Chapter 3
Chapter 3 of 10
KeppiehedHermione has a secret that leaves her deeply indebted to an enemy. Can she turn the tables on him?
ReviewedDisclaimer: I own nothing. It all is property of J.K. Rowling.
A/N: Many thanks to my beta, Melisse.
Hermione now had her task before her. She got a good night's sleep and in the morning felt much refreshed. Before she got out of bed, she mentally reviewed how she would tackle her problem. She rejected the idea of trying to read Snape's thoughts almost immediately; he was just too accomplished in the art of Legilimency himself. He would know almost immediately that his mind was being invaded, no matter how subtle she tried to be. Not only would he use Occlumency, but he would then apply Legilimency on her, and while she had been practicing her blocking techniques, he was still far more skilled, and he would be able to break her barriers if he really tried. The game would then be up. So she would have to do some legwork.
If Snape were concocting a potion, then it stood to reason that he probably had all the ingredients standing ready, save for the last, most precious one, which was to be supplied by her. She could check the potion stores first to see if he'd left a trail there, but assuming that he had not, she would have to find the stash. The collection of ingredients he had standing ready would tell her which potion he intended to use, for though she didn't know the list for Voldemort's potion, she did know what was required for the resurrection potion. Now, at last, she had a course of action, but it seemed easier said than done. There were innumerable places to keep a small stash of ingredients.
Hermione swung her legs out of the warm bed and winced as the cold from the stones seeped into the soles of her feet. She went through her morning ablutions as quickly as she could and made her way to the Great Hall.
Just as she reached the hall doors, she had an idea and pulled back to avoid being seen. She stood in the shadows and scanned as much of the room as her position would allow. It was a Sunday morning, and most of the students were partaking of a leisurely breakfast, chatting over their choice of favorite foods. Hermione's own stomach let out a loud rumble as the smell of hash browns wafted out towards her, and she had to suppress a groan at the thought of missing another meal. The croissants looked awfully good! Maybe she could take the time to eat something. In fact, she saw Harry and Ron at the long Gryffindor table, arguing over the last rasher of bacon. Just then, her eye was drawn to a dark shape at the far edge of the room, and she saw Snape getting himself something hot to drink and settling in, with a blank look over his features, to survey the room.
Success! That was what she was looking for! Hermione hadn't really expected to see Snape dining with the others; he usually took his meals alone, except for occasions when he had to make an appearance as the head of his house, or as part of the staff. She didn't question what he was doing there now, though. Just seeing him was sufficient. She would have enough time, if she hurried, to check out the potions stores, and possibly some probable hiding places.
She would check the storeroom first because she didn't relish the thought of searching Snape's personal things, and she had no notion where to even begin in that quarter. Besides, it was much more likely she would be caught in the act of going through Snape's personal effects. Hermione shuddered at the very thought. There was still a high degree of danger in checking the storeroom, as Snape kept a close eye on it even though he was in charge of Defense Against the Dark Arts now.
Hermione reached the Potions classroom and peered at corridor around her. It was empty of students. She was alone. She checked the door first. Locked. She withdrew her wand. "Alohomora!" The mechanism clicked and the door swung ajar a few inches.
Hermione stepped into the empty classroom. It was dim in there, and dusty, and the motes swirled around her as if perturbed by her presence. "Lumos," she murmured, and her wand tip gently glowed. A prickle of guilt flared up her spine, and she suppressed it with effort. She stepped towards the storeroom. A feeling of unease was enveloping her. Perhaps it was the silence. She had never been good at this kind of thing.
Her wand was already shaking when she reached the storeroom door. It, too, was locked, but the simple Alohomora charm opened it to her. She couldn't help but think that in Snape's reign, this would never have been allowed to happen. He surely would've had tighter security on his wares. Well, all the better for her in this case.
A scroll on the first shelf kept a record of the comings and goings of ingredients. Hermione quickly scanned the first several pages, and Snape's name appeared, but only for the most general herbs and ointments that could be applied to almost anything. It did not raise her suspicion, but she knew he was too clever to leave such an obvious mark. She had another trick up her sleeve, though.
She raised her wand. "Tracesempta Severus Snape!" Hermione held her breath and waited a moment, and then it happened. In the gloom of the airless storeroom, a gentle green glow began to coalesce on certain bottles and vials scattered throughout the shelves. It became brighter and began to pulse, almost in time with Hermione's own. She couldn't believe it had worked! She took a ragged breath and stepped to the first item. Belladonna. Her heart plummeted. This did not bode well.
She reached up to the second item she could reach and read the label. Heartshorn. That was also not on the good list. She went along to each and every vial that had a glow on it, refusing to believe the evidence until she had examined it for herself. None of the ingredients were on the list for the potion to right a wrong.
There was one last vial, pushed so far back on the shelf that she couldn't reach. Hermione didn't know why it mattered at this point, but she was determined to get it, to see it through. She had become single-minded in her purpose to be right, to believe in reason over insanity, as if this cause were meaningful to her in a way that it was not to others. She had attributed something to Snape that wasn't there, some sense of goodness and justice that he didn't have, and it all hung on this counterpoint; she could see it, although it didn't make any sense. If he was a villain, then she felt like giving up. She took aim with her wand at the last vial, as if all hope for her hinged on it, and shouted "Accio vial!"
At this, a confluence of events transpired, appearing to Hermione as if happening in slow motion. She realized, too late, that she was no longer alone in the storeroom. In fact, the very person who was in the small space with her was no other than Professor Snape himself. His somber, slim figure seemed to cast a pall over the already shrouded closet, and Hermione could feel the waves of cold fairly rolling off of him. She was in the middle of a spell, however, and her hand reached out to catch the tiny vial, as if by reflex, to fully incriminate her.
She couldn't tear her eyes away from his to read the last crucial ingredient, and she felt seared by what she saw in his dark depths. His eyes burned into hers, seeing everything that had transpired as if she had told him aloud herself. He didn't have to read her mind. He could see it there before him.
Still, his voice was controlled, as if he were speaking of a mild topic instead of something so vital. "Miss Granger, I see that your friends have been a ... questionable influence on you at best. Turning thief, are we? Perhaps you might have been a credit to the house of Slytherin after all."
Hermione's lips curled back at the suggestion, and she tried to sound as normal as possible. "I was trying to find the thestral heart here, sir. I thought that perhaps there might be one here I could use, instead of having to do the job myself. After all, you never said that I had to..."
Snape cut her off, stopping her ramble. "Spare me the lies, Granger." His voice was velvet, but it held a lethal edge. "You're no good at it." He looked around. "We seem to have a problem here, but first I must admit my surprise at your rather ... resourceful spell. You did catch me off guard in your use of that particular invocation. Explain yourself."
Hermione felt the cold sweat of fear break out over her scalp and wanted to shiver. The reality of her situation crashed down on her. She was alone in this place with someone she now knew to be almost certainly on the side of evil. No one knew she was here. She had to convince Snape that she knew nothing.
"I don't know what you mean, Professor. I'm sorry I broke in here, but I'm desperate. I don't want to have to ... murder an animal." She tried her best to look innocent, and probably succeeded in looking a good bit scared. "But I was just looking for anything to do with thestrals, that's it. I don't know anything else."
Snape narrowed his eyes in menace. "I heard you cast that spell. What was it?"
Hermione lifted her chin. "There was no spell."
Snape let the silence spin out. "Miss Granger, I will not play these children's games with you. You will tell me what I wish to know, either your way..." here he indicated, with a slight nod towards her, that this was the preferred way, "...or my way. It is of no account to me which way we use, but I can guarantee, it will matter to you. I am going to find out what I want to know, so make your choice now. My patience runs thin. What ... spell ... did ... you ... cast?"
Hermione peeked up through her bangs and saw that she was utterly outmatched. She could not conceal anything from this man. His force, his sheer power, was overwhelming. She didn't know if he was using an unknown spell on her, or if it was just his presence, but she felt drunk on the energy he was exuding. Her shoulders slumped, and the words spilled from her lips almost of their own accord. "I created this spell on my own. It's taken me years, actually." She couldn't help the boastful tone, and her cheeks pinked as she realized how ridiculous it was here, now, to want credit and acknowledgement for her achievements. "I got the idea from where I live, in the Muggle world. They use fingerprints in crime scenes to identify people. I thought that I could do something similar here. Not necessarily for criminals, but just to identify a witch or wizard's unique trace. On something they touched. I thought it might be useful someday. I guess it was," she trailed off, staring down.
"Well, well," mused Snape. "You really may be Hogwarts' brightest after all." He looked her over. "Do you know what you have done, Miss Granger? Give me the vial in your hand."
Hermione's eyes snapped open. She had almost forgotten that she had it in all of the tension. A stubborn, childish impulse drove her to spite him. "No."
Snape's eyes glittered dangerously. "Hand it to me, Miss Granger. You don't know what you're dealing with."
He might as well have said, "You don't know whom you are dealing with;" Hermione felt the urge to gall him. It was dangerous, and it didn't make a lick of sense. She knew that he already possessed the ingredient because his trace was on the bottle, but she wanted nothing more than to disobey him, to thwart him in any way she could, no matter how small. It might be her only way to have power over him, if only for the briefest of moments. Her fingers tightened around the glass. "I said no!"
Snape very carefully drew his wand, and she had hers in her hand already. His eyes never left hers. Just as he said, "Accio vial," Hermione shouted, "Expelliamus!" and the accident occurred.
Only too late did Hermione realize the vial she was holding contained Dragon's Bane, a highly unstable element. As it flew through the air towards Snape, his wand flew to her, and they met in the middle of the room. The bit of magic at the end of Snape's wand was all it took to ignite the highly flammable Dragon's Bane into a spectacular ball of light. Hermione barely had time to jerk her own wand up and murmur the words for the shield charm before it engulfed the whole room.
The dragonfire burned everything in an enormous swath of destruction, hotter and brighter than anything Hermione had ever felt. It was like the surface of the sun pouring over her in a liquid curtain, and she felt the integrity of her shield melting, but then it was over, as quickly as it had flared.
The roar left her ears ringing in the quiet, and her eyes burning in the sudden shadow. Darker than the rest of the charred and smoldering ruins around her, though, she could make out a figure lying half in and half out of the doorway. It was Professor Snape. She could just see a breath. He was barely alive.
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86 Reviews | 7.53/10 Average
Aw! That was a twist I didn't like reading at all! I guess there's no hope for romance after she messed up so badly.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh no! I'm so sorry that you didn't like the ending. It was my first story, so in the interveing time I've been a writer, I have lerned to better craft a tale. Thanks so much for reading it, though. I do appreciate it!
Heh. Make Hermione carry the fault of Dumbledore's death, then. That's interesting!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Thanks! I hope the ending wasn't too disappointing. Thanks for reading and for reviewing; I do appreciate it!
No! Sir Figgie! How could Hermione be so careless? I had a smelly teenage boy sock all ready for the exchange, but I am too late!Pretty good for an early work. Reading this just highlights how far your work has come since. Well done, and keep writing.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Thank you for your kind words! You know that looking at earlier work always makes me cringe. You are nice to be so generous about it. Thanks for reading it all the way through! (and you're right; I've come a long way from chaste romance to squid sex! *whew* Fandom has a steep and slippery slope!)
How sad this is. Severus will now have to die and when he does, Hermione will realize that her one moment of forgetfulness had made it so. What a terrible burden to have to carry.Not every story can have a happy ending, but even in this sadness you have given us a great plot and the inspired idea of an anti-dementor. I want to compliment you on your first posted story. You did a great job. I had no idea that it would end this way, but the idea is a completely unexpected twist to the tale. At least they had that one brief moment of tenderness between them and that is so much more than they had in Deathly Hallows.Well done!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Aw, thank you so much. I was worried that you wouldn't like how it ended so abruptly! I am really glad that you stuck with it, and that you liked some of the more original aspects of it, even if it could have been written more gracefully.Thanks so much for being such an enthusiastic reviewer. It really was a great pleasure to get your feedback, and I hope you seek out my other stuff; it is a little more polished, I can assure you!
I had to laugh at Hermione's recruiting speech to Sir Figgy. I think she has a new suitor.When Snape told her that he could not give her what she sought, I got the eeriest feeling. Like he knows something bad is going to happen... to him. Oh nooooooooo.The anti-dementor potion is a brilliant idea, and I hope it works like they have planned.I'm so afraid for Snape.Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh no. I think you might have the right idea. *is very nervous about your reaction for the next chapter* I hope you don't hate it!!
They kissed, Squee!!! But poor Sir Figgie, I'll miss him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Aw, Sir Figgie had to go. But yeah, at least they got a kiss in! LOL! That was before my days of knowing how to taper a story gracefully, so thank you very much for sticking with me, and for your kind review. I appreciate it very much, even with the abrupt ending!
Good lord but Draco was at his worst here. I don't know what brought Snape to the Slytherin dormitory, but thank the gods he was there. When he told Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle that they would have to spend weeks setting the Potions storeroom to rights, I suspected he did know what Draco was about to do to Hermione.It's a good thing that Pansy was willing to "escort" Hermione through the Common Room so that her Head of House would be able to see that she got out . And now they have three weeks (not a long time really) for Hermione to learn all about "stealth tactics, or ... wayfinding technologies" and then for her to teach an elf. I hope she can find one willing to work with her. 8^)Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
It pained me to portray our favorite Slytherin bad-boy in such a nasty light! I think he was probably true to character, but it still was hard to do! *whew* I'm glad that part is over with, and now we are onto the rest of the story!
"She yearned for nothing more than to have him pull her into his strong arms and embrace her."So, having the thestral's heart in her possession did affect how she feels about Snape. Well done.Now, I hope Severus is getting some sort of vibes that his assistant is in danger, otherwise he is going to be without her help. If he does come to realize the danger she is in from Draco, the young Slytherin is going to be in a world of hurt.I'm off to the next chapter!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, man, I am totally biting my nails to see what you think of the whole thing. I hope you don't hate the ending! *is a nervous wreck*
Yes! The perfect solution to Hermione's fear of having to kill one of these gentle creatures. I wonder if his giving the thestral's heart to her will effect her relationship with the Professor? After all, Hagrid did tell her that it has magical properties:"It’s said to bring the greatest of hope and love to anyone wishin' fer it, mostly witches on their sweethearts, I think." Very interesting... and now about that house elf.Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I remember sweating over that problem, I can tell you! I'm glad that solution came to me, and that it seemed plausible, because neither of us wanted to see Hermione knee-deep in gore. *shudders*Thanks for reading thus far!
Wow! Finally she knows the truth about Professor Snape, and is willing to help. I know it is hard for her to think about having to kill a thestral for its heart, but it must be done. I can't help but wonder how that will all work out. But not only does she have to obtain the heart, she has to get a house elf because they are going to sneak into Azkaban? Yep, that what he said.I'm off to find out what happens next. 8^)Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
*laughs* I am delighting in your responses! Thanks so much for being an enthusiastic reviewer! You are making my day!
Gah! So very heart-wrenching, and quite the mood-killer. However, it was well played to fit into the set of events. Poor Sir Figgie.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm sorry you didn't like the end! I know it was a downer, and I am totally cringing at how abruptly I ended it. At the time, it seemed like it was the longest fanfic of all time. Now that I have been writing awhile, I realize that I might have tapered it with some grace. *grimaces* Thanks for being so kind in your reviews and assessment of it, and I hope that you find my other work a little more satisfying! Thanks for being such a good reviewer, and for sticking with it so patiently!
It was a near thing, but Severus will survive. I wonder how he will react when he realizes that Hermione's penance is to be his assistant. I am relieved that Dumbledore poured oil on the troubled waters known as Harry and Ron. I'm just waiting for them to forget what the Headmaster told them and go off half-cocked about something else to do with Snape.Now what will Hermione be doing for the good Professor? Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I am worried that you won't like how the story ends up! I beg you to bear in mind that it was my first effort, and the rest of my stuff is much more polished, I promise. But you will get your answers soon enough. And thanks so much for sticking with it. All will be revealed shortly!
Good God Almighty! The minute Hermione made up her mind to get that last vial, I knew all hell woould break loose. And now her decision to NOT do what Snape had told her to do had led to this horrendous, firey conflagration. She is lucky that he isn't dead... and there's still plenty of time for that to happen.Oh shite! Great chapter!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
LOL! I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story! It's good to read your enthusiasm for it! I warn you that it has a train-wreck at the end, so don't get too excited. This was my very first story, so I wasn't great at the art of storytelling yet. *ducks*
Harry and Ron have no way of knowing that the potion that Snape probably want to brew will allow him to see Lily one last time and right the wrong he had been carrying for years.The thestral heart is an ingenious ingredient idea that makes perfect sense. I wonder how on earth Hermione is going to find one. I can't see her killing a thestral to cut out its heart. Could there be another potion ingredient that is known as "thestral heart?" I hope Ron and Harry can keep their mouths shut, but I have a feeling that at least one of them won't be able to help himself. There is so much opportunity for unintended mischief here.Good job!Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You're so right about unintended mischief; had I had more experience as a storyteller under my belt, I would have taken advantage of that set-up! Now I am smacking myself. Maybe I should go back and add some stuff in. I'm glad that you alike it so far, and I am just cringing about what you are going to think about the rest of the plot!
I read and reviewed this chapter back on 6/9/10 and had every intention to read on and follow... as you could tell, something (RL) snuck up on me and I got distracted.So I'm back and looking forward to finding out everything that's happened. And the story is complete! I'm so sorry I got sidetracked, and this time I really am off to the next chapter. Beth
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oh, I definitely know how RL is! I hope the rest of the story doesn't disappoint!
Poor Sir Figgie. Still, it was pretty good for your first work. Now, young lady, back to PIE! Mush! :P
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You are far too kind for what I deserve on this. And as for PIE ... Yes ma'am! *mushes*
Talk about a mood killer! How will Hermione live with herself after forgetting to cast the charm to save the elf? If you keep her in character, it will eat away at her and perhaps make her take extra chances she might not have taken because she feels that she deserves to be punished for her neglagence.How very sad indeed. I just hope that Snape finds a way to let her know about Dumbledore and his dreaded task. Perhaps she can make up for her mistake by helping him there. But if you are going to follow canon, I can't imagine how you will accomplish it.Guess I'll just have to wait and see...
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I know, it was an angsty and to the tale, indeed! At the time, I was thinking, OMG, this is the longest fanfic EVER. *laughs* Um, I have learned a thing or two in the intrvening time, and I can now fill in a plot hole and taper an ending better, so I assure you that anything else you read will be much less abrupt and hopefully more satisfying!Thanks so much for sticking with it, and for your patience with me. I appreciate all of you kind remarks!
Darn! Ending needs a bit of work, but otherwise good story! I doubt there will be a relationship now....Nicely done for a first-timer. I kept thinking Hermione might get her time-turner and fix it, oh well. Anti-dementor was a very interesting idea. Looking forward to reading more from you.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Hehe, thanks for sticking with it. I cringe when I look back on this, as I am sure we all do with our early work. I really appreciate that you were kind about it, and if you could manage to get through this, then my other stuff should prove much more satisfying. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Um, I think you missed uploading the part where Hermione wakes up and this was all a dream, but having witnessed that, she won't forget the charm in real life. Then they live happily ever after. The end.So, I don't actually think there is a trainwreck here at all. Maybe a child's scooter hitting a small tree, LOL. It is clearly an early work, just due to the depths of the characters that you currently write, but I think it ended just fine. Well, except for the fact that if I had it my way, every single story would have a happy ending. Still, it was a fun read, I think you were fretting about it more than anyone else.Don't you now think that you owe the knight elf his own short story since you offed him without his moment to shine. Surely he has something interesting in his past...
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
You're too kind. I was like "omg, that's a major plot hole, Hermione would NEVER forget the charm like that. And then it stopped as if I got tired of writing: elf dies, plans fails, the end." At the time, I remember thinking "This is the longest work of fanfiction EVER WRITTEN, and people are going to think that I have been dragging it out unmercifully, I must end it now!" (er ... fast forward a year to the excruciatingly slow nuances of UST in PIE, lol) Anyway, glad that you didn't totally hate it. See, there's hope for us all. If I can churn out this garbage and end up okay, anyone can do it!
Response from HBAR (Reviewer)
If I can churn out this garbage and end up okay, anyone can do it!How subtle, LOL! The end was a little abrupt, but I think that I was prepared for such a dreadful ending, that I was expecting, I don't know what, but something really bad. The story had several concepts which I think are really good. Maybe someday you can revisit them in an even better, more experienced story.
I just don't get how Hermione could forget something so important as the charm. I don't know if it was Fate for her to forget, and for Severus to go with the other pla. I wonder how that's going to affect his relationship with Hermione. Obviously they won't be able to have one now.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I know; it was a pretty weak plothole. I was trying to bring it back around to canon, where Severus had to kill Dumbledore, which he had been trying to avoid with this plan. I hope it didn't all seem too unbelievable; this was my very first story, and after I've been in fandom a while I realize it wasn't thought out very well. *blushes* But I thank you for reading this far, and I hope it wasn't TOO disappointing!
Figgie's too cute!I love how ambiguous his statement of "Your happiness depends upon it." is!Looking forward to seeing how you finish this off!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I'm glad to see you're still with me, even with the addition of the house-elf. I was worried he might be annoying! Thanks for sticking with it. Yup, next chapter is it! All shall become clear!
Another awesomely wonderful chapter. I can only hope Severus and Hermione can grow closer despite his reservations and flatout refusal. Perhaps, Hermione, lit the spark of knowledge that there is an attraction between them that is not simply one sided. Great Job!!
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Oooh, thanks. I know, I want those two to get together, as well! Snape needs a nudge in the right direction or something. I'm really glad to hear that you are enjoying the story thus far, and thanks so much for your review!
Gadzounds! Looks like there may be a scrap over the knight elf. He's quite cute, and obviously reasonably sturdy if he survived the wrath of Snape, but the chink in his armour may be his down fall. Sunny and I could look after him to make sure no ill befalls him.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
I can't say anything to give it away, but don't get too attached to the little guy: *cues foreboding music*. I tried to make him sort of annoying so people didn't like him too much. Look away, while you still can!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Reviewer)
Nooo! We want the knight elf! Am willing to pay adoption fees.Just a thought - 'Knight elf' sounds like something you'd take to stop a nightime cough, doesn't it?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Did J.K. go over elf transfer procedure? Do you hand a sock around? I'm not sure what the etiquette is, but you're welcome to the medicinally named guy! rofl
So she finally realizes what we knew all along. I wonder if Snape can tell... I think probably so, but a woman who worked with my husband had a crush on him once. Everyone could see it except him. His parents attended a party while visiting us and she was there. Even they could tell. They both warned him that she was hot for him and he had better watch himself! I knew the woman, and I trusted my husband (still do). He really had no idea that she had desires for him, but I think it was because he wasn't the least bit interested in her that way. If Snape is interested in Miss Granger, perhaps he recognizes the signs. He's not the type to miss anything going on around him.And what a bombshell at the end? Her happiness depends on it... What about his happiness?
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
Ah, Snape. I always imagine him as really astute, but somewhat oblivious to matters of the heart. Although we can't be sure about exactly what he is picking up on and what he can't admit to himself. Don't worry, it all comes cler in the last chapter, next week.And your husband sounds like he is really in love with you; that's why he didn't have eyes for anyone else. The thought probably didn't even cross his mind because he was already so happy with what he had! :) That anecdote made me smile. It's so nice to hear.
Response from ClayPotter (Reviewer)
Even after almost 19 years, we still have a good thing going. Our kids are teens now, and they still tell us to "get a room" when we start to hug and kiss in front of them. It's so funny, but they have grown up with the confidence that their parent's really love each other.
Response from Keppiehed (Author of Razor's Edge)
That's so refreshing to hear! I have been married for 13 years and we have 5 kids. It is great to know that there are still people going strong out there and that it IS possible to succeed and have a strong family and a happy marriage. I am looking to you as an example now!