Reactions & Success
Chapter 18 of 22
EchoLynnWhile Harry and Ron are hunting down the remaining Horcruxes, Hermione is training to be a Potions master with none other than Severus Snape. Tensions are high, but their working together is imperative. Events follow that turn the unlikely partnership toward a very unique and strong friendship. Is it possible for the Gryffindor know-it-all to tame the feared Potions master?
Harry and Ron were both speechless as they sat there, absorbing the horrible memory. With a sudden rush of anger, Ron leaped off of the bed and rushed down the stairs. He was almost out the back door when Molly hailed him. "Ron, where are you going at this hour? You aren't due to be at the Manor until ten."
Ron stopped and looked back at his mom. Molly grew worried, as she perceived the look of fury that emboldened her son's face. "Ronald, what's wrong?" she asked as Harry came running down the stairs after hurrying through putting on his shoes to catch up to Ron.
Harry walked over to Ron and answered for him. "We're going to confront Hermione. We know what happened to her, and we want to know what's been done about it...besides her keeping it from us!"
Molly paled and sat down. "Harry, Ron, you can't confront Hermione. It was her express wish that you not know, at least not yet. It was her wish to not tell you, not only for her own peace of mind but also for your own. She didn't want you two to do anything... rash."
"What has been done, then? Is Lucius dead?" Ron asked, his voice trembling.
"I believe Severus has taken care of things as best he could. It's a delicate situation all around...Severus has to protect his status, so he couldn't kill Lucius. Lucius is too well protected otherwise," Molly answered carefully, gauging their responses. They looked even angrier.
Harry and Ron went straight for the Floo powder and threw it into the fireplace. First Ron, then Harry stepped into the green flames and shouted, "Prince Manor!"
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"Harry? Ron? What's happened? Are you okay?" Remus asked when he got a good look at their expressions as they stepped out of the flames and carelessly dusted off some of the soot.
Harry didn't even bother to answer but pulled out his wand and sent his Patronus out of the room at breakneck speed. Ron paced back and forth in front of the fireplace.
"Harry?" Remus asked again.
"We'll wait for Snape to get here. I want to speak to him about this since we've been told he was the one to take care of things, as best he could!"
"Ron, what's going on?" asked a frustrated Remus, turning to Ron in an attempt to get some information.
"I'm with Harry...we wait for him," Ron spat in reply.
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Hermione and Severus were just about to start the process of combining their successful Avada base with the Bottled Love when suddenly a stag Patronus leapt into the room and opened its mouth wide with a furious sounding, "Snape, get up here right now!"
Hermione's eyes widened as she listened to the angry resonance of Harry's voice giving such a message. "Wh-what's the matter? Should I come up too?" she asked, worry and suspicion clouding her thoughts. She just knew that it was about what had happened to her.
Severus put down the phial he was holding and swept toward the door. "No. I'll handle this...whatever it may be. I'll be back shortly," he replied as he left the room, unconditional fury etched on his face at the interruption.
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Moments later he entered the room where Harry and Ron waited and slammed the door behind him. He looked as if he could kill them on the spot as he spat, "What in Merlin's name is the meaning of this? Hermione and I were about to start the process of combining the two bases together...a very dangerous step that must not be interrupted. You could have killed us! I specifically stated that no one was to interrupt us today unless the Dark Lord himself was attacking!"
"What happened to Lucius Malfoy after he... assaulted... Hermione? How has he been punished?" Harry demanded, without a single care for Severus' temper.
Severus looked taken aback for a moment. But he was still furious, even more so now that he understood why they had summoned him. "I don't have time for this. Let's just say he'll never again enjoy the company of a woman. That is, at least until he's killed in the final battle...which is one of my personal goals on that eventful day."
Ron looked at Severus and nearly screamed. "You castrated him? That's all? Why didn't you kill him?"
"You stupid child, I did not castrate him. I gave him a potion that in essence kills his libido permanently. And no, I did not kill him because frankly I do not seek death for myself so willingly. To kill him now would be suicide. And I regret that I even have to remind you how keeping me alive is an advantage to us all!"
"Then tell us where we can get to him! We'll do it!" Harry said forcefully.
"Don't be so blatantly immature, Mr. Potter. Surely you realize how well protected Malfoy is. The Dark Lord himself stays at that Manor now and then. He created the wards, which allow only those he chooses to enter the grounds at Malfoy Manor, wards that hold unauthorized trespassers in place. A Cruciatus curse is tied to those wards that can not be released until Malfoy or the Dark Lord himself arrives to see who's been caught. Needless to say, anyone caught in that web will wish they'd been caught because if no one is home they will die of the Cruciatus curse! Furthermore, Malfoy is constantly surrounded by other Death Eaters. So by all means, if you wish for death, give it a try. Otherwise you'll have to wait in line at the final battle to be done with him!" Severus bellowed at them.
"Why do you suddenly care so much? When did you start to care about anyone at all besides yourself?" asked Ron, his face red with anger.
Severus slowly walked toward Ron, a malicious smile twisting his face when he saw the fear in Ron's eyes as he was marched backward into a wall. Severus raised his hand and clasped it tightly around Ron's throat. Harry and Remus started to pry Severus's hand away from Ron, but Severus had put up a shield charm with his free hand too quickly for them to even finish their first steps.
"Don't you dare question me in such a way ever again! I have given my life, and more than your little brain could ever comprehend, to the cause of bringing that bastard down. And if you value your life, you will refrain from running off to attempt to murder Lucius Malfoy. You will not go anywhere near Hermione until you calm down and can speak with her without showing off your utter ignorance and disregard for decent behavior! Do you understand me, Mr. Weasley?" Severus said through clenched teeth. He glared at Harry, next to Ron, and asked him, "Do you understand as well, Mr. Potter?"
Ron nodded his head, avoiding Severus's intense glare. Harry nodded as well.
"Good. Now do not disturb me again unless someone is bleeding to death...or about to be," Severus snapped as he released both his hold on Ron's neck and the shield charm and left the room.
Remus, Harry, and Ron were all quiet for several moments after Severus' departure. "Next time, please speak with me first; that way we can avoid scenes like the one we just witnessed," Remus said carefully as he poured himself a glass of Firewhisky.
Harry and Ron finally sat down. "Fine. Tell us what you know. Are there any lasting... injuries?" Harry asked cautiously.
"If I tell you, will you both promise to keep it to yourselves? Hermione has not shared information about her injuries and the after-effects of her capture with the Order. I'm sure she would still rather not talk about it at all, even if you do know what happened," Remus said. When Harry and Ron both gave him their word, he spelled out in detail everything that had happened, from the moment they realized Hermione was missing to the moment Remus found her asleep in the library after she found out she would never have children.
Harry asked lots of questions, and so did Ron. But after it was mentioned that she could no longer have children, Ron grew quiet and left the talking to Harry and Remus. Harry barely noticed his reaction, but Remus did. It was with a frown on his face that he watched Ron leave the room with Harry so they could start their work on the Portkeys for the day.
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Severus watched Hermione as she chewed her lip nervously while she brewed what appeared to be another batch of the Bottled Love potion. He cleared his throat as he stepped into the room and stated, "I've taken care of the disturbance upstairs. If they know what's good for them, no one will interrupt us again while we attempt to combine the two bases."
"Severus, what did they want? Do...do they know?" Hermione asked, afraid of the answer.
Severus walked over to her and placed his hand on her shoulder, albeit a bit awkwardly. "Hermione, they were going to find out sooner or later. I believe I got through to them, and I don't think they'll go off and do anything rash. I'm sure you'd rather they had found out another way, but Lucius is a very sadistic bastard who will pay for his crimes when the time is right."
Hermione paled. "Lucius was the one to tell them? I thought one of the Order members must have slipped! How did he tell them? Are they okay?"
"Calm down, he sent them a... memory of your capture, in a phial," Severus replied carefully. When she started to cry, he carefully folded her in his arms and just let her cry. As tears poured down her face, soaking the front of his robes, Severus mentally formed a plan to deal with Lucius the next time he was summoned.
After Hermione composed herself, they quietly set about the dangerous task of combining the Avada Base and the Bottled Love.
After two explosions and several melted cauldrons, at four in the morning they finally completed the Avada Bomb successfully. After checking the potion before them, glowing a blinding green color, Hermione squealed and threw her arms around Severus in celebration of their accomplishment. "It's ready! It's going to work, I know it!"
Severus chuckled. "First, I think we should take a small sample and try it out on someone. That way we can be sure it does work before we risk the lives of everyone in the Order."
"You're right, but who?" Hermione asked, frowning as she wondered who they could test it on.
Severus smirked as he set about cleaning up their mess and tidying the lab. "I know the perfect people to test this on. I'll let you know after the next time I'm summoned, and then we'll set up the test in a place where no one will witness it. We wouldn't want the Dark Lord to hear of it. Let's get things cleaned up so we can get a few hours of sleep. I'm sure the Order will want to know about our success so far at tonight's meeting."
Together they finished cleaning the lab and putting things away. After a fairly long goodnight kiss, they both separated and went to their respective beds for a little rest...Hermione with thoughts of Severus and Harry and Ron, Severus with thoughts of his plan to test the potion and get back at Lucius for upsetting Hermione.
A/N:Sorry for the shortness... but this was the place to end the chapter! Please remember to review! *Hugs*
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Latest 25 Reviews for Manifestation Of Dreams
228 Reviews | 6.18/10 Average
Great story. Loved it. Thank you.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
Very enjoyable story:) Loved how you had Severus "court" Hermione slowly, only kissing her for ages and not rushing them into the sack as so often happens in stories.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Yeah, I hate it when its rushed. Its hard enough for people to beleive you know? Severus strikes me as the type that likes to take his time with things... ;) Thanks for reading!
Wonderful ending, glad everything was as it should be.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much ;)
A little more romance at the end would have been appreciated.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Lol. Well, i just did'nt want to go overboard... you know?
Goody, goody, goody, the end is almost hear for Voldemort. I can hardly wait.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Lol, thank you ;)
I hope seeing the test subjects does'nt cause Hermione to have a set back on her recovery.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)
Ron really must grow us, he is such a prat. Harry is less annoying, thank goodness. They both need to learn to mind their own business.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Yes, they do. Thank you so much for reading ;)
I wonder what Lucius Malfoy believes he will gain by sending that memory to Harry?
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Well, he is evil, beyond that, you'll just have to keep reading lol. *HUGS* Thanks for reviewing ;)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Well, he is evil, beyond that, you'll just have to keep reading lol. *HUGS* Thanks for reviewing ;)
I loved this story, but Im slightly confused by the banner though, are they congratulating them on being honored & referring to the conceive potion which allowed them to be born?Im sad there was nothing about hermione totally shooting ron down & what ensues when the boys do find out about her & severus but oh wellWell done anyway! great story.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
The Banner if for them being Honored... ;) They grew up knowing what their mom and dad worked on ;)Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)
I like the way you picked up after HBP and provided an alternative story. Your version is unique and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
what a delightful end to a super story! thank you so much for sharing you time, talent, and vision. mucho smoochies
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
LOl... thank you so much. I'm thrilled to hear such positive remarks... not only does it help with the FanFiction plot bunnies, but it also helps with my Original Novel that I'm writing for NaNo! *HUGS*
Hi! Just to let you know I'm copying the entire story to read at leisure and will review as I go along. The premise is intriguing and you've had tons of reviews, so those are good signs! Am looking forward to savoring it.
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Thank you so much, I don't mind at all. I actually print out all my faves and put them in heavy duty binders and add them to my bookshelf lol. Thanks for reading! Look forward to your reviews!
An excellent ending to a wonderful story.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much! For the review... for reading it to the end... and for every wonderful comment! I hope you like my new Sevmione as much as this one! *HUGS*
There are many things to be glad about with this ending. I'm so glad they got married and had children. I'm so glad they were recognized for at least one of their many contributions to the Wizarding world. I'm glad their children are thoughtful and loving of their parents.This may sound strange, but I am especially glad that Hermione killed Lucius in a painless way. She did the right thing. If anyone had the right to kill him, it was her. But she did it without stooping to his level. She did it for the sole purpose of preventing him from hurting anyone else. No malice means no bad karma for Hermione.Well done.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! So many times, I read storys where the bad guys gets it good, and while I appriciate those endings, I love the good way better, you know? Thank you for reading and reviewing, and for sticking with MOD till the end. I hope that you like my newest Sevmione just as much! *HUGS*
A wonderful story!
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Thank you! Check out my newest Sevmione! *HUGS*
I'm glad that Hermione was able to make sure that Lucius Malfoy would never be able to harm anyone ever again.Yay! for Carina and Brian Snape. Severus and Hermione have such a beautiful family. As a parent myself, I know how much it would have meant to Severus and Hermione to see the "private family ceremony" their children had made for them.Manifestation of Dreams has been a dream of a story to follow from beginning to end! Thank you for sharing it with us!!!Beth
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much for your kind comments, your wonderful reviews, and for sticking with MOD till the end. I hope you like my newest Sevmione just as much, if not more! *HUGS*
I like your feel good ending...thankyou for the fic!xoxo
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
No problem! Thank you for reading! And check out my newest Sevmione, its gonna be better the MOD! *HUGS*
Lovely ending! I don't think Hermione could've done it any other way to Malfoy it just wouldn't suit. And, very good of them to share the potion with others instead of just keeping it for themselves!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the story... Check out my newest Sevmione, its up as well! *HUGS*
Well done on a brilliant story, Echo. I really loved it.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing to the end. I've enjoyed all of you guys and your comments... But your not without more entertainment *hopefully* lol... My newest Sevemione is already up! *HUGS*
That was one terrific ending to a truly great story.Loved it!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing to the end! Check out my new Sevmione... Its up already! *HUGS*
Ah, a lovely ending. So glad the manifestation of his dreams loves him so.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Yes... me too! Thank you so much for sticking with the story... in case you did'nt know, My newest Sevmione is up and ready! *HUGS*
Yay, so happily ended!
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS*
Cute ending! :)
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUGS* I'm thrilled you liked it!
Great chapter, glad to see they both made it.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you! *HUG*S
I love how this story has twisted and turned. Staying busy is an excellent way to get through things, so here's hoping that Hermione stays well and manages to weather the inevitable discussion with the boys. Hermione and Severus' relationship progresses at a natural pace, and I like that about your story.Thank you for providing an excellent read and i can't wait to read more.
Response from EchoLynn (Author of Manifestation Of Dreams)
Thank you so much! But its not the complete end of Sevmione's from me... Look out for a new Sevmione fic soon! Also, thank you so much for sticking with this story and reviewing! I love you guys! *HUGS*