The Order
Chapter 14 of 19
Rose of the West"...The Death Eaters are more determined and have been using Unforgivable Curses for several years now. It's a long time since this stopped being a lark. The time has come to take more definitive action..."
ReviewedExcept for OCs, the characters here and the world they inhabit are the creation of JK Rowling and her assigns.
Andromeda's second child was born when his older sister was a two and a half years old. Ted's delight was boundless. Things had quieted down a bit. The Death Eaters caused occasional incidents to remind the Ministry of their existence, but were hiding their presence for the most part. The pregnancy had gone without incident, and the delivery of the child was no more difficult than most women face.
On the day the child was born, Ted looked at him for hours. Andromeda was happy to have given him a son. Ted would never admit it, and he was firmly wrapped around his daughter's finger, but she knew men liked to have a son. Hadn't Aunt Walburga twitted Mother about it for Andromeda's whole life?
Ted looked up at one point. "He makes me think of my Dad. Can we call him Timothy?"
She smiled fondly. The name seemed to fit the boy, somehow. "Yes, I think it suits him."
"Timothy Alphard?"
Andromeda smiled brighter. "Yes, I think that's perfect."
She looked at the man and little boy she loved best in the world and remembered how the previous summer they had sat on a blanket as was becoming their habit on the night of the Perseid meteors. Ted had been so incredibly himself, sitting there, pointing out the shooting stars so she would see them and glancing her way. His smiles had made her stomach swim. She could never define what happened on such occasions, but it had come upon her that she had to be with him in the most intimate of ways right then.
She had sat up behind him and kissed his ear as she unfastened his robe. He had sucked in his breath, and she continued to undress him. It hadn't taken much effort from there to convince him to participate. They had stayed together under the stars and shared their love until the meteors faded from view. Afterwards, they had walked into the house and prepared for the day with a smile that made the witch's uncle smile in satisfaction.
A persistent stomach upset a month and a half later had caused Andromeda to seek the assistance of a Healer in a rare instance of her leaving the cottage. The Healer had confirmed what she already suspected: She was in the second month of pregnancy. They had met this news with as much joy as they had when little Dora, as her father called her, was announced.
Ted brought her back to the present by smiling as he looked at her. "Dromeda, you're still the prettiest witch I've ever seen."
"Nonsense. I'm all worn out from having a baby. My skin is blotchy and my hair is all over..."
She was silenced by a kiss that was altogether more passionate than the situation warranted, given that passion was on a list of things that would be in short supply for a month or so. "I see all those things, but I also see you, that I love so much, and that's always been so pretty to me."
"Oh, Ted," she said, bursting into tears, "you should know better than to say something like that to me on a day like today when my feelings are all over the place. I love you, too."
Poppy had come from Hogwarts again to deliver the baby, and Sirius had come with her. The young wizard spent several minutes telling his little cousin that he must sort to Gryffindor, and that together they would show those Slytherins what was what. Andromeda watched the two boys and hoped with all her heart that the world would adjust and the family rifts could be healed.
Orion and Walburga allowed Sirius to visit Alphard's house during the following summer, even though they suspected Alphard was somehow helping their niece in her scandalous behavior. Sirius had a great deal of fun talking with his uncle and playing with his young cousin. He watched her try to copy his black hair and the shape of his face and laughed loud and long. It was a good week, and Andromeda enjoyed having someone different in the house as much as Sirius enjoyed being away from his parents and brother.
The night before he was to return to his parents' house, Sirius watched Andromeda playing with his toddler cousin and asked about something that had troubled him that week. "He seems a bit... flat... like he's missing a spark. Is there something wrong with him?"
Andromeda shook her head. "No, he's fine. We think he might be a Squib."
"A Squib? How can you stand it?"
She smiled. "He's a member of the family."
"But still..."
"His father and I love each other very much, and our children are part of that love. I couldn't not love this child, Sirius. If he's not magical, we will find a way to have him educated in the Muggle world, to go to university and to live as normally that way as he can. Maybe he'll be better off away from the troubles you and I have faced with our family."
"Hm, you might be right about that," said the young wizard, who was still a boy. "He could hardly be worse off than you are."
"Thanks," said Andromeda, giving her cousin a bump with her shoulder. He bumped her back, and they went downstairs together for Sirius's last evening in the cottage.
Sirius didn't mean to let something slip, but somehow he must have. Rumor flooded the Black family about Andromeda's Squib child, and Alphard was called to discuss it. He returned several hours after he left, quite ill. Andromeda helped him to bed and tried various healing methods and potions.
"They poisoned me, but it won't be possible for you to prove it."
"What can we do?"
"There's nothing you can do, dear. It's not a bad time for me to go where Evie is. You and Ted are doing so well, the kids are wonderful, and I can leave. I know you'll help Sirius when he needs help. "Listen, I have left you the cottage and it's contents. Since you have that trust fund, I'm leaving the rest of my estate to Sirius. I've locked it all up tight so that the family can't do anything about it. I think they were hoping that the cottage would revert to Walburga and you would finally be exposed, but it's not going to happen. Don't pay any attention to any letters you might receive."
Andromeda spent the evening caring for her uncle. Bennie took care of the children until Ted came home from work. Uncle Alphard opened his eyes one last time and said, "I love you, child," and then he was gone. Bennie came into the room several minutes later.
"Mistress, Bennie has to leave."
She sat there, her uncle's hand still in her own, and tears running down her face. She didn't understand what the elf was saying.
"Bennie has to leave and to take Master Alphard with him."
"Oh." It hadn't occurred to Andromeda that the house wouldn't include the elf, but it made perfect sense. The elf had belonged to the Grimmauld Place house and only left when Uncle Alphard did. Once he died, the elf would go back to the house.
"I shouldn't keep you, then, Bennie. You've been a very good elf, and I'm sorry that you have to leave."
"Bennie thanks Mistress. But, Mistress, I takes Master Alphard with me."
"Yes, of course." He would be buried from the home of his ancestors. He was still on the tapestry, after all. It was the first time in many months that Andromeda had thought about it, and she really didn't care, but at that moment it caused her to wince.
Ted took a bereavement day and watched the children as Andromeda wore a concealing cloak that left her face in shadow. She didn't go to the funeral, but did attend the service at the place where all Blacks in good standing were buried.
"It's your fault you know."
Andromeda turned and saw her older sister. She looked much older than when she had last seen her, and there was a new and strange light in her eyes.
"I didn't create the world that caused this."
"No, but you made things worse by marrying the Mudblood and having his children."
"I love my husband, and I love my children."
Bellatrix hissed, "They don't matter. My lord will destroy them all, and then you will join him as I have in order to help him rule the world."
Andromeda looked at her sister's face. Her eyes were shining but none of it quite fit. "What have you been doing with him?"
Trixie's chin lifted a bit. "It's none of your business. He and I are on a different plane than the rest of you."
"I think I'm content to be a mere mortal."
"Maybe you should leave and let us mourn poor Uncle Alphard."
Andromeda snorted. "Let you mourn poor Uncle Alphard? That's a bit rich in this family. Were you in on the plot to poison him?"
Her sister's eyes narrowed. "What do you know about that?"
"Do you honestly think he didn't know what happened once it was done? Who do you think sat by his side and held his hand the whole time? Who do you suppose turned him over to the house-elf? Where's Bennie, anyway?"
Bellatrix shrugged. "I heard the elf was resisting his retraining. Aunt Walburga did the only thing she could."
Andromeda resisted the urge to raise her voice. "She...she didn't."
Her sister smiled. "Oh, but she did."
"To kill Uncle was one thing, but the house-elf... he wasn't part of this..."
Andromeda started to back away but Bellatrix reached out and grabbed her arm. "Not so fast, Little Sister..."
"Is it true?" The girls looked up to find that they had been joined by Sirius.
His elder cousin shrugged. "All you need to do is look at the hallway when you get home, Sirius."
He shook his head and hissed angrily. "No, about Uncle Alphard."
"I have no idea what you're talking about," the witch said with an attempt at a demure look on her face that she could no longer achieve. "Of course, if the Mudblood's whore, here, is pushed out into the open by his death... it's a good thing, don't you think?"
Sirius's face turned dark red and he turned on his heel to find his parents. Trixie looked up, a gleam in her eyes at the idea of a scene, and Andromeda took advantage of the opportunity to place a Stinging Jinx on the hand that held her arm. Once free, she didn't waste a second in escaping to her own back garden, hers now that Uncle had willed it to her.
Andromeda and Ted were sitting over coffee in the kitchen, discussing the funeral and their own thoughts about what had happened, when the Floo sprang to life.
"What is it now?" asked Ted as he jumped up and pulled out his wand. As ever, he tried to stand in front of his wife, but she pulled out her own wand and aimed, a spell ready at her lips. They watched the figure spinning into the room and relaxed when it turned out to be Sirius. Soot from the fireplace stuck to the tear-tracks on his face.
"It's true," he said, "all of it, Andie. Uncle Alphard," he swallowed hard, "and poor Bennie, too. They didn't admit it, but they didn't deny it, either. Mother looked positively pleased with herself. How can she call herself his sister?
"I left. I packed everything I could fit into my school trunk and went to James Potters's house. His parents want me and practically treat me like James. They'll help me get on my feet. I'll find a job after I'm done at Hogwarts, and then I'll have a place of my own."
"Oh, Sirius..." she sat him down and offered him something to eat.
"No, it's ok," he said. "Mrs. Potter is fixing supper right now. They said I might come to you and let you know what happened. Well, if it's just a little..." He sat when she put her hands on his shoulders. His mouth was half full of biscuits when he finally thought to ask, "Wha' will you do whe' th' house goes t' Moth'r?"
"It won't."
Sirius gulped his mouthful down and said, "What do you mean?"
"Uncle told me that night, when he realized what had happened. He said that long ago he changed his will. He left me this cottage and you the rest of his estate."
The boy sat and thought for a while. "He knew them really well, didn't he?"
"He did grow up between them."
"It's hard to picture them as children. Can you imagine my mother that way?"
Andromeda giggled. "Hardly."
"Me, either. I feel like you and I are the only ones who truly knew him. We're the ones who should have a funeral for him."
Andromeda Summoned a piece of parchment and a quill from the kitchen counter. "Who should be there?"
The next evening, a small group of people including Molly and Arthur Weasley, the Prewett brothers, Kingsley Shacklebolt, Alastor Moody, and Albus Dumbledore sat in the sitting room of what was now Andromeda Tonks's cottage. Sirius had brought his friend, James.
Dumbledore stood before them as Ted handed out glasses of firewhisky. "I want to remember as good a fighter as we ever had. Our small group has been much enriched by Alphard's activities. He's been a good spy for our side within the bosom of Voldemort's followers. It will be much harder, now, to anticipate what they might do.
"Besides that, he's been a loving and kind member of his family. Few of you were alive when Evie was taken from him, and I never saw a man mourn harder. We can hope, for his sake, that he's been reunited with the witch he never stopped loving. Since that time, he's taken care of his sister and brother's children as needed, making up for what these two never had at home. Alphard Black, wherever you are, may it be someplace where you can rest on a job well done.
"To Alphard Black!" He raised his cup and everyone in the room did the same.
Stories were passed, then, including some funny ones told by Alastor Moody, who had known Alphard when both were students at Hogwarts. There had been more interaction between Slytherin House and the other houses in those days, and the two had gotten into a couple of escapades together over the years.
The evening was long from over when Dumbledore stood again. "I must ask your patience, friends, for a few more minutes."
Everyone's eye looked up at the Headmaster of Hogwarts. "We've had a loose organization of sorts, but we're fighting against a strong enemy whose organization has a name and a plan. The Death Eaters are more determined and have been using Unforgivable Curses for several years now. It's a long time since this stopped being a lark. The time has come to take more definitive action.
"I have chosen to let our group be controlled by the preferences of the Ministry. Unfortunately, Cornelius Fudge has concerns that will not allow him to realize what is happening within some of our first families..."
"Too busy counting the campaign contributions," injected Moody under his breath. "He doesn't want to sacrifice his influence with the pureblood families."
Dumbledore cleared his throat. "For whatever reason, he has chosen not to take this seriously. I therefore believe that we must act, within the confines of the law as much as possible. Our organization will take on a more definitive structure. I would like to propose that we call ourselves," he paused to wave his right arm. There was a flash of light and a bright fire-red bird flew into the room and settled on his arm. "I propose we call ourselves the Order of the Phoenix."
Thank you to Trickie Woo for beta reading.
Thank you also to the staff here who selected this as a Featured Story. I'm quite honored!
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72 Reviews | 5.53/10 Average
A beautiful story with such a sad ending. I came across this via 'random story' and I'm glad I did; it's not a relationship I'd considered much, but you depicted it so well - happiness, romance, problems, sadness, basically reality! I also enjoyed the humorous Tonks references scattered in there! I enjoyed the whole thing and had tears in my eyes at the end. I think you also really captured the difficulties of the war, even though A wasn't properly involved, she experienced that people aren't black and White, you can like someone but not trust them etc. Very moving.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you so much! The war wouldn't have necessarily called upon everyone to be like Harry or Dumbledore, but it would have affected every family, for sure. I have to admit that last chapter was one of the hardest I've ever written. I never cry about anything, but I did have some tears in my eyes over it.Some of Tonks's statements while growing up were a lot of fun to inject. I understand how it got to be that way, but in JKR's stories, so many characters act like they never existed even one paragraph before they show up in the canon. It's fun to flesh them out.Thanks again!
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
I totally agree, though I also think that those gaps are what makes HP fanfic so varied and interesting.
Thank you for a wonderfull story. I seldom get a lump in my throat reading, but this one did it. I loved your portrait of both Andromeda and Ted Tonks and all the other characters you wrote. Now I will go and read the sequel. You are a very gifted reader
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the lovely review! I never thought much about this pair, but I had a plot bunny and then found a challenge for which this was the perfect story, and within three chapters I was madly in love with Ted Tonks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.
Oh, this is lovely. I've really fallen quite in love with this family as well... I really liked your introduction, of the very usual man, with average skills and normal dreams, because not everyone can be Harry Potter, but everyone can be a certain type of hero. And now, obeying canon gives your really sweet, loving story a tragic end, but you still manage to pull it up a tiny bit. In the end we all die, but we can hope that the ones we leave behind find peace.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
This was very much my salute to "everyman," the people who do all the little things that make the world go round. They may not live incredible lives, but they're heroes all the same. I'm glad you saw that in the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the beautiful review!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful tale of love with us.I have still tears in my eyes. *sigh*
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for being so enthusiastic and supportive. I have really felt the love. I'm sorry to see the end of this story, myself.
There, now you have done it. You made me cry with this chapter.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
The only reason I didn't cry with this chapter is that I actually wrote it when I was also working on chapter 8 or 9. When I re-read it to edit for posting on TPP, I did tear up.When I read the one line in DH about Ted leaving and then later about his death, he was just a statistic. He became a person to me when I worked on this story and I'm not entirely happy with myself for allowing that to happen.I hope you cried in a good way, if there is such a thing. Thank you for the review!
Yes, children are the best medicine there is :-)I think Ted is seeing his own story reversed in his son. He will go to a Muggle school, live in the Muggle world and will loose touch with his family - just like he did.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Losing touch with the Wizarding world wasn't such a bad thing in those days, unfortunately. Everyone was so sure that Auntie Bella would get Tim, but I couldn't do that to Andromeda. Instead, he just fades from the picture.Thanks, again!
So many nice details in this chapter!Of course the Nymphadora/Remus scene made me giggle.That Cygnus and Orion killed Theodore's parents made me furious. And I nearly thought they deserved the kiss.And Narcissa ... a bit self centered, but not evil at last. She has practially saved Birdies life.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you, thank you!Of coure we have no idea how Cygnus and Orion died; just that they both did during the same year.And yes, Narcissa isn't evil, just self-absorbed. Plus, letting Aunt Walburga behead the elf would be wasteful, when she could just make Birdie disappear.
I think Timothy fits in perfectly. I especially liked how Sirius said that the little one seemed a bit flat, as if a spark was missing. A good description.I also liked that you put a good reason behing Sirius leaving his home. If your uncle being poisoned by your parents wasn't a good reason to put distance between you and your family, I haver never seen one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
It seemed to me that this pair might have had more kids but that there must be a reason we never met them. Tim and his situation seemed to be one possible answer to that question.It seemed to me that Sirius would be pretty upset with his family but that leaving them before he was of age would take some extra provocation. We know from the Black family tree that Alphard died around the time Sirius left, so I tied the two together in my mind.Anyway, thank you!
Beautiful story. I actually cried at the ending. Bravo! ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I'm sorry to make anyone cry, but I'm glad if you enjoyed the story.
I was so scared of reading this because I knew what had to happen, but you've handled it beautifully, and highlighted the good moments with Teddy, so it wasn't too sad to enjoy after all. Thank you for this story. Like I said, it's the only other Ted/Andromeda I've ever found.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
They're under-represented, for sure. I haven't seen any stories that cover this part of the canon exactly, but JackieJLH's "Ties that Bind" is a very good look at the Black sisters and Amita's "Riddle in Black" is another POV that's quite dark.Thank you so much for jumping so enthusiastically into my story! I look forward to seeing your develop.
lovely. thank you for all your time and effort - i appreciated it
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I really grew to love this pair and I was miserable to have to bring it to this ending. I'm glad others enjoyed the story, too.
Just found this story, and it's good to read for a change to read something about Ted Tonks and also an earlierera. It moved along at a good pace, and I'm lookingforward to continuing.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I have to admit I wasn't that interested in this pairing untill I really started to think about what Ted must have been like. Now I really like him... maybe too much. ;)
Excellent how you weave Draco's birthday and the prophecy in here!! Narcissa would have heard parts only and exactly not that the parents have had to be LV's enemies. I consider Trixie changing her name atruly wonderful detail! It's these things that bring life into a story. Adding the furry little problem is great, even if a bit more obvious. I'm still a bit confused at Andromeda's patience with living so separated from the world. She doesn't know it's "only" until Hallowe'en the following year. Where is Nymphadora getting primary education? Are Molly and Andromeda helping each other? Eventually their Squib son needs schooling, too. I doubt that he should be exposed to F&G ;-)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Narcissa is the sort of overprotective mother who's nervous about every detail. Even if she knew the line about "thrice defied," she would have figured it could have included the time she served strawberry tart for dessert when the Tedious One wanted apple, LOL. She would have seen other infractions that she and Lucius had committed and come up with three.It stood to reason to me that if Andromeda was Sirius's favorite cousin, Sirius and his friends would be visitors at her house, so Tonks probably met Remus a few times before the first fall.I don't think Andromeda's necessarily patient as much as resigned. She does have Molly to share a cup of tea with from time to time, and when you're raising two small children, there's not much time for anything else, anyway. Elementary schooling for the wizarding children is a bit of a black hole in the canon. You would think they went to the local schools, but if so, they would know a lot more about Muggles, so they must be home-schooled up to the age of eleven.Thanks for such a lovely and thoughtful review!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Severus could have enjoyed N's fear enough to forget intimating this detail. Isn't it far more convenient to have N's gratitude than owing Lucius!?JKR actually explained in an interview that all Weasleys were homeschooled by their mother. Of course, this source isn't perfect canon, and I believe she had to make it up quickly.
Furry little problems, eh? Out of the mouths of six year olds. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Hee hee... I couldn't resist. She's six years old and has no idea what "furry little problems" are, but she wants one of her very own. Thanks for the review!
She's been patient long enough!Nice idea to have the two being more pushed than decisive. they'll get very determined soon, I'm sure! I don't know if it fits to Sirius saying that Andromeda was his favourite cousin, though. I would have assumed he'd liked a rebellish one best. But maybe this is yet to come... let me see...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I was trying to show one way some of these things might have developed. In some ways this Andromeda has to rebel against her self, too. Thanks for the review!
Sad that such tragedies are inevitable. Still, it's so well done. I loved the stuff with Narcissa and Birdie. Remus! A crowning moment for sure :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! There are ways in which I really don't like the rest of this story. JKR was almost as hard on Andromeda as she was on Snape. I really got a kick out of writing the Tonks/Remus part. She knows exactly who she is and what she wants to be, even if she has no idea what she's talking about. ;)
awww....Welcome to the world Baby Tonks!!!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thanks for the review!
Lovely work. I really like Ted and Andromeda and I am always surprised that they aren't written about more often.Very nice start. I like Ted. I'll continue reading this.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I like Ted, too. Once I started to think about him, I decided Ted must be like those many men who go to work, take care of their families and generally keep the world going. They're all heroes in their way.
One really can but wonder, how Andromeda managed to become a person capable of love and kindnes with that mother of hers.Well, well, she knows what she wants, and how to get it.Trixie has fullfilled her transformation to Bellatrix, the Death Eater. Scary.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I had fun giving Andromeda a little bit of an "action" chapter. I think she was able to witness elements of love and kindness in her family. There's Alphard, after all. However, I think she needed to piece it all together, and fortunately she had Ted for that.Bellatrix isn't *quite* there, yet. Some of what Alphard said about shedding pure blood made her stop and think, but she's *most* of the way there.Thank you so much for everything, including that other note you sent me. Featured Story! I'm blushing!
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I've just suggested your story - the other admins agreed to fearure it. It's well deserved.
Sometimes the worth of something becomes clear only when it is thought lost.Wow, what a leap in their relationship!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I think a lot of things came together in her mind just then. She probably remembered what a near miss she had the night they got married, so she understood just how likely a loss could be. I don't think it hurt that he got a bit disgruntled with her. I think they had reached a point where things were starting to just slide along and it wasn't enough. Once she realized it, I think she would go after what she wanted just as her sisters did once or twice in the canon. It's fun to speculate, any way.Thank you, again!
I really like it that Andromeda wasn't shedding all that was ingrained in her through education, just because she married a Muggle-born. The way her opinon on things changes gradually, makes your story very believable.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I can't imagine shedding the upbringing of nineteen years, even if we suspect it's wrong, just in a few weeks. Little things will still come up from time to time, I think. It takes a conscious effort. For the most part, Ted's very patient with her, since he sees she's trying.Thank you for the review!
Finally I have found some time to continue reading your story. And there are a few chapters more to enjoy!It's wonderful to see how they develop their relationship.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I hope that extra free time is spent on life in general. :) I'm honored that you used some of it to read my story. I think in getting married Andromeda entered a new and different world. Suddenly she's mixing with a different group of people. There will be some time of bewilderment and that will be followed by the other adjustments.Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Andromeda's got a backbone made of steel. Good for her negotiating her trust fund with her mother. Good foresight in taking the emeralds as well. If I was her I wouldn't be telling her mother anything about the baby. Looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the review! I think it pays to be prepared when you're a Black. Unfortunately, I think part of her wanted her parents to be happy about her baby, even though she should know better.
What a sweet, wonderful chapter! The way you write the romantic, developing relationship between Ted and Andromeda has quickly made this one of my favorite stories. The Prewett brothers are too funny. You can see where George and Fred Weasley got it from. I was concerned that the story was ending when I saw the chapter title, but was relieved to see it was marked as not completed. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
No, it's not the end, fortunately. I'm glad you're enjoying this... it's a story that really grew on me as I wrote it. It's kind of fun extrapolating what some of these characters must have been like based upon their younger relatives. Thanks for the review, the next chapter is coming soon!
I love the story. Beautiful and tender, exciting and daring. Well thought out. I appreciate that. Thank you, and be encouraged to continue your story telling.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Oh, thank you! You're quite kind. A lot of nifty little things came together to result in this story. I'm glad that the readers enjoy it.