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Starting Over
Southern_Witch_6985 Reviews | 7.12/10 (85 Ratings, 0 Likes, 27 Favorites )
To get away for a while, Harry and his children go on holiday to a place where they can find peace and have fun. Little did they know that they would meet up with someone from Harry's past, someone supposedly dead: Severus Snape.
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Reviews for Starting Over
He is putting two and two together, just hasn't got to four yet! :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Yep! Hahaha
I'd like to be there when they'll bump into each other. Actually I'm sure I will. As ever, you're a wonderful writer. I can feel the underlying presence of bitterness, loneliness and sadness, but I can also see hope too. Hope for comfort, companionship and maybe something else if life is willing.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Yep. Bwahahahaa That's coming up very soon! :)Hey, thank you so much. I appreciate this feedback.
Feel like I've tripped over a door sill and fallen into a neighbor's apartment--don't know exactly how I got here or whether I really want to stay--but it looks interesting.
Maybe I'll just hide and watch, perhaps I'll get lucky.
It's the wet heat that does it, you know.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
LOL Thanks. I think. :)
Nice start...I can't wait to see what happens when the past and present collide.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thanks! Coming soon
Hehee - got to bookmark this one!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Cool!
I love the voice you've given this. Well done. You might even convince me to enter the world of Snarry yet, LOL :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Oooh! How cool that would be. :) You could do it such justice. I can see them meeting in a balcony at a concert or something... ~grinladyinthecloak's response: You, my love, are positively evil.Got a slightly more detailed prompt than meeting in a balcony at a concert or something? The something just somehow doesn't cut it for me...
A flower shop is a good cover. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Definitely. I'd never have imagined him there. Ahahaha
really interesting - i'll keep reading. Can't wait for your take on New Orleans
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Excellent. Hope you like it. Have you ever been to New Orleans?
Response from feisanna (Reviewer)
Ha! I can't wait for the mtg - I'm sure there'll be quite the double-takes and some miscommunication. But I'm really intrigued. And yes, I've been to New Orleans, I spent a week there just a few months before Katrina. I'd like to get back though some day - it was an amazing trip.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Awesome. It's changed a great deal since then in some places, but the part that tourists visit most (the quarter, bourbon, etc.) remained untouched mostly. :)
I loved this story. It's amazing. It seems to sweet and happy.
Signed,
CheyRain
I'm new to this ship. But the way you write it, is very convincing.
And this story isn't even very AU or EVE...
No smut necessary to make it a great story.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thanks so much. I appreciate that! :)
It must have been a hard thing for Molly to see her beloved daughter replaced by none other than Severus Snape.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Uh-huh. I'd think she's disappointed.
It was good without the smut. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thank you!
I have no words other than I like, I wish it could go on, but I think they deserve their peace.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thank you! :)
Indeed, but it's really "More fool them." I sincerely hope James gets his wish!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
:) thank you
So glad that Severus pulled his shit together and went back to England.Thanks for sharing this lovely story. I loved the way you balanced their points of view but resolved with Albus Severus.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thank you very much. I also thought Albus Severus should be the one to tell the final part.
I LOVED that Severus referred to his departure as 'gliding'. Snort.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Hehehe...
Kudos for not making Snape a raven. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Yeah, I was like "no way..." I've just seen that a lot. :)
LOL. I should have guessed that Severus wasn't paranoid without cause.Hilarious that the first thing out of Harry's mouth is denying defecation.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Snerk! :)
I love Snape's sense of foreboding.The woman laughing about the shitty starling seems familiar. :)
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
lol Does it?
Ha, I was sure that he would come to his senses. A very nice and satisfying ending - for everyone involved, I guess.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thank you.
Very nice. I like that there was no smut. I think the relationship was stronger without it. I like the last bit in Al's POV. I think that gave a nice fullness to it. One thing it did notice: he says that the photo taken in the states had the four of them, and then a sixth person joined them. Should it be the "fifth" person? I might have mis-read, but just wanted to mention. Absolutely lovely, and moving!!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thanks for that. I didn't explain it well. I meant that a sixth person now graced their photos on the wall (the original five included ginny), but it came out cheesy. I've fixed it to see a new person instead. LOL
Aww...it all ended so lovely. Tied with a neat little bow. Thanks for the tale
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thanks ~ties the knot in the bow~ :)
Very nice story. I enjoyed it very much -- even without the smut. Good Luck on your next project. JoAnne
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thank you very much. :)
You know this doesn't need the smut. It is beautiful and poetic... a tribute to survival and how love is supposed to come from friendship.
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
thanks for that! :)
I don't think it needed smut at all. It was wonderful and perfect!
Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Starting Over)
Thank you! I worried about that. :)