The Wrong Path
Chapter 2 of 5
Southern_Witch_69Hermione and Severus view how things could be for her if she doesn?t change.
ReviewedDisclaimer: I've snatched some of J.K.R.'s characters and am having some fun with them. No royalties are forthcoming, as it's just a bit of fun.
I'd like to say thanks to my beta for this tale, CocoaChristy! And I'd like to send a big thanks to Charmed Nay, my usual beta, for going through this when she had time.
This is in response to the How It Could Be Christmas Challenge over at Potter Place (issued by me with help from GinnyW). Details are at the end of the chapter.
Hermione smiled as she watched the future version of herself scribbling away on a parchment. So far, it had only portrayed her as doing research and casting charms on the ring she'd just acquired at Borgin and Burkes.
"That's not so bad," she said to Snape, shrugging. "I don't see what the big deal is."
"Shhh," said the old shopkeeper from the portrait.
"Yes," Snape agreed sourly. "Stop that infernal chattering." He nodded towards the screen. "What have we here? Could it be a late night tryst with Weasley?"
Hermione's head snapped around as she watched Ron coming through her counterpart's grate.
Dusting his robes off as he moved forward, Ron said, "Well, I knew you'd lied to us. You just didn't want to come out. All you do now is stay here and work on your ruddy research." He pointed at the offending quill in her hand. "Don't you care about us any longer? What happened to Friday night drinks with the gang? It's been weeks since you've come. You promised," he whinged. "Looks like you'd prefer to have your time spent here." He smirked. "I know something else that you can wrap that hand around."
"Bugger off, Ron," Hermione said impatiently. "I'm tired. I've not slept in three days. After I write this last entry, I'm off for a bath and bed."
He pulled his robes over his head quickly and began fumbling with his clothing. "Sounds like I'm just in time then."
"Wait," she said, putting her quill aside and standing resolutely. "We can't keep doing this, you know. You're dating Luna!"
"Mmmm," he agreed, bringing his lips to the side of her neck.
"Speaking of which," Hermione said, stepping away from him. "Where is she?"
"I just brought her home. Thought I'd stop in to give you a talking to," he said huskily, one hand sliding down to cup a breast while the other grabbed her arse and pulled her body against him. "Just one more time. We'll stop after tonight."
"All right," she agreed, crushing her lips to his for a brief, passionate kiss. "One last time."
Hermione's face burned brightly as she watched her counterpart and Ron snog heavily. She felt Snape's eyes upon her and turned to gaze at him. "What?" she asked in annoyance.
"So... Weasley is dating another?" he asked casually, eyes glinting with calculation.
She was not fooled. She could see his pathetic attempts at keeping his lips set in a grim, even line. "Well, they've only just started dating!" she said defensively. "He and I have been separated for a long while, but that doesn't mean that we can't get in a good shag when we need one."
"Oh, indeed," he said, smirking. "Indeed. And I suppose that since he's started seeing this other woman, you've called things off now." He nodded to the portrait. "That's not likely going to happen, the continued fraternization... or is it?"
She looked away and mumbled, "Only once since they've become official, but we decided to stop. We agreed just the other night." Facing him again, she raised an eyebrow, "You seem quite interested, Professor."
"Yes, of course," he said blandly. "I find your sex life fascinating. Why, I've been waiting for years to learn of it."
"I'll bet!" She laughed nervously. "Honestly, though, there is no way that I would continue on with it. This is just some... trickery!"
Even as she spoke the words, she turned back to the portrait and saw that its screen had another scene playing out. She grinned as she recognized Ginny and Harry greeting her at the Burrow.
Harry hugged Hermione. "Mione! It's been so long."
"Oh, I know! I'm sorry." She moved from Harry's arms to Ginny's. "I've missed you all so much. My research has taken another turn... but for the better! I should be finished soon!" She bent to press a kiss to Ginny's protruding stomach. "You look so lovely! And so round!"
"Gee, thanks, Hermione," Ginny said, though she laughed. "Come with me. We've my old room set up for you. Luna is with Mum going over what the minister had to say earlier."
"You still need to come by and show me those findings when you get time," Harry said, clapping her on the shoulder. "Bout time for Ron, eh?"
"Can't believe the bugger is finally getting married," Hermione said jovially. "Ron and Luna will be all right. They do make a great couple."
"I agree," Harry said. "I'm going to go out back and talk with Ron. He's with Arthur."
"Right. See you."
"Ha!" Hermione said smugly. "See that, did you? I'm at the Burrow for Ron's wedding! I told you I wouldn't continue things with him. I've morals, and furthermore, I would never hurt any..."
"Before you make an utter fool of yourself, do look at what's going on now," he said, pointing a long, pale finger towards the portrait.
She looked back and gasped. The naked upper part of her body was in full view as she showered, lathering soap throughout her hair. "Bloody hell!" she exclaimed. Noting that Snape was watching unabashedly, she added, "Stop looking!" He dodged the hand that she tried to place over his eyes. "Really. It's an invasion of privacy and unfair."
"You mean to say that this truly depicts what you have beneath those robes?" he queried innocently. "My, my, Miss Granger... And here I thought it to simply be enhanced to make you more appealing."
"What?" she asked heatedly. Motioning to her breasts, she said, "They are very appealing, thanks, not that you'll ever know."
"Ah, but I do know, don't I?" he replied nonchalantly. "If you don't mind, you are ruining my show here. Oh, and look... if it isn't Weasley... once again."
"Oh, no..."
Ron clicked the door closed and locked it, quickly tugging off his bathrobe to reveal his naked body. He stroked himself a few times, ensuring that he was hard, and joined Hermione in the shower. "I'm going to miss you," he whispered as he maneuvered her to the corner where she could step up slightly.
"I know, but this has to end, Ronald." She kissed him fervently. "I'd never sleep with a married man." She threw her head back and moaned as he pushed into her.
"Yes, yes. Just this one last time," he muttered, white arse moving in time with his short thrusts.
Grateful that Snape hadn't seen the lower part of her body, she whispered, "Sorry about that. I didn't think I would be so..."
"Unscrupulous?" he offered. "Feeling a bit deceitful for fucking a man the night before he marries another?"
"Yes," she said quietly, blanching at his choice of words but daring to look up at him. "This is just likely all rubbish anyway, isn't it? I mean... nothing is set for our future. Nothing is certain."
"Agreed."
The roar of a crowd watching a Quidditch match drew her attention away from Snape's eyes. She was happy to look away from his dark, penetrating gaze. He seemed to pity her for a moment, and compassion wasn't something that she associated with the dark man.
Oliver Wood was hovering on his broom with his hands raised in the air, signifying his team's victory! The applause and cheering were nearly unbearable, but then, he flew forward and landed next to Hermione, Harry, and Ginny, who must have had her baby already. Once he dismounted, he pulled Hermione into his arms and began snogging her for all to see.
"Will you?" he asked hopefully.
"I will!" she yelled excitedly.
He quickly placed a Sonorus Charm on himself and bellowed, "HERMIONE GRANGER HAS JUST AGREED TO BE MY WIFE!"
Nearly the entire stadium went wild at his proclamation. Some of the women seemed quite disappointed, but Hermione didn't care. She watched as Harry shook Oliver's hand before hugging her happily. After that, he pulled her onto his broom and flew off.
"Oh," she said in surprise. "Why, I've not seen him in years!"
"Interesting," Snape commented. "You literally get swept off your feet, and he even has a broom. I'd say that might be one for the books."
"Shut it, you," she groused. Then, she added, "It was sort of romantic, though, wasn't it?"
He glared at her for a moment before nastily saying, "Clearly your idea of romance differs from mine."
She grinned despite herself. "Do tell."
"Never."
"Why not?"
"Miss Granger! You are attempting discourse again. If you would kindly shut that mouth up, we can find out why you are picking up clothing with your hands as a Muggle would and not using your wand as a witch would."
She turned back to the portrait.
Hermione bent over to pick up some clothing strewn about the floor and noticed a pair of red knickers. She pulled out her wand to levitate them and looked at them peculiarly. They did not belong to her. She'd thought to surprise her husband of only two months at his hotel room since she finally had a break, but apparently, he would not welcome her visit.
She heard some giggling from a slightly ajar door to her far right. She marched to the door and slammed her way in, stopping immediately as she took in the scene. Oliver was in a hot tub with two younger women.
"Having fun, are we?" she asked after an awkward moment passed.
"Oh, it's not what you think," he said quickly, rising from the water, not bothering to cover his flaccid prick.
"Not at the moment anyway," she pointed out.
"Who is she?" one of the women asked.
"I am his wife," Hermione announced. When the girl snorted, she flicked her wand swiftly, sending a few nasty hexes her way. "Those will wear off in a few days, but I think the boils might be uncomfortable," she said with mock sweetness. She raised her eyebrow and looked at the other girl. "And did you have anything to add?"
"Just that I didn't know this arsehole was married," she said, getting out of the tub quickly.
Hermione noted that she still had her underclothes on, so she assumed she hadn't pleased her husband yet. "What are you doing, Oliver? Why?" She was very disappointed and hurt that he would seek other women when he supposedly loved her. Something inside of her withered and died. I know that I am no better for the things I've done in my past, but at least Luna never knew about Ron and me.
"It's only for the game," he blurted. "The coach says we need to find a way to relax. This is one of the best ways." Hermione began backing away, not wanting to hear his excuses or the cries of the girl she'd hexed.
"Enough," she said before Disapparating.
"What goes around comes around," Snape said sardonically. "My father used to say that often."
"Thanks for the sympathy," she said angrily. Though she knew this future was unlikely, it still smarted that her husband of only a couple of months would already be interested in other women and seemed to not feel all that guilty about it. They sat in silence as another scene played before them, ending in the same fashion.
"Perhaps it might be wise to stay away from him if he does come courting one day," Snape advised seriously.
"Agreed."
The door slammed before she could get to it. "Oliver! Please come out. We have to discuss this," Hermione yelled.
"I'm tired of your discussions. All you do is talk, and you expect me to listen!" The door opened, and he grabbed her by the arm, pushing her away. "I've had enough. These have been the worst two years of my life! I think it's time we end things."
"You can't be serious," she whispered fearfully. "You didn't seem to want to end things last night when you were fucking me and asking me to have your child!"
"Quite serious, and I had too much to drink last night," he said abruptly. "I'm sorry, Hermione, but I really tried. I have different needs. I'm not some intellectual guy that enjoys sitting around reading periodicals and all that rot." He crossed his arms. "You told me to choose between saving our marriage and Quidditch. Well, I'll see our solicitor tomorrow to set our divorce in motion." He slowly began to close the door, saying, "Quidditch is my life. Go see Potter. I'm sure that he can cheer you up. He's always about, sticking his nose where it doesn't belong!" With that, he shut her out of his life with a snap of the door.
Crying, she leaned against the door. "Please don't, Oliver. I have given you two years of my life and even put my research and job on hold to travel with you. Don't do this to me." Sobs racked her body, but he did not open the door.
"Fucking bastard!" she hissed vehemently. "Wait until I see him again! I'm going to hex him so fast that he'll not know what hit him!"
"Is that right?" Snape asked, one eyebrow arched in question. "And what will you use as reasoning?"
"For all those women... Oh." She sneered for a moment. "I'll make certain that this doesn't happen by steering clear of him, but I might secretly hex him anyway for what could have been."
"What have we here? Potter's home?" Snape asked, gazing at the portrait with interest. "It seems some time has passed. You must have put on a stone at least." He eyed her for a moment. "The excess weight wouldn't look bad on you, and I'd wager that your breasts would swell perfectly."
"Arsehole," she mumbled, looking down at her breasts before turning to watch what was happening. They aren't overly large, but they are a firm handful according to Ron. He's just being a right git."
Stooping down to kiss the little boy on the forehead, Hermione said, "Good night, Daniel."
"Night," he said, taking his mother's hand.
"I won't be long," Ginny said. "I'll just read to him for a bit."
"You feeling all right?" Hermione asked, nodding to her round belly.
"Oh, fine. I'm just a bit tired here at the end," Ginny said with a sigh.
"Want me to bring him up?" Harry asked, putting aside his drink.
"No, it's all right." She kissed his extended hand. "I want to put my feet up anyway."
"All right," he said, watching them leave the room. Once gone, he turned to Hermione. "Have you done it finally?"
She grinned. "Yes! I didn't want to say anything in front of her, but I've perfected it. All of my researching and work has finally paid off. It's a pity that it took so long for only one piece. My next one shouldn't be so tedious to create." She lifted a small chain from beneath her blouse. "I simply point my wand to this and whisper my incantation. It will pause time for about an hour." She pulled her wand out. "After I do that, I say another spell with the person's name that I want to experience the time pause with."
"You... er... wanna try that now?" he asked, gazing at her with anticipation.
"Here? With them upstairs?"
"Yes."
Hermione said her incantations, and in moments, time had paused with only her and Harry able to notice it. He pointed to the clock on the wall.
"It's stopped," he said, grinning. "You did it. Brilliant."
"Thanks," she said shyly.
"How are you?" he asked suddenly.
"I'm all right. Everything has been finalized." She shrugged. "Oliver is in the past."
"I'll still see to it that he pays for putting you through all of this."
"Don't. Just having you with me is enough. I don't know what I would have done without you. This has been a hard year for me," she admitted.
Harry cupped her face in his hands and slowly devoured her lips in a long, passionate kiss. When they pulled away, he said, "And I don't know what I would have done without you. Ginny and I... We just don't get on the same as we used to. You know how she is now, and the whole not wanting sex bit really bothers me."
"Shush," she said, placing a finger over his lips. "Time's a wasting..."
Hermione couldn't face Snape. If she dared to look at him and saw a raised eyebrow or a sneer, she'd murder him. It wasn't that she was embarrassed by what he was witnessing, although she was on some level, but she was more disappointed in herself and angry at her chosen actions. How could she sleep with Harry who was supposedly happily married to her close friend, Ginny? How could she sleep with him while his wife and child were only a floor above them? Had she lost all respect for herself? Why was she such a horrible person? Was she so bitter that she simply didn't care any longer?
"No," she whispered aloud without realizing it. "Never Harry."
"Apparently, yes," Snape said quietly, not looking at her.
She quickly eyed him to find that he was still eagerly watching the happenings in the portrait. She followed his gaze and watched as her counterpart and Harry quickly divested themselves of most of their clothing and situated themselves on the couch, Hermione straddling him. It was definitely not their first time together. Things were too in sync, and they seemed to know exactly what the other liked.
Fascinated, she continued to watch as Harry used his teeth to nip at her flesh, causing her to moan excitedly and ride him harder. "Don't stop, baby," he whispered suddenly.
"Can't... if... I... wanted... to... s-stop... Oh, Harry!" wanton Hermione cried as she rode out her orgasm, large breasts bouncing as she moved.
"I told you that they'd do well if a bit larger," Snape mentioned, apparently trying to make her laugh and ease the mood.
Suddenly, Hermione had had enough, even though she did truly appreciate what he was trying to do. "I can't watch this any longer." She stood and tried to bolt away, but the invisible barrier wouldn't allow her to pass.
The shopkeeper in the portrait turned around and gazed out at her solemnly. "You must watch this if you are to know," he said simply and turned back to continue watching, stuffing something that looked suspiciously like a yellow candy into his mouth.
She dared not sit down again, choosing to stand with her arms wrapped around her body instead. "I can't believe that I'd have an affair with Harry. I can't believe that I use my intended work for something like that! It's not the reasoning behind what I want to do. I thought respectable students could apply to use them for extra studying time!" She shook her head sadly and pointed to the portrait. "Look at this shite!" Time had passed, and Ginny had returned, taking a seat next to Harry on the very sofa that he'd just shagged Hermione on. She watched as they acted as if nothing was amiss. "I don't want to be this way. Ever."
Snape patted the seat beside him. "Might as well get comfortable. It looks as if there is more coming up." He glanced at her in amusement. "Look! It's Potter and a Ministry function. Oh, joy. I am certain everyone has gathered to pay their respects to Boy Fucking Wonder." He then smirked as she took her seat. "Fear not. I'm certain that there is a closet he can pull you into."
Hermione said nothing, too stung by his words. She watched intently and noticed that she was sitting away from Harry and his family. In fact, they didn't even glance her way. Molly Weasley caught her eye and turned her nose up to snub her as if she was nothing more than rubbish. Fear erupted within her body. Ginny must have found out and forced them to end things. She noticed that their first son was much older, and their second child seemed to be near the age of five. So years had passed then.
Hermione continued to watch the proceedings. After many people spoke, her counterpart ventured outdoors for fresh air during a break.
Snape suddenly blurted, "Of course. How could we not include a Malfoy in this?" His scowl deepened as he crossed his arms.
"What?" It was then that she noticed Lucius Malfoy stepping out of the shadows. "Surely I wouldn't..."
"Well, if it isn't Miss Granger," Lucius drawled. "Out for a stroll, are we?"
"I am," she said curtly, though she didn't move away from him.
"What have you been doing with yourself these days? A few gossiping biddies back by the liquor were saying that you hadn't been to one of these in three years, that you had a falling out with the Potters and the Weasleys."
"And?"
"Interesting," he said. "I find that I'd like to join you and offer you solace."
"What do you really want?"
"Ah, straightforwardness. I approve," he said, offering his arm. She cautiously took it and allowed him to guide her through the garden. "I've heard that you have developed something that a man such as myself might want to sponsor." He raised an elegant eyebrow. "Having my fortune at your disposal would allow you to develop it even further or make more like it."
"I have my own money, thanks," she said haughtily. "Your wealth will not buy me, Malfoy. There isn't much that I care about any longer. I am biding my time before I finalize some things on my gadget. I don't need anything from you."
"I am certain," he gazed down at her body, "that we can come to some sort of arrangement on what you may or may not need. I do believe that we could make quite a team." He leaned forward and whispered, "Floo me."
She sat down on a bench in complete despair. In truth, when Harry had ended things with her in order to keep his family together, she'd lost her financial backing. She'd long before left her position as an Unspeakable, opting instead to develop many Time-Stoppers for distribution among trustworthy students needing extra study time. She'd hoped that maybe even Aurors would take an interest in them. The funds she'd built up were depleted. She truly did need Malfoy's help, but at what cost? Was life even worth living any longer? She'd lost touch with most of her friends and work contacts. Her family always welcomed her home, but she always felt like a stranger there. The Weasleys and the Potters wanted nothing to do with her, branding her as a scarlet woman of sorts.
"I'm so very tired," she said sadly. She watched quietly as a family of three strolled by. After they were out of earshot, she whispered, "I wanted a family. I wanted a life. Where did I go wrong? How did I let my hunger to perfect a line of Time-Stoppers control me? After Oliver left me, everything went downhill." Hermione stood in determination. She would do what must be done. "It's off to Malfoy Manor for me."
Snape's mouth was gaped open. Hermione knew that he didn't know what to say. "Please, sir, I don't want to watch any more of this."
The twinkling-eyed shopkeeper turned round in the portrait to face them. "Don't you want to see if you have success?"
"No," she said, surprised to hear Snape speak up.
"We've seen enough. Release us," he barked, suddenly agitated as he rose from his seat.
"I'm sorry, Severus, but I cannot do that," the cheeky man said. "You see, I have a few things to show you, too."
"Oh, hell, no!" he bit out. "If you think that I'll sit here and allow her to witness something such as this, you are clearly mistaken!"
"Fair is fair," the man teased. "You've been able to see her life and how certain mistakes can lead to bigger ones. Let's see what your mistakes might be."
Face contorting to the color of chalky white, Snape hissed, "Desist this instant!" Instead, the man ignored him, turned round in his seat, popped a candy into his mouth, and watched as a young Severus Snape crawled through the hallway at his home, hoping to sneak by his father's sitting room.
"Miss Granger," he said calmly, "please do not watch this."
"Is that your father?" she asked, unable to tear her eyes away from the hooked-nosed, dark-haired man that was now looming over the younger Severus.
"Yes," he said, sitting down heavily next to her, burying his face in his hands in momentary despair. "I suppose turnabout is fair play."
"It is," she replied. "You got to see my horrible life. Now, I'd like to see yours." She elbowed him. "Perhaps I can see if your breasts need further development, eh?" She'd hoped to lighten his mood, but it simply didn't work. Instead, he looked up at the portrait solemnly.
Wondering about his past and what his future would bring, she remained silent as different clips from his childhood played. She didn't question anything, and when she saw a few disappointing scenes, such as his mother's funeral, rejection by Lily Evans, and his taking of the Dark Mark, she tried not to cry. She was certain he'd not appreciate the sorrow she felt for him.
After a while, the old man said, without facing them, "That was some of your past. You are currently experiencing your present."
"Is that so?" Snape asked sarcastically. "Get on with this mockery so that I can get the fuck out of here," he demanded nastily, likely wondering if a hex would work on the portrait.
Hermione could see his hands shaking with rage. She was simply glad that his wrath was not directed at her. Feeling the need to commiserate, she said, "Let me hex the wanker first if you don't mind."
He glowered at her for a moment, but his expression faded until a light smile touched his lips. "I suppose nothing you could witness in my life will be as disturbing as what we saw in yours."
"Funny," she said in annoyance. "You're always so polite, aren't you?"
He merely shrugged and watched the first scene.
Southern's Notes: Real life is a biatch and has me in a bad state as of late. Apologies! Sorry I didn't post yesterday. Tomorrow evening, I'll have the next chapter for you. (If people are reading anyway, what with it being near Christmas and all that!)
Christy's Notes: Poor Hermione! It seems she is desperately searching for something! I can't wait to see what his future shows!
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65 Reviews | 6.89/10 Average
Wow! I thought i'd read all your FFs, but i guess i was wrong. So glad you had this epilogue,.. otherwise I wouldn't know hidden kudos rightly belong where! :D
Awww... so wonderful! :D Thanks for writing this story. I know you've an epilogue coming which is even more wonderful, but i have enough thanks spilling over! ^_^
"“Perhaps I can see if your breasts need further development, eh?”" hahaha :D This chapter was painful to read. As a writer, you have succeeded! I just wonder about her future with Lucius?
My gods! How much spying did go on to get that much dirt on Hermione? Her's was much more salacious. Severus' was rather pathetic. I guess he would be more embarrassed by being pathetic than salacious. Men have their pride and women their virtue. Isn't that a bunch of bullshit? It's totally wrong that men can screw anything that holds still and women can't even think about it. It should be a woman's pride and a man's virtue. Oh, yea, it's a woman's pride and her virtue. It's just a man's pride. They aren't expected to be virtuous.
Now how did Dumblebutt get the dirt on Snape and Bess? Was it all made up, or did D know that Snape knew that Bess would have loved to love him?
Why go with Hermione rather than with Bess? She's a good woman. I guess it's because Hermione wouldn't take his crap and Bess would, you think? Hermione would hex him if he made her feel the way the Portrait Bess was feeling. And how did Dumbledore know about Harry and and Ginny? I know they helped Severus and Hermione, but they sure have betrayed a lot of people's privacy and trust to do it. I suppose that since it's for a good cause, eaves dropping, being a peeping tom and gossip are acceptable. Well, of course we know Dumbledore thinks so. Thank you for the happy ending. Now for the MA (NC 17) version. I know you can.
Yesssss!!!!
The focus is clearly on Hermione and Severus, but I also wonder how Ron and Harry could use her like that and feel no remorse. She clearly didn't hold a gun to their heads. I guess they figure they are doing her a favor at the time, eh? She's a slut and they are what?
It looks like Ron pursued Hermione, I would like to know who made the first move with her and Harry. Just like a guy to get caught, isn't it? Then the chick takes the fall.
If I was Ginny I wouldn't want her around either, but I wouldn't keep Harry around any more than Hermione. They both betrayed her, but Harry took vows to honor and cherish her. His betrayal goes deeper, yet apparently he isn't held to the same level of guilt.
I don't see why the Weaselys don't hate Harry for what he's done to Ginny too. He probably lied and said she had cast some kind of spell on him.
At least Severus won't think she is too stuck up to mean it when she invites him for dinner now.
But if they get together, will he wonder if she is being faithful? I suppose he see's Hermione as a poor loner who couldn't get laid by anyone else but Harry and Ron and she only did it because she was lonely and desperate.
I'm giving it 5 on the assumption that things improve for these two and that's the point of the movie.
Brilliant!! This is the second Christmas challange I have read, and they are both wonderful!!
The entire bit where Hermione and Severus are watching their lives play out could have been a Twilight Zone episode. I started getting a creepy vibe as soon as he went back to Diagon Alley with her. It was original and interesting. I think it’s cute that the portraits conspired to bring them together. Thank you for an enjoyable story.
I do so like these little 'see into the future' tales. It was a nice challenge to be put forth. As always, nicely written.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Thanks. I think these kinds are so fun. I wish there would be more to read. I'll have to do some searching one day!
Oh SW I adored this. It was very cleverly done.Thank you so very much for writing it.Hugs you, Sonia :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
~waves~ Thank you so much for reading, my dear. :)
lovely story!i felt sad for them at times...
Excellent story, I loved every bit of it.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Thank you very much for reading. :)
This story was soo sweet, SW! I loved it! Perfect story to read over the holidays! SD
aaaawwwww! Now we are getting to the thick of things....yaaahoooo,on with the fic.! Great job btw, I am really enjoying this. ;)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Thanks so much for reading. I'm happy you like it. :)
Turn about really is fair play huh. I really can't wait to see what happens next. ;)
Ebanizzer Scrouge, eat your heart out! Watch out for the ghost of the future, he's gunna show you things you might really not want to see or believe of yourself. I really love this Cant' wait to read more. ps. I'm not quite sure how to spell scrouge's first name but what the heck, I took a shot at it. ;)
Hmm. Austrina... Southern... coincidence?
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Yuletide Revelation)
Teehee! You are the first one to notice that. *sends chocolates!*
Wonderfully romantic. I love your slow transition of Sev's character, very believable. Can't wait for your epilogue.
That really is very sweet. I can't wait for the epilogue. -- B
lovely, simply lovely. the fact that albus can't stop meddling even from beyond the grave tickles me. i shall anxiously await the epilogue.
Yay! What a lovely chapter. I figured Harry and Ron would have a problem with them being together, but I'm glad it wasn't too horrible on Hermione.I'm looking forward to the epilogue.
I'm right on the edge here, wondering what Lucius will do to try to wreck Severus' life. They don't know what he will do, and they're leaving before the painting can show them. Eeks!!
Lovely... More, please! ~Lotm
Looks like you have another winner here! I'll be keeping up. How very interesting a premise!
mas, por favor...