The Jilted Suitor
Chapter 8 of 19
Rose of the West“Are you comparing me to Rodolphus Lestrange?”
“No, of course not, but Bellatrix is my sister, and if she can't...”
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters here and the world they inhabit are the creation and property of JK Rowling
Phineus, the betrothed of the virgin, with a party of his adherents, burst in, demanding the maiden as his own. Bulfinch's Mythologies, Book XV.
Andromeda gasped to see her father and erstwhile fiancé come into the room. That drew their attention, and they moved toward her. She stepped backwards, further into Ted's arms, as Kingsley cast a Shield Charm between them. The two had to stop moving, and then she saw that they were not alone. Voldemort was right behind her father.
"I now pronounce you husband and wife," Dumbledore was saying.
"I don't know what you were doing, you meddlesome old fool," started Cygnus Black, "but that girl has been contracted to Rabastan Lestrange. Andromeda, we're here to save you from a terrible fate. Be a good girl and come here. This marriage doesn't need to mean anything. Your Uncle Orion and I will straighten it all out, and everything will be fine."
Her father's demeanor was more... fatherly... than he had been in years. Tears smarted in her eyes as she wished it was real. She felt a breath of something reaching for her. Voldemort was staring at her intently. She moved still closer to Ted and he steadied her. She shook her head at her father's orders.
"The girl did not give her consent to that marriage," said Dumbledore coolly. He looked as though he were at a debate society meeting rather than in a small room with three wands pointed at him. "She did give her consent to this one, and the thing is done."
"She's mine!" screamed the jilted wizard as he raised his wand. "I'll see her dead before I'll see her married to some Mudblood!"
His new attempt at "Imperio!" was again foiled by Ted's "Petrificus Totallus!" and he fell to the floor. His brother moved into the room at that point, followed by Bellatrix.
"Well, well, little sister, I should have found out exactly what you were doing with the Mudblood on Diagon Alley. I admit I was convinced by your little show. Just how much of an actress are you? Was white really the best color for you to wear tonight?"
Something very much like a growl came from Ted's throat. The fight broke out, then, with Cygnus battling his brother; Kingsley, Ted and Andromeda fighting against the Lestranges; and Voldemort casting spells at Dumbledore that were easily parried. As he fought, Voldemort worked his way closer and closer to Andromeda. He sensed that if he could carry off the young witch, he would win the day and the complete alliance of the Black family, which was a prize he craved. However, even a highly talented person will occasionally make a mistake. His was to assume that Ted Tonks was insignificant.
When Voldemort laid his hand on Andromeda's arm in an effort to capture her, Ted went a little mad. He, and others, had gone to great lengths to keep the witch from this man's followers. After having just exchanged vows with her, he would protect her at any cost to himself. First he cast a disarming spell upon the other wizard. The Stunning Spell he cast next dropped the other wizard on his back, unconscious, just as Shacklebolt hit the Lestranges with an Incarcerous. That left Cygnus and Alphard as the only remaining combatants in a family conflict that had neither started nor was likely to end that day.
"Tonks, take her and go where I told you," said Alphard, judging that once Andromeda was gone the fight would end.
"Yes, Sir," answered Ted. He pulled his bride close and whispered "Trust me," just as he summoned great determination and turned.
Andromeda didn't open her eyes when they Apparated. She trembled in the arms of the man who was now her life partner and buried her face in his shoulder. He made soothing noises and patted her back. She noticed, offhand, that she liked the way he smelled. Lavender, mint, and something else, she decided. Finally she took a deep breath and looked around herself.
"This is Uncle Alphard's cottage!" she said.
"He explained how to get here to me," answered her new husband. "He said he put it under Fidelius Charm years ago."
"And he's the Secret Keeper?"
"Along with your cousin, Sirius," he answered.
"Oh, my goodness!" she said. "They must have done that two summers ago. Aunt Walburga blamed his being sorted to Gryffindor on his visit to Uncle Alphard that year. She couldn't figure out how to find our Uncle in order to complain. Do you like it?" she asked.
"I haven't seen much, but it seems nice."
"Let's look around, then. I wouldn't mind searching the kitchen for a bit of a tea or something. I couldn't eat at the Lestrange's tonight, and we've been rather busy ever since. Uncle has a house-elf somewhere... Birdie, or Binnie, or Bennie..."
"Here I am, Mistress."
"Oh! It's Bennie, then?"
"Yes, Mistress. What can Bennie do for you?"
"If you wouldn't mind, a bit of a tea would be good. Could you bring it to the sitting room? This is Master Theodore. We're going to look around a little bit and then we need a bit of comfort."
"Yes, Mistress. Master Alphard tells me to fix the front bedroom for Mistress. You can go see it if you like."
Andromeda brightened. "Oh, thank you! We'll go there, first."
The elf disappeared and Ted laughed. "You are very kind to house-elves."
She put her hand on her hip. "Some of us are, Mudblood...oh." She put her hands over her face in shame.
"Andromeda," he said.
She shook her head, so he grasped her wrists and gently moved her hands. "Andromeda."
She looked up at him, guilt in her face.
"I can't pretend I don't find the word hurtful, but I know that you say it out of habit, that you don't mean to offend me."
"I'm so sorry, Ted. I was thinking about the other day at the ice cream parlor. All those times I said that to you. I hit you, too..."
"And it was a brilliant way to ease your sister's suspicions. It was forgiven the instant it happened. Now I can be proud that such a quick-thinking witch is married to me."
"Oh, Ted." It was getting easier to step into his arms, and even to slide her hands around his waist to his back.
He enjoyed the moment. "So you have a room here?"
"It's the nicest room in the house. Would you like to see it?" He nodded, and they went up the stairs together. She brought him to the room, which was decorated in soft blues and greens, but not in such a way that was overly feminine. Instead it reflected rest for those who stayed within it. There was a queen-sized bed and a love seat that looked toward French doors.
"The afternoon sunshine gets filtered through a walnut tree outside. It's wonderful," she sighed.
"It is beautiful."
"Ted, Uncle Alphard offered for us to stay here. He said he wouldn't be here for a week or so, and that we can stay here now, and even afterwards, if you like. It's safe, since the family can't find it..."
"It is wonderful. He told me all about it when you were changing, and I already accepted on behalf of both of us, if you don't mind."
She smiled brightly. "I think we will like it here."
They went back downstairs to have the tea that was laid out and found that Bennie had made them all sorts of pastries and sandwiches to go along with the biscuits Andromeda had figured upon. The elf waited by the door. "Master Alphard is here with Old Master Mugwump. They goes down stairs for wine."
"You needn't have done that," called Andromeda.
"Nonsense!" said the older wizard, who overheard her as he came up the last of the stairs from the cellar. "Albus and I are here for just a few minutes. We wanted to reassure you that everyone is fine, even your father and your sister, girl. As soon as you and Ted left, they lost interest in the fight and left, themselves. We brought your suitcase, which contains all of the worldly goods you now own, I'm afraid. We'll just have a toast to celebrate, and then we're off to stretch our legs while you two become better acquainted."
"It's your house, Uncle."
"It's your home too, for now, and it's good to have family in it, Niece." He poured glasses of sparkling wine and passed them around, and then proposed a toast. "May we all be glad to have participated in tonight's events."
"Here, here!" said the Headmaster as everyone sipped from their glass.
The room was quiet for a few minutes as they all ate. Andromeda got more and more thoughtful. Ted watched a pucker form between her eyebrows. He thought to himself that if they were alone he would try to kiss it away. Finally, she couldn't take it anymore.
"What exactly did Father say?" asked Andromeda.
"He's going to give you some time to come to your senses, but he feels you have left him no recourse other than to remove your name from the tapestry."
She fell back into the couch, with a lost look in her eyes. After a minute or two, she nodded. "I guess I should have expected as much. It seems a bit odd to hear it, though, as done and settled. Is Miss Figg all right?"
Ted's head whipped around at this change of subject. It was the first discovery of the means his wife used to handle things that could cause her to lose control of her emotions. While he longed to pull her into his arms and soothe the hurt she must feel, he had to admire the way she smiled and stiffened her back with resolve.
Dumbledore nodded in response to Andromeda's question. "Yes, they aren't interested in Arabella in the least. She moves around quite a bit, anyway. I often find her little jobs to do for my small group of helpers. She's not nearly as defenseless as one would think, either. Now," he said, exchanging a glance with Alphard, "it's time for us to leave you two alone. I'll be filing this tomorrow, Andromeda, which sets certain things in motion. I suspect you had better be on your guard as well, Theodore. A woman scorned and all."
With that, the two older wizards left, and the newly wedded couple were left sitting on the couch together. Ted put his arm up around her shoulders, and she settled into his side. How, in the space of a few hours, had this become such a natural and comfortable thing to do?
"Do we need to help clear up?" he asked quietly.
"No, Bennie would slap my hands if I tried, although I'm going to have to learn how to do more than I currently know. You've married a woman who's not much of a housekeeper." She thought for a minute. "I'm now a woman without a family or anything else, either. Uncle is right. Everything I have in the world is in that suitcase. It has a good many things in it. I packed it well when I realized why they wanted me to stay at the Lestrange's estate over the weekend, but that's all there is. I hope you don't mind that I'm poor and not much good at anything. I'll learn what I can, Ted, I promise."
"Andromeda, you're going to be cut off by your family because of me. If you're poor, it's my fault. I should promise to make up for it to you."
She lifted her chin. "It's not as though belonging to such a family was any great treasure. It was the only one I had, though."
They sat on the couch a little longer. It was comfortable and comforting. She reflected that so far she had come off well in the trade between a family and a husband.
Eventually he stirred. "Perhaps I should head up to bed. Can you tell me which room is to be mine?"
"It's the front one, that I showed you."
"That's your room."
"Yes," she answered without looking at him.
He sat up at that and turned her to face him. "Are you sure, Andromeda? There's nothing I want more right this minute, but are you absolutely sure?"
She looked back into his eyes and smiled. "As soon as the license is filed, they will try to get proof of nullity so they can dissolve it. If we wait, then all of this will have been for nothing. Besides, Ted, I want to.
"With me? A Mudblood?"
She nodded as she put her hand over his mouth. "With you, and without any other notation than you're a man and I'm a woman. I really want to, Ted."
He pulled away from her hand. "You're absolutely sure?"
"Would you kiss me again?"
He didn't have to be asked twice. His lips found hers, and it was everything they had found together before. Soon it wasn't enough, and Ted stood, bringing her with him and holding her tight. The feel of their bodies molded together was surprising to Andromeda, and she gasped. As her mouth opened, so did his. Their tongues, shy at first, became bolder as they explored. Finally Ted ended the kiss and came up for air. "Shall we make use of the best bedroom in the house, then?" he asked. She nodded.
They went up the stairs holding hands, and stepped into the bedroom. As the door shut behind them, Andromeda jumped a little. Then she blushed and giggled at herself. "I guess I'm nervous," she admitted.
"So am I," he said. He watched as she went around the room, blowing out the candles. He admired the line of her back as she bent and the way her cheeks puckered as she blew. At the last candle, she was facing him, and the neckline of her dress fell a little bit away from her body. His mouth went dry. She looked up and caught his eye and then smiled and looked back down at the candle. The room went dark.
"I wonder if you would help me with my dress?" she asked him.
"Of course," he answered.
There were twenty-four little buttons on the back of that gown. He knew because he counted each of them as he unfastened it. He thought he would die each time his knuckles brushed the skin of her back. The shivering response under his hands told him that she felt something as well. When he finished, she held the dress up and moved toward the bed. He took the opportunity to unfasten his own robes and move toward the other side of the bed.
They moved under the covers on their own sides and then looked at each other. Andromeda started to giggle, and then Ted started to laugh, too. Their eyes had adjusted to the moonlight by now, and Ted could see her dark hair against her creamy skin. He felt as though he couldn't move. "Andromeda," he said in a pained whisper. He picked up a lock of her hair and smelled it. The pain only increased. He moved closer to her. Then, as he had wanted to do for a long time, he buried his hands and his face in her hair. He breathed it in until she turned her face and they were kissing again.
After a while, he didn't think he could take any more. "Andromeda," he whispered.
"Oh, yes," she responded. "Yes."
There was a bit of a gasp at first. He stopped moving so that she would have a chance to catch her breath. She surprised him by putting her arms around him and moving. Then he was lost. She surrounded him with everything he had imagined in this moment and more. There was nothing to do but lose himself to it, to her...
Moments later, as he caught his breath, he became aware of her looking up at him expectantly. He smiled and kissed her face. "I'm sorry, I couldn't seem to help it. I should have waited, somehow..."
"Can we do it again?" Andromeda had been so eager for this. His looks had made her feel all swimmy inside. She felt as though his kisses had lit a fire within her. Then it had been uncomfortable, but the fire had quickly returned. Just as she was starting to feel as though she was getting the hang of it, his face had taken on an indescribable look and it was over. Maybe she just needed more practice.
"I'm not sure," he said. He kissed her and discovered that they could. This time there was no discomfort. She moved with him and felt something calling to her, but it never got very close and it was over fairly quickly again. She looked up at him thoughtfully as he looked down in remorse. Maybe practice wouldn't help.
"Maybe I'm just one of those women who doesn't," she said with a shrug.
"I don't believe that," he said. "I promise you tonight was my first time and I know it was yours, too. I think we just don't know what we're doing, yet."
"Some women just don't," she responded. "My sister..."
"Are you comparing me to Rodolphus Lestrange?"
"No, of course not, but Bellatrix is my sister, and if she can't..."
"I refuse to believe, on the strength of so little evidence, that you will never enjoy it. This is too new to us. It took years to get used to magic."
She became thoughtful. Maybe she would have to learn how to control and enjoy this the way her husband had needed to become accustomed to the magical world. "What do you propose, then?"
He whipped the covers off and laughed when she tried to cover herself. "I propose to learn and study and experiment until I know exactly what you enjoy."
"Does that go both ways?"
His predatory look was a surprise that intrigued her. "I certainly hope so."
He proceeded to explore her body, mapping it and tasting it for future reference. She squealed at the feelings he gave her. "Ted, oh, Teddy..."
He was able to act with more restraint this time. He took his time and watched for her reactions to his caresses. As she succumbed to their passion, he watched her eyes change from concentration to delight. It gave him a feeling of pleasure and accomplishment, and he quickly became lost himself. When they were finished, she looked at him with wide-eyed wonder. "That was..."
"Yes, it certainly was."
"Oh, yes. Yes, indeed." They were quiet for so long after that she wondered if he had gone to sleep.
When he spoke again, it was almost conversational. "I think I've found the way in which we can measure our marriage."
"You have?"
"I can count your shrieks of delight as I make love to you."
She burst out laughing. "You wouldn't."
"It's just between us," he said consolingly. He leaned up next to her on the bed and tilted her face toward his. "I knew it would only take hours, Andromeda. I have fallen utterly in love with you."
"Oh, Ted..."
"You don't have to feel the same way. I know you don't."
"I don't, but I do feel... Ted, you're amazing. You're some ordinary guy, but you saved me from a fate that very well might have been worse than death. I think I might love you a little bit. I'm certainly willing..."
He pulled her close and buried his face in her hair. "I can't ask for any more than that, Andromeda. Not after the way all of this happened. I know it's too soon and that I'm not what you ever had in mind."
"Maybe not, but now you're the only one I can imagine."
A/N: Thanks to Trickie Woo for Beta Reading.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Life and Times of Perseus
72 Reviews | 5.53/10 Average
A beautiful story with such a sad ending. I came across this via 'random story' and I'm glad I did; it's not a relationship I'd considered much, but you depicted it so well - happiness, romance, problems, sadness, basically reality! I also enjoyed the humorous Tonks references scattered in there! I enjoyed the whole thing and had tears in my eyes at the end. I think you also really captured the difficulties of the war, even though A wasn't properly involved, she experienced that people aren't black and White, you can like someone but not trust them etc. Very moving.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you so much! The war wouldn't have necessarily called upon everyone to be like Harry or Dumbledore, but it would have affected every family, for sure. I have to admit that last chapter was one of the hardest I've ever written. I never cry about anything, but I did have some tears in my eyes over it.Some of Tonks's statements while growing up were a lot of fun to inject. I understand how it got to be that way, but in JKR's stories, so many characters act like they never existed even one paragraph before they show up in the canon. It's fun to flesh them out.Thanks again!
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
I totally agree, though I also think that those gaps are what makes HP fanfic so varied and interesting.
Thank you for a wonderfull story. I seldom get a lump in my throat reading, but this one did it. I loved your portrait of both Andromeda and Ted Tonks and all the other characters you wrote. Now I will go and read the sequel. You are a very gifted reader
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the lovely review! I never thought much about this pair, but I had a plot bunny and then found a challenge for which this was the perfect story, and within three chapters I was madly in love with Ted Tonks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.
Oh, this is lovely. I've really fallen quite in love with this family as well... I really liked your introduction, of the very usual man, with average skills and normal dreams, because not everyone can be Harry Potter, but everyone can be a certain type of hero. And now, obeying canon gives your really sweet, loving story a tragic end, but you still manage to pull it up a tiny bit. In the end we all die, but we can hope that the ones we leave behind find peace.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
This was very much my salute to "everyman," the people who do all the little things that make the world go round. They may not live incredible lives, but they're heroes all the same. I'm glad you saw that in the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the beautiful review!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful tale of love with us.I have still tears in my eyes. *sigh*
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for being so enthusiastic and supportive. I have really felt the love. I'm sorry to see the end of this story, myself.
There, now you have done it. You made me cry with this chapter.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
The only reason I didn't cry with this chapter is that I actually wrote it when I was also working on chapter 8 or 9. When I re-read it to edit for posting on TPP, I did tear up.When I read the one line in DH about Ted leaving and then later about his death, he was just a statistic. He became a person to me when I worked on this story and I'm not entirely happy with myself for allowing that to happen.I hope you cried in a good way, if there is such a thing. Thank you for the review!
Yes, children are the best medicine there is :-)I think Ted is seeing his own story reversed in his son. He will go to a Muggle school, live in the Muggle world and will loose touch with his family - just like he did.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Losing touch with the Wizarding world wasn't such a bad thing in those days, unfortunately. Everyone was so sure that Auntie Bella would get Tim, but I couldn't do that to Andromeda. Instead, he just fades from the picture.Thanks, again!
So many nice details in this chapter!Of course the Nymphadora/Remus scene made me giggle.That Cygnus and Orion killed Theodore's parents made me furious. And I nearly thought they deserved the kiss.And Narcissa ... a bit self centered, but not evil at last. She has practially saved Birdies life.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you, thank you!Of coure we have no idea how Cygnus and Orion died; just that they both did during the same year.And yes, Narcissa isn't evil, just self-absorbed. Plus, letting Aunt Walburga behead the elf would be wasteful, when she could just make Birdie disappear.
I think Timothy fits in perfectly. I especially liked how Sirius said that the little one seemed a bit flat, as if a spark was missing. A good description.I also liked that you put a good reason behing Sirius leaving his home. If your uncle being poisoned by your parents wasn't a good reason to put distance between you and your family, I haver never seen one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
It seemed to me that this pair might have had more kids but that there must be a reason we never met them. Tim and his situation seemed to be one possible answer to that question.It seemed to me that Sirius would be pretty upset with his family but that leaving them before he was of age would take some extra provocation. We know from the Black family tree that Alphard died around the time Sirius left, so I tied the two together in my mind.Anyway, thank you!
Beautiful story. I actually cried at the ending. Bravo! ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I'm sorry to make anyone cry, but I'm glad if you enjoyed the story.
I was so scared of reading this because I knew what had to happen, but you've handled it beautifully, and highlighted the good moments with Teddy, so it wasn't too sad to enjoy after all. Thank you for this story. Like I said, it's the only other Ted/Andromeda I've ever found.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
They're under-represented, for sure. I haven't seen any stories that cover this part of the canon exactly, but JackieJLH's "Ties that Bind" is a very good look at the Black sisters and Amita's "Riddle in Black" is another POV that's quite dark.Thank you so much for jumping so enthusiastically into my story! I look forward to seeing your develop.
lovely. thank you for all your time and effort - i appreciated it
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I really grew to love this pair and I was miserable to have to bring it to this ending. I'm glad others enjoyed the story, too.
Just found this story, and it's good to read for a change to read something about Ted Tonks and also an earlierera. It moved along at a good pace, and I'm lookingforward to continuing.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I have to admit I wasn't that interested in this pairing untill I really started to think about what Ted must have been like. Now I really like him... maybe too much. ;)
Excellent how you weave Draco's birthday and the prophecy in here!! Narcissa would have heard parts only and exactly not that the parents have had to be LV's enemies. I consider Trixie changing her name atruly wonderful detail! It's these things that bring life into a story. Adding the furry little problem is great, even if a bit more obvious. I'm still a bit confused at Andromeda's patience with living so separated from the world. She doesn't know it's "only" until Hallowe'en the following year. Where is Nymphadora getting primary education? Are Molly and Andromeda helping each other? Eventually their Squib son needs schooling, too. I doubt that he should be exposed to F&G ;-)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Narcissa is the sort of overprotective mother who's nervous about every detail. Even if she knew the line about "thrice defied," she would have figured it could have included the time she served strawberry tart for dessert when the Tedious One wanted apple, LOL. She would have seen other infractions that she and Lucius had committed and come up with three.It stood to reason to me that if Andromeda was Sirius's favorite cousin, Sirius and his friends would be visitors at her house, so Tonks probably met Remus a few times before the first fall.I don't think Andromeda's necessarily patient as much as resigned. She does have Molly to share a cup of tea with from time to time, and when you're raising two small children, there's not much time for anything else, anyway. Elementary schooling for the wizarding children is a bit of a black hole in the canon. You would think they went to the local schools, but if so, they would know a lot more about Muggles, so they must be home-schooled up to the age of eleven.Thanks for such a lovely and thoughtful review!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Severus could have enjoyed N's fear enough to forget intimating this detail. Isn't it far more convenient to have N's gratitude than owing Lucius!?JKR actually explained in an interview that all Weasleys were homeschooled by their mother. Of course, this source isn't perfect canon, and I believe she had to make it up quickly.
Furry little problems, eh? Out of the mouths of six year olds. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Hee hee... I couldn't resist. She's six years old and has no idea what "furry little problems" are, but she wants one of her very own. Thanks for the review!
She's been patient long enough!Nice idea to have the two being more pushed than decisive. they'll get very determined soon, I'm sure! I don't know if it fits to Sirius saying that Andromeda was his favourite cousin, though. I would have assumed he'd liked a rebellish one best. But maybe this is yet to come... let me see...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I was trying to show one way some of these things might have developed. In some ways this Andromeda has to rebel against her self, too. Thanks for the review!
Sad that such tragedies are inevitable. Still, it's so well done. I loved the stuff with Narcissa and Birdie. Remus! A crowning moment for sure :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! There are ways in which I really don't like the rest of this story. JKR was almost as hard on Andromeda as she was on Snape. I really got a kick out of writing the Tonks/Remus part. She knows exactly who she is and what she wants to be, even if she has no idea what she's talking about. ;)
awww....Welcome to the world Baby Tonks!!!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thanks for the review!
Lovely work. I really like Ted and Andromeda and I am always surprised that they aren't written about more often.Very nice start. I like Ted. I'll continue reading this.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I like Ted, too. Once I started to think about him, I decided Ted must be like those many men who go to work, take care of their families and generally keep the world going. They're all heroes in their way.
One really can but wonder, how Andromeda managed to become a person capable of love and kindnes with that mother of hers.Well, well, she knows what she wants, and how to get it.Trixie has fullfilled her transformation to Bellatrix, the Death Eater. Scary.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I had fun giving Andromeda a little bit of an "action" chapter. I think she was able to witness elements of love and kindness in her family. There's Alphard, after all. However, I think she needed to piece it all together, and fortunately she had Ted for that.Bellatrix isn't *quite* there, yet. Some of what Alphard said about shedding pure blood made her stop and think, but she's *most* of the way there.Thank you so much for everything, including that other note you sent me. Featured Story! I'm blushing!
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I've just suggested your story - the other admins agreed to fearure it. It's well deserved.
Sometimes the worth of something becomes clear only when it is thought lost.Wow, what a leap in their relationship!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I think a lot of things came together in her mind just then. She probably remembered what a near miss she had the night they got married, so she understood just how likely a loss could be. I don't think it hurt that he got a bit disgruntled with her. I think they had reached a point where things were starting to just slide along and it wasn't enough. Once she realized it, I think she would go after what she wanted just as her sisters did once or twice in the canon. It's fun to speculate, any way.Thank you, again!
I really like it that Andromeda wasn't shedding all that was ingrained in her through education, just because she married a Muggle-born. The way her opinon on things changes gradually, makes your story very believable.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I can't imagine shedding the upbringing of nineteen years, even if we suspect it's wrong, just in a few weeks. Little things will still come up from time to time, I think. It takes a conscious effort. For the most part, Ted's very patient with her, since he sees she's trying.Thank you for the review!
Finally I have found some time to continue reading your story. And there are a few chapters more to enjoy!It's wonderful to see how they develop their relationship.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I hope that extra free time is spent on life in general. :) I'm honored that you used some of it to read my story. I think in getting married Andromeda entered a new and different world. Suddenly she's mixing with a different group of people. There will be some time of bewilderment and that will be followed by the other adjustments.Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Andromeda's got a backbone made of steel. Good for her negotiating her trust fund with her mother. Good foresight in taking the emeralds as well. If I was her I wouldn't be telling her mother anything about the baby. Looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the review! I think it pays to be prepared when you're a Black. Unfortunately, I think part of her wanted her parents to be happy about her baby, even though she should know better.
What a sweet, wonderful chapter! The way you write the romantic, developing relationship between Ted and Andromeda has quickly made this one of my favorite stories. The Prewett brothers are too funny. You can see where George and Fred Weasley got it from. I was concerned that the story was ending when I saw the chapter title, but was relieved to see it was marked as not completed. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
No, it's not the end, fortunately. I'm glad you're enjoying this... it's a story that really grew on me as I wrote it. It's kind of fun extrapolating what some of these characters must have been like based upon their younger relatives. Thanks for the review, the next chapter is coming soon!
I love the story. Beautiful and tender, exciting and daring. Well thought out. I appreciate that. Thank you, and be encouraged to continue your story telling.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Oh, thank you! You're quite kind. A lot of nifty little things came together to result in this story. I'm glad that the readers enjoy it.