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Forbidden Forest Starting Over
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Starting Over

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9: Part 9

10: Part 10

Starting Over

Southern_Witch_69

85 Reviews   |   85 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )

Romance Slash Alternate Universe Epilogue What Epilogue? Forbidden Forest 15,634 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Albus Severus Potter Harry Potter James Potter (son of Harry) Lily Potter (daughter of Harry) Severus Snape James Potter

To get away for a while, Harry and his children go on holiday to a place where they can find peace and have fun. Little did they know that they would meet up with someone from Harry's past, someone supposedly dead: Severus Snape.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: Part 1

Chapter 2: Part 2

Chapter 3: Part 3

Chapter 4: Part 4

Chapter 5: Part 5

Chapter 6: Part 6

Chapter 7: Part 7

Chapter 8: Part 8

Chapter 9: Part 9

Chapter 10: Part 10


About Southern_Witch_69

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Southern_Witch_69

Member Since 2005  |  144 Stories  |  Favorited by 1,103  |  2,209 Reviews Written  |  5,450 Review Responses

I adore the world of HP.



Thanks for stopping by. I'm off to stir my cauldron.

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10/10

MoonRaven

that was beautiful...

10/10

chivalric

Typically Harry, just to say what he feels, even if it is to Snape. Looking foreward to the trip to the lake!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

:) Glad you are liking it.

8/10

feisanna

oh man, miscommunication...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Yeah, makes one want to say, "Wake the hell up!" Hahha

10/10

sinbad

I was surprised Severus used the manatees needing a bit of protection to get Harry to agree to going to the lake.  Severus is still a Slytherin after all.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Uh-huh. Sly, that. :)

10/10

potterbrat

Oh, that Snape.  He'll "say the word."  I just know it.  Great job.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Let's hope so! :)

10/10

Muggline

*sigh* I hate this "suffering in nobility" crap.... But at least it's very well written ;-)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Ah well. Hehe... It's got to be done. ~grin~

10/10

Anonymous

Getting closer... will Severus find the courage before the Potters leave, though?

Author's Response: One can only hope! More up in a few hours.

0/10

rhiannon113

Isn't it funny when silence is misconstrued? I find this a really odd pairing, but you're doing a graet job of getting me completely wrapped up in their relationship so I forget 'who' it is! LOL

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Thanks! I appreciate that compliment. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Thanks! I appreciate that compliment. :)

10/10

chivalric

Excellent, especially mentioning Al and Scorpius. And the six-pack of beer. And the walk at dusk. Now all I wait for is a kiss ;-)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

thanks! :) That just might happen...

10/10

sinbad

I think it's wonderful that they made peace with each other, perhaps they will be able to really live again instead of just existing.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

I'm hoping so. :)

10/10

sinbad

Maybe Harry will invite Severus to visit his home...I bet he has it warded for privacy.  It would be nice for Severus to finish up any loose ends in his past.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

I think Severus should do that, but you know how stubborn he can be. :)

10/10

Anonymous

Ah well... *grins mischievously*

Author's Response: ~grin

10/10

snitchette

I don't think Harry has to worry too much about leaving. You made it clear that Snape wants to go back in England. And I love Al's comments about his father and his new friend. *grin*

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Well, he is thinking about what it would be like to go back, but at this point, he wouldn't. :)  thanks!!!!

10/10

Muggline

Thanks for the wonderful description of the scenery - I could almost feel the breeze...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Oh, I'm so glad! Thanks

8/10

la Chatelaine

There goes the butterfly of happiness again.  The one that when you stop chasing it lights softly on your shoulder. 

Very glad you took this approach. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Thanks ~ :)

0/10

rhiannon113

My goodness you're quick on the draw! But that's good for all of us.  I really liked the bit with Al giving his Dad advice and permission for a romp. Funny how children being to parent us after a while. LOL Your images on New Orleans make me want to visit there. I've never been, but have heard amazing things. Lovely descriptions.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

I've so glad you're enjoying it. It's a great city to visit. Lots of fun things to do. :0

0/10

sunny33

See, Severus, teenagers aren't really that bad. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

LOL Imagine that! :)

10/10

jessajohns

I'm really enjoying this story.  I like how you have the story switch back and forth between the two points of view so we can see what each is thinking.  And I'm enjoying the relationship you are building between Harry and Severus.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

thank you very much. :)

10/10

snitchette

As ever, this is fantastic reading material. I like very much how it's written, alternating between Harry's and Severus' point of view. And I guess Harry's relief about Sev's feeling regarding homosexuality has nothing to do with how he thinks oh his family...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Teehee... I just had to get that out there. :)

10/10

potterbrat

YES!!  We're getting somewhere with these two.  Nice ploy with the AP/SM match.  That'll spin the wheels for the Snarry.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Thanks! :)

10/10

Muggline

So Severus is not opposed to homosexuality. Interesting...

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Not at all. :)

0/10

rhiannon113

Bubba Gump?? Too cute? Can they go for a sail on 'Jenny 1' as well? That's one of my favourite films, nice name drop.  Their relationship as friends is so sweet, I'm almost loathe for it to become more. (I often feel this way about hetero-couples as well) Though I'm glad you're giving them such nice build-up, much more 'real' that way. 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

It's a real restaurant in New Orleans. My son gets his food served in a little cardboard Jenny. Hahaha!! It's amazing. I wonder if they have a link online? Hmmm. I can drag up some pictures and send to you. The whole thing has the Forrest Gump theme. If you need the waiter, you show a little sign on the table that says "Stop, Forrest!" If you don't need him, you keep it on the side that says, "Run, Forrest, Run!" Hahaha!

Response from rhiannon113 (Reviewer)

Is it a chain or just the one in New Orleans? It sounds brilliant. "Shrimp soup, shrimp sandwich, shrimp and potatoes..."

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

It's a chain as far as I can tell. I just looked it up. I can't give a live link through here, but I'll email it to you.

0/10

Anonymous

You know, the idea that Harry could be "Lily all over" for Severus never crossed my mind bevor - but it's simply brilliant. Of course he could, if Severus would simply allow it, and you show so nicely how well this can be and how profitable for both of them. But what puzzles me now after your musings is that Severus never before thought about Petunia's bringing up Harry - after all, he DID know her and Vernon, better than everybody else, too. If this wasn't again something JKR simply didn't think about, it must be some sign under how much pressure Severus really was.
It's lovely to see Harry's children being so sympathetic. Am I right to suppose that Harry didn't mention Albus' orientation for nothing? *smirks*

The Bubba Gump Seafood is cool!


Author's Response: I remember once in canon he almost seemed to sympathize with Harry when he asked "to whom did the dog belong" in reference to Marge's dog chasing him up the tree and the others laughing. When I found out that he knew her and knew the bitch she is, why didn't he ever think that Harry was probably treated like dirt? So, thought I'd try to mention that. :)

Bubba Gump Seafood is a great place to eat! YUMMMM

9/10

chivalric

I missed Snape's POV in this chapter, but it was good nevertheless!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

We'll have all Snape in the next. :)

0/10

peppermint

I'm really enjoying this - I had to go cheat and read it all at Snapelyholidays b/c I was impatient, LOL! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)

Hahaha! No problem. I'm guilty of doing that in the past for other stories as well. :) Glad you like it!

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