The Tribulations of the Maiden
Chapter 4 of 19
Rose of the West...When her sister said that he wanted her for his organization, she only felt a shudder caused by an oppressive premonition. It was as though chains were slowly snaking around her body, chains that would hold her fast to a danger just outside of her senses...
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A note on the Black Family Tree: Walburga is the older sister of Cygnus. She married her second cousin, Orion, and they are Sirius and Regulus's parents. Cygnus and the former Druella Rosier are the parents of Bellatrix, Andromeda, and Narcissa.
Perseus, continuing his flight, arrived at the country of the Æthiopians, of which Cephus was king. Cassiopeia his queen, proud of her beauty, had dared to compare herself to the Sea-Nymphs, which roused their indignation to such a degree that they sent a prodigious sea-monster to ravage the coast. To appease the deities, Cepheus was directed by the oracle to expose his daughter Andromeda to be devoured by the monster. Bulfinch's Mythology, Book XV.
Many who knew of the Black family thought that the three daughters of Cygnus and Druella had a charmed life. There was no question of their pure-blood status. They were supported by a series of trust funds, of which only the goblins at Gringott's knew the full extent. Their family was sought after in Wizarding social gatherings both in England and on the Continent.
Such a family with three such fortunate daughters had only one problem. They were required, by a tradition that exceeded the force of any law, to make good pure-blood marriages. It was an unfortunate fact of the girls' lives that their greatest value lay in the pure-blood children they were expected to produce.
Andromeda Black's best consolation came from being the second daughter. Most of the pressure was on Bellatrix to marry well and produce heirs for her family and that of her husband. Once Trixie took care of that business, Andie would be given some leeway in choosing her own husband... from the proper social group, of course.
The initial plan went off without a hitch. Cygnus and Druella negotiated a brilliant contract with the Lestrange family. Bellatrix was a bit put off by the coarse manners of her fiancé and his family. A weekend spent in their home convinced the young witch that her best option lay in proceeding with the marriage. A girl should have had recourse through her mother in such a situation, but the former Druella Rosier had been convinced to marry Cygnus through similar means. She didn't see any reason for her daughter to be afforded comforts she herself had to do without.
The wedding was performed quietly with simply the principals and their parents. The sisters of the bride stayed at their school when it took place. The brother of the groom was away on other business. It was written up in the Daily Prophet as though it were the social event of the year. The photograph showed a happy groom and beautiful bride. If the bride's face looked a bit stunned, and the groom appeared overly possessive, most readers wouldn't notice it on the first glance, and they wouldn't bother to look at it a second time.
After the brilliant marriage was accomplished, the next task was to produce an equally brilliant wizard or witch of the next generation. For Druella Black, the task had been blessedly easy. She was never sure when, exactly, Bellatrix had been conceived, but it happened essentially at the same time as her wedding. The two further attempts for a son went quickly as well. Neither ended as they had hoped, but three beautiful and magically talented girls was not a bad product for a marriage. They were well positioned to be of use to the Black family due to their potential use in other families.
With the oldest daughter married well, the family could look at its options for the second. There were a few families whose blood was not quite up to the same standard, but the young man in question had financial resources or political power. The addition of a Black to their family trees would be worth quite a bit to such families. Then there were a few distant cousins with sons who were Squibs or near to it. A witch such as Andromeda might be just the stimulation those parts of the family needed.
Therefore, once Bellatrix was married to Rudolphus Lestrange, the entire family held its collective breath, waiting for news of the first child. It didn't come. Spring passed into Summer and was followed all too quickly by the rest of the year. Both families started hissing whispers of perfidy at each other, and a stray comment made its way into the newspapers. The last straw was an expose in the Quibbler that stated certain pure-blood families were doomed to become Muggles because of a scientific discovery indicating that magic only stayed in a family for twenty-five generations. Xeno Lovegood didn't mention the Blacks specifically, but he didn't need to. The situation was well known by anyone who traveled in certain circles.
Cygnus had his sister and brother-in-law over to discuss the matter. Walburga clucked and crowed. "The girl should be made to do her duty to this family. If our forefathers could see her..."
Cygnus glowered. "It's not as though she's actively preventing pregnancy. Meanwhile, what do you suppose our forefathers would say about your son's sorting, dear sister?"
Orion pounded the table. "It wasn't his fault! Dumbledore did something to that hat. Regulus sorted properly, after all."
As the parents argued in the dining room, the children listened from the drawing room. "What will you do, Trixie?" asked Andie.
"They brought a healer from St. Mungo's. He said I can't have children. He told us that I was cursed."
"Cursed? Who would curse you?" Andie's eyes were wide.
Walburga's voice broke in on the girls' whispers. "Alphard? That good for nothing blood traitor did this?"
Her brother's voice answered quietly. "It's not just the girls. When they said it was a curse, I went to him myself and he smiled. During an argument with Father about blood politics, Alphard cursed both of us, Walburga. He said neither of us would live to see our grandchildren."
"I'll kill him!" she shrieked in response.
"No children?" asked Cissy. "How can he do that?"
"Not exactly," said Andie. "If Father is quoting Uncle Alphard exactly, he said that Father and Aunt Walburga wouldn't live to see their grandchildren. That's a bit different."
"So we're supposed to wait until they're dead?" asked Cissy.
"Cissy, it's not as though you're planning to have children right now, are you?" laughed Andie. "You're barely sixteen."
"Well, no," she said quietly. She did, however, know whom she hoped to marry. She was fairly certain his family wouldn't allow him to marry her once the curse was known. She sighed. "What do we do?"
"Killing Father is definitely an option," said Trixie with an evil grin. "We might have to kill our dear Auntie, too. That wouldn't be such a terrible thing, would it?"
Seeing that Cissy was all too interested in something Trixie couldn't possibly mean, Andie spoke up. "Of course you won't actually do that, Trixie. You might get children, but you'd also get Azkaban."
"I suppose," she answered, "but you've no idea how closely the two situations compare right now."
A week or two after the curse was discovered and discussed within the family, Trixie came to visit Andie. "It's all sorted out," she announced.
She bounced across the couch to sit by her sister. "Did they remove the curse?"
"No, I still can't have any kids, but the Lestranges think it's possible that you can."
"That doesn't make any sense, if the curse worked so well on you. It doesn't make any real difference for you, though, does it?" Andie sounded more confident than she felt. Trixie's smile was anything but comforting.
"They have a younger son, you know. Rabastan has said he finds you very...well, he meant he wouldn't mind taking you to bed."
Andie's face went completely white. "I'm supposed to provide an heir?"
Trixie smiled smugly. "Oh, you'd be married to him, of course. Mother and Father are due some consideration. However, the Lestranges consider that we owe them grandchildren, so if I can't provide them, you must."
"I...I can't."
"Of course you will, just like I tried to do. It's for the good of the family."
Andie decided not to think about it until their parents broached the subject, knowing she would think about it, anyway. She looked for a different subject."What about you Trixie? What will you do, now?"
She watched her older sister's face. First it became dreamy, then happy, and something else was there that was beyond definition. Trixie sighed with pleasure and said, "I've met someone who says I can help the cause of pure-blood wizards and witches even if I can't have children."
"There's a cause about us? Why do we need a cause?"
Trixie's expression became matter of fact. "Of course, Andie. We're being overrun by the Mudbloods and the Half-bloods. But this man I met..."
"You're not doing anything...wrong...are you?"
"In answer to the question you're so delicately not asking, Rudolphus has been with me whenever we met this wonderful man. We were over at Uncle Orion and Aunt Walburga's the other night, and he had dinner with all of us. Aunt told him how very pretty, eligible, and talented you were, and he said that he couldn't wait to meet you. He thinks you'll be a wonderful addition to his organization."
What Trixie didn't say, because she didn't notice, was that the man had listened as Walburga had bragged about her family. He had looked at the house and admired the luxuries there, including the many items of dark magic. He had smiled and determined that he would see this family brought low, to the point where it almost worshiped him. Using their own conceits and prejudices, he would bring all the pure-blood families under his own control. Bellatrix Lestrange had only seen a very appealing and attractive man. This is the only thing she would see, until it no longer mattered what she saw in him.
Andie, not having seen the man nor felt the spell of his attention, didn't understand what her sister found so appealing. When her sister said that he wanted her for his organization, she only felt a shudder caused by an oppressive premonition. It was as though chains were slowly snaking around her body, chains that would hold her fast to a danger just outside of her senses.
Mother had come into the room, then, all smiles and happiness. She was especially fond of Andie just then, telling her what a grand thing she was to the family. She didn't mention Rabastan, or marriage, but when she went out of the room, Andie recalled that she was holding a parchment with the Lestrange family crest on it the whole time.
Andromeda spent much of the next several days pondering the situation. It wasn't as though she had many choices. Her education had fitted her for something, but she hadn't bothered to look into an actual career, and she didn't know the first thing about how to start. She didn't understand why the women of her set were stuck with finding an "appropriate" man, nor why the men of that set were such brutes.
A year before she had spent a quarter hour with one young man, a young man who wanted to listen to her worries, who wished to find a way to comfort her, and who offered her his handkerchief. He had called her pretty, something that never happened when either of her sisters was around, and he meant it. He had smiled at her, and she had known, with an absolute clarity that hit her in that moment, that had she indicated the slightest interest, he would have asked her out. Maybe he would have held her hand, or kissed her. There was something so manly about the kind and considerate way he behaved too. He wasn't obsequious like the fop that her little sister favored, yet even Lucius would be a major improvement over Rabastan Lestrange. Why couldn't any of the pure-blood wizards she knew be like Theodore Tonks?
She avoided her parents, hoping the issue wouldn't come up, but it wouldn't last forever. Trixie, when she stopped by, looked uplifted but a little strange. Cissy kept coming to her, clearly hoping she would do as their parents wanted because she had a brilliant future of her own lined up and wanted a chance to actually have that future.
Finally, the shoe dropped. Mother and Father summoned her into the study. One stormy half hour later, Andromeda walked out of the room, vowing that somehow she would find a way out of it. She stomped up to her bedroom, holding the tears in by sheer force of will. She looked around her room, trying to decide the best way out of her predicament. There wasn't one readily available. Deciding that at least she would get away from the house of her forebears for an hour or two, she grabbed a small purse and went down to the kitchen. From there she tossed Floo powder into the fireplace and left the house.
A/N: This story has been beta read by Trickie Woo. Thank you for reading! Let me know what you think!
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72 Reviews | 5.53/10 Average
A beautiful story with such a sad ending. I came across this via 'random story' and I'm glad I did; it's not a relationship I'd considered much, but you depicted it so well - happiness, romance, problems, sadness, basically reality! I also enjoyed the humorous Tonks references scattered in there! I enjoyed the whole thing and had tears in my eyes at the end. I think you also really captured the difficulties of the war, even though A wasn't properly involved, she experienced that people aren't black and White, you can like someone but not trust them etc. Very moving.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you so much! The war wouldn't have necessarily called upon everyone to be like Harry or Dumbledore, but it would have affected every family, for sure. I have to admit that last chapter was one of the hardest I've ever written. I never cry about anything, but I did have some tears in my eyes over it.Some of Tonks's statements while growing up were a lot of fun to inject. I understand how it got to be that way, but in JKR's stories, so many characters act like they never existed even one paragraph before they show up in the canon. It's fun to flesh them out.Thanks again!
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
I totally agree, though I also think that those gaps are what makes HP fanfic so varied and interesting.
Thank you for a wonderfull story. I seldom get a lump in my throat reading, but this one did it. I loved your portrait of both Andromeda and Ted Tonks and all the other characters you wrote. Now I will go and read the sequel. You are a very gifted reader
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the lovely review! I never thought much about this pair, but I had a plot bunny and then found a challenge for which this was the perfect story, and within three chapters I was madly in love with Ted Tonks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.
Oh, this is lovely. I've really fallen quite in love with this family as well... I really liked your introduction, of the very usual man, with average skills and normal dreams, because not everyone can be Harry Potter, but everyone can be a certain type of hero. And now, obeying canon gives your really sweet, loving story a tragic end, but you still manage to pull it up a tiny bit. In the end we all die, but we can hope that the ones we leave behind find peace.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
This was very much my salute to "everyman," the people who do all the little things that make the world go round. They may not live incredible lives, but they're heroes all the same. I'm glad you saw that in the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the beautiful review!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful tale of love with us.I have still tears in my eyes. *sigh*
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for being so enthusiastic and supportive. I have really felt the love. I'm sorry to see the end of this story, myself.
There, now you have done it. You made me cry with this chapter.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
The only reason I didn't cry with this chapter is that I actually wrote it when I was also working on chapter 8 or 9. When I re-read it to edit for posting on TPP, I did tear up.When I read the one line in DH about Ted leaving and then later about his death, he was just a statistic. He became a person to me when I worked on this story and I'm not entirely happy with myself for allowing that to happen.I hope you cried in a good way, if there is such a thing. Thank you for the review!
Yes, children are the best medicine there is :-)I think Ted is seeing his own story reversed in his son. He will go to a Muggle school, live in the Muggle world and will loose touch with his family - just like he did.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Losing touch with the Wizarding world wasn't such a bad thing in those days, unfortunately. Everyone was so sure that Auntie Bella would get Tim, but I couldn't do that to Andromeda. Instead, he just fades from the picture.Thanks, again!
So many nice details in this chapter!Of course the Nymphadora/Remus scene made me giggle.That Cygnus and Orion killed Theodore's parents made me furious. And I nearly thought they deserved the kiss.And Narcissa ... a bit self centered, but not evil at last. She has practially saved Birdies life.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you, thank you!Of coure we have no idea how Cygnus and Orion died; just that they both did during the same year.And yes, Narcissa isn't evil, just self-absorbed. Plus, letting Aunt Walburga behead the elf would be wasteful, when she could just make Birdie disappear.
I think Timothy fits in perfectly. I especially liked how Sirius said that the little one seemed a bit flat, as if a spark was missing. A good description.I also liked that you put a good reason behing Sirius leaving his home. If your uncle being poisoned by your parents wasn't a good reason to put distance between you and your family, I haver never seen one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
It seemed to me that this pair might have had more kids but that there must be a reason we never met them. Tim and his situation seemed to be one possible answer to that question.It seemed to me that Sirius would be pretty upset with his family but that leaving them before he was of age would take some extra provocation. We know from the Black family tree that Alphard died around the time Sirius left, so I tied the two together in my mind.Anyway, thank you!
Beautiful story. I actually cried at the ending. Bravo! ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I'm sorry to make anyone cry, but I'm glad if you enjoyed the story.
I was so scared of reading this because I knew what had to happen, but you've handled it beautifully, and highlighted the good moments with Teddy, so it wasn't too sad to enjoy after all. Thank you for this story. Like I said, it's the only other Ted/Andromeda I've ever found.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
They're under-represented, for sure. I haven't seen any stories that cover this part of the canon exactly, but JackieJLH's "Ties that Bind" is a very good look at the Black sisters and Amita's "Riddle in Black" is another POV that's quite dark.Thank you so much for jumping so enthusiastically into my story! I look forward to seeing your develop.
lovely. thank you for all your time and effort - i appreciated it
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I really grew to love this pair and I was miserable to have to bring it to this ending. I'm glad others enjoyed the story, too.
Just found this story, and it's good to read for a change to read something about Ted Tonks and also an earlierera. It moved along at a good pace, and I'm lookingforward to continuing.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I have to admit I wasn't that interested in this pairing untill I really started to think about what Ted must have been like. Now I really like him... maybe too much. ;)
Excellent how you weave Draco's birthday and the prophecy in here!! Narcissa would have heard parts only and exactly not that the parents have had to be LV's enemies. I consider Trixie changing her name atruly wonderful detail! It's these things that bring life into a story. Adding the furry little problem is great, even if a bit more obvious. I'm still a bit confused at Andromeda's patience with living so separated from the world. She doesn't know it's "only" until Hallowe'en the following year. Where is Nymphadora getting primary education? Are Molly and Andromeda helping each other? Eventually their Squib son needs schooling, too. I doubt that he should be exposed to F&G ;-)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Narcissa is the sort of overprotective mother who's nervous about every detail. Even if she knew the line about "thrice defied," she would have figured it could have included the time she served strawberry tart for dessert when the Tedious One wanted apple, LOL. She would have seen other infractions that she and Lucius had committed and come up with three.It stood to reason to me that if Andromeda was Sirius's favorite cousin, Sirius and his friends would be visitors at her house, so Tonks probably met Remus a few times before the first fall.I don't think Andromeda's necessarily patient as much as resigned. She does have Molly to share a cup of tea with from time to time, and when you're raising two small children, there's not much time for anything else, anyway. Elementary schooling for the wizarding children is a bit of a black hole in the canon. You would think they went to the local schools, but if so, they would know a lot more about Muggles, so they must be home-schooled up to the age of eleven.Thanks for such a lovely and thoughtful review!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Severus could have enjoyed N's fear enough to forget intimating this detail. Isn't it far more convenient to have N's gratitude than owing Lucius!?JKR actually explained in an interview that all Weasleys were homeschooled by their mother. Of course, this source isn't perfect canon, and I believe she had to make it up quickly.
Furry little problems, eh? Out of the mouths of six year olds. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Hee hee... I couldn't resist. She's six years old and has no idea what "furry little problems" are, but she wants one of her very own. Thanks for the review!
She's been patient long enough!Nice idea to have the two being more pushed than decisive. they'll get very determined soon, I'm sure! I don't know if it fits to Sirius saying that Andromeda was his favourite cousin, though. I would have assumed he'd liked a rebellish one best. But maybe this is yet to come... let me see...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I was trying to show one way some of these things might have developed. In some ways this Andromeda has to rebel against her self, too. Thanks for the review!
Sad that such tragedies are inevitable. Still, it's so well done. I loved the stuff with Narcissa and Birdie. Remus! A crowning moment for sure :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! There are ways in which I really don't like the rest of this story. JKR was almost as hard on Andromeda as she was on Snape. I really got a kick out of writing the Tonks/Remus part. She knows exactly who she is and what she wants to be, even if she has no idea what she's talking about. ;)
awww....Welcome to the world Baby Tonks!!!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thanks for the review!
Lovely work. I really like Ted and Andromeda and I am always surprised that they aren't written about more often.Very nice start. I like Ted. I'll continue reading this.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I like Ted, too. Once I started to think about him, I decided Ted must be like those many men who go to work, take care of their families and generally keep the world going. They're all heroes in their way.
One really can but wonder, how Andromeda managed to become a person capable of love and kindnes with that mother of hers.Well, well, she knows what she wants, and how to get it.Trixie has fullfilled her transformation to Bellatrix, the Death Eater. Scary.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I had fun giving Andromeda a little bit of an "action" chapter. I think she was able to witness elements of love and kindness in her family. There's Alphard, after all. However, I think she needed to piece it all together, and fortunately she had Ted for that.Bellatrix isn't *quite* there, yet. Some of what Alphard said about shedding pure blood made her stop and think, but she's *most* of the way there.Thank you so much for everything, including that other note you sent me. Featured Story! I'm blushing!
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I've just suggested your story - the other admins agreed to fearure it. It's well deserved.
Sometimes the worth of something becomes clear only when it is thought lost.Wow, what a leap in their relationship!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I think a lot of things came together in her mind just then. She probably remembered what a near miss she had the night they got married, so she understood just how likely a loss could be. I don't think it hurt that he got a bit disgruntled with her. I think they had reached a point where things were starting to just slide along and it wasn't enough. Once she realized it, I think she would go after what she wanted just as her sisters did once or twice in the canon. It's fun to speculate, any way.Thank you, again!
I really like it that Andromeda wasn't shedding all that was ingrained in her through education, just because she married a Muggle-born. The way her opinon on things changes gradually, makes your story very believable.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I can't imagine shedding the upbringing of nineteen years, even if we suspect it's wrong, just in a few weeks. Little things will still come up from time to time, I think. It takes a conscious effort. For the most part, Ted's very patient with her, since he sees she's trying.Thank you for the review!
Finally I have found some time to continue reading your story. And there are a few chapters more to enjoy!It's wonderful to see how they develop their relationship.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I hope that extra free time is spent on life in general. :) I'm honored that you used some of it to read my story. I think in getting married Andromeda entered a new and different world. Suddenly she's mixing with a different group of people. There will be some time of bewilderment and that will be followed by the other adjustments.Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Andromeda's got a backbone made of steel. Good for her negotiating her trust fund with her mother. Good foresight in taking the emeralds as well. If I was her I wouldn't be telling her mother anything about the baby. Looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the review! I think it pays to be prepared when you're a Black. Unfortunately, I think part of her wanted her parents to be happy about her baby, even though she should know better.
What a sweet, wonderful chapter! The way you write the romantic, developing relationship between Ted and Andromeda has quickly made this one of my favorite stories. The Prewett brothers are too funny. You can see where George and Fred Weasley got it from. I was concerned that the story was ending when I saw the chapter title, but was relieved to see it was marked as not completed. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
No, it's not the end, fortunately. I'm glad you're enjoying this... it's a story that really grew on me as I wrote it. It's kind of fun extrapolating what some of these characters must have been like based upon their younger relatives. Thanks for the review, the next chapter is coming soon!
I love the story. Beautiful and tender, exciting and daring. Well thought out. I appreciate that. Thank you, and be encouraged to continue your story telling.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Oh, thank you! You're quite kind. A lot of nifty little things came together to result in this story. I'm glad that the readers enjoy it.