XIV: Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot
Chapter 14 of 41
sevs_starsistersTwo girls. Two Houses. One obsession.
In their final year at Hogwarts, two very different girls face their own battle with the continuing rise of the Dark Lord, encountering along the way shattered friendships, broken hearts, a charming blond Death Eater with a twisted plan, and a secret that could rock the foundations of the Wizarding world. Once more, the stern Potions master will have to do the impossible and offer his protection. Will he succeed?
Set during Harry Potter and The Order Of The Phoenix and mostly canon compliant.
Chapter XIV: Should Old Acquaintance Be Forgot
Charis and Blaise were met by the Heads of Houses standing by the door, welcoming the students as they arrived. Dumbledore was wearing deep purple robes trimmed with silver, looking very festive. McGonagall was in deep crimson tartan, her hands clasped together. Tiny Flitwick was in deep blue, bobbing excitedly. And Sprout was looking unusually resplendent in old gold and had even scrubbed the habitual soil from underneath her fingernails. Snape, meanwhile, was wearing the darkest of lustrous black velvets, scowling.
'Welcome, welcome, all you lovely young people,' Dumbledore greeted them with a crinkly smile and his arms open wide as the students flowed through into the pub.
'Miss Byrne, lovely as always,' he said kindly as he nodded at Zabini, who nodded back politely.
'Thank you, sir.' Charis smiled back warmly and then giggled as Zabini pinched her bum. She dared to cast a glance at Snape, whose scowl had reached new depths of blackness.
'Good evening, Professor,' she said politely, flashing him a sweet smile. Snape was not going to ruin her evening!
'Good is relative, Miss Byrne,' he growled. 'So, Slytherins are still acceptable company to you then, I see?'
Charis looked affronted for a moment, her smile faltering. Any Slytherin who doesn't think I am dirt on their shoe will always be acceptable to me, she thought, looking at him coldly.
'I advise you not to judge those in my House too quickly, Miss Byrne,' he continued, as if reading her mind.
Charis did not have chance to contemplate his words before Zabini dragged her onto the dance floor with cheerful, 'Come on, pussy cat!'
'Coming, big boy,' she replied, looking over her shoulder quickly at Snape as Blaise pulled her into the middle of the dance floor and wrapped his arms around her waist.
Snape stood for several minutes, watching them dance, laugh and kiss, and his black eyes burned fiercely. Yes, there were snakes of pure jealousy writhing in his belly. That girl was HIS! Even though he could not return her feelings and despite his better judgement, he did relish the girl's passion for him. In his private moments he had replayed the highly charged incidents that had happened between them, and he found that his body responded to them just as it had then. The girl, as much as he tried to deny it, aroused him, and he hated seeing a mere boy pawing her for all to see.
Snape saw Charis throw back her head and laugh once more and decided he had seen enough. Jaw clenched, he stalked off towards the bar for a glass of Firewhisky, where he was greeted by none other than the Headmaster, who was smiling serenely.
'Isn't it lovely how happy they all are?' the old man asked, tilting his hand in the direction of the dancing students.
'Thrilling,' Snape replied in a deadpan voice, plucking a tumbler of Firewhisky from the side.
'And there are even some inter-house pairings,' Dumbledore continued happily. 'Lovely. Lovely indeed.'
At this comment, Snape's expression looked as if it could turn milk sour.
The Headmaster turned to his Potions master, checking out his immaculate dress robes. 'And black is festive ... how again, Severus?' he asked jovially.
'Black is not the absence of colour as most people mistakenly seem to think. Rather, it is the amalgamation of all colours, Headmaster,' he replied tartly.
'Ah. Of course,' Dumbledore replied with twinkling eyes. 'You do stand out like a sore thumb, though,' he admonished gently.
Snape raised a sinister eyebrow, his voice heavy with irony. 'And what colour do you suggest I wear? A soft peach, maybe? A rose blush? A delicate lilac?'
'Peppermint green,' the old man replied in a dreamy voice.
Snape looked at the Headmaster as if he was in some way mentally impaired before shaking his head and taking a big swig of Firewhisky. Maybe Lucius was right. Maybe the old man was indeed losing his marbles.
A shriek, followed by a giggle, made both teachers look to the dance floor, where Zabini was happily sinking his teeth in Charis' neck.
'Ah, to be young again ...' mused Dumbledore, misty-eyed.
'Surely, such behaviour is vastly inappropriate, Headmaster!' Snape protested, almost spilling Firewhisky down his robes.
'I find it delightful. Just look how everybody is having fun!' Once more the old man smiled contentedly and stroked his beard.
Snape watched as Charis' hand slipped down and slowly brushed against Zabini's groin. The action sent a shock of arousal through him and a surge of jealousy and annoyance simultaneously.
'I do not think that such behaviour is appropriate for a school party, Headmaster,' he persisted through gritted teeth.
'I am sure you will be capable of keeping a lid on it, if it appears to get out of control, Severus,' Dumbledore replied calmly.
'Oh, I can assure you of that, Headmaster.' And with that, Snape stomped off towards the dance floor in a swirl of black velvet.
'Zabini, a word!' he growled, casting a scowl at Charis.
Charis flushed slightly and scowled back at her stern teacher for interrupting her snogging session.
'Yes, sir?' Zabini asked innocently, but Snape was already stalking off and the boy had no choice but to follow his Head of House.
'Fuck that old bat!' Zabini cursed as he squeezed Charis' bottom. 'Wait for me upstairs once the others have gone, alright?'
'I'll be there,' she breathed, giving him a last peck on the lips.
She watched as Zabini ran after Snape, making flapping movements with his arms to imitate Snape's billowing robes, and she giggled.
'Having fun, are we?'
Charis span around to find her best friend in a short black velvet dress with her best Snape imitation: eyebrow raised and her hands on her hips.
'Morgana! You look amazing!' Charis hugged her friend who, for once, accepted with a smile.
'And so do you, little Ravenclaw. I see your beau is getting you into trouble already,' she said lightly.
'I'm not letting Snape spoil my evening,' Charis replied through gritted teeth. 'The music is really good though! Apparently, the DJ is a distant cousin of the Weasleys.'
'Is there anyone they aren't related to?' Morgana replied, rolling her eyes. 'It's a shame the Weasley boys aren't here this evening though. Doesn't seem like a party without them.'
'True,' Charis agreed, 'Although not having Malfoy and his henchmen here is a blessed relief.'
'You can say that again, sis. There are already far too many odious Slytherin males here without that gruesome threesome. And don't you just love the idea that Malfoy is sitting in the library now, studying, when we are having fun? Say whatever you want about Malfoy senior, but that man knows how to dish out a decent punishment.'
Charis giggled. 'Well, seeing as my dancing partner is currently out of action, it looks as if you're going to be dancing with me tonight after all, Morgana!'
'I am so not dancing with ANYONE,' Morgana said firmly, jutting her chin out.
'Oh, don't be a prude!' Charis begged.
'I hate dancing,' her friend grumbled.
'If you can't even dance with your best friend ...' Charis pretended to look hurt and fixed Morgana with her big, sad, green eyes.
Morgana just gazed back coolly. 'I. Will. Not. Dance.'
'You're a complete killjoy,' Charis huffed.
'I don't dance, period,' Morgana sniffed, folding her arms across her chest.
'BORING!' Charis replied before bopping to the Human League.
Morgana merely raised an eyebrow, shaking her head.
Huge trays filled with delicious-looking canapés floated past, suspended by Madam Rosmerta, who was weaving in and out of the crowd, and Morgana grabbed a handful, watching her friend swinging her hips, eyes shut, having a whale of time.
'I do hope you can keep your tongue to yourself for the rest of the evening, Miss Byrne.' The low drawl of Severus Snape made Charis' eyes snap open, and she bit her lip nervously. 'One slip-up is forgivable; two is a sign of stupidity.'
Luckily, Madam Rosmerta heard this comment as she made her way past and came to Charis' rescue. 'Now, Severus, behave. Remember what it said on the invitation: 'Teachers are allowed if they play NICELY.'
Charis smiled at Rosmerta gratefully as Snape fixed her with his beetle-black eyes.
'Keep an eye on those two,' he muttered, out of earshot of the girls.
'As you wish, Severus,' Rosmerta replied as Snape turned on his heel and stalked to the bar.
'Don't worry about him, kids,' she said kindly. 'He'll be holding on to a bottle of Odgen's for the rest of the night.'
'Great food, Roz,' said Morgana, helping herself to more snacks.
Rosmerta beamed. 'Thanks, lovely. Help yourself. There's plenty for everyone.' And with that, the curvy landlady made her way back through the throng, plates suspended carefully over the crowds' heads.
It was hot on the dance floor, and Morgana suddenly wondered if wearing velvet had been a wise choice. She decided to retire to the bar and grab a Butterbeer to cool down.
As she was waiting to be served, she watched Charis happily dancing on her own to Groove Is In The Heart, and she smiled. Her Ravenclaw friend must be the sweetest girl on the planet.
She was just contemplating joining her after all when, from out of absolutely nowhere, Albus Dumbledore appeared on the dance floor, throwing shapes like a man demented. And Morgana couldn't help but laugh as she saw Charis grinning and grooving away with the Headmaster.
'Aren't they cute?' she asked with a huge grin that made her blue eyes sparkle.
Snape, who was standing beside her at the bar, just sneered and shook his head. 'Gryffindors and Ravenclaws, Miss Belakane. They have not an ounce of shame in their bodies. And the Headmaster looks like he is having a fit.'
'I think,' Morgana said, her grin if possible growing even wider, 'that this was a common form of dancing back in the nineteenth century when our Headmaster was still the king of the dance floor.'
Snape snorted. 'And what, Miss Belakane, would you know about the topic of dancing? I for one cannot recall having seen you on the dance floor.'
With a loud thud, Morgana put down her bottle on the counter. 'What is it with people today?' she snapped, every trace of a grin gone from her face. 'Is it that unusual for a girl not to dance?'
'It most certainly is,' Snape replied, raising an eyebrow at his student's little outburst. 'As is you drinking alcohol.'
Morgana sighed heavily and brought her hand to her neck to rub her aching muscles. 'I ... I haven't been myself lately,' she started. 'Ever since that afternoon at Malfoy Manor I feel ... mentally drained. I lose my patience very easily, I snap at people.'
Hell, Charis has accused me of turning into you, she thought.
Snape fixed her with a searching look. 'This has been a stressful term for you, Miss Belakane. You have been drugged, deceived and have had your mind invaded in a most despicable way. It is natural that you feel worn out. This is why it is crucial that you learn how to control your emotions and shield yourself from others. Are you familiar with Occlumency?'
Morgana shrugged. 'I have read books about it. But I find it hard to grasp.'
'Naturally.' Snape emptied his glass and turned his full attention onto Morgana. 'If you do not learn how to control your mind, you will end up mad. Therefore, I suggest that you make closing your mind your uttermost priority from now on.'
Once more, Morgana rubbed her neck. 'It is hard, sir. Ever since Lucius touched my mind, I have felt exposed. It is almost as if I am carrying around my mind in a glass jar and everyone can look at it. I am trying not to let myself feel, to lock away my emotions. But it still seems like they're right on the surface.'
'Again, this is natural, Miss Belakane.' Snape's voice was low and calm. This wasn't a topic he wanted to discuss in public, but the girl was obviously struggling. 'Tell me, when you are trying to shield off your emotions, what method do you choose? Do you see a door slam shut? A blind coming down, maybe?'
'There is mist,' Morgana replied, her voice somewhat shaky. 'Black mist.'
Snape frowned. He had seen that mist. The night he had driven Lucius from the girl's mind, he had been slashing through that mist, trying to reach her mind himself. So she had been trying to defend herself then.
'This might not be the right technique for you, Miss Belakane,' he went on. 'Try experimenting. Some people imagine snow, others the blackness of space, yet others a brick wall. Whatever method you choose, it will have to be your own, personal projection.'
'What if I cannot do it, sir?'
'Practice, Miss Belakane.' Snape didn't like the vulnerable look on the girl's face, but lending comfort had never been one of his talents. Therefore, he carried on in the same matter-of-of fact tone he used in class. 'Practice and you will find your method. And once it clicks, you will be able to summon your Occlumency faster and easier until it is like second nature to you.'
Morgana nodded and seemed to contemplate his words for a few moments. Then Snape saw a smile flit over her lips. 'I still don't have to dance, do I, sir?'
'No one is forcing you, Miss Belakane. Well, maybe one person.'
And Morgana never stood a chance when Charis grabbed her hand and dragged her onto the dance floor.
Snape smirked and put his empty glass onto the counter, where it was promptly refilled by Rosmerta.
'Cute thing, that one,' she said, nodding into Morgana's direction. 'Your House, I suppose?'
Snape gave a non-committal grunt.
'Really sweet,' Rosmerta went on. 'Seems lonely, though. I have the feeling that her House mates are giving her a hard time.'
Snape scowled. 'What goes on in my House is none of your concern, Rosmerta.'
The landlady raised her hands in a defensive gesture. 'I'm just saying ... but you're right, it's none of my business.'
She pushed the glass of Odgen's in Snape's direction. 'You should relax, Severus. It's a party.'
Snape snorted. He would rather be at the Dark Lord's birthday celebration sucking Skrewt dung from his shoes than to be here watching hormonal teenagers snog and make fools out of themselves. It was a disgrace really. Now even Belakane was dancing! Although, she and her Ravenclaw friend were the only couple on the dance floor that did not make him want to vomit. And if Snape was completely honest with himself, he had to admit that he found the sight of the two girls moving gracefully with each other rather ... alluring.
His musings were unfortunately interrupted by the DJ. 'Now, all you wonderful people on the dance floor, there are going to be two more slow ones, and then we will have to say goodnight. Remember that you will have to be in bed by three o'clock. Each and everyone in their own bed, that is.'
Snape downed his Firewhisky and stalked out of the room. Slow songs implied slow dancing, and that implied more snogging. And that was really not something he wished to witness.
Outside in the dark corridor, he leant against the wall. He should have passed on that last Firewhisky. He rubbed his forehead and closed his eyes for a moment, wishing he was in his bed already.
'Too much Firewhisky, sir?'
Snape's eyes snapped open, and he caught sight of Morgana, who was leaning against the wall opposite him. Had he not noticed her or had she managed to sneak up on him?
'Well observed, Miss Belakane,' he growled. 'Have five points for Slytherin.'
'Five points?' Morgana grinned. 'Are you alright, sir?'
'I will be once this infernal mush stops.'
Tears on My Pillow by Johnny Nash could be heard from the other room, and Snape groaned inwardly. He hated that song. He had danced to it just once. With Lily. She had loved it.
Morgana started to hum and tapped her foot. 'It's a cute song. Maybe one should take up dancing after all. I've been told that it is quite a normal pastime for girls my age.'
Snape looked at Morgana and found her smiling. Surely, the girl was not being flirty, now was she?
'Are you asking me to dance, Miss Belakane?' he murmured and saw her blush.
'Well, I, um ... Yes, sir. I am.'
The cheek! But then again, why not? And despite himself, Snape pushed himself off from the wall and held out his hand.
The girl's hand was clammy, but he grabbed it firmly and pulled her towards him in a fluid motion, wrapping his free arm around her.
'The secret, Miss Belakane, is to relax,' he told her as he started swaying slowly. 'Relax and let me take the lead.'
He leant her back into a little dip and chuckled as her fingers dug into his biceps. 'Really, Miss Belakane, do you think I would let you fall?'
'No, sir,' she breathed as he pulled her upright again. 'Of course not.'
She seemed to relax a little, and Snape remembered another time she had been in his arms, remembered how sweet her lips had tasted and what delicious little moans had escaped from them. And he did not know if it was the Firewhisky or those memories that made him lean in and softly brush her lips with his.
The girl did not pull away, and as her lips parted, Snape let his tongue flick over them, ever so lightly, ever so quickly.
Morgana felt a shiver go down her spine. Snape had not as much as looked at her since that incident at Malfoy Manor, but today he had talked to her, given her advice. And now she was lying in his arms. She yielded to his kiss and felt herself being pulled closer, felt his tongue in her mouth and his hand at the back of her neck. And before she knew it, she found herself being pushed up against the wall, her left leg wrapped around his waist and his teeth nibbling at her neck.
The girl smelled of honey, and despite his better judgement, Snape attacked her neck with feverish kisses, grabbed her leg and ground himself against her, his erection straining against the velvet of his robes. She was young, she was willing, and she wanted him. And he was ready to give in. Right there in the dark corridor of the Three Broomsticks.
Then the music stopped and was replaced by another sound: creaking bedsprings and moaning, a giggle that sounded all too familiar. And it brought Snape right back to reality.
He freed himself from Morgana's embrace and straightened his robes, not even able to bring himself to look at her. He should not have gone that far. He should not have touched her like that.
'Back to Hogwarts with you right away,' he hissed, cursing himself inwardly for drinking too much Firewhisky and for once more losing control.
But Morgana did not move. Surely, this could not be happening. Snape could not be sending her away once again. But he obviously was. In fact, he was already on his way to the stairs.
'I said, go!' he snapped at her once more. 'Are you incapable of following simple orders, Miss Belakane?'
And with that, he rushed up the stairs, moving swiftly and stealthily as a cat, never noticing that Morgana slunk into the shadows instead of following his directions and returning to Hogwarts. Somehow, she was hoping that Snape would change his mind and finish what he had started with her.
When Snape had reached the door from behind which those incriminating noises were coming, he paused and listened. Which of those hormonal dunderheads were dim enough not to put a Silencing Charm on the door when having sex in a pub full of teachers? He would take ten points for stupidity alone.
'That's right, Charis, spread yourself for me,' the recognisable sound of Zabini's voice purred as Charis' unmistakable delicious moans made Snape tighten his fist around his wand in cold fury. Byrne, he thought. That little slut! How dare she?!
'You have exactly ten seconds to dress before I hex this door off its hinges!' Snape barked. 'One, ...'
Zabini and Charis looked at each other, completely mortified for a second before springing in to action. It wasn't an easy task to find all their clothes that lay scattered on the floor, but they were dressed by the time Snape reached eight and looked at each other nervously as he finished the countdown.
On ten, Snape burst through the door, anger burning in his onyx eyes.
'Zabini! Couldn't leave the girl alone, could you? Fifty points from Slytherin. Yes, my own House! And you will see me after lunch tomorrow, where your punishment for your inability to control your hormones will be dealt with in full. Now get out of my sight!'
Zabini didn't need to be told twice and shot past his Head of House in a flurry of dishevelled green dress robes.
'You disappoint me, Miss Byrne,' Snape drawled in a low voice, stepping closer to Charis. 'Messing with boys is stupid enough. Messing with a Slytherin is downright idiotic.'
Morgana shrunk back into the shadows as Zabini raced down the stairs and out of the back door as fast as his legs could carry him, leaving Snape and Charis alone. And when she heard the door slam, she cautiously crept up the stairs. She could hear Snape's hushed voice and was desperate to know what trouble her friend was in now for her indiscretion. She was not, however, prepared for the sight that greeted her.
Snape had Charis by the waist, and she was now looking up at him with her big green eyes, her hands resting lightly on his chest.
'I appear to have a weakness for Slytherin males, sir,' she whispered.
'Yes, so it appears.'
Charis gasped as Snape's black eyes burned into hers. And as is grip tightened on her, she could smell the Odgen's on his breath.
'Why would you play with boys, Miss Byrne,' Snape snarled, 'when you have known a real man's touch?'
Morgana's eyes widened in shock. Charis and Snape? They had actually had sex? It certainly explained the abnormally large number of snarky comments Charis had received from him during the evening plus his anger at Zabini.
Morgana could not bear to hear more, so she turned and snuck down the stairs as quickly and quietly as she could. She needed to get outside. Suddenly, the stale air of the pub was too oppressive, and she felt nauseous.
But that nausea quickly turned to rage as the cold night air hit her. So Snape had been leading them both on a merry dance, had he? And her best friend had not even told her they had slept together!
Morgana ground her teeth as the urge to hex something welled up inside her. Snape had toyed with her like a plaything, yet he had already made his choice. He had chosen Charis, once again!
The thought made Morgana feel like there were talons ripping at her stomach. Snape had pushed her away. He had pushed her away in order to run to her best friend. And there he was now, surely already between Charis' thighs, fulfilling the promises he had been making to her less than half an hour ago.
Well, two could play that game. If Snape did not want her, she knew another wizard who would. And if Snape considered hurting and betraying people a sport, then she would beat him at his own game. And with a plan forming in her mind that would have made Salazar Slytherin himself shudder, Morgana turned on the spot and Apparated to Malfoy Manor.
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Wonderful job. Your story was actually enjoyable read. Your character development and portrayal of emotions was especially well done. You're both talented others, and together you are bloody brilliant! I look forward to the second part of the story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're so glad you enjoyed this story. We wrote it without any plan whatsoever in the start and had no idea how it would work out. We've had thoughts about going back to polish the plot and fill in all the plot holes, but as you've noticed, we wrote a Part 2 instead, which we hope you will enjoy. Thanks for reading! :)
Wow that was intense. I smiled the glee as the Dark lord punished the blonde menace. Ahhh, bedtime stories with Severus. I loved that. Perfect way to end the chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
There is so much to enjoy in this chapter, and so much to regret.
This chapter was like watching a train wreck about ready to happen. You know Zambini is going to be A complete cad in the end, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone steps on the same serve, But there's nothing you can do to stop it. All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time. I hope someone And save her before she does something she will regret forever.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
"All you can do is read on while trying to cover your eyes at the same time." That description kind of fits the whole story. We're very glad you're enjoying it. :-)
Poor Sev. He is trying so hard to be noble, but it's gotta be difficult for anyone in his situation. Great chapter.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
You cannot imagine how many times at least one of us writers tried to make Severus be anything but noble. It was quite a struggle.
Well that was really dickish of Severus. Quite that bastard I how he behaved. But I guess we will see where this goes. Your writing is wonderfully done and really grabs the reader. It just made me want to grab Severus by the throat and throttle him.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
One of the writers is now having naughty ideas that involve Severus and throttling. Down, Muse. Down! ;-)
Ah, neive little girls thinking he wouldn't know what they were up to. This is a wonderful start. I am really looking forward to your story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Oh, this brings back fond memories! Hours in front of the computer, chats that went on way past midnight, and then the crazy idea of "Hey, let's make a real story out of this." Good times. Really good times!
Oh god I want a croissant. Chocolate preferably. But enough on food. Both of the girls are so undeniably teenage and nieve. Lust does not equal love. Just because he says and acts sweet doesn't mean he is not lying. While they might be having mind blowing organs, I want to shake some sense into both of them. But alas, at that age I would have acted the same way. I hope they can some how survive these situations without too much heartbreak in the end.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We ALL want chocolate croissants!! In some ways, it was quite liberating to write about naive teenage girls for once, since you can let them make ALL the mistakes. At the same time, it was rather cringeworthy at times, and the writers wanted to step in and take some "parental responsibility". But we let them make their mistakes, and the we cleaned up the wreckage.
Talk about playing with fire. She is gonna get burned as if she keeps this up.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Silly little girl, that one.
Enjoyed the story. Thanks!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
THANK YOU for reading til the end!
Well I had been expecting this since Morgana smelled roses in the bubblebath. At least Snape doesn't have to choose now!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
It doesn't end here...
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you, we're thrilled you enjoyed it and we hope you'll enjoy the sequel just as much.
What an amasing story. I came upon it after it was compleated and whas able to read it in it's entirty. Now I will be starting to read part two as far as it has progressed. Please keep the updates coming.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you again :)
Wow, what a great story! It took me longer to read, than I had planned, but I enjoyed it and can't wait to read part 2!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We're thrilled you stuck with til the end, it was a beast of HBP proportions!
LUCIUS! Oh no he didn't!! And who wouldn't want to have Snape read a bedtime story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Snape could read me the telephone catalogue, I'd listen! And Lucius is as bat-shit crazy as his sister-in-law. It's all those years of inbreeding.
Lucius... Now I've been almost rooting for him for quite a few chapters (the man sure knows what he's doing) and then he goes and spoils it all by turning back to being a class A prick! I hope he's not too pissed at Morgana and Snape, but he DID interrupt something important. And Snape! Pull your act together man!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We would have loved to let Snape beat the crap out of Lucius in this chapter. But alas, it seemed so off-canon!
But you know Snape; he always saves the day in the end.
Oh wow - so far SOOOOO good! I see why I was told to read this fic! Chapter 4 = ♥ ♥ ♥ I like my Bellatrix like I like my looneys: Deranged and dangerous. And OMG SEXY Bellatrix too! I do not like Lucius one bit in this fic so far. Which is highly unusual, but he's a nasty piece of ----! Good thing I still have so many chapters to go, 'cause this is good!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Isn't Lucius being a nasty piece of ... part of his charm? And don't we all love him for it? We hope that the more you read, the better you find the story... it certainly felt like that as authors.
Love it.......
Can't wait for the next installment...are you going to write it?
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We are very much planning to write it. However, plot bunnies with rabies have attacked out ankles and we need to fight them off first. Hoping to get back to the Star Sister soon, though.
Glad you enjoyed part one, and we hope to see you here again.
very enjoyable. looking forward to part 2
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
So glad you liked it. Welcome back for Part 2. :)
Dumbledore has a role mapped out for everyone in the war with Voldemort, and I have no doubt that Charis, Morgana, and Severus, and Harry, Ron and Hermione will find themselves in the thick of things. Even now, before the Star Sisters have left the castle, he has written letters to them inviting them (I think) to join the Order of the Phoenix. Severus would just as soon "his girls" be left out of this particular club, but he knows that will not happen.
Seeing the emotions that Charis and Morgana have had to deal with at the end of their Hogwarts days was bittersweet. Charis is scared for the future. The coming war coupled with the knowledge that Sirius had been killed by the same cousin that had nearly killed her was terrifying to contemplate. Just as bad is her fear of losing contact with her "sister" and her Potions Master. I wish she had been able to make herself go to the dungeons to say farewell to Severus, but I could understand how it might have been too difficult. And after reading his thoughts on not being able to say goodbye, it was probably best. Surely she will see him somewhere, sometime. Whether she sees him or not, he will be seeing her.
Morgana's thoughts on this, her final day at Hogwarts, made me so sad. She too is already missing the only home she has really known; how very much like Severus she is in regards to the path that life has given her to tread. Though she will not miss her housemates, she will very much miss Charis and Snape. Even though she will miss her best friend, she could not bring herself to say goodbye. The emotion that she had shared with Charis in the Room of Requirement had scared her so badly that she was afraid to say goodbye, afraid to feel that much emotion all at once.
I'm a bit worried about Morgana having to stay in the room at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn Alley. Dodgy, indeed. And downright dangerous. I feel better knowing that Silvy has insisted that she come with her Mistress wherever she goes, and Severus will be able to keep on eye out for her, too.
Severus has braved the cold winds at the top of the Astronomy Tower just so he could see "his girls" as they leave the castle for the las time. He had been able to speak with Morgana, but I really wish he had been able to say goodbye to Charis. He most probably would have been his gruff self, so perhaps it was just as well. One thing that he did do that made me happy was to get Silvy to secret away the charmed mirrors in the girls luggage. I'm sure they will be shocked and delighted when they discover them and realize they can talk to each other, and of course they will not know that Severus will be able to keep an eye on them.
His regret was sad at not having apologized to them for his lack of control and that he couldn't protect them from the awful things that had happened to them, but it had made him feel better to see them embrace each other and walk to the station together. And knowing that he will see them soon— whether or not they see him— cheered him. I found it very telling that his thoughts also included musing that when he saw them again he would not be their professor, and they would not be his students. Could this mean what I think it means???
I have to tell you that I nearly had apoplexy when I saw "Epilogue!" I wanted to cry because I thought this was the complete end to this wonderful story. Thank you, thank you, thank you for telling us there will be a Part Two. I am primarily a Severus/Hermione shipper, but "Star Sisters" had captured my attention and my heart from the beginning. What will the name of the sequel? Maybe you don't even know yet, but I want to be sure to see it when you begin posting it.
Please tell Apple Blossom thank you for me for giving you "the courage to post this to a wider audience in the first place." I have adored your story, and I can't wait to see where you will take these fabulous characters in Part Two. Both of you ladies have done a smashing job of telling an engrossing story and bewitching this reader! A Thousand Points to Your Houses! Now what are you waiting for? Get busy writing. Chop chop.
Lots of hugs,Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
The girls will both be working for the Ministry and have access to information Dumbeldore and the Order can use. They will be useful allies.
Question is, will they both willingly play along?It was hard indeed for both girls to say goodbye, especially with Voldemort's spectre now looming over both of their futures. Charis will probably regret not summoning the courage to say goodbye to Snape personally, but as you rightly said, they will indeed see each other again.
The girls will, of course, see each other again soon, too, but first they have some things they need to work through on their own, not al least Morgana ... in that dodgy room right at the corner of Knockturn Alley.As for Snape, you know canon, he has a busy year ahead of himself.
We are very glad that we managed to capture your interest for two OCs. Thank you for all your support and kind reviews. You have made at least one of us well up with your kindness. And we send you hugs right back!
Hopefully, you (and we) will not have to wait too long for Part 2.
Good insight into Dumbledore, Snape, Charis and Morgana's thoughts. Of course this is no goodbye for the girls, just a farewell.I found it so appropriate for Morgana to rent a flat right at the corner of Diagon and Knockturn. The metaphor is very significant.Every good thing must come to an end, and you chose a fine moment to end part one. I'll be looking forward to part two.I'll miss you in the meantime.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We will miss your reviews, dear Crystal, and we're so pleased you stuck with us the whole way through. We'll try not to keep you waiting too long!
This has been one of my favorite stories, and I read each installment eagerly! Thanks for continuing the tale. One unanswered question: about the illnesses experienced during the pregnancy? Was it just her body/spirit fighting against the potential evil of Lucius' child? Did he subconsciously want her to misscarry? Ah well, thank you again, and WELL DONE!!!
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank YOU for sticking with us and the story. We hope that Part 2 will hold the answers to your questions. See you around.
I'm so glad there is going to be a part 2. When I saw the story marked as completed, I was surprised because there seemed to be way too much to wrap up so quickly. I've enjoyed part 1 and am looking forward to following the girls and Severus into the next phases of their lives. Thank you for an interesting (and regularly updated!) story.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Thank you for sticking with us til the end. We know there are some questions left unanswered, all will be revealed is all we can say.
Hope to see you around.
Oh, endings... They are so sad and yet so full of possibility. I'm glad you have more adventures in store for the girls in future. Otherwise there would be tarring and feathering involved. At present, I'll be thinking about what Snape will be doing with his mirror. : ) Lovely story ladies. On serious pins and needles until Part 2 arrives.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Ehm, you wouldn't have any naughty thoughts about Snape and the mirror, would you? Hehe. Possibilities indeed!Thank you for staying with us for
40 chapters, we hope not to make you wait too long for part 2 and hope you enjoy that just as much.
While I didn't expect this, it didn't surprise me either. Now I'm thinking of all the possible scenarios that could lead to Snape finding out about them.
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
We promise we'll let Snape find out eventually. Until then, would you like to share your scenarios?Thank you for staying with us for 40 chapters.
Well, that was a surprise, but after what Charis and Morgana have been through for the last few hours, I guess you take comfort where you can find it. And I'm fairly certain that right now the only people that either of them feel they can trust is each other... so what happens now?Soon they will graduate, and then I suspect that all hell will break loose for Severus. How will he be able to keep an eye on them, assure himself that they are safe? And what if he thinks Dumbledore's plans for "his girls" are foolhardy and liable to cause them injury or death? I have no doubt that he would hex Dumbles into next week to protect the young women he has come to care so deeply about.I wonder how Draco will act when he comes back from the Manor. With Lucius in Azkaban, will Narcissa welcome Charis to her family? Will Harry feel a little closer to Charis because she was Sirius' cousin? Will Morgana and Charis be able to see each other often after graduation? I think the girls will need each other more than ever after they leave Hogwarts. With the storm that is on the horizon, I can't believe they'll be able to weather it all without each other and Severus.Great chapter, ladies. I'm on tenterhooks waiting to find out what will happen next.Beth
Response from sevs_starsisters (Author of Star Sisters)
Some of your questions will be answered soon (we're #21 in the queue), for others, you'll have to wait a little longer.Thank you for being such a loyal reader and reviewer.