Chapter 4
Chapter 5 of 12
CelisnebulaFriday, June 7th
Hermione Granger's Flat
The alarm went off with a high-pitched shrill, startling the lone occupant of the bed. She rolled over, the flat of her palm slapping against the top of the clock as she stuffed a pillow over her head. Hermione was just on the verge of falling back asleep when a loud tapping rapped at her window. She pulled at the covers bunched around her waist, pulling them up over her head as well as she tried to ignore the persistent noise. Unfortunately, the snooze timer on the alarm went off again, shrilling loudly in her ear. With a muttered oath, she pushed the pillow and the blankets from her tired body and rolled onto her back.
She stared at the ceiling, letting her eyes adjust to the cheery brightness of early morning, knowing that it was going to be a long day. The tapping at the window got consistently louder as she lazed, unmoving, on the bed. Hermione slapped at the alarm clock as she struggled to sit up, noticing that not only was she alone in bed, but that she was also in yesterday's clothes.
Running a hand down her face, Hermione moved to the window and pushed it open. An owl rushed in, thrusting its leg at her with an indignant hoot. It tried to poke at her hand as she untied the missive, but she evaded its sharp beak.
"None of that, naughty girl," she reprimanded the bird, unraveling the scroll. Her mouth felt as though a thousand cotton balls had been stuffed into it.
Hermione,
Here is the authorization you need to access my funds for the workmen. Do any repairs needed, even if it seems minor. Spare no expense; Neville's wife shouldn't have to worry about a thing. Send a message if you need anything else.
Hermione reached over and grabbed a pencil off the nightstand.
Well, since you're being so generous, would you hire a house-elf or two? I think it would be wise to have someone there at all times with some magical ability, and I doubt Josie would take kindly to anyone moving in with her. A house-elf, especially one that comes with the house, I can guilt her into taking. It would ease my mind knowing she wasn't at the tender mercy of any extra ominous charms, hexes, or stray house pests I can't find. And I do mean hire; you know how I feel about the traditional arrangements.
Hermione
PS Will you hurry up and get your arse home? Bloody git.
With deft fingers, she tied her response to the owl's leg and shooed it off. She glanced at the clock on the nightstand and decided to make her morning shower a short affair.
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Friday, June 7th
Rose Cottage
Josie awoke, strangely disoriented, reaching over to cuddle with Neville, only to find his side of the bed empty and cold. She sat up sharply, looking around the darkened room for traces of her husband and finding none.
"Nev " His name died on her lips as she remembered why, her heart clenching over that knowledge.
She collapsed in on herself, sagging back against the pillows. With a shuddering sob, she brought her knees to her chest, curling into the fetal position. Everything hurt.
"Oh, Neville," she whispered, "I don't think I can do this."
It was so hard to believe he was gone. How was she to survive? Everything felt so alien. It just wasn't fair. She missed his crooked smile. She missed the way he was constantly forgetting the simplest things, yet could remember an inane fact like the first flower he'd given her. She missed the way his warm body would cradle hers, the feel of his body pressing against her.
And, on top of that, she had to leave their home. She and Neville had lived here since before Alice was born. Every crook and cranny held a memory of their life together.
Feeling raw and broken, she wrapped her arms around his pillow, and pressed her face against it. It still smelled faintly of him. With a gasping moan, she hugged the pillow close to her body, tears streaming down her face. Nothing felt right, and Josie had a feeling that nothing would ever feel right again.
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Friday, June 7th
The Burrow
"Nana Molly, where is my Mum?" asked a sleepy Alice as she moved into the kitchen.
"I sent her home last night, I thought it'd be nice to have some time, just the two of us."
"Really?" Alice asked, climbing into one of the chairs set around the table.
Molly chuckled, setting a glass of juice in front of the girl. "Yes, deary, really."
"Do... do you think she's all right?" Alice chewed on her lip in a gesture that reminded Molly of Hermione as a child. Molly moved around the table and pulled the girl into a hug.
"I think she is as well as she can be," Molly muttered into her hair as she placed a kiss on Alice's head.
"Would..." Alice looked up into Molly's face. "Would you be upset if we went home after breakfast so I can make sure?"
"No, Sweetie," she replied, cupping Alice's cheek. "I wouldn't be upset at all."
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Friday, June 7th
Craig Mhor
"Mr. Brigstaff, just what do you mean you can't get into all of the rooms?" Hermione asked, brushing back an annoying strand of hair. "I went through and unwarded the doors yesterday myself. There should be no reason you and your crew cannot get into any of them."
"That's just it, Ms. Granger, there's no supportable reason why we shouldn't," he replied, wiping his brow with a handkerchief. "Yet something is blocking access to the cellar and the master bedroom on the east side of the house. Nothing we have done, short of breaking the doors down, has had any effect."
"Have you tried taking the damn doors off their hinges?"
"We can't just go barging in without express permission to do that sort of work. We'd be liable if, by some chance, we damaged any of the property inside."
"I thought we already covered this in the initial contract," Hermione said sharply. "This house is going to be utilized by someone with a limited amount of magic, so we have to ensure that there is nothing that could potentially harm her. That means you go in, by force if necessary, to each and every room to ensure that there is nothing left behind that can do that."
"I understand your position, Ms. Granger; however, I do have to point out that it wasn't expressly stated that we could use any force necessary," he said, handing her an adjustment form requiring a signature. "Therefore, I wanted to ensure I had proper authorization before we attempted to do anything that might potentially cause damage to the structure."
"All right, you have it. Just get on with the work. This place needs to be ready by tomorrow morning," she replied, signing the paper with a flourish.
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Friday, June 7th
Rose Cottage
"Is there anything else you can think of that needs to go?" Molly asked Josie, shrinking the last box on the kitchen counter.
"I think we've pretty much gotten everything except for the linens on the bed, which I can grab tomorrow morning and pack in one of the suitcases before we leave."
"Are you sure you wouldn't rather stay at the Burrow tonight? You know you're always welcome, and it isn't as if we haven't the room."
"No, I think Alice and I need one last night here," Josie replied, leaning against the counter. "Closure, if you will."
"If you're sure...?"
"About as sure as I can be," Josie sighed out. "It feels so strange leaving here, and rationally I can see wanting to leave as fast as possible, a 'ripping the band-aid' solution. But, I just can't do it. I need to be here just a little longer, even if it's only for one night. Silly, huh?"
"No, not silly at all. I don't know how I would be if I lost Arthur, much less had to move out of my home only a week later." Molly turned to the fireplace. "You call me if you need anything at all tonight, okay? We'll all be here at eight in the morning, so make sure you get plenty of rest, because it'll be a trying day with my boys helping."
Josie crossed to the older woman and hugged her.
"I promise we'll sleep well tonight, and I'll see you tomorrow."
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A/N:
I'd like to thank Mark for eradicating my blaring Americanisms, and Rachel W for catching my grammar mistakes, they both are invaluable assets to this piece you are reading.
For those interested this takes place in the spring/summer of 2013. That means, by my calculation, Hermione Granger is 34-35 in this piece, and Neville would have been 33, almost 34 at the time of his death.
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28 Reviews | 7.04/10 Average
I still love this story! Please, please tell me it hasn't been abandoned!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
No, it hasn't been abandoned! Unfortuntately, I'm just a very slow writer who hasn't had a lot of time to write (summers are kill times for me because of all the day care hours I work) and a muse that's off in three some land playing with the Weasley twins. I've got chapter 12 about 2/3s of the way done, baring any mishaps where I accidently delete the chapter from my flash drive instead of saving it (don't ask).
I just found this story on a recomendation the other day... It really brings Neville into a new light for me! Your writing is beautiful.... This is something I would pick up in a bookstore and pay full price for. (And that's alot, coming from the Queen of Clearance) I've never read the inspiration story, but I'm now very interested.Please finish! A girl's gotta know!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh my... wow. Thank you! That means so much (as I only buy the occasional book at full price myself -- the ones I can't wait to get to the used book store or on Ebay). The next chapter is actually sitting in queue right now, and I'm slowly plodding away on the next chapter.
I just love it!!! It's just a beautiful story. Perhaps more so because none of the regular characters are in it.PLease up date soon. And thank you for a wonderful story, writen perfectly in every way.Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you. I'm slowly working on the next chapter.
haha! Poor Josie! I'd say the girls needed a good drink. Lovely story so far.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Good drink, a good cry, and definitely a good shag.
Nev's grandmother bites! Poor little Alice! I can't wait to see the "ghost" lol
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL Ghost might not make an actual appearance for awhile. But, he will be well worth it.
Great chapter... I am wondering who owns the house and who the dang ghost is! LOL... You know, since I'm such a Snape Head, I keep expecting one of the two to be him. Good chapter. I feel so sorry for her. Poor woman.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL... I don't think you'll like the owner of the house then. As much as I adore Snape, he wouldn't allow anyone to live in his house, even if they paid him.
Gran Longbottom = hateful. Can't believe they don't care how Neville felt for his wife and child. Yuck. Well, I hope Josie comes out okay. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Holy crap I have reviews!
Sheesh now I have to figure out how come they're not going to my inbox :oS.
I think Granny Longbottom is the tradition matriarch of any long standing family -- she wants her children and grandchildren raised in the 'proper' manner.
Poor Nev and his family. I am quite interested in finding out what happens to Josie and little Alice. Great start.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you.
Looking forward to reading more soon.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I should have another upload of this in a day or two.
its about time we get an American in the wizarding world!!! (coming from one herself )I love how Neville's grown...very mature--i like.please continue?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Next chapter is slowly coming along.
I looooooooved this chapter, darling, and don't worry, a lot of ideas are recycled, but trust me, I've read both stories, and they're different enough, I promise!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL I know... It's one of those things where I was watching the movie and it was ah "Oh thats...!" moment. Silly to think I wouldn't have the same ida.
Very good chapter! Excellent. I really love this backstory. I decide to rec it out to others. (Don't worry. I've warned about the future slow updates.)
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I wish I wasn't such a slow writer, I'm always so jealous of people who seem to get a chapter written and posted every two weeks -- I wish I was that prolific. Most days I only get 10 - 15 minutes worth of writing time, and 50% of that is completely useless.Thanks for the recommendation though :o) I really appreciate it.
You should go to Milan they have the best Pizza in the world!! Great Story, really enjoying it. I like Neville, I use him a lot. Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I'll keep that in mind when I'm in Vegas come July (cause I am definitely not cooking while at Mom's)... although I might too busy at Lumos to actually eat -- naught not gonna happen I like food too much.Neville and Snape are two of my favorite characters in this series.
The more I read this, the more I want to cry. Thanks for putting in their life. It makes it so much better.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
OH MY FREAKING GOD THERE IS NO MORE!!!! *whyistherenomore?!*
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL there is more... I've got one more completely betaed chapter to upload and then Chapter 11 is currently with my beta. Unfortunately I am a s-l-o-w writer. I've been plugging away at this story since May of 2005. I'm no where near done... nope.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
Oh my goodness, I am too! And my muse is practically on no leash whatsoever so I could be half way through a chapter or story and she'll just poof! disappear, the saucy bint.
Dammit, you are a bad, bad tease! My brain is going to explode trying to figure things out!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh no no no... we can't have exploding brains, that would be terribly messy.
My goodness that almost made me cry a little. Jeez, poor Neville, poor Josie. I want to hug them all.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks...
I hope this story does not stop having chapters before the end, or I'm going to have cats.... or kneazles!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
kneazles would be more fun... they walk through walls (no not really)
Oh Fred and George andwhoisHermioneshagging?!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o)
Great chapter again, lovey!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks :o)
Awww, poor drunkards.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL yeah, well sometimes a little wine goes along way.en vino en veritas
MY GOD justtelluswho*he*isyourockmyfaceoff.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Which he are you refering to?Hermione's bumping uglies partner?The owner of the house?The ghost?
I think I'm in love with your writing, and the great research you do for it. Kudos, and you've got another fan!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
lol I'm not even that good...For good try Ladyofthemasque or Southernwitch... they rock my socks off. And Snegurochkalee for Slash... omg to die for.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
My dear, I know they write too, and trust me, there can be more than four good writers, there are a whole slew of them. :) You rock my socks off. :)
Holy wow, this is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
*blush* Thanks
I didn't pay attention to the date, so when he introduced himself, I was like, "Hey! What gives? He's back?" lol Good chapter. Nice background.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o) Dates are important! The next 4 or 5 chapters are actually going to be background on Josie and Neville -- needed to get to the good stuff, about how and why Josie's going to react to certain things in the future.