Dark Master
Chapter 2 of 22
EchoLynnWhile Harry and Ron are hunting down the remaining Horcruxes, Hermione is training to be a Potions master with none other than Severus Snape. Tensions are high, but their working together is imperative. Events follow that turn the unlikely partnership toward a very unique and strong friendship. Is it possible for the Gryffindor know-it-all to tame the feared Potions master?
Severus Apparated into the usual clearing just outside the hidden meeting place. He nodded knowingly at the hidden Death Eaters who stood guard around the clearing as he pulled his mask out of his pocket and slipped it over his face. As he walked to the hidden cellar door that led to the bleak and depressing dungeons of a long-forgotten castle, he focused his mind on his Occlumency shields, making sure to plant the "useful" information in front of the shield, should the Dark Lord try to read his thoughts. He could never be too careful about such things. As he made his way down the slippery staircase and through the moist hallways of the dank dungeon, he thought briefly of his "conversation" with Hermione earlier. He knew she was right...he really needed to show her the proper ways and the right locations for harvesting the special ingredients, but he also knew that it would have to be planned carefully. Suddenly he cringed at the knowledge that he'd left his "Dark" journal on his desk without warding it. He could only hope that, especially after that particular conversation, she would not notice its presence. Unbeknownst to her, it was the journal that he used in his Death Eater persona. He had to have extensive proof of his "hard" work for the Dark Lord's cause, and he made sure that it appeared to be every bit a journal dedicated to the Dark Lord's purposes.
He had, of course, a real journal that housed his real work, including the antidotes to the horrible potions he was forced to brew during his subterfuge. He started to worry when he remembered how easily she'd let their "conversation" go to continue her assigned work. A little too quickly, as if she was going to put thought into the situation despite my instructions to the contrary. I know her Gryffindor ways all too well; if she ever got hold of the "Dark" location map, she would walk straight into Voldemort's hands, he thought with increasing worry. As he approached the main chamber for the meeting, he cut off that line of thought. He couldn't risk worrying about that now. Shields and proof of "devotion" in place, he pushed the door open and walked forward, crawling the last few feet to kiss his Dark master's robes.
"Rise, Severus. Take your place beside me. We have interesting news to celebrate this evening," the snake-like man hissed at him. Once Severus was standing in his place, looking devoted and important as one of his rank should look, Voldemort turned to his many Death Eaters who were gathered that night. "My friends, it seems we have reason to celebrate this night," he commented as he felt the anticipation rise from his most loyal and high ranking Death Eaters.
Severus observed briefly that there were only eleven at this meeting, which meant it had to be big news. Severus turned his attention back to Voldemort.
As he started walking around the circle, he said, "It seems your dear brother Lucius has finally cracked the Head Unspeakable. Very soon we shall see what meagre plans the Ministry have against me. You should all congratulate Lucius for his well planned and powerful Imperius, which will soon reap great rewards...and I daresay fun...for you all." Voldemort smiled a sinister smile that evoked a very strong feeling indeed at this news.
Revulsion.
But Severus bowed his head and projected happy thoughts like the rest of the mindless monsters who filled the room.
Voldemort took a moment to randomly read his servants' minds, conveniently skipping Severus as he chose his prey. Once he was satisfied that the few he checked were truly excited at the thought of the revels that lay ahead, he slithered back to his chair, which might as well have been a throne for the grandness of it. He clapped and motioned with a mere flick of his hand for those who were present to depart, saying, "Join your lesser brothers in the hall, if you will. Macnair was so kind as to gather a few pieces of entertainment for you. Enjoy," he cackled as they made their way to the great hall across from the main chamber. Severus started to follow the others so he could make his rounds. He wanted to get out of there as soon as possible. He was nearly to the door when his Dark master called for him. "Severus, come here for a moment," he called.
Severus walked back toward Voldemort and started to kneel to kiss his robes once more, but Voldemort signalled that it wasn't necessary. "How may I be of service, my lord?" Severus asked with measured reverence.
"You have not informed me of the Depreciare Potion's progress of late. Tell me, how is it going?" Voldemort asked him with a penetrating look as he casually invaded Severus's mind.
Severus, knowing he was supposed to pretend ignorance at this invasion, spoke clearly as if he didn't know what the Dark Lord was doing. "It's coming along well, I think. I've tested it several times on the wands you so graciously procured for me. There's a hitch in the sequencing of the ingredients, unfortunately, so I have to take it step by step, testing the possible variations in the order in which the ingredients should be added. I'm confident I have the right ingredients; it just needs to be perfected as far as the steps go. I'm sorry I haven't accomplished this sooner, my lord," he said, starting to kneel as if really ashamed. He knew, though, that his act was perfect.
"No need to kneel before me, Severus. I'm quite pleased that you've figured it out thus far. I know that you are truly close...I can see it. It's something I admire in you, this need for perfection. I would expect nothing less from my Potions master. Let me know if you need any more of the ingredients; I daresay you might have depleted your stores quite a bit in this perfecting," he said.
Severus bowed his head respectfully. "I am low on a few things, my lord. But I would rather gather the ingredients myself, if I may. I mean no disrespect, but the flux-weed Lucius brought me last time was not picked at the right hour. It's best picked at midnight, at the full moon. That pouch was quite weak and set me back a few tries; I believe it was picked an hour or so too soon," he said humbly, bowing and kissing Voldemort's robes anyway. It was always a dangerous thing, to accuse a fellow Death Eater of any sort of lack, especially one of the same rank.
Voldemort assessed him a moment before saying, "I understand, Severus. I shall not leave the important ingredients to him any more. From now on, if you wish someone to help you, tell them your instructions. I give you leave to order whomever you need to gather what you need. Be sure to tell me if they fail to do so correctly." Severus bowed and thanked him graciously. With another flick of his hand, Voldemort indicated that he was done with him. Severus kept the happy bounce that his feet wanted to do out of his walk as he thought of the punishment that bastard Malfoy would get for this. He knew damn well that Lucius knew better than to pick something like that too early. He also knew that Lucius would think him too cowardly to bring Lucius's lazy vindictiveness to their Dark Lord's attention. This would be a fun night indeed. He might stay a little longer than usual.
As excited as he was over the punishment Lucius Malfoy would obviously receive, he forgot momentarily about the journal and Hermione.
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Hermione paid the shopkeeper for the basic ingredients she had picked out as carefully as if Severus had been hovering over her shoulder the whole time. She shrank the package instantly and carefully placed it inside her knapsack. She had re-read a few chapters that explained the basic points of harvesting as she waited to see if Severus would return soon. Usually he was either gone for a few hours or, if he didn't return that soon, it was usually a day or more before he did. She assumed he would arrive tomorrow when she heard the clock chime three hours later. Hermione walked quickly to the kitchen and told Remus where she was going. Since it was around three in the afternoon, he had no reason to assume she was lying when she said she would be back in a few hours from her errands in Diagon Alley.
Leaving the apothecary shop, Hermione walked swiftly to the Apparation point near the back door of the Leaky Cauldron. Closing her eyes, she envisioned the creek bridge that she knew was a short walk from the meadow where she would find Severus's hidden cache of nature. The second she appeared on the bridge she swiftly pulled her wand out of her sleeve and cast a Disillusionment Charm. She was not stupid, after all, and at least if she was lectured later about her impromptu harvest trip, she could say she took precautions. She looked around her to see which direction was generally northwest of this point, and having calculated the sun's position, she set off on a fast-paced walk through the woods. Of the many books she had read, half of them were Muggle-related. As she listened closely to her surroundings while she walked, she thought of the Muggle self-awareness colour system. Basically there were certain colours that reflected dangers and the need for caution in every situation. Out in the middle of nowhere, alone, walking through these woods with which she was unfamiliar, she knew her colour would be at least orange. Thinking of that colour, the information flashed before her eyes.
Orange...Outside of your comfort zone, in an unknown area. Be aware. Keep a keen eye on your surroundings.
So, gripping her wand more tightly, she continued to trek through the woods for another fifteen minutes until she finally saw a clearing ahead. She slowed down and stopped behind a large tree, carefully looking the whole area over, listening for any sound, any movement. Anything. After several tense minutes of silence, she felt it safe to start her search of the meadow for the essential ingredients. Right away she spotted a patch of white willow. She smiled happily as she pulled her knapsack off her back and felt around for the special clippers she had brought, along with the pouches for her harvested herbs. Carefully, with her wand now back up her sleeve, she started harvesting the white willow as she remembered seeing it done in the moving pictures of her book. She smiled to herself again as she clipped the last stem. She knew there was no way Severus could criticise her work. It was textbook-perfect. While Muggle white willow was from a tree, magic white willow was a small weed that glowed with a white mist during the short time each month when there was no moon.
Hermione walked on and contained the urge to squeal when she spotted the red clover. This was a powerful natural ingredient, very delicate in nature, that was the main stimulant in Blood-Replenishing Potions. She was so excited at the large amount of these flowers that she dropped her guard completely. She knew it was very hard to find these, and also difficult to harvest them without damaging their potency. She hardly breathed as she concentrated on carefully taking the clippings, placing them reverently in a special pouch that was spelled to cushion, thus retaining the natural shape of whatever ingredient was placed in it.
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Alecto Carrow signalled to Amycus Carrow the second she noticed something unseeing, clipping some weeds and then they would disappear. She knew that someone was in the meadow this time, and it wasn't Snape. Snape wouldn't hide himself if he were here as they'd been told he would be. Whoever was in the meadow was Disillusioned. And after watching closely for a few minutes, it was clear that someone was there.
Amycus cussed as he made his way over to his sister. This was the fourth time she had signaled him this evening, and he was getting bloody tired of her jumpiness. As he walked up to her quietly, he was about to start cussing a blue streak when she slapped her hand quietly over his mouth and turned his head toward the meadow in front of them. He nearly bit her hand when he finally saw what she was calling him about. Carefully removing her hand he leaned over to her ear, still watching the Disillusioned stranger clipping away at the weeds, and said, "It's not Snape. But it's got to be someone he knows. He found this place, and besides himself, Lucius, and the Dark Lord, we're the only ones who know of it." He paused for effect before adding, "Unless he told one of his Order pals."
Alecto smiled hugely as they both prepared to capture this unknown person. Lucius Malfoy had "asked" them, meaning paid them a great deal in Galleons, to watch this place and see if they could catch Snape, claiming that Snape was not their master's spy but truly a spy for the Order. Lucius wanted proof that what he knew himself was true. He would be Avada'ed as quickly as he could blink if he didn't have said proof when he brought this to the Dark Lord's attention. The Callows were told that if Snape was not doing anything that could implicate him, they must find a way to ruin his ingredients; that way he would at least be punished and lowered a peg or two in the ranks if he screwed up the Debasing potion, which they knew nothing about, of course. Both of them smiled at the thought of the additional Galleons that had been promised if they caught whoever it was.
They approached quietly from two different directions toward each other and their prey. When they were both close enough, they slowly raised their wands together and gave a sudden shout that made Hermione drop her knapsack. She heard the word "Stupefy!" seconds before she felt the impact of the twin spells.
As the powerful jets of red light hit her from both sides at once, Hermione gasped loudly. She felt as if she were being squeezed through a vise-like grip, and then the pain became too much. As she fell to the ground, she wondered briefly if Snape would be able to find these herbs she'd collected for him, and then she knew nothing but blackness.
A/N: I hope you liked this update. More to come soon. Please read and review! *HUGS*
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228 Reviews | 6.18/10 Average
Great story. Loved it. Thank you.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
Very enjoyable story:) Loved how you had Severus "court" Hermione slowly, only kissing her for ages and not rushing them into the sack as so often happens in stories.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Yeah, I hate it when its rushed. Its hard enough for people to beleive you know? Severus strikes me as the type that likes to take his time with things... ;) Thanks for reading!
Wonderful ending, glad everything was as it should be.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much ;)
A little more romance at the end would have been appreciated.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Lol. Well, i just did'nt want to go overboard... you know?
Goody, goody, goody, the end is almost hear for Voldemort. I can hardly wait.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Lol, thank you ;)
I hope seeing the test subjects does'nt cause Hermione to have a set back on her recovery.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)
Ron really must grow us, he is such a prat. Harry is less annoying, thank goodness. They both need to learn to mind their own business.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Yes, they do. Thank you so much for reading ;)
I wonder what Lucius Malfoy believes he will gain by sending that memory to Harry?
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Well, he is evil, beyond that, you'll just have to keep reading lol. *HUGS* Thanks for reviewing ;)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Well, he is evil, beyond that, you'll just have to keep reading lol. *HUGS* Thanks for reviewing ;)
I loved this story, but Im slightly confused by the banner though, are they congratulating them on being honored & referring to the conceive potion which allowed them to be born?Im sad there was nothing about hermione totally shooting ron down & what ensues when the boys do find out about her & severus but oh wellWell done anyway! great story.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
The Banner if for them being Honored... ;) They grew up knowing what their mom and dad worked on ;)Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)
I like the way you picked up after HBP and provided an alternative story. Your version is unique and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
what a delightful end to a super story! thank you so much for sharing you time, talent, and vision. mucho smoochies
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
LOl... thank you so much. I'm thrilled to hear such positive remarks... not only does it help with the FanFiction plot bunnies, but it also helps with my Original Novel that I'm writing for NaNo! *HUGS*
Hi! Just to let you know I'm copying the entire story to read at leisure and will review as I go along. The premise is intriguing and you've had tons of reviews, so those are good signs! Am looking forward to savoring it.
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Thank you so much, I don't mind at all. I actually print out all my faves and put them in heavy duty binders and add them to my bookshelf lol. Thanks for reading! Look forward to your reviews!
An excellent ending to a wonderful story.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much! For the review... for reading it to the end... and for every wonderful comment! I hope you like my new Sevmione as much as this one! *HUGS*
There are many things to be glad about with this ending. I'm so glad they got married and had children. I'm so glad they were recognized for at least one of their many contributions to the Wizarding world. I'm glad their children are thoughtful and loving of their parents.This may sound strange, but I am especially glad that Hermione killed Lucius in a painless way. She did the right thing. If anyone had the right to kill him, it was her. But she did it without stooping to his level. She did it for the sole purpose of preventing him from hurting anyone else. No malice means no bad karma for Hermione.Well done.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! So many times, I read storys where the bad guys gets it good, and while I appriciate those endings, I love the good way better, you know? Thank you for reading and reviewing, and for sticking with MOD till the end. I hope that you like my newest Sevmione just as much! *HUGS*
A wonderful story!
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Thank you! Check out my newest Sevmione! *HUGS*
I'm glad that Hermione was able to make sure that Lucius Malfoy would never be able to harm anyone ever again.Yay! for Carina and Brian Snape. Severus and Hermione have such a beautiful family. As a parent myself, I know how much it would have meant to Severus and Hermione to see the "private family ceremony" their children had made for them.Manifestation of Dreams has been a dream of a story to follow from beginning to end! Thank you for sharing it with us!!!Beth
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much for your kind comments, your wonderful reviews, and for sticking with MOD till the end. I hope you like my newest Sevmione just as much, if not more! *HUGS*
I like your feel good ending...thankyou for the fic!xoxo
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No problem! Thank you for reading! And check out my newest Sevmione, its gonna be better the MOD! *HUGS*
Lovely ending! I don't think Hermione could've done it any other way to Malfoy it just wouldn't suit. And, very good of them to share the potion with others instead of just keeping it for themselves!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story... Check out my newest Sevmione, its up as well! *HUGS*
Well done on a brilliant story, Echo. I really loved it.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing to the end. I've enjoyed all of you guys and your comments... But your not without more entertainment *hopefully* lol... My newest Sevemione is already up! *HUGS*
That was one terrific ending to a truly great story.Loved it!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing to the end! Check out my new Sevmione... Its up already! *HUGS*
Ah, a lovely ending. So glad the manifestation of his dreams loves him so.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Yes... me too! Thank you so much for sticking with the story... in case you did'nt know, My newest Sevmione is up and ready! *HUGS*
Yay, so happily ended!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
Cute ending! :)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS* I'm thrilled you liked it!
Great chapter, glad to see they both made it.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUG*S
I love how this story has twisted and turned. Staying busy is an excellent way to get through things, so here's hoping that Hermione stays well and manages to weather the inevitable discussion with the boys. Hermione and Severus' relationship progresses at a natural pace, and I like that about your story.Thank you for providing an excellent read and i can't wait to read more.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much! But its not the complete end of Sevmione's from me... Look out for a new Sevmione fic soon! Also, thank you so much for sticking with this story and reviewing! I love you guys! *HUGS*