Trekking Together
Chapter 4 of 5
Southern_Witch_69Hermione and Severus see how their lives could be if they take the next steps together.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I'm just playing with characters that J.K.R. created and am getting no Galleons for it.
I'd like to thank my beta for this tale, CocoaChristy.
This is an answer to the Yahoo! Group Potter_Place's How It Could Be Christmas Challenge that was issued by me, Southern Witch 69, and GinnyW.
Hermione's eyes widened in shock as his lips brushed against hers hesitantly. Snape is kissing me! It wasn't an unpleasant thought. She'd felt that he wanted to kiss her before, but he'd abruptly pulled away from her. His desire was not unreciprocated. She'd wanted to feel his lips against hers. Yes, she knew that those were the same thin lips that normally curled into a hateful sneer when he regarded her, but this evening had been different. She supposed she felt differently because he'd helped her at Borgin and Burkes.
Shite! she thought in disappointment. She'd been analyzing things and not paying attention to his kiss. He likely thought that she hadn't intended to respond. His eyes had opened, and he was pulling back.
"Miss Granger, I apologize. I thought... I shouldn't have tried to..." He looked down at their joined hands and tried to tug his away.
"No, please..." she said lamely, trying to think of what to say before he could pull away completely.
"If you don't mind, I'd like my hand back," he said acridly.
Not wanting him to misunderstand, she leaned closer and pressed her lips to his, closing her eyes after making contact. The feel of his thin yet firm lips on hers was exciting... or it would be if he would respond. She opened her eyes and saw that his were wide with shock. She pulled back.
"That went well," she quipped. "Perhaps we should..."
"Try again?" he offered.
"Yes," she said, slightly nervous. She released his hand and looked down at her damp palm. "Whoops." She carefully wiped it on her robes before bringing it up to cup his jaw. Slowly, she inched closer, tilting her face up to meet his descending lips. Hermione smiled as she felt the palm of his hand against her cheek. Her eyes closed once again as their lips met, but this time, she could feel the spark of reciprocation.
Severus pressed two consecutive kisses upon her lips before nibbling on her lower lip. Enjoying the feel of his tongue and teeth, Hermione parted her lips to emit an appreciative, light moan. He immediately deepened their kiss, his tongue moving to tangle with hers and explore her mouth. Of their own volition, her hands moved over his body. The one cradling his face moved behind his head to hold him firmly to her, and the other one slid around his waist to caress his back.
Hermione's stomach tingled, and she couldn't help being fascinated by the man kissing her. His kiss was not too bold; it was simply perfect. The hand cupping her face tenderly made her heart warm while the hand that had found its way to rest just below one of her breasts made her heart beat more wildly. The fresh, clean scent of the soap or cologne he used was quite pleasant and made her want to move closer. Even the feel of his warm nose against her cheek was welcoming. As their kiss continued, faces moving as their passion deepened, she felt her body heating and knew that she could feel something more for him if they ever got to know each other better. Flooing him on those lonely nights would definitely be better than Flooing Ron... not that Ron is all that bad, she mused. But... oh... my.
His thumb was softly caressing her breast through her robes, causing her nipple to harden and sending jolts of feeling through her. If she didn't put a stop to things soon, she'd not have the will to do so. She pulled back slightly, breaking off their kiss with a chaste brushing of her lips against his. Hermione noticed that he seemed disappointed that she'd halted things, but she also saw the need in his eyes. He wanted her. The best part of that was the type of want that it was. Instinctively, she knew that he, too, would like the chance to get to know her better and maybe have something more. The hot kiss they'd just shared was a testament to the attraction they apparently both felt.
"Well... that was interesting," she said, smiling reassuringly.
"Certainly," he agreed. His dark eyes darted to her lips once more, and he moved closer to press another kiss against them. He then pulled her closer, resting her head on his shoulder as he propped his chin atop her head. "Perhaps we should be careful."
Hermione wondered if he meant that they should be careful to not get carried away and end up shagging, only to have regrets, or if he meant that they should be careful to not fall in love, which could be disastrous for the both of them should it not work out. Only slightly confused by her sudden attraction and the strengthening tenderness she felt for him, she said, "I can be careful if you can."
"While that is an interesting conversation you are having there," the old man from the portrait began, "I do have a tea appointment with friends shortly."
Glaring scornfully, Severus said, "Get on with it then." He moved away from her and sat as he had been the entire night.
She wondered if he was simply embarrassed at being caught in the act of snogging by the portrait's occupant or if he was having regrets. "Severus, are you... upset?"
He gave her a sideways glance and shook his head. "Just anxious to be free of him and this place."
"I see," she said, pursing her lips tightly. So it was the latter. He was regretting their lapse of judgment. While miffed, she could live with his decision, but she would always wonder what could have been.
The twinkling eyes of the old, wizened man in the portrait met hers. "You'll not have to wonder long, Hermione," he said quietly, turning to take his seat to watch the unfolding events with them.
Snape leaned closer. "What did he mean by that?"
"Shhh," she said, nodding at the canvas.
"You look lovely this evening, Hermione," Severus said appreciatively as he helped her put her cloak on.
"Thanks," she said, turning to kiss his cheek. "And you look quite dashing." She looped her arm with his. "Where are we going tonight?"
"I thought we might venture to the Greengrass Pub in Diagon Alley."
Hermione smiled. "All right." She stopped. "Look, Severus, you don't have to do this if you aren't ready for it. We can go to Muggle London together."
"No, it's been a while for us, and I think it's time that everyone else knows about it," he said, albeit uncertainly.
"If it's what you truly want," she said with a nod. "I am perfectly content to carry on as we have been and don't want to pressure you."
"Oh, good grief," Hermione said, scoffing. "What's the damn big deal?"
"Apparently, I am not comfortable with being seen with you publicly," he pointed out. "See the trepidation in my eyes?"
"Well, why go then?" she asked with a shrug. "It's perfectly clear that I don't care if we stay in or go someplace inconspicuous."
"Maybe you don't want to be seen with me," he commented.
"If I was worried about something as stupid as that, I would not have come to you today and asked you to have coffee with me in," she gasped for effect, putting her hand on her chest, "a public place."
"Touché," he said.
"Not everyone thinks lowly of you, Severus."
He pointed to the screen. "Apparently, most do," he said bitterly.
The girl looked down to the book before her and shrugged. "No, sorry. Really. There is no reservation for Snape at this time."
"How long will it take before something is open?" Severus asked, eyes narrowing in suspicion.
"We're quite booked," she said firmly.
Suddenly, Hermione snatched the book from the girl, waved her wand over the pages, and thrust the book back into the girl's face. "We will be seated... right now."
"You can't just..."
"I just did," she said threateningly. "And if I find out what arse placed a hex on our reservation time so that it wouldn't show on the pages, I'll make his or her life miserable."
"Right this way," the harassed witch said, showing them to a table near an enchanted window. She conjured two menus and placed them on the table. "I apologize for what happened," she said. A quick flick of her wand produced two wine glasses and a chilled bottle of red wine. "Please accept this as a token of our regret."
"Thank you," Hermione said civilly to the girl as Severus helped to push her chair in. Once he sat down, she reached across the table and squeezed his hand. "I'm sorry."
"It's not your fault. It's clear that I am not wanted here," he said. "I've learnt to live with that and the fact that people will never accept me openly, but I despise the fact that I am now tainting you."
"You are my choice, and I wouldn't want things any other way," she said before bursting into laughter. "Actually, I would want things to be different... things with you and how you're seen. And I shall have it, because their grudges will fade in time." She winked. "Until then, sir, I am afraid that you are stuck with me, and I am happy to be defiled by you in any way you see fit."
"Is that so?"
"Oh, yes, most definitely."
"I'll not have some woman fighting my battles for me," he groused.
"You were just standing there glowering at her, and you would have turned on your heel to walk away rather than demanding respect," Hermione countered. "That's not the Severus Snape I know!"
"You don't know me, girl," he bit out.
"But I plan on it, and if you want me to stick around, you'd better buck up."
"Who says that I even want you to remain in my life?" he retorted sharply.
Hermione's mouth opened and closed. He was right. He'd not said that. Not in so many words anyway. She leaned closer and pressed her lips to his for a quick kiss. Pulling back, she said, "Don't deny that you felt something, too, when we kissed."
Lowering his voice, he asked, "Do you know how long it has been since I've been with a woman?"
Cheeks reddening, she shrugged. "I don't care about that."
"That's not what I mean," he said, facing her and gazing at her intently. "I am but a man...one who has long been without and would accept what is freely given." He smirked when she blanched. "Exactly. Don't read any more into what we did than necessary."
Hermione wiped her tear-streaked face and accepted the cool cloth from Severus, who knelt before her. "I know that must have been hard for you," he murmured.
"I can't believe that Harry and Ron ganged up on me like that and demanded that I make a choice," she said, obviously heartbroken. "I would never do that to either of them." She sniffed. "Ron confided in me the other day that he fancies Luna. I wanted to tell him how happy I was for him and that I knew how he felt because I had you." She laughed ruefully. "I should have known that they'd be like this. I mean, it's been years now since that night, and they saw the memory in the Pensieve. Why can't they just accept things and move on?"
Severus moved to sit next to her and held her close. "I understand," he said quietly, "and I refuse to hold this against you. However, I will always resent and hate them... even more so."
"What do you mean? Understand what?" she asked, pulling back to meet his gaze.
"Will you not follow their advice and choose to end things with me?" he asked.
"God, no, Severus, I love you!" She closed the gap between them and squeezed him tightly. "I won't let them bully me into making the biggest mistake of my life."
"Do you truly love me?"
"Yes, you should know that." She smiled and placed a few kisses upon his face.
"You've never said it before." He shrugged. "I was uncertain."
"Well, I'm certain that you love me, though you've not said it." Her smile faltered. "Don't you?"
"I do," he admitted, rising and walking over to the mantle where he collected a small box from a vase. He made his way back to her and got down on bended knee. "I was going to give this to you after dinner out in the park, but they cornered us before we could get there." He opened the box, revealing a lovely gold ring with a large diamond surrounded by a couple of clusters of smaller diamonds. "It fits into another ring, but that one stays hidden until our marriage." He took her hand. "Will you do me the honor of being my wife?"
Tears were flowing from her eyes again, and she nodded. "I will." Once he placed the ring on her finger, and it sized itself, she looked at her hand for a moment, moving it so the light could reflect on her ring. "It's beautiful."
"As are you."
"I'm quite happy," she said, pulling him to her for a kiss.
"Oh, how lovely," Hermione said, wiping her eyes.
"What the...?" Snape asked, looking at her in confusion. "Why are you crying?"
She shook her head, not trusting her voice. So Harry and Ron had tried to force her to give him up, eh? That'll be the day, she thought stubbornly.
"I would expect nothing less from Potter or Weasley." He studied her for a moment. "I am surprised that you didn't side with them."
"Severus, I'm capable of making my own decisions...good or bad." She scooted closer. "If I would choose to be with you," she held up a hand, "and if you would choose to be with me, then nobody could change my mind." She elbowed him. "And they'd better not be able to change yours."
He shook his head. "I don't know that I could get through a day with you without throttling you. You never keep silent!" He raised an eyebrow. "However, I suppose I could come up with some method of shutting you up."
She followed his gaze and blushed immediately. It seemed that their counterparts were beginning to enjoy each other's bodies. "I'll bet you could," she mumbled. When sparks of desire shot through her body, she shivered slightly. "Good Lord."
"I call that good sex," he quipped.
"With good company," she added.
"Agreed."
The portrait's Hermione moaned and said, "That feels good. Oh, yesssss. Don't stop. Don't stop. Just... like... that." Her lover was thrusting into her rapidly and forcefully while she arched and bucked against him.
Hermione slyly peeked at Snape. He seemed to be enjoying what he saw. She leaned over and whispered into his ear, "I should be utterly embarrassed right now."
"Are you not?"
"Strangely, no," she admitted, eyes lingering on his lips for a moment. "In fact..." She bit her lip nervously.
Severus turned to face her and placed both of his hands on either side of her head to guide her face to his. There was nothing languid about the kiss. Both were completely aroused after seeing how well their counterparts fit together, and the couple on the portrait hadn't finished, so their groans and gasps could still be heard.
"If we don't stop now," Severus said minutes later between kisses, "we'll be doing that right here on this settee."
"I know," she said breathlessly, marveling at their new position. Somehow, he'd pushed her to sprawl back against the seat of the settee and was half lying over her, one knee between her thighs and the other leg on the floor for leverage.
He smirked. "I know as in stop... or?"
"Stop, I think." She sat up when he moved off of her. "For now."
"Very well."
"So... What do you think of that?" She pointed to the post coital positions of their portrait selves, who were currently talking and caressing each other.
"I do not know what to think of any of this," he said honestly. "We've no idea who the man in the portrait is or how he knows us. This could very well be some... trickery."
"For all we know, it could be real," she said. "I even hope that it is."
"Is that so?"
"Well, yes," she asserted. "How many people get the chance to see how their lives would likely turn out or how it could turn out?"
"According to Trelawney..." he began.
"Oh, rubbish. I don't want to hear anything about that woman. Stop jesting. I'm being serious."
"I cannot explain this, and that is what bothers me," he said. "What are they doing there?" he said, expression darkening.
She looked to the portrait and saw Harry and Ron speaking with her at what appeared to be her wedding reception. "It looks like they've come round to our way of thinking." She grinned. "I knew they would." She laughed as the portrait Severus came over and glared at her friends, yet he greeted them all the same. "And look who is being civil!"
"Only because it's our wedding day," he conceded. "Otherwise, I would hex the little arses for daring to show their faces."
"Oh, right," she said mockingly. "Whatever you say."
Harry nodded. "Yes, I suppose I could show you." He looked around. "Let's go to the corner there."
Severus said, "Very well." He looked to Hermione. "I shall only be a moment."
"All right." She watched them go and turned to find Ron staring at her. "What?"
"All this time... it's been him, hasn't it?"
"Yes."
"So you couldn't see me anymore because he was the one you'd started seeing," he surmised.
"That's right." She put her hand on his shoulder. "It wouldn't have been fair to him or to Luna for us to carry on."
"I just can't believe that you chose him over me," he admitted. "I guess that's why I was so upset when Harry and I saw you with him. I don't hold the grudge on him that Harry does, but it still smarted all the same."
"Things are as they should be. We can't change anything." She smiled beatifically. "He makes me happy, Ron. Truly."
Nodding, he said, "I can see that now. So long as he's treating you right, you'll get no complaints from me."
"Weasley matures before Potter. Interesting," Severus said snidely. "I would have thought the sidekick would have waited to see how his mentor thought before making his decision."
"Oh, enough. You'll have to learn to accept them one day," she pointed out.
"You keep speaking as if you and I will continue this after we leave here," he said in annoyance. "I don't know that I appreciate your presumptuous way of thinking."
She reached over and took one of his hands in hers. "You nearly shagged me on this settee. I think that is a pretty good indication of the attraction we feel for each other. We would be mental to not explore that... at least a little."
He didn't reply.
Severus waved to Madam Rosmerta. "Hello, Bess," he said cordially.
"Oh, it's been so long since I've seen you," she said happily. "What can I do for you?"
"I'd like to do a bit of stocking up if you don't mind. A month's supply of your finest should do," he said, pulling some coins from his coin purse.
"How is married life treating you?" she asked.
"I am pleased," he returned, expression hardening. "Why do you ask?"
"Only pleased?" she pushed.
"Very pleased," he said firmly. "My wife is expecting."
"Oh," she said, straightening up. "I'm happy for you, Severus." She smiled. "At one time, I'd hoped that you and I could have something together, but you never came round. Just knowing that your life has turned about for the better makes me happy."
"I appreciate that." Severus looked around and noticed that some people still looked upon him warily. "Not many people feel that way." He smirked. "Not that I give a damn."
"You tell your wife she'd better treat you right, or I'll have to rescue you," Bess said good naturedly. "Let me set things right. You wanted them Flooed in?"
"Yes, please."
"She's quite pretty," Hermione said softly.
"Meaning?"
"Meaning... How could you have turned that down when you knew you would be coming home to me?"
He lifted her chin with the fingers of his free hand. "You are very beautiful, Hermione. I suppose I would be lucky to have you waiting at home for me."
She smiled. "Thanks." Her cheeks heated. "How did that make you feel? Hearing that I would be having your child?"
"Surreal."
"Have you ever wanted children?"
"No," he answered curtly. "You?"
"At some point, yes, I'd planned on a family, but I thought I needed to situate myself first...career-wise and financially."
"And now?"
"I have a career, and my finances are in good standing." She looked away. "I wish I could share some of my projects with you, but I can't, being an Unspeakable. However, when I heard about that ring, I wanted to do something on my own." She kissed the fingers of the hand she was still holding. "I'd bet that we could work on it together and have results sooner."
"Severus!" Hermione called. "Look!" She pointed to the little one on the mat near her feet. "We'll have to ward everything to make certain she can't hurt herself."
"Is she starting to crawl?" he asked in surprise.
"Yes."
"That's ahead of schedule. The book I read said that she wouldn't start crawling for another three weeks or so," he stated.
"What rubbish! You might as well throw that in the dustbin. They have no idea exactly when each child will develop and do something. It all depends." She smiled at their daughter. "Come on, Keira. Come to Mummy and Daddy."
When she finally reached them, Severus picked her up and kissed her cheek. "I'm so proud of you," he said to her and handed her to his wife. "I want you both to see this," he added. He pulled something from his pocket and used his wand to expand it to normal size.
"A book?" Hermione asked, holding back a laugh and raising an eyebrow. "She's quite bright, I'm certain, but I'm sure that she can't read, Severus."
He turned the book about to face her, and she gasped. "That's right," he said. "The manual copies are being printed, and a set will be ready next week. After that, we can go to the Ministry for presentation."
"So it seems we do work together on your project," he commented.
"Do you think it's wise to write a book about it though?" she asked doubtfully. "You saw how Malfoy acted in that other scene. That might be something that he can't wait to get his hands on!"
"I do not believe we'd be stupid enough to print how we developed our own line of Time-Stopping pendants, rings, or what have you, but I wouldn't think that writing a manual stating how to use it and outlining all the effects, rules, and such would be amiss. It seems that we did to go to the Ministry for approval of the project." He smirked. "I don't doubt that they would approve such an object, and they'd likely try to incorporate it somehow."
"Especially since the Time-Turners were smashed back in my fifth year of school."
"Haven't they been working to fix that?" he prodded. She simply nodded and smiled mysteriously. "Ah, you cannot divulge such information."
"Right," she said and looked back to the portrait. "She's beautiful, isn't she?"
"I have to agree."
Hermione saw the soft expression on his face as he watched his counterpart with his family. She longed to give that to him one day. He deserved it. As a matter of fact, she deserved it as well. She'd only been working her life away, occasionally shagging Ron. Why couldn't she have a husband to come home to? Someone to share her nights with and keep her company? Why couldn't she be a mother? The only question was: Could this man be the one for her?
Hermione rubbed Harry's back comfortingly. "She'll come round, Harry. Trust me."
"Since Daniel was born, she's been this way, wanting her own room," he said in frustration. "I've been thinking about doing some... terrible things. I know that I won't, but it's there in my mind."
"Have you told her how much it's truly affecting you?"
"God, no! Not lately anyway. She just doesn't want to hear it. We argued about it when Daniel was about a year. I wanted to... have sex, and she wouldn't do it. I pointed out that we'd only messed around a handful of times since he'd been born, and she simply said that she needed more time."
Hermione nodded. "Is that when she moved to her own room?"
"Yes, I guess she thought I was pressuring her. I came home the next day, and she'd set up a room on the other side of the nursery, saying it was easier to access him during the night." He shrugged helplessly. "I went to her a few nights per year after that...usually after we'd been out and had a few to drink. However, the last time she came to me of her own volition was for about three weeks straight nearly two months ago. When she found out she was pregnant, she started sleeping in her own room again. It's like she came only to conceive."
"And now you feel used."
"I love her, but I don't know if I can live like this."
Severus strolled into the room. "Are you talking to my wife about your sex life, Potter?"
Harry stood and ignored her husband. "I'm sorry, Hermione. I'll be going."
"No, Harry, wait. Maybe Severus can help." Both husband and friend looked horrified. She pulled Harry back down and motioned for Severus to sit. "Harry was explaining about Ginny's behavior since she had Daniel. It seems that she is uninterested in bedroom activity. She doesn't like to talk to him about it."
Severus nodded. "Hermione had an aversion after she birthed Keira. We were able to discuss things, and we discovered that sometimes a woman's hormone levels change, causing certain aversions or even leading to depression." He smiled at his wife. "In Hermione's case, a week of daily potions helped to right her imbalance, and she was able to take control of herself again."
"Right," she agreed. "I did some reading on it, and sometimes it takes more than that. Would you like to read that book?"
"Yes," Harry said, seeming to feel more comfortable about the situation. "If I read this and talk her into seeing someone, could you help to make the potion?"
"I could," Snape replied.
Hermione didn't have the heart to point out that the potion was available at any Apothecary. It was nice of her husband to not mention it either. It seemed that he and Harry were able to get on better as of late. She was glad that Harry's marital problems could be discussed openly.
Severus chuckled. "I wonder if that's the tale he gave you the first time round that made you pity him."
"Ending with our affair..." She sighed. "I've never thought of Harry that way."
"And you never shall. He'll not be touching my wife," he said menacingly while looking at the Harry in the portrait as if he could hear the threat.
"Of course he won't," she said, not pointing out that he considered her to be his future wife already.
He turned to her, intent on telling her something, but he paused upon hearing Lucius Malfoy's voice. They both looked back at the portrait.
"You have such a happy little family," Lucius said. "I am thankful for you, my friend."
"Is that so?" Severus asked.
"I am here on business."
Severus nodded. "I didn't think it was simply a friendly visit. What do you need?"
"Ah, well, I do have a favor to ask of you," he stated. "I am quite interested in product that you developed for the Ministry."
"That was my wife's work. I simply assisted her," Severus said.
"Yes, of course, you did," Lucius said condescendingly. "However, your pretty little wife doesn't owe me anything while you, on the other hand, do."
"And what is it that you think I owe you, Lucius?" Severus asked, sneering at the man. How dare he venture to his home and demand things!
"You are a free man today because I lined Scrimgeour's pockets with extra Galleons."
"Interesting," Severus said in a bored voice. "I thought that I had a trial and was acquitted. Why, there was even proof that I was forced to partake in what I did... by Dumbledore himself."
"You know as well as I that would never have been enough," Lucius drawled. "I only need one, Severus. I'm certain you could see to it that one comes to me unnoticed."
"I could, yes," he said, and when the man's smile broadened, he added, "but I will not."
"You owe me..."
"Absolutely nothing," Severus finished for him. "You've not been a true friend to me in many years. There is always a price. Well, I'm telling you today that I will never aid you in any way that would be deemed unfit."
Lucius stood. "I see." He nodded. "I will not hold this against you, Severus. I can still get what I want without your help. I was simply trying to go about it in an easier and less costly way."
"He's such an arrogant arsehole," Hermione said. She patted Snape on the back. "You did well to stand up to him. You owe him nothing. Even if he did pay the Minister a little extra to sway the Wizengamot, we still gave testimony about what we saw." She smirked. "Even Harry Bloody Potter couldn't deny what he saw."
Severus nodded. "I suppose you are right. We shall never truly know."
A cough drew their attention back to the portrait. "Have you seen enough?" the man asked kindly.
Hermione answered, "Yes, I'd say so, but please, could you tell us who you are?"
"One who cares, Hermione." His eyes left her and moved to Severus. "Be good to her, Severus, and be good to yourself. Live a little, my boy. It's time." With that, the canvas went blank.
"Do you smell that?" she asked. "It smells like lemon candy." Severus said nothing, simply nodding in agreement and paling slightly. "Are you all right?" She had her suspicions about the man in the portrait, but she dared not speak of them to Severus. He might think her to be mad.
"I'll be fine." He stood. "Come. Let's get you home."
She accepted his hand and stood next to him. Before he could step away, she pulled him to her in a hug. "Thank you for staying with me."
"I am glad that I stayed."
"Will you have that Christmas dinner with me tomorrow?" she asked hopefully.
His lips lifted up slightly in a small smile. "I shall."
"And will you spend the next day with me?"
"Mmmm," he affirmed, touching the side of her face with his knuckles.
"And Boxing Day?"
"Mmmm." His thumb traced her lips.
"Well, you know," she pushed, "you might as well stay the entire Yuletide with me."
"That I cannot do," he said apologetically.
"Oh... well, all right. I won't force you."
"I've things to do at my home," he said, pulling her closer. "However, that doesn't mean that you couldn't come there, and we could continue to... get to know each other in my home."
"That, Severus, sounds as if it could be lovely."
"I guarantee it."
Southern's Notes: I have a very small epilogue to add. I'll do that shortly. I hope you've all enjoyed this tale. I know that the deadline for the final chapter was Christmas Day, but my beta and I were both caught up in other things. I do apologize. Cheers.
Christy's Notes: Lovely! I love how he got caught up and started acting like they were already together!
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Wow! I thought i'd read all your FFs, but i guess i was wrong. So glad you had this epilogue,.. otherwise I wouldn't know hidden kudos rightly belong where! :D
Awww... so wonderful! :D Thanks for writing this story. I know you've an epilogue coming which is even more wonderful, but i have enough thanks spilling over! ^_^
"“Perhaps I can see if your breasts need further development, eh?”" hahaha :D This chapter was painful to read. As a writer, you have succeeded! I just wonder about her future with Lucius?
My gods! How much spying did go on to get that much dirt on Hermione? Her's was much more salacious. Severus' was rather pathetic. I guess he would be more embarrassed by being pathetic than salacious. Men have their pride and women their virtue. Isn't that a bunch of bullshit? It's totally wrong that men can screw anything that holds still and women can't even think about it. It should be a woman's pride and a man's virtue. Oh, yea, it's a woman's pride and her virtue. It's just a man's pride. They aren't expected to be virtuous.
Now how did Dumblebutt get the dirt on Snape and Bess? Was it all made up, or did D know that Snape knew that Bess would have loved to love him?
Why go with Hermione rather than with Bess? She's a good woman. I guess it's because Hermione wouldn't take his crap and Bess would, you think? Hermione would hex him if he made her feel the way the Portrait Bess was feeling. And how did Dumbledore know about Harry and and Ginny? I know they helped Severus and Hermione, but they sure have betrayed a lot of people's privacy and trust to do it. I suppose that since it's for a good cause, eaves dropping, being a peeping tom and gossip are acceptable. Well, of course we know Dumbledore thinks so. Thank you for the happy ending. Now for the MA (NC 17) version. I know you can.
Yesssss!!!!
The focus is clearly on Hermione and Severus, but I also wonder how Ron and Harry could use her like that and feel no remorse. She clearly didn't hold a gun to their heads. I guess they figure they are doing her a favor at the time, eh? She's a slut and they are what?
It looks like Ron pursued Hermione, I would like to know who made the first move with her and Harry. Just like a guy to get caught, isn't it? Then the chick takes the fall.
If I was Ginny I wouldn't want her around either, but I wouldn't keep Harry around any more than Hermione. They both betrayed her, but Harry took vows to honor and cherish her. His betrayal goes deeper, yet apparently he isn't held to the same level of guilt.
I don't see why the Weaselys don't hate Harry for what he's done to Ginny too. He probably lied and said she had cast some kind of spell on him.
At least Severus won't think she is too stuck up to mean it when she invites him for dinner now.
But if they get together, will he wonder if she is being faithful? I suppose he see's Hermione as a poor loner who couldn't get laid by anyone else but Harry and Ron and she only did it because she was lonely and desperate.
I'm giving it 5 on the assumption that things improve for these two and that's the point of the movie.
Brilliant!! This is the second Christmas challange I have read, and they are both wonderful!!
The entire bit where Hermione and Severus are watching their lives play out could have been a Twilight Zone episode. I started getting a creepy vibe as soon as he went back to Diagon Alley with her. It was original and interesting. I think it’s cute that the portraits conspired to bring them together. Thank you for an enjoyable story.
I do so like these little 'see into the future' tales. It was a nice challenge to be put forth. As always, nicely written.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Thanks. I think these kinds are so fun. I wish there would be more to read. I'll have to do some searching one day!
Oh SW I adored this. It was very cleverly done.Thank you so very much for writing it.Hugs you, Sonia :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
~waves~ Thank you so much for reading, my dear. :)
lovely story!i felt sad for them at times...
Excellent story, I loved every bit of it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Thank you very much for reading. :)
This story was soo sweet, SW! I loved it! Perfect story to read over the holidays! SD
aaaawwwww! Now we are getting to the thick of things....yaaahoooo,on with the fic.! Great job btw, I am really enjoying this. ;)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Thanks so much for reading. I'm happy you like it. :)
Turn about really is fair play huh. I really can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Ebanizzer Scrouge, eat your heart out! Watch out for the ghost of the future, he's gunna show you things you might really not want to see or believe of yourself. I really love this Cant' wait to read more. ps. I'm not quite sure how to spell scrouge's first name but what the heck, I took a shot at it. ;)
Hmm. Austrina... Southern... coincidence?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Teehee! You are the first one to notice that. *sends chocolates!*
Wonderfully romantic. I love your slow transition of Sev's character, very believable. Can't wait for your epilogue.
That really is very sweet. I can't wait for the epilogue. -- B
lovely, simply lovely. the fact that albus can't stop meddling even from beyond the grave tickles me. i shall anxiously await the epilogue.
Yay! What a lovely chapter. I figured Harry and Ron would have a problem with them being together, but I'm glad it wasn't too horrible on Hermione.I'm looking forward to the epilogue.
I'm right on the edge here, wondering what Lucius will do to try to wreck Severus' life. They don't know what he will do, and they're leaving before the painting can show them. Eeks!!
Lovely... More, please! ~Lotm
Looks like you have another winner here! I'll be keeping up. How very interesting a premise!
mas, por favor...