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Rhyme and Reason Chapter 7: One, Two, Unbuckle My Shoe
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Rhyme and Reason

1: Restricted Section

2: A Peep Inside the Book

3: Pop Go the Weasleys

4: A Roll in the Hay

5: My, What Big Eyes You Have

6: ...And When They Were Down, They Were Down...

7: One, Two, Unbuckle My Shoe

8: Happily Ever After?

One, Two, Unbuckle My Shoe

Rhyme and Reason

Chapter 7 of 8

DawnEB

Very loosely based on Ladyofthemasque's 'Lost in a Book' challenge. Severus and Hermione have problems with a book in the Restricted Section. Will they ever get together and get home? Brief appearances by a number of HP characters, and a suggestion of slash. Rating for safety, nothing too graphic

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Snape found himself wandering morosely towards the woods. There was no chance of him finding Hermione while she remained in there, but if she didn't emerge soon he would just have to swallow his pride and start calling for her. He'd never forgive himself if she was lost, prey to who-knew-what, just because he'd chased her away. Sunk deep in his thoughts he almost missed the clothes draped over the bushes, but when he spotted them his heart leapt into his mouth. What did it mean? Had his Hermione been accosted by the likes of that Blue fellow? Wait a moment, when did she become his Hermione? Oh, no time for foolish questions; he had to find her and quickly.

Hermione opened her eyes as a shadow fell across her. Suddenly aware how underdressed she was if this was the Wolf come back for her she struggled to get up, only to find herself engulfed in a pair of strong arms and a meringue of a dress.

"Severus! I was just getting some sun while I waited for my clothes to dry then I was going to come and find you. Listen, I'm sorry about earlier, I--" Severus cut her off.

"Do you realise how worried I was? Anything could have happened to you. I thought you'd been assaulted by that pervert 'Big Boy' Blue or something." Seeing the unspoken question cross her face he gave her a brief description of his run in with Blue, until he noticed a twinkle in her eye. He held her at arms length and shook her gently.

"So you think it funny to be kissed by someone who disgusts you, do you? Well, let's see how you like it."

Severus leaned in to take Hermione's mouth firmly with a kiss, raw and strong and filled with relief that she was safe and well. Breaking away he waited for her to react. When she failed to pull away, no doubt in shock at his presumption, he pulled her close again, pushing his tongue into her slightly parted mouth as his skirt rose up and covered them. After a few minutes he stopped to catch his breath and make sure she'd learned her lesson.

"Well, Hermione, what do you have to say now?" She quirked an eyebrow as she looked up at their impromptu parasol.

"I say it's about time we got rid of this bloody crinoline"

Severus sighed in relief as her nimble fingers found the fastenings, and he was finally able to lose the dress. It was quite heavy and cumbersome regardless of any other issues he had with it. He noticed Hermione was looking at him as he stood there naked to the waist and only the ridiculously frilled draws preserving his decency, if not his dignity. Only then did he realise that she was if anything more exposed, only a few scraps of satin and lace covering her most feminine charms.

"Perhaps it might be best if we check on the condition of the rest of your clothes."

Severus shifted uncomfortably as his natural reaction to this desirable and near naked woman tried to manifest itself. Instead of heeding his advice, she tapped her chin with a finger and ran a critical eye over him.

"You know, there's nothing wrong with your body that a little sun now and again wouldn't fix. Not much, just enough to boost your vitamin D levels. It can do wonders to improve your mood, too." Just as he was going to make a sharp comment about keeping her advice to herself, he felt Hermione's hand running up his arm.

"You have very good muscle tone, and you're not too thin, either." The hand brushed across his shoulders before trailing down and across his firm stomach. Severus bit hard into his tongue, willing his body into quiescence.

"I wonder how the rest of you compares?" Hermione tugged at the ribbon holding his draws up, and he batted her hand away.

"Don't play with me, Hermione. I'm not a child and neither are you. There are consequences to this type of game between adults."

Hermione looked him in the eye. His dark, near black eyes said more to her than the man could speak out loud. She knelt before him, loosened his boots and slipped them from his feet. She stood and pulled the ribbon from his head before curling an arm around his neck, pulling him forward until he felt her lips brush against his ear.

"You're the one who started this game, and in case you haven't figured it out, Severus, I find you far from disgusting." Hermione's whisper sent shivers down his spine, and he lost himself in her sweet kiss.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Rhyme and Reason

59 Reviews  |  7.29/10 Average

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EverMystique

Very cute story. Entertaining indeed.

10/10

ladyluv

Funny and unique way to get them together - very interesting.

10/10

ladyluv

Interesting - the are now half undressed - I cannot wait to see what happens next.

9/10

ladyluv

Good set-up of them both thinking that they want to set this to rights because they want more -cannot wait to see what happens.

10/10

ladyluv

What a sensual little scene between Hermione and Remus the wolf - later - oh man he does not know her very well.

9/10

ladyluv

The latest chapter was cute and funny - the whole Blue/Black episode was cute - good writing.

10/10

ladyluv

Oh crap - when Severus is angry like this - he is so scary - I thought he was going to strike her almost - I cannot wait to read the next chapter to find out what happened to them.

10/10

ladyluv

Interesting first chapter - I cannot wait to see what happens with this book and if they survived the fall.

10/10

ladyluv

I do not blame her from running - wand or no - Severus can be scary as all get out when angered.

0/10

MollysSister

Oh this was loads of fun! I am so glad you wrote it!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it - I enjoyed writing it

10/10

Twilexis

Oi!! Don't blame me!!!I'm innocent, i tell ya!!!It's all tubbles' fault. And lotm. I'm completely innocent. (i wish)-=Liz=-

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Hahaha - methinks the lady doth protest to much!wormey's response: I'm notgoing to agree with you on the grounds that I like being in the Mob...-Liz

0/10

Lady Apythia

This was hysterical! I laughed out loud at the image of Snape in a hoop skirt.  It was very enjoyable. And that particular wolf Remus was rather quite interesting as well. Great response to the challenge!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

I'm glad you liked it.  Wolf has signed up for the sequel, along with a whole new cast list.  Release date: next December.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Muahahaha! Black deserved it! Oh, sorry... Blue deserved it.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Hehe.  I like fulfilling Severus's fantasies ;)

9/10

ShilohDarke

ROFLMAO!!!! That was soo cute! I can just imagine Snape in a get-up like that! My God, he has to be livid! I love it! I look forward to more!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Yes, not a happy Snape.  There is more of the dress to come :D

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Yes, not a happy Snape.  There is more of the dress to come :D 

0/10

magicmistress

Very entertaining.  Snape really should be more careful about scaring random people  --  B

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

He's eventually going to regret scaring Hermione, in more ways than one.  Thanks for the review.

0/10

ladyofthemasque

Little Bo Snape has lost his, um...darn it, there's nothign apropos to rhyme with 'Snape'!  Or 'Snark'--Ooh, I have it!

 Little Sev Peep has snarled at his sheep, and she's run off into the wood!  He can't change the dress, and is stuck in this mess--but the next chapter is sure to be good!

...More, please!  ~Lotm

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Hahahahacoughsplutter *reaches for cough remedy* 

I'm uploading as fast as I can, and am already working (in collaberation) on the Seasonal sequel.

I'm, also working, on, my overenthusiastic; punctuation.':,.;!!  :)

6/10

chyara

so where is the rest of the story?

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

I'm only allowed to upload 2 chapters at a time for validation, so as soon as one is posted I upload another.  Then I have to wait until the wonderful and hardworking Admins finish tutting at my lousy punctuation.  Don't worry, it's getting there :) *runs off to upload next chapter*

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Hahaha... Love the comparison of the Weasleys with the woman that lived in a shoe! And Bo Peep? ahahahahha! Priceless

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Glad you're enjoying it :)

0/10

KiraAlexia

Fun. Love Snape in the dress

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

I had much more fun with Snape in that dress than I could have imagined before I started, although I think it was the frilly knickers that got me hooked :D

0/10

tubbles14

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Sevie in a dress! AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Nicely done! Poor Sevie with the emotional issues too. MORE! MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!

THE TubblesKiss

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

You do realise this is all your fault, don't you?  I've even credited you as being to blame in the notes after the last chapter.

Response from tubbles14 (Reviewer)

Of course it's my fault! It's always my fault and I revel in that fact! I'm like the Goddess of mischief and chaos. Bask in my confusing and annoying presence!

 *incert evil cackle here*

TUBBLES!Cool

8/10

Anijade

very interesting start

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Thank you.  I hope I can keep people interested.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I can't wait to see what happens next! hehe great start!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Thanks :)

0/10

ladyofthemasque

Hmm.  Needs More, Please!  ~Lotm

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

As soon as I can get through validation :)  It's complete, just 8 short chapters.

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ShilohDarke

very good start! I am looking forward to reading more!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

Thank you.  More is on the way. 

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I can imagine snape so clearly. Hahaha! Too funny. I'm interested in seeing who lives in the home they are going to.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Rhyme and Reason)

It's a refuge for those extra commas you keep evicting for me :D  Thank you

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