I'm glad she responded to Remus.  She's such a mess with all of those injuries...

I'm worried at what Severus will find.  Three months is a long time to be held hostage.

What a payment for her trying to help.  I feel bad for her, I know what she did was reckless but the price she is paying is steep.

Well, crap, now what will Hermione do?  It is a pity she didn't think ahead when she looked at that book.

Oh, I bet Severus will be royally pissed when he finds out.Nice pace in this chapter.  I'm inclined to like the story simply because it's AU.  I never did like how book 7 turned out.

Great idea!  I can say that out of all the stories I've read about how to kill Voldemort, this is the first one that atom bombs were mentioned.  I like how Hermione extrapolated Dumbledore's idea of love working coming from our blood to use against Voldemort.  Hope that they are able to work it all out.The first scene with Hermione standing out in the rain reminds me of V for Vendetta when Evie has just come out of 'captivity' and is standing outside looking out at the London skyline.  I don't know if you've seen that or not, but you should watch it, it's a powerful scene.Looking forward to the next chapter.  =)

what an interesting concept!  great update.  thanks so much

Clever idea, Herms! :)

So sad that she'll never be able to have her own children.  Yet another torture from Lucius.  One that will never go away.  Tha man needs to be skinned alive... really.

The two men are equally as concerned but manifest their concern in completely differebnt ways. :)

I feel bad for Hermione, never getting to have her own kids.  Glad that she isn't carrying Lucius' bastard kid, but still bad that she won't be able to have one of her own.Remus and Snape are doing their best to make sure Hermione gets better, even if Remus is a bit overprotective.Looking forward to the next chapter. =)

evil bastards, indeed.  what a sad update for hermione.  thanks so much

Oh poor Hermione!! That's positively horrid. Surely Severus will know a way to sort her out?? Excellent!

Wow!  Thanks for the timely update!  love where you are going with this - can't wait to see the next chapter!  Really enjoyed the SS comment on Lupin - glad I'm not the only one who thinks he's just a big girl!  :-)  Thanks for sharing your work

she is strong, just as i would have expected.  wonderful update.  thanks so much

Good chapter. Severus acting nice and wanting to get away before he acted more nice? So true to form. I cannot wait to read what is next.

What a sad chapter - Her cowering in the corner - so distraught and confused. It was a very good description of how someone would be if they survived what she had.

Three months - She will never be the same. Poor Hermione and poor Severus - I hope Malfoy gets his come upins

Lucius is in this piece is a true and utter monster. I cannot wait to see how you get Hermione out of this one and what she will be if she survives...

Oh crap she jumped straight into the frying pan. Severus was right to be wary and Hermione cannot help but snoop a little... who wouldn't? I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Your Severus is running true to form. snarky mean profectionist - we just love him so this way. I cannot wait to see what happens and for some reason I feel that Hermione is going to be breaking the rules- Yippie great chapter.

Well, that's one approach to counselling, isn't it?

Uh oh, I guess Lucius Malfoy will have to watch where he goes - and it's a good thing.

My god, Lucius will be torn to bits. how amazing. =]

Good for Remus for being so frank with the Order.  If they can't keep their pity away, they shouldn't see her.  At least not now!  At least she's healing physically.  I'm sure there will be many ups and downs mentally, poor kid.