Chapter 2
Chapter 3 of 12
CelisnebulaWednesday, June 5th
The Burrow
“All right, Hermione,” Molly said as the young woman emerged out of her fireplace, “I think you better be telling me just what’s going on before Josie and Alice arrive.”
“I don’t know what you mean.”
“Don’t play coy with me, Missy,” Molly huffed, waving a spoon in her direction. “I’m giving you the benefit of the doubt here. Since when have you leave to rent out Craig Mhor?”
“There isn’t much to tell.” She moved around and snagged a warm roll from the counter beside Molly. “I wrote to him, apprising him of the situation, and he offered. You know how he is about these things.”
“Get out of that,” Molly snapped, slapping at her hand with the spoon. “I swear you’re getting to be as bad as Ron.” Hermione grinned cheekily at Molly as she plopped a bite into her mouth. “Is he coming home then?” she asked, pushing the butter toward Hermione.
“No,” Hermione sighed, leaning against the counter, “he’s not coming home just yet.”
“Do you really think it’s wise to send Josie to Craig Mhor?”
“What do you suggest we do then? You two have already argued over her moving in here with you, and I doubt she’d take kindly to moving in with me, or anyone else for that matter. The cottage is available, and despite its unpleasant residential annoyance, is probably the best spot for her and Alice.”
“Yes, well,” Molly sniffed, “I still can’t believe Augusta Longbottom is doing this, and to her own great-grandchild.”
Hermione shrugged. “You know how Neville’s gran can be.”
“Still, it isn’t right, what she and that lot of hers are doing. It isn’t right at all.”
“Yes, well, I don’t think they’ll get far,” Hermione replied, breaking off another piece of the roll. “Everything I’ve looked at, so far, suggests that Alice is entitled to Neville’s assets as his heir. So, while they’re making it hard on Josie at the moment, Alice will get everything they’re trying to deny them once she gains majority.”
“That’s all well and good then, but what about now, when Josie and Alice need those assets?” Molly asked, her tone conveying her contempt for the Longbottom’s actions toward the girls. “What about the cottage? Will Alice and Josie be able to return to Rose Cottage?”
“I don’t think so. Technically the cottage wasn’t Neville’s; apparently his gran let them live there, even though she disapproved of Josie.”
“Thus, they have no choice but to make a go of it at Craig Mhor,” Molly stated flatly. “Have you told her yet?”
“No,” Hermione sighed, pushing off from the counter, “not yet. I’ll talk to her once she’s settled.” She reached around Molly’s ample frame and snagged another roll. “Speaking of settled, would you mind helping me tomorrow at Craig Mhor? I need to make sure the Muggle confusion and repel charms are down. It would be horrible if we set Josie up in the cottage only to have her get lost the first time she went out into the yard.”
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Wednesday, June 5th
Rose Cottage
“I don’t wanna,” cried Alice, her face red and blotchy with tears. “You can’t make me!”
“Alice Claire Longbottom, when I ask you to do something, I expect you to do it.”
“I don’t wanna move. I wanna stay here,” Alice screamed. “You can’t make me go!”
“Alice, stop it,” Josie said in a stern voice.
“You can’t make me,” Alice howled, flinging herself onto the floor. She kicked and writhed against it, all the while screaming, “You can’t.”
A flower vase flew off the bookshelf and crashed to the floor, the books lining the bookshelf began to whip across the room, where they smacked into the wall only to fall the floor. Alice screamed until her voice began to get hoarse, kicking at the floor as tears of rage rolled down her face.
Josie pulled Alice onto her lap, curling a leg around Alice’s flaying legs and wrapping her arm around Alice’s body. “I know, Baby, I know,” she muttered in a calm voice, rocking her body back and forth. The furniture rattled against the floor, thumping and scraping as it shook in place.
Alice shuddered, her muscles tensing and twitching as Josie held on. “It’s scary to be this out of control,” she whispered against Alice’s ear. Water drops began to fall all around the room, as Josie held on to her daughter.
“I’m going to help you gain control,” Josie said soothingly into her hair, over and over again, as she rocked Alice. “I’m going to hold you until you get back into control.”
“I don’t wanna,” Alice gasped out. “Please, Mummy, don’t make me.”
“I’m sorry, Alice,” Josie murmured. “We don’t have a choice. We can’t stay here.”
“But – but, Daddy,” Alice wailed. “We’ll forget Daddy if we go.”
“Ah, Honey, you will never forget your Daddy,” Josie assured the trembling girl. “He’s always here.” She placed her hand over Alice’s heart.
“But – what if I forget?” Alice whimpered. “What if I can’t remember him?”
“You won’t forget,” whispered Josie. “I won’t let you forget.”
“Promise?”
“I promise.”
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Wednesday, June 5th
Hermione Granger’s Flat
“Bloody hell, Hermione, there’s an owl at the window,” came a sleepy, gruff voice, followed by a sharp jab of an elbow. “Get out of bed, you lazy slag, and get it.”
“’S sleeping…” she mumbled, rolling over and pulling the covers over her head.
“Hermione,” the voice grunted, as the owner pushed her out of bed. “You’ve an owl.”
She landed with an undignified thump, sprawled out in a mess of blankets. “Eh? What?” she uttered unintelligibly.
“Owl,” came the muffled reply.
“Oh, right. Owl,” she muttered in a sleepy voice, pulling herself up of the floor. She crossed to the window and pushed it open.
“You’ve got a rotten sense of timing,” she wheezed at the bird, as it stuck out its leg. “I’d have thought by now you’d’ve developed enough manners to nip your owner if he did something like this at this time of night.”
“Go on,” she shooed the bird once the message was off. “I’ve nothing for you, not at this time of night.” The owl ruffled its feathers and gave a reprimanding hoot before taking flight.
Hermione,
Will be sending workers to the cottage at the end of week. Make sure he doesn’t scare them off before Josie moves in. She should be fine in the house as long as they avoid the cellar. He doesn’t manifest unless someone touches the items down there.
She threw the note on the nightstand and climbed back into bed.
“Was that…?” asked her bedmate.
“No, it wasn’t.”
“It sure looked like it was his owl…”
“It wasn’t,” she yawned, rolling on to her side.
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A/N:
The annoyance of a temper tantrum, parents know these symptoms well, err most of the symptoms, minus the flying and shaking items. I have to thank Rachel W for her search and destroy methods on my grammar foibles, and Mark for giving it a once over to make sure I’ve not been too American with everything. Any and all fubar portions are my own.
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Latest 25 Reviews for Tomorrow's Appeal
28 Reviews | 7.04/10 Average
I still love this story! Please, please tell me it hasn't been abandoned!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
No, it hasn't been abandoned! Unfortuntately, I'm just a very slow writer who hasn't had a lot of time to write (summers are kill times for me because of all the day care hours I work) and a muse that's off in three some land playing with the Weasley twins. I've got chapter 12 about 2/3s of the way done, baring any mishaps where I accidently delete the chapter from my flash drive instead of saving it (don't ask).
I just found this story on a recomendation the other day... It really brings Neville into a new light for me! Your writing is beautiful.... This is something I would pick up in a bookstore and pay full price for. (And that's alot, coming from the Queen of Clearance) I've never read the inspiration story, but I'm now very interested.Please finish! A girl's gotta know!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh my... wow. Thank you! That means so much (as I only buy the occasional book at full price myself -- the ones I can't wait to get to the used book store or on Ebay). The next chapter is actually sitting in queue right now, and I'm slowly plodding away on the next chapter.
I just love it!!! It's just a beautiful story. Perhaps more so because none of the regular characters are in it.PLease up date soon. And thank you for a wonderful story, writen perfectly in every way.Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you. I'm slowly working on the next chapter.
haha! Poor Josie! I'd say the girls needed a good drink. Lovely story so far.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Good drink, a good cry, and definitely a good shag.
Nev's grandmother bites! Poor little Alice! I can't wait to see the "ghost" lol
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL Ghost might not make an actual appearance for awhile. But, he will be well worth it.
Great chapter... I am wondering who owns the house and who the dang ghost is! LOL... You know, since I'm such a Snape Head, I keep expecting one of the two to be him. Good chapter. I feel so sorry for her. Poor woman.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL... I don't think you'll like the owner of the house then. As much as I adore Snape, he wouldn't allow anyone to live in his house, even if they paid him.
Gran Longbottom = hateful. Can't believe they don't care how Neville felt for his wife and child. Yuck. Well, I hope Josie comes out okay. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Holy crap I have reviews!
Sheesh now I have to figure out how come they're not going to my inbox :oS.
I think Granny Longbottom is the tradition matriarch of any long standing family -- she wants her children and grandchildren raised in the 'proper' manner.
Poor Nev and his family. I am quite interested in finding out what happens to Josie and little Alice. Great start.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thank you.
Looking forward to reading more soon.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I should have another upload of this in a day or two.
its about time we get an American in the wizarding world!!! (coming from one herself )I love how Neville's grown...very mature--i like.please continue?
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Next chapter is slowly coming along.
I looooooooved this chapter, darling, and don't worry, a lot of ideas are recycled, but trust me, I've read both stories, and they're different enough, I promise!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL I know... It's one of those things where I was watching the movie and it was ah "Oh thats...!" moment. Silly to think I wouldn't have the same ida.
Very good chapter! Excellent. I really love this backstory. I decide to rec it out to others. (Don't worry. I've warned about the future slow updates.)
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I wish I wasn't such a slow writer, I'm always so jealous of people who seem to get a chapter written and posted every two weeks -- I wish I was that prolific. Most days I only get 10 - 15 minutes worth of writing time, and 50% of that is completely useless.Thanks for the recommendation though :o) I really appreciate it.
You should go to Milan they have the best Pizza in the world!! Great Story, really enjoying it. I like Neville, I use him a lot. Best wishes,
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
I'll keep that in mind when I'm in Vegas come July (cause I am definitely not cooking while at Mom's)... although I might too busy at Lumos to actually eat -- naught not gonna happen I like food too much.Neville and Snape are two of my favorite characters in this series.
The more I read this, the more I want to cry. Thanks for putting in their life. It makes it so much better.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
OH MY FREAKING GOD THERE IS NO MORE!!!! *whyistherenomore?!*
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL there is more... I've got one more completely betaed chapter to upload and then Chapter 11 is currently with my beta. Unfortunately I am a s-l-o-w writer. I've been plugging away at this story since May of 2005. I'm no where near done... nope.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
Oh my goodness, I am too! And my muse is practically on no leash whatsoever so I could be half way through a chapter or story and she'll just poof! disappear, the saucy bint.
Dammit, you are a bad, bad tease! My brain is going to explode trying to figure things out!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Oh no no no... we can't have exploding brains, that would be terribly messy.
My goodness that almost made me cry a little. Jeez, poor Neville, poor Josie. I want to hug them all.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks...
I hope this story does not stop having chapters before the end, or I'm going to have cats.... or kneazles!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
kneazles would be more fun... they walk through walls (no not really)
Oh Fred and George andwhoisHermioneshagging?!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o)
Great chapter again, lovey!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Thanks :o)
Awww, poor drunkards.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
LOL yeah, well sometimes a little wine goes along way.en vino en veritas
MY GOD justtelluswho*he*isyourockmyfaceoff.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
Which he are you refering to?Hermione's bumping uglies partner?The owner of the house?The ghost?
I think I'm in love with your writing, and the great research you do for it. Kudos, and you've got another fan!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
lol I'm not even that good...For good try Ladyofthemasque or Southernwitch... they rock my socks off. And Snegurochkalee for Slash... omg to die for.
Response from Fenrir (Reviewer)
My dear, I know they write too, and trust me, there can be more than four good writers, there are a whole slew of them. :) You rock my socks off. :)
Holy wow, this is great! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
*blush* Thanks
I didn't pay attention to the date, so when he introduced himself, I was like, "Hey! What gives? He's back?" lol Good chapter. Nice background.
Response from Celisnebula (Author of Tomorrow's Appeal)
:o) Dates are important! The next 4 or 5 chapters are actually going to be background on Josie and Neville -- needed to get to the good stuff, about how and why Josie's going to react to certain things in the future.