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The Swing of the Pendulum
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Many people were affected by Voldemort—his followers, his victims, and the innocents who had been caught up in the war. After the war is over, how are they dealing? As the Wizarding world recoups, rebuilds, reorganizes, and adjusts to the social and economic changes caused by the aftermath of war, there are still people fighting to correct the wrongs that are out there. Hermione is one, so is Draco. Lucius is another.
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Reviews for The Swing of the Pendulum
I really liked the way Draco used the "power of the press" to be granted a visit with his father, and their use of Legilimency to communicate right under the noses of the guards was a brilliant move.
I hope Ron gets over his snit about "being used" by Hermione. Can he not see beyond the end of his nose? There are more important things afoot here than his feelings of being used. I'm sure Harry will be able to get through to him.
The way Poppy and Minerva have embraced the pregnancy of all of the eligible girls is going to be great fun, and now I can't wait to find out how the Ministry hacks take the news!
Thank you for this great update!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. Yep, the girls had been so succesful with letters he tried it and got what he wnated. And with Legilimency, Lucius could get a lot of info fast and he has plenty of time to sort it all out in his cell. saddly enough.Even in canon, JKR never has Ron grow up or mature. He's just mad because she hadn't told him before, he didn't have a say and he's under pressures too. But it's a immature reaction, get mad, run away. LIke in DHPoppy is being supportive, not exactly embracing. They are a faking pregnancy and she suspects so. Minerva is shocked, but in the big picture, I think these women understand, and will stand by the kids.You are welcome for the update. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
^________________^that was fun.
ahhh xmas hols had nice timing. it gave the nice excuse for impregnanation by those outside school. though i was wondering if tests might get more intrusive and theyd test right off the bat if first the girls should no signs of having sex. but i figured with magic and objects to provide penetration that can be easily covered. its not that big of a step after the potions side efects they have to endure. but yes, wouldnt it look suspicious if all the girls are on the same month of pregnancy? i hope they add for variation with the second potion. xmas hol is a good excuse for the majority but looks even more suspicious if all are in that month. ah ron and hermione. all the wording totally doesn't seem like they'll last. the hints? well, i'm not counting the one where ron was upset for being used. i totally understand that and can agree with them there as long as after he gets down from his emotional state he understands it all. but lets see. well from ron's side he changed his mind from looking for a flat for his own to moving in with harry. from hermione you have her insisting that she had wanted ron to be her first in such a manner that she was sure (at least subconciously) that he wouldn't be the last.and of course the financial aspect of the suitors and the speculation of who will be on what list as well as harry's confidence that he and ginny will be right as rain according to the list but rw/hg will most likely be not.lucius and draco ^___^. nice. really awesome the use of legilimency. it didn't occur to me and boy how useful that was in such a monitored enviorment. liked how he said things out loud such as the girlfriend bit for listening ears. interesting he should show the muggle studies bit. telling? ohhh and i absolutely loved how draco had wrote to the newspapers his sob story so he can get the release. cunning.
poppy was very cute. nice that she figured out what potion was most likely being used. i liked how she figured out who was most likely the supplier for the text of the potion too. totally amused at the choice of boys who are being sued for the double paterinity claim and minerva's reaction to it.
oh i also like how other students bring ideas into the equation that it isn't all up to the front runners making it more realistic and thus more enjoyable for me. like how we get to see this from quite a few sides and how thorough every one is trying to be.and ooooo- can't wait to see the ministry matchups and the aftermath of that. seems like its coming soon.thanks for the comments to my reviews. i'm looking foward to more from you. love your work.
Response from genrou (Reviewer)
furthermore, i know i mentioned before in the last chapter's review: i wonder if some wouldn't mind who they are coupled with by the law and may not be whole-hearted in fighting the law anymore.though more details of this came into my mind beside those who won't mind the couplings and those who are just too tired and strained to fight it anymore (not to mention some those who might be pressured from home). i wonder if some might just have to sacrifice theirselves to the law so that more of the other students can get off. i believe the ministry might be less likely to fight the removal of the bastard law and such if there will be those willing to cowtow to it for now. thus providing more time to think of other solutions and such.and i went to reading your reviews and responces. they were thoughtful and enjoyable. and i know a bunch were questioning snape's whereabouts due to mlc but personally my thoughts went to more details on neveille and then wanting more of greg. however, thoughts of snape brought even more thoughts of to mind. i hope we get to see (probably once the actual ministry arranged couplings are announced) the adults and graduates and how they will be taking it all into account and their reactions. we will have a number of alums to choose from and not to mention all the weasley brothers. if you think about those who are finanicially suited to go first i would think george would be thrown into that mix thanks to www and once again i believe neveille falls into that catagory as well. so yay more fun once the range grows broader. ^_____^
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Genrou, wow, what a review! Okay, I admit, I did the Xmas bits to give Hermione and Ginny a romp with Ron and Harry, respectively, so that they were not virgins. I think some of the other students might have likewise, but I’m not listing all/everyone’s sexual experiences nor am I giving the list of who is matched up with whom. Only a few pairs, placed in the story to show that the students are pairing up. A few guys taking two or more ‘cuz they can afford the law suits’. As for the tests – Oh I address that issue. Hold on a bit, it’s coming!! And yes, it will be suspicious, which will anger poor dear Edithe Havershiems and infuriate Gracilla Warblock of the S.H.M.R.C. and the Daily Prohpet will have a field day with it!
As for Ron, he acted like an immature, self-centered, wanker prat, that would storm off from his friends, kind of guy. In other words, He got angry and stormed off. (just like in canon) You’ll see more of why Ron wants his own flat rather than live at Grimmauld Place. But you are very astute here.
The girls have been using the papers to get their voices heard – why not him. And Since Lucius isn’t allowed a paper, or to know what’s going on, it’s an alternative for Draco to inform his dad on what’s happening. Lucius will have plenty of time to sort out the images and feelings Draco gave him access to. And it’s silent – the guards don’t know they communicated that way. Sly Slytherins.
Poppy is a bright, capable Healer and has seen (Or probably has) just about everything a kid/teenagers can get into or just about any spell damage (or close to) that a horny/rambunctious/dueling teens can do to each other. In other words – she’s seen more that most Healers at St. Mungo’s because she’s covering all aspects of spell/potion damage and even accidental magic and injuries at Hogwarts. So it’s no surprise that she could diagnosis the effects of the potion. LOL And since Hermione brewed Polyjuice her second year – she made a good guess!
Nope, sorry about all the OC’s but I didn’t have very many canon characters in the years below Harry/Ron/Hermione or from all the houses. Besides, Hermione might be the ‘leader’ she is not ‘all knowing’! Of course, I have to have info and ideas coming from others. I have been asked a few ‘she could do ___ after school’ and I have considered many of them. But you’ll see OC’s/others doing what needs to be done – because I have mapped out what Hermione/Draco and Ginny do, I need Julianna, Bernice, Shelia, Cecil and even Thomas. Susan, and Luna will be around after Hogwarts, too. Just cuz they leave school, doesn’t mean the problem goes away!
Your comments of who gives in, who accepts the matches, and too tired and strained to fight, I have strongly considered that, believe me. Oh yes, you’ll see some of them cave in, but not until after leaving school and having to face this as adults. I have a plan in action that will make life for ‘friends’ easier, but really, there is a fight ahead.
Ah, er, the Bastard Law has a backside. I do address this. lol and I think you’ll be surprised by what the teens do.
Severus’ whereabouts is mentioned. Neville isn’t at Hogwarts – he’s marrying Hannah, as mentioned. He succumbed to the ML, and you’ll see others who have or are fighting it as well. It’s a problem that not only the students disagree with, but we are seeing from inside the castle at this time – that changes. Greg will pop up again, he’s around. I don’t want to give to much away, but I really like how you’ve seem to gotten into this story and how thoughtful and thought-provoking your reviews are. I really appreciate them.
Response from genrou (Reviewer)
well yes, the story is thought provoking. ^___^ah sorry about neveille and severus then. it slipped my mind (and i can't recall snape if he is alive year unless he went away to live a life of obscurity).
and yes everyone jumps on ron for the way he acts but no one really goes into how harry was like that and even hermione had her moments. i do not blame him for his actions in book 7 at least. but anyway there are so few ron supporters so im not surprised but im glad that he isn't handled horribly.
and no i never expect a list of everyone just few here and there like you have been doing. a full list is rather crappy actually and is usually done by those of less talent since it fills up their word count.
and cool that things are to come and even better yet that it will continue after school where they are out in the world and not in a sort of sanctuary.
I absolutely LOVE how you're including all the media in on this story, particularly how Draco managed to get in to see Lucius. I hope that we get to see how Lucius is faring soon. Sounds like Minerva and Poppy are ready to back the girls up on this. I just hope that the Ministry doesn't change the laws on them. o.o Thanks for the shiny new chapter, looking forward to the next gem!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. I hope it wasn't too much or too much information all at once. I have tended to do that. Lucius will be seen again, and will be facing his hearing and trial. Yes, all the professors are - considering Hermione hasn't gotten into detention yet or lost too many house points. teehehehe Oh, don't discount the MoM - they are not happy. Thank you for the review. I do hope to update soon.
I very much liked the discussion between Draco Hermione and Goyle. Nice to see them working together. Was able to follow the story and the details about the economy and job problems are so similar of our lves today that it was interesting and believable. Good Job.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. You'll see a lot of Draco trying to get along. LOL I drew from RL in this chapter and in future ones as well. I checked out the state of the economy in the UK post WWII and uesed that as a guide. Interesting that history is repeating itself. Thank you very much for the review nad the pretty stars.
This just keeps getting better with each chapter. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much.
This is really cool. Nice twist on the challenge.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
. Nope, I didn't want a typical MLC with everyone accepting 'happy marriages' matched by the Ministry. So I took a swing and tried this.
It's perfectly clear where those wankers from the Ministry are heading to. But I doubt the main characters in this story will be like lambs being led into the slaughterhouse. Another excellent chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you for the review, aspia. Nope, there are no lambs in this story! There are a few who will try to go by the rules, but not our girl. No Hermione!doormats. I only plan on a handful saying, "oh, what the heck, okay." I'm glad you like what I'm doing with this ol' Marriage Law senario.
Quite the convoluted mess the ministry has made.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, it's it so!
With these new regulations in place, The Marriage Law and Proper Unions Act, The Emancipation and Marriage Contracts Act, and The Fair Marriage Contracts, it sounds like Eugenics is once again alive and well. The various boards and commissions and offices and all the overlap is beginning to look like a ball of yarn the cat dragged in.This is going to mean serious trouble before long, and I can't wait to see what Hermione, Draco, et al. are going to do about it!Brava!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
The bad thing is that it's all coming from the same department! The Department of Mugle-born Liaisons Commission through The Social Heritage, Marriage, and Registration Committee! And, yes, something this so busy-body and screwed up cannot be up to good!So, don't expect Hermione, Draco and et all to open the paper one morning, read who their 'matched up with and go, "Oh, okay, if I have to. I'll make it work out because I was told to or I'll lose my wand." 'ell no! She'd snap her wand first! LOL
I have read this story for the first time today, and I really liked it! You have brougth a depth to the MLC plot I have rarely seen, not to mention that you have them facing the problems together, both Muggleborns and Purebloods; very well done and worded!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
. I'm hoping to make this "not just another marriage law fic' where Hermione just goes with the flow andaccpets her match. No doormats in this fic!
Does not sound promising for Hermione and her friends! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh just you wait! The rebelion is only just begun!
What is particularly telling is that so far no mention is being made in the Prophet about whether or not the girls have the right to refuse a suitor... Obviously, parents don't have to be consulted if the Wizengamot approves--how long before the girl in question loses that right as well? And if Draco's right about the inevitable reinstating of the old binding charms for marriages, then it would seem that the smart thing to do would be to marry early before more restrictions are added to future marriages. I'll be interested to see if our young heroes decide to go that route in an attempt to watch each other's backs, as it were.This is continuing to get more and more involved and fascinating to read; I can't wait to see what happens next and how everyone will deal with it.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Right now, the Ministry is just 'approvong engagements' and so far we are only at the census stages. Who knows what the Ministry is going to do next.It's actually good that on this main front, Draco (and the guys) is just as vested as Hermione and all the girls. There is more to come, and the rebellion has only just begun!
Great story so far! I really like Draco here.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thanks. Yep, I've tweaked him a bit. Made him see the 'light' in chap 1 and now he's a bit (not totally, but some,) nicer.
drat! I am missing Lucius and Severus here; they would understand what's going on. won't Hermione ask M/M Weasley or Kingsley for their opinion? sounds like the early-bird gets the bride/groom of choice, and the late-choosers get whoever is lef, which could be scrubs. hurry, Hermione - think faster!thanks for the new chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Unfortunately, Severus and Lucius are unavailable. However, do you really think Hermione is going to let ssome Ministry wank tell her who she's to marry? Humm. This is OUR Hermione we're talking about - not the usual sap, "oh, all right, I'll marry him' *sigh* so I don't lose my wand" - doormat! Maybe I've turned the Marriage Law challenge rules upside down?
You really told us a lot of the post war wizarding society in your first chapter. I cant't say I'm delighted by the way you portray how they are reorganising after the final battle.I don't know, somehow visions of Guantanamo Bay and Abu Ghraib were flashing before my inner eye while reading.I'm along for the ride, wherever you will take us, dear mystery author.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh and I have more to go! Things get worse before they get better. But there are a few surprises ahead.Hmm. I was thinking about after WWII and war torn Europe.I'm glad you've decided to come along for the ride--things will get inetersting.Thank you for the review.
Too bad little has changed.
I liked your portrayal of Lucius. I, too, think he had some large misgivings by the end of the war. Unfortunately, his decision to be a DE trapped his entire family into a madman's world.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh there's change! It's jsut coming slowly. and backward.I thought so too. Everything he did in the books was a man trying to toe a line. Protect his family, stay on the good side/favor of Voldemort, but he wasn't as horrid as like Bella or the Lestranges. ANd they scene at the dining room table--the way he seemed down cast, Narcissa stoic and Draco's gaping stare... you know that having Vold in their house was a tremendous toll on them. At the end the secne at the Slytherin table--that broke my heart!
This is a great first chapter, and so much has happened! I felt sorry for Draco having to relive his memories as they were restored... is he really sorry he took the Dark Mark? Or is he cleverly avoiding a more severe punishment?Hermione's of taking Winky and her descendants to be her house-elf for the House of Granger was wonderful. I've always loved Winky and I'm delighted to see her again.I noticed that on of the prompts is "The Marriage Law." I also noticed the absence of any reference to Professor Snape? Hummmmmmm... So is he not an important character? Did he even survive the war? Are Hermione and Draco going to find themselves married to each other? Will Ron seek her hand in marriage?As I said, this is a great first chapter. I am looking forward to your next update.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you so very much. SOmetimes having to see your past - being forced to face it and relive it's horrors and your misdeeds - can hopefully open one's eyes to the fact that they did wrong, or did wrongs. I think he regretted taking the Dark Mark as of the summer after his sixth year - but once branded as a Death Eater, once sworn loyality to VOldemort - there is no going back.Clearly, Draco is not avoiding punishment.Yep, I decided that Winky needed purpose and someone to serve - her own, right and proper service.
Oh, just wait - the Marriage Law is coming. BUt if you expect this to be a typical ML fic - You'll be disappointed! The dreaded Law appears later, and with it's vengence as always! Don't expect the same doormat responce from...
SW has the next chapter. Hopefully, You'll have it soon as well.
Great first chapter--it will be interesting to see what everyone will be called upon to do as time goes on. I also very much liked Hermione taking Winky on as her personal house elf in order to give her back her self-esteem. That she was willing to do that, despite her personal feelings regarding elf-servitude, really shows that she cares for Winky and surely the elf will feel that in the bond between them.I am also looking forward to see if Professor Snape is still alive... if so, he's no doubt receiving much the same treatment Draco was getting only a hundredfold--he's just got so many more memories to extract and live through again.Great story, and I'm already looking for more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. Thing will only get worse, I'm afraid and all - way before it gets better. I figured that someone had to take her in hand and Winky needed a family. I think that Hermione thought that she'd give WInky a servitude and then offer freedom on her terms, I don't think she really knows what she has taken on.I was going to ask a poll, let the readers tell me if he's alove or not. This story is canon up to page 600 of DH, but I wasn't allowed to put that in my chapter due to challenge rules. Kinda bummer, but that's the rule! I'll add it in afters.
The Challenge moderator has my next chapter... hope it will be soon.
Nice start. I look forward to more!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. More's coming.
Interesting set-up :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much.
wow! so who is in charge of Azkaban and prisoner welfare? did Snape survive in this story? are Hermione's parents back from Australia? I wonder if anyone is accurately recording the post-war events. you're doing great at showing the many things that need to be done after a war. looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. The Aurors are in charge and the MLE, of course. I did have in my Author's notes that very question about Snape as a poll... but we aren't allowed to have notes in the challenge. (Not something I like)OH, yes there is a paper or few reporting it, it's big news.Thank you.I hope you like the next one as well.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
uh-oh..... I hope Snapey is alive and well!