XXXIV: Pruning
Chapter 34 of 41
sevs_starsistersTwo girls. Two Houses. One obsession.
In their final year at Hogwarts, two very different girls face their own battle with the continuing rise of the Dark Lord, encountering along the way shattered friendships, broken hearts, a charming blond Death Eater with a twisted plan, and a secret that could rock the foundations of the Wizarding world. Once more, the stern Potions master will have to do the impossible and offer his protection. Will he succeed?
Set during Harry Potter and The Order Of The Phoenix and mostly canon compliant.
Chapter XXXIV: Pruning
After a somewhat hasty breakfast and a surprised, 'What are you doing up this early?' from her mother, Charis caught the coach to London the following Wednesday at seven in the morning and arrived in Hammersmith at just past ten. She had arranged to meet Jack at Tower Records in Piccadilly at eleven, where they spent the morning happily browsing through thousands of CDs. Charis bought Logical Progression mixed by LTJ Bukem, whereas Jack plumped for Second Toughest in the Infants by Underworld.
From there, they decided to have lunch in Diagon Alley, after replenishing their Galleons at Gringotts, and spent a happy hour milling around the various shops, Flourish & Blotts being a particular favourite. A store full of books was like paradise for the two Ravenclaws, and had they had the money, they would have bought ten books each. But alas, neither of them were rich. Still, Jack furtively bought a booklet called Teaching Your Cat Magic and smuggled it into Charis' bag outside the store, hoping it would make his friend smile when she found it.
Fatigued from their shopping, they then had a well-deserved ice cream at Florian Fortescue's. Charis loved the ice cream parlour. If she could have chosen one shop from Diagon Alley to have a branch in the Muggle world, she would most probably pick Fortescue's. There was so much to choose from: good old favourites like vanilla, mint chocolate chip and fudge, but also magical flavours like frozen Chocoballs full of strawberry mousse and clotted cream, Ice Mice and frozen Chocolate Frogs. Not to mention all kinds of lollypops, some which made you blow bubbles when you belched and others which guaranteed a different flavour with every lick. Charis took her time to pick her flavours, but Jack quickly opted for vanilla sprinkled with Bertie Bott's Every Flavour Beans.
By the time Charis had devoured her delicious Double Cream Vanilla with miniature Chocoballs and fought off Jack, whose flavour to his great dismay had turned out to be earwax, it was well after three. Charis quickly bought Jack a frozen bat-shaped lolly to lift his spirits, and off they went to the Wizarding Office of Registration Materials, or WORM for short, as the big plaque at the entrance stated grandly.
'WORM?' Charis frowned. 'I do understand the need to shorten the name, but could they not have come up with something a little bit nicer?'
'It gets even better,' Jack explained. 'The Wizarding Office of Registration Materials is known affectionately as The Worm Hole. It's rumoured that disgraced Ministry employees are sent to work here.' Then his voice dropped to a whisper. 'Those who behave really badly even get Transfigured into worms.'
'Oh, come on, Jack!' Charis exclaimed. 'They wouldn't ...'
Jack grinned. 'It's true, I swear! Look there's one trying to get out.'
Charis looked down and sure enough there was an earthworm wriggling at her feet.
'Hope that's not the clerk who was supposed to get our documents.' Once more, Jack laughed and then opened the door. 'My lady,' he said and bowed. 'Welcome to The Worm Hole.'
Charis was not sure what she had been expecting, but a cramped, shabby little room had somehow not featured in her thoughts. She looked around tentatively, noting how the olive-green walls clashed rather violently with the swirling orange and brown carpet. Charis felt she could not look at the carpet for too long as it was making her feel quite nauseous.
Behind the counter sat a stocky middle-aged woman, scribbling away on a parchment with a speckled quill. She had the kind of rinsed hair that only rebellious teenagers or old women could get away with, in a shade of light pink. The style, Charis thought, was reminiscent of the Muggle Queen, Elizabeth II. The woman wore fuchsia lipstick on her thin, lined mouth, which was pursed in concentration as she wrote and reminded Charis somewhat unfortunately of a cat's bottom.
The woman did not look up as Jack and Charis approached the counter. In front of her was a brass name plaque, bearing the name Mimi Abagrow, alongside a big, domed, shiny, brass bell with a button on the top.
Jack and Charis looked at each other before Charis hesitantly cleared her throat to try and get Mimi Abagrow's attention. Still, the woman did not look up.
Jack decided to try a more forthright approach. 'Good afternoon, Ms Abagrow,' he started politely, smiling at the woman.
Once more, Ms Abagrow continued ignoring the pair, pausing only to swiftly point her quill at the large brass bell before continuing to scribble away.
Jack and Charis gazed at each other with disbelief. The woman clearly knew they were there, they were the only people in the room, for Merlin's sake, and yet she wanted them to ring the bell for assistance! Feeling bemused by the woman's rudeness, Jack leaned forwards and, in an exaggerated manner, struck the bell, which rang out loudly.
Eventually, the woman raised her head to look at the pair. She looked bored, and vaguely irritated to be interrupted from her work. 'Can I help you?' she asked impatiently.
'Er, yes... my name is Charis Byrne and this is Jack Morrissey, and we wrote to you last week concerning a marriage and birth certificate that we would like copies of, and your letter said we need to collect them personally from you,' Charis said breathlessly.
Ms Abagrow continued to stare at them, her bored expression never changing. 'The letter,' she sighed, holding out her hand.
Charis retrieved the letter from her bag and smoothed it out hurriedly before handing it over to the woman's still-outstretched hand. She hurriedly snatched the letter from Charis and began to read.
After muttering to herself whilst skimming through the letter, her head snapped up again. 'I'll need to see your identification,' she sniffed.
'The letter is addressed to us!' Jack began, already losing patience with the rude woman in front of him. 'You were the one that wrote the letter!'
'I don't make the rules,' she replied wearily. 'No ID, no certificates.'
Jack breathed heavily through his nose as both he and Charis turned out their bags and pockets and handed over their Muggle bank cards and their Gringotts cards, the only form of ID they both had on them.
The woman eyed the cards suspiciously for some time, turning them over in her hands. 'Well, I supposed this will do,' she answered reluctantly, pushing them back across the counter at the pair. 'Wait here.'
She huffed and puffed as she got up from her seat and made her way over to a shelf where she began riffling through envelopes, once more muttering to herself. Jack and Charis exchanged glances, with Jack pulling an incredibly rude face at Ms Abagrow whilst her back was turned. Charis had to cover her mouth with her hands in case she snorted with laughter. The last thing they needed was the woman scolding them or withholding the certificates.
After what seemed like an age, Ms Abagrow returned with a plain manila envelope which had the name Callista Byrne printed on it in curly handwriting. She placed a piece of yellowing parchment under their noses and thrust the speckled quill at them. 'Signatures,' she demanded.
Jack glared at her and snatched the quill and parchment from her and scrawled his signature quickly before handing the quill over to Charis. Only when the quill and parchment had been returned did Ms Abagrow hand over the manila envelope. Charis took it and thanked her politely, but she had already resumed scrawling away and had reverted back to pretending they weren't there.
'Bloody hell, that woman was a complete worm!' Jack exclaimed once they were outside. 'Could she have been any more officious and unhelpful? And what kind of name is Mimi Abagrow anyway?'
'Well, we have the certificates now,' Charis replied, relieved to be out of the dingy little office. 'Let's sit down at the Cockatrice Cafe and open them together.'
Choosing a booth near the back, Jack and Charis ordered a pumpkin juice each and shifted so they were sitting next to each other, the manila envelope on the table in front of them.
'Are you ready?' Jack asked softly.
Charis nodded, and taking a deep breath, they opened the envelope. They both grabbed a corner of one of the certificates and pulled it slowly out.
Neither of them had a chance to see what was written on it however, as the certificate began glowing a bright blue, and before either of them knew what was happening, it felt as if they were being jerked forwards by the navel. There was a rushing sound of air as the cafe dissolved from below them and they began spinning, unable to let go of the certificate in their hands.
* * *
They landed on their stomachs on the damp forest ground with a thud that knocked the air out of them, each of them still holding on to a corner of the certificate. For some moments, neither of them was capable of movement or coherent thoughts. What by Hades had just happened?
'Haven't we seen those two before?' a gruff, male voice came from the shadows.
Charis' heart skipped a beat. She knew that low, menacing growl. But from where? Tentatively she turned her head just an inch to venture a peek.
'Eyes to the ground, Mudblood,' someone shouted, and Charis felt a spell hit her cheek that felt like a slap. But the sting lingered, and she squeezed her tearing eyes shut.
'Now, have we seen them before or not?' There was that voice again.
'Oh, we've seen 'em before, alright. That time they 'ad been loiterin' 'round a dark alley and got a couple of our mates locked up. You'd think Ravenclaws were smarter than that.'
A shudder went down Charis' spine. Of course! That gruff voice belonged to one of the Death Eaters she and Jack had run into in Hogsmeade that day they had been to Madam Meow's. Snape and Dumbledore had come to their rescue and sent two of them to Azkaban. Was this some kind of retaliation?
Before she could think about it anymore, Charis found herself being roughly pulled to her feet by a hooded figure. Her first impulse was to stamp on the feet of whoever was holding her and then plant a nice hit in their solar plexus, but she was unable to move either her arms or legs. And by the looks of it, Jack had been hit by the same immobilising spell.
'Hello there, little babies. So glad you could join our party.'
Bellatrix Lestrange was using a sickly babyish voice, her head tilted slightly to the side, and was now looking at Jack and Charis like a Kneazle looks at a cornered mouse. She was the only Death Eater that was not wearing a mask. Obviously, she wanted the two teenagers to know who she was.
'I'm afraid there is no tea or cake.' She gave a screech of a laugh at this, delighted with her little joke.
'Doesn't seem much of a party to me then,' Jack muttered under his breath.
Bella's eyes flashed dangerously, but her voice was sweet as Honeyduke's finest when she spoke again.
'Tut, tut, little bloodtraitor. I know one cannot expect much of your mother, but I had hoped your father would have taught you some manners at least. Only speak when spoken to, little one.'
She did not even need to utter the curse. Crucio was one of her best; she could cast it silently and with closed eyes if need be. But why would she close her eyes? Seeing the boy twitch in agony on the forest ground was such a lovely sight.
'Make him stand up again,' she instructed her fellow Death Eater imperiously once she had lifted the curse and Jack had stopped twitching.
The Death Eater roughly pulled Jack up by his robes and held on to him tightly. Bella approached the boy slowly, leaning in to his face and whispering sweetly, 'From now on, we will only speak when spoken to, won't we?'
Then she turned to Charis. 'Do you have any idea why you have been invited to the party, little Mudblood?'
There it was again, that sickeningly sweet smile. If that woman weren't Bellatrix Lestrange and had she not just seen her torture her best friend, Charis could actually have believed that Bella was being nice. But reality was another matter, and Charis wisely opted for keeping her mouth shut.
Bella huffed. 'Really, you Ravenclaws are a disappointment. The rule Speak only when spoken to implies answering when given a question. But then again, how could your little Mudblood brain understand a concept as difficult as that?'
From nowhere, a wave of pain washed over Charis, and she fell to the ground. It felt as if someone were tearing at her flesh with hot irons and simultaneously crushing her bones. But what was even worse was Bellatrix's hysterical cackle. It reminded Charis of the shrieking sound of a circular saw, and it seemed to be cutting into her very brain. She lay on the damp forest ground, her muscles twitching uncontrollably. The pain was excruciating. She had burnt her hand on a cauldron in her third year. The pain was the same, but not just on her skin. It seemed to be in her bones, in the very marrow, and prevented her from moving. She did not know if she was screaming or not, but someone else's voice cut through the pain.
'Charis!'
Jack's voice was filled with urgency but was at once drowned in Bella's shrill shriek. 'YOU DON'T GET IT, DO YOU?! You are not supposed to talk!'
Shut up, Jack. Please, shut up. I beg you! Silently, deep inside her mind, Charis repeated her plea over and over again, hoping against hope that Jack would somehow hear her. He needed to be quiet. Bellatrix would be angry with him. She would surely punish him.
The liberating sensation of the curse being lifted from her made Charis dizzy, and she saw the treetops dance around her. Faster and faster they spun, and Charis felt her stomach turn and retched, digging her nails into the soft moss. Bellatrix's deranged laughter and Jack's screams of agony were the last things she heard before she passed out.
Bella meanwhile was having the time of her life. The little bloodtraitor was twitching in pain but couldn't fall to the ground since Carrow and Yaxley were holding him by the shoulders like two vices. One particularly violent twitch actually made his shoulder pop. Here and there, blood started to colour his shirt and trousers. It happened sometimes during Crucio that the bones twisted so violently that the skin broke.
Toughie, that one, Bella thought. She had been bombarding the little bloodtraitor with alternating curses for about ten minutes now. She had seen grown men faint for far less. It would almost be a shame to kill him...
* * *
Charis' nostrils filled with the smell of moss. What was she doing in the forest? And why was she lying on the ground? Then she identified another smell, the sour reek of vomit and ... What was that sharp, metallic tang? Blood?
She was on her feet in a blink of an eye, and her hand shot automatically to her pocket to pull out her wand. But it wasn't there.
'Looking for this, little one?' Bella was waving Charis' wand in front of her nose. Again, there was that sickeningly sweet smile on her face. 'Ash tree, is it? Who would have thought? Wonder what's inside?'
She snapped the wand right in two, as easily as a twig, and Charis flinched and gasped. Seeing her wand being broken almost created a kind of physical pain. The wand had been with her for nearly seven years; she had never once let it out of her sight and she even slept with it under her pillow. It was a precious reminder of the gift of magic she had been blessed with and symbolic of her powers, as much as a tool with which to harness them. It was like an extension of her. She watched and moaned with grief as the wood splintered easily and the Unicorn hair core fizzed and sparkled slightly before Bellatrix threw the now-useless wand to one side.
Bellatrix tutted. 'Don't give me that look, little Mudblood. It's not like you'll ever need your little wand again anyway. Let me show you how real witches use their wands instead.'
A big ball of what appeared to be silvery string erupted from Bellatrix' wand. It looked beautiful at first, and Charis stared at the ball as if hypnotised as it rolled towards her, unable to take her eyes off it, unable to move. She could not even scream as she realised that the supposed silvery string was in fact something that resembled barbed wire as it started coiling itself around her wrists and ankles like a snake.
Her stomach knotted in fear as she felt her feet leave the ground, but still Charis was unable to scream, just as she was unable to shed the tears that filled her eyes when she caught sight of Jack. Suspended in mid-air, held up by Bella's magical barbed wire that cut into her flesh, all Charis could do was look down at her friend, who lay sprawled out on the forest ground, his clothes bloody and his face contorted with pain. She did not even know whether he was still alive.
Charis felt a tickling sensation in her throat and started coughing. And suddenly, she was also very much aware of the pain the barbed wire caused as it cut into her flesh. Whatever spell she had been under had lost its effect or had been lifted.
'Now, little Mudblood,' Bellatrix started with a sugary tone that suggested that she was about to offer cake. 'What should we do with you?'
We? Charis' eyes widened in fear. How could she have forgotten about the other Death Eaters that had held her and Jack while Bellatrix had thrown Crucios at them? They were standing around Bellatrix now in a semi circle, and although they were wearing masks, Charis could imagine their sneers as they looked up at her.
The first spell that hit Charis felt like a poke in the ribs with an elbow.
Bellatrix huffed. 'Seriously, is that the best you can do?'
The Death Eater to her left drew himself up to his full height and pointed his wand at Charis once more. This time, the spell knocked the air out of her and drove tears into her eyes.
'More, come on!' Bellatrix screeched. 'That won't even leave a bruise.'
The third spell cracked a rib, and Charis yelped, but still Bellatrix was not happy. 'I don't understand why the Dark Lord puts up with such incompetent idiots like you. Let me show you how it's done.'
She tilted her head to the side and brought the tip of her wand to her pursed lips. She reminded Charis of a little schoolgirl who was contemplating an essay topic. But of course, Bellatrix Lestrange had darker thoughts than that. Eventually, her lips curled into a smile, and her eyes started to glitter. 'Yes, that will do. That will do very nicely.'
Charis tried not to scream but it was in vain. The pain that shot through her as Bellatrix cast a spell that felt as if she were slicing up Charis' legs with a red-hot knife was too much to bear. Charis screamed, and Bellatrix cackled, and the Death Eaters laughed.
Suddenly, everything was over. The pain was gone, and as Charis looked down, she did not see any blood.
'Why did you heal her?' one of the Death Eaters asked roughly, as if she was somehow stupid.
Bellatrix rolled her eyes. 'Because otherwise she would bleed to death, you blistering idiot! And I am not quite done with her just yet.'
She stepped forwards and poked Charis' left shoe with her wand. 'Can you hear me, little Mudblood?' she called in a sing-song voice.
Charis resisted the urge to kick the dark witch in the face. By now she was convinced that she would not survive this afternoon, but if she had to die, she hoped to die quickly. Enraging Bellatrix Lestrange would result in anything but a quick death.
'Tell me, Mudblood, smart Ravenclaw as you are, do you know why you were invited to this little party?'
Charis silently shook her head. She did not dare utter a sound.
'How utterly disappointing!'
Bellatrix turned and walked away, lazily flicking her wand over her shoulder. The barbed wire disappeared and Charis fell to the ground. She landed face first and heard the sickening sound of the bones in her nose cracking. She felt herself roughly turned onto her back and all she could see were blinding white stars as she felt hot blood gushing from her broken nose. Then Bellatrix's face came into focus again.
'Weren't you warned, Mudblood?' she asked slowly, making each poisoned word sound like a honey-dipped caress. 'Weren't you warned that sticking your Ravenclaw beak in to subjects that are best left undisturbed would lead to serious trouble?'
Charis shuddered. Bellatrix was using the exact same words Lucius Malfoy had used in Ravenclaw Tower. So, this was not retaliation after all?
Charis never managed to finish her thought as there was once more a searing pain shooting through her legs. But this time, it didn't stop. This time, she could feel the blood trickle down over her thighs.
'Little baby,' came Bellatrix' sweet voice as she stalked towards Charis once more, and she even brushed a tear from Charis' cheek with her fingers as she drew close. 'Do you want it to stop?'
'Yes, yes, please.' Charis knew that there was no point in begging. Bellatrix Lestrange would never stop. But still she begged. 'Please, stop.'
'What was that, Mudblood?' Bellatrix asked innocently, enjoying the girl's suffering and pleading as she twirled a lock of black hair around her index finger. 'I didn't hear you. Say it again.'
'Please, stop.' Charis hated herself for begging. But what else could she do? She was desperate. 'Please!'
'Good girl.' Once more, Bellatrix brushed Charis' cheek with her fingers. 'Soon you won't feel a thing ... Sectumsempra!'
Charis had never heard that spell before. It sounded awful. But the pain it created was much worse: it was sharp and seemed to split her chest in two; it felt like the skin all over her body was being scraped away from her flesh with a blunt knife.
Bellatrix screeched in delight and the Death Eaters cheered.
'Morsmordre!'
A flash of green burst forth from Bellatrix's wand, shooting up a jet of shimmering light which curled round and round, eventually forming the shape of a skull with an entwined snake spilling from its gaping mouth.
Charis didn't feel pain anymore. Everything seemed to be floating away, even Bellatrix's hysterical laughter. She felt her body become heavy and imagined herself sinking into the moss as her blood seeped into the ground below her. All sound faded away and so did all the light.
Before her eyes fluttered shut, Charis saw the Dark Mark glowing eerily in the sky. To her, it looked beautiful.
* * *
Snape leaned back in his chair and put his feet up on the footrest, smiling contently. He had certainly done his House proud today.
At first, Filius had, of course, stared at him as if he had claimed that the Dark Lord had a liking for pink, fluffy bunnies, but then the Head of Ravenclaw House had almost started levitating with excitement.
'An Easter egg hunt in Hogsmeade? Severus, that is a wonderful idea! Just imagine how much fun the students will have! The holidays are always a tough time for some of them, especially those who cannot afford to travel home to see their families. Or those who don't have any family to go home to. Who would have thought that you of all people would come up with such a frivolous pastime?'
Then Filius had hopped away happily, and Snape had sneered after him. He of all people? Whatever did Filius mean? Of course, an idea that resulted in emptying the castle of remaining students and staff alike could only have sprung from a Slytherin mind. So did the idea of faking a headache and staying behind.
And so there was Snape now, the only living creature left in Hogwarts castle that Wednesday afternoon whilst everyone else was gallivanting around Hogsmeade after chocolate eggs. Oh, glorious silence!
With a content sigh, Snape unbuttoned his cuffs and then held out his left arm towards the liquor cabinet. 'Accio Firewhisky.' Surely, having come up with such a cunning plan entitled him to a glass of Odgen's finest.
The bottle crashed to the floor as his arm jerked upwards, and Snape swore loudly. By Merlin's scrotum, that could not be! Not the Dark Mark! Not today! But there was no doubt. The Dark Mark was burning as if someone had pressed a red-hot iron onto his bare skin. And Snape knew that he could not ignore the call.
Gritting his teeth, he swept into his bedroom, unlocked his heavy trunk and picked up the bundle which contained his cloak and his Death Eater mask. As always, he would not put them on before he had entered the Forbidden Forest. He always Disapparated from there. The risks of being spotted were minimal.
He swept out of his quarters and through the dark dungeon corridor. He had no idea why the Mark was burning. Maybe the Dark Lord wanted to see him personally. Maybe everyone had been called. Maybe it was not Voldemort who was calling at all, but another Death Eater. As usual, he would only find out once he had Apparated and answered the call of the Mark.
He turned a corner so fast that he did not even notice that there was a person rushing towards him, and he cursed as he was almost knocked off his feet. For crying out loud, no one was supposed to be in the castle today!
'Miss Belakane!'
The girl was pale as a ghost and totally out of breath. She must have run all the way from Hogsmeade just to find him. In her eyes Snape saw a panicky look that reminded him of a trapped animal. Whatever had happened? Surely, Lucius would not have...
When he saw the star at Morgana's necklace glowing red, the blood froze in Snape's veins. He knew the spell that had been put on those necklaces. Charis was in danger.
He heard Morgana stammer something about Charis and her friend Jack being in London, but he did not listen. This couldn't be a coincidence.
He prayed that Charis being in danger had nothing to do with his Mark burning. But he feared that he was hoping against hope as he told Morgana to go straight to her dorm and then fled across the school grounds to the edge of the Forbidden Forest as fast as he could.
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224 Reviews | 7.42/10 Average
Wonderful job. Your story was actually enjoyable read. Your character development and portrayal of emotions was especially well done. You're both talented others, and together you are bloody brilliant! I look forward to the second part of the story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're so glad you enjoyed this story. We wrote it without any plan whatsoever in the start and had no idea how it would work out. We've had thoughts about going back to polish the plot and fill in all the plot holes, but as you've noticed, we wrote a Part 2 instead, which we hope you will enjoy. Thanks for reading! :)
Wow that was intense. I smiled the glee as the Dark lord punished the blonde menace. Ahhh, bedtime stories with Severus. I loved that. Perfect way to end the chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
There is so much to enjoy in this chapter, and so much to regret.
This chapter was like watching a train wreck about ready to happen. You know Zambini is going to be A complete cad in the end, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone steps on the same serve, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone And save her before she does something she will regret forever.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
"All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time." That description kind of fits the whole story. We're very glad you're enjoying it. :-)
Poor Sev. He is trying so hard to be noble, but it's gotta be difficult for anyone in his situation. Great chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
You cannot imagine how many times at least one of us writers tried to make Severus be anything but noble. It was quite a struggle.
Well that was really dickish of Severus. Quite that bastard I how he behaved. But I guess we will see where this goes. Your writing is wonderfully done and really grabs the reader. It just made me want to grab Severus by the throat and throttle him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
One of the writers is now having naughty ideas that involve Severus and throttling. Down, Muse. Down! ;-)
Ah, neive little girls thinking he wouldn't know what they were up to. This is a wonderful start. I am really looking forward to your story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Oh, this brings back fond memories! Hours in front of the computer, chats that went on way past midnight, and then the crazy idea of "Hey, let's make a real story out of this." Good times. Really good times!
Oh god I want a croissant. Chocolate preferably. But enough on food. Both of the girls are so undeniably teenage and nieve. Lust does not equal love. Just because he says and acts sweet doesn't mean he is not lying. While they might be having mind blowing organs, I want to shake some sense into both of them. But alas, at that age I would have acted the same way. I hope they can some how survive these situations without too much heartbreak in the end.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We ALL want chocolate croissants!! In some ways, it was quite liberating to write about naive teenage girls for once, since you can let them make ALL the mistakes. At the same time, it was rather cringeworthy at times, and the writers wanted to step in and take some "parental responsibility". But we let them make their mistakes, and the we cleaned up the wreckage.
Talk about playing with fire. She is gonna get burned as if she keeps this up.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Silly little girl, that one.
Enjoyed the story. Thanks!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
THANK YOU for reading til the end!
Well I had been expecting this since Morgana smelled roses in the bubblebath. At least Snape doesn't have to choose now!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
It doesn't end here...
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you, we're thrilled you enjoyed it and we hope you'll enjoy the sequel just as much.
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you again :)
Wow, what a great story! It took me longer to read, than I had planned, but I enjoyed it and can't wait to read part 2!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're thrilled you stuck with til the end, it was a beast of HBP proportions!
LUCIUS! Oh no he didn't!! And who wouldn't want to have Snape read a bedtime story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Snape could read me the telephone catalogue, I'd listen! And Lucius is as bat-shit crazy as his sister-in-law. It's all those years of inbreeding.
Lucius... Now I've been almost rooting for him for quite a few chapters (the man sure knows what he's doing) and then he goes and spoils it all by turning back to being a class A prick! I hope he's not too pissed at Morgana and Snape, but he DID interrupt something important. And Snape! Pull your act together man!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We would have loved to let Snape beat the crap out of Lucius in this chapter. But alas, it seemed so off-canon!
But you know Snape; he always saves the day in the end.
Oh wow - so far SOOOOO good! I see why I was told to read this fic! Chapter 4 = ♥ ♥ ♥ I like my Bellatrix like I like my looneys: Deranged and dangerous. And OMG SEXY Bellatrix too! I do not like Lucius one bit in this fic so far. Which is highly unusual, but he's a nasty piece of ----! Good thing I still have so many chapters to go, 'cause this is good!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Isn't Lucius being a nasty piece of ... part of his charm? And don't we all love him for it? We hope that the more you read, the better you find the story... it certainly felt like that as authors.
Love it.......
Can't wait for the next installment...are you going to write it?
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We are very much planning to write it. However, plot bunnies with rabies have attacked out ankles and we need to fight them off first. Hoping to get back to the Star Sister soon, though.
Glad you enjoyed part one, and we hope to see you here again.
very enjoyable. looking forward to part 2
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
So glad you liked it. Welcome back for Part 2. :)
Dumbledore has a role mapped out for everyone in the war with Voldemort, and I have no doubt that Charis, Morgana, and Severus, and Harry, Ron and Hermione will find themselves in the thick of things. Even now, before the Star Sisters have left the castle, he has written letters to them inviting them (I think) to join the Order of the Phoenix. Severus would just as soon "his girls" be left out of this particular club, but he knows that will not happen.
Seeing the emotions that Charis and Morgana have had to deal with at the end of their Hogwarts days was bittersweet. Charis is scared for the future. The coming war coupled with the knowledge that Sirius had been killed by the same cousin that had nearly killed her was terrifying to contemplate. Just as bad is her fear of losing contact with her "sister" and her Potions Master. I wish she had been able to make herself go to the dungeons to say farewell to Severus, but I could understand how it might have been too difficult. And after reading his thoughts on not being able to say goodbye, it was probably best. Surely she will see him somewhere, sometime. Whether she sees him or not, he will be seeing her.
Morgana's thoughts on this, her final day at Hogwarts, made me so sad. She too is already missing the only home she has really known; how very much like Severus she is in regards to the path that life has given her to tread. Though she will not miss her housemates, she will very much miss Charis and Snape. Even though she will miss her best friend, she could not bring herself to say goodbye. The emotion that she had shared with Charis in the Room of Requirement had scared her so badly that she was afraid to say goodbye, afraid to feel that much emotion all at once.
I'm a bit worried about Morgana having to stay in the room at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn Alley. Dodgy, indeed. And downright dangerous. I feel better knowing that Silvy has insisted that she come with her Mistress wherever she goes, and Severus will be able to keep on eye out for her, too.
Severus has braved the cold winds at the top of the Astronomy Tower just so he could see "his girls" as they leave the castle for the las time. He had been able to speak with Morgana, but I really wish he had been able to say goodbye to Charis. He most probably would have been his gruff self, so perhaps it was just as well. One thing that he did do that made me happy was to get Silvy to secret away the charmed mirrors in the girls luggage. I'm sure they will be shocked and delighted when they discover them and realize they can talk to each other, and of course they will not know that Severus will be able to keep an eye on them.
His regret was sad at not having apologized to them for his lack of control and that he couldn't protect them from the awful things that had happened to them, but it had made him feel better to see them embrace each other and walk to the station together. And knowing that he will see them soon— whether or not they see him— cheered him. I found it very telling that his thoughts also included musing that when he saw them again he would not be their professor, and they would not be his students. Could this mean what I think it means???
I have to tell you that I nearly had apoplexy when I saw "Epilogue!" I wanted to cry because I thought this was the complete end to this wonderful story. Thank you, thank you, thank you for telling us there will be a Part Two. I am primarily a Severus/Hermione shipper, but "Star Sisters" had captured my attention and my heart from the beginning. What will the name of the sequel? Maybe you don't even know yet, but I want to be sure to see it when you begin posting it.
Please tell Apple Blossom thank you for me for giving you "the courage to post this to a wider audience in the first place." I have adored your story, and I can't wait to see where you will take these fabulous characters in Part Two. Both of you ladies have done a smashing job of telling an engrossing story and bewitching this reader! A Thousand Points to Your Houses! Now what are you waiting for? Get busy writing. Chop chop.
Lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
The girls will both be working for the Ministry and have access to information Dumbeldore and the Order can use. They will be useful allies.
Question is, will they both willingly play along?It was hard indeed for both girls to say goodbye, especially with Voldemort's spectre now looming over both of their futures. Charis will probably regret not summoning the courage to say goodbye to Snape personally, but as you rightly said, they will indeed see each other again.
The girls will, of course, see each other again soon, too, but first they have some things they need to work through on their own, not al least Morgana ... in that dodgy room right at the corner of Knockturn Alley.As for Snape, you know canon, he has a busy year ahead of himself.
We are very glad that we managed to capture your interest for two OCs. Thank you for all your support and kind reviews. You have made at least one of us well up with your kindness. And we send you hugs right back!
Hopefully, you (and we) will not have to wait too long for Part 2.
Good insight into Dumbledore, Snape, Charis and Morgana's thoughts. Of course this is no goodbye for the girls, just a farewell.I found it so appropriate for Morgana to rent a flat right at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn. The metaphor is very significant.Every good thing must come to an end, and you chose a fine moment to end part one. I'll be looking forward to part two.I'll miss you in the meantime.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We will miss your reviews, dear Crystal, and we're so pleased you stuck with us the whole way through. We'll try not to keep you waiting too long!
This has been one of my favorite stories, and I read each installment eagerly! Thanks for continuing the tale. One unanswered question: about the illnesses experienced during the pregnancy? Was it just her body/spirit fighting against the potential evil of Lucius' child? Did he subconsciously want her to misscarry? Ah well, thank you again, and WELL DONE!!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank YOU for sticking with us and the story. We hope that Part 2 will hold the answers to your questions. See you around.
I'm so glad there is going to be a part 2. When I saw the story marked as completed, I was surprised because there seemed to be way too much to wrap up so quickly. I've enjoyed part 1 and am looking forward to following the girls and Severus into the next phases of their lives. Thank you for an interesting (and regularly updated!) story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you for sticking with us til the end. We know there are some questions left unanswered, all will be revealed is all we can say.
Hope to see you around.
Oh, endings... They are so sad and yet so full of possibility. I'm glad you have more adventures in store for the girls in future. Otherwise there would be tarring and feathering involved. At present, I'll be thinking about what Snape will be doing with his mirror. : ) Lovely story ladies. On serious pins and needles until Part 2 arrives.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Ehm, you wouldn't have any naughty thoughts about Snape and the mirror, would you? Hehe. Possibilities indeed!Thank you for staying with us for
40 chapters, we hope not to make you wait too long for part 2 and hope you enjoy that just as much.
While I didn't expect this, it didn't surprise me either. Now I'm thinking of all the possible scenarios that could lead to Snape finding out about them.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We promise we'll let Snape find out eventually. Until then, would you like to share your scenarios?Thank you for staying with us for 40 chapters.
Well, that was a surprise, but after what Charis and Morgana have been through for the last few hours, I guess you take comfort where you can find it. And I'm fairly certain that right now the only people that either of them feel they can trust is each other... so what happens now?Soon they will graduate, and then I suspect that all hell will break loose for Severus. How will he be able to keep an eye on them, assure himself that they are safe? And what if he thinks Dumbledore's plans for "his girls" are foolhardy and liable to cause them injury or death? I have no doubt that he would hex Dumbles into next week to protect the young women he has come to care so deeply about.I wonder how Draco will act when he comes back from the Manor. With Lucius in Azkaban, will Narcissa welcome Charis to her family? Will Harry feel a little closer to Charis because she was Sirius' cousin? Will Morgana and Charis be able to see each other often after graduation? I think the girls will need each other more than ever after they leave Hogwarts. With the storm that is on the horizon, I can't believe they'll be able to weather it all without each other and Severus.Great chapter, ladies. I'm on tenterhooks waiting to find out what will happen next.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Some of your questions will be answered soon (we're #21 in the queue), for others, you'll have to wait a little longer.Thank you for being such a loyal reader and reviewer.