Chapter 10
Chapter 11 of 12
CelisnebulaApril 3, 2005
Quincy, California
It was broad daylight the first time Neville kissed her.
The sky was dark blue; the sound of a particularly loud lawn mower reverberated through the air as she lead him to their destination. Josie's palms were sweaty. She had never actually brought anyone here before never wanted to bring anyone here before.
Neville must have noticed her distress as they crossed the lawn, because he reached out a hand and wove his fingers between hers. Josie gave him a hesitant smile as they walked along the immaculate green lawn, dotted by rows of inlaid granite snuggled close to the ground.
Her heart pounded loudly against her chest so loudly she was sure Neville could hear its strangely rapid tattoo. He gave her hand a quick squeeze as she slowed their pace. Without a word, he pulled her close to his body, brushing back a few strands of hair from her face.
Josie's breath caught in her throat. His eyes such beautiful eyes scanned her face as his head bent closer.
Oddly, the thought that his lips were impossibly soft flittered across her brain as he gently pressed them against hers. Her hands went up to clutch at his arms, trying to hold herself up as her knees went weak. He nibbled lightly at her lips, tasting faintly of cinnamon, and Josie pressed herself closer to him, wanting to taste more.
And then, as suddenly as it started, it ended.
Neville pulled back from her, panting slightly. He reached up to cup her face, a small smile crossing his own as she slowly opened her eyes to look at him. With a small, "thank you," she took his hand and pulled him up the grassy path. Neither said a word as she drew him closer to the spot.
Rutledge
Nathan J. and Claire R.
Nov. 11, 1953 Aug. 16, 1956
Feb 15, 1995
Beloved Mother and Father
"Mom... Dad," Josie started, a slight hitch in her voice. "I've... I've brought someone to meet you." She squeezed his hand and brought it up to her chest. "His name is Neville, and... I think you would have liked him."
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April 3, 2005
Quincy, California
Josie knocked on Neville's hotel door. In the time it took for him to answer, her brain went through an entire litany on why this was a bad idea. Those thoughts, however, evaporated as soon as he opened the door.
"I ah." She licked her dry lips as she tried to string her rehearsed speech together. "I hope you don't mind," she finally started, "but it seemed silly to have two different rooms when one would suffice. Don't you think?"
"You you want to sleep? In here?" he stammered out.
"If that's okay with you?" she asked hesitantly. "If it's not, I can I can go and get the other room back."
"No," Neville said with a little more force than he intended. In a softer tone he said, "No, you're more than welcome."
"Are you going to let me in, then?"
Neville's face flushed a bit as he moved back from the doorframe to let her in.
"The there's two beds in here," he said softly as she passed him. "Pick which ever one you'll feel most comfortable in."
Josie turned to him, so close she could almost feel the heat of his body. "That will be easy," she whispered, stepping closer to him. "Which one are you in?"
Neville's eyes darkened at her pronouncement. He reached out and pulled her against his chest. His mouth descended on hers in a brutal kiss, so unlike the first one they shared earlier in the day. Josie let out a gasp of surprise, but that didn't stop her from returning his kiss. Her hands fisted in his shirt, pulling him closer.
"Are you sure about this?" he asked against her lips. It surprised Josie that he would be this courteous of her needs, that he would stop and make sure that this was what she wanted no one had before.
She reached up and cupped his cheek with her hand. "I've never been more sure of anything in my life, Neville," she whispered softly before wrapping her arms around his neck and pulling his head down for another kiss.
His hand slipped down to her breasts, his fingers shaking as they worked the buttons of her blouse. Josie arched into his touch. The feel of his hands seared through her clothing, burning her flesh as they slid down her body.
"Neville," she hissed out as his lips moved to her neck. Impatient to feel his skin against hers, she pulled at his shirt. With a small chuckle, he moved back enough for her to pull it over his head. He couldn't stifle the appreciative groan that tore though him as she bent down and flicked her tongue against his nipple.
Somehow, they made their way across the room to one of the beds. Josie dropped down as soon as the back of her knees met the mattress, pulling Neville along with her. He sat up above her and tugged at the waistband of her shorts. Josie raised her hips, and he slowly pulled them down. As soon as they were off, Josie sat up on the bed, reaching for the clasp of his jeans.
She sucked in a harsh breath as he pushed them down over his own hips. He was beautiful. Simply beautiful. From his broad shoulders to his tapered waist, with a small smattering of hair dusted across his chest, and the hard, jutting erection nestled between his legs. With deft fingers, he reach around her and unhooked her bra, leaving her just as naked.
Neville pressed his lips against hers, pushing her against the bed as he settled his weight over her. His fingers trailed down her body, and she felt him cup her breasts, one in each hand, as his mouth trailed down her neck. He took one taut peak into his mouth, slowly sliding his tongue around it. Josie arched into his mouth, her fingers spearing though his hair.
Neville's hands pushed down her body, sliding down over her stomach until he reached the apex of her thighs. Slowly he eased his fingers between them, stroking the inside curve. Josie pushed up against his hand, and he rewarded her by slowly running the pad of his index finger against her clit.
"Please, Neville," she panted, pulling at his hair. "Don't wait."
"Josie... I want I want to make this good for you," he panted against the column of her throat.
She reached down and slowly stroked against his length. "It's already better than good, Neville. Now. Please."
Neville brought his mouth down on hers, settling his weight above her. Josie arched up against him, feeling the length of his cock brush against her. Josie released a shuddering sigh of pleasure as he eased into her. Her hands slid down the strong planes of his back as she tilted her hips up to meet his slow thrusts.
"All of you," she moaned against his ear. "I want all of you."
He ground his hips against her, driving into her with a slow steady pace. Josie hooked her ankles around his hips, pushing her hips off the bed in an effort to take him as deep as possible.
"Mine," he grunted out, surging into her.
Josie clawed at his back, trying to urge him on faster, relishing the feel of him inside her. She was so close, had been close to this edge since he'd first kissed her. Neville dropped his head to her shoulder and lightly bit it. He picked up the pace, pulling nearly out only to drive back into her again.
"Yes," Josie gasped out. "Please, Neville, please."
Grabbing at her hips, he thrust harder, feeling her inner walls shudder around him. His pattern became erratic, and Josie arched up against him, determined to push him to the brink. With one last kiss, his pushed into her again, the power of his release making his entire body shake. Josie wrapped her arms and legs around him, holding him close as he came inside of her.
"Mine," he growled against her throat.
"Yours," she agreed with a sleepy sigh.
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April 29, 2005
Bryce Canyon, Utah
"I can't believe I let you talk me into this," Josie hissed out, reaching above her head to grasp the rock as she hoisted herself upwards. She could feel Neville's hands cupping her ass as he pushed her up, and had she not been hanging from a rope forty feet off the ground, she might have enjoyed his hand placement a bit more.
"As if," he grunted, pushing upward, "this is any worse than the bungee jumping thing you talked me into."
"Hey, that was a controlled adventure, there was no sweating involved, and definitely no climbing up the side of a mountain with only sheer strength and a thin rope," she panted. Her foot scraped along the side of the rock as she pulled herself up to the edge.
"Ha," Neville snorted, scrambling up after her. "No sweating involved? Somehow, I don't see jumping off a bloody building as an adventure with no sweating involved."
"In technical terms it is. You needn't climb all the way up to the top of the building, and the way down is a breeze. This is nowhere near as easy not only will do we have to climb up, but we have to scramble all the way down again."
"True but isn't this view worth it?" he asked, plopping down on the rocky edge beside her.
"The view might be spectacular, Brit boy, but I'm still not at all convinced the climb down will be worth it."
"How about the company, then?"
Josie pulled a bottle of water from her side holster, popped the top open, and took a long drink. She wiped the back of her arm across her lips as she handed the bottle to Neville. He took it, his eyes sparkling with mischief.
"You're not going to answer me, are you?"
He lifted the bottle to his lips, and Josie's eyes were drawn to the column of his throat. Her mouth felt suspiciously dry as she watched his throat work; unconsciously, she licked her lips. His lips lifted in a smug smile.
"If you're in the mood for that," he said in a husky voice, "I think we should probably head down again. I think it would be quite uncomfortable to do that here unless you're feeling dangerous, that is?"
"Do you honestly think I'll be up to that? After you put me through this? There are muscles I didn't even know existed that are sore right now, Longbottom."
He leaned in close to her, his warm breath fanning across her check as he whispered: "I could always soothe those aches for you."
Josie turned her head towards his. "You are completely incorrigible," she whispered back before letting her lips meet his.
His face was nicely flushed when she pulled back.
"I think I'm ready to head down," she told him in a husky voice. She rolled over onto her belly and slowly pushed down off the side. "Don't take too long in getting down; I might not be in the mood later."
Neville watched her slide down the edge and pulled on the rope to inch down.
"You're a tease, Josie Rutledge," he yelled out, just before following her down over the edge.
On the way down the belay anchor securing Josie to the rock face failed, causing the belay gadget to pull taut just before it too failed. Josie felt the harness tug at her body, and she jerked a bit, her waist taking the brunt of the bruising blow. One minute she was following Neville down the face of the cliff, the next she was falling through the air. It barely took a second. She landed badly on her side, the force of it knocking the wind from her.
"Josie." Neville's strong voice broke through the hazy fog of pain. "Josie, listen to me."
Josie tried to focus on the sound of his voice, but every part of her body ached. She could feel him tugging at the harness, and she bit back a sharp gasp of pain as he removed it from her.
"I know it hurts, baby," Neville said. It sounded like a whisper to Josie, he sounded so very far away.
"Josie!" he shouted. "I need you to stay awake." She felt his fingers on her jaw, tilting her face towards him. "Your body is going into shock."
Everything felt cold, and all Josie wanted to do was close her eyes and sleep. Maybe then the pain would stop.
"Josie damn it, Josie stay awake," Neville hissed. She could hear him searching through his backpack for something she wondered idly if he had brought a cell phone.
"I need you to drink this, Josie," he said in a ragged voice, pressing something against her lips. "Drink this for me, luv it will help." A thick liquid filled her mouth, burning it. She tried to turn her head away but Neville held her still, forcing the stuff down her throat. "Shush, baby, I know it's horrible stuff, but it will help," he whispered close to her ear.
"Hurts..." she gasped out, as soon as he lowered the bottle.
Neville brush his hand against her cheek. "I'm sorry, luv so sorry," he choked out. His hands brushed down her body, and Josie grunted as his fingers probed along her rib cage.
"Josie, hon, your ribs are cracked I think they might be broken, and I think you've damaged your spine. I don't " he broke off with a sob. "I don't know if there's any internal bleeding."
Josie vaguely heard him riffling through his backpack again. It was such an effort to stay awake she wanted nothing more than to fall into the blackness.
"Josie!" Neville's fingers dug into her chin. "Josie, you need to stay awake. I need Josie, do you trust me?" Josie's eyes focused on his face, and she wondered why he was crying.
"Please, Josie," he sobbed. "Do you trust me?"
"...trust you," she gasped out before her lids slid closed.
The next time she opened her eyes, Neville was crouched above her. He clutched a long slender stick in his right hand while chanting something in a low voice. It sounded vaguely like Latin. Josie wanted to laugh; he looked so silly, standing above her with such an expression of hard concentration on his face.
He noticed her eyes on him. "Everything will be all right in a moment, luv," he whispered as he ran the stick down her body.
Her brain felt foggy. Her body no longer felt as if it had been broken in two, though it tingled in a strange fashion. Her mouth was bone dry, and she licked her lips, trying to draw out some moisture.
"Wh what are you doing, Neville?" Josie asked in a raspy voice.
"Shush, luv, I can't fix everything," Neville muttered, "but I can at least make you more comfortable."
"Neville " she gasped out, "I what how are you "
"Just trust me, Josie." He placed a soft kiss to her forehead. "I promise, I'll explain everything later but right now, just trust me."
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A/N:
Okay, after a moment or two of panic over the "oh my god, someone else is using the same idea as me," thing, and well, obsessively reading the first two chapters posted, I want to point y'all to another cool rendition of The Ghost and Mrs. Muir posted by ancientgirl over on Whispers. It's actually a HG/SS fic, titled The Ghost and Mrs. Krum, and so far it's pretty good, so go on over and read it. Yeah I know... silly to be in a panic, but, yanno this is sort of my baby the fic I'm proudest of, and for some weird reason I thought only I had this idea (stupid reasoning).
ETA: I just noticed it's on here too... so run over and read it -- she's finished it now (I'm so bad I'm nowhere near done, and this last chapter was written in November). I do have chapter 11 finished though, and with Rachel so I'll post soon.
Thanks to Rachel W (who is not only a talented writer in her own right, but an incredibly cool lady with a killer southern accent) and Mark (my sick psychotic British friend who keeps trying to put a little bit of Brit into me yes I said it was little :oP) for all their help in chasing away my misuse of commas and blatant American jargon.
An informational site on what can go wrong in any given climbing situation:
http://www.nps.gov/yose/sar/climbsafe.htm
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Latest 25 Reviews for Tomorrow's Appeal
28 Reviews | 7.04/10 Average
I still love this story! Please, please tell me it hasn't been abandoned!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
No, it hasn't been abandoned! Unfortuntately, I'm just a very slow writer who hasn't had a lot of time to write (summers are kill times for me because of all the day care hours I work) and a muse that's off in three some land playing with the Weasley twins. I've got chapter 12 about 2/3s of the way done, baring any mishaps where I accidently delete the chapter from my flash drive instead of saving it (don't ask).
I just found this story on a recomendation the other day... It really brings Neville into a new light for me! Your writing is beautiful.... This is something I would pick up in a bookstore and pay full price for. (And that's alot, coming from the Queen of Clearance) I've never read the inspiration story, but I'm now very interested.Please finish! A girl's gotta know!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh my... wow. Thank you! That means so much (as I only buy the occasional book at full price myself -- the ones I can't wait to get to the used book store or on Ebay). The next chapter is actually sitting in queue right now, and I'm slowly plodding away on the next chapter.
I just love it!!! It's just a beautiful story. Perhaps more so because none of the regular characters are in it.PLease up date soon. And thank you for a wonderful story, writen perfectly in every way.Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you. I'm slowly working on the next chapter.
haha! Poor Josie! I'd say the girls needed a good drink. Lovely story so far.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Good drink, a good cry, and definitely a good shag.
Nev's grandmother bites! Poor little Alice! I can't wait to see the "ghost" lol
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL Ghost might not make an actual appearance for awhile. But, he will be well worth it.
Great chapter... I am wondering who owns the house and who the dang ghost is! LOL... You know, since I'm such a Snape Head, I keep expecting one of the two to be him. Good chapter. I feel so sorry for her. Poor woman.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL... I don't think you'll like the owner of the house then. As much as I adore Snape, he wouldn't allow anyone to live in his house, even if they paid him.
Gran Longbottom = hateful. Can't believe they don't care how Neville felt for his wife and child. Yuck. Well, I hope Josie comes out okay. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Holy crap I have reviews!
Sheesh now I have to figure out how come they're not going to my inbox :oS.
I think Granny Longbottom is the tradition matriarch of any long standing family -- she wants her children and grandchildren raised in the 'proper' manner.
Poor Nev and his family. I am quite interested in finding out what happens to Josie and little Alice. Great start.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you.
Looking forward to reading more soon.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I should have another upload of this in a day or two.
its about time we get an American in the wizarding world!!! (coming from one herself )I love how Neville's grown...very mature--i like.please continue?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Next chapter is slowly coming along.
I looooooooved this chapter, darling, and don't worry, a lot of ideas are recycled, but trust me, I've read both stories, and they're different enough, I promise!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL I know... It's one of those things where I was watching the movie and it was ah "Oh thats...!" moment. Silly to think I wouldn't have the same ida.
Very good chapter! Excellent. I really love this backstory. I decide to rec it out to others. (Don't worry. I've warned about the future slow updates.)
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I wish I wasn't such a slow writer, I'm always so jealous of people who seem to get a chapter written and posted every two weeks -- I wish I was that prolific. Most days I only get 10 - 15 minutes worth of writing time, and 50% of that is completely useless.Thanks for the recommendation though :o) I really appreciate it.
You should go to Milan they have the best Pizza in the world!! Great Story, really enjoying it. I like Neville, I use him a lot. Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I'll keep that in mind when I'm in Vegas come July (cause I am definitely not cooking while at Mom's)... although I might too busy at Lumos to actually eat -- naught not gonna happen I like food too much.Neville and Snape are two of my favorite characters in this series.
The more I read this, the more I want to cry. Thanks for putting in their life. It makes it so much better.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
OH MY FREAKING GOD THERE IS NO MORE!!!! *whyistherenomore?!*
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL there is more... I've got one more completely betaed chapter to upload and then Chapter 11 is currently with my beta. Unfortunately I am a s-l-o-w writer. I've been plugging away at this story since May of 2005. I'm no where near done... nope.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
Oh my goodness, I am too! And my muse is practically on no leash whatsoever so I could be half way through a chapter or story and she'll just poof! disappear, the saucy bint.
Dammit, you are a bad, bad tease! My brain is going to explode trying to figure things out!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh no no no... we can't have exploding brains, that would be terribly messy.
My goodness that almost made me cry a little. Jeez, poor Neville, poor Josie. I want to hug them all.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks...
I hope this story does not stop having chapters before the end, or I'm going to have cats.... or kneazles!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
kneazles would be more fun... they walk through walls (no not really)
Oh Fred and George andwhoisHermioneshagging?!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o)
Great chapter again, lovey!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks :o)
Awww, poor drunkards.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL yeah, well sometimes a little wine goes along way.en vino en veritas
MY GOD justtelluswho*he*isyourockmyfaceoff.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Which he are you refering to?Hermione's bumping uglies partner?The owner of the house?The ghost?
I think I'm in love with your writing, and the great research you do for it. Kudos, and you've got another fan!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
lol I'm not even that good...For good try Ladyofthemasque or Southernwitch... they rock my socks off. And Snegurochkalee for Slash... omg to die for.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
My dear, I know they write too, and trust me, there can be more than four good writers, there are a whole slew of them. :) You rock my socks off. :)
Holy wow, this is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
*blush* Thanks
I didn't pay attention to the date, so when he introduced himself, I was like, "Hey! What gives? He's back?" lol Good chapter. Nice background.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o) Dates are important! The next 4 or 5 chapters are actually going to be background on Josie and Neville -- needed to get to the good stuff, about how and why Josie's going to react to certain things in the future.