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Memento Mori

1: Prologue

2: The Beginning

3: Meet The Malfoys

4: The One - The Only

5: Kindred Spirits

6: Acts of Charity

7: The Chosen Few

8: Staking The Territories

9: Crime And Punishment

10: The Restless Muse

11: Resigned

12: Playing With The Boys

13: What A Man Can Do

14: A Plain Silver Band

15: An Invitation To Dance

16: Meet The Parents

17: Cygnus Cynical

18: Lucius Gets The Kick

19: Heartbroken

20: Autumn Blues

21: Marked For Life

Memento Mori

Memento

36 Reviews   |   36 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )

Drama Romance Malfoy Manor 60,603 Words 21 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Lucius Malfoy Narcissa Malfoy Severus Snape Andromeda (Black) Tonks Cygnus Black

This story deals with the Malfoy family; it begins with Narcissa Black's first day in Hogwarts and ends with her grandson Scorpius' time in school.

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Chapters (21)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: The Beginning

Chapter 3: Meet The Malfoys

Chapter 4: The One - The Only

Chapter 5: Kindred Spirits

Chapter 6: Acts of Charity

Chapter 7: The Chosen Few

Chapter 8: Staking The Territories

Chapter 9: Crime And Punishment

Chapter 10: The Restless Muse

Chapter 11: Resigned

Chapter 12: Playing With The Boys

Chapter 13: What A Man Can Do

Chapter 14: A Plain Silver Band

Chapter 15: An Invitation To Dance

Chapter 16: Meet The Parents

Chapter 17: Cygnus Cynical

Chapter 18: Lucius Gets The Kick

Chapter 19: Heartbroken

Chapter 20: Autumn Blues

Chapter 21: Marked For Life


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0/10

KingPig

I love the relationship Narcissa shares with Severus!

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KingPig

Ah, sweet little Severus!

10/10

notsosaintly

Lucius is such a Slytherin ... and I love it.  This is one of two stories I've been reading currently that feature Narcissa prominently.  I think I'm beginning to really love this character, see her as a more filled out, and that is really inspiring.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!

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rhiannon113

Hmmm. It occured to me that I am now seeing them as people, not just villians. How odd! I do love Narcissa though, she's the bomb!!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!

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HermioneJeanSnape

This is adorable Lucissa. Positively adorable! Its so cute! You might want to start giving Narcissa fashion sense though, since in canon she's know for it.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!

10/10

Muggline

A very interesting story that gives us much insight into what might have been.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!

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rhiannon113

Hmmm. Lucius is a piece of work! I really love Narcissa as the source of Snape's personality traits. Excellent!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.

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rhiannon113

Hmmm...lots to think about here. I really like your geneology/character introductions for the Blacks.  Very interesting! I adore backstory! Well done.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!

10/10

LoveFenrir

I'm hooked to this story!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!

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rhiannon113

Really interesting taking on the initiation process. I think it was good, the bit about drinking blood was nasty, but Voldemort really isn't the sort for garden parties, is he? It's odd that you've had internet issues, me as well. I was 'off-line' for nearly a week. Horrible isn't it? Glad you're back! =]

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you! I'm glad you found it interesting.Gosh, the horrible internet - at first, I didn't even understand it was a provider problem and didn't complain to them because I thought I had done something wrong when disconnecting the router from the electricity net. Which could have been the root of the problem; I'm useless with technics

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rhiannon113

Severus is running with a dangerous crowd, and Lucius is in better company! It's nice that he dated someone who could call him on his crap. Narcissa is becoming more isolated. In trying harder to control her, her father is driving her away. Very good paradox!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Well, yes, Severus IS running with a dangerous crowd, but so is Lucius, in every other respect than his current girlfriend.As for Narcissa - well, yes, she is distancing herself to a certain degree from her parents, but I'm not so sure whether that's not a good thing. She's nearly 17 now, and in many respects, she's as much a Daddy's Girl as Draco will be a Mummy's (and Daddy's) Boy. I think it'd be healthy for her to emancipate herself a bit Happy New Year!

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HermioneJeanSnape

The, ahem, true and highly inappropriate translation of the Adam and Eve bit is...."When Adam delved *cough* and Eve span, who was then a gentleman?"Teehee. Lovely chapter, poor Lucius! And come on, little Severus (Savvy????) help them along!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Oh, thank you so much for your help! I corrected it straight away!Well, I'm afraid little Savvy (I always thought of him like that, so it was the natural choice for a nickname for the Septuplet) won't be of much help regarding the future romance. He's done his bit, and he wouldn't DARE meddling with other people's business in this respect. No, no, he won't be the cupid in this piece

10/10

jade vert

merry belated christmas! Poor Narcissa and Lucius, they're at cross roads, i wonder when they'll see each other again. Looking forward to the next chappter

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

thank you so much! A merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well!Without giving away too much right now, I think I can safely tell you that they will meet again ;) I'm not sure when I can upload a new chapter because my internet connection at home is faulty, but it should be there in the next two weeks, I guess. Once more: thank you!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Starcrossed lovers....ah, poor things. Can't help feeling sorry for them, even though we know they're going to end up being snobby twits.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

thank you!!!!Well, even snobby twits can have a love life, eh?

0/10

rhiannon113

The contrast between the two handling their grief is wonderful. Narcissa's situation with her mother is quite sad. Lord Moldy-shorts has made his appearance at last...I don't suppose you could have written it without him, but I was still disappointed to havve Lucius fall in with him. Amazing as always. Happy Christmas, Rhia

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much, and a belated Merry Christmas and a somewhat more appropriate Happy New Year to you, too!Yes, well, it was not really possible to have Lucius not joining up, given later events... Sorry to have disappointed you

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Aww, poor Lucius. Karma came back to bite him! How will he soften down old Cygnus, hmmm? Let alone Narcissa...

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

First of all: Being no native speaker of English, I've never heard that phrase before, and it just nails it As for the softening - Narcissa is bound to cool down soon enough; her main reason for reacting so viciously was the emotional strain she was going through. As for Cygnus... Well, he's got two alienated daughters already. In the end, he has no strength to deny his darling child her happiness.

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rhiannon113

How have you done it? I feel so bad for Lucius, I even managed an *awww* during Mr. Black's rant. He's meant to be a deranged monster...now you've gone and made him human, for shame!  LOL Really lovely. The family dynamics give a real insight into future behaviours. I like the multi-faceted story. It reminds me of a twisted food-chain! Really nice.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you!!!!I'm really, really happy to hear you say that Lucius is human; it was my aim to achieve this without denying his negative traits of character. It's far more interesting to write, and I can only hope it makes for interesting reading as well.

10/10

notsosaintly

Bottom line, men will never understand women.  Well ... poor guy really had no inkling of the circumstances behind the behaviour, but really, men will never understand women.  Nope.  They might think they do (at times), but that's only what we let them believe so they feel more manly.Lovely chapter.  Looking forward to the next one ... in fact, going right now to find it and stick my name on it in queue so I get to read it first.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much; I'm so happy you liked it!!!Yes, well, what is true for all men is particularly true for Lucius. Empathy really isn't his strong suit to begin with, although in this case, he didn't have a chance of seeing it coming. What's worse - this time, he'll take her rejection seriously. Her father drove the point home that, especially after Andromeda's 'downfall' (of which Lucius will of course hear later on), Narcissa would never seriously contemplate a guy like Lucius. The tragic aspect about all this is that now he will try to find something else to do and pursue...

Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)

That is tragic, indeed.  However, conflict is necessary to keep readers interested in a story.  It is why stories like this attract readers' attention and makes them want to come back for more.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

You know, you're right. It's just that, while writing, I rather followed the more selfish approach, not thinking so much of the potential reader, but what *I* enjoy writing. In fact, I was always rather afraid that I'm procrastinating too much so that many readers might lose patience and interest.

0/10

rhiannon113

Thank you for mentioning me, I'm truly glad to review for you! And utterly addicted to this story!This was really interesting. I was extremely sad, and feeling so sorry for the Black family. It's amazing how a look at someone's troubles can make you empathize with them. Brilliant. I wonder who her visitor might be? Hmm....  

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank youuuuu! I'm really glad to hear you say that you can emphasise with them in this situation; it was my aim to achieve that, but I can never be sure whether it works out like planned. Thanks for letting me know!Ah, the visitor...

10/10

notsosaintly

Excellent 'argument scene', that was.  Poor Cissy, though.  She got trampled on, and it really hurts not to be Daddy's Little Girl anymore.

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much!!I must admit that I had fun writing the argument though; I find there is something compelling about the inner logic of the dynamics that such fights take when regarded from the point of view of each participant.Yeah, poor Cissy. That's what you get for making whoopee

10/10

jade vert

awhh, i was hoping for a better night for lucius and narcissa..

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Well, they must not have it too easily, eh?

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Oh, dear lord, its hit the fan....poor Andy. And when on earth shall Narcissa and Lucius get together, since it seems they shall no longer both attend Hogwarts?

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Oh, thing will be getting a tad worse still, I'm afraid. As for Lucius and Narcissa - well, since the outcome of their romance is so totally well-known, I thought I'd have to keep up the tension by separating them for a bit. Which will also give Narcissa the chance to see what was in her grasp so long, and has so utterly slipped away from her. I believe in the saying that one can sometimes only see a thing's true value when losing it.

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rhiannon113

Well, after seeing the patrilineal line of the Malfoy family, Draco is an absoltue gem! LOL I think it was interesting that both of them are used to being rather dignified in public, and were wrong-footed by their families in this case. It's a clever way you've given them a common ground. I was also intrigued at the mentilon of Narcissa's academic idol. I honestly thought you were refering to Dumbledore... excellent!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much!!!Yeah, Narcissa is a bit of an intellectual groupie. She and Dumbledore might have been great friends if she were a hundred years older, but as things are, and with her knowing only his 'old' self, she'd rather idolise brilliant Tom Riddle Yes, Draco didn't turn out half that bad, seeing his gene pool, don't you think? But he's got one material advantage - he'll grow up with loving, caring parents.

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Aww, poor Lucius!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Ah, come on - he had it coming, don't you think?

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rhiannon113

I've heard of doing things the hard way, but Lucius seems to do nothing but spite himself. I am pleased to see that Narcissa is getting more interested in him. He can be charming, an arrogant bastard, yes, but a charming one! This is quite the spell-binding little tale!

Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)

Thank you so much!Well, Narcissa IS - always was in a way - interested in him. He would not bug her so badly if she hadn't always been intrigued by him. She's just acutely aware that she has no reason to trust him, so she fights her affection for him. Allowing him to become her friend was a first, guarded step to permit him into her life. After all, she's pretty young - at this point of the story, she's 16, so the greater part of his 'courting' her, she was 13, 14 - she was 15 when joining the Septuplet, while he acts the experienced, elder guy. She's not ready for that. Yet ;)

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