had entered her life, she could think of nothing but him. The fact that she had sought him out first was one that she pushed uncomfortably from her mind. Ever since she had gotten entangled in this mess, she had not been feeling depressed, but she was not going to give Snape credit for that. He credited himself with too much already, at least in her opinion.
Hermione dodged students deftly in the hallways and tried not to notice that the feelings of exhaustion fairly dropped away from her with each step she took towards Snape's rooms. The anticipation was growing in her belly, and she was nearly running by the time she turned the last corner to his door. She wondered what she would have to do next, what he would have her do, and she was so absorbed in her own thoughts that she didn't see the huge boy step out from around the corner and block her way. She hit him with all the force that she would a brick wall, and the wind was knocked out of her, her books flying. She sprawled on the ground, not seriously hurt, just surprised. It was Vincent Crabbe.
"Well, well, what do we have here? A Granger, caught off her guard," smirked Draco Malfoy. Hermione quickly stood up, dread overtaking her. She saw that Gregory Goyle was there to complete the loathsome trio. This did not bode well.
Hermione's mind was racing. The best way to deal with Draco and his thugs was to walk a fine line of disinterest. If you knuckled under to him, he enjoyed it too much to let you go, but if you humiliated him, he was dangerous. Hermione picked up her books. "I'm not off my guard, Malfoy, I'm just busy. Don't you have better things to do than to push girls around? Like go steal candy from a baby?" She made eye contact briefly and noticed that she had to look up to him since the last time they had had a run-in like this.
"Where is the rest of your ... threesome?" He leaned over and said the words suggestively in her ear. She couldn't help shuddering in disgust, and he laughed.
"Why don't you sod off, Malfoy, and take your cronies with you?" she gritted out, a little embarrassed that that was the best retort she could come up with.
Malfoy circled around her and looked her up and down. "I don't think so. You're in my hallway, mudblood; you're going to play the game my way. Right, boys?"
Crabbe nodded, but Goyle cracked his neck from side to side.
A sudden light lit Draco's eyes. "Why are you here, anyway, mudblood? Sneaking around?"
"Oh, for Heaven's sake, I wasn't sneaking, Malfoy! Even you could see that I wasn't making a big secret of it." Hermione suddenly realized her mistake.
Malfoy looked interested. He took a step closer, which was a step too close for Hermione's comfort. He was behind her, and with Crabbe and Goyle in front of her, she was feeling cornered. "So what were you doing here, near dear old Slytherin? Coming to pay me a visit? I'm touched. Why, exactly, were you running down this hall so quickly?"
Hermione could feel the slightest wisp of warning magic around her neck, like a stray hair, to remind her to watch her words. So the vow was still in effect. Interesting. She filed that away for later, because it didn't help her now. She took a breath, but was drawing a blank. Why would she be in the hallway leading to Slytherin, if she couldn't mention the fact that she was making a visit to the Potions teacher in his private rooms? "I ... had a fight with Harry and Ron." The words were out before she knew it. "I need ..." she cast about for something suitably horrible that they would understand. "Revenge."
It sounded weak and laughable to Hermione, but Draco couldn't seem to believe his good fortune. "You've come to the right place. I can help you with that. For a price, of course," he added, eying her craftily.
"Oh, come off it, Malfoy. You want to stick it to Harry for free!" Hermione couldn't believe his nerve. He was so smug, he bought it hook, line and sinker. It made her sick. She hoped that he got what was coming to him one day.
Malfoy couldn't help the duplicitous gleam in his eyes. "What did you have in mind, Granger?"
"Oh, I figured I'd see what you thought," she demurred to him. "You're better at these sorts of things than I am, being Slytherin, after all." She put a slight slur on the word Slytherin as an insult, but Draco took it as a compliment, the idiot. Draco liked it when girls played dumb. All she had to do was play up to him and bide her time. Hopefully, Snape would come out looking for her, see what was going on, and rescue her! Or, she amended hastily, at least put an end to Draco's torment. No need to get carried away with romantic notions!
"Yes, it's true. As it turns out, I do have a plan to humiliate Potter." His pretty features twisted as he spit out Harry's name as if it were a poison. "We needed someone who is close to him to make it work. This will be the perfect chance!" He smiled wickedly.
Hermione felt a little sick. If Draco already had a plan to hurt Harry, maybe she had better go along and foil it. That would be the best thing to do, so that Draco couldn't just rope someone else into doing his bidding later on. She tried to seem enthusiastic. "Okay, tell me what it is."
Draco looked at her, his eyes narrowing. "I can't do it here. I have to show you. In my room. That's where the things are, to, uh, give to him. And Weasley, of course." Draco seemed to think something was funny. He was smirking. "What's the matter, Granger, losing your nerve?"
Hermione didn't trust him for a moment. The waves of menace were almost palpable in the air around him. She was worried about Harry, though. She hadn't been a very good friend to him lately, and this would be a good way to make up some of it. Hermione shrugged, trying to put on a show, and leered back at Draco, hoping she didn't look as silly as she felt. "You have no idea how much I want to give him exactly what he deserves. I'll do it."
Draco turned on his well-polished heel. "Crabbe! Goyle! Come on!" They were only a few paces from the Slytherin painting, and Hermione felt the other boys right behind her. Draco spoke the password in a deliberate undertone, and the painting swung open. She stepped into her enemy's common room, feeling, ridiculously enough, like she was being escorted to jail.
Slytherin was not that much different from Gryffindor, though she was loathe to admit it. It had a consistent silver and green snake theme throughout to demonstrate house allegiance to any person in doubt, but then again, Gryffindor was equally overzealous in its support of the red and gold. She could have done without the black leather couches, but they did look comfortable. She hardly had time to take in much more, as she was herded along and up the stairs before any of the Slytherins that were reclining could make note of what Draco was up to. The four of them entered the boys' dormitory area, and Draco pulled out his wand. "Colloportus!" The door locked.
Hermione began to get nervous. "Malfoy, why don't I wait downstairs, and you bring what it is down there?" she tried to keep her voice light. "Girls aren't allowed up here, anyway."
"Maybe not in your house," Draco countered. "You are staying right here." He waved his wand around. "Muffliato!"
Hermione's breath hitched in her throat. The idea of what could possibly occur here had never even presented itself to her before. Malfoy was annoying, yes, and bad in every way, but ... actually evil? The thought that he could physically harm her had never entered her head. She had always been safe at Hogwarts, had never felt a threat like this, and she froze at the idea that danger might come from her very own classmates, no matter how much she had disliked them in the past. She had to talk, to reason with him. He couldn't be as terrible as this.
"So, Draco..." she tried not to grimace at the use of his first name, "you said you have a plan to get even with Harry, and I really can't wait to hear about it. Can you tell me about it? I'm sure you've thought it over for a long time." There, appeal to his overinflated ego.
Draco grinned at her. "Actually, Granger, the idea just came to me in the hallway. The best way to get back at Potter is to hurt one of his friends. You said you wanted to do that, so thanks a load." He winked at her. "The fact that you walked right up here just made it a lot easier for me. I am going to break you, Granger." Draco pulled his tie off. "Crabbe, Goyle, grab her."
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86 Reviews | 7.53/10 Average
Aw! That was a twist I didn't like reading at all! I guess there's no hope for romance after she messed up so badly.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh no! I'm so sorry that you didn't like the ending. It was my first story, so in the interveing time I've been a writer, I have lerned to better craft a tale. Thanks so much for reading it, though. I do appreciate it!
Heh. Make Hermione carry the fault of Dumbledore's death, then. That's interesting!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Thanks! I hope the ending wasn't too disappointing. Thanks for reading and for reviewing; I do appreciate it!
No! Sir Figgie! How could Hermione be so careless? I had a smelly teenage boy sock all ready for the exchange, but I am too late!Pretty good for an early work. Reading this just highlights how far your work has come since. Well done, and keep writing.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Thank you for your kind words! You know that looking at earlier work always makes me cringe. You are nice to be so generous about it. Thanks for reading it all the way through! (and you're right; I've come a long way from chaste romance to squid sex! *whew* Fandom has a steep and slippery slope!)
How sad this is. Severus will now have to die and when he does, Hermione will realize that her one moment of forgetfulness had made it so. What a terrible burden to have to carry.Not every story can have a happy ending, but even in this sadness you have given us a great plot and the inspired idea of an anti-dementor. I want to compliment you on your first posted story. You did a great job. I had no idea that it would end this way, but the idea is a completely unexpected twist to the tale. At least they had that one brief moment of tenderness between them and that is so much more than they had in Deathly Hallows.Well done!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Aw, thank you so much. I was worried that you wouldn't like how it ended so abruptly! I am really glad that you stuck with it, and that you liked some of the more original aspects of it, even if it could have been written more gracefully.Thanks so much for being such an enthusiastic reviewer. It really was a great pleasure to get your feedback, and I hope you seek out my other stuff; it is a little more polished, I can assure you!
I had to laugh at Hermione's recruiting speech to Sir Figgy. I think she has a new suitor.When Snape told her that he could not give her what she sought, I got the eeriest feeling. Like he knows something bad is going to happen... to him. Oh nooooooooo.The anti-dementor potion is a brilliant idea, and I hope it works like they have planned.I'm so afraid for Snape.Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh no. I think you might have the right idea. *is very nervous about your reaction for the next chapter* I hope you don't hate it!!
They kissed, Squee!!! But poor Sir Figgie, I'll miss him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Aw, Sir Figgie had to go. But yeah, at least they got a kiss in! LOL! That was before my days of knowing how to taper a story gracefully, so thank you very much for sticking with me, and for your kind review. I appreciate it very much, even with the abrupt ending!
Good lord but Draco was at his worst here. I don't know what brought Snape to the Slytherin dormitory, but thank the gods he was there. When he told Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle that they would have to spend weeks setting the Potions storeroom to rights, I suspected he did know what Draco was about to do to Hermione.It's a good thing that Pansy was willing to "escort" Hermione through the Common Room so that her Head of House would be able to see that she got out . And now they have three weeks (not a long time really) for Hermione to learn all about "stealth tactics, or ... wayfinding technologies" and then for her to teach an elf. I hope she can find one willing to work with her. 8^)Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
It pained me to portray our favorite Slytherin bad-boy in such a nasty light! I think he was probably true to character, but it still was hard to do! *whew* I'm glad that part is over with, and now we are onto the rest of the story!
"She yearned for nothing more than to have him pull her into his strong arms and embrace her."So, having the thestral's heart in her possession did affect how she feels about Snape. Well done.Now, I hope Severus is getting some sort of vibes that his assistant is in danger, otherwise he is going to be without her help. If he does come to realize the danger she is in from Draco, the young Slytherin is going to be in a world of hurt.I'm off to the next chapter!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, man, I am totally biting my nails to see what you think of the whole thing. I hope you don't hate the ending! *is a nervous wreck*
Yes! The perfect solution to Hermione's fear of having to kill one of these gentle creatures. I wonder if his giving the thestral's heart to her will effect her relationship with the Professor? After all, Hagrid did tell her that it has magical properties:"It’s said to bring the greatest of hope and love to anyone wishin' fer it, mostly witches on their sweethearts, I think." Very interesting... and now about that house elf.Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I remember sweating over that problem, I can tell you! I'm glad that solution came to me, and that it seemed plausible, because neither of us wanted to see Hermione knee-deep in gore. *shudders*Thanks for reading thus far!
Wow! Finally she knows the truth about Professor Snape, and is willing to help. I know it is hard for her to think about having to kill a thestral for its heart, but it must be done. I can't help but wonder how that will all work out. But not only does she have to obtain the heart, she has to get a house elf because they are going to sneak into Azkaban? Yep, that what he said.I'm off to find out what happens next. 8^)Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
*laughs* I am delighting in your responses! Thanks so much for being an enthusiastic reviewer! You are making my day!
Gah! So very heart-wrenching, and quite the mood-killer. However, it was well played to fit into the set of events. Poor Sir Figgie.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm sorry you didn't like the end! I know it was a downer, and I am totally cringing at how abruptly I ended it. At the time, it seemed like it was the longest fanfic of all time. Now that I have been writing awhile, I realize that I might have tapered it with some grace. *grimaces* Thanks for being so kind in your reviews and assessment of it, and I hope that you find my other work a little more satisfying! Thanks for being such a good reviewer, and for sticking with it so patiently!
It was a near thing, but Severus will survive. I wonder how he will react when he realizes that Hermione's penance is to be his assistant. I am relieved that Dumbledore poured oil on the troubled waters known as Harry and Ron. I'm just waiting for them to forget what the Headmaster told them and go off half-cocked about something else to do with Snape.Now what will Hermione be doing for the good Professor? Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I am worried that you won't like how the story ends up! I beg you to bear in mind that it was my first effort, and the rest of my stuff is much more polished, I promise. But you will get your answers soon enough. And thanks so much for sticking with it. All will be revealed shortly!
Good God Almighty! The minute Hermione made up her mind to get that last vial, I knew all hell woould break loose. And now her decision to NOT do what Snape had told her to do had led to this horrendous, firey conflagration. She is lucky that he isn't dead... and there's still plenty of time for that to happen.Oh shite! Great chapter!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
LOL! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story! It's good to read your enthusiasm for it! I warn you that it has a train-wreck at the end, so don't get too excited. This was my very first story, so I wasn't great at the art of storytelling yet. *ducks*
Harry and Ron have no way of knowing that the potion that Snape probably want to brew will allow him to see Lily one last time and right the wrong he had been carrying for years.The thestral heart is an ingenious ingredient idea that makes perfect sense. I wonder how on earth Hermione is going to find one. I can't see her killing a thestral to cut out its heart. Could there be another potion ingredient that is known as "thestral heart?" I hope Ron and Harry can keep their mouths shut, but I have a feeling that at least one of them won't be able to help himself. There is so much opportunity for unintended mischief here.Good job!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You're so right about unintended mischief; had I had more experience as a storyteller under my belt, I would have taken advantage of that set-up! Now I am smacking myself. Maybe I should go back and add some stuff in. I'm glad that you alike it so far, and I am just cringing about what you are going to think about the rest of the plot!
I read and reviewed this chapter back on 6/9/10 and had every intention to read on and follow... as you could tell, something (RL) snuck up on me and I got distracted.So I'm back and looking forward to finding out everything that's happened. And the story is complete! I'm so sorry I got sidetracked, and this time I really am off to the next chapter. Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, I definitely know how RL is! I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint!
Poor Sir Figgie. Still, it was pretty good for your first work. Now, young lady, back to PIE! Mush! :P
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You are far too kind for what I deserve on this. And as for PIE ... Yes ma'am! *mushes*
Talk about a mood killer! How will Hermione live with herself after forgetting to cast the charm to save the elf? If you keep her in character, it will eat away at her and perhaps make her take extra chances she might not have taken because she feels that she deserves to be punished for her neglagence.How very sad indeed. I just hope that Snape finds a way to let her know about Dumbledore and his dreaded task. Perhaps she can make up for her mistake by helping him there. But if you are going to follow canon, I can't imagine how you will accomplish it.Guess I'll just have to wait and see...
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I know, it was an angsty and to the tale, indeed! At the time, I was thinking, OMG, this is the longest fanfic EVER. *laughs* Um, I have learned a thing or two in the intrvening time, and I can now fill in a plot hole and taper an ending better, so I assure you that anything else you read will be much less abrupt and hopefully more satisfying!Thanks so much for sticking with it, and for your patience with me. I appreciate all of you kind remarks!
Darn! Ending needs a bit of work, but otherwise good story! I doubt there will be a relationship now....Nicely done for a first-timer. I kept thinking Hermione might get her time-turner and fix it, oh well. Anti-dementor was a very interesting idea. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Hehe, thanks for sticking with it. I cringe when I look back on this, as I am sure we all do with our early work. I really appreciate that you were kind about it, and if you could manage to get through this, then my other stuff should prove much more satisfying. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Um, I think you missed uploading the part where Hermione wakes up and this was all a dream, but having witnessed that, she won't forget the charm in real life. Then they live happily ever after. The end.So, I don't actually think there is a trainwreck here at all. Maybe a child's scooter hitting a small tree, LOL. It is clearly an early work, just due to the depths of the characters that you currently write, but I think it ended just fine. Well, except for the fact that if I had it my way, every single story would have a happy ending. Still, it was a fun read, I think you were fretting about it more than anyone else.Don't you now think that you owe the knight elf his own short story since you offed him without his moment to shine. Surely he has something interesting in his past...
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You're too kind. I was like "omg, that's a major plot hole, Hermione would NEVER forget the charm like that. And then it stopped as if I got tired of writing: elf dies, plans fails, the end." At the time, I remember thinking "This is the longest work of fanfiction EVER WRITTEN, and people are going to think that I have been dragging it out unmercifully, I must end it now!" (er ... fast forward a year to the excruciatingly slow nuances of UST in PIE, lol) Anyway, glad that you didn't totally hate it. See, there's hope for us all. If I can churn out this garbage and end up okay, anyone can do it!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
If I can churn out this garbage and end up okay, anyone can do it!How subtle, LOL! The end was a little abrupt, but I think that I was prepared for such a dreadful ending, that I was expecting, I don't know what, but something really bad. The story had several concepts which I think are really good. Maybe someday you can revisit them in an even better, more experienced story.
I just don't get how Hermione could forget something so important as the charm. I don't know if it was Fate for her to forget, and for Severus to go with the other pla. I wonder how that's going to affect his relationship with Hermione. Obviously they won't be able to have one now.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I know; it was a pretty weak plothole. I was trying to bring it back around to canon, where Severus had to kill Dumbledore, which he had been trying to avoid with this plan. I hope it didn't all seem too unbelievable; this was my very first story, and after I've been in fandom a while I realize it wasn't thought out very well. *blushes* But I thank you for reading this far, and I hope it wasn't TOO disappointing!
Figgie's too cute!I love how ambiguous his statement of "Your happiness depends upon it." is!Looking forward to seeing how you finish this off!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm glad to see you're still with me, even with the addition of the house-elf. I was worried he might be annoying! Thanks for sticking with it. Yup, next chapter is it! All shall become clear!
Another awesomely wonderful chapter. I can only hope Severus and Hermione can grow closer despite his reservations and flatout refusal. Perhaps, Hermione, lit the spark of knowledge that there is an attraction between them that is not simply one sided. Great Job!!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oooh, thanks. I know, I want those two to get together, as well! Snape needs a nudge in the right direction or something. I'm really glad to hear that you are enjoying the story thus far, and thanks so much for your review!
Gadzounds! Looks like there may be a scrap over the knight elf. He's quite cute, and obviously reasonably sturdy if he survived the wrath of Snape, but the chink in his armour may be his down fall. Sunny and I could look after him to make sure no ill befalls him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I can't say anything to give it away, but don't get too attached to the little guy: *cues foreboding music*. I tried to make him sort of annoying so people didn't like him too much. Look away, while you still can!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Nooo! We want the knight elf! Am willing to pay adoption fees.Just a thought - 'Knight elf' sounds like something you'd take to stop a nightime cough, doesn't it?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Did J.K. go over elf transfer procedure? Do you hand a sock around? I'm not sure what the etiquette is, but you're welcome to the medicinally named guy! rofl
So she finally realizes what we knew all along. I wonder if Snape can tell... I think probably so, but a woman who worked with my husband had a crush on him once. Everyone could see it except him. His parents attended a party while visiting us and she was there. Even they could tell. They both warned him that she was hot for him and he had better watch himself! I knew the woman, and I trusted my husband (still do). He really had no idea that she had desires for him, but I think it was because he wasn't the least bit interested in her that way. If Snape is interested in Miss Granger, perhaps he recognizes the signs. He's not the type to miss anything going on around him.And what a bombshell at the end? Her happiness depends on it... What about his happiness?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Ah, Snape. I always imagine him as really astute, but somewhat oblivious to matters of the heart. Although we can't be sure about exactly what he is picking up on and what he can't admit to himself. Don't worry, it all comes cler in the last chapter, next week.And your husband sounds like he is really in love with you; that's why he didn't have eyes for anyone else. The thought probably didn't even cross his mind because he was already so happy with what he had! :) That anecdote made me smile. It's so nice to hear.
Response from ClayPotter (Reviewer)
Even after almost 19 years, we still have a good thing going. Our kids are teens now, and they still tell us to "get a room" when we start to hug and kiss in front of them. It's so funny, but they have grown up with the confidence that their parent's really love each other.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
That's so refreshing to hear! I have been married for 13 years and we have 5 kids. It is great to know that there are still people going strong out there and that it IS possible to succeed and have a strong family and a happy marriage. I am looking to you as an example now!