Chapter 7
Chapter 8 of 12
CelisnebulaMarch 15, 2005
Death Valley
It was a place of brutal beauty, where jagged rocks of red cut into the crystalline blue sky, and tuffs of tumbleweed bled into dashes of color as fragile flowers rose up from dry earth. It was a desolate land, often full of stark nothingness, where serrated fissures of rock separated the lush Californian coast from the east. In a space of pure desert, hardy flowers climbed out of the barren sand, clinging to large granite rocks that rose out of the earth like giant teeth.
Josie Rutledge hoisted up her Pentax Ds 35MM with telephoto lens, trying to frame the right shot as the air rippled over the sand. In her back pocket, she had a super slim Pentax Optio digital camera, to catch those moments where a click and point might work better than the manual focus camera. The very air seemed to shimmer with anticipation as she moved back, her fingers working the lens to bring the rippling effect into sharp focus.
As soon as she took the first shot, her fingers twisted the lens to a wider vision, catching bits of the blue sky in the frame as she triggered another shot. Satisfied that she had gotten the best possible angle, she moved on, keeping the tourist bus in sight as she positioned her body for another dramatic shot. Just as she had focused, her finger poised above the trigger of the camera to capture the beauty before her, a dark patch of material fluttered before her lens.
“Hey, do ya mind?” she snapped out, annoyed that her shot was ruined.
The figure in front of her whipped around, clearly startled.
“The others are over there,” Josie said, waving her arm behind her. “If you’re looking for better plant samples, I doubt you’ll find them over here. So, if you don’t mind,” she gestured to her camera.
The man in front of her just stood there, gaping at her, with an astonished expression on his face.
“Look,” she sighed, “I don’t mean to be rude, but you’re ruining my shot. Could you please go join the other botanical geeks over there and let me finish this?”
“I – er – I,” he stammered, still staring at her. “I didn’t realize anyone was over here.”
“Yes, well, as you can see, I am, and you are in the way, so can you move?”
“Oh – I – yes,” he spluttered, moving behind her.
Josie tried to ignore his presence as she tried to recapture the visual effect she wanted. She moved forward, crouching low to the ground as she tried different angles.
“Simply stunning, isn’t it?” he muttered as she took aim.
Josie turned her head. “It’s beautiful.”
“What do you do with your photos once it’s all said and done?” he asked, kneeling beside her.
“It depends,” she grunted, shifting her weight.
“On what?”
She shrugged. “A lot of things.”
“You’re not a very communicative person, are you?”
She pivoted on her heels and found herself face to face with the man. He had floppy brown hair and a crooked smile that seemed to light up his whole face.
“I can be,” she started defensively. “I’m just not in the habit of talking to strange men, even ones with interesting accents, in the middle of nowhere when I’m trying to work.”
“Oh, so this is your profession?” She let out a hiss of impatient air, but he continued as if he hadn’t heard it. “Do you really think I have an interesting accent?”
She eased back, plunking down on the ground, heedless of the sand and pushed her backpack off her shoulders. She swung it around, unzipped the side pocket, and pulled out a bottle of water.
“You don’t give up, do you?” she asked, slowly unscrewing the plastic top off the water bottle.
“No, not often,” he laughed. “Neville,” he held out his hand. “Neville Longbottom.”
“Josie,” she grunted, grabbing his hand.
“And do you have a last name? Or is it just ‘Josie’?”
“For now it’s just Josie,” she replied, pulling her hand from his.
“Cagey one, aren’t you?”
“Most of the time.” She brought the water bottle up to her lips and took a long drink.
“So, are you here to photograph the various species of wild flowers, or do you come here often?” he asked with a wide grin.
Josie sputtered. “You do realize that is the absolute worst pick up line ever.”
“Yes, well, while it is a perfectly awful line, it does lead to some pertinent answers.”
“Such as?”
“Whether or not you are from around here, and if not, then at least an idea of how long you’re going to be around here so that I might take you out for a drink or something of that nature.”
“Are you asking me out on a date?”
“I – er – yes, I suppose I am.”
“What if I told you I wasn’t interested?”
“Oh,” he said in a dejected tone. “Does – I mean – are you not interested, then?”
“Well, it depends,” she started, retightening the lid on her water bottle. He waited, his eyes on her face as she stuffed the bottle back into her bag and resituated it. The silence stretched between them. Finally, just as he was on the verge of asking, ‘on what,’ she continued, “Where are you planning to take me?”
“I – that is.” He flushed bright red as he cast about for the right words. “Do – do you mean it?” he squeaked out.
The tourist bus let out a loud blaring sound that signaled the end of her time there.
“That’s for me,” she said, pushing up off the ground. She swung the backpack back on and started toward the bus. Neville quickly scrambled up after her.
“Wait,” he panted. “Did you mean it?”
Josie turned back to face him. He fidgeted for a moment, as though unsure of whether he should touch her or not. He looked so utterly unsure of himself in an almost endearing way.
“Meet me tomorrow, in front of Treasure Island, just before the eight o’clock showing of the pirate ships,” she said, turning from him.
“Treasure Island?” he yelled at her.
“Yes,” she yelled back. “And wear something cooler with comfortable shoes.”
“I’m British,” he yelled, watching her walk off in the distance. “I only own comfortable shoes.”
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A/N:
In case you’re wondering where the ending line came from, I’ve actually had someone say that to me, in Vegas. I’m not sure if he was being flippant, or what, but, I told him to bring comfortable shoes because I was going to make him walk the entire strip with me, to which he replied, with a sniff. “I’m British, dear, I only own comfortable shoes.”
Thanks to Rachel W for getting this chapter back so quickly, and to Andy, aka VainRogue, for agreeing to look this over for me (such a cute young Englishman). I promise I’ll drag you all over Vegas if you’re ever there playing the lost tourist.
This spring heralded a once in a lifetime event in the western desert areas of Southern California and Nevada, an event that brought out a startling array of flowers, some of which haven’t been seen in over a hundred years. It was a particularly wet spring all over, and the desert areas were no exception. If you would like to read more about this fascinating event, please check out:
http://www.death-valley.us/article1224.html
http://www.gotorenotahoe.com/news/stories/html/2005/05/04/1735.php?sps=&sch=&sp1=gotorenotahoe&sp2=goto+ski&sp3=goto+ski+main
Some awesome photos of this spring in the desert:
http://www.desertusa.com/wildflo/rockquarry3.jpg
http://www.desertusa.com/wildflo/dvarea1.jpg
http://www.pbase.com/ageojo/image/41589891
http://www.pbase.com/ageojo/image/41589895
http://www.pbase.com/ageojo/image/41589898
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Latest 25 Reviews for Tomorrow's Appeal
28 Reviews | 7.04/10 Average
I still love this story! Please, please tell me it hasn't been abandoned!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
No, it hasn't been abandoned! Unfortuntately, I'm just a very slow writer who hasn't had a lot of time to write (summers are kill times for me because of all the day care hours I work) and a muse that's off in three some land playing with the Weasley twins. I've got chapter 12 about 2/3s of the way done, baring any mishaps where I accidently delete the chapter from my flash drive instead of saving it (don't ask).
I just found this story on a recomendation the other day... It really brings Neville into a new light for me! Your writing is beautiful.... This is something I would pick up in a bookstore and pay full price for. (And that's alot, coming from the Queen of Clearance) I've never read the inspiration story, but I'm now very interested.Please finish! A girl's gotta know!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh my... wow. Thank you! That means so much (as I only buy the occasional book at full price myself -- the ones I can't wait to get to the used book store or on Ebay). The next chapter is actually sitting in queue right now, and I'm slowly plodding away on the next chapter.
I just love it!!! It's just a beautiful story. Perhaps more so because none of the regular characters are in it.PLease up date soon. And thank you for a wonderful story, writen perfectly in every way.Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you. I'm slowly working on the next chapter.
haha! Poor Josie! I'd say the girls needed a good drink. Lovely story so far.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Good drink, a good cry, and definitely a good shag.
Nev's grandmother bites! Poor little Alice! I can't wait to see the "ghost" lol
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL Ghost might not make an actual appearance for awhile. But, he will be well worth it.
Great chapter... I am wondering who owns the house and who the dang ghost is! LOL... You know, since I'm such a Snape Head, I keep expecting one of the two to be him. Good chapter. I feel so sorry for her. Poor woman.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL... I don't think you'll like the owner of the house then. As much as I adore Snape, he wouldn't allow anyone to live in his house, even if they paid him.
Gran Longbottom = hateful. Can't believe they don't care how Neville felt for his wife and child. Yuck. Well, I hope Josie comes out okay. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Holy crap I have reviews!
Sheesh now I have to figure out how come they're not going to my inbox :oS.
I think Granny Longbottom is the tradition matriarch of any long standing family -- she wants her children and grandchildren raised in the 'proper' manner.
Poor Nev and his family. I am quite interested in finding out what happens to Josie and little Alice. Great start.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you.
Looking forward to reading more soon.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I should have another upload of this in a day or two.
its about time we get an American in the wizarding world!!! (coming from one herself )I love how Neville's grown...very mature--i like.please continue?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Next chapter is slowly coming along.
I looooooooved this chapter, darling, and don't worry, a lot of ideas are recycled, but trust me, I've read both stories, and they're different enough, I promise!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL I know... It's one of those things where I was watching the movie and it was ah "Oh thats...!" moment. Silly to think I wouldn't have the same ida.
Very good chapter! Excellent. I really love this backstory. I decide to rec it out to others. (Don't worry. I've warned about the future slow updates.)
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I wish I wasn't such a slow writer, I'm always so jealous of people who seem to get a chapter written and posted every two weeks -- I wish I was that prolific. Most days I only get 10 - 15 minutes worth of writing time, and 50% of that is completely useless.Thanks for the recommendation though :o) I really appreciate it.
You should go to Milan they have the best Pizza in the world!! Great Story, really enjoying it. I like Neville, I use him a lot. Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I'll keep that in mind when I'm in Vegas come July (cause I am definitely not cooking while at Mom's)... although I might too busy at Lumos to actually eat -- naught not gonna happen I like food too much.Neville and Snape are two of my favorite characters in this series.
The more I read this, the more I want to cry. Thanks for putting in their life. It makes it so much better.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
OH MY FREAKING GOD THERE IS NO MORE!!!! *whyistherenomore?!*
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL there is more... I've got one more completely betaed chapter to upload and then Chapter 11 is currently with my beta. Unfortunately I am a s-l-o-w writer. I've been plugging away at this story since May of 2005. I'm no where near done... nope.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
Oh my goodness, I am too! And my muse is practically on no leash whatsoever so I could be half way through a chapter or story and she'll just poof! disappear, the saucy bint.
Dammit, you are a bad, bad tease! My brain is going to explode trying to figure things out!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh no no no... we can't have exploding brains, that would be terribly messy.
My goodness that almost made me cry a little. Jeez, poor Neville, poor Josie. I want to hug them all.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks...
I hope this story does not stop having chapters before the end, or I'm going to have cats.... or kneazles!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
kneazles would be more fun... they walk through walls (no not really)
Oh Fred and George andwhoisHermioneshagging?!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o)
Great chapter again, lovey!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks :o)
Awww, poor drunkards.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL yeah, well sometimes a little wine goes along way.en vino en veritas
MY GOD justtelluswho*he*isyourockmyfaceoff.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Which he are you refering to?Hermione's bumping uglies partner?The owner of the house?The ghost?
I think I'm in love with your writing, and the great research you do for it. Kudos, and you've got another fan!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
lol I'm not even that good...For good try Ladyofthemasque or Southernwitch... they rock my socks off. And Snegurochkalee for Slash... omg to die for.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
My dear, I know they write too, and trust me, there can be more than four good writers, there are a whole slew of them. :) You rock my socks off. :)
Holy wow, this is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
*blush* Thanks
I didn't pay attention to the date, so when he introduced himself, I was like, "Hey! What gives? He's back?" lol Good chapter. Nice background.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o) Dates are important! The next 4 or 5 chapters are actually going to be background on Josie and Neville -- needed to get to the good stuff, about how and why Josie's going to react to certain things in the future.