Under the Stars
Chapter 11 of 19
Rose of the WestTed was no fool. His wife still thought of him as a Mudblood even if she never said the word aloud.
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters here and the world they inhabit are the creation and property of JK Rowling and her assigns.
The middle of August was approaching as Ted approached the cottage one night. The past month or so had been more difficult than he'd expected. Back in the days he led a lonely existence in his flat, he had imagined the wonder of being married to the right witch. He had now accomplished all of that but somehow it rang flat.
He had asked to be allowed to continue his work with Dumbledore's group, but was refused. Dumbledore and Moody both had refused him, on the grounds that he was now targeted by his wife's family. He didn't see that it mattered, since the chances of actually getting hurt were small, but Moody was adamant. The irony ate at him. He wanted to help remove the danger to his wife, but he couldn't because he was married to his wife.
He had sent a letter to his parents right after the wedding, notifying them of the fact and apologizing for not informing them ahead of time. He received a response, telling him that they were proud of him whatever he did and that they were sure it must have been the best way to do things. They were eager to meet her; would Ted and Andromeda consider visiting?
Ted pondered that question. He owed it to his family to see them and introduce his wife. Safety was the biggest issue in his mind, although Andromeda's response to being surrounded by Muggles was a close second. He wondered how she would like his family. He wrote a noncommittal response and left it at that for the time being.
Andromeda was always a source of odd concerns. As far as he knew, there wouldn't be any children. Ted was no fool. His wife still thought of him as a Mudblood even if she never said the word aloud. He could see it in her eyes as she would look at him thoughtfully and then avert her gaze. There was no telling what she would think of their children, and he would rather not risk it. He knew she had somehow managed to grow up in a home with minimal love, but he jealously desired more for his own children.
For the past several weeks, he had held his wife in his arms at night and started to ask himself whether they shouldn't have waited before marriage. Perhaps with a certain amount of courtship, the issue would have been better resolved ahead of time. The question was ludicrous. Had they waited to marry, the Blacks would have found a way to retrieve Andromeda and made sure that she couldn't get away.
She became a little distant with whatever was haunting her, and she watched him with eyes that were becoming too large and dark. He noticed himself becoming a bit short with his wife, and he could see the dark rings that were starting to form under her eyes. He knew that something was starting to take its toll. Yet in this same amount of time, she had been surprisingly eager to learn more about how to please him. There was a new openness about her lovemaking that surprised him, because during the day she seemed to be more thoughtful and quieter than before. Even as everything became more difficult, he was enjoying their nights together more.
Her visits with Molly Weasley were going well, at least. She was quite proud of the housekeeping spells she was learning and especially her skills at cooking. Molly was becoming a fast friend, and it was a good outlet for a witch who was not allowed to leave the garden around her home. At least Ted got to go to work most days.
There had been a quarrel last night that resulted in him sleeping in the back bedroom. At breakfast this morning, Alphard gave Ted a look but didn't say anything. He watched the younger wizard fix his toast and eat it while the elf puttered about. Ted looked at the front page of the Prophet and started reading. Finally the elder wizard looked at Bennie and asked, "Wasn't Andromeda going to fix breakfast this morning?"
"Mistress is being sick this morning. Bennie does it. Better for house-elf to do it."
The head leaning over the paper stiffened, but nothing was said. Alphard tried again. "Is it serious?"
"Bennie goes to check on Mistress. She lies down on bed and says she is better but she can't make breakfast."
Ted's head lifted high enough to see the hard look Alphard was giving him. He returned the stony stare and went back to the paper. Breakfast was finished in silence. Ted took his plate over to the sink left the kitchen.
He went up the stairs and stood outside the bedroom he shared with his wife. He raised his hand to tap on the door and stopped. Had things really gotten to the point where he needed to knock on his own bedroom door? He backed away and went quietly down the stairs and out of the house. For the first time in his marriage, he went to work without kissing his wife goodbye.
This day was particularly long. There was another major accident between a Muggle and magical train. Ted had been eager to get there and do something, so he was part of the first group that went. As soon as they arrived, his co-worker, Eric, fell to the ground, dead. He saw a wand pointed at him and dove behind some rubble even as the stream of green light went over his head.
Taking out his own wand, Ted moved quickly behind train cars, turning a deaf ear to the voices inside them in order to concentrate on the danger and how to end it. He got a chance to see who was wielding the wand and couldn't tell anything. The wizard, or perhaps a tall witch, was wearing a hooded black cloak and a mask. He heard a voice say "Avada Kedavra!" Whoever it was had spotted him.
He rolled away again and thought. He had heard of this spell in Defense class. It was an Unforgivable and there was a trace on it. Magical Law Enforcement would arrive any moment. He needed to take care of this before someone Apparated here and got killed before they realized what was happening. He eased his head up and heard a crack.
"Protego!" he shouted, and a Shield Charm went up before the other wizard had a chance to cast a spell again. The shield didn't work against the Unforgivable, but it gave Alastor Moody time to see what was happening and duck the Killing Curse before it could hit him. The cloaked one saw Ted and aimed his next spell at him again, giving Moody a chance to cast an Incarcerus Spell. Moody walked over to his captive to make sure he was held fast while Ted came out around the train cars to see if he could help.
"That was a close one," said Moody, shaking Ted's hand. "They never used the Killing Curse before."
"Who is it?" Ted asked.
"One of Voldemort's Death Eaters. They're wearing hoods and masks, now."
As Ted watched, Moody cast a spell that sent a shining white light into the distance. Moments later several other Aurors came and took the hooded one. Anderson came with some others from the office, and Ted's team got to work at fixing the trains and Obliterating memories. A pair of Healers from St. Mungo's came and gently took Eric's body.
While he worked, Ted thought of Andromeda. He had very nearly died that day, which would have left her defenseless. He pictured her at the mercy of her family. If they would blast a black hole into the tapestry of her name, he wondered what they would do to her personally. He suddenly understood why Dumbledore and Moody wanted him to stay away from the fighting, yet it made him more determined than ever to practice and become good at dueling. He wanted to stay alive to protect her.
They straightened out the trains and tracks and went back to the office for the endless round of paperwork. Today, in addition to the standard paperwork, there was an inquiry about what had happened on the previous occasion and how it was possible for such a thing to happen again.
Now that they knew Death Eaters were involved, they discovered that the trains had been spelled to crash, although they should have been in the area at different times. Voldemort was hoping to achieve some of his goals with a show of force. He had hoped to kill Muggles, but he also wanted to terrorize the Wizarding community in an effort to get the ministry to enact laws of his choosing.
Ted's least favorite administrative assistant was present. Dolores asked a great many questions about what Ted had done on both occasions, implying that both accidents were somehow his fault. The presence of the Death Eater, identified as a relative to the Wilkes family, changed things, and Dolores's suggestions were dismissed. When the meeting was over, she looked at Ted with narrowed eyes and followed the managers.
The meeting ended late in the afternoon. The paperwork concerning the accident, which appeared not to be accidental, started. As he wrote out the many details on several different forms almost mindlessly, Ted's thoughts wandered back to his wife. She wasn't well this morning, and the things he'd said to her the night before came back to haunt him.
"What's the use, Andromeda? I know you still think of me as a Mudblood."
She looked shaken.
"Oh, you haven't actually said the word since that night, but it hasn't stopped you from thinking it."
The look on her face said she wouldn't deny it. "Ted, you don't understand."
"I understand far too much. I love you, Andromeda, but I need some space tonight."
He had spent the night in a different bedroom, staring at the ceiling and listening for her tears. He never heard them. Perhaps she had been too ill to cry. There was no telling how sick she really was because he had chosen not to disturb her that morning. What if it had been his last chance to kiss his wife? His behavior accused him, and he didn't have much to defend himself. Why did he have to be so stubborn? He had no excuse.
He tried to make a Floo call to the cottage, but he couldn't get through. The kitchen fire in the cottage was out. He told himself that there were a lot of reasons why the fire the kitchen might be out. It was the middle of August, of course. Other possibilities were hard to come by. He kept thinking of how the elf said she was ill, and he worried.
It was a relief to get the work done and go back home. He walked toward the cottage, wondering what he would find there. He had just noticed what looked like a heap of laundry sitting on the front step, when suddenly it jumped up and ran to him. She barely allowed him to get through the gate before wrapping herself around him and kissing him everywhere.
"Oh, Teddy, you're back! I was so worried and it was so awful all day. We heard about it at St. Mungo's. There were whispers, and Uncle Alphard went to find out what was happening. He said those Death Eaters caused two trains to crash. Four Muggles were killed as well as one magical person. I've been so worried ever since."
He shook his head and let her kiss him. "I'm not hurt, Dromeda." She must be better, to come at him like this, and she was covering him with kisses. He couldn't remember a time quite like this. His wife was calming down from the first frenzy of relief, but she continued to talk.
"Ted, I was so worried. I know now what you mean to me, when I thought you might not come home, and when I thought that you might have been the wizard who was killed." She pulled away just long enough to look in his face, her hands on either side of it. "Theodore Tonks, I've realized that I love you."
He put a finger to her lips. "Shush, you're just overwrought. You've been sick."
She kissed his finger and pulled away from it. "Ted, I really do. When I thought maybe I wouldn't see you again, I knew. I knew exactly how I feel about you. You shower me with kindnesses and affections, and I don't have any idea how to return it, but I mean to try. You're good and honorable, and I can't think of anyone better for my baby's father."
He tilted her head and kissed her briefly. "Are you sure?"
"Absolutely."
He kissed her fully then and found a response that went a little deeper than what he was used to. He put his hands on her shoulders and held her at arm's length. "What about you? You were sick. Are you better?
"I'm right as rain after the Healers finished with me."
"Healers? Oh, you said you had been to St. Mungo's. Did they say what it was?"
"Yes, and I told you, but I'm not sure you were listening."
He replayed the conversation in his mind. When it came to him, he hugged her closer. "Oh, Dromeda, I do love you."
It was all thrilling, and he was eager to make up for the lost hours of the night before. He took her hand and led her onto the lawn. Pointing up to the sky, he said, "There's Andromeda, waiting for her hero."
She pointed to a constellation near by and said, "There's Theodore, riding Pegasus to come rescue her."
"That's Perseus on Pegasus."
"It will always be Theodore for me from now on."
He put his arm around her and nuzzled his head around her neck, kissing her skin as he went. When he looked up again, he saw the first of the meteors shooting across the sky. "Look, Andromeda, the Perseids are starting." She lifted her head and watched with him. He held her close and chuckled into her ear. "There's the dynasty started by Perseus and his Andromeda, just as ours is starting."
"Happy birthday, my hero," she whispered back. For the first time since leaving home the morning before, he remembered that the day that was just starting was his birthday. He was nineteen years old.
She had wrapped a blanket around herself, and now it was spread on the lawn so they could sit and watch the stars. Ted quietly told Andromeda such bits about what really happened with the trains as he felt he could tell her without frightening her too much. She told him what she had discussed with the Healers and what she would need to do over the next several months.
Neither realized what was happening until it was almost over. They counted meteors and occasionally kissed and cuddled. The caresses that followed were gentle. They lay together in an act that was as delicate as the starlight, their quiet sighs and moans mixing with the sounds of the crickets and frogs. When they were done, they pulled their robes over themselves and kissed each other tenderly.
They continued to watch the meteors until the horizon started to grow light, and they could no longer see them. Ted helped his wife put her robe back on and shrugged into his own and they went into the house, where the elf was starting to make noises in the kitchen. They quietly moved up the stairs and into their bedroom.
"You didn't get any dinner!" remembered Andromeda. "Are you hungry?"
"They got us something to eat while we were working," he answered. "Shouldn't you be eating?"
"Hmm... I think I need sleep first. I'm quite tired, it seems."
"Let's get you into bed, then."
"Oh, I like the sound of that." Her eyes were full of promises. Then her brow wrinkled. "You have to go to work, soon."
"I begged off for today, since I was there so late. Anderson said it was a good idea."
"Oh... then come to bed with me." She smiled invitingly.
They prepared themselves, Ted using the bathroom second. When he got into their bedroom, he found Andromeda breathing heavily, sound asleep. He smiled and gathered her into his arms, happy to have things restored to their proper balance.
A/N: A bit of wordplay is present here, more so than I realized at the time I wrote it. The mythological Perseus's name means "from (per) Zeus" because Zeus was his father. Theodore means "gift from god."
I had picked Theodore as Ted's proper name because I happen to like it. Now that I've thought about it, I have to wonder if JKR hadn't intended to slip one gift from god in for another when she named Ted.
As always, this has been beta read by Trickie Woo. Thank you all who have been reading this. I have enjoyed all the reviews, too!
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Life and Times of Perseus
72 Reviews | 5.53/10 Average
A beautiful story with such a sad ending. I came across this via 'random story' and I'm glad I did; it's not a relationship I'd considered much, but you depicted it so well - happiness, romance, problems, sadness, basically reality! I also enjoyed the humorous Tonks references scattered in there! I enjoyed the whole thing and had tears in my eyes at the end. I think you also really captured the difficulties of the war, even though A wasn't properly involved, she experienced that people aren't black and White, you can like someone but not trust them etc. Very moving.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you so much! The war wouldn't have necessarily called upon everyone to be like Harry or Dumbledore, but it would have affected every family, for sure. I have to admit that last chapter was one of the hardest I've ever written. I never cry about anything, but I did have some tears in my eyes over it.Some of Tonks's statements while growing up were a lot of fun to inject. I understand how it got to be that way, but in JKR's stories, so many characters act like they never existed even one paragraph before they show up in the canon. It's fun to flesh them out.Thanks again!
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
I totally agree, though I also think that those gaps are what makes HP fanfic so varied and interesting.
Thank you for a wonderfull story. I seldom get a lump in my throat reading, but this one did it. I loved your portrait of both Andromeda and Ted Tonks and all the other characters you wrote. Now I will go and read the sequel. You are a very gifted reader
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the lovely review! I never thought much about this pair, but I had a plot bunny and then found a challenge for which this was the perfect story, and within three chapters I was madly in love with Ted Tonks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.
Oh, this is lovely. I've really fallen quite in love with this family as well... I really liked your introduction, of the very usual man, with average skills and normal dreams, because not everyone can be Harry Potter, but everyone can be a certain type of hero. And now, obeying canon gives your really sweet, loving story a tragic end, but you still manage to pull it up a tiny bit. In the end we all die, but we can hope that the ones we leave behind find peace.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
This was very much my salute to "everyman," the people who do all the little things that make the world go round. They may not live incredible lives, but they're heroes all the same. I'm glad you saw that in the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the beautiful review!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful tale of love with us.I have still tears in my eyes. *sigh*
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for being so enthusiastic and supportive. I have really felt the love. I'm sorry to see the end of this story, myself.
There, now you have done it. You made me cry with this chapter.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
The only reason I didn't cry with this chapter is that I actually wrote it when I was also working on chapter 8 or 9. When I re-read it to edit for posting on TPP, I did tear up.When I read the one line in DH about Ted leaving and then later about his death, he was just a statistic. He became a person to me when I worked on this story and I'm not entirely happy with myself for allowing that to happen.I hope you cried in a good way, if there is such a thing. Thank you for the review!
Yes, children are the best medicine there is :-)I think Ted is seeing his own story reversed in his son. He will go to a Muggle school, live in the Muggle world and will loose touch with his family - just like he did.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Losing touch with the Wizarding world wasn't such a bad thing in those days, unfortunately. Everyone was so sure that Auntie Bella would get Tim, but I couldn't do that to Andromeda. Instead, he just fades from the picture.Thanks, again!
So many nice details in this chapter!Of course the Nymphadora/Remus scene made me giggle.That Cygnus and Orion killed Theodore's parents made me furious. And I nearly thought they deserved the kiss.And Narcissa ... a bit self centered, but not evil at last. She has practially saved Birdies life.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you, thank you!Of coure we have no idea how Cygnus and Orion died; just that they both did during the same year.And yes, Narcissa isn't evil, just self-absorbed. Plus, letting Aunt Walburga behead the elf would be wasteful, when she could just make Birdie disappear.
I think Timothy fits in perfectly. I especially liked how Sirius said that the little one seemed a bit flat, as if a spark was missing. A good description.I also liked that you put a good reason behing Sirius leaving his home. If your uncle being poisoned by your parents wasn't a good reason to put distance between you and your family, I haver never seen one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
It seemed to me that this pair might have had more kids but that there must be a reason we never met them. Tim and his situation seemed to be one possible answer to that question.It seemed to me that Sirius would be pretty upset with his family but that leaving them before he was of age would take some extra provocation. We know from the Black family tree that Alphard died around the time Sirius left, so I tied the two together in my mind.Anyway, thank you!
Beautiful story. I actually cried at the ending. Bravo! ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I'm sorry to make anyone cry, but I'm glad if you enjoyed the story.
I was so scared of reading this because I knew what had to happen, but you've handled it beautifully, and highlighted the good moments with Teddy, so it wasn't too sad to enjoy after all. Thank you for this story. Like I said, it's the only other Ted/Andromeda I've ever found.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
They're under-represented, for sure. I haven't seen any stories that cover this part of the canon exactly, but JackieJLH's "Ties that Bind" is a very good look at the Black sisters and Amita's "Riddle in Black" is another POV that's quite dark.Thank you so much for jumping so enthusiastically into my story! I look forward to seeing your develop.
lovely. thank you for all your time and effort - i appreciated it
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I really grew to love this pair and I was miserable to have to bring it to this ending. I'm glad others enjoyed the story, too.
Just found this story, and it's good to read for a change to read something about Ted Tonks and also an earlierera. It moved along at a good pace, and I'm lookingforward to continuing.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I have to admit I wasn't that interested in this pairing untill I really started to think about what Ted must have been like. Now I really like him... maybe too much. ;)
Excellent how you weave Draco's birthday and the prophecy in here!! Narcissa would have heard parts only and exactly not that the parents have had to be LV's enemies. I consider Trixie changing her name atruly wonderful detail! It's these things that bring life into a story. Adding the furry little problem is great, even if a bit more obvious. I'm still a bit confused at Andromeda's patience with living so separated from the world. She doesn't know it's "only" until Hallowe'en the following year. Where is Nymphadora getting primary education? Are Molly and Andromeda helping each other? Eventually their Squib son needs schooling, too. I doubt that he should be exposed to F&G ;-)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Narcissa is the sort of overprotective mother who's nervous about every detail. Even if she knew the line about "thrice defied," she would have figured it could have included the time she served strawberry tart for dessert when the Tedious One wanted apple, LOL. She would have seen other infractions that she and Lucius had committed and come up with three.It stood to reason to me that if Andromeda was Sirius's favorite cousin, Sirius and his friends would be visitors at her house, so Tonks probably met Remus a few times before the first fall.I don't think Andromeda's necessarily patient as much as resigned. She does have Molly to share a cup of tea with from time to time, and when you're raising two small children, there's not much time for anything else, anyway. Elementary schooling for the wizarding children is a bit of a black hole in the canon. You would think they went to the local schools, but if so, they would know a lot more about Muggles, so they must be home-schooled up to the age of eleven.Thanks for such a lovely and thoughtful review!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Severus could have enjoyed N's fear enough to forget intimating this detail. Isn't it far more convenient to have N's gratitude than owing Lucius!?JKR actually explained in an interview that all Weasleys were homeschooled by their mother. Of course, this source isn't perfect canon, and I believe she had to make it up quickly.
Furry little problems, eh? Out of the mouths of six year olds. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Hee hee... I couldn't resist. She's six years old and has no idea what "furry little problems" are, but she wants one of her very own. Thanks for the review!
She's been patient long enough!Nice idea to have the two being more pushed than decisive. they'll get very determined soon, I'm sure! I don't know if it fits to Sirius saying that Andromeda was his favourite cousin, though. I would have assumed he'd liked a rebellish one best. But maybe this is yet to come... let me see...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I was trying to show one way some of these things might have developed. In some ways this Andromeda has to rebel against her self, too. Thanks for the review!
Sad that such tragedies are inevitable. Still, it's so well done. I loved the stuff with Narcissa and Birdie. Remus! A crowning moment for sure :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! There are ways in which I really don't like the rest of this story. JKR was almost as hard on Andromeda as she was on Snape. I really got a kick out of writing the Tonks/Remus part. She knows exactly who she is and what she wants to be, even if she has no idea what she's talking about. ;)
awww....Welcome to the world Baby Tonks!!!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thanks for the review!
Lovely work. I really like Ted and Andromeda and I am always surprised that they aren't written about more often.Very nice start. I like Ted. I'll continue reading this.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I like Ted, too. Once I started to think about him, I decided Ted must be like those many men who go to work, take care of their families and generally keep the world going. They're all heroes in their way.
One really can but wonder, how Andromeda managed to become a person capable of love and kindnes with that mother of hers.Well, well, she knows what she wants, and how to get it.Trixie has fullfilled her transformation to Bellatrix, the Death Eater. Scary.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I had fun giving Andromeda a little bit of an "action" chapter. I think she was able to witness elements of love and kindness in her family. There's Alphard, after all. However, I think she needed to piece it all together, and fortunately she had Ted for that.Bellatrix isn't *quite* there, yet. Some of what Alphard said about shedding pure blood made her stop and think, but she's *most* of the way there.Thank you so much for everything, including that other note you sent me. Featured Story! I'm blushing!
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I've just suggested your story - the other admins agreed to fearure it. It's well deserved.
Sometimes the worth of something becomes clear only when it is thought lost.Wow, what a leap in their relationship!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I think a lot of things came together in her mind just then. She probably remembered what a near miss she had the night they got married, so she understood just how likely a loss could be. I don't think it hurt that he got a bit disgruntled with her. I think they had reached a point where things were starting to just slide along and it wasn't enough. Once she realized it, I think she would go after what she wanted just as her sisters did once or twice in the canon. It's fun to speculate, any way.Thank you, again!
I really like it that Andromeda wasn't shedding all that was ingrained in her through education, just because she married a Muggle-born. The way her opinon on things changes gradually, makes your story very believable.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I can't imagine shedding the upbringing of nineteen years, even if we suspect it's wrong, just in a few weeks. Little things will still come up from time to time, I think. It takes a conscious effort. For the most part, Ted's very patient with her, since he sees she's trying.Thank you for the review!
Finally I have found some time to continue reading your story. And there are a few chapters more to enjoy!It's wonderful to see how they develop their relationship.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I hope that extra free time is spent on life in general. :) I'm honored that you used some of it to read my story. I think in getting married Andromeda entered a new and different world. Suddenly she's mixing with a different group of people. There will be some time of bewilderment and that will be followed by the other adjustments.Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Andromeda's got a backbone made of steel. Good for her negotiating her trust fund with her mother. Good foresight in taking the emeralds as well. If I was her I wouldn't be telling her mother anything about the baby. Looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the review! I think it pays to be prepared when you're a Black. Unfortunately, I think part of her wanted her parents to be happy about her baby, even though she should know better.
What a sweet, wonderful chapter! The way you write the romantic, developing relationship between Ted and Andromeda has quickly made this one of my favorite stories. The Prewett brothers are too funny. You can see where George and Fred Weasley got it from. I was concerned that the story was ending when I saw the chapter title, but was relieved to see it was marked as not completed. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
No, it's not the end, fortunately. I'm glad you're enjoying this... it's a story that really grew on me as I wrote it. It's kind of fun extrapolating what some of these characters must have been like based upon their younger relatives. Thanks for the review, the next chapter is coming soon!
I love the story. Beautiful and tender, exciting and daring. Well thought out. I appreciate that. Thank you, and be encouraged to continue your story telling.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Oh, thank you! You're quite kind. A lot of nifty little things came together to result in this story. I'm glad that the readers enjoy it.