What Dreams May Come
rhiannon113133 Reviews | 7.21/10 (133 Ratings, 0 Likes, 96 Favorites )
Severus is ready to die. When the pain ends, the bliss begins. His only nagging question is: What will come after?
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rhiannon113
Member Since 2008 | 3 Stories | Favorited by 23 | 634 Reviews Written | 254 Review Responses
I love writing and reading. I work from home, which gives me the temptation to read or write fanfic instead of work! I have lived in both the US and UK. I currently live in the US, with my husband and three beautiful girls (all of whom wish to attend Hogwarts when they're of age! LOL).
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I am liking this story!!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I am so pleased that you like it. I hope you'll keep reading. Thanks for leaving me a little note! *hugs*Rhiannon
Curiouser and curiouser. Is all this the product of a dying Severus' imagination or something else entirely? I can't wait to find out.
Great job ... I look forward to your next update!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I hope you are willing to take a bit more on faith. I've got a bit of plot to unravel before we find out how/why Severus is in an altered circumstance. Please be patient. Thanks so much for the review. I hope you'll continue reading. The next chapter is with my beta, it should be up soon. *hugs*Rhiannon
So tell me Severus, is this heaven or hell? ~laughs loudly~ great chapter, I loved it. It made me laugh after being sad. Looking forward to your next post.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Shouldn't it really be a bit of both?? Next chapter is in queue, I hope you'll keep reading. Thanks for the kind reivew. *hugs*Rhiannon
An interesting start. I have not seen that movie so I have no idea if this is based on it or not. But it is intriguing and well written.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
The story is not based on the film. They are thematically similar, but it's definitely not a re-telling. I do recommend the film, if you're ever so inclined. Thank you for leaving a review! I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story. *hugs*Rhiannon
whoa who! great begining. thanks so much
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Thanks for leaving a review. The next chapter should be up soon. I hope you continue to enjoy! *hugs* Rhiannon
So, I decided to start reading this because of the title. I totally loved that movie. This fic is very interesting and I cant't wait to see how it progresses. I love how you're writing Severus' inner monolouge. It sounds just like him, Great Job! Keep those chapters coming! Cheers! ~ Brena
So, I decided to start reading this because of the title. I totally loved that movie. This fic is very interesting and I cant't wait to see how it progresses. I love how you're writing Severus' inner monolouge. It sounds just like him, Great Job! Keep those chapters coming! Cheers! ~ Brena
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
The film is a favourite of mine as well. I'm so glad you liked my version of the great Severus. I think he's the most intimidating character to write, as he's everyone's favourite. =] Hopefully next chapter should be up soon. I'm so pleased that you liked it. Thanks so much for the lovely review, and for reading. *hugs*Rhiannon
Oh my, do we have a little timeturner twist, or is it a missing piece of memory? Brilliantly written and I look forward to read more!!!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
It will be explained as the story advances. I'm so pleased that you liked it. You're very kind. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Well, this really is intriguing to say the least! When I first started reading this I thought I'd found yet another sad, depressing story and didn't want to read about someone else's pain, even though well written! (I've had Chronic Fatigue Syndrome for 26 years & have really been going through a rough patch lately & am currently bad with a kidney infection; the pain was unbearable a few days ago but, having said that - not for sympathy! - I wanted to tell you how well you had described the distress Severus was suffering at the beginning; your descriptive powers are amazing!)
Anyway, I'm really trying to tell you how good I think this story is and that I wait with bated breath for the next chapter!
I'm always so pleased when someone decides to explain that Severus did not actually die on the floor of the shrieking shack after Nagini's bite. (Or maybe he did - I'll keep reading!) Like so many fans, I've just never been happy with the whole thing, especially the fact that he seemed to be 'abandoned' there! :-)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I've had some experiences with horrible physical pain. The description of his ordeal comes from there. His circumstance will be explained more as the story goes on. I wanted to start with his pain, and then come to something that he's never had before. I wondered how someone who's never known love and peace would respond if they were suddenly thrust upon him. Thanks so much for your lovely review, you are so kind! I hope you conitnue to enjoy the story! Next chapter should be up soon! *hugs*Rhiannon
Wow, that was fun. Is he dead or alive I wonder. Can't wait for more
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I promise to explain as it all unfolds, dear. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. *hugs*Rhiannon
I'm intrigued. More please.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I'll have the next chapter up soon. I'm so glad you enjoyed the first bit! Thanks so much for leaving a review. *hugs* Rhiannon
I've seen that movie. It was... thought provoking. I rather enjoyed it. So, what's going on? Are they both dead? Is he hallucinating? Will he live? Lots of questions. Can't wait for answers!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I will do what I can to answer your questions in the coming chapters, promise! There are actually a few films that had an impact on the turns of this story. I'll have to wait to reveal them later, sorry! Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing!!! I hope you continue to enjoy. *hugs*Rhiannon
Ok, I'm not sure what dimension this is in...but keep it up!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
All will be explained in the coming chapters. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. It means so much to me! *hugs*Rhiannon
Rhiannon! You're back--and with what a mystifying premise! I can't wait for the explanation! Is this his version of heaven? Is he dreaming? Is he in an alternate ro parallel universe of some kind? Time Travel? I'm wholly puzzled, and wholly intrigued. Very much looking forward to more!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Thanks so much! I'm so glad you've enjoyed the opening. Sadly, I can't answer your questions right now, but as the story unfolds, you'll find out. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! More to come very soon...*hugs* Rhia
The mention of a painted turkey was very funny. This was a very annoying lol and wonderful story. My goodness what twists and turns. The ending was pretty satisfying. Awesome job.
I enjoyed your epilogue. It was good to see our heroes develope a strong relationship. I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for this story.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my little fic! I will most definitely be back soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Yea! And there was great rejoicing.
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Before or after eating Sir Robin's minstrels?? LOL Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing! =] I'm glad you enjoyed it. *hugs*Rhiannon
that was a first rate story! thanks so much
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I'm so pleased that you liked it. I had a great time writing it. Thanks also for your consistent reviews. The encouragement has been great. Thanks so much! *hugs*Rhiannon
For some reason I missed this story till now. I read the whole thing and must say this was wonderful....well done
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you found it, and enjoyed it as well! Thanks for taking the time to let me know!! *hugs*Rhiannon
yeah! nice epi - thanks for all of your hard work on this piece - loved your writing!!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Thank you so much! I really loved writing this. Thanks also for reviewing! =]*hugs*Rhiannon
wonderful!And the only complaint I have is that the story is over! I could easily have enjoyed several (dozen) more chapters!Looking forward to whatever lovely story you have percolating out there for us next!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Thanks! It was really hard for me to stop writing. There's a 'sequel' that keeps nagging at me, and I may see how far I can get with it. I'm not sure what I'll do next, but I will be back! Thank you so much for your continued support and encouragement! *hugs*Rhiannon
I find it funny that he gave such good advice to Harry, yet seemed to almost blow it... again! But luckily, he didn't. Very nice ending to a wonderful story, rhiannon!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Thanks so much! Yes, it's the old 'do as I say' schtick! He nearly pushed her away, again, but this time with extremely honourable intentions. In trying so hard not to muck things up, he nearly did. That's life!! I'm so pleased that you liked the story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
I have just discovered your story, and I love it. I have tears in m eyes after this chapter. I have a question, though...how did all of this time demension stuff happen? I can't figure that one out.
this story!
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! The alternative life is a bit rough to explain. It's very real to Severus, and something he'll hold onto for the rest of his life. It is also something that was necessary for him. Without that experience, he never would have been able to make his relationship with Hermione work as well as it turned out in the end. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! *hugs*Rhiannon
Very good. Thank you
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and that you took time to let me know!! *hugs*Rhiannon
“Say my name,” he growled. Her breathing became even shallower. “Make me.” Brilliant! :)
Response from rhiannon113 (Author of What Dreams May Come)
Why thank you, my dear!!! I do love a snarky Severus, and I think it's much better when Hermione meets him at his level. Thanks so much for the review, and for all your hard work on such an amazing site! *hugs*Rhiannon