The Approach of the Serpent
Chapter 6 of 19
Rose of the West“I wonder...” he began with a smile that was all charm and no warmth. “I have found ways to make myself useful to many of the people in your family. I wonder what I can help you obtain.”
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters here and the world they inhabit are the creation and property of JK Rowling and her assigns.
Caution: There is some light non-consensual physical contact in this chapter.
Alighting on a rock which rose above the waves, and holding on by a projecting fragment, as the monster floated near he gave him a death stroke. Bulfinch's Mythology, Book XV.
Andromeda went unfeelingly through the next week, certain that it wouldn't matter what she did. She was right. It was a complicated multiple choice exam for which she had studied her whole life. Her mother and father made all of the plans and steered her through things that required her participation. The day of her fate was fixed a month away, and she saw no way to avoid it. Bellatrix moved back into her family home in order to assist Druella with preparing the bride for her wedding. The mother and older sister enjoyed the opportunity to do all the little things that must be done, but the middle sister went numb at the thought of it all.
As she had foreseen, Andromeda stood for a fitting at Madame Malkin's, looking beautiful but wanting to cry. As a child, she had imagined nothing less than a tall, dark, brooding prince who would sweep her off her feet. That was definitely not going to happen. Rabastan was a bit on the tall side, and brooding, but the prince in her dreams was brooding about the love he had for her. She wasn't sure what the dull wizard thought about, but she hoped it wasn't her.
Her mother and sister looked ready to cry over her. Druella did actually start to tear up, she was smiling so much. Trixie was tearing up because her wedding had been more rushed than this one, and she didn't get quite so nice a trousseau. More than crying, however, Trixie was smiling, because she got the nicer of the two brothers and she knew what Andie was about to suffer. Suddenly Andie started to tear up, herself. The best part of her life was already over, and she was barely nineteen years old.
Druella was in her element. She ran Andie up and down Diagon Alley. After the wedding clothes were ordered, there was the wedding stationery. Andie looked at every sample in the engraver's book and finally selected the one she sensed Mother wanted. She received a half hug for her effort and then it was off to the caterer.
She thought she would be sick eating just one bite of so many cakes. Then there were countless hors d'oeuvres and biscuits. Whenever she looked up to beg for mercy, Mother handed her a glass with a splash of some different wine. Finally, Andie answered all the questions correctly and was given a reprieve, although a dubious one. They went to register for gifts.
It didn't matter that she and her fiancé were expected to live with his parents at least until the first baby was born. Registering was something a girl in her position did, so she endured the discussion between the sales clerk, her sister and her mother about the relative merits of Wedgewood versus Limoges. That question being answered, there was then discussion about silver, crystal, and a host of other things that would spend the next twenty years in packing crates in an attic.
Then it was back to Madame Malkin's for a final fitting of the dress robes for the engagement party that night. Andromeda looked in the mirror at herself in the pale green silk that would be set off by some heirloom pearls. Her hair would be piled up on her head by a house-elf. The neckline of the gown was cut just above the limit considered proper. It fit snugly around her bust and waist and then flowed down to her ankles. She had to agree that she would look good. As she twisted around to see every angle, she happened to look through the shop window and saw him standing outside. He simply looked at her, and their eyes met. His face was full of an intense desire that caused her hand to flutter over her chest. She turned and looked in the mirror, listening as Madam Malkin fussed over her.
She asked to put another dress on from before, and was told to go ahead. She didn't dare look out the window, but she could see Ted Tonks in the mirror as he gazed at her in her wedding garment. It was then that she realized why she wanted to put it back on. She would never forget his eyes in that moment as long as she lived. Suddenly the prince of her dreams didn't brood at all. He was an ordinary fellow with sandy-colored hair, but when he looked at her, she could see the adoration in his face. Her life wouldn't be over if she could have something like that for the rest of it.
"Are you done, yet?" asked Trixie. "I need to get home and change. Rudolphus is going to meet me, and we want some time together."
"Yes, of course," answered Andie, shivering at the thought of what her sister would do during that time. "I just wanted to see what it was like, again." I wanted to see what it was like if the right man admired me as a bride, she thought. Perhaps if I imagine it's him tonight, I can get through this horrible event.
"Trixie, be nice," Mother was saying under her breath. "I'm glad Andromeda wants to enjoy this moment. I've worried that somehow she will ruin everything."
Throughout the entire evening, Andromeda imagined that the man she was going to marry was Theodore Tonks. It worked when she was dressing, to imagine those brown eyes encouraging her and making her feel strong. It worked when she greeted all of her parents' guests and received their congratulations to think of the way he smiled just because he thought she was pretty. It almost worked when Rabastan put a possessive hand alongside her face and settled it on the neck that was too exposed because her hair was pulled up onto her head. It worked all through dinner and all through the speeches. She even managed it when her fiancé stood beside her and put some Lestrange family heirloom on her finger.
It worked until a late arrival came up to her in the drawing room after dinner. "My congratulations to the future bride. Miss Black, you are as charming as your sister, and I shall enjoy your friendship as much as hers." She couldn't understand how he made that greeting sound so sibilant, but it went down her back like a reptile. Despite that feeling, she was shocked to realize that she was also quite drawn to this man, who was as old as her parents but still somehow extremely attractive.
"I wonder..." he began with a smile that was all charm and no warmth. "I have found ways to make myself useful to many of the people in your family. I wonder what I can help you obtain." He looked from Rabastan to Andromeda. "Perhaps a bridegroom more to your liking?" All at once, unbidden, she pictured Ted Tonks as she had seen him through the window at Madame Malkin's. She had a suspicion that he did, too. "A Mudblood? Surely there's someone else? Someone more worthy of your family's stature?" The chains she had felt for weeks now clanked in her mind as she lost her composure. Suddenly she realized that she was the guest of honor at a party to celebrate a fate she didn't want.
She wasn't sure how she got away from him and could only hope that she had been gracious in doing so. As she made her way to the bathroom, she passed Narcissa, who was glowing on a love seat next to Lucius Malfoy. "I tell you, this wizard knows more dark curses than anyone I know, and he's only going into third year..." he was saying. Cousin Regulus happily nodded at every word.
She passed Mother, who was standing near Father, Aunt Walburga and Uncle Orion. "Andie's a good girl. She and Regulus will restore order to the family," came out in a whisper. It didn't really matter who was saying it to whom. They all agreed with that conclusion and were breathing a collective sigh of relief.
She went into the bathroom and splashed water on her face. After carefully blotting herself dry with a towel, she went and sat on the staircase, where she took deep breaths for several moments. It was hardly a dignified position to be in, but she needed a minute to think about a few things. What had Rabastan hissed in her ear before introducing her to that man, anyway? Were such things even possible? She hoped not from the sound of it.
The new question on her mind was why, if both wizards wanted essentially the same thing, did Ted Tonks's look of desire make her belly go all hot while Lestrange's look made her go cold with revulsion? Maybe Rabastan just made those comments as a way to retaliate. She had leaned away when he tried to kiss her after the toasts at dinner. She should apologize for embarrassing him.
"Hiya, Andie." She looked up and saw her cousin Sirius in the hallway. He and his brother had come back from Hogwarts that afternoon with Narcissa. The school year had ended in time for them to come to this party.
She smiled. "Hi, Sirius, what are you doing out here?"
"Oh, the grownups are too stiff, so I'm just hanging out. Do you like these parties?"
"It's what's expected of me. There's this one and then one next week at the Lestrange estate. What are you doing out here?"
"I'm trying to figure out how to get in touch with my friend James."
"Is his family here?"
"Are you kidding? Our parents consider his parents to be blood traitors."
"Oh." She thought for a moment. "Are they?"
"I guess so. James is, anyway. He's dead gone over a cute Muggle-born girl."
"If you think she's cute, why aren't you interested? Is it because she's a Muggle-born witch?"
He scoffed. "As if that was a good reason not to date someone."
Andromeda was curious. "It's not? Would you marry one?"
"If I loved her I would."
"But what about the children?"
"It's the 1970's, Andie. No one cares about that stuff any more."
"Our parents do. They act like Trixie is practically a Squib."
He gave her a disappointed frown, and they were quiet for a minute or two.
"So if it doesn't matter that she's a Muggle-born, why don't you chat up the cute witch?"
"James saw her first and he's my mate. Besides, I like to play the field."
Andromeda crossed her arms and looked sideways at the young wizard in front of her. "At your age, just how much 'field' do you play?"
"Aw, come on, Andie, you know how it is, or do they do things differently in Slytherin?"
"Perhaps I don't want to know."
He shrugged. Older girls had strange ideas, sometimes. "Are you really going to marry that guy?"
"I'm officially engaged, now."
"I'm sorry to hear that. I thought you were different."
She sighed and nodded her head. "I thought I was different, too. It never comes out the way you expect, I guess. Look at Trixie."
He scoffed. "I'd rather not. She's gotten pretty strange, hasn't she?" He barked out a laugh at his own pun.
Andie was glad for a reason to giggle. "Oh, Sirius, be nice. It's been a difficult year for her."
Rabastan came and claimed her at that point, so she went back to the party and smiled at the guests. She said the correct things at the right times in the conversation and shook hands all around. She couldn't get away from the feeling of the one man. Whenever she turned he was looking at her. She felt a sort of desire emanating from him, but it was nothing physical. That man wanted nothing to do with her body, yet everything to do with her soul.
Theodore Tonks went through the same week in a tumult of emotions. Work was comfortably predictable, but he worried about Andromeda Black. There was another witch who thrust herself upon his attention, but he tried to ignore her.
"Teddy!" It was the voice that could drive a wizard to take his own life.
"What can I do for you, Dolores?"
Her eyes glittered with delight as she looked him up and down. "Well, I heard that you were the one who caused the committee to be broken up. I got demoted over it, you know."
He put his hand over his heart. "That was not my intention. I'm very sorry about that."
"After I had time to think about it, I realized you were right, just like you were right about the N.E.W.T.s. That survey was far too obvious."
"I'm glad you came to see it that way." He tried to keep a straight face.
"A-nyway, as luck would have it, I got transferred to the records department. Guess what I can do?"
"Do tell."
She held up a marriage license and giggled. "Wouldn't this be wonderful? What do you say if I fill it out with our names?"
He thought furiously and hoped the frown on his face looked serious rather than disgusted. "Or... suppose we leave it blank for now. You never know who might see it and do or say something we don't want. I can keep it for the time being."
"Oh, Teddy! You have far better ideas than I do. I can't wait...I'm going to start planning right now!" She handed him the heavily engraved document and skipped down the hallway. He could only be grateful that she hadn't pressed him for an actual affirmative answer, nor a date.
Ted took a deep breath and folded the marriage license. She had been holding onto it for a while. It would be valid starting in a few days. He would have to find some way to extricate himself from her plans, but without this document she couldn't do anything to him for the time being.
He checked his watch and whistled. He was running late, now, after this impromptu meeting with Umbridge. He was supposed to mingle with the afternoon crowds. Much as he would like to take a shower after the looks she had given him, he hastened to the Atrium and left by Floo to Diagon Alley instead.
Ted Tonks walked down the street that afternoon and wanted to hurt somebody. After the day in the ice cream parlor, he had tried to forget Andromeda Black. Today he was simply walking through the neighborhood, keeping an eye for things that might be useful for Dumbledore to know. He didn't expect to see her. Yet he couldn't keep himself from watching as she, her mother, and sister went to Madame Malkin's and a few moments later she was standing on the footstool and being fussed over by the seamstress.
As she turned back and forth to look in the mirror, he saw every side of her and loved each one. The feelings that pounded on the door of his heart burst out full force, and he simply looked at her with all of his emotions on his face. Then their eyes met, and it was all he could do not to rush into the shop, push all of the other women out of the way and carry her off. He wanted her. It was as simple and as complicated as that. He could see that she understood what he was thinking as she turned and watched him from the mirror. She spoke to Madame Malkin, who smiled and nodded. The young witch went into the dressing room and when she re-emerged, she was the most beautiful creature he had ever seen.
It must be her wedding robe, he thought to himself. She was all white and lace, and her dark hair cascaded down in the midst of it. The older woman fussed about hem length and tightening the waist, but Andromeda looked for his reaction in the mirror, and he gave it. He held his hand to his heart and then out to her as though to offer it. She smiled shyly and then looked down. The spell was broken, and she answered some comment made by her sister. A few minutes later the three started to come out of the shop and Ted slid into a nearby alley. She looked around, he thought maybe to see if he was still there. It was a good sign.
"See anything today?" It was Kingsley, coming from the other end of the alley.
"No, I have to admit I was a bit distracted."
"We all have days like that."
"Hey, can you tell me anything about Rabastan Lestrange?"
"He was a few years ahead of me, but I'll tell you what I know."
An hour later, Ted wished he hadn't asked. From what Kingsley had observed and heard at school, Lestrange made up for a lack in intelligence by acts of cruelty. He was not popular with the girls once Vivian Rosier came back from Hogsmeade in tears one Saturday. He came from a family that was magical for several generations, but he had no refinement or strength of character that Ted could see. The thought of Andromeda being tied to something like that all her life was distressing. He had to get her away. The only thing that came to mind was Dumbledore. Maybe the Headmaster of Hogwarts could help him find a way.
When he went to the next meeting with Dumbledore, Tonks was encouraged to keep his eyes open and look for ways to help Andromeda, but he was told the group at large could do nothing for the situation. Preventing Voldemort from gaining further ground with the Wizarding community was more important for the greater good. Ted looked so forlorn that Kingsley told him he could assist with the surveillance of a party at the Lestrange home the following weekend. They were hoping to get an accurate count of Voldemort's followers.
They arrived at the Lestrange estate when the party was in full swing. They wore their own dress robes so that if anyone saw them they would blend in. Kingsley had given Ted strong instructions that he was supposed to keep to the shadows where he was expected to blend in and not be seen. It was torture, to stand in the garden quietly, knowing that Andromeda was in there somewhere. His every instinct told him to go into the party where all the lights were and look for her. It wouldn't do either of them any good.
One of the French doors opened and a couple emerged from the house. The wizard held the witch's arm and dragged her out into the middle of the roses. "When I kiss you, I'm going to kiss you. When I touch you, you're going to enjoy it. You are not going to flinch away as though you are frightened or hate me. Do you understand? I was very embarrassed, just now."
"Y-yes, Rabastan. I'm very sorry. I'll try..."
"No, witch, you won't try. You will do as I say unless you want to be under an Imperius."
Ted gasped at the same time as Andromeda. "You don't have to. I'll be good. Truly." There was a sound of fabric giving way.
"You know, I'm not sure I can trust you."
The big wizard took out his wand as Ted slowly walked toward the pair. As Lestrange started to utter his spell, Ted sent a silent body bind his way and he slowly fell over. Andromeda looked to see who was there and gaped in shock, but then smiled.
"Come with me." He held out his hand and she put her own in it. He wanted to kiss it, to hold it to his heart, to tell its owner how he felt, but it wasn't the right time. He simply started to lead her toward their hiding place.
"My luggage..." He sighed and walked back over to Lestrange, whom he nudged into the light. Then he stared at him as hard as he could and concentrated. A moment later, he looked up at Andromeda.
"Well? Do I look right?"
"It's uncanny," she said. He had managed to morph into someone who, in the dark of night, would look very much like Rabastan Lestrange. His clothes weren't the same, but close enough to fool a person who didn't look carefully.
They walked up toward the house and he told her what to do. As they reached the patio, she summoned a house-elf. Using a voice as much like Trixie's as she could, she said, "Pack my suitcase and bring it to this wizard." The elf disappeared with a crack.
He spoke into her ear. "Now, walk down that path. Do you remember Kingsley Shacklebolt? He's there in the grove of trees." She was most of the way through the garden when the elf returned with the suitcase. He took it and restrained himself from saying "Thank you." He then walked quickly through the garden himself.
He heard a voice saying, "I just saw Rabastan on the patio. Maybe he's heading toward the garden," and quickened his pace.
"Do you have everything, then?" It was Dumbledore's voice.
Ted looked at Andromeda. She nodded and said, "Yes, I believe I do."
"Here then," said the older wizard. He handed them a small planter. "Just stay where this takes you. I'll be there soon after. Three... Two... One..."
Ted tightened his grip on both the suitcase and the planter and hoped Andromeda was holding on, too.
Thank you for reading! This has been beta-read by Trickie Woo.
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Life and Times of Perseus
72 Reviews | 5.53/10 Average
A beautiful story with such a sad ending. I came across this via 'random story' and I'm glad I did; it's not a relationship I'd considered much, but you depicted it so well - happiness, romance, problems, sadness, basically reality! I also enjoyed the humorous Tonks references scattered in there! I enjoyed the whole thing and had tears in my eyes at the end. I think you also really captured the difficulties of the war, even though A wasn't properly involved, she experienced that people aren't black and White, you can like someone but not trust them etc. Very moving.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you so much! The war wouldn't have necessarily called upon everyone to be like Harry or Dumbledore, but it would have affected every family, for sure. I have to admit that last chapter was one of the hardest I've ever written. I never cry about anything, but I did have some tears in my eyes over it.Some of Tonks's statements while growing up were a lot of fun to inject. I understand how it got to be that way, but in JKR's stories, so many characters act like they never existed even one paragraph before they show up in the canon. It's fun to flesh them out.Thanks again!
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
I totally agree, though I also think that those gaps are what makes HP fanfic so varied and interesting.
Thank you for a wonderfull story. I seldom get a lump in my throat reading, but this one did it. I loved your portrait of both Andromeda and Ted Tonks and all the other characters you wrote. Now I will go and read the sequel. You are a very gifted reader
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the lovely review! I never thought much about this pair, but I had a plot bunny and then found a challenge for which this was the perfect story, and within three chapters I was madly in love with Ted Tonks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.
Oh, this is lovely. I've really fallen quite in love with this family as well... I really liked your introduction, of the very usual man, with average skills and normal dreams, because not everyone can be Harry Potter, but everyone can be a certain type of hero. And now, obeying canon gives your really sweet, loving story a tragic end, but you still manage to pull it up a tiny bit. In the end we all die, but we can hope that the ones we leave behind find peace.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
This was very much my salute to "everyman," the people who do all the little things that make the world go round. They may not live incredible lives, but they're heroes all the same. I'm glad you saw that in the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the beautiful review!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful tale of love with us.I have still tears in my eyes. *sigh*
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for being so enthusiastic and supportive. I have really felt the love. I'm sorry to see the end of this story, myself.
There, now you have done it. You made me cry with this chapter.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
The only reason I didn't cry with this chapter is that I actually wrote it when I was also working on chapter 8 or 9. When I re-read it to edit for posting on TPP, I did tear up.When I read the one line in DH about Ted leaving and then later about his death, he was just a statistic. He became a person to me when I worked on this story and I'm not entirely happy with myself for allowing that to happen.I hope you cried in a good way, if there is such a thing. Thank you for the review!
Yes, children are the best medicine there is :-)I think Ted is seeing his own story reversed in his son. He will go to a Muggle school, live in the Muggle world and will loose touch with his family - just like he did.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Losing touch with the Wizarding world wasn't such a bad thing in those days, unfortunately. Everyone was so sure that Auntie Bella would get Tim, but I couldn't do that to Andromeda. Instead, he just fades from the picture.Thanks, again!
So many nice details in this chapter!Of course the Nymphadora/Remus scene made me giggle.That Cygnus and Orion killed Theodore's parents made me furious. And I nearly thought they deserved the kiss.And Narcissa ... a bit self centered, but not evil at last. She has practially saved Birdies life.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you, thank you!Of coure we have no idea how Cygnus and Orion died; just that they both did during the same year.And yes, Narcissa isn't evil, just self-absorbed. Plus, letting Aunt Walburga behead the elf would be wasteful, when she could just make Birdie disappear.
I think Timothy fits in perfectly. I especially liked how Sirius said that the little one seemed a bit flat, as if a spark was missing. A good description.I also liked that you put a good reason behing Sirius leaving his home. If your uncle being poisoned by your parents wasn't a good reason to put distance between you and your family, I haver never seen one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
It seemed to me that this pair might have had more kids but that there must be a reason we never met them. Tim and his situation seemed to be one possible answer to that question.It seemed to me that Sirius would be pretty upset with his family but that leaving them before he was of age would take some extra provocation. We know from the Black family tree that Alphard died around the time Sirius left, so I tied the two together in my mind.Anyway, thank you!
Beautiful story. I actually cried at the ending. Bravo! ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I'm sorry to make anyone cry, but I'm glad if you enjoyed the story.
I was so scared of reading this because I knew what had to happen, but you've handled it beautifully, and highlighted the good moments with Teddy, so it wasn't too sad to enjoy after all. Thank you for this story. Like I said, it's the only other Ted/Andromeda I've ever found.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
They're under-represented, for sure. I haven't seen any stories that cover this part of the canon exactly, but JackieJLH's "Ties that Bind" is a very good look at the Black sisters and Amita's "Riddle in Black" is another POV that's quite dark.Thank you so much for jumping so enthusiastically into my story! I look forward to seeing your develop.
lovely. thank you for all your time and effort - i appreciated it
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I really grew to love this pair and I was miserable to have to bring it to this ending. I'm glad others enjoyed the story, too.
Just found this story, and it's good to read for a change to read something about Ted Tonks and also an earlierera. It moved along at a good pace, and I'm lookingforward to continuing.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I have to admit I wasn't that interested in this pairing untill I really started to think about what Ted must have been like. Now I really like him... maybe too much. ;)
Excellent how you weave Draco's birthday and the prophecy in here!! Narcissa would have heard parts only and exactly not that the parents have had to be LV's enemies. I consider Trixie changing her name atruly wonderful detail! It's these things that bring life into a story. Adding the furry little problem is great, even if a bit more obvious. I'm still a bit confused at Andromeda's patience with living so separated from the world. She doesn't know it's "only" until Hallowe'en the following year. Where is Nymphadora getting primary education? Are Molly and Andromeda helping each other? Eventually their Squib son needs schooling, too. I doubt that he should be exposed to F&G ;-)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Narcissa is the sort of overprotective mother who's nervous about every detail. Even if she knew the line about "thrice defied," she would have figured it could have included the time she served strawberry tart for dessert when the Tedious One wanted apple, LOL. She would have seen other infractions that she and Lucius had committed and come up with three.It stood to reason to me that if Andromeda was Sirius's favorite cousin, Sirius and his friends would be visitors at her house, so Tonks probably met Remus a few times before the first fall.I don't think Andromeda's necessarily patient as much as resigned. She does have Molly to share a cup of tea with from time to time, and when you're raising two small children, there's not much time for anything else, anyway. Elementary schooling for the wizarding children is a bit of a black hole in the canon. You would think they went to the local schools, but if so, they would know a lot more about Muggles, so they must be home-schooled up to the age of eleven.Thanks for such a lovely and thoughtful review!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Severus could have enjoyed N's fear enough to forget intimating this detail. Isn't it far more convenient to have N's gratitude than owing Lucius!?JKR actually explained in an interview that all Weasleys were homeschooled by their mother. Of course, this source isn't perfect canon, and I believe she had to make it up quickly.
Furry little problems, eh? Out of the mouths of six year olds. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Hee hee... I couldn't resist. She's six years old and has no idea what "furry little problems" are, but she wants one of her very own. Thanks for the review!
She's been patient long enough!Nice idea to have the two being more pushed than decisive. they'll get very determined soon, I'm sure! I don't know if it fits to Sirius saying that Andromeda was his favourite cousin, though. I would have assumed he'd liked a rebellish one best. But maybe this is yet to come... let me see...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I was trying to show one way some of these things might have developed. In some ways this Andromeda has to rebel against her self, too. Thanks for the review!
Sad that such tragedies are inevitable. Still, it's so well done. I loved the stuff with Narcissa and Birdie. Remus! A crowning moment for sure :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! There are ways in which I really don't like the rest of this story. JKR was almost as hard on Andromeda as she was on Snape. I really got a kick out of writing the Tonks/Remus part. She knows exactly who she is and what she wants to be, even if she has no idea what she's talking about. ;)
awww....Welcome to the world Baby Tonks!!!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thanks for the review!
Lovely work. I really like Ted and Andromeda and I am always surprised that they aren't written about more often.Very nice start. I like Ted. I'll continue reading this.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I like Ted, too. Once I started to think about him, I decided Ted must be like those many men who go to work, take care of their families and generally keep the world going. They're all heroes in their way.
One really can but wonder, how Andromeda managed to become a person capable of love and kindnes with that mother of hers.Well, well, she knows what she wants, and how to get it.Trixie has fullfilled her transformation to Bellatrix, the Death Eater. Scary.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I had fun giving Andromeda a little bit of an "action" chapter. I think she was able to witness elements of love and kindness in her family. There's Alphard, after all. However, I think she needed to piece it all together, and fortunately she had Ted for that.Bellatrix isn't *quite* there, yet. Some of what Alphard said about shedding pure blood made her stop and think, but she's *most* of the way there.Thank you so much for everything, including that other note you sent me. Featured Story! I'm blushing!
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I've just suggested your story - the other admins agreed to fearure it. It's well deserved.
Sometimes the worth of something becomes clear only when it is thought lost.Wow, what a leap in their relationship!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I think a lot of things came together in her mind just then. She probably remembered what a near miss she had the night they got married, so she understood just how likely a loss could be. I don't think it hurt that he got a bit disgruntled with her. I think they had reached a point where things were starting to just slide along and it wasn't enough. Once she realized it, I think she would go after what she wanted just as her sisters did once or twice in the canon. It's fun to speculate, any way.Thank you, again!
I really like it that Andromeda wasn't shedding all that was ingrained in her through education, just because she married a Muggle-born. The way her opinon on things changes gradually, makes your story very believable.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I can't imagine shedding the upbringing of nineteen years, even if we suspect it's wrong, just in a few weeks. Little things will still come up from time to time, I think. It takes a conscious effort. For the most part, Ted's very patient with her, since he sees she's trying.Thank you for the review!
Finally I have found some time to continue reading your story. And there are a few chapters more to enjoy!It's wonderful to see how they develop their relationship.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I hope that extra free time is spent on life in general. :) I'm honored that you used some of it to read my story. I think in getting married Andromeda entered a new and different world. Suddenly she's mixing with a different group of people. There will be some time of bewilderment and that will be followed by the other adjustments.Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Andromeda's got a backbone made of steel. Good for her negotiating her trust fund with her mother. Good foresight in taking the emeralds as well. If I was her I wouldn't be telling her mother anything about the baby. Looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the review! I think it pays to be prepared when you're a Black. Unfortunately, I think part of her wanted her parents to be happy about her baby, even though she should know better.
What a sweet, wonderful chapter! The way you write the romantic, developing relationship between Ted and Andromeda has quickly made this one of my favorite stories. The Prewett brothers are too funny. You can see where George and Fred Weasley got it from. I was concerned that the story was ending when I saw the chapter title, but was relieved to see it was marked as not completed. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
No, it's not the end, fortunately. I'm glad you're enjoying this... it's a story that really grew on me as I wrote it. It's kind of fun extrapolating what some of these characters must have been like based upon their younger relatives. Thanks for the review, the next chapter is coming soon!
I love the story. Beautiful and tender, exciting and daring. Well thought out. I appreciate that. Thank you, and be encouraged to continue your story telling.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Oh, thank you! You're quite kind. A lot of nifty little things came together to result in this story. I'm glad that the readers enjoy it.