Chapter 8
Chapter 9 of 12
CelisnebulaMarch 16, 2005
Las Vegas
The faux deck that served as the sidewalk in front of the Treasure Island Casino was crowded as the first showing of the nightly pirate battle drew near. People pushed into the front crevices of the deck, trying to get the best possible view, pressing against one another to create a human gridlock.
Josie moved through the crowd, squeezing past a group of Japanese tourists, taking pictures of the opulent city. She scanned the area for the young Englishman she’d met the day before, hardly daring to believe that he’d show. She twisted, hiking up on her tiptoes, wondering why her brain had come up with this place, at this time of day. There were far too many people.
Just as she was about to give up and head back, Josie felt a hand on her shoulder. She whipped around and caught sight of her intended date standing a few feet from her.
“You made it,” she yelled over the din, scooting around a heavyset man in shorts with black tube socks pulled up to his knees. “I didn’t actually think you would show up.”
“Is it always like this?” he panted.
“What?”
“Is it always like this?” he yelled louder, as the crowd surged back, making him bump into the wooden wall.
“Pretty much,” Josie yelled back with a huge grin.
“And they do this every night?”
“Every hour, actually.”
“Why?”
“It’s a form of advertisement. People stop and watch the show, then after it’s done they wander in to the casino. Each casino has its own gimmick to draw people in.”
“Does it?”
“Does it what?” she asked, watching the lights flicker out across the fake pond as the two ships battled.
“Does it draw you in?”
“Look around you. There are people from all walks of life milling around, taking a moment to just stop and enjoy what’s laid out before them. Las Vegas is one of the few truly decadent places where people are free to…” She stopped and turned towards him. “Yes, this draws me in. I people watch, and this,” she waved her arm, “is as good as it gets. It’s the ‘it doesn’t count’ attitude; it lets people express themselves in ways that they might never have thought of before. I often just stroll around, taking random pictures, capturing these infinite moments of freedom.”
“And freedom is important to you,” he stated.
“Isn’t it important to everyone?” she asked. “Too many times people try to lock themselves up in cookie cutter molds, they feel as if they have to fit into what the public wants them to be. Be skinny, be beautiful, be straight, get married, have children, go to church every Sunday, believe in the ‘one true’ god, don’t get a tattoo, go to college, make lots of money, be productive, stop chasing the dream… I could go on and on about what the conventional world wants. It’s just such a shame!” Josie leaned against the railing and faced the pirate ship, watching as it slowly sank. “I’m sorry,” she mumbled. “I doubt you wanted to hear a lecture.”
Neville reached out to grab her hand. “I don’t mind the lecture, not when it comes from such a passionate advocate.” Josie threw him a hesitant smile, and tried to extract her hand, but he threaded his fingers through hers.
The crowd slowly moved on as the show ended, bodies pressing against each other as people tried to move on to the next nightly show.
“So where are we off to now?” Neville asked.
Josie cocked her head to the side and glanced his way. “Have you ever been here before?”
“No,” he said, with a slight shake of his head.
“I know just the thing then,” she whispered, tugging on his hand.
“That sounds almost ominous.”
“What’s wrong, Brit boy, don’t you trust me?”
“I’m not sure trust is the right word,” he mumbled as he followed her lead.
“Really?” Josie shot back over her shoulder. “What would you call it, then?”
“Oh, no,” Neville laughed. “There’s no way to answer that without it coming out wrong. I’ll just happily follow your lead tonight, and leave it at that.”
“Just remember you said that,” she shot back. With a sharp wave of her hand and a harsh: “Taxi!” Josie flagged down a cab.
“Climb in,” she told him with a wave of her hand as she bent down and through the door window of the cab. Neville stood on the curb merely staring at the cab with an odd expression as Josie instructed the driver. She pulled out of the window and looked at him oddly.
“Is there something wrong?” she asked, opening the back door.
“I – er – no,” he replied. “It’s just… smaller.”
“Smaller?”
“A bit. The cabs are – not so compact, back home.”
“If you’re feeling claustrophobic, we can always walk,” she offered, pulling back from the cab.
“No – really, it’s all right.” He folded his body down to sit on the seat and slide across.
“You sure?” Josie asked, taking a tentative dip down to sit on the cab seat.
He reached across her and pulled the door shut. “Yes, I’m sure.”
The cab darted off down the congested strip, zooming around slower moving cars as they headed north. Josie watched as Neville’s fingers gripped at the door handle, his knuckles blanching white. She reached over to grasp his other hand.
“We could have walked.”
“I’m fine, truly.” Neville gave her a weak smile. “So, can you tell me about where we’re going, or is that a secret?”
"Why don’t you look out the window since we’re here.”
“The Crown and Anchor Pub? Is this what I think it is?”
“I thought I’d take you to one of my favorite watering holes; about as close to England as I’ll ever get.”
“Brilliant,” he exclaimed, giving her a genuine smile this time. “Oi, does this mean you only went out with me because I’m British?”
“I did tell you I found your accent appealing,” she replied, sliding out of the cab.
“You, m’dear, are a tease,” he groused, following her out of the car.
“Perhaps,” she responded, pulling him up the sidewalk. “You’ll just have to stick around to find out.”
“That sounds like a challenge,” he chuckled. “Dare I hope I’m up to it?”
A/N:
For those of you who caught the mention of cookie cutter molds, and why that phrase would mean anything at all, I couldn’t resist. I know, I’m a bad, bad girl.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Tomorrow's Appeal
28 Reviews | 7.04/10 Average
I still love this story! Please, please tell me it hasn't been abandoned!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
No, it hasn't been abandoned! Unfortuntately, I'm just a very slow writer who hasn't had a lot of time to write (summers are kill times for me because of all the day care hours I work) and a muse that's off in three some land playing with the Weasley twins. I've got chapter 12 about 2/3s of the way done, baring any mishaps where I accidently delete the chapter from my flash drive instead of saving it (don't ask).
I just found this story on a recomendation the other day... It really brings Neville into a new light for me! Your writing is beautiful.... This is something I would pick up in a bookstore and pay full price for. (And that's alot, coming from the Queen of Clearance) I've never read the inspiration story, but I'm now very interested.Please finish! A girl's gotta know!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh my... wow. Thank you! That means so much (as I only buy the occasional book at full price myself -- the ones I can't wait to get to the used book store or on Ebay). The next chapter is actually sitting in queue right now, and I'm slowly plodding away on the next chapter.
I just love it!!! It's just a beautiful story. Perhaps more so because none of the regular characters are in it.PLease up date soon. And thank you for a wonderful story, writen perfectly in every way.Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you. I'm slowly working on the next chapter.
haha! Poor Josie! I'd say the girls needed a good drink. Lovely story so far.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Good drink, a good cry, and definitely a good shag.
Nev's grandmother bites! Poor little Alice! I can't wait to see the "ghost" lol
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL Ghost might not make an actual appearance for awhile. But, he will be well worth it.
Great chapter... I am wondering who owns the house and who the dang ghost is! LOL... You know, since I'm such a Snape Head, I keep expecting one of the two to be him. Good chapter. I feel so sorry for her. Poor woman.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL... I don't think you'll like the owner of the house then. As much as I adore Snape, he wouldn't allow anyone to live in his house, even if they paid him.
Gran Longbottom = hateful. Can't believe they don't care how Neville felt for his wife and child. Yuck. Well, I hope Josie comes out okay. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Holy crap I have reviews!
Sheesh now I have to figure out how come they're not going to my inbox :oS.
I think Granny Longbottom is the tradition matriarch of any long standing family -- she wants her children and grandchildren raised in the 'proper' manner.
Poor Nev and his family. I am quite interested in finding out what happens to Josie and little Alice. Great start.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you.
Looking forward to reading more soon.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I should have another upload of this in a day or two.
its about time we get an American in the wizarding world!!! (coming from one herself )I love how Neville's grown...very mature--i like.please continue?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Next chapter is slowly coming along.
I looooooooved this chapter, darling, and don't worry, a lot of ideas are recycled, but trust me, I've read both stories, and they're different enough, I promise!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL I know... It's one of those things where I was watching the movie and it was ah "Oh thats...!" moment. Silly to think I wouldn't have the same ida.
Very good chapter! Excellent. I really love this backstory. I decide to rec it out to others. (Don't worry. I've warned about the future slow updates.)
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I wish I wasn't such a slow writer, I'm always so jealous of people who seem to get a chapter written and posted every two weeks -- I wish I was that prolific. Most days I only get 10 - 15 minutes worth of writing time, and 50% of that is completely useless.Thanks for the recommendation though :o) I really appreciate it.
You should go to Milan they have the best Pizza in the world!! Great Story, really enjoying it. I like Neville, I use him a lot. Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I'll keep that in mind when I'm in Vegas come July (cause I am definitely not cooking while at Mom's)... although I might too busy at Lumos to actually eat -- naught not gonna happen I like food too much.Neville and Snape are two of my favorite characters in this series.
The more I read this, the more I want to cry. Thanks for putting in their life. It makes it so much better.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
OH MY FREAKING GOD THERE IS NO MORE!!!! *whyistherenomore?!*
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL there is more... I've got one more completely betaed chapter to upload and then Chapter 11 is currently with my beta. Unfortunately I am a s-l-o-w writer. I've been plugging away at this story since May of 2005. I'm no where near done... nope.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
Oh my goodness, I am too! And my muse is practically on no leash whatsoever so I could be half way through a chapter or story and she'll just poof! disappear, the saucy bint.
Dammit, you are a bad, bad tease! My brain is going to explode trying to figure things out!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh no no no... we can't have exploding brains, that would be terribly messy.
My goodness that almost made me cry a little. Jeez, poor Neville, poor Josie. I want to hug them all.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks...
I hope this story does not stop having chapters before the end, or I'm going to have cats.... or kneazles!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
kneazles would be more fun... they walk through walls (no not really)
Oh Fred and George andwhoisHermioneshagging?!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o)
Great chapter again, lovey!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks :o)
Awww, poor drunkards.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL yeah, well sometimes a little wine goes along way.en vino en veritas
MY GOD justtelluswho*he*isyourockmyfaceoff.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Which he are you refering to?Hermione's bumping uglies partner?The owner of the house?The ghost?
I think I'm in love with your writing, and the great research you do for it. Kudos, and you've got another fan!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
lol I'm not even that good...For good try Ladyofthemasque or Southernwitch... they rock my socks off. And Snegurochkalee for Slash... omg to die for.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
My dear, I know they write too, and trust me, there can be more than four good writers, there are a whole slew of them. :) You rock my socks off. :)
Holy wow, this is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
*blush* Thanks
I didn't pay attention to the date, so when he introduced himself, I was like, "Hey! What gives? He's back?" lol Good chapter. Nice background.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o) Dates are important! The next 4 or 5 chapters are actually going to be background on Josie and Neville -- needed to get to the good stuff, about how and why Josie's going to react to certain things in the future.