The End of the Beginning
Chapter 9 of 19
Rose of the West“It wasn't a dream, after all. Are you disappointed?”
ReviewedDisclaimer: The characters here and the world they inhabit are the creation and property of JK Rowling and her assigns.
Ted's first thought as he woke was that it was Saturday, and he was glad he wouldn't have to work. Before he even opened his eyes, he became aware that the light in the place he was differed from that of the bedroom in his flat. The bed was different, and the sheets were softer. As he realized that there was a soft form clasped within his arms, it all came flooding back.
He opened his eyes and could only see shades of brown. There was a very pale brown in some places that could almost be called blond, there was a shade of dark chocolate, and it seemed there was every tone of mahogany, coffee, or hazelnut in between. It was relentless, the way her hair had worked itself around his face, between his lips, around his throat, and everywhere else. He raised a hand to extricate himself and gently pushed it back toward its own head.
She stiffened beside him in fear as his motions woke her. She looked up at him warily and then shyly smiled. After that, she slid away from him and pulled the sheet around her as she sat up. She knew he had seen it all in the dark, but it wasn't the same. Her hair tried to settle in a cloud around and in her face, so she pushed it back.
"Good morning," he said.
"Good morning."
"It wasn't a dream, after all. Are you disappointed?"
"No."
He smiled broadly. "Neither am I."
"If it was a dream, I would still be engaged to Rabastan."
"Oh." Of course, their marriage was entirely to keep her out of Lestrange's grasp. He could feel himself going cold.
Her cheeks took on a pink hue as she took a deep breath. "And if it was a dream, I wouldn't have had that incredible experience with you last night."
His blood went flooding back to several places that now became quite warm. "You enjoyed it, then?"
She looked at him shyly. "Yes."
"I'd like to, that is, would you like to, er, what if we..."
She slid closer to him on the bed. "Yes, I would. Like to, that is."
He pushed her hair back and started kissing her. When he tugged at the sheet, she claimed modesty, so he let it go and simply kissed her. There was much he wanted to do and now a lifetime to do it in. With his hands he stroked the outline of her face and slid his fingers into her hair. After a while, he slid his lips to her chin and then her throat.
She held the sheet with one hand as she braced herself on his shoulder with the other. His skin was soft, and she ran her hand all along the one shoulder up to his neck and back. Her actions were a bit mechanical, because Ted was doing something with his lips along her collarbone that made her weak.
By the time his lips moved lower, she grasped his other shoulder with the hand holding the sheet. She moaned as the sheet fell, and Ted availed himself of the opportunity to look at her. Her soft skin was already pink because of his kisses, but she flushed darker under his gaze. He looked at her for a moment and then gently brushed a curl of hair away from her eye.
"Did I say pretty? I was completely wrong. You're beautiful, Andromeda." He bent down and used his fingers and mouth in ways that caused her to arch her back. Her own hands moved around his shoulders to caress and hold his head to her. She kissed the top of his head, loving the silky feel of his hair as it slid between her fingers.
"Oh, Ted," she whispered as a string of words, sighs, and whimpers started to erupt from her. A delicious ache started within her as her body slid against his, looking for something she didn't really understand, yet. Her movements became more intense and her moans more insistent. He reclaimed her mouth as their bodies became one and she moaned more loudly around his lips.
He tried to move slowly, but she was unable. She pushed and slid and arched her body against his. He thought he might regain control when she whispered his name and her legs tightened around him. Control winked at him and left the room. It wasn't long before he was in a place beyond noticing what happened.
They were both breathing heavily. It was all he could do to gently move to her side and put an arm around her middle. "Love you... 'Dromeda..." Did he have the energy to actually say it aloud?
"Oh, Ted, the things you made me feel..."
The next time he awoke, there was a new smell in the room: toast and eggs and tea. Andromeda sat on the love seat at a little table, wrapped in a dressing gown. On her lap was a plate full of breakfast, and her mouth looked all the more delicious for the crumbs scattered on her lips. He sat up. There was a dressing gown for him at the foot of the bed. He tied it on and walked over to his wife. He kissed the crumbs off her lips and she said, "Oh, Ted, really."
He sat beside her and filled his own plate. As he did, he quietly watched her. She was thinking as she had the night before, that pucker between her brows just starting to deepen.
"What is it?" he asked.
"Do you think he would really rather see me dead?"
"Who?"
"Rabastan."
"I don't know. Is that the sort of thing a wizard just says, or do they really mean it?"
"I wish I knew."
He leaned over to kiss that pucker, as he had promised himself he would do if he got the chance, but she backed away from him.
"We should eat our breakfast and perhaps do some things or make plans, before we do any more of that." She looked shyly at the bed.
"That wasn't what I was thinking," he said. "You look so worried. I want to soothe it away." He leaned in and she again leaned away.
"Why shouldn't I be worried?"
"You should be," he acceded. He realized that with the crisis over, she would perhaps be a bit prickly. She probably wasn't used to physical affection. He slid his hand over and placed it on top of hers. Her whole body jumped. After a moment, her hand relaxed and softened under his. He was able to grasp it and slide his fingers between hers.
"I just want to comfort you," he said, "but I don't want to force affection upon you. I'd rather not do something that makes you more uncomfortable."
She looked away. "I'm sorry. I'm horribly new at this, and I'm not used to anyone wanting to just touch me."
He withdrew his hand and started eating. "You're probably thinking that you shouldn't go out in public much, at least for a while?"
She nodded as she looked pensively out the window. "You, too. They might use you to get me to agree to what they want. I know the marriage will be considered valid, now, but I don't know what they will want to do to punish me, besides removing me from the tapestry."
"I'm sorry about that."
"I knew it was coming, and I don't think it would have been a fair trade for touches, but I have to admit it hurts. Suddenly it's like I don't exist any more."
He touched her hand again, and this time she let him. He wrapped his fingers around hers and lifted them to his face, kissing and rubbing her hand against his cheek.
"I shall need to go back to work, but I think we can limit our other exposure." He enjoyed the crunch of the toast and amended his statement. "I will also need to run over to my other flat to pack it up and give up the lease."
"Could I help with that?"
He wiped his mouth and fingers on a napkin and slid his arm around her waist. This time she allowed him to pull her close and even put her head on his shoulder.
"It would be better if you did not. If I were somehow the cause of your death or something else..." He cleared his throat. "I just don't think that's a good idea."
"How will you avoid them catching you? They'll probably be waiting for you at your building."
"I can Apparate directly in and out of my flat. No one else can."
"You can't bring me by Side-along?"
He looked at her. This brought him to the crux of the matter at hand. "Actually, I probably could, but I would rather you not see where I have lived as a bachelor."
"What do you have there you don't want me to see?" she asked, the wrinkle on her forehead growing.
"Nothing at all. I just would rather you not see what a small, run-down place I've been living in."
"Do you think it makes a difference?"
He chuckled. "I'm not entirely sure what to think of you."
"I'm not sure what to think of me, either, but I know I don't want to be away from you."
He sucked in his breath at the implication. "Are you frightened?"
"No, I don't think so. I just want to be with you."
He insisted on pulling her close and kissing the wrinkle away. She let him and started to smile as his lips kissed other parts of her face as well. When he got to her lips, she turned and waved at the table.
"You have some mail. I think it's from the Ministry."
There were two letters on the table. He opened the Ministry scroll and read his boss's terse script:
Tonks,
Congratulations on the marriage. Take the next week off to honeymoon.
Anderson
The second was a bit more:
Tonks,
Heard you got hitched, you dark horse! And that you snatched her out from under VM's nose! You'll have to tell us all the details (and we mean ALL). There's a bit of a write up in the Daily Prophet. You should make sure you read today's issue.
It appears that you may be in for a sticky time. If you could use some back up as you arrange your affairs, let us know.
Gideon Prewett
"Dumbledore must have told them all about the wedding. Gideon's note says they'll help us if we need it."
"Let me come with you. I promise I won't turn to dust at the sight of Muggle things, and I can't imagine that there's anything that can make a difference in how I feel about you."
"How exactly is that?" He regretted the question as it left his lips.
Her face was thoughtful. "You're the person I can trust most in this world. I feel safe when you're near me."
"What about your uncle, or Dumbledore?"
"I've been taught since infancy not to completely trust Dumbledore, and I don't know about Uncle Alphard. I don't know where the line between his family loyalties and anti-loyalties lies. For that matter, I don't know where my line is right now. I don't know if I trust myself."
"I trust you."
"I hope you don't ever regret it."
"Somehow I don't think I will."
Ted saw the newspaper on the table and remembered Gideon's comment about it. He picked it up and started scanning the headlines. "Have you read it?" he asked Andromeda.
"Oh," she answered. "I didn't really notice it was there. I was so hungry..." she blushed when she said it and trailed away.
"Gideon Prewett seemed to think we should read it." Ted paged through the paper until he came to one small item on page four.
Socialite Disappears at Lestrange Soirée
Friends will no doubt be distressed to know that Andromeda Black disappeared from the Lestrange estate last night during an affair to celebrate her engagement to Rabastan Lestrange. According to her fiancé, she was kidnapped from the gardens as the two were taking a stroll to get some air. This reporter has learned that the kidnapper battled Mr. Lestrange to the ground and then copied his features before absconding with the young witch. Ministry officials are looking through the records of known Metamorphmagi as this story goes to press.
"Oh," groaned Andromeda into a cushion. "They won't let it go until he has me back. Society expects me to do who knows what, much of which is illegal or at least flat out wrong. When they discover my marriage to a good, noble wizard, they're going to tear me to pieces."
"You think I'm noble?"
"That was a rather Gryffindor stunt last night."
"Was that a Slytherin who took advantage of it, then?"
"We're trained to recognize a good opportunity when we see it."
"I'm glad that I was a good opportunity."
"I can't possibly tell you everything you've become to me in just one sentence, and it's only been twelve hours, Ted." She looked at the article. "I wonder who all these 'friends' are that they assume I have? My parents' friends, no doubt."
"Hush," Ted soothed her. "You're getting all wrinkly again." To prove his point he used his fingertips and lips to ease the concerns from her face. The tie of her dressing gown had relaxed, and the garment gaped open, proving to be too much of an invitation to ignore.
"Please forgive me, but I can't seem to stop myself," he said.
"Oh... please..." she sighed, twining her arms around his neck. They slid down on the love seat and then fell to the floor as their kisses and caresses became more intense.
Some time later she was heard to sigh, "I'm also greatly enjoying the married parts of our relationship."
"That makes two of us."
Ted needed his clothes quickly, so they sent an owl to Gideon as soon as they finished their breakfast. He owled back that some people were available to help in the early afternoon and gave an indication of where to meet. Ted was reluctant to take Andromeda, but she told him that otherwise she would follow and wait for him at the Leaky Cauldron. He considered that the least safe of the options available and finally consented to bring her with him.
"If there's any sort of fighting, I want you to come straight back here. All right?"
He looked so earnest and worried and cute that she had to agree. "I can handle myself, you know."
He kissed her. "I'm sure you can, but we've been practicing dueling and Magical Defense. We're sure their lot have been, too."
"Who, exactly, is 'we'?"
He shrugged. "Dumbledore has a group of us keeping an eye out, watching some things. That's what I was doing the day I saw you at Florean Fortescue's."
She nodded. "And the day I was fitted for my clothes?"
"Yes. I wanted to come in there and carry you off. Then, when I saw you in your wedding robes... Oh, Andromeda, I never dreamed you'd wear them for me."
"I carried the look in your eyes around with me for days. It was the only way I got through the engagement party."
"Was it?"
"It worked, most of the time. I could think to myself that my real fiancé was just in the other room. It was just when Rabastan was near me, and when that...that wizard wanted to talk to me that I couldn't remember you."
"Voldemort spoke with you?"
"He told me he would help me obtain my heart's desire. Then I thought of you. Somehow he saw you, too. It was as if he looked through my mind to find you, and he knew you're Muggle-born."
Ted came back to one point. "I was your heart's desire?"
She smiled shyly. "Yes, you were."
"Then you're fond of me."
"At the very least."
He pulled her close and kissed her, promising himself that he would do a more complete job when they returned from his apartment.
Andromeda found Ted one of Uncle Alphard's older robes to wear over his own trousers and shirt. She dressed in the least flashy robes she had with her, thinking that her mother would never let her into the family home to pull a few things together. She had considered the possibility that she would leave the Lestrange estate only after she'd been married, and so had her entire trousseau with her, but none of her comfortable clothes had been packed. Somehow, she would have to figure out her wardrobe without costing Ted any money.
They walked, hand in hand, through the front garden and out the gate. Ted pulled her close to Apparate. When they arrived in a dark corner near Diagon Alley, he pulled her closer still and kissed her. "This could become my favorite mode of travel," he said. He kissed her again.
"All right, you two, break it up! Do you think this is your honeymoon or something?" They looked up, startled, to see Fabian Prewett standing near by. He laughed and shook hands with Ted. Then he took Andromeda's hand, pulled her close, and kissed her soundly. She pushed away from him and stood close to her husband, who put his arm around her waist. "Don't worry, Mrs. Tonks, I'm just kissing the bride, you know."
"Oh." She would have felt silly and stupid, except she could tell Ted wasn't completely amused, either.
"Well, then, you'll want to get to your flat, Tonks. We've been watching it since last night. No one's been by, even the Ministry. Of course, Moody's been to help watch, and he's with the Ministry. Maybe he's taken care of that end."
He walked them down a street and over to a building. "I'll wait down here. Gideon is up there with Kingsley."
Ted held Andromeda's elbow as they went up the stairs. They walked down a short hallway and came to his door. As they did, two wizards came from the shadows. Ted pushed Andromeda into the doorway and stood in front of her with his wand out.
"Relax, mate, it's us." He relaxed his stance when he saw that it was Kingsley and Gideon.
Kingsley said, "I didn't get a chance to congratulate you last night, Mrs. Tonks."
"I understand completely," she answered. "Thank you, for the congratulations and also for your quick thinking when it all happened."
"You're welcome. It's what I'm trained to do."
Gideon didn't say anything before he snaked his arm around Ted and pulled Andromeda over to himself. He gave her a smacking kiss before she could push him away. "No offense, just kissing the bride," he said.
"That's what your brother told me," she answered, stepping close to Ted as she had before.
"All right, then," said Kingsley. "We should do this as quickly as possible. We haven't seen anyone around here, but there's no telling for sure. Go ahead and take care of what you need, Ted, and then get back to where ever you're staying. I've been told that under no circumstances are you to leave that place until you go to work next Monday."
"I understand," said Ted. He opened the door to the apartment and followed his wife inside.
"Here it is," he said.
"It's not so bad, really," she answered. "It could do with a good cleaning..."
"Housekeeping is not my strong suit."
"Mine, either," she reminded him. "I'll have to force Bennie to teach me some things." She looked around. "Well, what goes and what stays?"
There wasn't much, although Ted was surprised to find that the detritus of his bachelorhood was more significant than he had believed. Andromeda washed and put away the few dishes, which belonged to the flat, and then went to help him with his clothes. She went through the dresser and removed all of the shirts and pants and laid them on the bed. She came upon his Ollivanders box and looked inside it, wondering if he had more than one wand.
"Ted, why do you have two handkerchiefs in here?"
He came to stand by her. "You'll think it foolish."
"I doubt it."
"Well..." He brought her to sit on an area of the bed that wasn't cluttered. "This clean one is the one I lent you at Hogwarts that day, and this other one is from Florean Fortescue's."
She felt something deep within her shift. "You kept it all that time? I just dropped it in the laundry, figuring the elves would know where it went."
"They did, and I've treasured it since then."
Once again she was struck by just how far back and how deep his feelings for her ran. "Ted, I don't know what to say," she whispered. Her lips looked for his and found them.
A blissful moment later he answered her. "That was exactly the right thing to say."
They managed to pack the things Ted should have immediately in two large suitcases that they could carry that day. The half dozen boxes would be brought by other means. Ted looked around the rooms one last time and then at his wife. "I spent so many lonely hours in this flat, Andromeda, and dreamed that I could have a future with you. I hoped and wished for you, and then I learned about Rabastan Lestrange and I went around for three days in a near panic about you. I'm so fortunate."
"I was in a near panic over Rabastan those same days. I'm fortunate, too."
They kissed again, leaning against the door and holding each other tight. It occurred to them that it had been hours since they had finished their breakfast and gotten dressed.
"We can be much more comfortable elsewhere," he said into her hair.
"Oh, yes, I agree."
Ted opened the door a crack and then opened it wider when he saw the Prewett brothers outside. "All right, then?"
"Yes, it's fine. Moody's downstairs."
Andromeda looked from one to the other of the brothers. "I gather you have done a lot for Ted, and I assume much has involved me. Thank you."
Gideon spoke. "It's fine, Mrs. Tonks. We're glad to help and anything that sticks one in the eye of...well, you know...is our pleasure."
Fabian looked at his watch. "We're going to walk with you back down to the alley. It'll just be a group of friends, running errands together."
They emerged from the building and were met by the much-injured Auror. "Ah, you got a pretty one, Tonks."
Andromeda's face turned pink.
"She's the prettiest witch I've ever spoken with, sir."
She could feel her cheeks blazing red at that.
"You get 'er home, then, and stay 'ere till next Monday. I'll find you at the office an' go over your protection."
"Do we really need it, sir?" asked Andromeda.
"Your father and uncle woke the Minister last night and had half the Auror corps out looking for ye. It's what I'm doing now. The Death Eaters won't be by if they think we're doing their work for them." He winked and pinched her cheek. She should have hated it, but somehow she didn't.
She looked at the three of them and at Ted and remembered Kingsley and Dumbledore, too. Who else had been involved in rescuing her from marriage to Rabastan Lestrange? It was a humbling thought.
"Thank you, Mr. Moody. Thank all of you," she said, looking around and including everybody.
The Prewetts walked them back to the dark corner where they would Apparate. Fabian clapped Ted on the shoulder. "Well, Tonks, try to get some rest, this week."
Gideon added, "We won't be surprised if you don't of course."
Andromeda was just turning when she heard Fabian again. "By the way, do you need any advice?"
Several seconds after she arrived outside their front gate, Ted did. "Was it useful?" she asked.
"Was what useful?"
"The advice they wanted to give you."
"On how to please a witch? I think my method of asking the witch in question works much better."
"Oh?"
"Yes, I had to stop and tell them so." He was rewarded with a smile. "Speaking of which," he continued, "would you mind terribly if, after we got these suitcases inside, I reminded myself what is under your robe? Ah, there's a pretty blush."
"You make me feel attractive," she said simply.
"Let's go then."
They went into the cottage and began their honeymoon in earnest.
A/N: Thank you to beta reader Trickie Woo
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Latest 25 Reviews for The Life and Times of Perseus
72 Reviews | 5.53/10 Average
A beautiful story with such a sad ending. I came across this via 'random story' and I'm glad I did; it's not a relationship I'd considered much, but you depicted it so well - happiness, romance, problems, sadness, basically reality! I also enjoyed the humorous Tonks references scattered in there! I enjoyed the whole thing and had tears in my eyes at the end. I think you also really captured the difficulties of the war, even though A wasn't properly involved, she experienced that people aren't black and White, you can like someone but not trust them etc. Very moving.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you so much! The war wouldn't have necessarily called upon everyone to be like Harry or Dumbledore, but it would have affected every family, for sure. I have to admit that last chapter was one of the hardest I've ever written. I never cry about anything, but I did have some tears in my eyes over it.Some of Tonks's statements while growing up were a lot of fun to inject. I understand how it got to be that way, but in JKR's stories, so many characters act like they never existed even one paragraph before they show up in the canon. It's fun to flesh them out.Thanks again!
Response from Tilly (Reviewer)
I totally agree, though I also think that those gaps are what makes HP fanfic so varied and interesting.
Thank you for a wonderfull story. I seldom get a lump in my throat reading, but this one did it. I loved your portrait of both Andromeda and Ted Tonks and all the other characters you wrote. Now I will go and read the sequel. You are a very gifted reader
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the lovely review! I never thought much about this pair, but I had a plot bunny and then found a challenge for which this was the perfect story, and within three chapters I was madly in love with Ted Tonks. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.
Oh, this is lovely. I've really fallen quite in love with this family as well... I really liked your introduction, of the very usual man, with average skills and normal dreams, because not everyone can be Harry Potter, but everyone can be a certain type of hero. And now, obeying canon gives your really sweet, loving story a tragic end, but you still manage to pull it up a tiny bit. In the end we all die, but we can hope that the ones we leave behind find peace.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
This was very much my salute to "everyman," the people who do all the little things that make the world go round. They may not live incredible lives, but they're heroes all the same. I'm glad you saw that in the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the beautiful review!
Thank you for sharing this beautiful tale of love with us.I have still tears in my eyes. *sigh*
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for being so enthusiastic and supportive. I have really felt the love. I'm sorry to see the end of this story, myself.
There, now you have done it. You made me cry with this chapter.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
The only reason I didn't cry with this chapter is that I actually wrote it when I was also working on chapter 8 or 9. When I re-read it to edit for posting on TPP, I did tear up.When I read the one line in DH about Ted leaving and then later about his death, he was just a statistic. He became a person to me when I worked on this story and I'm not entirely happy with myself for allowing that to happen.I hope you cried in a good way, if there is such a thing. Thank you for the review!
Yes, children are the best medicine there is :-)I think Ted is seeing his own story reversed in his son. He will go to a Muggle school, live in the Muggle world and will loose touch with his family - just like he did.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Losing touch with the Wizarding world wasn't such a bad thing in those days, unfortunately. Everyone was so sure that Auntie Bella would get Tim, but I couldn't do that to Andromeda. Instead, he just fades from the picture.Thanks, again!
So many nice details in this chapter!Of course the Nymphadora/Remus scene made me giggle.That Cygnus and Orion killed Theodore's parents made me furious. And I nearly thought they deserved the kiss.And Narcissa ... a bit self centered, but not evil at last. She has practially saved Birdies life.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you, thank you!Of coure we have no idea how Cygnus and Orion died; just that they both did during the same year.And yes, Narcissa isn't evil, just self-absorbed. Plus, letting Aunt Walburga behead the elf would be wasteful, when she could just make Birdie disappear.
I think Timothy fits in perfectly. I especially liked how Sirius said that the little one seemed a bit flat, as if a spark was missing. A good description.I also liked that you put a good reason behing Sirius leaving his home. If your uncle being poisoned by your parents wasn't a good reason to put distance between you and your family, I haver never seen one.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
It seemed to me that this pair might have had more kids but that there must be a reason we never met them. Tim and his situation seemed to be one possible answer to that question.It seemed to me that Sirius would be pretty upset with his family but that leaving them before he was of age would take some extra provocation. We know from the Black family tree that Alphard died around the time Sirius left, so I tied the two together in my mind.Anyway, thank you!
Beautiful story. I actually cried at the ending. Bravo! ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I'm sorry to make anyone cry, but I'm glad if you enjoyed the story.
I was so scared of reading this because I knew what had to happen, but you've handled it beautifully, and highlighted the good moments with Teddy, so it wasn't too sad to enjoy after all. Thank you for this story. Like I said, it's the only other Ted/Andromeda I've ever found.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
They're under-represented, for sure. I haven't seen any stories that cover this part of the canon exactly, but JackieJLH's "Ties that Bind" is a very good look at the Black sisters and Amita's "Riddle in Black" is another POV that's quite dark.Thank you so much for jumping so enthusiastically into my story! I look forward to seeing your develop.
lovely. thank you for all your time and effort - i appreciated it
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I really grew to love this pair and I was miserable to have to bring it to this ending. I'm glad others enjoyed the story, too.
Just found this story, and it's good to read for a change to read something about Ted Tonks and also an earlierera. It moved along at a good pace, and I'm lookingforward to continuing.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I have to admit I wasn't that interested in this pairing untill I really started to think about what Ted must have been like. Now I really like him... maybe too much. ;)
Excellent how you weave Draco's birthday and the prophecy in here!! Narcissa would have heard parts only and exactly not that the parents have had to be LV's enemies. I consider Trixie changing her name atruly wonderful detail! It's these things that bring life into a story. Adding the furry little problem is great, even if a bit more obvious. I'm still a bit confused at Andromeda's patience with living so separated from the world. She doesn't know it's "only" until Hallowe'en the following year. Where is Nymphadora getting primary education? Are Molly and Andromeda helping each other? Eventually their Squib son needs schooling, too. I doubt that he should be exposed to F&G ;-)
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Narcissa is the sort of overprotective mother who's nervous about every detail. Even if she knew the line about "thrice defied," she would have figured it could have included the time she served strawberry tart for dessert when the Tedious One wanted apple, LOL. She would have seen other infractions that she and Lucius had committed and come up with three.It stood to reason to me that if Andromeda was Sirius's favorite cousin, Sirius and his friends would be visitors at her house, so Tonks probably met Remus a few times before the first fall.I don't think Andromeda's necessarily patient as much as resigned. She does have Molly to share a cup of tea with from time to time, and when you're raising two small children, there's not much time for anything else, anyway. Elementary schooling for the wizarding children is a bit of a black hole in the canon. You would think they went to the local schools, but if so, they would know a lot more about Muggles, so they must be home-schooled up to the age of eleven.Thanks for such a lovely and thoughtful review!
Response from Bettina (Reviewer)
Severus could have enjoyed N's fear enough to forget intimating this detail. Isn't it far more convenient to have N's gratitude than owing Lucius!?JKR actually explained in an interview that all Weasleys were homeschooled by their mother. Of course, this source isn't perfect canon, and I believe she had to make it up quickly.
Furry little problems, eh? Out of the mouths of six year olds. ^_^
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Hee hee... I couldn't resist. She's six years old and has no idea what "furry little problems" are, but she wants one of her very own. Thanks for the review!
She's been patient long enough!Nice idea to have the two being more pushed than decisive. they'll get very determined soon, I'm sure! I don't know if it fits to Sirius saying that Andromeda was his favourite cousin, though. I would have assumed he'd liked a rebellish one best. But maybe this is yet to come... let me see...
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I was trying to show one way some of these things might have developed. In some ways this Andromeda has to rebel against her self, too. Thanks for the review!
Sad that such tragedies are inevitable. Still, it's so well done. I loved the stuff with Narcissa and Birdie. Remus! A crowning moment for sure :D
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! There are ways in which I really don't like the rest of this story. JKR was almost as hard on Andromeda as she was on Snape. I really got a kick out of writing the Tonks/Remus part. She knows exactly who she is and what she wants to be, even if she has no idea what she's talking about. ;)
awww....Welcome to the world Baby Tonks!!!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thanks for the review!
Lovely work. I really like Ted and Andromeda and I am always surprised that they aren't written about more often.Very nice start. I like Ted. I'll continue reading this.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you! I like Ted, too. Once I started to think about him, I decided Ted must be like those many men who go to work, take care of their families and generally keep the world going. They're all heroes in their way.
One really can but wonder, how Andromeda managed to become a person capable of love and kindnes with that mother of hers.Well, well, she knows what she wants, and how to get it.Trixie has fullfilled her transformation to Bellatrix, the Death Eater. Scary.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I had fun giving Andromeda a little bit of an "action" chapter. I think she was able to witness elements of love and kindness in her family. There's Alphard, after all. However, I think she needed to piece it all together, and fortunately she had Ted for that.Bellatrix isn't *quite* there, yet. Some of what Alphard said about shedding pure blood made her stop and think, but she's *most* of the way there.Thank you so much for everything, including that other note you sent me. Featured Story! I'm blushing!
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I've just suggested your story - the other admins agreed to fearure it. It's well deserved.
Sometimes the worth of something becomes clear only when it is thought lost.Wow, what a leap in their relationship!
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I think a lot of things came together in her mind just then. She probably remembered what a near miss she had the night they got married, so she understood just how likely a loss could be. I don't think it hurt that he got a bit disgruntled with her. I think they had reached a point where things were starting to just slide along and it wasn't enough. Once she realized it, I think she would go after what she wanted just as her sisters did once or twice in the canon. It's fun to speculate, any way.Thank you, again!
I really like it that Andromeda wasn't shedding all that was ingrained in her through education, just because she married a Muggle-born. The way her opinon on things changes gradually, makes your story very believable.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I can't imagine shedding the upbringing of nineteen years, even if we suspect it's wrong, just in a few weeks. Little things will still come up from time to time, I think. It takes a conscious effort. For the most part, Ted's very patient with her, since he sees she's trying.Thank you for the review!
Finally I have found some time to continue reading your story. And there are a few chapters more to enjoy!It's wonderful to see how they develop their relationship.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
I hope that extra free time is spent on life in general. :) I'm honored that you used some of it to read my story. I think in getting married Andromeda entered a new and different world. Suddenly she's mixing with a different group of people. There will be some time of bewilderment and that will be followed by the other adjustments.Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Andromeda's got a backbone made of steel. Good for her negotiating her trust fund with her mother. Good foresight in taking the emeralds as well. If I was her I wouldn't be telling her mother anything about the baby. Looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Thank you for the review! I think it pays to be prepared when you're a Black. Unfortunately, I think part of her wanted her parents to be happy about her baby, even though she should know better.
What a sweet, wonderful chapter! The way you write the romantic, developing relationship between Ted and Andromeda has quickly made this one of my favorite stories. The Prewett brothers are too funny. You can see where George and Fred Weasley got it from. I was concerned that the story was ending when I saw the chapter title, but was relieved to see it was marked as not completed. Eagerly looking forward to more.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
No, it's not the end, fortunately. I'm glad you're enjoying this... it's a story that really grew on me as I wrote it. It's kind of fun extrapolating what some of these characters must have been like based upon their younger relatives. Thanks for the review, the next chapter is coming soon!
I love the story. Beautiful and tender, exciting and daring. Well thought out. I appreciate that. Thank you, and be encouraged to continue your story telling.
Response from Rose of the West (Author of The Life and Times of Perseus)
Oh, thank you! You're quite kind. A lot of nifty little things came together to result in this story. I'm glad that the readers enjoy it.