III: Bludgers, Butterbeer and Brazen Behaviour
Chapter 3 of 41
sevs_starsistersTwo girls. Two Houses. One obsession.
In their final year at Hogwarts, two very different girls face their own battle with the continuing rise of the Dark Lord, encountering along the way shattered friendships, broken hearts, a charming blond Death Eater with a twisted plan, and a secret that could rock the foundations of the Wizarding world. Once more, the stern Potions master will have to do the impossible and offer his protection. Will he succeed?
Set during Harry Potter and The Order Of The Phoenix and mostly canon compliant.
Chapter III: Bludgers, Butterbeer and Brazen Behaviour
'Shit, Morgana! Fred and George told me about your fall! Are you alright? Let me have a look at you!'
Morgana looked up from the book she was reading and rolled her eyes at her friend's fussing. 'Nobody has died of bruises yet, Charis. But this is definitely the last time I volunteer to step in as Beater during Quidditch practice. Let's face it: I'm not a good flier.'
'Bruises?' Charis frowned and started pulling at the bed sheets. 'Poppy wouldn't keep you here for bruises, now would she? Show me!'
With a sigh, Morgana freed her leg from the sheets and pulled up her hospital gown, revealing an awfully swollen knee and bluish-yellow bruises.
Charis winced and then gave her friend a sympathetic look. 'God, that looks nasty. Does it hurt?'
'Only when I dance,' came Morgana's slightly irritated answer.
Charis laughed. 'Well, no problems there, seeing as you don't dance. But, just in case that it does hurt, I brought some Butterbeer. For anaesthetic purposes, of course.' Then her voice dropped to a whisper. 'You're sure Poppy's not here?'
Morgana nodded. Poppy had informed her that she would be gone for at least an hour, since she had to talk to the Headmaster.
Morgana studied Charis as she wobbled and sat on the bed beside her with a giggle. Her Ravenclaw friend, although seemingly quiet at first, had a liking for alcohol that Morgana quietly disapproved of. Charis drank to come out of her shell, Morgana understood that, but she secretly thought that Charis overdid it sometimes.
She could smell the alcohol on her friend's breath now. No doubt there was yet another party in Ravenclaw Tower. Ravenclaws, so it seemed, worked hard and played even harder. And it amused Morgana to think that the very students who valued intellect above anything else were also the ones with a predisposition for consuming substances which would ravage their brain cells.
'Where did you get that beer?' Morgana asked innocently.
'Some sixth-year is having a birthday party in the common room. I said I'd just have one ...'
Morgana snorted. 'Yeah right. Beer is a gregarious animal. There is no such thing as one beer. Chocolate Frog?'
Charis nodded eagerly and stuffed a Frog into her mouth. All that Butterbeer had made her hungry. 'Hmm, delicious.' She chewed thoughtfully whilst looking around Morgana's bed, her eyes finally landing on a huge, dark green box of chocolates tied with a silver bow. Her eyes widened. 'Who did you get them from?'
'You tell me.' Morgana honestly didn't know. She knew that the box of Frogs was from the Weasley twins, but she had no idea about the big, imposing, expensive-looking box.
'God, Morgana, it could be anyone,' Charis said, with a mouthful of Frog. 'God knows you have enough Slytherin admirers. And there is this third-year Hufflepuff who always blushes when he sees you.'
'Now, that's because I happened to walk in on him in the Quidditch locker room one day.'
Charis giggled. 'Come on, you know that you are popular with the boys.'
To that, Morgana said nothing. Instead, she Vanished the caps of the Butterbeer bottles and offered one bottle to Charis, who immediately took a healthy gulp.
'Hm, would love to have a snack with that,' she mused, smacking her lips with relish. The Frog had set off her appetite.
'Now that can be arranged. I have connections, you know.' Morgana smiled and called for an elf. 'Winky?'
With a loud crack, the elf Apparated right in front of the bed, wearing nothing but a dirty tea towel. 'Miss called?'
'Any requests, Charis?'
Charis looked at her friend and grinned. 'How about some chicken sandwiches?'
'Would you mind, Winky?' Morgana asked with a smile so sweet that Charis almost choked on her Butterbeer. Since when was Morgana nice?
The elf, however, seemed to have seen that behaviour before. 'Miss is always so nice to Winky.'
'That's because you are cute,' Morgana replied. 'Here, have a posh choc for your trouble.' Morgana reached over to grab the impressive green box from the side table.
Winky stumbled backwards. 'Winky couldn't, Miss.'
'Why? Don't you like them?'
'Winky knows where the chocolates come from, Miss. They come from a bad, bad wizard.'
The girls look at each other open-mouthed. 'Winky?'
The elf started to tremble. 'Winky should not have said anything. Winky did wrong.'
Morgana picked up the elf by the scruff before she could start hurting herself.
'Don't you just hate when they do that?' she asked Charis, rolling her eyes. Then she focused on the elf again. 'Now, Winky, if we ask you questions, and you just nod or shake your head, then you have technically not said anything. Isn't that right?'
To that suggestion, the elf brightened up and nodded.
And Charis had the first guess: 'Third-year Hufflepuff. What's his name? Malcom McMorris?'
Morgana rolled her eyes. 'She said baaaaad wizard, Charis! And Malcom is hardly a wizard at all. And do you really think a Hufflepuff would have chosen green and silver? Now, Winky, hair colour. Is this wizard blond?'
Winky nodded.
'How disappointing,' Morgana groaned. 'I prefer the dark type. Preferably dark and broody. Well, well, is this wizard a student?'
Winky shook her head.
'A brother of a student?'
Again, Winky shook her head.
'The father of a student?'
Winky nodded, her eyes wide and her ears flopping.
'Is this student a Slytherin?'
Winky nodded so fast that her head seemed at risk of falling off.
'Fucking hell!' Charis exclaimed as she realised what the description added up to. 'Lucius Malfoy? Why is Lucius Malfoy sending you chocolates? This is insane!'
Charis knew Morgana had spent time at Malfoy Manor over the summer, but she had assumed that it was a thinly-veiled act of kindness to a poor orphan as an act of charity, which Malfoy dutifully undertook in order to maintain his reputation as an upstanding pillar of the community. But sending Morgana posh chocolates was obviously a gesture that had more than just sympathy behind it.
Her exclamation was interrupted by Winky banging her head against the bedpost. 'Bad Winky, bad!'
Once more, Morgana pulled the elf towards herself. 'It's alright, sweetie. Remember, technically, you haven't said anything.'
'May Winky leave now, Miss?'
'Only if you promise me not to hurt yourself. Because I will know, and then I'll hide your Butterbeer,' Morgana threatened.
'Yes, Miss.' Then the elf Disapparated with a loud crack.
Charis swirled around to face her friend. 'Why is Lucius Malfoy sending you chocolates, Morgana?'
Morgana shrugged. 'As a token of affection?'
'What are you talking about?' Charis snapped. 'He's evil, Morgana. Evil!' She was livid. So her suspicions were correct: Malfoy had his eyes on Morgana. And the worst thing was that Morgana did not seem to mind this new development at all.
Charis didn't get chance to explore this horrid thought any further, however, as the door slammed open with a loud bang. She jumped, sending the empty Butterbeer bottles rolling to the floor. Thankfully, Morgana kept her cool and charmed them away with a flick of her wand.
A dark figure appeared in the doorway, robes billowing behind him, a sour expression on his face. And the girls did not even get a chance to say hello before he chided them. 'It smells like a brewery in here. Care to explain?'
'Winky was here, sir,' Morgana said quickly. 'The whole castle knows she has a drinking problem.'
'Nice try, Ms Belakane,' Snape snarled. 'As it happens, several Ravenclaws are already in detention for smuggling Butterbeer into the common room. I suspect that Professor Umbridge is making them polish her pack of porcelain Persian plates as we speak.'
He fixed his dark eyes on Charis, and naturally, she blushed and looked down. 'Care to defend yourself, Ms Byrne?'
Morgana opened her mouth, but her attempt to defend her friend was shushed by her Head of House.
'Well, Ms Byrne?'
'I ... um ... er ...'
'Eloquently put, Ms Byrne,' Snape said, his voice dripping with irony. 'At least, when your friend here lies, she does it with style.'
Again, Morgana opened her mouth, and again, she was shushed.
'Ms Byrne, get up and look at me,' Snape bellowed. 'NOW!'
Charis did as she was told and gasped as she looked into the Professor's beetle-black eyes.
'I can explain, sir,' she started.
A third time, Morgana opened her mouth, and this time, Snape had had enough. 'No, Ms Belakane. If I wanted to hear any word from you, I would have asked you. Seeing that I have not, I recommend that you keep your mouth shut!'
'We had a party in Ravenclaw Tower,' Charis mumbled. 'I had a couple of beers. And I knew Morgana was here alone, so I brought her one.'
'At the danger of repeating myself: for a Ravenclaw, you are rather stupid, Ms Byrne,' Snape snapped. 'Ms Belakane does not even drink.'
'I ... I tried to make her drink, sir,' Charis stammered. 'It's my fault.'
Morgana banged the back of her head against the headboard. Charis was talking herself right into his trap. 'You're fucking stupid, Charis,' she mumbled under her breath.
'Language, Ms Belakane' Snape chided her and smirked. 'But I agree. Now, Ms Byrne, how many points did I award you for your potion this morning?'
Charis grimaced. 'Ten, sir.'
'And can you guess what I will do with those points now, Ms Byrne?'
'Deduct them,' she piped. 'And some more. And put me in detention.'
Again, Snape smirked. 'My, my, the girl has imagination.'
Then he turned toward Morgana. 'How many points should I deduct, Ms Belakane? In your opinion?'
'Fifteen points, sir,' Morgana replied, grinning. 'And award five because she guessed right.'
To that, Snape snorted. 'You are unbelievable, Ms Belakane. Now, Ms Byrne, you are going to serve detention. With me. Right now.'
And without another word, he stalked off towards the exit. At the door he stopped and turned around once more.
'By the way, Ms Belakane, you are invited to lunch at Malfoy Manor tomorrow. We will be Flooing from my office at eleven thirty sharp. Try not to be late.'
'We, sir?'
'Yes, Ms Belakane. We. Your company has been requested.'
'Any dress code, sir?'
'Come as you are. And how about you, Ms Byrne? Do you need a written invitation?'
And Charis scurried to follow him, trying to shake off the thoughts of her friend spending tomorrow with Malfoy and his dishonourable intentions and focus on the impending trouble looming with the surly Potions master.
* * *
Charis had to jog to keep up with Snape as he swept down the stairs that led to the dungeon. Not an easy task. Firstly, because she had had one Butterbeer too many to be able to jog properly. And secondly, because the sight of Severus Snape's billowing robes made the breath hitch in her throat.
As a tiny hiccuping sound escaped her lips, Snape fell dead in his track and turned to glare at her. 'For your information, Ms Byrne, every hiccup will result in five points being deducted from your House. Do I make myself clear?'
Charis bit her lip and nodded. There was no point arguing, and any sound from her would surely result in Snape flying off the handle.
'In,' he bellowed as they reached the dungeon. He ushered her inside and slammed the door shut behind her. 'Just how much did you have to drink, Ms Byrne?'
'Four Butterbeers, sir.'
His smirk turned into an evil grin. 'Can't hold you liquor, can you, Ms Byrne? Tell me, what more does alcohol do to you?'
Charis gulped, not knowing if it was a trick question or not. So she decided to play it safe and use her logic. 'Alcohol makes one less inhibited, sir. It makes people unafraid to do things they might ordinarily not do. Whilst alcohol is technically a depressant, for many people it enhances their mood and makes them sociable and flirtatious.'
If she had thought that Snape would be impressed by a textbook answer, she had been sorely mistaken. And the sound of his cold voice made her flinch.
'I did not ask about a medical explanation, Ms Byrne. I asked what more alcohol does to you.'
He watched the girl closely. He knew she could not lie to him. And he watched her squirm, enjoying her discomfort.
Sure enough, Charis blushed. 'It makes me giggly, sir. And, um, amorous ...'
'I see.' Snape saw his chance to push the girl further and took it. Just how far would she go with his prompting, he wondered.
He stepped forwards, closing the gap between them. He was standing so close to her now that Charis could feel his breath tickle her forehead. She could have sworn that it smelled of chocolate. She tried to swallow, but her mouth was dry, her throat tight. And there were goose bumps erupting all the way down her spine.
Snape leant in, just an inch or two, but it was enough for Charis to gasp at the sudden proximity. And when he whispered into her ear, his breath felt like the touch of a feather.
'Are you aroused, Ms Byrne?'
Charis' breath caught in her chest. This couldn't be happening, surely. Morgana had been the one who had been overtly trying to get Snape's attention. Charis had been convinced that he'd never noticed her at all. And yet here he was, outright flirting with her.
'Yes, sir,' she breathed eventually.
'If it were entirely up to you, Ms Byrne,' Snape continued in a low tone, 'what would you want me to do right now?'
Charis blinked as his words seemed to fill her mind like a gentle caress. And before she could stop herself, the words came right out of her mouth. 'I would want you to force me back on the desk and kiss me, pin my hands against the side of my head whilst you grind yourself against me ...'
She clasped her hands over her mouth. She couldn't believe she had just said that. How the hell had he managed to make her reveal one of her most intimate dreams?
But to her surprise, Professor Snape was not angry. On the contrary. For the tiniest of moments, Charis could have sworn that she had seen a flicker of amusement in his eyes.
Oh, Snape was amused alright. The girl has imagination indeed, he thought. And this little power game was far too much fun to stop now.
'And then, Ms Byrne?' he went on in his deep, rich baritone. 'What would you want me to do then?'
'And then I would want you to nibble at my neck whilst assaulting my breasts with your long fingers before working them inside my knickers ...'
Again, Charis broke off, blinking furiously. Why was she saying these things? Why did she not shut up?
'Go on.' Snape's voice was soft as velvet, persuading, urging. And Charis did go on. She just could not stop.
'And then I would want you to rip my knickers from me and enter me swiftly, right here on your desk, stretching me so I'd yelp with pleasure. And I'd be so tight around you as you drove into me, mercilessly, pinning me down with your strong arms and the intensity of your black eyes.'
She felt his long fingers cup her chin, and as she looked up, she saw them: those beetle-black eyes. They were boring into her, into her very soul. And she could not look away.
'Will I make you come, Ms Byrne?' he whispered. 'Will I make you scream my name?'
His lips were so close to hers that she could feel his breath. But as much as she longed for them she did not dare move. She could not even trust her voice to reply. Instead, she just gazed into the black abyss of his eyes, her pupils dilated with fear and desire.
But Snape did not need a verbal answer. He saw what he was doing to the girl and how powerless he was making her.
'On the desk, Ms Byrne.' His voice was soft, almost tender, but this had definitely been an order. And Charis complied.
Snape's long, slender fingers started pulling up her skirt, over her knees and over her thighs. Then he let them trace downwards over her inside of her thighs. And only too willingly, Charis spread her legs as his hands applied pressure to the inside of her knees.
Yes, he thought. Let's see how far she will go.
'Show me, Ms Byrne,' he whispered. 'Show me how you want to be touched. Show me how you want me to make you come. Let me hear you scream my name.'
Charis acted without thinking. It felt as if she were enchanted, spellbound by his velvety voice and his beetle-black eyes.
Whether she had taken off her knickers with magic or whether Snape had, she did not know. But when she reached her hand between her legs, she found herself exposed, hot and wet. She parted the soft folds of skin, her fingers brushed over her most sensitive spot, and a soft moan escaped her lips.
'Severus ...'
A triumphant smile played around Snape's lips. From the use of his name, he could tell the girl had imagined this particular scenario many, many times before.
He shifted slightly to watch her fingers deftly working at her core, working herself up into a frenzy, just for him. Just because he asked her to. The rush of power he felt right now was equal to the erection that was now straining through his trousers.
'Tell me what you want me to do, Ms Byrne.'
His voice was hypnotic, and Charis couldn't do anything else but give him an answer. 'I want to feel you inside me. I want to feel how you fill me up and stretch me ...'
Her eyelids fluttered shut, and she started to stroke herself more feverishly, imagining the feeling of Snape's cock inside her, just like she had done so many nights before.
'Does it feel good, Ms Byrne?'
Charis had no idea if his voice was entering her ears, or if his thoughts were echoing in her mind. But she answered him, her voice hoarse, her breathing heavy.
'Oh god yes, it feels so good. The way you pound me, the way you fill me ...'
'How good does it feel, Ms Byrne? Tell me. Let me hear you.'
'I'd be crying. I'd be moaning with pleasure as you took me, relentlessly.'
And she did moan. And her fingers were rubbing against her sensitive nub, vehemently, fiercely. She heard the blood rush in her ears, felt her body starting to tremble.
'Yes,' Snape hissed. 'Come for me. Scream for me!'
The thick material of Snape's robes scraped against Charis' bare thigh, and she felt his erection straining through them. And the thought of him being hard for her pushed her right over the edge.
'Yes!' she screamed as she came undone right there on his desk. 'Oh, yes, Severus. Yes. Yes!!'
Her orgasm washed over her like a tidal wave. Then she lay still for some moments, her eyes closed and her legs dangling limply from the edge of the desk.
Then she felt his breath tickle her ear, and a shiver went down her spine. 'Did you enjoy your little fantasy, Ms Byrne?'
Her eyes snapped open, and she found Snape looking straight at her, his black eyes cold as ice.
'This is what you want me to do to you, Ms Byrne?'
Charis just nodded, her hands trembling. Something was wrong, she could sense it clearly.
When Snape stood up straight, the look in his eyes went from cold to cruel. 'Unfortunately for you, Ms Byrne, you are not the one to decide in my dungeon.'
He grabbed her by the shoulder, forcefully made her stand in front of his desk.
'I have no further use for you, Ms Byrne,' he snarled. 'You are dismissed.'
Charis' mouth fell open. She wanted to say something, but there was not a single sound coming from her throat, which felt raw with shock.
Still Snape was looking at her with those cruel black eyes. 'What did you expect, Ms Byrne? That sharing your little fantasy with me would make me hump you like a hormone-ridden teenager?'
Charis blushed. Stupid as it seemed now, this was exactly what she had been hoping for. And she felt confused. Wasn't that what he wanted, too?
Snape's lips curled into a cruel smile. 'You are too needy, Ms Byrne,' he sneered. 'No challenge.'
Charis swallowed and cast down her eyes. She felt so humiliated, so used. But she would not cry in front of him. She was not going to give him the satisfaction.
'Twenty points to Ravenclaw, Ms Byrne,' Snape announced. 'For your eagerness to please.'
His words were dipped in acid and struck Charis like a Bludger to the gut. She still kept her eyes on her shoes, but she heard him stride towards the door, heard him open it.
'You are dismissed, Ms Byrne.'
Charis didn't look at Snape once as she passed by him but hurriedly slipped through the door and left the dungeon. And only when she heard him slam the door, did she allow the tears to start streaming down her face.
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Wonderful job. Your story was actually enjoyable read. Your character development and portrayal of emotions was especially well done. You're both talented others, and together you are bloody brilliant! I look forward to the second part of the story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're so glad you enjoyed this story. We wrote it without any plan whatsoever in the start and had no idea how it would work out. We've had thoughts about going back to polish the plot and fill in all the plot holes, but as you've noticed, we wrote a Part 2 instead, which we hope you will enjoy. Thanks for reading! :)
Wow that was intense. I smiled the glee as the Dark lord punished the blonde menace. Ahhh, bedtime stories with Severus. I loved that. Perfect way to end the chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
There is so much to enjoy in this chapter, and so much to regret.
This chapter was like watching a train wreck about ready to happen. You know Zambini is going to be A complete cad in the end, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone steps on the same serve, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone And save her before she does something she will regret forever.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
"All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time." That description kind of fits the whole story. We're very glad you're enjoying it. :-)
Poor Sev. He is trying so hard to be noble, but it's gotta be difficult for anyone in his situation. Great chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
You cannot imagine how many times at least one of us writers tried to make Severus be anything but noble. It was quite a struggle.
Well that was really dickish of Severus. Quite that bastard I how he behaved. But I guess we will see where this goes. Your writing is wonderfully done and really grabs the reader. It just made me want to grab Severus by the throat and throttle him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
One of the writers is now having naughty ideas that involve Severus and throttling. Down, Muse. Down! ;-)
Ah, neive little girls thinking he wouldn't know what they were up to. This is a wonderful start. I am really looking forward to your story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Oh, this brings back fond memories! Hours in front of the computer, chats that went on way past midnight, and then the crazy idea of "Hey, let's make a real story out of this." Good times. Really good times!
Oh god I want a croissant. Chocolate preferably. But enough on food. Both of the girls are so undeniably teenage and nieve. Lust does not equal love. Just because he says and acts sweet doesn't mean he is not lying. While they might be having mind blowing organs, I want to shake some sense into both of them. But alas, at that age I would have acted the same way. I hope they can some how survive these situations without too much heartbreak in the end.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We ALL want chocolate croissants!! In some ways, it was quite liberating to write about naive teenage girls for once, since you can let them make ALL the mistakes. At the same time, it was rather cringeworthy at times, and the writers wanted to step in and take some "parental responsibility". But we let them make their mistakes, and the we cleaned up the wreckage.
Talk about playing with fire. She is gonna get burned as if she keeps this up.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Silly little girl, that one.
Enjoyed the story. Thanks!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
THANK YOU for reading til the end!
Well I had been expecting this since Morgana smelled roses in the bubblebath. At least Snape doesn't have to choose now!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
It doesn't end here...
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you, we're thrilled you enjoyed it and we hope you'll enjoy the sequel just as much.
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you again :)
Wow, what a great story! It took me longer to read, than I had planned, but I enjoyed it and can't wait to read part 2!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're thrilled you stuck with til the end, it was a beast of HBP proportions!
LUCIUS! Oh no he didn't!! And who wouldn't want to have Snape read a bedtime story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Snape could read me the telephone catalogue, I'd listen! And Lucius is as bat-shit crazy as his sister-in-law. It's all those years of inbreeding.
Lucius... Now I've been almost rooting for him for quite a few chapters (the man sure knows what he's doing) and then he goes and spoils it all by turning back to being a class A prick! I hope he's not too pissed at Morgana and Snape, but he DID interrupt something important. And Snape! Pull your act together man!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We would have loved to let Snape beat the crap out of Lucius in this chapter. But alas, it seemed so off-canon!
But you know Snape; he always saves the day in the end.
Oh wow - so far SOOOOO good! I see why I was told to read this fic! Chapter 4 = ♥ ♥ ♥ I like my Bellatrix like I like my looneys: Deranged and dangerous. And OMG SEXY Bellatrix too! I do not like Lucius one bit in this fic so far. Which is highly unusual, but he's a nasty piece of ----! Good thing I still have so many chapters to go, 'cause this is good!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Isn't Lucius being a nasty piece of ... part of his charm? And don't we all love him for it? We hope that the more you read, the better you find the story... it certainly felt like that as authors.
Love it.......
Can't wait for the next installment...are you going to write it?
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We are very much planning to write it. However, plot bunnies with rabies have attacked out ankles and we need to fight them off first. Hoping to get back to the Star Sister soon, though.
Glad you enjoyed part one, and we hope to see you here again.
very enjoyable. looking forward to part 2
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
So glad you liked it. Welcome back for Part 2. :)
Dumbledore has a role mapped out for everyone in the war with Voldemort, and I have no doubt that Charis, Morgana, and Severus, and Harry, Ron and Hermione will find themselves in the thick of things. Even now, before the Star Sisters have left the castle, he has written letters to them inviting them (I think) to join the Order of the Phoenix. Severus would just as soon "his girls" be left out of this particular club, but he knows that will not happen.
Seeing the emotions that Charis and Morgana have had to deal with at the end of their Hogwarts days was bittersweet. Charis is scared for the future. The coming war coupled with the knowledge that Sirius had been killed by the same cousin that had nearly killed her was terrifying to contemplate. Just as bad is her fear of losing contact with her "sister" and her Potions Master. I wish she had been able to make herself go to the dungeons to say farewell to Severus, but I could understand how it might have been too difficult. And after reading his thoughts on not being able to say goodbye, it was probably best. Surely she will see him somewhere, sometime. Whether she sees him or not, he will be seeing her.
Morgana's thoughts on this, her final day at Hogwarts, made me so sad. She too is already missing the only home she has really known; how very much like Severus she is in regards to the path that life has given her to tread. Though she will not miss her housemates, she will very much miss Charis and Snape. Even though she will miss her best friend, she could not bring herself to say goodbye. The emotion that she had shared with Charis in the Room of Requirement had scared her so badly that she was afraid to say goodbye, afraid to feel that much emotion all at once.
I'm a bit worried about Morgana having to stay in the room at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn Alley. Dodgy, indeed. And downright dangerous. I feel better knowing that Silvy has insisted that she come with her Mistress wherever she goes, and Severus will be able to keep on eye out for her, too.
Severus has braved the cold winds at the top of the Astronomy Tower just so he could see "his girls" as they leave the castle for the las time. He had been able to speak with Morgana, but I really wish he had been able to say goodbye to Charis. He most probably would have been his gruff self, so perhaps it was just as well. One thing that he did do that made me happy was to get Silvy to secret away the charmed mirrors in the girls luggage. I'm sure they will be shocked and delighted when they discover them and realize they can talk to each other, and of course they will not know that Severus will be able to keep an eye on them.
His regret was sad at not having apologized to them for his lack of control and that he couldn't protect them from the awful things that had happened to them, but it had made him feel better to see them embrace each other and walk to the station together. And knowing that he will see them soon— whether or not they see him— cheered him. I found it very telling that his thoughts also included musing that when he saw them again he would not be their professor, and they would not be his students. Could this mean what I think it means???
I have to tell you that I nearly had apoplexy when I saw "Epilogue!" I wanted to cry because I thought this was the complete end to this wonderful story. Thank you, thank you, thank you for telling us there will be a Part Two. I am primarily a Severus/Hermione shipper, but "Star Sisters" had captured my attention and my heart from the beginning. What will the name of the sequel? Maybe you don't even know yet, but I want to be sure to see it when you begin posting it.
Please tell Apple Blossom thank you for me for giving you "the courage to post this to a wider audience in the first place." I have adored your story, and I can't wait to see where you will take these fabulous characters in Part Two. Both of you ladies have done a smashing job of telling an engrossing story and bewitching this reader! A Thousand Points to Your Houses! Now what are you waiting for? Get busy writing. Chop chop.
Lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
The girls will both be working for the Ministry and have access to information Dumbeldore and the Order can use. They will be useful allies.
Question is, will they both willingly play along?It was hard indeed for both girls to say goodbye, especially with Voldemort's spectre now looming over both of their futures. Charis will probably regret not summoning the courage to say goodbye to Snape personally, but as you rightly said, they will indeed see each other again.
The girls will, of course, see each other again soon, too, but first they have some things they need to work through on their own, not al least Morgana ... in that dodgy room right at the corner of Knockturn Alley.As for Snape, you know canon, he has a busy year ahead of himself.
We are very glad that we managed to capture your interest for two OCs. Thank you for all your support and kind reviews. You have made at least one of us well up with your kindness. And we send you hugs right back!
Hopefully, you (and we) will not have to wait too long for Part 2.
Good insight into Dumbledore, Snape, Charis and Morgana's thoughts. Of course this is no goodbye for the girls, just a farewell.I found it so appropriate for Morgana to rent a flat right at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn. The metaphor is very significant.Every good thing must come to an end, and you chose a fine moment to end part one. I'll be looking forward to part two.I'll miss you in the meantime.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We will miss your reviews, dear Crystal, and we're so pleased you stuck with us the whole way through. We'll try not to keep you waiting too long!
This has been one of my favorite stories, and I read each installment eagerly! Thanks for continuing the tale. One unanswered question: about the illnesses experienced during the pregnancy? Was it just her body/spirit fighting against the potential evil of Lucius' child? Did he subconsciously want her to misscarry? Ah well, thank you again, and WELL DONE!!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank YOU for sticking with us and the story. We hope that Part 2 will hold the answers to your questions. See you around.
I'm so glad there is going to be a part 2. When I saw the story marked as completed, I was surprised because there seemed to be way too much to wrap up so quickly. I've enjoyed part 1 and am looking forward to following the girls and Severus into the next phases of their lives. Thank you for an interesting (and regularly updated!) story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you for sticking with us til the end. We know there are some questions left unanswered, all will be revealed is all we can say.
Hope to see you around.
Oh, endings... They are so sad and yet so full of possibility. I'm glad you have more adventures in store for the girls in future. Otherwise there would be tarring and feathering involved. At present, I'll be thinking about what Snape will be doing with his mirror. : ) Lovely story ladies. On serious pins and needles until Part 2 arrives.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Ehm, you wouldn't have any naughty thoughts about Snape and the mirror, would you? Hehe. Possibilities indeed!Thank you for staying with us for
40 chapters, we hope not to make you wait too long for part 2 and hope you enjoy that just as much.
While I didn't expect this, it didn't surprise me either. Now I'm thinking of all the possible scenarios that could lead to Snape finding out about them.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We promise we'll let Snape find out eventually. Until then, would you like to share your scenarios?Thank you for staying with us for 40 chapters.
Well, that was a surprise, but after what Charis and Morgana have been through for the last few hours, I guess you take comfort where you can find it. And I'm fairly certain that right now the only people that either of them feel they can trust is each other... so what happens now?Soon they will graduate, and then I suspect that all hell will break loose for Severus. How will he be able to keep an eye on them, assure himself that they are safe? And what if he thinks Dumbledore's plans for "his girls" are foolhardy and liable to cause them injury or death? I have no doubt that he would hex Dumbles into next week to protect the young women he has come to care so deeply about.I wonder how Draco will act when he comes back from the Manor. With Lucius in Azkaban, will Narcissa welcome Charis to her family? Will Harry feel a little closer to Charis because she was Sirius' cousin? Will Morgana and Charis be able to see each other often after graduation? I think the girls will need each other more than ever after they leave Hogwarts. With the storm that is on the horizon, I can't believe they'll be able to weather it all without each other and Severus.Great chapter, ladies. I'm on tenterhooks waiting to find out what will happen next.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Some of your questions will be answered soon (we're #21 in the queue), for others, you'll have to wait a little longer.Thank you for being such a loyal reader and reviewer.