XV: Descending into Darkness
Chapter 15 of 41
sevs_starsistersTwo girls. Two Houses. One obsession.
In their final year at Hogwarts, two very different girls face their own battle with the continuing rise of the Dark Lord, encountering along the way shattered friendships, broken hearts, a charming blond Death Eater with a twisted plan, and a secret that could rock the foundations of the Wizarding world. Once more, the stern Potions master will have to do the impossible and offer his protection. Will he succeed?
Set during Harry Potter and The Order Of The Phoenix and mostly canon compliant.
Chapter XV: Descending into Darkness
With a soft pop, Morgana Apparated into the snow-covered garden of Malfoy Manor. She froze and looked around. The dogs seemed to be inside, otherwise they would have stirred by now, and all the windows were dark. The Malfoy New Year's party had obviously ended early.
When she started moving towards the back door, Morgana realised that she was shaking. From the cold, she tried to convince herself, and pulled her cloak tighter around her. But if she were honest with herself, she would admit that the cold had nothing to do with her shaking. What made her body shake was anger, pure, white-hot rage.
How dare they? How dare Snape push her away yet again? How dare he touch Charis? And how dare Charis keep quiet about it?!
When Snape had agreed to dance with her in the dark corridor, Morgana had almost been unable to believe her luck. She had been longing to be close to him for the last four weeks, and she would have been more than content with the dance. But then he had kissed her and had awakened the feelings she had carefully hidden away: desire, lust, longing. She had wanted him. And she had thought that he had wanted her, too. After all, he had initiated the kiss, he had pinned her up against the wall, and he had ground himself against her.
When they had been disturbed and he had pulled away, Morgana had been disappointed, but she had understood. Neither of them could afford to be caught. She would have been expelled, and Snape would have lost his job, had they been caught. But she had believed hoped that he would come back to her.
When she had seen Zabini and Charis, Morgana had known that Snape would not come back to her that night. He had a responsibility to his students. He had a job to do. And she had understood.
But then she had seen the look in Snape's eyes when he had looked at Charis, had heard the words he spoke to her. And the tone he had used had spoken of lust and desire. They had been intimate. Severus Snape and Charis Byrne, her teacher and her best friend. And Charis had not even told her.
They were surely shagging now in that shabby room at the Three Broomsticks, Morgana thought. On the very bed where she had wanted Snape to take her. And he had certainly forgotten all about her by now, had forgotten all the promises his body had made to her.
Morgana set her jaw. If Snape didn't play fair, neither would she. And if he didn't give her what she desired, what her heart and body craved for, she knew another wizard who would. And that wizard would not push her away. He would take her and everything she had to offer. And she would give himself willingly to him.
And with her mind clouded by jealousy and her body aching from unfulfilled desire, Morgana pushed open the door that led to the kitchen of Malfoy Manor.
Silvy awakened at once and scrambled from her cardboard box to greet Morgana. 'Good morning, Miss,' the elf said, bowing so deeply that her nose touched the floor. 'What can Silvy do for Miss Morgana?'
'Is your master home?' Morgana asked curtly. Normally, she always had a nice word to spare for the elf, but not today. Today, she had no nice words for anyone.
'Yes, Miss,' Silvy replied. 'Master Lucius is sleeping in his chamber.'
'His chamber?' A triumphant smile flitted over Morgana's lips. If Lucius was sleeping in his chamber, that meant that he was alone. But to be sure, she double-checked. 'Is your master alone?'
Silvy nodded. 'Does Miss Morgana want Silvy to bring her to Master's chamber?'
'No, Silvy. I will find the way.' And for the first time that night, Morgana smiled at the elf. 'Before you go back to sleep, Silvy, would you ward the door to your master's room to make sure we will not be disturbed?'
'Yes, Miss Morgana,' the elf replied, once more taking a deep bow. 'Anything for Miss Morgana.'
Morgana patted the elf on the head and then silently made her way up the stairs. She had been at Malfoy Manor often enough to know which steps creaked, and she avoided them carefully. And she also knew which door led to Lucius' private chamber. Narcissa never went there, Morgana knew this, too. And she was confident that Lucius did not bring his mistresses there either. This room was his kingdom, and tonight, she would be his queen.
She lit a single candle by the door that gave just enough light for her to make out Lucius' form. He was lying on his back, one arm over his head and his chest exposed. And the silken sheet that covered his legs and waist was sheer enough to make out that he was naked.
Morgana steadied herself against the bedpost and took in the delicious sight. The air in the room was filled with the scent of Lucius' aftershave, sandalwood and musk. And there was also the scent of wine, coming from a half-empty glass that was standing on the nightstand. Hopefully, he had not drunk too much, Morgana thought. It would be a shame if he failed to rise to the challenge tonight.
Gingerly, she approached the bed. Her eyes never left the sleeping wizard, not even when she took the wine glass from the nightstand and emptied it with one big gulp, washing away the taste of Severus Snape that was still hanging on her lips. The wine was sweet and heavy and filled her with the confidence to carry out the task she had set herself.
She would be lying if she said that she was not scared. Like all girls, she wanted her first time to be special and romantic. And Lucius had shown her that he was capable of giving her anything she desired. But she could not have that tonight. Lucius mustn't know that he had never taken her maidenhood last time, and hence they would have to move quickly, without caresses and without any emotions.
She leant in, close enough to feel his breath on her cheek, close enough for her lips to almost touch his ear as she whispered: 'Wake up, Lucius, and I will show you heaven.'
He stirred but did not wake, and Morgana let her lips brush against his ear.
'Narcissa,' he mumbled in his sleep and turned his head, his lips seeking for those that had just touched his ear.
Morgana narrowed her eyes, anger bubbling in her chest once more. He did long for his wife then. Maybe she should forget about him and leave before he woke up? The last thing she needed was yet another man pushing her away for another woman. But she locked the feeling away in the deepest corner of her heart and leant in once more. She needed him tonight, and her Slytherin brain would make sure that she got what she wanted.
'I will make you forget all about Narcissa,' she murmured in a low voice.
To that, Lucius' eyes snapped open, and for a moment, he just stared at her. 'Morgana,' he gasped as he had found his voice again. 'How ...? What ...?'
Morgana sat up and quirked an eyebrow at the blond wizard. 'Disappointed?' she asked in a slightly mocking tone.
'Disappointed? No, no, my love.' Finally, Lucius seemed to be able to form coherent sentences. 'Is this a dream?' he asked, reaching out for her as if to check that he was indeed not dreaming. He could not believe his luck. The girl had kept away for almost a month, and he had already considered sending her another piece of jewellery to make her return to his bed. But there she was now, sitting right beside him in the middle of the night. And she had come to him of her own free will.
'Do you want it to be a dream?' Morgana asked as Lucius' fingers traced her face and then down over her shoulders and her sides. 'Because if you'd rather be dreaming, I will ask Silvy to make up the guestroom for me, and you can go back to sleep.'
Lucius chuckled and took hold of her hips. 'No chance, darling. You are getting out of that dress and in here under the sheets with me right this instant.'
He pulled her on top of him, and his hands had already started pulling up her dress when Morgana pinned him down playfully. If she wanted her plan to work, she could not let him take command. Not yet. She would have to be in charge. She would have to set the rules.
'Please, love,' Lucius begged. 'I want to hold you against me and feel your skin against mine. Please, take off that dress.'
Once more Morgana took hold of his roaming hands. 'There is no need to rush,' she whispered. 'Silvy has warded the door, and no one will disturb us. We have all night.' She bent down and teasingly brushed his lips with hers. 'And when the morning comes, I want us both to be hoarse from screaming each other's name and our bodies to ache after a night of passion.'
'Morgana,' Lucius gasped, bucking his hips up against her, his cock twitching in anticipation. What had happened to the shy virgin he had bedded a month ago? When and how had she turned into such vixen? Her words alone were enough to make him hard.
Once more, he let his hands trace up her thighs to squeeze her delicious butt cheeks. 'Let me make your body sing, my love,' he whispered.
'And how exactly are you planning to do that?'
The tone of Morgana's voice was cold as ice, and Lucius frowned. Something seemed amiss. 'Darling, you don't seem yourself tonight,' he started, his hands now making small circular movements on her back. 'What's wrong, dear heart?'
'I did not come here to talk, Lucius.'
Merlin's balls, the girl had really come just to shag him! Lucius smirked inwardly. He would certainly make sure that she got exactly what she had come for.
He pushed himself up into a sitting position and pulled her closer towards him, started nibbling at her neck. 'Then take off your dress, and let me make love to you, angel.'
He felt her stiffen in his arms, and her next words surprised him beyond reason.
'I do not want you to make love to me tonight, Lucius,' she said in a firm tone. 'I want you to take me as you have never taken a woman before. I want you to take me hard until I scream your name in ecstasy. I want you to explode inside me and tell me that I am the best shag you ever had.'
Lucius gasped in genuine surprise. 'You want to be ravished, my love?' He couldn't believe it. Was that girl really telling him that she wanted to be fucked, that there was no need for tender words and caresses, no need for lovemaking? Oh, he could live with that.
Morgana grabbed Lucius' face with both her hands and crushed his lips with hers, hoping he would take her feverish kiss as a yes. Of course, she did not want to be ravished. She wanted him to be as tender as he had been that afternoon in the white room on the bottom floor of the Manor. But if he made sweet love to her that night, if he entered her slowly and carefully, he would notice that she was still a virgin, and that would give him reason for far too many unwanted question. So yes, she needed him to take her roughly. She needed him to break through her hymen quickly enough for him not to notice. And in case it hurt, she needed a reason for her tears. But to her surprise, the thought of him overpowering her turned her on beyond reason.
As she released his face, Lucius smirked. 'What the lady wants ...'
With the agility of a cat, he shifted round, and before Morgana knew it, she was lying on her back with Lucius on top of her. And she did not resist. He had indeed taken her kiss as a yes, and now she would have to play along.
'Now,' Lucius growled, 'to get rid of this ridiculous dress ...' He ripped it open with his bare hands before letting them run down all the way from her lips, over her neck and chest and past her belly just to hover over her core.
'I can feel your heat, Morgana,' he hissed. 'All that passion, just for me.'
He did not need his wand to remove her bra and knickers. To do that without a wand was one of his finest tricks. He drank in her physique for a moment before covering her petite, young body with his and kissing her feverishly, clamping her hands above her head. She had told him that she wanted to be ravished, and he intended to fulfil her wish.
Morgana could feel the tip of Lucius' cock rub against her entrance, and she willed herself not stiffen or even flinch. She was ready, she told herself. She had to be.
She gasped with surprise and pain as he swiftly thrust into her up to the hilt. It hurt, but not as much as she had imagined. And as he thrust into her with rapid, hard movements, Morgana felt her body adjust to him, respond to him in a manner she had not thought possible. And the pain gave way to a sensation for which she did not know a name.
As Lucius started biting her neck, she wrapped her legs around his hips. She wanted to feel him deeper inside her, wanted him to fill her completely. And as he asked her if she liked it, she could only moan.
She whimpered in disappointment as he withdrew from her, but Lucius ignored her protest. He, too, had a plan. If she wanted to be taken hard, if she wanted to scream his name in ecstasy, he would make her. The thought of dominating her gave him such a rush that he almost came just thinking of it. But he would make sure his seed flowed into her womb that night. What better way to father the Heir of Darkness than by raw, passionate sex?
He flipped Morgana over onto her knees and entered her from behind, one hand curled into her hair and the other on her hip as he slammed into her. Merlin, the girl was tight, he thought as he relentlessly drove into her, licking his lips and growling like an animal. This was a night he was not going to forget too soon.
Morgana felt her body tremble, but not with fear nor from pain. This was lust, pure, animalistic lust. She felt it wash over her in waves, imagined her whole body being on fire. And as Lucius guided his hand in between her legs to pinch her clit, she exploded, threw back her head and screamed out his name as she had promised she would.
'Yes, Goddess in heaven! Lucius! Yes! YES!'
The contracting of her muscles around his cock drove Lucius over the edge, and with a few short, powerful thrusts he spurted his seed into her womb, growling her name and gently caressing her back before collapsing and letting himself fall onto the bed beside her.
'Oh, love,' he gasped, pulling Morgana towards himself and covering her neck and shoulder blades with tender kisses. 'This was incredible.'
He was not even lying. He hadn't had a shag that good in years. And if the girl kept going on like that, he would gladly shag her for a couple of months before she fell pregnant. Not that he had any doubt that he would impregnate her as soon as the right time of the month arrived. But until then, he would happily shag her just for fun.
* * *
To her own surprise, Morgana slept peacefully that night. And when she woke up in Lucius' arms in the morning, she felt more rested than she had for months. And she was glad that she had stayed after all.
When she had heard Lucius' breathing become slow and regular, she had considered freeing herself from his embrace and sneaking out. She had received what she had come to the Manor for, and to be honest, she did not want to spend the night. But when Lucius had tightened his embrace and snuggled up against her back, she had changed her mind. And when he still half asleep had murmured that he wanted her to stay and that he wanted to make love to her in the morning, she had relaxed and let her tired eyes flutter shut and slept soundly until an hour before sunrise when she had felt Lucius shift behind her and leave the bed. Then her eyes had snapped open, and a feeling of panic had risen in her chest. Where was he going? Was he leaving her?
She had just been about to sit up and call for him when she had felt his weight on the mattress once more.
'Remembered that you are at home and don't need to sneak out?' she had murmured, trying to hide her insecurity with a snarky remark.
'Forgive an old man, dear heart,' Lucius had chuckled. 'Lack of sleep makes me feel cold.'
The delicate satin of Lucius' robe had brushed against her naked skin as Lucius had wrapped his arms around her once more, and with a happy sigh she had drifted off into the land of dreams again.
The sun was up when Morgana woke again. She could see the soft light of morning fall through the gap in the curtains. She knew that she should not be lying there, that she should hurry back to Hogwarts and sneak into the Great Hall for breakfast before anyone noticed that she had been gone all night. But she did not want to leave. Lucius' arm around her waist felt as if it belonged there, and so did his lips that were still lingering at her neck. And suddenly, Lucius' embrace was all that mattered. Hogwarts didn't matter, Charis did not matter, and sure as hell Severus Snape did not matter.
The first thing Lucius did when he woke up was pull the young witch who was lying in his arms closer towards him. He didn't wake up with company too often. Normally, he would disappear in the dead of the night, not caring about the woman he left behind. Most of the time, he would have forgotten her name by the time he came home. And the nights he spent with his wife seldom made either of them long for a cuddle in the morning. But he had to admit to himself now that it felt rather nice having a young, warm body pressed up against his own. And still he could not believe his luck: the girl had actually come to him of her own free will; she had spread her legs wide for him and had welcomed him into her flesh with a passion that had burnt his very skin. And she had stayed the night. Lucius smirked. He had succeeded. The girl was his now, his alone.
She was awake, he could tell by the way her body was shifting in his arms, and he decided to woo her a little more, just for the fun of it.
'I had a horrible nightmare, my love,' he whispered into her ear. 'I dreamt you had left and I woke up alone. And it filled my heart with sorrow. But you are here, my angel. And I couldn't be happier about it.'
He nuzzled into her neck, relishing the soft moan that escaped her lips, and he felt his own body react immediately.
'You have surprised me, love,' he murmured as he thrust his hips forward so his semi-hard cock came to rub against her backside. 'Your eagerness to be dominated excited me beyond words, Morgana.'
He turned her around and claimed her lips, and Morgana kissed him back, feverishly, trying to put all her feelings into that kiss. And as Lucius rolled onto his back and pulled her on top of him, she once more did not resist.
Yes, she had enjoyed being dominated last night, had enjoyed being taken and had even enjoyed the pain. But the look in Lucius eyes as she lowered herself onto his cock now gave her a rush she could not have imagined before. Lucius Malfoy wanted her, desired her, and now she was the one to decide whether to fulfil his wishes or not. She was in charge over the wizard who was lying beneath her, and the surge of power alone made Morgana almost tumble over the edge, and she pulled Lucius up, wanting to look into those hungry eyes while she rode him to his climax.
'When will you come back, love?' Lucius asked her with a sad expression on his face as Morgana put on her dress half an hour later. 'Make it soon, because I will be yearning for you from the very second you leave this room.'
Morgana shrugged. 'If anyone finds out that I have spent the night here instead of the Slytherin dormitory, I am most likely to receive enough detentions to last until the term ends. I'll be lucky if I get to see sunlight before June.'
'Then I will come to you rescue, dear heart,' Lucius promised with a smile. 'I will storm into the dungeons of the castle and slay any foul beast that is keeping you away from me.'
'Even the Bat of the Dungeon?'
Lucius sneered. 'Snape,' he spat. 'Yes, that dried-up old bat would certainly enjoy standing in the way of our love. He wouldn't know what love was it if hit him over the head with a Bludger.'
Morgana's mouth fell open, and Lucius embraced her, smiling triumphantly and stroking her hair. From the moment the girl had shown up by his bedside, he had known that he had her heart in his hand. And the confession of his love would now make sure that she would not even try to escape.
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Wonderful job. Your story was actually enjoyable read. Your character development and portrayal of emotions was especially well done. You're both talented others, and together you are bloody brilliant! I look forward to the second part of the story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're so glad you enjoyed this story. We wrote it without any plan whatsoever in the start and had no idea how it would work out. We've had thoughts about going back to polish the plot and fill in all the plot holes, but as you've noticed, we wrote a Part 2 instead, which we hope you will enjoy. Thanks for reading! :)
Wow that was intense. I smiled the glee as the Dark lord punished the blonde menace. Ahhh, bedtime stories with Severus. I loved that. Perfect way to end the chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
There is so much to enjoy in this chapter, and so much to regret.
This chapter was like watching a train wreck about ready to happen. You know Zambini is going to be A complete cad in the end, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone steps on the same serve, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone And save her before she does something she will regret forever.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
"All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time." That description kind of fits the whole story. We're very glad you're enjoying it. :-)
Poor Sev. He is trying so hard to be noble, but it's gotta be difficult for anyone in his situation. Great chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
You cannot imagine how many times at least one of us writers tried to make Severus be anything but noble. It was quite a struggle.
Well that was really dickish of Severus. Quite that bastard I how he behaved. But I guess we will see where this goes. Your writing is wonderfully done and really grabs the reader. It just made me want to grab Severus by the throat and throttle him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
One of the writers is now having naughty ideas that involve Severus and throttling. Down, Muse. Down! ;-)
Ah, neive little girls thinking he wouldn't know what they were up to. This is a wonderful start. I am really looking forward to your story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Oh, this brings back fond memories! Hours in front of the computer, chats that went on way past midnight, and then the crazy idea of "Hey, let's make a real story out of this." Good times. Really good times!
Oh god I want a croissant. Chocolate preferably. But enough on food. Both of the girls are so undeniably teenage and nieve. Lust does not equal love. Just because he says and acts sweet doesn't mean he is not lying. While they might be having mind blowing organs, I want to shake some sense into both of them. But alas, at that age I would have acted the same way. I hope they can some how survive these situations without too much heartbreak in the end.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We ALL want chocolate croissants!! In some ways, it was quite liberating to write about naive teenage girls for once, since you can let them make ALL the mistakes. At the same time, it was rather cringeworthy at times, and the writers wanted to step in and take some "parental responsibility". But we let them make their mistakes, and the we cleaned up the wreckage.
Talk about playing with fire. She is gonna get burned as if she keeps this up.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Silly little girl, that one.
Enjoyed the story. Thanks!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
THANK YOU for reading til the end!
Well I had been expecting this since Morgana smelled roses in the bubblebath. At least Snape doesn't have to choose now!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
It doesn't end here...
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you, we're thrilled you enjoyed it and we hope you'll enjoy the sequel just as much.
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you again :)
Wow, what a great story! It took me longer to read, than I had planned, but I enjoyed it and can't wait to read part 2!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're thrilled you stuck with til the end, it was a beast of HBP proportions!
LUCIUS! Oh no he didn't!! And who wouldn't want to have Snape read a bedtime story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Snape could read me the telephone catalogue, I'd listen! And Lucius is as bat-shit crazy as his sister-in-law. It's all those years of inbreeding.
Lucius... Now I've been almost rooting for him for quite a few chapters (the man sure knows what he's doing) and then he goes and spoils it all by turning back to being a class A prick! I hope he's not too pissed at Morgana and Snape, but he DID interrupt something important. And Snape! Pull your act together man!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We would have loved to let Snape beat the crap out of Lucius in this chapter. But alas, it seemed so off-canon!
But you know Snape; he always saves the day in the end.
Oh wow - so far SOOOOO good! I see why I was told to read this fic! Chapter 4 = ♥ ♥ ♥ I like my Bellatrix like I like my looneys: Deranged and dangerous. And OMG SEXY Bellatrix too! I do not like Lucius one bit in this fic so far. Which is highly unusual, but he's a nasty piece of ----! Good thing I still have so many chapters to go, 'cause this is good!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Isn't Lucius being a nasty piece of ... part of his charm? And don't we all love him for it? We hope that the more you read, the better you find the story... it certainly felt like that as authors.
Love it.......
Can't wait for the next installment...are you going to write it?
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We are very much planning to write it. However, plot bunnies with rabies have attacked out ankles and we need to fight them off first. Hoping to get back to the Star Sister soon, though.
Glad you enjoyed part one, and we hope to see you here again.
very enjoyable. looking forward to part 2
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
So glad you liked it. Welcome back for Part 2. :)
Dumbledore has a role mapped out for everyone in the war with Voldemort, and I have no doubt that Charis, Morgana, and Severus, and Harry, Ron and Hermione will find themselves in the thick of things. Even now, before the Star Sisters have left the castle, he has written letters to them inviting them (I think) to join the Order of the Phoenix. Severus would just as soon "his girls" be left out of this particular club, but he knows that will not happen.
Seeing the emotions that Charis and Morgana have had to deal with at the end of their Hogwarts days was bittersweet. Charis is scared for the future. The coming war coupled with the knowledge that Sirius had been killed by the same cousin that had nearly killed her was terrifying to contemplate. Just as bad is her fear of losing contact with her "sister" and her Potions Master. I wish she had been able to make herself go to the dungeons to say farewell to Severus, but I could understand how it might have been too difficult. And after reading his thoughts on not being able to say goodbye, it was probably best. Surely she will see him somewhere, sometime. Whether she sees him or not, he will be seeing her.
Morgana's thoughts on this, her final day at Hogwarts, made me so sad. She too is already missing the only home she has really known; how very much like Severus she is in regards to the path that life has given her to tread. Though she will not miss her housemates, she will very much miss Charis and Snape. Even though she will miss her best friend, she could not bring herself to say goodbye. The emotion that she had shared with Charis in the Room of Requirement had scared her so badly that she was afraid to say goodbye, afraid to feel that much emotion all at once.
I'm a bit worried about Morgana having to stay in the room at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn Alley. Dodgy, indeed. And downright dangerous. I feel better knowing that Silvy has insisted that she come with her Mistress wherever she goes, and Severus will be able to keep on eye out for her, too.
Severus has braved the cold winds at the top of the Astronomy Tower just so he could see "his girls" as they leave the castle for the las time. He had been able to speak with Morgana, but I really wish he had been able to say goodbye to Charis. He most probably would have been his gruff self, so perhaps it was just as well. One thing that he did do that made me happy was to get Silvy to secret away the charmed mirrors in the girls luggage. I'm sure they will be shocked and delighted when they discover them and realize they can talk to each other, and of course they will not know that Severus will be able to keep an eye on them.
His regret was sad at not having apologized to them for his lack of control and that he couldn't protect them from the awful things that had happened to them, but it had made him feel better to see them embrace each other and walk to the station together. And knowing that he will see them soon— whether or not they see him— cheered him. I found it very telling that his thoughts also included musing that when he saw them again he would not be their professor, and they would not be his students. Could this mean what I think it means???
I have to tell you that I nearly had apoplexy when I saw "Epilogue!" I wanted to cry because I thought this was the complete end to this wonderful story. Thank you, thank you, thank you for telling us there will be a Part Two. I am primarily a Severus/Hermione shipper, but "Star Sisters" had captured my attention and my heart from the beginning. What will the name of the sequel? Maybe you don't even know yet, but I want to be sure to see it when you begin posting it.
Please tell Apple Blossom thank you for me for giving you "the courage to post this to a wider audience in the first place." I have adored your story, and I can't wait to see where you will take these fabulous characters in Part Two. Both of you ladies have done a smashing job of telling an engrossing story and bewitching this reader! A Thousand Points to Your Houses! Now what are you waiting for? Get busy writing. Chop chop.
Lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
The girls will both be working for the Ministry and have access to information Dumbeldore and the Order can use. They will be useful allies.
Question is, will they both willingly play along?It was hard indeed for both girls to say goodbye, especially with Voldemort's spectre now looming over both of their futures. Charis will probably regret not summoning the courage to say goodbye to Snape personally, but as you rightly said, they will indeed see each other again.
The girls will, of course, see each other again soon, too, but first they have some things they need to work through on their own, not al least Morgana ... in that dodgy room right at the corner of Knockturn Alley.As for Snape, you know canon, he has a busy year ahead of himself.
We are very glad that we managed to capture your interest for two OCs. Thank you for all your support and kind reviews. You have made at least one of us well up with your kindness. And we send you hugs right back!
Hopefully, you (and we) will not have to wait too long for Part 2.
Good insight into Dumbledore, Snape, Charis and Morgana's thoughts. Of course this is no goodbye for the girls, just a farewell.I found it so appropriate for Morgana to rent a flat right at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn. The metaphor is very significant.Every good thing must come to an end, and you chose a fine moment to end part one. I'll be looking forward to part two.I'll miss you in the meantime.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We will miss your reviews, dear Crystal, and we're so pleased you stuck with us the whole way through. We'll try not to keep you waiting too long!
This has been one of my favorite stories, and I read each installment eagerly! Thanks for continuing the tale. One unanswered question: about the illnesses experienced during the pregnancy? Was it just her body/spirit fighting against the potential evil of Lucius' child? Did he subconsciously want her to misscarry? Ah well, thank you again, and WELL DONE!!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank YOU for sticking with us and the story. We hope that Part 2 will hold the answers to your questions. See you around.
I'm so glad there is going to be a part 2. When I saw the story marked as completed, I was surprised because there seemed to be way too much to wrap up so quickly. I've enjoyed part 1 and am looking forward to following the girls and Severus into the next phases of their lives. Thank you for an interesting (and regularly updated!) story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you for sticking with us til the end. We know there are some questions left unanswered, all will be revealed is all we can say.
Hope to see you around.
Oh, endings... They are so sad and yet so full of possibility. I'm glad you have more adventures in store for the girls in future. Otherwise there would be tarring and feathering involved. At present, I'll be thinking about what Snape will be doing with his mirror. : ) Lovely story ladies. On serious pins and needles until Part 2 arrives.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Ehm, you wouldn't have any naughty thoughts about Snape and the mirror, would you? Hehe. Possibilities indeed!Thank you for staying with us for
40 chapters, we hope not to make you wait too long for part 2 and hope you enjoy that just as much.
While I didn't expect this, it didn't surprise me either. Now I'm thinking of all the possible scenarios that could lead to Snape finding out about them.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We promise we'll let Snape find out eventually. Until then, would you like to share your scenarios?Thank you for staying with us for 40 chapters.
Well, that was a surprise, but after what Charis and Morgana have been through for the last few hours, I guess you take comfort where you can find it. And I'm fairly certain that right now the only people that either of them feel they can trust is each other... so what happens now?Soon they will graduate, and then I suspect that all hell will break loose for Severus. How will he be able to keep an eye on them, assure himself that they are safe? And what if he thinks Dumbledore's plans for "his girls" are foolhardy and liable to cause them injury or death? I have no doubt that he would hex Dumbles into next week to protect the young women he has come to care so deeply about.I wonder how Draco will act when he comes back from the Manor. With Lucius in Azkaban, will Narcissa welcome Charis to her family? Will Harry feel a little closer to Charis because she was Sirius' cousin? Will Morgana and Charis be able to see each other often after graduation? I think the girls will need each other more than ever after they leave Hogwarts. With the storm that is on the horizon, I can't believe they'll be able to weather it all without each other and Severus.Great chapter, ladies. I'm on tenterhooks waiting to find out what will happen next.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Some of your questions will be answered soon (we're #21 in the queue), for others, you'll have to wait a little longer.Thank you for being such a loyal reader and reviewer.