Chapter 5
Chapter 5 of 14
beaweasley2Many people were affected by Voldemort—his followers, his victims, and the innocents who had been caught up in the war. After the war is over, how are they dealing? As the Wizarding world recoups, rebuilds, reorganizes, and adjusts to the social and economic changes caused by the aftermath of war, there are still people fighting to correct the wrongs that are out there. Hermione is one, so is Draco. Lucius is another.
ReviewedThe Marriage Law
Lucius paced in his cell, furious that the guards had taken his Prophet that Draco mentioned he'd sent him in his latest letter. In fact, there were sections of Draco's letter that had been blacked out so he couldn't read it. It was censorship, pure and simple. There was something going on, something that the Ministry didn't want the inmates of Azkaban to know about. The perforations on the margins and throughout the letter told him a little of what was going on. He held his letter to the light and reread the secret code, 'Just like in the emancipation acts in 1070, eh, Dad?' Lucius swore. Why would the Ministry lower the age for girls to marry? Surely, parents will not approve of their teenage daughters getting married before they finish school? That archaic practice had been abolished!
He turned the page so he could make out the other message; 'Reinstated the old Bridal Contracts Act and annuls the legal age set during the Reformation, doesn't it?' He squinted his eyes and turned the parchment in the sunlight. 'Just like during the Inquisitions... all over again... Wizengamot denied Nott and Flint to marry their girlfriends, but Longbottom is able to marry Abbott.'
He let his arm drop and stared at the wall. The Ministry is up to something, controlling who gets married to whom and allowing young witches to marry. What are they up to?
He tried reading Draco's handwriting through the ink the guards used to black out his letter. He couldn't make out much. Frustrated, he threw himself on his cot and covered his eyes with his arm. Whatever was going on, the Ministry didn't want him to know. Draco would come to visit during Christmas hols. He'd find out what was going on then.
Hermione and Ginny ambled down to the Great Hall Monday for breakfast as usual, talking about the Hufflepuff game the first Saturday of December and wondering why Mr. Weasley had insisted that Ginny and Hermione stay at Hogwarts for Christmas hols. When they entered the Great Hall, they both noticed that Headmaster McGonagall and the Heads of the Houses, Professors Flitwick, Sprout, Wright, and Podmore were suspiciously missing from the High Table, as were several other professors including Professor Pendergast and Hagrid. Hermione took her seat, reached for the toast, spread some marmalade on it, and stared at the nearly vacant table. As the Hall filled up, murmurs and chatter became louder as everyone started speculating or commenting on the professors' absence.
"What do you suppose is going on?" Ginny asked, her head turned away as she stared at the High Table as well.
Hermione shrugged, unseen by her friend. "I have no idea."
"I know," Luna said from behind them. Ginny and Hermione had been so preoccupied by the empty chairs at the High Table that neither saw Luna until she spoke.
"You know what, Luna?" Hermione asked, making room for her to sit down between her and Ginny.
"Hi, Ginny. You flew well last Thursday in practice. I hope you win this weekend against Hufflepuff," Luna said, helping herself to a sausage as if she'd had all her meals at the Gryffindor table. "My dad wrote to tell me that Mr. Margulies sent my dad a letter. I was hoping to talk to you about it. He is printing a special issue of The Quibbler for everyone at Hogwarts...well, every fifth-, sixth-, and seventh-year, and the eighth-years too, I suppose. You and Ginny aren't going to like it."
"Why? What's going on?" Hermione asked, feeling her heart drop into her gut.
"The Ministry of Magic is taking a census," Luna said as casually as you please.
"THEY'RE WHAT?!" both Ginny and Hermione screeched.
"Over Christmas, everyone fifteen and older will have to fill out a census form," Luna stated blandly.
"NO!" Hermione gasped as Shelia and Valerie sat down.
"What's going on?" Shelia asked, looking questioningly at Hermione, then curiously at Luna, and back.
Ginny sucked in her breath and then exhaled. "That's why he doesn't want me to come home! Do you think it has something to do with the S.H.M.R.C.'s Muggle-born Registration Commission?"
"That's who is conducting the census. Hi, I'm Luna Lovegood. Our fathers are friends," she said, extending a hand to Sheila.
Shelia accepted Luna's hand. "Nice to...what's this about a census?" she asked, letting go of Luna's hand and plopping down in her seat.
Luna explained what her dad had told her about the census. "It'll be in The Quibbler today."
The professors entered the Great Hall just as mail started to arrive. Hundreds of owls swooped in carrying what looked like a bright yellow rolled up newspaper that was delivered to every single fifth-, sixth-, seventh- and returning eighth-year. Hermione unrolled the magazine and gasped at the bold black headline type on the vibrant yellow front page.
The Ministry of Magic Approves A General Census Of All Citizens, Wizarding Residents with a Visa, and Permanent Magical Residents.
The Muggle-born Registration Commission and the Social Heritage, Marriage, and Registration Committee has ordered to effectuate the Census Act under the guidelines of their charter to assist in the enactment of the Emancipation Act and the Fair Marriage Acts set forth by your Ministry of Magic.
Everyone age fifteen and up, and any fourteen-year-old whose fifteenth birthday is before March of next year, are required to register with the S.H.M.R.C. by the end of December.
For details see page three.
The rest of the mail was forgotten as the rustle of the several hundred students quickly turned the page to read the article about the census.
"May I have your attention, please," Professor McGonagall's voice rang out in the Hall over the commotion caused by The Quibbler. "All first- through third-year students will please return to your common rooms until further notice. All fifth-year through N.E.W.T. level students will remain in their seats. If you are fourth-year and will have your fifteenth birthday before the end of March, please remain; those who will not, may join your housemates in your common rooms."
There was a general scramble of students rising to their feet, whispering 'byes' and 'good lucks' to their friends as the younger students left the Great Hall. Hermione felt a sense of dread at their departure. She looked over at the Slytherin table and caught Draco's eye. He looked angry, but nodded to her all the same and held up his copy of the special edition of The Quibbler.
"As you are all aware," Professor McGonagall spoke up after the doors finally closed, "the Ministry of Magic is conducting a census. The Ministry informed me of the census early this morning, and I have held an emergency meeting with the staff in preparation of your questions and concerns regarding this matter. The announcement of the census, as I was told, wasn't to come out until Friday. However, I can see that you all have been notified prematurely. The Ministry official is not due to arrive until later this morning to apprise me of the details, but what I do know is that everyone of you must register."
Outraged and confused murmurs spread among the students.
"Quiet, please," Professor McGonagall shouted over the growing discontent of the students. "All of you will be dismissed from your morning lessons, and we will all reconvene after I have a chance to question the Ministry official personally. Please be assured that your professors and I will make ourselves available to you to discuss any and all of your concerns over this matter. You may go now to your common rooms or, if you prefer, the library. Please do not wander elsewhere."
Hermione and her friends rose to return to the common room, trying to speculate on the ramifications of the announcement in The Quibbler. As she reached half way up the stairs, Hermione felt someone grab her elbow. She turned around, surprised to see Draco, Greg and three Slytherins on the stairs behind her.
"Got a minute?" Draco asked, letting go of her arm.
"Yeah, sure," she said, indicating that they follow her.
Draco and Greg took the lead at the top of the stairs, heading for the Room of Requirement. Several of the Gryffindors followed, Hermione, Ginny, and their friends. Draco rounded on her as soon as they entered the room. "So you see what's going on, right?"
Hermione stopped a few feet from the door as everyone who'd followed them filed into the room. "Draco, it's a census to enable the Muggle-born Registration Commission to update their lists..."
"To make lists of all wizards and witches of marriageable age, according to the past actions of the Commission," he sneered, holding his hands up with his fingers wide in agitation. "They will start telling us who we can and cannot marry."
"They're doing that already," Benders hissed from behind him.
"Only those who we cannot, you prat," another boy said behind him.
"No, they are letting anyone marry a Muggle-born, but pure-bloods are not allowed to marry just anyone," Ginny stated as she moved forward through the group to stand close to Hermione and Draco.
"They are gearing up to make good on Healer Creswell's paper," Draco stated, running his hand through his hair as he paced back and forth, then stopped.
Hermione watched him, knowing there was little to nothing that they as students could do in the situation. "Draco, I think you may be right, but until..."
"May be?" he snapped, rounding on her again.
"Yes, you're speculating...although, I agree with you, it seems the most likely thing. So far, they are only telling us who we can marry based upon Healer Creswell's paper. But I see your point, things are escalating in that direction. However, until we know for sure, there isn't anything we can do about it," Hermione tried to reason with him. Several of the other students began to voice their dissent. "No, wait, all of you. Hear me out. Let's say we do know that the Ministry is going to tell us who we have to marry...until we know for sure there is nothing we can do. Even if and when they make an announcement about some program that meets with Healer Creswell's theories, the public...our parents...will not stand for such nonsense."
Draco wiped his face with his hands, and Goyle and Benders looked ready to argue with her.
"Well, the Muggle-born and Muggle parents won't," she stated firmly. "I know my parents wouldn't!"
"Yeah, like those Muggles were able to stop wizards from taking their magical children from them," the boy behind Benders sneered. "Them kids have not been given back, Granger."
Hermione turned on him, her mouth gaping open. "But I thought..."
"Okay, look, Hermione and I, we have connections," Shelia said, stepping in between Goyle and Benders and nodding to Hermione. "Let's see what's going on...really going on. If I can, I'll get the legislation on this census. But for now, Hermione's right...what can we do? Most of us are still kids! Even those of us of legal age are still looked at as merely students."
"Of legal marriageable age!" Victoria Combs, a fifth-year Gryffindor, whined.
"Let's see what happens. Professor McGonagall said that a Ministry official is meeting with her today to tell her the details. Once she knows something, I'm sure the Heads of Houses will tell us. But until we know anything definite, there is no reason to panic," Hermione said, hoping that she sounded far more assured than she felt. "Draco, how can I find you if I need to?"
Draco's eyebrows shot up for a second before he lowered his head and rubbed his chin, deep in thought. "I might have something." He looked up at her. "Do you still have that coin thing for the DA?"
"Yes," Hermione stated, "but you don't have one."
"But you can make them, right?" Draco asked. "You can connect one of my Galleons to yours for me."
"Yes," Hermione said, nodding.
"So here, use these half pence ones," Goyle said, pulling two two-pence coins from his pocket. "I certainly don't need them."
Hermione pulled out her wand and connected the coins with the Protean Charm. Several other students pulled out coins both Muggle and wizard. "Let's keep it simple for now. Draco will be the Slytherin contact, Luna Lovegood, Ravenclaw, and I'll ask Susan Bones if she wants to be lead contact for Hufflepuff. If the Ministry does pull what you think it will, Draco, we will be stronger if we all stand together on this."
"And get the facts of what they are planning early," Shelia stated.
"So for now, if you hear anything, tell me, Draco, or Luna. We'll tell everyone in our houses. Agreed?" Hermione asked everyone at large. There was a mumbling and general uttering of agreement. "Good. Now, Draco," she said, pulling him aside. "Our common room is at the end of the hall at the portrait of the Fat Lady. How do I find the Slytherin common room if I really need you fast?"
"Just activate the coin and come down to the dungeons," he said. "I'll find you."
"Good enough," she said, turning to go.
Later that morning Professor McGonagall entered the Gryffindor common room and asked all the students who needed to register to follow her to her classroom, as did Professors Sprout, Flitwick, and Wright in their respective houses, although Professor Sprout used a large room on the first floor. Hagrid and Professor Podmore stood by as Professor McGonagall explained to the Gryffindors that each and every one of the students who met the age requirement had to comply with the census, writing down the name of the fourth-years on a list.
By noon, it was all anyone was speculating about: why the Ministry was doing this and who would fall prey for defying the new registration requirements. Between classes, notes were passed, whispers and defiant protesting could be heard in every corridor, nook, and even in the loos.
One week later, the Daily Prophet, the Sorcerer's Sun, and The Quibbler all carried a bombshell announcement:
The Department of Muggle-born Liaisons Commission, The Social Heritage, Marriage, and Registration Committee proudly announce the passing of the Marriage Law and Proper Unions Act
In order to ensure the production of healthy and viable children to secure the future of wizardkind, Charles Polister in cooperation with Healer Creswell and Healer Brumfeild have devised the most feasible and plausible way of guaranteeing the health and viability of our future generations.
The Marriage Law and Proper Unions Act, as based upon historical wizarding laws, any and all single wizards and witches shall be matched by Ministry approved Betrothal Charms to match respectable and desirable witches and wizards based upon specific magical compatibility profiles and magical abilities. All such matches will be considered valid unless reasonable explanations for dissolution can be ascertained, subject to approval of the Ministry of Magic. All those who comply will receive Ministry compensation and a handsome honorarium. Marriages need only last long enough to produce four (4) viable magical offspring, at which time the couple may choose to remain married or ask for an annulment. Any and all current engagements must be approved by the Social Heritage, Marriage, and Registration Committee prior to obtaining a marriage approval certificate. No marriage license may be obtained without Ministry approval of the persons desiring to wed.
Failure to comply with the Marriage Law will result in sterilization, internment in Azkaban, and having your wand snapped. Therefore, all witches and wizards age fifteen though forty are required to register with Graceilla Warblock Head of the Social Herritage, Marriage, and Registration Commission. Failure to comply will result in immediate internment in Azkaban. A grace period for compliance of two weeks for all students of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry shall be in effect or until the end of Christmas holidays.
Below it was another article with a picture of an elderly witch with horn-rimmed glasses, short, curly, salt and pepper hair, red lips, and brown eyebrows she'd apparently drawn on her face.
The Ministry of Magic is pleased to announce the hire of Edithe Havershiems as Coordinator of Betrothal Arrangements for all the eligible young witches and wizards enlisting in the new Marriage Law program. Mrs. Havershiems, a registered Yenta and successful matchmaker for several decades, has agreed to put her considerable talents to the task of helping potential brides and grooms make magically sound choices. "I have a wide knowledge of Plight and Betrothal Charms at the ready to assist our young people. With the help of the register of Heritage Committee, all members of our society can look forward to a respectable and proper match."
The article in the papers caused an outcry in the Great Hall, as almost all the young girls, ages sixteen and up, realized that they could be forced to marry a pureblood or a Muggle-born according to the Ministry of Magic's new laws.
Bernice was looking at The Quibbler. "Oh, listen to this! 'Then there is that insane attempt of the Ministry to enforce arranged marriages between the pureblood families and Muggle-borns or those with close Muggle ancestry. Once word gets out of what the Ministry is planning, the general outcry will be heard around the continent. Of course, the proposal for the program was in general committee for revision for weeks as Mr. Arthur Weasley and Mr. Polister argued in front of the Wizengamot. In the end, Mr. Polister won out. It is this reporter's opinion that Mr. Polister is off his hippogriff. Enforcing our young people to register over their Christmas hols...' But...how could they agree to this?"
"Who wrote that?" Valerie asked, looking up from her own copy of the Sun.
"Betty Beetle, I have no idea who she is," Bernice said, her forehead wrinkled in confusion.
"It's got to be an alias," Hermione stated. "The article sounds like one Rita Skeeter would write. Get this; 'The Marriage Law Project is a public interest legal assistance program that seeks to reaffirm marriage between a magically compatible couples of no related lineage. Ideal shall be that of the union of a pure-blood with anyone of new-blood, that being of half-blood or less, so as to widen the genetic pool of viable partners for future generations. Permission of a marriage union shall be granted only if the intended couple can establish suitable past heritage and meets the requirement of Register of Heritage Committee...' At least the Sun's reporters are cutting through the Prophet's bull."
"A lot of good it will do us unless we find a way out of this," Shelia stated.
"We'll have to get a copy of the legislation, the exact wording," Hermione said, dropping the Sun on the coffee table.
Over the next few days, nothing more was said about the Marriage Law and Proper Unions Act, or any engagements that had been denied by the Wizengamot. There were the normal engagement and a few wedding announcements from the Social Heritage, Marriage, and Registration Committee in the Daily Prophet, but everything seemed to have quieted down. Still, the general outcry and disgruntlement of the students could be heard around the castle and in every publication except the Daily Prophet, which spouted the Ministry's propaganda in favor of the law and its reasons.
Every morning, many letters of assurance were sent from caring parents in regards to their daughters and sons, especially the sixteen-year-old girls, concerns about having older wizards requesting marriages through the S.H.M.R.C. For the few girls who had beaus who'd already graduated, a few of the families had submitted the required information to receive approval of the matches. The Wizengamot had apparently considered the engagements, and those who met approval of the S.H.M.R.C. were published in the Daily Prophet. But those who did not were sent letters from the Department of Muggle-born Liaisons Committee that stated that the approval was 'pending confirmation.'
By dinner, owls arrived from parents telling their daughters that they are unable to circumvent the law and that each girl must register and abide by the regulations or face loss of their wand, magical sterilization, and imprisonment.
Hermione used a penname to the Ministry of Magic Office of Magical Regulations, and Legation Archives Office and the Administrative Offices of the Wizengamot, requesting a copy of the Marriage Law legislation. Likewise, Draco and two other Slytherins contacted their family solicitors and barristers, trying to obtain copies of the Marriage Law. Hermione met with Draco twice, to discuss getting a copy of the original bill.
Friday when post arrived at breakfast, an owl carried an official packet to her with the Wizengamot seal. Another packet arrived the next morning from the Archives Office. During her break that morning, Hermione pored over the documents, highlighting various important key elements, and managed to decipher the poorly written legislations and break down each component in her search for any loophole that they students could use to get around the law.
Draco sought her out in the library with a thick folder from his solicitor and a copy of the Marriage Law. The barrister had added tabs and highlights of the key elements as well as a brief explanation. "Draco, this is great, but I have two copies already. Give me until tonight to go through this," she requested.
"Sure, we're meeting for Muggle Studies tonight, right?" he asked.
"Yeah, tonight...right after dinner," Hermione said as she tucked the folder in her bag and hurried to class.
Hermione read as much of the material during her break as she could, her eyes widening at the annotations made by the solicitor as she did. That evening, Shelia, Ginny, and Bernice came with her to her Muggle Studies tutorial.
Draco, followed by several Slytherins, approached her before Hermione had time to drop her bag. "Did you read the folder my solicitor sent us?" he asked.
"I perused it, yes," Hermione said, pulling out the Sears catalogue and the books: What Do People Do All Day, Cars and Trucks and Things That Go, and Busy, Busy Town.
"Did you read the part he'd underlined about the previously agreed engagements clause?" he asked, placing his hands on the desk Hermione generally sat on.
Hermione stood up and looked at him. "Skimmed it, but the Emancipation Commission for Fair Marriage Contracts and the Marriage Law and Proper Unions Act both annul any previously arranged..."
"Except where bridal dowries have been formalized and all parties involved have signed the contracts," Draco said smugly.
Hermione gave him a quizzical frown. She sat down at the desk, pulled out the folder and turned to the marker Draco indicated. She withdrew her notebook with her notes, the articles from the newspapers, and her copy of the Marriage Law. The room filled up with students from all the houses, all waiting, watching as Hermione finished checking the annotations and comparing them to her notes. Her brows creased, then rose, only to crease again as she scowled at the parchment.
"Okay, give," Draco snapped at her. "Am I right about the previously agreed engagement clause or not?"
"I think you're right, except it won't help anyone pure-blood who wants to marry another pure-blood. Even if you have a previously arranged engagement, the Wizengamot is, under this new law, forced to invalidate it. Only any engagement between a half-blood or less to a pure-blood, preferably a pure-blood and Muggle-born or new-blood, is acceptable," she looked up at the four Slytherins who'd come with Draco. "I'm sorry. However, I might be able to figure out a way of surmounting and evading the Ministry's attempts of forced marriages."
"All right, give," Thomas demanded, looking at her intently.
"It isn't really something to help the guys, per se, but will in a round-about way. If the girls were to become pregnant, then there is a clause, poorly written and easy twisted around, that states that she could insist on marrying the baby's father as long as the child was deemed healthy and sound. The engagement would be allowed as long as the offspring showed no magical deformities. However, until the child demonstrated significant magical abilities, they cannot actually get married. It's a long shot, but feasible."
"You mean we have to have sex and get pregnant?" Miss Bowers, a sixth-year from Hufflepuff, screeched.
"My father would kill me!" another girl cried out.
"The Bastard law?" Cecil asked, clearly affronted by the idea.
"You're kidding," Greg sneered.
"I might, in time, be able to formulate ways of surmounting and evading the Ministry's attempts of forced marriages. There is always the Pseudopregnancy or Pseudocyesis Potions. They are supposed to imitate a false pregnancy. That is if any of the girls want to take it. I saw the potion directions in the Restricted Section once. If I can find it again...I can make it. That might buy us some time to figure out a better idea," she suggested. "But I'll have to find the book again and get all the ingredients."
Bernice broke out in a huge grin. "Oh, I can help with obtaining the ingredients, and as much as you need."
"Really?" Draco asked. "How's that?"
"My father and uncle are Searchers! They run a supply business for the Apothecaries. I can get you anything," she said, blushing and lowering her head.
"That takes care of the ingredients," Hermione said, looking up at Draco. "How about helping me find the book?"
"You're on," he said, grinning.
Greg looked confused. "How's that going to help us not get roped into marrying someone we don't want to?"
Cecil snorted a laugh. "If all the girls are pregnant, none of them will be eligible. If there are no eligible girls...there can't be anyone to force us to marry."
"Well, almost. If each girl claims that she is pregnant, and names a 'boyfriend' who is the father, that might tie things up for at least a few months. Or, until we are discovered," Hermione said and turned to face Greg. "Either way, it will effectively eliminate half of the equation. If all the girls are ineligible, there's no one to match the guys up with, and they can't match up a guy who is already charged with a paternity claim."
"So we use the Bastard's Law against them," Cecil said, apparently pleased with Hermione's solution.
"I think it's brilliant," Draco said, grinning mischievously. "We just make the potion, get every girl to drink it and match everyone up."
"What happens if they make us marry the girl?" Greg asked.
Draco clapped a hand on his shoulder. "They can't. The Paternity Charm cannot be used until the third trimester. So, it's the girl's word against the bloke's kind of thing. They always side with the girl until paternity can be ascertained. Under the Bastard Law, the responsible bloke cannot be betrothed to anyone else until his responsibility for the baby is proven or disproven. It's prefect!"
Shelia didn't look convinced. "As soon as the Healers find out the girls are not pregnant and therefore the guy is obviously not responsible...we're back at square one."
"But that gives us six months to come up with something else," Hermione stated. "And believe me, I will find some way out of this. I am not about to let the Ministry pick my husband for me."
Hermione had never seen a larger smile than the one that appeared on Greg's face.
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172 Reviews | 7.12/10 Average
I've read quite a number of Marriage Law stories, and this has to be amongst the most unique. I love the lengths Draco, Hermione et al are going to in order to circumvent the law, and the friendships that have built up as a result. Looking forward to more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. I just can't see our girl, or anyone else for that matter, just allowing such a farce as a Marriage Law happen without standing up to it, considering how they all stood up to Dolores Umbridge and the Dark Lord and fought them. Thank you for the review.
Dalton Troll Securities LOLToo bad Ron couldn't behave himself towards fellow guests. *sighs* Bad manners ...Maybe he is going to see reason soon. With Ron it's always act first, think later. I hope the thinking part will start soon.I'm curious about the Fede charm - and how it possibly could affect Harry and Ginny, now that she has dropped the paternity suit ...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yeah, well, Ron's not the most mature of boys. The Fede Charm will put mark, a ring, on Ginny's and Harry's ring fingers that shows they are taken - by each other. It's ones who are still 'single' that have to worry. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
“And, Hermione,” Ernest said with a sigh, “you cannot single handedly take on every cause in the office.” Her boss is getting to know her, isn't he?Another wonderful chapter with lots of information not only about Hermione's life, but also about the way the Wizarding World deals with things - the werewolves, Ex-Deatheaters ...Hermione's is still faking her pregnancie, isn't she? In the meantime she should be in her 3rd trimester, so why hasn't the appointment with the claimed father already taken place and the - of course nonexistant - vital signs of the fetus taken? That nobody commented on her pregnancy at Law School and her new job (of course they all suspect it's just a ruse, but still) somehow seems to be unrealistic.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh, yes, and relying on her too. Thank you. Yep, the big picture. Hermione and a lot of the girls left school sterilized. Ginny is faking still, but then she's willing to be matched up with Harry. But the S.H.R.M.C. isn't taking the girls off the list yet, because they think they are faking the sterility somehow.Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I somehow missed that Hermione let herself be "sterilized", because after the majority of the eligible students were "deemed unfit for the program", Harry adviced her to drop the paternity suit against Ron. So I thought she still was faking the pregnancy and was confused ...
Ron always was a little hot-head. Jumping to conclusions without bothering with the facts. I hope he calms down enough not to completely ruin his friendships with Harry and Hermione with his continued prejudice.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, he's a react to without thinking kind of guy, lol. He's also under pressure from the S.H.R.M.C. which isn't helping any. I know, excuses. He'll have a eye opener to the situation fairly soon, from one you'd not expect it to come from. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Hermione is doing her dead level best to stay away from Draco, but he has slowly been able to form tentative friendships with Harry and Ginny, and I'm thinking that our Hermione should just accept the fact that she should learn to get along with him... I don't know if she would ever consider marrying him, but it looks like he's going to be a part of her circle of friends.
Lucius has been allowed to come home, and I'm sure that is a great relief for Draco. I noticed that Narcissa was in the courtroom but was sitting apart from her son. I suppose that their marriage is still very much in jeopardy and it is only a matter of time before Narcissa will move out of the Manor (if she is still living there). I wonder if she, having heard what Lucius told the judge about why he returned to Voldemort, might choose to stay married to Lucius. If his mother does decide not to stay married to Lucius, it will be a hard thing for Draco.
Greg and Francine are a very easy going couple, and I was glad to see Francine speak to Ron and try to mollify his reaction to finding Greg and Draco at Harry and Ginny's home for dinner.
Edithe Havershiems is doing her best to make her matches work... err, stay together, but it sounds like the betrothed are not willing to cooperate. I gather that the Fede Charm Healer Brumfield has suggested be used with the signed census when she has matched a couple is supposed to make it more difficult for the union to be dissolve. I'm not sure how that is suppose to work. Will there be a compulsion charm incorporated into the betrothal?
This was a busy chapter, a good chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, Draco is smoozing his way into her circle of friends. lol so, yes, she’ll have to come to terms with him.
There are a lot of hardships going on. Cissy was in the courtroom that day, but not others. Things are not good between them. She went through the interrogation by memory removal and return just as Draco and Greg did – it affected her. Lucius coming home might be good or cause upheavals. We’ll see.
Francine is an easy going, hard working girl who is actually in love with Greg. In canon, you don’t see Greg with anyone, even the Yule Ball he didn’t have a partner, that’s why he was so blown away that she had picked him. His first girlfriend, his first love. I know, too cute. Francine is a good mother type and didn’t want friction. She might have even been a prefect (?) so she was trying to calm Ron down, make him realize that he was causing a scene over nothing.
Edithe is matching couples based on responses on a form and her own whims. (Like when a computer was used to make matches for one of my junior high school dance – most of the couples didn’t like each other, didn’t know each other at all, or were already seeing someone else. Most of the people matched up for the dance ended up with their boyfriend or girlfriend by the middle of the dance anyway. I’m using those statistics for the couples Edithe matches.)
The Fede Charm will make a Claddugh appear on the finger, two hands holding a heart with a crown on it. If the heart with the crown is pointed toward the knuckle, inward to the wearer, it will mean their heart was captured—betrothed. If the heart is turned away… See? ‘hands in trust’ or ‘hands in faith.’ If you only do this because you have to, is it in ‘good faith?’
Should make things complicated for a few people.
Thank you for the long and interesting review, Beth. I love them! Oh and the pretty stars, too.
That evil little weasel!! (And for once I'm not talking about Malfoy...) Thanks for another great chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
sorry my curser jumped! Yes, he's a git! You are very welcome for the chapter. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
OK, that healer is scary, Ron is still an idiot, and Draco is trying really hard. It seems the Gryffindors have more prejudice to overcome than the Slytherins. I like Lucius's punishment, also.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, he's a piece of work. Did you really expect a mature Ronnikins? Draco is trying too hard. Well, they are as prejudiced as the Slytherins, but they feel they won the war - so it's all their way now, right? idiotsThanks. I couldn't have him just freed, so this gives him recovery time. Besides, his $$ will be put to good use (You can't get monies from convicts!)Thank you for the review, blue, and the pretty stars.
I sense some major problems for the 'insolent children' in the future. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh course there are problems! There wouldn't be a story unless there were. LOL Thank you for the review.
Clever. . . very clever.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Aw shucks. Thank you.
Great chapter, I love how you handled Mr. Malfoy Sr. Nice blend of punishment and forgiveness.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. I am in unfam water with him and keep hoping I do him justice. Yes, well, you can't get monies for charities if he's in jail --so it's a win win, sort of. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Oh no. Looks like more trouble afoot! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
LOL Of course there is! Otherwise, there's no story to tell!
Ack! What does the Fede do -- does it curse anyone who tries to break the betrothal? Scary.I am so glad Lucius is out, with Harry at the hearing. He must be resting at home, but is Cissa with him to help in his recovery? I am guessing that Draco won't overwhelm his father with info on the Marriage Law until his dad is stronger.Sorry to see Ron still being a prat about his childish prejudices. Grrr.....Thanks for updating!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh, you'll have to wait to see what the Fede does! I gave you a bit of it, but yes, there's more!Yes, Lucius is out, Cissy is not at home and Severus is still in France. Lucius is catching up on old Prophets, but I'll explain that later.Did you really think Ronnikins has matured to 'grown up' yet? *laughs*Thank you for the review and the pretty stars!
Well, if nothing else, Draco is persistant.one way or another, he is determined to make Harry his friend and have Hermione as his bride.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, he is that. He's used to getting what he wants. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
That's one way to get Harry to read something important: add humour! Poor Lucius. They truly are just enjoying torturing him, otherwise they would just keep the necessary memories until they are finished with them. I hope he comes out of it sane.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
LOL or add pictures of Quaffles and Snitches on the margins! Yes, but like with Draco, the method is to make him relive the moments, to see the error of his ways, so to speak. It worked wonders on Draco and Greg! But Lucius is of stronger metal than Draco. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Hermione working for the Ministry could place her in a very convenient position to be apprised of new developments concerning the S.H.R.M.C. and any new laws the Wizengamot have in the works. If her own boss is anything to go by, I'll bet there are several people in various departments who would happily pass on information they discovered to Hermione while passing her in the halls!Poor Draco... having to impress people who don't really care about his money or status. Talk about a fish out of water! But I imagine he'll screw up by paying for Hermione's remaining years of law school for her without asking or something like that. He'll think of it as a kind gesture, and she'll see it as his way of putting her in his debt. Maybe he can get Severus to give him some advice on how to deal with Gryffindors! I'm looking forward to Draco's further attempts to woo...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, it very well could. Also she has friends there as well. Yes, Draco is going to have to learn how to make friends the old fashioned way. And he might blunder a few things as well. I'm sure that he'll make some attempt of helping her out. SW has the next chapter, so we'll see. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Sounds like the perfect job. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh it gets even better! Thank you for the reveiw.
I wonder what Draco will be doing this summer, and how soon he will find out she needs money for school. I bet he figures it out quick and tries to make Hermione an offer to help! Still hoping Lucius gets out soon. Thanks for updating!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh yes, Luicus gets out soon. Draco is going to try using his cahrm on Harry. lol And it won't take long for him to find out she's getting student loans. You are very welcome for the update. Thank you for the reveiw and the pretty stars.
She needs to get those laws changed. And Draco trying to be nice is both amusing and pathetic.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh, yes she does! Well, yes. Draco can't rely on his money or social status with Harry--so he's out of his element here. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Networking... the number one way to find a job. Very enjoyable chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Well, I did think it could be applicable to the wizarding world, considering how much nepotism there seems to be. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars!
So Greg is going to be a father! I love what you've done with his character and Draco's. I wonder if Draco will ever be able to convince Hermione to become his bride? Maybe, maybe not. Only time will tell.I can't imagine having to make a decision to either marry someone you didn't want to marry or agree to be sterilized. This Post-war MOM is filled with idiots. When are the biggest idiots going to be removed from power or be prosecuted for crimes against the British Wizarding community? I hope we get to see Lucius and Severus both helping to get this law overturned.Looking forward to more of this story!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, Greg Golye is going to be a dad - of twins, no less! I think he'll be a great dad now that he's grown up some. It jsut took the right girl.Thank you for your comments on how I'm writing Draco. I'm still trying to make this 'nicer version' still feel like canon Draco. It's hard. lol That is a very honest responce to the choice I have given the young people in this story: A. Marry someone you don't/might know, who might be quite a bit older/younger than you, could be someone you dont even like, or someone who might be abusive and be trapped with that person until you have 4 kids.B. Allow Hermione to sterilize you and hope this potion works, and that the blighter who created it really had found the way to reverse the Sterility Curse.C. Or defy the MoM and get pregnant for real, risking being shut into St. Mungo's until the babay is born, filing a petition for marriage under the Bastard Law, while the guy responsible faces being sued and arrested.Oh, yes great options.Oh I have a dynamic team worked out! I hope you approve.Thank you very much. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
I love your Greg. After years of knuckle crunching and snarling, he really has turned out to be a big teddy bear. He is so excited about being a dad and about having a girlfriend, he doesn't even care what his father thinks. Draco is still the perfect Slytherin. Can't woo the girl herself? Go through her best friend!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
I know I completely changed Greg's character in this story, but after a near death experience and saved by his nemsis, then being questioned by the interrogators... he's a bit changed. So I made him a dad, thinking he'd be a great dad. and Yes, Draco is going to try changing tactics to woo the girl. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Greg as a dad? There's something sweet about that.This is a great fic- I look forward to watching Draco woo Hermione via Harry. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, Greg Goyle is going to be a father! Thank you very much for the compliment and pretty stars.
Great read so far! Oh, Draco... what are we to do with you?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. Draco is just after what he wants, that's all. lolThank you for the review and the pretty stars.
So Draco is smitten with Hermione? Really?Well, the way he has changed, he might have stood achance with her, had he not made a point of getting their marriage approved. Now Hermione will fight him.I really smiled while reading the scene with Greg - him stating that he wants to be a good dad was so incredible sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Draco was told by the S.H.R.M.C. and the Wizengamot that he'd have to marry a Muggle-born. So who is the only semi-acceptable Muggle-born he knows. Hermione. If you have to pick one--pick the best of the lot. And, having just had such wonderful (NOT) news about Ron, Hermione is confronted with his proposal. Nope, Draco just joined the prat club again!I like Greg, the newer, softer, more teddy-bear version--and so I made him a going-to-be dad. I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Opened his eyes, did it? But Draco needs to remember how stubborn his lioness is. She might marry him after the law is rescinded, but not before that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Draco had rotten timing! And didn't think this over very well. Of course Hermione was goign to dig in ther claws and tell him off! At this point it'll take quite abit to make her fall for him--quite a bit.Thakn you for the review and the pretty stars.