Chapter 10
Chapter 10 of 14
beaweasley2Many people were affected by Voldemort—his followers, his victims, and the innocents who had been caught up in the war. After the war is over, how are they dealing? As the Wizarding world recoups, rebuilds, reorganizes, and adjusts to the social and economic changes caused by the aftermath of war, there are still people fighting to correct the wrongs that are out there. Hermione is one, so is Draco. Lucius is another.
ReviewedAfter the Leaving Feast
As if Hermione didn't have enough to worry about with revising for her N.E.W.T.s, the Ministry sent her a letter four days before exams, threatening to expel her and any student agreeing to follow her example. Hermione wrote a letter telling Charles Polister to go ahead and try expelling nearly half the student population of Hogwarts, and she dared him to explain to the public why every single student appeared to be fighting his department's forced marriages. She sent copies of the letter to each publication: the Sorcerer's Sun, Magical Living, Witch Weekly, The Magic Mirror, Witches Home Journal, and of course, The Quibbler, which all printed the letter.
The Daily Prophet ran a scathing article about all of Hermione's defiance against the Ministry's efforts to resolve the problem of magical defects and strengthening the magical bloodlines. Several people wrote her, outraged that the Ministry would continue its attack against her the week before her exams. Many of the letters stated that copies had been sent to Charles Polister and the Minister himself. Both papers, the Sorcerer's Sun and The Quibbler, published copies the letters she'd received showing their support.
Hermione responded with a letter in the Sorcerer's Sun and The Quibbler that forcing people to get married through a Yenta, disregarding and denying the engagements of people in love was repugnant. She argued that as long as the S.H.M.R.C. was going to force people into marriages without allowing the couples to decline the Yenta's matches, it was a flawed program of forced breeding, and that the Wizengamot was showing of complete disregard to the individual's feelings or concerns.
The S.H.M.R.C.s program is extremely prejudicial, just as prejudicial as Voldemort's idealism was, only targeted against pure-bloods instead of Muggle-borns. Instead of trying to heal the wounds of war, new wounds are being opened, new prejudices spouted and acted upon to the determent of us all. Why must blood be a factor in these decisions? Why must blood be the segregation factor that divides us? Why not look at ourselves and each other and see people. Witch or wizard...we are human beings and deserve respect. She also pointed out in her letter, If we learned anything from the rise of Voldemort, and from Gellert Grindelwald before him, it is that prejudices are destructive to our society and to us as human beings. It's time to rise above this petty nonsense and see each other as people, equal, each of us unique and special in our own rights. I would hope that our legacy isn't a continuation of hate and disrespect because of who you were born to, but rather from our actions, contributions, and achievements. Only then will we have a society to be proud of.
The day of her first exam, more letters poured into to the Great Hall the following day, some in support, others defamatory.
The Daily Prophet decided to run an article on the location of the Quidditch World Cup and two huge articles on the competing teams, Germany and Italy.
Ginny was commenting on the change in the Prophet as they exited the Great Hall for the library to revise.
"Er, Hermione, you got a minute?"
She turned, surprised to see Greg waiting for her in the corridor. "Sure, Greg, what's up?"
"I was hopin', well, I wondered if you had a minute," he said, gripping his book bag tightly in his hands.
Hermione smiled. "Sure, I have a minute." She turned to Ginny. "I'll catch up with you later, okay?"
"Yeah," Ginny said, waving her off. "I'll save you a seat."
Hermione walked over to Greg and placed a hand on his arm. "You're worried about your Muggle Studies N.E.W.T., aren't you?"
Greg nodded and looked down. "If I don't pass my N.E.W.T., I won't be leaving Hogwarts. Part of my, er, probation. Me and some of the guys, we were wondering, do you...could you have a review session tonight?"
Hermione bit her lip. She had two N.E.W.T.s to revise for: Ancient Runes and Literature. She'd read all the books on the reading list Professor Kleiger had given them, and she didn't need all night for Runes... "I think I can spare some time this evening. How about right after dinner?"
"How about dinner?" Greg asked hopefully.
Three third-years passing them shot surprised glances their way. She laughed at his suggestion as they watched the students leave. "So, Mr. Goyle, is that a proposition for a date?" she asked teasingly.
His face turned a few shades of pink. "Francine wouldn't like that very much. I was thinking that we could get you into the common room and have dinner there. If you'd want to, of course."
"Sure. But I have to revise for Ancient Runes. I have that N.E.W.T. tomorrow morning, but I can spare an hour or two," Hermione agreed. "By the way, how is Francine? She hasn't asked me for her potion. Did she decide to go along with whomever the Ministry selected for her?"
Greg turned a much darker shade of red and stared at his hands. "She stopped taking the potion. I'm gonna be a dad." He looked up as Hermione gaped at him in shock. "She's pregnant. Twins. Two of them. Me. I'm having a baby...two of 'em."
"Greg, I'm happy for you if you are," she said encouragingly, her smile genuine. "I know you like the girl."
"She's all right. She picked me, you know. Out of all the blokes, she picked me," he said as if still in awe. "She's so smart and pretty. A Hufflepuff, but they make good mums, right?" He looked away again as he leaned against the wall. "I have told her to keep the suit in case my dad gets mad and tries anything. I won't contest it, if she'll have me. Draco says that if the baby is...are...both of them are healthy and strong, the Wizengamot will marry us. That is if they approve." He looked up at her earnestly, his worry that he'd let her down evident in his eyes. "Are you disappointed in us?"
"Greg, if it makes you happy, then I'm happy for you," Hermione said, giving his arm a squeeze again to emphasize her sentiments. "All I ever wanted was for us to have matches we wanted. If you and Francine will be happy together, then I'm happy for you."
"Thanks," he said, grinning. "I still can't believe I'm gonna be a dad."
"Considering what the Ministry is doing, it was inevitable," she replied, smiling back at him. "I think you'll make a great dad."
"Thanks. Do you really think so? I don't want to muck up and, well, you know, do it wrong," he replied. "But I gotta pass my N.E.W.T.s first. I think I'll do all right in History of Magic; I only needed an acceptable in that one, but I have to do get an Exceeds in my Muggle Studies so they know I took it seriously enough."
"Well, we do have a dinner date to revise for that one," Hermione said cheekily. "Besides, I've always wanted to see the Slytherin common room, ever since my second year."
"Oi, about that...who impersonated me that time?" he asked, giving her an all too familiar scowling glare.
"If I remember right, it was Harry," she admitted.
Greg nodded as if thinking whether he should be mad or not. "Crabbe and I had a bet going... Moot point now, isn't it? But I'm kinda glad it was him." He pushed off from the wall. "I got to go. Francine wants to talk about baby names again."
"See you in the Entrance Hall or should I meet you in the dungeons?" she asked, falling in step with him as they walked off. "I have no idea where the Slytherin common room entrance is, except that it's in the dungeons."
He smiled, knowingly. "I'll meet you by the stairs that lead to the dungeons. That way you won't get lost."
Hermione exited the classroom with a fidgety sense of uncertainty that she always felt after an exam. She fought down the urge to run and check her answers, forcing herself to be content with the fact that given everything going on around her she had done her upmost best on the exam, and come what may, she knew her score would be high. She had one more exam, and then her schooling at Hogwarts would be over.
Draco hadn't given up on his intention of talking her into accepting his proposal, much to Hermione's annoyance. The second day of exams, he'd approached her to ask if she'd reconsidered, then escorted her to her next exam. Since they had Transfiguration together the next day, he escorted her there as well, and afterwards to the library, then to the Transfigurations practical. She managed to ditch him before dinner, but afterwards, he tried to escort her to her common room, all under the pretenses of wanting her to 'get to know him better.' In addition, each meal in the Great Hall that day, as he had the day before, and the day before that, he'd made eye contact with her and had raised his goblet in her direction as if toasting them as a couple with what she knew he'd thought to be his most winning smile. It had been aggravating her to no end and highly distracting. Thankfully, all her friends had their Herbology practical after breakfast the last day of exams, so she'd been surrounded by them on her way to the greenhouses as they'd compared notes and shared last minute revision questions. She'd even managed to ditch him on her way to lunch.
"Draco, I haven't changed my mind," Hermione snapped when Draco, followed by Cecil, cornered Hermione in the corridor between exams.
"Well, I certainly hope not or you'll put us all in a jam!" Cecil scowled at her.
"Of course not!" she exclaimed, furious at the accusation.
"Look, some of the guys need to talk to you." Draco shoved a piece of parchment at her. "Here is the list of guys who have sorted things out with their girlfriends and went and got their girlfriends pregnant...for real! The rest of us are meeting in the classroom next to the History of Magic room after the last exam. Can you come?"
"Yes, I can come...I'm not quitting anything." Hermione shoved the parchment in her bag. "Are you saying you got a girl pregnant?"
"No, Hermione, but we've been designated as leader or spokeswizard for the guys," Draco said, chuckling softly. "Since we've been in the thick of it since the beginning, it was kind of natural...look, some of the guys were getting nervous and their girlfriends were getting scared. So some of the blokes decided to go ahead and... We're getting together to talk about how to defend their actions. A little late, but they can't do the Sterility Charm if they got their girls pregnant, and the Ministry is putting pressure on the girls to drop their paternity suits."
"Pretty much, anyone who's going to be sterilized has done so, right?" Cecil asked, checking that they were not attracting unwanted attention.
"Most of the students who had been conspiring in the ruse of the false pregnancies have allowed me to sterilize them with the promise that the charm would be reversed when they decided to have children," Hermione admitted. "But not all of them. I know a few girls told me that they had gotten pregnant and therefore couldn't have the charm done. It would've caused a miscarriage."
"From what Julianna told me, several of the girls who'd been claiming that their boyfriends knocked them up risked Azkaban by taking fertility potions to get pregnant," Draco stated.
"Yeah, Luna and Shelia said that they'd heard that Madam Pomfrey sent in a correction letter stating the new due dates with the report confirming the pregnancies by means of fetal vital signs," Hermione said, crossing her arms. "Shelia said that it really confused the Healers of St. Mungo's. The article this morning in the Daily Prophet reported that the couples were hoping to win their paternity suits so they could marry their boyfriends. I really hope they can. The article was particularly harsh. The Prophet condemned them for taking matters into their own hands and increasing the risk of adding more deformed and magically inept children onto magical society, as if that is really going to happen," she sneered. "The other publications, like The Quibbler, Witch Weekly, and the Sun simply stated that since the Pregnancy Charm hadn't been used, Madam Pomfrey had simply been mistaken, confusing pre-N.E.W.T. stress as pregnancy symptoms."
"Bet that put her knickers in a twist," Cecil snickered.
"She wasn't pleased, but she's staying silent on it for now. She's been trying to help us all along, but even she is getting threats from the Wizengamot." She tilted her head and her brow creased as she tried to consider what if anything she could do about their situation.
"So, the guys want to talk to you...us...about the ramifications," Cecil stated, breaking her train of thought.
Hermione shrugged, wondering what if anything there was to say to these couples, they were taking a huge risk, actually getting pregnant. "I can try, but you'd know more about that than me, Draco. You know these laws as well as I do."
"Hermione, those of us that are sticking with the sterility plan are, well, it's nerve wracking. We want assurances that this potion will work... that you were...are...are you a virgin?"
"Am I a what?" she exclaimed in disbelief. "How can you ask me that?"
"I read the potions directions from Snape," Draco said with a raised eyebrow. "Certainly you and Weasley..."
"As if that's your business!" she snapped then covered her mouth! "You think...me...how dare you presume anything Draco Malfoy!"
"That would be a no," Draco said, turning to Cecil.
"So who collected the water?" Cecil asked.
Hermione tried to fight down the slight warm feeling in her face. "Luna asked the female for the water."
"Excuse me?" they asked in unison with identical looks of stunned disbelief.
"You heard me," Hermione replied, nodding. "The Unicorn took the container and filled it herself."
"Well, that's a relief," Cecil said, although Draco was eyeing her suspiciously.
"So what about the meeting, you coming or not?" he asked.
"Draco, I'm going to law school, not a graduate of...I know as much about this as you do! Less, actually! You're the one who told me about the Bastard Law!"
Cecil hitched his bag more comfortably on his shoulder. "Look, at this point it's for moral support. These guys, they're in a fix with the S.H.M.R.C. and are getting a lot of pressure. Those of us who are choosing to be sterile, well, they want reassurances. They got letters too saying...Charles Polister and Graceilla Warblock wrote that all us guys broke the law by impregnating our girlfriends and will face fines...even imprisonment. And now we are considering being made sterile...but...you know... sterilization? You started this movement...finish it!"
"We are all under pressure from the S.H.M.R.C.! I'll come, but I have no idea what I can say or do. They, like me, and every one of us, are defying the laws. The laws are wrong, and someday, somehow, someone will figure that out and do something about it, but until then..." She sighed to calm herself down. "Everyone who had decided to do the Psuedopregnanacy Potion is now on the receiving end of the Ministry's vengeance for our independent declaration of defiance, just as our letters from the MLE stated. But so far no one has been arrested. No one is going to jail...but they are putting pressure on us all to comply with the law and the S.H.M.R.C. I'm sure of that as long as the couples who have gotten pregnant have healthy babies, it will be all right, but what can the S.H.M.R.C. do? They're whole thing is about making babies and boosting the population of wizardkind!"
"They threatened to put the girls in St. Mungo's and the blokes in Azkaban," Draco stated. "We should go."
Cecil nodded and turned to leave.
Draco looked at her with a piercingly resolute stare. "Reconsider, Hermione. It wouldn't be that bad."
"No, Draco," she said, shaking her head.
He looked away and back at her as he sighed. "Why not? You'd have everything you could possibly want."
"Not everything," she said, glaring at him. "Money isn't everything."
Draco shrugged. "Makes things a lot easier," he said as he turned to leave. "Think about it and reconsider my offer."
Hermione turned quickly and stormed off in the opposite direction for her next exam, muttering, "As if, you sneaky, underhanded snake! You don't love me, and I don't love you, you little ferret. I don't care if the Wizengamot approved us...I'm not marrying anyone because I have the right bloodline...or lack of bloodlines. Ooughhh!"
"Hermione, are you all right?" Shelia asked, holding open the door to the classroom.
Valerie blushed and hurried inside.
Hermione let another Ravenclaw guy pass them. "Do you remember what I told you Draco asked me?"
"Yeah," Shelia stated, wrinkling her brow in confusion.
"He told me to reconsider."
"Git," Shelia said with a jerk of her head and a roll of her eyes. "C'mon, forget him. We have our Charms N.EW.T. to fail."
"DON'T SAY THAT!" Hermione screeched in shock, one hand reaching out automatically to grab Shelia's arm, the other clutching her chest, making several students in the classroom turn around, some of them snickering.
"Hermione, calm down! I was only joking," Shelia said, trying to reassure her.
Ginny started laughing from her seat at the front of the room. "Didn't you know? That's Hermione's Boggart...McGonagall telling her she'd failed something."
Several students groaned at the comment, one boy said, "As if that would happen," and several more had to turn away to conceal their mirth or shook their heads.
"Not funny, Gin! Stop laughing," Hermione said as she hurried to her seat, her heart still pounding in her chest.
Valerie groaned as Hermione and Shelia walked past her desk. "As if you'd fail a test. No one gets higher scores."
"Everyone, settle down now," Griselda Marchbanks said as the stack test pamphlets floated down the aisle and individual ones landed on each occupied desk. She stopped directly in front of Hermione and gave her a wink as she nodded her head. "Just do your best, young lady. Everything will work out, but keep your wits about you," she said encouragingly, then lowered her voice. "I'm right proud of you, Miss Granger. Tosh, this blasted law...infernal tripe it is, but you keep at it. It's making a difference."
Hermione stared at the woman, gobsmacked.
"Bags away, all your belongings off your desks," Mrs. Marchbanks said clearly. "Your exam quills are beside your inkwells. You may break the seal on your test booklet and begin."
Mrs. Marchbanks nodded at the sound of the seals popping. "You may begin."
Hermione exited the large classroom with a sigh of relief, her last N.E.W.T. was over, and she was now a graduate of Hogwarts.
Throughout the week, several more students had approached Hermione and Ginny to say that they had decided to defy the Wizengamot and try the sterilization spell. They'd tried to be as reassuring as possible, answered the concerned inquiries with as much patience as possible, but inwardly Hermione hated being frequently interrupted while revising. Susan, Julianna, and Luna frequently joined her and Ginny, Shelia, and Bernice in the library whenever possible, as did Valerie. Thankfully, her friends were fielding as many questions as she was, so that was a relief. But since Hermione was considered the leader of their rebellion, she was the one most frequently sought out.
Hermione had never been at a leaving feast that held as much nervous anxiety as the one that had been held last night. Slips of parchment were passed to her from so many students, wanting to keep in touch and worried about what would happen over the summer. She had even started using a Muggle address book, adding in extra pages magically to keep all the address and Floo connections she was receiving.
That night, the Room of Requirement was once again a huge spacious meeting room, as those leaving and those who faced a year without her gathered to hear Hermione's assurances that she was only an owl away and that the potion to reverse the sterility would be available to anyone who asked her for it. "REMEMBER," she shouted over the din in the room. "Keep your lock of hair in a safe place because you'll need it to reverse the spell."
"You're sure you can reverse it, right?" Marlene, a sixth-year Hufflepuff, asked, toying nervously with her braid. "I mean, if I wanted to, I can still have kids later, right?"
"Absolutely," Hermione stated firmly. Both Hermione and Ginny had their hair next to their heart in a locket on a long chain. "But the reversal potion only works during the transformation period as the Polyjuice Potion wears off...when you are returning back into yourself. The Polyjuice Potion alters your physical makeup and the reversal potion repairs the reproductive organs as you revert back. So don't lose your hairs. I have both formulas, a male version and a female version, so anyone can do this."
"But where did you get the directions?" a fifth-year boy asked.
Hermione saw Julianna nod out of the corner of her eye, and Shelia and Ginny both nodded as well. "It was given to me by Master Severus S. Prince." She had no idea why she was using his pseudonym, except to protect him or something. She saw Draco shake his head, but both Ginny and Julianna smiled as they shook their heads, silently laughing at her.
"I thought he was dead," Wayne Hopkins said, looking confused. "Didn't he die in You-Know-Who's first reign of terror?"
"No," Draco said, smirking. "He changed his name and went into service making potions and teaching dunderheads."
Hermione scowled at him, then turned to face Wayne. "No, he's alive and living abroad. He's made a name for himself in France." Murmurs started spreading. "Look, he's an incredible Potions master and I would...I am trusting him. Ginny sterilized me and I have sterilized my best friends and many of you only because I really trust Master Prince. I know this potion works, I have his assurances. I have enough to give each of you a dose, secured away in a vault in Gringotts for whenever you...any of you ask me for it. Contact me, Ginny, Shelia, Bernice, or Julianna. Susan and Luna will be able to reach me as well. Yes, I'm going to law school, but I won't be far. Only a Floo away. I'll be staying at Harry's place over the summer."
"If not longer," Ginny added with a chuckle.
She ignored the dark glare from Draco as she pointed to a Ravenclaw across the room to answer her question.
The night before the students were to return home, Hermione held one last meeting in the Room of Requirement, promising all the fourth-, fifth-, and sixth-years that she'd still give the Sterility Reversal Potion to anyone who opted to take sterility over a forced marriage. And she swore that someday she'd find a way to appeal the Marriage Law from the books for good.
By the time the students were boarding the train to go home, an unprecedented two-thirds of the seventh- and eighth-years leaving school had some kind of apprenticeship or training lined up, or opted to apply for a Master or Tradesman in their favorite subjects. Twenty-one seventh-, and eighth-year girls had confirmed pregnancies, and all of those females who were not, and many of the guys, nearly one hundred-thirty students in all, were confirmed as sterile.
Hermione, Shelia, and Draco all applied to law school at the Elfrida Clagg School of Magical and Danelaw in Castle Hill, Cambridgeshire.
Bernice, Ernil, and Ginny applied to St. Mungo's Healer training program.
Draco boarded the train and slyly followed Ginny to see which compartment she'd go into, knowing that Hermione would be in the same one. He was surprised to see Julianna Connery walking with Shelia Margulies and Bernice Witherspoon. The girls were all talking animatedly as they checked the doors to the compartments. The three of them ducked into the compartment Ginny was in. Damn. He wouldn't be able to ride back with Hermione and Ginny.
"Excuse me, Draco," Hermione said as she squeezed past.
"No problem," he said as he flattened himself against the windows, but not enough that she didn't brush against him as she passed. She glared at him, and he gave her a pleased smirk in return. "Anytime, Hermione."
She tossed her hair as she stormed away, followed by Luna Lovegood and Julie Hazelton.
He turned and saw Greg enter the compartment with Francine Perry and her friends. His mate was truly into the girl he'd knocked up. Wet prat. His dad will lay a dragon over that mess. Draco casually walked past Hermione's compartment, glancing in and nodding. It was full. Nah, if he was to have any chance convincing Hermione to accept his proposal, he'd have to find another way to prove he'd changed. Draco joined Cecil, Charles, and Thomas, watching them in amazement at how much they'd changed over the course of the year. Only seven months ago, they were sneering at the Muggle-borns, and now Cecil and Thomas were talking about which ones they'd prefer to marry. Cecil was even considering Julie Hazelton or the Westmore girl from Hufflepuff. Adam Davis walked in holding hands with Valerie Harness, another couple that would never have happened without this blasted Marriage Law.
"What about you, Draco?" Charles asked. "You still think you have a chance with Granger?"
"Oh, of course I do. We're approved and all, and we're going to law school together. Only time will tell," Draco said as he turned to look out of the window. "But she'll succumb to the Malfoy charm in the end."
"Not so sure, mate, she was rather adamant last week," Cecil said with a smirk.
"I'll just have to convince her otherwise, won't I?" Draco stated, looking smug. So much has changed. I can't believe I'm pursuing Potter's best mate. He could have smacked himself in the forehead. Of course! I have to prove I've changed. If I befriend Potter...Harry, she'll have to see I've changed, and for the better. If I can convince Harry, I'll have an in with Hermione.
"Draco, you all right?" Valerie asked, still holding hands with Adam.
"Yeah, I'm fine," Draco replied, smiling his winning Malfoy smile at her. Things will be just fine.
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172 Reviews | 7.12/10 Average
I've read quite a number of Marriage Law stories, and this has to be amongst the most unique. I love the lengths Draco, Hermione et al are going to in order to circumvent the law, and the friendships that have built up as a result. Looking forward to more.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. I just can't see our girl, or anyone else for that matter, just allowing such a farce as a Marriage Law happen without standing up to it, considering how they all stood up to Dolores Umbridge and the Dark Lord and fought them. Thank you for the review.
Dalton Troll Securities LOLToo bad Ron couldn't behave himself towards fellow guests. *sighs* Bad manners ...Maybe he is going to see reason soon. With Ron it's always act first, think later. I hope the thinking part will start soon.I'm curious about the Fede charm - and how it possibly could affect Harry and Ginny, now that she has dropped the paternity suit ...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yeah, well, Ron's not the most mature of boys. The Fede Charm will put mark, a ring, on Ginny's and Harry's ring fingers that shows they are taken - by each other. It's ones who are still 'single' that have to worry. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
“And, Hermione,” Ernest said with a sigh, “you cannot single handedly take on every cause in the office.” Her boss is getting to know her, isn't he?Another wonderful chapter with lots of information not only about Hermione's life, but also about the way the Wizarding World deals with things - the werewolves, Ex-Deatheaters ...Hermione's is still faking her pregnancie, isn't she? In the meantime she should be in her 3rd trimester, so why hasn't the appointment with the claimed father already taken place and the - of course nonexistant - vital signs of the fetus taken? That nobody commented on her pregnancy at Law School and her new job (of course they all suspect it's just a ruse, but still) somehow seems to be unrealistic.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh, yes, and relying on her too. Thank you. Yep, the big picture. Hermione and a lot of the girls left school sterilized. Ginny is faking still, but then she's willing to be matched up with Harry. But the S.H.R.M.C. isn't taking the girls off the list yet, because they think they are faking the sterility somehow.Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)
I somehow missed that Hermione let herself be "sterilized", because after the majority of the eligible students were "deemed unfit for the program", Harry adviced her to drop the paternity suit against Ron. So I thought she still was faking the pregnancy and was confused ...
Ron always was a little hot-head. Jumping to conclusions without bothering with the facts. I hope he calms down enough not to completely ruin his friendships with Harry and Hermione with his continued prejudice.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, he's a react to without thinking kind of guy, lol. He's also under pressure from the S.H.R.M.C. which isn't helping any. I know, excuses. He'll have a eye opener to the situation fairly soon, from one you'd not expect it to come from. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Hermione is doing her dead level best to stay away from Draco, but he has slowly been able to form tentative friendships with Harry and Ginny, and I'm thinking that our Hermione should just accept the fact that she should learn to get along with him... I don't know if she would ever consider marrying him, but it looks like he's going to be a part of her circle of friends.
Lucius has been allowed to come home, and I'm sure that is a great relief for Draco. I noticed that Narcissa was in the courtroom but was sitting apart from her son. I suppose that their marriage is still very much in jeopardy and it is only a matter of time before Narcissa will move out of the Manor (if she is still living there). I wonder if she, having heard what Lucius told the judge about why he returned to Voldemort, might choose to stay married to Lucius. If his mother does decide not to stay married to Lucius, it will be a hard thing for Draco.
Greg and Francine are a very easy going couple, and I was glad to see Francine speak to Ron and try to mollify his reaction to finding Greg and Draco at Harry and Ginny's home for dinner.
Edithe Havershiems is doing her best to make her matches work... err, stay together, but it sounds like the betrothed are not willing to cooperate. I gather that the Fede Charm Healer Brumfield has suggested be used with the signed census when she has matched a couple is supposed to make it more difficult for the union to be dissolve. I'm not sure how that is suppose to work. Will there be a compulsion charm incorporated into the betrothal?
This was a busy chapter, a good chapter, and I'm looking forward to the next one.Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, Draco is smoozing his way into her circle of friends. lol so, yes, she’ll have to come to terms with him.
There are a lot of hardships going on. Cissy was in the courtroom that day, but not others. Things are not good between them. She went through the interrogation by memory removal and return just as Draco and Greg did – it affected her. Lucius coming home might be good or cause upheavals. We’ll see.
Francine is an easy going, hard working girl who is actually in love with Greg. In canon, you don’t see Greg with anyone, even the Yule Ball he didn’t have a partner, that’s why he was so blown away that she had picked him. His first girlfriend, his first love. I know, too cute. Francine is a good mother type and didn’t want friction. She might have even been a prefect (?) so she was trying to calm Ron down, make him realize that he was causing a scene over nothing.
Edithe is matching couples based on responses on a form and her own whims. (Like when a computer was used to make matches for one of my junior high school dance – most of the couples didn’t like each other, didn’t know each other at all, or were already seeing someone else. Most of the people matched up for the dance ended up with their boyfriend or girlfriend by the middle of the dance anyway. I’m using those statistics for the couples Edithe matches.)
The Fede Charm will make a Claddugh appear on the finger, two hands holding a heart with a crown on it. If the heart with the crown is pointed toward the knuckle, inward to the wearer, it will mean their heart was captured—betrothed. If the heart is turned away… See? ‘hands in trust’ or ‘hands in faith.’ If you only do this because you have to, is it in ‘good faith?’
Should make things complicated for a few people.
Thank you for the long and interesting review, Beth. I love them! Oh and the pretty stars, too.
That evil little weasel!! (And for once I'm not talking about Malfoy...) Thanks for another great chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
sorry my curser jumped! Yes, he's a git! You are very welcome for the chapter. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
OK, that healer is scary, Ron is still an idiot, and Draco is trying really hard. It seems the Gryffindors have more prejudice to overcome than the Slytherins. I like Lucius's punishment, also.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, he's a piece of work. Did you really expect a mature Ronnikins? Draco is trying too hard. Well, they are as prejudiced as the Slytherins, but they feel they won the war - so it's all their way now, right? idiotsThanks. I couldn't have him just freed, so this gives him recovery time. Besides, his $$ will be put to good use (You can't get monies from convicts!)Thank you for the review, blue, and the pretty stars.
I sense some major problems for the 'insolent children' in the future. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh course there are problems! There wouldn't be a story unless there were. LOL Thank you for the review.
Clever. . . very clever.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Aw shucks. Thank you.
Great chapter, I love how you handled Mr. Malfoy Sr. Nice blend of punishment and forgiveness.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. I am in unfam water with him and keep hoping I do him justice. Yes, well, you can't get monies for charities if he's in jail --so it's a win win, sort of. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Oh no. Looks like more trouble afoot! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
LOL Of course there is! Otherwise, there's no story to tell!
Ack! What does the Fede do -- does it curse anyone who tries to break the betrothal? Scary.I am so glad Lucius is out, with Harry at the hearing. He must be resting at home, but is Cissa with him to help in his recovery? I am guessing that Draco won't overwhelm his father with info on the Marriage Law until his dad is stronger.Sorry to see Ron still being a prat about his childish prejudices. Grrr.....Thanks for updating!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh, you'll have to wait to see what the Fede does! I gave you a bit of it, but yes, there's more!Yes, Lucius is out, Cissy is not at home and Severus is still in France. Lucius is catching up on old Prophets, but I'll explain that later.Did you really think Ronnikins has matured to 'grown up' yet? *laughs*Thank you for the review and the pretty stars!
Well, if nothing else, Draco is persistant.one way or another, he is determined to make Harry his friend and have Hermione as his bride.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, he is that. He's used to getting what he wants. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
That's one way to get Harry to read something important: add humour! Poor Lucius. They truly are just enjoying torturing him, otherwise they would just keep the necessary memories until they are finished with them. I hope he comes out of it sane.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
LOL or add pictures of Quaffles and Snitches on the margins! Yes, but like with Draco, the method is to make him relive the moments, to see the error of his ways, so to speak. It worked wonders on Draco and Greg! But Lucius is of stronger metal than Draco. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Hermione working for the Ministry could place her in a very convenient position to be apprised of new developments concerning the S.H.R.M.C. and any new laws the Wizengamot have in the works. If her own boss is anything to go by, I'll bet there are several people in various departments who would happily pass on information they discovered to Hermione while passing her in the halls!Poor Draco... having to impress people who don't really care about his money or status. Talk about a fish out of water! But I imagine he'll screw up by paying for Hermione's remaining years of law school for her without asking or something like that. He'll think of it as a kind gesture, and she'll see it as his way of putting her in his debt. Maybe he can get Severus to give him some advice on how to deal with Gryffindors! I'm looking forward to Draco's further attempts to woo...
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, it very well could. Also she has friends there as well. Yes, Draco is going to have to learn how to make friends the old fashioned way. And he might blunder a few things as well. I'm sure that he'll make some attempt of helping her out. SW has the next chapter, so we'll see. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Sounds like the perfect job. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh it gets even better! Thank you for the reveiw.
I wonder what Draco will be doing this summer, and how soon he will find out she needs money for school. I bet he figures it out quick and tries to make Hermione an offer to help! Still hoping Lucius gets out soon. Thanks for updating!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh yes, Luicus gets out soon. Draco is going to try using his cahrm on Harry. lol And it won't take long for him to find out she's getting student loans. You are very welcome for the update. Thank you for the reveiw and the pretty stars.
She needs to get those laws changed. And Draco trying to be nice is both amusing and pathetic.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh, yes she does! Well, yes. Draco can't rely on his money or social status with Harry--so he's out of his element here. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Networking... the number one way to find a job. Very enjoyable chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Well, I did think it could be applicable to the wizarding world, considering how much nepotism there seems to be. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars!
So Greg is going to be a father! I love what you've done with his character and Draco's. I wonder if Draco will ever be able to convince Hermione to become his bride? Maybe, maybe not. Only time will tell.I can't imagine having to make a decision to either marry someone you didn't want to marry or agree to be sterilized. This Post-war MOM is filled with idiots. When are the biggest idiots going to be removed from power or be prosecuted for crimes against the British Wizarding community? I hope we get to see Lucius and Severus both helping to get this law overturned.Looking forward to more of this story!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, Greg Golye is going to be a dad - of twins, no less! I think he'll be a great dad now that he's grown up some. It jsut took the right girl.Thank you for your comments on how I'm writing Draco. I'm still trying to make this 'nicer version' still feel like canon Draco. It's hard. lol That is a very honest responce to the choice I have given the young people in this story: A. Marry someone you don't/might know, who might be quite a bit older/younger than you, could be someone you dont even like, or someone who might be abusive and be trapped with that person until you have 4 kids.B. Allow Hermione to sterilize you and hope this potion works, and that the blighter who created it really had found the way to reverse the Sterility Curse.C. Or defy the MoM and get pregnant for real, risking being shut into St. Mungo's until the babay is born, filing a petition for marriage under the Bastard Law, while the guy responsible faces being sued and arrested.Oh, yes great options.Oh I have a dynamic team worked out! I hope you approve.Thank you very much. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
I love your Greg. After years of knuckle crunching and snarling, he really has turned out to be a big teddy bear. He is so excited about being a dad and about having a girlfriend, he doesn't even care what his father thinks. Draco is still the perfect Slytherin. Can't woo the girl herself? Go through her best friend!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
I know I completely changed Greg's character in this story, but after a near death experience and saved by his nemsis, then being questioned by the interrogators... he's a bit changed. So I made him a dad, thinking he'd be a great dad. and Yes, Draco is going to try changing tactics to woo the girl. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Greg as a dad? There's something sweet about that.This is a great fic- I look forward to watching Draco woo Hermione via Harry. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yep, Greg Goyle is going to be a father! Thank you very much for the compliment and pretty stars.
Great read so far! Oh, Draco... what are we to do with you?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. Draco is just after what he wants, that's all. lolThank you for the review and the pretty stars.
So Draco is smitten with Hermione? Really?Well, the way he has changed, he might have stood achance with her, had he not made a point of getting their marriage approved. Now Hermione will fight him.I really smiled while reading the scene with Greg - him stating that he wants to be a good dad was so incredible sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Draco was told by the S.H.R.M.C. and the Wizengamot that he'd have to marry a Muggle-born. So who is the only semi-acceptable Muggle-born he knows. Hermione. If you have to pick one--pick the best of the lot. And, having just had such wonderful (NOT) news about Ron, Hermione is confronted with his proposal. Nope, Draco just joined the prat club again!I like Greg, the newer, softer, more teddy-bear version--and so I made him a going-to-be dad. I'm glad that you liked it. Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Opened his eyes, did it? But Draco needs to remember how stubborn his lioness is. She might marry him after the law is rescinded, but not before that.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Draco had rotten timing! And didn't think this over very well. Of course Hermione was goign to dig in ther claws and tell him off! At this point it'll take quite abit to make her fall for him--quite a bit.Thakn you for the review and the pretty stars.