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The Swing of the Pendulum
beaweasley2172 Reviews | 7.12/10 (172 Ratings, 0 Likes, 10 Favorites )
Many people were affected by Voldemort—his followers, his victims, and the innocents who had been caught up in the war. After the war is over, how are they dealing? As the Wizarding world recoups, rebuilds, reorganizes, and adjusts to the social and economic changes caused by the aftermath of war, there are still people fighting to correct the wrongs that are out there. Hermione is one, so is Draco. Lucius is another.
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Reviews for The Swing of the Pendulum
Fantastic start. I am glad Hermione was able to see that Winky's happiness was more important than her ideals for them. I love your description of the chaos after the warM not everything is suddenly all hunky-dory.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
I'd like to think that after seeing how crushed Winky was and how happy the other Hogwarts house-elves were she'd realize that it's a mater of having a purpose for them. service=a safe place to live+food+occupationThe chaos was little more than research of how things were after WWII. It took tome then as well, but not as bad. Thank you for the review.
And when it rains it pours. I loved all the action in this chapter.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you, and thanks for the review and the pretty stars.
Now that is promising... :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
What is? hmmmm? lolThank you for the review.
Poppy isn't silly! It would look a bit suspect for them all to have conceived at once! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Actually, she takes her job very seriously and would have been accurate, even if they had all concieved on the same day. BUt this potions works with the girls menstrual cycle, so unless they all start on the same day, it's likely they all 'appeared pregnant within the same month - or two months. But yes, it is suspect. Thank you very much for the review, sunny.
I wonder if Minerva has any idea just how far her charges will go to avoid forced marraiges! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
LOL She will find out! Thank you for the review.
Great story! I am really enjoying this and I look forward to an update!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. SW69 has the next one ready to go! Thank you for the review and pretty stars.
I love how Hermione and the other girls are digging their heels in. This law is barbaric and I'm pleased to see Hermione is still capable of kicking a little ass.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Okay, maybe it's a bit Mary Sue, but the one thing I've always wondered about Marriage Law fics was "why doesn't she fight back?" I mean Hermioe in canon, froze Neville to sneak out of the common room, used her Time-Turner to free Sirius and Buckbeak, formed the DA, fought in the Dep of Mysteries, and fought in a war (2 battles) This not a doormat girl - so why would she roll over and allow the MoM to force her to marry anyone. Okay, so it's not so bad to be forced to marry Severus Snape - but really. So maybe this is a bit Mary Sue in that regard. Hermione said, "No." and is standing up for herself and helping anyone who agrees with her. There just happens to be a whole lot of students who agree. sorry for the rant, but this is really how I'd see her handling this. With her mind. Draco is offering $potions supplies$, his cunning, his knowledge of magical law, and books. Everyone pitches in. Hermione is leader - but knows how to delegate and accept assistance. That's why I have her and all four houses standing together on this.Thank you for the review - I'm sorry to write back a novel, but I just wanted to thank you for the great review. and got a bit carried away.
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
You go girl, no problem with the novel lol.
I love the way the Slytherins are working with the others! Draco is not only clever; I can see him being amused by claiming to have impregnated more than one witch. Draco and Lucius on their visit -- such sad surroundings, but how good that they have a strong father-son relationship. Glad that Poppy figured things out, and Minerva will help. Can't wait for Lucius to get out of Azkatraz so he can help! Thanks for updating.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. Yes, their clever cunning really helps out a lot. Draco is really a good resource in this, and yes, I'm sure he enjoys the attention. Lucius and son are close and he will be out shortly.Oh course Poppy figured it out! She and Minerva don't like this law at all.Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
I loved Draco's statement. Send an owl.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thanks. Sometimes Muggle-borns miss the obvious, don't they? Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
good on poppy.and so the ministry fights back with the damning Failure to comply with the Marriage Law will result in sterilization, internment in Azkaban, and having your wand snapped.using the strongest weapon of fear. and nice with a picture of hermione.good on hermione and co renforcing what the ministry can and can not do to them. and lucky that had an example of the "happy couple" propaganga being spited.and when mcgonagall took hermione and ginny asside look how quickly ginny was ready to jump into the marriage. it looks like she ready to give in as long as she gets harry. but hmmm, i wonder just who ron was given as his match?That night Hermione called an emergency meeting. Julianna, Draco, Thomas, and Cecil represented Slytherin, Susan and Luna each brought with them three students to represent their houses, and Bernice, Shelia, Bill Hamelton and Ernil Kroomer to represent Gryffindor with Hermione and Ginny. Hermione related what the Headmistress told her. but what of hufflepuff?well good that they keep looking for other loopholes. and voila say the say name snape enough times with respect and voila he returns. but what of this reference:My second year alone he brewed potions twice that…?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, Poppy is trying to help the students, after all, she's not happy about the law either. And yes, the ministry is trying to fight back with what they believe is enough to force everyone to comply.Yes, Ginny would gladly give in if she gets to marry Harry, but Hermione doesn't trust the S.H.R.M.C. at all. Isn't Susan Bones in Hufflepuff? If not I goofed there. I didn't want to just give a list of six more students so I jsut said that Luna (Ravenclaw) and Susan (Hufflepuff) each brought three from their houses.In Hermione's second year, Severus brewed the potion to restore Hermione from being petrified, and helped her recover. It's just one line, doll, don't worry so much about that one.Thank you very much for the review,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
, and the pretty stars. I love them.
Response from genrou (Reviewer)
yes yes susan is. i read that paragraph a few times over and i just didnt catch it like that apparently.
Severus is alive, YAYS!!! *Does happy dance* Hopefully he's willing and able to help his former students with the reversal for the Sterilization Charm. As to the conversation between Hermione, Ginny, McGonagall and Pomfrey: Knowing the S.H.R.M.C. and their Yenta, I think Hermione's suspicions are correct. I think the Yenta has already decided who will marry whom and the S.H.R.M.C. was banking on the girls (and everyone else) buying that their preferences would be considered. Then, once the paternity suits were withdrawn, they would be able to force them to accept their Yenta-approved pairings or else. Some Yenta, BTW, considering the majority of her so-called "successful" pairings apparently suck bollocks. Either she's a fake or she has some other agenda involving the pairings she's selected. ^-^
HermioneDiggory's response:Oh yeah, and I wonder what pairing could be so horrible that Ron would flat out refusing to discuss it. That definitely implies that his match is no stranger like Harry's was.Hm...Dolores Umbridge? j/k
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, he's alive but not in the country and therefore not subject to this ridiclous law. I think you'll be amuzed by his responce, my beta was. You are right on the nose on this point about the S.H.R.M.C. And yes, the Yenta, Edithe Havershiems, might have been a good Yenta once - but she's only matching couples based up on S.H.R.M.C. guidelines and protocols - not really based upon compatability, unless the compatability matches what the objectives are: To make the next generation of witches and wizards all half-blood or less - no more pure-bloods!
Oh, you'll have a clue in an upcming chapter! And it won't be a surprise. And she's connected to Graciella Warblock! Shocking, I know! lolUmbridge - sorry no, that witch is in Azkaban.
Thank you very much for the review and the pretty stars.
Woohoo! And don't you know Draco was just dying to drop that bombshell onto Hermione! “And here I thought you were intelligent.” I laughed so hard I scared my cat! (Honestly, she gets freaked out whenever I laugh out loud at something and gets right up in my face to see if I'm okay...)Glad to see Minerva and Poppy showing their support for the students and offering their advice on the situation. I can't wait to see what assistance Severus will be able to bring to the table, as well.I love this story! I cannot wait until the next chapter! Five stars (I'd give more if it would let me)!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Hmm. Did your cat give you a 'claws up' that you're fine? Sorry to scare your cat. But I'm thilled that you enjoyed that line.I jsut figured that with all these ladies have seen over the years, they'd hate this Marriage Law idea and would be secretly glad to see the kids all fighting it (Like they did when they were giving Umbridge troubles and headaches)I'm sure that the Flitwick and Sprout are suppportive too, only Hermione doesn't talk to them confidentially. I think you'll get a kick out of Severus' responce - my beta sure did.Thank you very much for the review and I'm so happy that you enjoy this so much. Thanks for the pretty stars too.
And the plot thickens! I wish Lucius could see some of this info. Did Phineas Black see the chart? I wonder if Minerva will let some Order members know of this. Thanks for the new chapter!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, things get thick and messy! Oh he will. Draco will find a way to keep Lucius informed and besides, Hermione, Ginny, Draco and friends leave school by chapter 9 and Lucius has a day in court over Hermione's Draco's summer! Summer will be a bit messy - sorry if I gave too much away.Thank you for the review and the pretty stars!
Response from June W (Reviewer)
You're not giving away too much -- you're just making me eager for more!! I'm anxious to see Lucius' day in court, and to see Hermione and Ginny at Draco's house where they can plot to their hearts' content. And if the Malfoys have a portrait of Phineas Black, yay!
yay interhouse relations!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, Interhouse relations and comradship! You'll have at least 2 more chapters of that, before they (Hermione, Draco, Ginny, and the gang) leave school! Thank you for the review, and the pretty stars!
Poppy is quite intuitive. I'm glad they are on the students side. Ron is so amazingly inconsiderate. What the hell is Hermione thinking?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
I have always thought that Poppy was intutive and she doesn't like this law any more than they do. Most of the professors are on their side - or Hermione would've had loads of detentions and lost house points!When has Ron ever been mature or considerate? He's certainly not in canon! Besides, I had him react like I read his abandonment in DH! selfish-for-himself-immature-prat.Hermione for some unknown reason (JKR's) loves(loved) him. He is/was her boyfriend, and she was too busy with everything to realy see him for how he really is. IMHOThank you for the review and the pretty stars.
And politics rears it's ugly head. This story is incredibly well thought out and written.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. That's a nice compliment. I appreciate it. Oh and thank you for the stars, too.
I love Hermione's sharp thinking! I do believe Greg also loves her idea... wouldn't it be nice if Slytherins learn that muggle-borns aren't so bad?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Yes, well, she is the 'brightest of her age' and all. LOLThat is one of my goals in this is 'breaching the gap' so to speak. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
I like your portrayal of Draco being well versed in politics. And I like the fact that he is communicating with Hermione.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
I thought that Draco would be, considering how active Lucius was. I thought that having Goyle and Draco at least meet Hermione half way was another good idea, have them grow up a bit, and it's been helpful to have Draco getting along with her. Thank you for the reveiw and the stars.
Very good description of a war torn economy, and it just so happens to mirror our economy.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you. I was borrowing from the historical account of the UK following WWII. Thank you for the review and the pretty stars.
Wonderful start!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much.
So far the story is interesting and has a good internal logic.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Wow, thank you for the compliment. Oh, and thank you for the stars.
oh yes i forgot to ask- what if there is an uneven number of males and females to couple? will a boy get to have two parternity claims or a girl say the father of the child is one of two blokes?
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Nope - there aren't! It's uneven. But Yes, either way - as long as it confuses the Wizengamot and the SHMRC!
oooooh new chapter- yay! alas oor draco did not get to have hermione on his own in his home. one must not forget luna had also been to his home (not accusing you that you did) but did she have the same entrance?thanks for more details on the how and whys of the pregnacy potions-liked the bit of history that went into it. liked the herbology reference with neveille. im curious to know how will they pair themselves off (like say will hermione claim that ron's the father or pick a classmate) and if the schoolmates get to see who the goverment picked out for them. i know i'd be curious even if i planned to go through with the ruse. and if so i wonder what the reaction on that would be.please write more soon.
Response from genrou (Reviewer)
i wonder if some wouldn't mind who they are coupled with by the law and may not be whole-hearted in fighting the law anymore.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Oh, well, I couldn't have everyone tromping off to Malfoy manor, now could I? And Luna's nonchalant responces to Cecil's questions, I couldn't pass up the opportunity! But I carefully (trying out nine dif combinations on papaer) worked out who I wished to send to which house. But, Yes, Luna had been to Malfoy Manor and would've been able to Apparate there as well. For sake of the story, I don't really give you a list of who matched themselves up with whom. You will only see a few of who matched up with whom... YOu want more? rReally? Ok. I have a - well you see, I'm waaaaay ahead of you in this story. I have 3 ready to submit/post, 6 chapters I did ahead of myself (woke up with this great idea more than once) on the outline, and 2-3 chapters in rough draft that just need smooting out, nip, snip, and polishing... So there is plenty more. Oh, and a twist you may or may not like! Two reviews in one! Coo-l-l Damn - how did you get into my thumbdrive? You shouldn't know this! Shhh Don't tell anyone, okay? LOL Keep this jsut between us, okay?
“One more thing very few people are aware of; Graceilla Warblock is Healer Brumfeild’s niece.”I see that nepotism is as alive and well in the Ministry today as it was when Voldemort was directing the show.It's great to see the students from all the Houses all working together. That was a pretty daring scheme they pulled off getting into Draco's and Cecil's family libraries. I'm really looking forward to seeing the reactions of Minerva, Madam Pomfrey, Albus and the cretins at the Ministry who came up with this "match making" scheme when they find out that every eligible girl at Hogwarts turns up pregnant. This is a great take on the MLC! Way to go!Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
Thank you very much. Well, Hermione isn't above breaking the rules for a good cause/reason.Oh, I'd love to stick your line - "I see that nepotism is as alive and well in the Ministry today as it was when Voldemort was directing the show." With your permission, I might ask SW if I can! LOL You'll see their reactins and a bit of their actions coming up, might surprise you. Thank you for the laugh, lovely review and the pretty stars!
Response from braye27 (Reviewer)
Please use the line. I would be honored!
Even The Quibbler printed articles on how to transfigure things like leaves into bread and how to charm milk into cheese. milk intocheese is fine but leaves to bread? should maybe it be grains? i'm saying this because of the five laws of transfiguration or whatever they are called saying how you cant transfigure things to food. but if they are the main element i dont see why not.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of The Swing of the Pendulum)
To quote Lexicon (I know! But it's still a great reference source) "Transfiguration is subject to rules, such as Gamp's Law of Elemental Transfiguration, which has five Principal Exceptions, of which food is one, which means that food cannot be produced out of thin air. Food can be moved from one place to another by magic, or changed, but not created out of nothing. (DH15)" You are referring to the comment about the RoR being able to 'make or produce food.' This isn't necessarily the same thing. Many leaves are edible. Grains are fibrous, as are most plant species. Many species are edible, and many tree leaves, while not tasty, won't harm you if you munch on them. Some tree leaves are even good spices. (bay leaves, otherwise called Laurel leaves, for example, and curry leaves, Sweet Neem leaf... ) Transfiguration can rearrange the elements of one thing into another and even change the elements of an object, aminal, plant, into something else. But no, I didn't have 'making' Bread appear out of thin air. Hope this helps with your question. Thank you for the challenging review. It's fun to answer these kinds of questions, really makes me have to think.