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Cursed Love
Elizabeth209 Reviews | 7.29/10 (209 Ratings, 0 Likes, 72 Favorites )
Winky curses Hermione after forming a house-elf union. Severus gets attached to the curse and his only option is to work with her to break the spell
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Elizabeth
Member Since 2008 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 18 | 163 Reviews Written | 247 Review Responses
I am a beginning writer and I'm in love with the world of fantasy. I own a small farm with my husband who supports my odd fasination with the plane of make-believe. We have two small children and I have a full-time position as "mother".
Reviews for Cursed Love
That'll "learn" him. Hhahaha! :)
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Haha! He should be learning a lot about her, or at least her body in the near future. I predict a shower scene coming! *trumpets sound*Thanks for the review, and the beta work. You are the best!
Well, she finally found out. She was incredibly right about his motives and feelings towards her. He deserves a finger up his nose, really. Wondering if this will teach him anything? Do you think they could live forever with her finger up his nose. Bah hah hah hah!
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
He derserves more than a finger up his nose! He has a breaking point just like everyone else, and he's getting close to reaching it. Lessons will be learned in the future! But yes, it would quite cute to live forever with finger up his nose.What happens if one of them dies? Do they drag the body around with them? Okay, that's gross. See what you make me do,
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
? :)Thanks for the review.
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
ROFL... Now that would be funny!
At this point in time, I am really disliking Snape. It's hurtful for Hermione to be used as a physical replacement for Lily when she cares for him so. I'm glad they didn't get physical, because that to me is cheapening her worth by using her. I'm of the opinion that she should leave Hogwarts and move on with her heart to someone healthier. Would Snape develop feelings for her if she was gone? I certainly don't think she should bend down to his demands and desires in detriment to herself.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
I'm sorry you don't like him. Snape didn't want to cheapen her worth either, that's why he left. He realized he has problems and needs to resolve them before moving on.And she asked him the important question before things got too serious, so she wasn't going to let him "bend down to his demands and desires in detriment to herself."Don't worry, things will work themselves out with these two in time. They just have to grow as characters a little.Thanks for reviewing :)
Finally Hermione's getting some back at him! Should be fun and interesting to see how the next 2 weeks play out!
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
It will be fun! *insert evil laugh here* I'll have more up soon!
So glad to see this chapter posting. I get angry with Severus for getting such enjoyment out of her predicaments, but then here I am having a grand old time reading about them. I guess there is no way I can prevent them though, so I am off the hook :)I was so hopeful when he was stuck breathing down her neck that they would finally come to some sort of mutual understanding in terms of their relationship. Of course with these two, it lead to more trouble. I am glad that Winky confessed, and Hermione had no hard feelings. I wonder how long they will be stuck together this time...Hope you see more real soon!
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
As a reader, you are off the hook :) Enjoy their problems all you want, that's what you're there for.More understanding in their relationship will blossom in the very near future. Being stuck will all depend upon Severus' ability to trust. He has to grow a little in this story as well as Hermione.I hope to have up more soon. I have just a few more chapters and then everything's done. Thanks for reviewing, I appreciate it!
The bit in her office was sooo telling. He’s such a creep in this story. But I really liked how Hermione turned it around and gave him a total case of blue-balls! He deserved it.
I think I would have been much angrier with Winky and wouldn’t have forgiven her so easily. I certainly wouldn’t have trusted her to ‘serve’ me. LOL but I suppose that her trust and forgiveness ahs won her favor with the wicked elf.
I really wish Hermione had stuck it to him a bit more, little things to make him really fume, But dragging him around by his nose is certainly good enough for now. I don’t suppose she’ll drag him around in public. Too bad – he’d deserve that.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
She gets him pretty good with the nose thing. Just you wait. It'll be torture for him. Things take a different tune from here, now that the truth is out.Thanks for reviewing, bea!
I can't wait to hear what Minerva will say!
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Yes, she will give him quite a talking to, that is for sure. Thanks for reviewing,
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
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Good grief those two have certainly got themselves into a bit of a mess. Minerva is right Severus should have told Hermione about the curse. I have a picture in my head of Hermione's finger up Severus's nose and just too funny. Now if Severus can just get over his past and once Hermione's finger gets out of his nose, he should shag her senseless or until neither one of them are not able to walk for at least a week or two
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Why wait until they are unstuck for senseless shagging? I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. I'm so glad you like it.
This really is a fun story.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Oh, I'm so glad you like it!!!!
finally snape have some fun...he really deserved it... well too bad its at hermione cost...but well its nice hahaha.. more please XD
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Yeah, he does deserve some fun in his life. Maybe he'll realize that it should be at Hermione's expense, but with her...More soon, I promise.
loving the story - just read all 12 chapters in one sitting - love this Severus - sneaky and mischievious!!
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Wow. I'm so glad you like him. Thanks! Yes, he is sneaky and he will get his. Hopefully I will have more by the end of the week.
I'm thinking Severus needs his own curse. Not sure exactly what, though. I'll leave that up to you. *Snaps fingers* Go on... get to it! The man needs to be taught a lesson, in many things.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Yeah, he needs a lesson or two. I'm working on it. Originally I didn't have anything happen to him. But then, where would justice be? He'll get something, don't you worry.
About time Severus was called to the carpet for his taunting of Hermione. But I was shocked that Winky is standing up for Hermione in that Severus is abusing her. I hope Hermione trows the cauldron at him.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
I think Winky is realizing that she's given Hermione a bigger curse than she really deserved. We'll see if Hermione will forgive the elf when the time comes. Thanks for reviewing!
Great chapter, I loved Winky giving Severus hell.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Thanks,
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
. He deserves some hell.You know, I should tell you that you inadvertantly brought me into this fandom. You know my mother. Anyway, thanks for telling her about this site because it is now my favorite.(I wanted to tell you earlier, but I was hidden for the time being. Now that the competition is over I'm out of the closet.)
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
I so glad you are enjoying the fandom and the site. I look forward to seeing more work by you.
After so many months of seeing House Elf magic in action, Severus still isn't taking Winky seriously! Don't mess with House Elves, Severus...it never ends well.If Hermione told Harry about her problems, I wonder if he could get Kreacher to intercede on her behalf? At the very least convince Winky not to allow the curse to be the cause of anyone's death. If Hermione ever became so despondent that she stated "I wish I could die", or so tired that she said "I'm dead on my feet"...well, at the very least it would prevent her from learning the lesson that the curse was supposed to facilitate.Or this would suddenly turn into a zombie fic!Hermione: "Brainssss...."Severus: (in first years' Potions class) "My dear, I'm afraid you've come to the wrong place if that's what you're after. Try the Ravenclaw Common Room."
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
LOL, zombie fic. Yes, the Ravenclaws, that's the ticket. Maybe if these two characters were from that house, they might realized the truth sooner.I never entertained the idea of Kreacher... *stuffs away for future use*Severus will learn a lesson or two, maybe the hard way, maybe not. And the dead thread, well, people say stuff like that all the time. You'll see if Hermione says something along those lines or not...
I'm enjoying this story. It's a rollercoaster. I don't like Winky and I can't wait for the stupid curse to lift. But without the curse no story would have happened so I will endure it. LOL.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
The things we love to hate, or hate to love...I hope you don't hate Winky too badly. She was just doing what she thought was right. Besides, if she hadn't of done it, then how would Hermione and Severus grown to like each other?Thanks for reviewing!
Response from mimmom (Reviewer)
I love the mix-ups these house elves can create. Snape's a naughty boy for letting it go on so long.I hate the Malfoys pretty much every time I read about them, but I wouldn't want them gone.Speaking of Malfoys, I just watched an interview with Tom Felton and he's hilarious and not the least bit full of himself.
Oh, what a kick in the butt, when you are just acknowledging your feelings for someone and then you hear said someone whispering another woman's name while ... uhm, sleeping.I do think Hermione had been entirely too forgiving toward Snape, but then, he is her boss and one doesn't see Snape apologising every day.Wood ... grrr. I'm too worked up to express my thought on Wood. I hope he gets his comeuppance soon.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Love stinks! It would really suck if that happened. Poor Hermione. And yes, she is quite forgiving. But you have a good point. Snape doesn't apologize every day...Wood gets his, don't worry.
It is funny that Severus (however unwillingly and unconciously) is softening towards Hermione, but still wants her to slip up with the curse and cause havoc again. I only hope that now she knows how the curse works, she somehow gets her revenge on Oliver!
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Severus is silly, isn't he. He just better hope the next time she slips up it isn't intended towards him.And she gets her revenge, don't worry.
Interesting gifts Hermione gave him. I also liked how she dealt with Oliver. However, I do believe he got off lightly. Attempted rape should have more consequences.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
She gets Oliver again, a couple more times actually. I agree, attempted rape should have more consequences. Thanks for reviewing
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
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This is so painful! I wish Severus would stop toying with Hermione and that she will realize what he's doing!Livvy
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Where would all the fun be if he didn't toy with her?!
Sleep together? LOL! *snort* This fic is brilliant! Whoever you are, you are devilishly clever Livvy
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
You are so sweet, that is the nicest compliment! Thanks. I'm so glad you like the story. I hope to not disappoint you in the future.
I knew it! Ungrateful beast! Hermione should have told him now that he was back to normal, he could slice his own throat and kill himself quickly and efficently, thus sparing people to guess as to what he truly wants. Grrr.Livvy
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Yes, he's ungrateful now, and will be for a bit, but give him time. He is an aggravating Slytherin. Thanks for the review, Livvy.
"The hurt of his lost love was fading, and he didn’t know what it meant. But he was looking forward to teatime on Sunday."Sounds like things are getting more and more interesting in this direction. Silly man for not realising what it all means. ;)
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Yes, things get quite interesting in that direction. And yes, he's a bit slow in realizing what it all means.
The man is blind as a bat. Perhaps Minerva should send him an owl and let him know that he's falling for Hermione.
It's too bad Hermione is too nice to get Oliver sacked.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
Yes, he's a bit oblivious, but he'll catch on soon enough. And Hermione takes out some revenge on the Quidditch chap, he gets his.
Hermione's thoughts during the week were so rambled, up and down, highs and lows. if it were my week, I'd want to forget it too. She should have hexed Oliver's one remaing nut! Nah, she handled herself well. I was rather quite pleased. Severus's admissions were nice, but I don't think Hermione was erady for them. Winky on the other hand, will want revenge for Hermione's nearly making Headmaster burn! I can see that one coming.
Response from Elizabeth (Author of Cursed Love)
This was a rough week for the girl, but it was nice that things got somewhat resolved.And I didn't even think about Winky's reaction to Severus almost burning up...I'll have to think about that one. In fact, I don't remember having him tell Hermione what she did to him...oops, I'll see what I can fix in there. I'm so glad you mentioned that!And she's not done with Oliver yet. He gets his just deserts...