Chapter 8
Chapter 8 of 10
KeppiehedHermione has a secret that leaves her deeply indebted to an enemy. Can she turn the tables on him?
ReviewedDisclaimer: This all belongs to J.K. Rowling.
A/N: Many thanks to my beta, Melisse.
Hermione had never felt the sort of blind fear she did at this moment. It was as if the floodgates had opened on cue and her veins were filled with ice water. When she heard Malfoy say the words, "Grab her," she saw everything snap into the crisp, clear focus of reality. This was really happening to her! The fog was gone. She backed away from Malfoy, but his two goons were behind her, which was worse. The panic she was feeling threatened to rise up and choke her. She reached into her sleeve for her wand, but Crabbe was already there, too fast, and Goyle had her other arm. No matter how hard she fought, their meaty hands were vice-like on her, and she wasn't going anywhere.
"Malfoy, listen," she begged, hating the sound of her pathetic voice, but he aimed his wand at her.
"Silencio! I've been wanting to do that for a long time, Granger." Draco looked at her. "Put her on the bed. I could use a spell to body-bind, but where's the sport in that? Afterwards you'd just feel vindicated."
Hermione put as much venom as she could muster into the look she gave him. Crabbe and Goyle wrenched her arms around and threw her on one of the beds. She yelped with the excessive force, but of course no sound came out. She continued to struggle, but to no avail. Crabbe and Goyle may have been stupid, but what they lacked in brains, they made up for in muscle, and she wasn't moving an inch. In the meantime, Draco divested himself of his robe, and as he removed his belt, he cracked it, just for her benefit. He leaned over her. "Oh, and Granger, when I said I was going to break you? I didn't just mean that I was going to fuck you. Although that will be part of it." He gestured to Crabbe. "Get her clothes off, will you? Do I have to tell you to do everything?"
Hermione started to buck in earnest when she heard that. This was the most nightmarish thing that had ever happened to her, and they wouldn't be getting an article of clothing off her without a fight! If this had to happen, it was going to be after she had exhausted every ounce of energy she possessed fighting it. She would rather die than let Draco Malfoy be the one to steal her virtue.
Draco whistled. "If I had known you would have that much passion, I would have gotten you in the sack a long time ago, Granger. Save some for me. And Crabbe and Goyle, of course."
Just when Hermione thought she couldn't be more horrified, that stupid twat opened his mouth! Crabbe reached for her shirt, and Hermione twisted and turned so viciously that there was a real scuffle on the bed. As this was happening, there was a knock on the door to the boys' room.
"Sh!" Draco warned his cohorts. Hermione of course, could say nothing. He dispersed the muffling and locking charms and cracked the door. "Yes?"
"Draco!" It was Pansy Parkinson. "You'd better come down."
Draco smoothed his blond hair back in a show of nonchalance. "Actually, Pans, I'm busy. I can accommodate you later, okay?"
"No, Draco, I saw who you have with you!" hissed Pansy venomously. "And I am telling you that Professor Snape is asking for you. Downstairs! Now! If you get caught with her ... just go. I'll cover for you."
From her vantage point on the bed, Hermione could see the rage overtake Draco's features before he dropped a mask over them. He almost looked like his father for a minute, but he couldn't quite keep the fury out of his eyes at being thwarted. He grabbed his robe from where he had dropped it, and as he dressed, he leaned over her, and for her ears only, whispered as if to a lover, "If you tell a soul about this, I will make good on what didn't happen here today, Mudblood. You will regret it, I promise you that," and he kissed her mouth very gently, only at the end turning it to a bite. She felt a drop of blood on the inside of her lip, where no one could see. Malfoy looked deep into her eyes to make sure she understood the message, then turned away. "Let's go, Goyle, Crabbe." They released her.
She sat a minute, shaking. Pansy came into the room and eyed her with distaste. "Probably a silencing charm, too, huh?"
Hermione nodded, and Pansy dispelled it.
"Thank you," Hermione gasped.
"Listen," Pansy sauntered around the bed. "I'm not doing this for you. Draco is mine. So get out and keep quiet, or you'll be sorry. I saw him bring you up here. If you want to return the favor, just shut up and leave him to me!"
Hermione was incredulous. "That's fine by me; you can keep him. I don't want any part of him!" Hermione jumped off the bed and tried to run out the door.
Pansy grabbed her arm. "Hold on there! You can't just run out of here. At this time of day everyone will see you. You and I will go together and pretend to be friends."
Hermione was appalled. "Why would I do that?"
Pansy's eyes glittered dangerously. "We both have something to protect. I'm protecting Draco, and you're protecting yourself. Let's go! Snape's looking for you, too, for some reason."
So Hermione and Pansy descended into the Slytherin common room together, and while Hermione couldn't exactly paste a smile on, she was glad to be in the company of someone, anyone, other than Draco Malfoy. And when she spotted his blond head in sharp relief against a dark one in the middle of the common room, she had never in her whole life felt such happiness flood her as she did right then to see none other than Professor Snape. She fairly skipped up to him right there, and did her best to ignore Malfoy.
"Miss Granger!" Snape seemed startled to see her in this unlikely setting. "I ... didn't expect to find you here amongst my Slytherins. Are you here courtesy of Miss Parkinson?" For Pansy had drifted away, released from her obligation.
"Yes, and Draco here," Hermione caught his eye; he gave her as much of a menacing glare as he could with Snape standing by, "was kind enough to show me how things are done here in Slytherin."
"Hm," Snape looked at him, and Draco just smiled beatifically. "Well, it is ... serendipitous that I encountered you here, Miss Granger, as I have need of you in my rooms. Please accompany me." With no further explanation, he turned and walked down the corridor that led to his rooms.
Draco smirked at her. "Don't act all innocent with me, Granger. Now I know what you were running so fast for in the hallway! If I knew you were that desperate to get some I wouldn't have held you down!"
"Oh, and Mr. Malfoy?" Snape turned around in a whirl of black robes as if he had just remembered something. "I volunteered you, along with Messrs. Crabbe and Goyle, to help restore the Potions storeroom. You will go there now. It may take several weeks to set it to rights again, even with such ... diligent workers as yourselves. Miss Granger?"
Hermione got the slightest stab of satisfaction at seeing Draco's mouth fall open like a gutted fish as she rushed after Snape.
They didn't speak at all until they reached the sanctuary of his rooms, and indeed, she was beginning to think of them as a sanctuary. They had come in through the Slytherin common room door this time, so Hermione got to see the whole suite of rooms that constituted his living quarters. Teachers did not make much to live on, but as Head of Slytherin, Snape had been gifted with ample space to call his own, and had furnished it tastefully throughout the years so that the place really looked like a warm, inviting home. Hermione's eyes skipped past the room she knew to be the bedroom, her cheeks heating, and they went to their now customary places in what she thought of as the living room. When they were settled, Snape cleared his throat.
"Miss Granger, thanks to your efficacy in the objective I set for you, things are going exactly as they should...that is to say, according to my plan. Now, I have brewed the potion to specification...which was no small feat, I might add...and it is complete. All that remains is to deliver it to its final destination. At this juncture, I find I also require certain ... skills ... that you alone seem to possess. You are a very talented witch, Miss Granger."
Hermione may have been lulled by his honeyed tones, but at this her eyes traveled of their own accord to his and were held as if by magic. She could easily see why Severus Snape belonged to the House of Slytherin, as his gaze was as hypnotic as any serpent's, and she felt enthralled and completely enraptured. Had he intended the double meaning of his words? Surely not; it was just the matter with Draco that was bringing such thoughts into her head. Why was it that such an act that appeared abhorrent a few short minutes ago now didn't seem so repellent at all? Hermione gazed into the very depths of Snape's dark eyes and couldn't discern what she saw there. She licked her lips.
"Uh, what?"
Snape blinked, unused to her indelicacy. If he was taken aback by her apparent lack of graciousness in accepting a compliment, he tried not to show it, and he smoothly continued. "Thank you for retrieving the thestral heart so quickly."
Hermione drew a ragged breath. It was hot in here, she was sure of it. "You're very welcome, sir. How else can I help? You said something about house-elves? And Azkaban? I'm not sure I follow."
Snape gave a half-smile. "I would not expect you to. I might remind you that your previous vow holds in this matter, as well. Have you felt its confines yet?" Seeing her nod, he continued. "Then you are aware of its power. I shall explain the second part of the plan to you now."
"Please," Hermione nodded for him to continue, as she was anxious to hear what was expected of her, what with all of her, uh, talents. Whatever he supposed them to be. Studying hard, maybe?
"Well," Snape sounded uncharacteristically uncertain. "I confess myself to be at a loss. I am not sure where to begin. It is a complicated tale, and not all of it bears repeating. Let me just say this. I have created a potion, as you have been made aware, and it needs to be delivered into the very heart of Azkaban to achieve its full potential. I have, in the course of my own investigations in this matter, discovered that the only creatures equipped to carry out such a task are house-elves. It seems unlikely, but I can assure you, it remains true. Through all of their long years in service to wizards and witches, particularly those of the Dark persuasion, it seems that they have built up quite a tolerance for the ... grimness that exudes from Azkaban. They are singularly prepared to be steeped in the atmosphere without being poisoned by it."
Hermione's eyes were getting rounder by the minute. "You propose to sneak into Azkaban with a potion?" Her voice was a squeak.
Snape waved a hand impatiently. "You have not been attending me, Miss Granger. A house-elf is going to accomplish this feat of derring-do. And here is where your part comes in. I was made aware that you formed a union for the creatures a few years back? As representative for them, you are now in a favorable position to select the appropriate one, train it in stealth tactics and wayfinding, and generally ensure that it is able to perform its part satisfactorily. It seems like ... providence ... that you already have a link to the house-elf community."
Hermione was so distressed that she nearly jumped to her feet. "I can do no such thing, Professor! S.P.E.W., while an extremely good cause and still worthwhile venture, was not supported by anyone outside of the house-elf world, and they were not able to speak up for themselves to break the chains of slave labor that still bind them!" Snape looked a little bored by her proselytizing. "I believe that because of this injustice still poisoning their minds, as well as their bodies..."
"The point, Miss Granger," Snape ground out warningly. "If there is one, get to it."
She looked down, deflated. "I may have made some enemies of the house-elves. I certainly have no friends there."
"Then this will be a challenge for you," Snape said in droll tones, "but necessary all the same. You have your task before you."
"But I don't know anything about stealth tactics, or ... wayfinding technologies! How can I teach a simple elf?" Hermione was distressed to hear a wail beginning in her voice.
Snape quirked an eyebrow at her in amusement. "Simple elf, Miss Granger? And just a moment ago fighting for their equality, hm? A lesser man might make note of the hypocrisy."
Hermione scowled at him, her earlier attraction erased in her rising ire. "You know what I meant! They are not fit for that sort of thing. Come to think of it, neither am I!"
Now it was Snape's turn to scowl, and it was in earnest. "What exactly do you deem them fit for, if not for this? They are not suited to the task of serving their country, but they are fit to stay safely in the kitchens so that you may wave a banner and sign some names to a petition in their stead? Choose your next words with care, Miss Granger, that you may look your Gryffindor pride in the mirror next morn!"
Hermione was uncomfortable with the turn the conversation had taken, having the distinct impression that she was being outwitted, and not liking it one bit. She also thought that perhaps the topic had turned from the original theme, and she struggled to swim to shallower water. "If I can recruit one, I myself still am not knowledgeable in the areas you need me to be. I could never learn in time, certainly not enough to teach someone else. And anyway, you never said what the potion is for. What is it? How could it possibly have anything to do with serving the country?"
Snape skewered her with an unwavering look. "All in good time, Miss Granger. I cannot at this time tell you what the potion does, only that it has the most vital importance. It must be delivered to Azkaban, even if the odds of accomplishing it are not in our favor, and it appears to be a lost cause. We have to try. It may well be impossible, but we will do it...together, if need be. It is the only chance we have, the only choice we have. I will teach you, you will teach the elf. It is the only way."
Hermione assessed Snape. He didn't trust her, not enough to tell her what the potion was for. Maybe she could find out on her own. "How much time do we have?"
Snape relaxed into his chair with her apparent acquiescence. "The potion was the first biggest hurdle. It was on a strict..." Something about the way he clipped that word made her shiver delightfully "...timetable. Now we have until the first full moon of the vernal equinox."
"April ninth," Hermione breathed, beating Snape to the calculation. "That gives us nearly three weeks' time."
"Yes." Snape's eyes gleamed appreciatively at Hermione's quick thinking. "You will need to spend all your time with me, preparing." It didn't sound like so much of a command this time, but more like a comment that might be met with criticism.
"I'll need every minute," Hermione said, not daring to look back. Her eyes were sure to give her away.
"I daresay we both will," Snape said drily.
Hermione was not heartened by the fact that his thoughts seemed to be running in a more appropriate direction than hers. It might be a long three weeks, after all.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Razor's Edge
86 Reviews | 7.53/10 Average
Aw! That was a twist I didn't like reading at all! I guess there's no hope for romance after she messed up so badly.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh no! I'm so sorry that you didn't like the ending. It was my first story, so in the interveing time I've been a writer, I have lerned to better craft a tale. Thanks so much for reading it, though. I do appreciate it!
Heh. Make Hermione carry the fault of Dumbledore's death, then. That's interesting!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Thanks! I hope the ending wasn't too disappointing. Thanks for reading and for reviewing; I do appreciate it!
No! Sir Figgie! How could Hermione be so careless? I had a smelly teenage boy sock all ready for the exchange, but I am too late!Pretty good for an early work. Reading this just highlights how far your work has come since. Well done, and keep writing.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Thank you for your kind words! You know that looking at earlier work always makes me cringe. You are nice to be so generous about it. Thanks for reading it all the way through! (and you're right; I've come a long way from chaste romance to squid sex! *whew* Fandom has a steep and slippery slope!)
How sad this is. Severus will now have to die and when he does, Hermione will realize that her one moment of forgetfulness had made it so. What a terrible burden to have to carry.Not every story can have a happy ending, but even in this sadness you have given us a great plot and the inspired idea of an anti-dementor. I want to compliment you on your first posted story. You did a great job. I had no idea that it would end this way, but the idea is a completely unexpected twist to the tale. At least they had that one brief moment of tenderness between them and that is so much more than they had in Deathly Hallows.Well done!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Aw, thank you so much. I was worried that you wouldn't like how it ended so abruptly! I am really glad that you stuck with it, and that you liked some of the more original aspects of it, even if it could have been written more gracefully.Thanks so much for being such an enthusiastic reviewer. It really was a great pleasure to get your feedback, and I hope you seek out my other stuff; it is a little more polished, I can assure you!
I had to laugh at Hermione's recruiting speech to Sir Figgy. I think she has a new suitor.When Snape told her that he could not give her what she sought, I got the eeriest feeling. Like he knows something bad is going to happen... to him. Oh nooooooooo.The anti-dementor potion is a brilliant idea, and I hope it works like they have planned.I'm so afraid for Snape.Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh no. I think you might have the right idea. *is very nervous about your reaction for the next chapter* I hope you don't hate it!!
They kissed, Squee!!! But poor Sir Figgie, I'll miss him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Aw, Sir Figgie had to go. But yeah, at least they got a kiss in! LOL! That was before my days of knowing how to taper a story gracefully, so thank you very much for sticking with me, and for your kind review. I appreciate it very much, even with the abrupt ending!
Good lord but Draco was at his worst here. I don't know what brought Snape to the Slytherin dormitory, but thank the gods he was there. When he told Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle that they would have to spend weeks setting the Potions storeroom to rights, I suspected he did know what Draco was about to do to Hermione.It's a good thing that Pansy was willing to "escort" Hermione through the Common Room so that her Head of House would be able to see that she got out . And now they have three weeks (not a long time really) for Hermione to learn all about "stealth tactics, or ... wayfinding technologies" and then for her to teach an elf. I hope she can find one willing to work with her. 8^)Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
It pained me to portray our favorite Slytherin bad-boy in such a nasty light! I think he was probably true to character, but it still was hard to do! *whew* I'm glad that part is over with, and now we are onto the rest of the story!
"She yearned for nothing more than to have him pull her into his strong arms and embrace her."So, having the thestral's heart in her possession did affect how she feels about Snape. Well done.Now, I hope Severus is getting some sort of vibes that his assistant is in danger, otherwise he is going to be without her help. If he does come to realize the danger she is in from Draco, the young Slytherin is going to be in a world of hurt.I'm off to the next chapter!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, man, I am totally biting my nails to see what you think of the whole thing. I hope you don't hate the ending! *is a nervous wreck*
Yes! The perfect solution to Hermione's fear of having to kill one of these gentle creatures. I wonder if his giving the thestral's heart to her will effect her relationship with the Professor? After all, Hagrid did tell her that it has magical properties:"It’s said to bring the greatest of hope and love to anyone wishin' fer it, mostly witches on their sweethearts, I think." Very interesting... and now about that house elf.Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I remember sweating over that problem, I can tell you! I'm glad that solution came to me, and that it seemed plausible, because neither of us wanted to see Hermione knee-deep in gore. *shudders*Thanks for reading thus far!
Wow! Finally she knows the truth about Professor Snape, and is willing to help. I know it is hard for her to think about having to kill a thestral for its heart, but it must be done. I can't help but wonder how that will all work out. But not only does she have to obtain the heart, she has to get a house elf because they are going to sneak into Azkaban? Yep, that what he said.I'm off to find out what happens next. 8^)Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
*laughs* I am delighting in your responses! Thanks so much for being an enthusiastic reviewer! You are making my day!
Gah! So very heart-wrenching, and quite the mood-killer. However, it was well played to fit into the set of events. Poor Sir Figgie.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm sorry you didn't like the end! I know it was a downer, and I am totally cringing at how abruptly I ended it. At the time, it seemed like it was the longest fanfic of all time. Now that I have been writing awhile, I realize that I might have tapered it with some grace. *grimaces* Thanks for being so kind in your reviews and assessment of it, and I hope that you find my other work a little more satisfying! Thanks for being such a good reviewer, and for sticking with it so patiently!
It was a near thing, but Severus will survive. I wonder how he will react when he realizes that Hermione's penance is to be his assistant. I am relieved that Dumbledore poured oil on the troubled waters known as Harry and Ron. I'm just waiting for them to forget what the Headmaster told them and go off half-cocked about something else to do with Snape.Now what will Hermione be doing for the good Professor? Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I am worried that you won't like how the story ends up! I beg you to bear in mind that it was my first effort, and the rest of my stuff is much more polished, I promise. But you will get your answers soon enough. And thanks so much for sticking with it. All will be revealed shortly!
Good God Almighty! The minute Hermione made up her mind to get that last vial, I knew all hell woould break loose. And now her decision to NOT do what Snape had told her to do had led to this horrendous, firey conflagration. She is lucky that he isn't dead... and there's still plenty of time for that to happen.Oh shite! Great chapter!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
LOL! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story! It's good to read your enthusiasm for it! I warn you that it has a train-wreck at the end, so don't get too excited. This was my very first story, so I wasn't great at the art of storytelling yet. *ducks*
Harry and Ron have no way of knowing that the potion that Snape probably want to brew will allow him to see Lily one last time and right the wrong he had been carrying for years.The thestral heart is an ingenious ingredient idea that makes perfect sense. I wonder how on earth Hermione is going to find one. I can't see her killing a thestral to cut out its heart. Could there be another potion ingredient that is known as "thestral heart?" I hope Ron and Harry can keep their mouths shut, but I have a feeling that at least one of them won't be able to help himself. There is so much opportunity for unintended mischief here.Good job!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You're so right about unintended mischief; had I had more experience as a storyteller under my belt, I would have taken advantage of that set-up! Now I am smacking myself. Maybe I should go back and add some stuff in. I'm glad that you alike it so far, and I am just cringing about what you are going to think about the rest of the plot!
I read and reviewed this chapter back on 6/9/10 and had every intention to read on and follow... as you could tell, something (RL) snuck up on me and I got distracted.So I'm back and looking forward to finding out everything that's happened. And the story is complete! I'm so sorry I got sidetracked, and this time I really am off to the next chapter. Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, I definitely know how RL is! I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint!
Poor Sir Figgie. Still, it was pretty good for your first work. Now, young lady, back to PIE! Mush! :P
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You are far too kind for what I deserve on this. And as for PIE ... Yes ma'am! *mushes*
Talk about a mood killer! How will Hermione live with herself after forgetting to cast the charm to save the elf? If you keep her in character, it will eat away at her and perhaps make her take extra chances she might not have taken because she feels that she deserves to be punished for her neglagence.How very sad indeed. I just hope that Snape finds a way to let her know about Dumbledore and his dreaded task. Perhaps she can make up for her mistake by helping him there. But if you are going to follow canon, I can't imagine how you will accomplish it.Guess I'll just have to wait and see...
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I know, it was an angsty and to the tale, indeed! At the time, I was thinking, OMG, this is the longest fanfic EVER. *laughs* Um, I have learned a thing or two in the intrvening time, and I can now fill in a plot hole and taper an ending better, so I assure you that anything else you read will be much less abrupt and hopefully more satisfying!Thanks so much for sticking with it, and for your patience with me. I appreciate all of you kind remarks!
Darn! Ending needs a bit of work, but otherwise good story! I doubt there will be a relationship now....Nicely done for a first-timer. I kept thinking Hermione might get her time-turner and fix it, oh well. Anti-dementor was a very interesting idea. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Hehe, thanks for sticking with it. I cringe when I look back on this, as I am sure we all do with our early work. I really appreciate that you were kind about it, and if you could manage to get through this, then my other stuff should prove much more satisfying. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Um, I think you missed uploading the part where Hermione wakes up and this was all a dream, but having witnessed that, she won't forget the charm in real life. Then they live happily ever after. The end.So, I don't actually think there is a trainwreck here at all. Maybe a child's scooter hitting a small tree, LOL. It is clearly an early work, just due to the depths of the characters that you currently write, but I think it ended just fine. Well, except for the fact that if I had it my way, every single story would have a happy ending. Still, it was a fun read, I think you were fretting about it more than anyone else.Don't you now think that you owe the knight elf his own short story since you offed him without his moment to shine. Surely he has something interesting in his past...
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You're too kind. I was like "omg, that's a major plot hole, Hermione would NEVER forget the charm like that. And then it stopped as if I got tired of writing: elf dies, plans fails, the end." At the time, I remember thinking "This is the longest work of fanfiction EVER WRITTEN, and people are going to think that I have been dragging it out unmercifully, I must end it now!" (er ... fast forward a year to the excruciatingly slow nuances of UST in PIE, lol) Anyway, glad that you didn't totally hate it. See, there's hope for us all. If I can churn out this garbage and end up okay, anyone can do it!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
If I can churn out this garbage and end up okay, anyone can do it!How subtle, LOL! The end was a little abrupt, but I think that I was prepared for such a dreadful ending, that I was expecting, I don't know what, but something really bad. The story had several concepts which I think are really good. Maybe someday you can revisit them in an even better, more experienced story.
I just don't get how Hermione could forget something so important as the charm. I don't know if it was Fate for her to forget, and for Severus to go with the other pla. I wonder how that's going to affect his relationship with Hermione. Obviously they won't be able to have one now.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I know; it was a pretty weak plothole. I was trying to bring it back around to canon, where Severus had to kill Dumbledore, which he had been trying to avoid with this plan. I hope it didn't all seem too unbelievable; this was my very first story, and after I've been in fandom a while I realize it wasn't thought out very well. *blushes* But I thank you for reading this far, and I hope it wasn't TOO disappointing!
Figgie's too cute!I love how ambiguous his statement of "Your happiness depends upon it." is!Looking forward to seeing how you finish this off!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm glad to see you're still with me, even with the addition of the house-elf. I was worried he might be annoying! Thanks for sticking with it. Yup, next chapter is it! All shall become clear!
Another awesomely wonderful chapter. I can only hope Severus and Hermione can grow closer despite his reservations and flatout refusal. Perhaps, Hermione, lit the spark of knowledge that there is an attraction between them that is not simply one sided. Great Job!!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oooh, thanks. I know, I want those two to get together, as well! Snape needs a nudge in the right direction or something. I'm really glad to hear that you are enjoying the story thus far, and thanks so much for your review!
Gadzounds! Looks like there may be a scrap over the knight elf. He's quite cute, and obviously reasonably sturdy if he survived the wrath of Snape, but the chink in his armour may be his down fall. Sunny and I could look after him to make sure no ill befalls him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I can't say anything to give it away, but don't get too attached to the little guy: *cues foreboding music*. I tried to make him sort of annoying so people didn't like him too much. Look away, while you still can!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Nooo! We want the knight elf! Am willing to pay adoption fees.Just a thought - 'Knight elf' sounds like something you'd take to stop a nightime cough, doesn't it?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Did J.K. go over elf transfer procedure? Do you hand a sock around? I'm not sure what the etiquette is, but you're welcome to the medicinally named guy! rofl
So she finally realizes what we knew all along. I wonder if Snape can tell... I think probably so, but a woman who worked with my husband had a crush on him once. Everyone could see it except him. His parents attended a party while visiting us and she was there. Even they could tell. They both warned him that she was hot for him and he had better watch himself! I knew the woman, and I trusted my husband (still do). He really had no idea that she had desires for him, but I think it was because he wasn't the least bit interested in her that way. If Snape is interested in Miss Granger, perhaps he recognizes the signs. He's not the type to miss anything going on around him.And what a bombshell at the end? Her happiness depends on it... What about his happiness?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Ah, Snape. I always imagine him as really astute, but somewhat oblivious to matters of the heart. Although we can't be sure about exactly what he is picking up on and what he can't admit to himself. Don't worry, it all comes cler in the last chapter, next week.And your husband sounds like he is really in love with you; that's why he didn't have eyes for anyone else. The thought probably didn't even cross his mind because he was already so happy with what he had! :) That anecdote made me smile. It's so nice to hear.
Response from ClayPotter (Reviewer)
Even after almost 19 years, we still have a good thing going. Our kids are teens now, and they still tell us to "get a room" when we start to hug and kiss in front of them. It's so funny, but they have grown up with the confidence that their parent's really love each other.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
That's so refreshing to hear! I have been married for 13 years and we have 5 kids. It is great to know that there are still people going strong out there and that it IS possible to succeed and have a strong family and a happy marriage. I am looking to you as an example now!