A Plain Silver Band
Chapter 14 of 21
MementoNarcissa is intrigued by a certain ring.
Reviewed- Chapter Thirteen -
A PLAIN SILVER BAND
N-nothing important. That is, I heard a good deal about a ring, and a dark lord, and something about the end of the world, but please, sir, don't hurt me. Don't turn me into anything... unnatural.
J.R.R. TOLKIEN
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"That doesn't work, does it?" Narcissa pointed at a sentence in Severus' homework. He showed the spell in question to her, and once again, she marvelled at him. He was only a second year, for god's sake!
Only a few more weeks to go until the holidays... She had a calendar to cross out the days more than two months of peace lay before her, what a blessing! If only she had known then what she was in for... On the other hand, she couldn't have prevented it either, so one might say that she was lucky not to know in advance and fret and ruin the little hope she had. The origin of all the disaster ahead was in fact a rather happy event, or it would have been happy, had the circumstances been different. Because later that evening, Andy came over to her sister's armchair in the Common Room, asking her for a private word in an empty classroom nearby.
While striding over there, Andy was beaming madly, and as soon as they had shut the door behind themselves, she cried out, "There you are, Cissy! Oh, I couldn't wait to tell you I wanted you to be the first one to hear it!"
"You haven't got a sneak view at the questions of your NEWTs yet, have you?"
"Oh, forget about that, dear me! Is that all you can think of? Studying and results, tsk!" Saying thus, she raised her left hand and brandished it in Narcissa's face, who winced back.
"What did I do to be slapped now?!"
"I'm not slapping you, silly girl! Look!"
Look where? Andy kept waving her hand, and at last, Narcissa spotted a slim, plain ring of silver that she thought to be new. She raised her brows and groaned, "Yeah, so what? You've got nicer ones!"
"To be sure, I have not!"
"But it's boring! Did you find that in a Christmas cracker?"
Andy put on a sulk and pressed her lips tightly. "That's an engagement ring, you daft cow! They look like that!"
The message took some seconds to sink in. Engagement ring engagement engagement meant wanting to get married marrying whom marrying Ted, obviously... She nodded. "Aha "
"Isn't it wonderful? Oh, Cissy! I could sing and dance all day long, it was so romantic!"
Narcissa had no sense for romance and smirked. "Awww. Did he fall down to his knees or something?"
"As a matter of fact, he did," Andy said tersely. "And spare me your sarcasm, will you?"
"No, I'm very happy for you. He's a nice fellow, I'm sure. I'm just not into that whole falling-to-one's-knees business, you know..." It wasn't as if Narcissa hadn't seen this coming, still she felt not entirely prepared when gazing at her elder sister's hand now. Nothing impressive when one knew her other jewellery, but Andromeda beamed at it as if it was the Ring of the Nibelungs itself. "Dear," she tried tentatively, "I'm not certain that our parents will approve of "
"Do you have to throw water over every good thing, Cissy?"
"Not at all. All I meant to say is that your felicity may come a little early."
"And why should that be? I'm engaged! How could I not be happy?"
"By remembering that your fiancé is likely never to be invited to our house."
Andromeda's face darkened considerably, and she hissed, "Curse them if they don't approve!"
"Andy!"
"No! I'm in love, Ted loves me too, we're going to marry if my own parents can't be happy for me, they can bugger off!"
"Andy! You mustn't speak like that! So uh what do Papa and Maman say?"
"I haven't told them yet didn't you listen? You are the very first one to hear!"
Narcissa frowned and bit her lip. "Well, in that case you shouldn't print the invitations yet, should you? After Papa's died of a cardiac arrest, you can't get married within the mourning period!"
"Oh, he'll get over it. For Christ's sake, in which century are they living, anyhow?"
"You remember what happened with Aunt Cedrella, do you?"
"I'm their bloody daughter, what are they supposed to do?"
"Disown you never talk to you again curse you try and kill Ted," Narcissa suggested off the cuff, finding the whole idea less and less favourable. Their father was after all pretty old, his views were old-fashioned and his heart weak. Surely Andy didn't want to kill him, right?
"Oh, don't be so melodramatic, Cissy! Kill Ted, right! And spend the rest of his old age in Azkaban or what?"
"He might still prefer that from having a daughter marry a Muggle-born Hufflepuff "
"Oh, rubbish! He'll throw a tantrum or ten and will get used to the idea then. No probs," Andy growled, not sounding very convinced herself. "I thought I'd tell them when they come here for my graduation ceremony."
Narcissa gave a feeble laugh. "So while you're holding your laureate speech, our mother will cry her eyes out and everyone will assume she is moved by the occasion?"
"Something like that, yeah "
"Good luck, Andy, I don't think it'll go all that smoothly. And don't count on Bella being your bridesmaid. It'd be such an embarrassment if the bridesmaid scratched the bride's eyes out!"
Andromeda sniggered, but it didn't sound amused. "But you, you will stick up for me, right?"
"Sure. But what good will it possibly do?"
"You're their little favourite, Cissy! They do listen to you!"
"Oh, get real, Andy! Maman will listen to me when it's about choosing a wallpaper design, and Papa will listen to me when I play the piano and that's it! You don't seriously believe that anything I could say about you marrying a Muggle-born will make any difference!"
Lost in thought, she returned to the dormitory that night, her insides cringing with dark premonitions. Their parents not having a fit was as unlikely as having Christmas and Pentecost the same weekend. The only question was how bad that fit would be. Andromeda wasn't the first one in the family to marry 'beneath' her; there was quite a list of aunts and uncles that no one ever mentioned because they had married Muggles or even supported the wrong political party.
Andy was right in one respect she was their daughter, and Mr and Mrs Black were very attached to their children. They wouldn't just cast her out, would they? Narcissa realised she had never given this matter much thought after learning about her sister's relationship to a Muggle-born. She had sensed that their parents would not be pleased and had consequently avoided betraying the secret, but that was all. Ted wasn't Andy's first boyfriend. Narcissa had simply assumed that, like his predecessors, he wouldn't last. Andy was right in another respect, too Narcissa was their parents' favourite, perhaps because she was the youngest of the three, perhaps because she was the most compliant. She had never refused any of their demands and wishes, had eagerly practised the piano and the harp and voluntarily learnt just about anything that they considered suitable for a 'young lady'.
But, just as a matter of interest, what would happen if she ever chose to marry a Muggle-born? Would all her accomplishments make up for such a choice? Not that she had anyone in mind if one had asked for her opinion, matrimony was out of the question. She took no interest in boys; they were all such terrible idiots, and who was the greater idiot the idiot, or the idiot getting married to one? Anyway...
"Who's put a fly in your potion?" Martha asked nosily when she entered the dorm.
"Mind your own recipes," Narcissa retorted without the tiniest bit of humour, threw herself onto her bed and jinxed the curtains shut.
She felt like the burden of carrying this secret was more than she could bear. Suddenly, she faced something far more serious than her usual annoyance about Perpetua's snoring, Martha's nosiness, Yaxley's insolent come-ons, or the fact that she was hopelessly bored with her classes. She was fond of Andy, she didn't want to lose her. Neither did she want her parents to be upset, nor... Good Lord, in times like these! What was Andy thinking? If one could believe some of the rumours (which weren't all completely made-up!), they were facing another war, and this time, it wouldn't just be some rebellious goblins disturbing the peace...
In one of her rare letters, Bella had called it a 'wake-up call for the wizarding community.' Narcissa had overheard Evan telling Lucius that Mr Rosier was a high-ranking member of this new, secret society that everyone whispered about, but she had assumed that Evan had simply been bragging like usually. Even Mr Black, normally not prone to believe just anything, had mentioned something like this when she had been home for Easter. What had he said? Narcissa racked her brains she hadn't listened too closely then, she found politics boring. 'I'm not saying I agree with his agenda, but that wizard has some right ideas, and the people will fall for it.' Something like that...
'That wizard' was some warlock who had only recently returned to England; no one really knew who he was and a whole lot of legends were linked to his true origin. Some said he was the last descendant of Salazar Slytherin himself, probably because his stated objective was getting rid of the non-pure elements in the wizards' community. Others made him appear like some sort of perverted Jesus figure, the fatherless saviour coming to save them all. What was seemingly true however was that he had gathered enough followers to found some kind of 'Dark Order' Dark because they all were devoted to the Dark Arts, which had got a bad name among wizards in the last hundred years.
Narcissa had never quite understood that distinction. The Dark Arts what was that, anyway? It was a certain brand of magic, more dangerous than the normal stuff, but then again, also the common spells could cause great damage if applied in the wrong way or with ill will. She found them mildly interesting, simply because she was bored out of her mind in this school, and the Dark Arts would at least have been some sort of challenge. But their Headmaster wouldn't have it; he didn't even allow most books in the library that dealt with them. Even now, facing a threat like that Dark Order, people still recoiled, instead of just learning Dark spells themselves. Which was stupid. Know your enemy, know his weapons. 'If you know both yourself and your enemy, you will come out of one hundred battles with one hundred victories. If you only know yourself, but not your opponent, you win one and lose the next.' How would they conceive a war with so much less effective means?
And that war was to come; perhaps it had truly started already. People were missing, others had been found dead for no obvious reason. These people had one thing in common they were either of Muggle origin, or somehow connected to Muggles, or openly supported Muggles and Muggle-borns. Narcissa wondered whether anyone had bothered to research how many plain Muggles had in fact perished so far.
She didn't care much; there had always been wars and there would always be. Not that she approved of this fact, but what use was it to fret about things that one could not influence anyway? It had nothing to do with her, she had thought; she was no Muggle after all, she was no Muggle-born, and she hardly knew anyone who could be considered to be in danger. Until now. Her older sister was about to become Mrs Muggle-born, which put her into peril, just like her soon-to-be husband and every possible offspring of that relation. Hadn't Andy thought of that? Couldn't she see the corner into which she was manoeuvring herself? Did she want to be the next one found dead?
Lying on her bed, Narcissa got another notion what about little Severus? He had a Muggle father, too did that put him in danger as well? No one right in their mind who had witnessed even just some of his spell work could believe him to be any less worthy than all the purebloods around, some of whom were so moronic that they rather resembled trolls than human beings. The same was true for Andy and her new fiancé, but did these Dark Order folks make such subtle distinctions?
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'If you only know yourself...' From: Sun Tze, 'The Art Of War'.
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I love the relationship Narcissa shares with Severus!
Ah, sweet little Severus!
Lucius is such a Slytherin ... and I love it. This is one of two stories I've been reading currently that feature Narcissa prominently. I think I'm beginning to really love this character, see her as a more filled out, and that is really inspiring.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!
Hmmm. It occured to me that I am now seeing them as people, not just villians. How odd! I do love Narcissa though, she's the bomb!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!
This is adorable Lucissa. Positively adorable! Its so cute! You might want to start giving Narcissa fashion sense though, since in canon she's know for it.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!
A very interesting story that gives us much insight into what might have been.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!
Hmmm. Lucius is a piece of work! I really love Narcissa as the source of Snape's personality traits. Excellent!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.
Hmmm...lots to think about here. I really like your geneology/character introductions for the Blacks. Very interesting! I adore backstory! Well done.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!
I'm hooked to this story!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!
Really interesting taking on the initiation process. I think it was good, the bit about drinking blood was nasty, but Voldemort really isn't the sort for garden parties, is he? It's odd that you've had internet issues, me as well. I was 'off-line' for nearly a week. Horrible isn't it? Glad you're back! =]
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm glad you found it interesting.Gosh, the horrible internet - at first, I didn't even understand it was a provider problem and didn't complain to them because I thought I had done something wrong when disconnecting the router from the electricity net. Which could have been the root of the problem; I'm useless with technics
Severus is running with a dangerous crowd, and Lucius is in better company! It's nice that he dated someone who could call him on his crap. Narcissa is becoming more isolated. In trying harder to control her, her father is driving her away. Very good paradox!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Well, yes, Severus IS running with a dangerous crowd, but so is Lucius, in every other respect than his current girlfriend.As for Narcissa - well, yes, she is distancing herself to a certain degree from her parents, but I'm not so sure whether that's not a good thing. She's nearly 17 now, and in many respects, she's as much a Daddy's Girl as Draco will be a Mummy's (and Daddy's) Boy. I think it'd be healthy for her to emancipate herself a bit Happy New Year!
The, ahem, true and highly inappropriate translation of the Adam and Eve bit is...."When Adam delved *cough* and Eve span, who was then a gentleman?"Teehee. Lovely chapter, poor Lucius! And come on, little Severus (Savvy????) help them along!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Oh, thank you so much for your help! I corrected it straight away!Well, I'm afraid little Savvy (I always thought of him like that, so it was the natural choice for a nickname for the Septuplet) won't be of much help regarding the future romance. He's done his bit, and he wouldn't DARE meddling with other people's business in this respect. No, no, he won't be the cupid in this piece
merry belated christmas! Poor Narcissa and Lucius, they're at cross roads, i wonder when they'll see each other again. Looking forward to the next chappter
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
thank you so much! A merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well!Without giving away too much right now, I think I can safely tell you that they will meet again ;) I'm not sure when I can upload a new chapter because my internet connection at home is faulty, but it should be there in the next two weeks, I guess. Once more: thank you!
Starcrossed lovers....ah, poor things. Can't help feeling sorry for them, even though we know they're going to end up being snobby twits.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
thank you!!!!Well, even snobby twits can have a love life, eh?
The contrast between the two handling their grief is wonderful. Narcissa's situation with her mother is quite sad. Lord Moldy-shorts has made his appearance at last...I don't suppose you could have written it without him, but I was still disappointed to havve Lucius fall in with him. Amazing as always. Happy Christmas, Rhia
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much, and a belated Merry Christmas and a somewhat more appropriate Happy New Year to you, too!Yes, well, it was not really possible to have Lucius not joining up, given later events... Sorry to have disappointed you
Aww, poor Lucius. Karma came back to bite him! How will he soften down old Cygnus, hmmm? Let alone Narcissa...
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
First of all: Being no native speaker of English, I've never heard that phrase before, and it just nails it As for the softening - Narcissa is bound to cool down soon enough; her main reason for reacting so viciously was the emotional strain she was going through. As for Cygnus... Well, he's got two alienated daughters already. In the end, he has no strength to deny his darling child her happiness.
How have you done it? I feel so bad for Lucius, I even managed an *awww* during Mr. Black's rant. He's meant to be a deranged monster...now you've gone and made him human, for shame! LOL Really lovely. The family dynamics give a real insight into future behaviours. I like the multi-faceted story. It reminds me of a twisted food-chain! Really nice.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you!!!!I'm really, really happy to hear you say that Lucius is human; it was my aim to achieve this without denying his negative traits of character. It's far more interesting to write, and I can only hope it makes for interesting reading as well.
Bottom line, men will never understand women. Well ... poor guy really had no inkling of the circumstances behind the behaviour, but really, men will never understand women. Nope. They might think they do (at times), but that's only what we let them believe so they feel more manly.Lovely chapter. Looking forward to the next one ... in fact, going right now to find it and stick my name on it in queue so I get to read it first.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much; I'm so happy you liked it!!!Yes, well, what is true for all men is particularly true for Lucius. Empathy really isn't his strong suit to begin with, although in this case, he didn't have a chance of seeing it coming. What's worse - this time, he'll take her rejection seriously. Her father drove the point home that, especially after Andromeda's 'downfall' (of which Lucius will of course hear later on), Narcissa would never seriously contemplate a guy like Lucius. The tragic aspect about all this is that now he will try to find something else to do and pursue...
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
That is tragic, indeed. However, conflict is necessary to keep readers interested in a story. It is why stories like this attract readers' attention and makes them want to come back for more.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
You know, you're right. It's just that, while writing, I rather followed the more selfish approach, not thinking so much of the potential reader, but what *I* enjoy writing. In fact, I was always rather afraid that I'm procrastinating too much so that many readers might lose patience and interest.
Thank you for mentioning me, I'm truly glad to review for you! And utterly addicted to this story!This was really interesting. I was extremely sad, and feeling so sorry for the Black family. It's amazing how a look at someone's troubles can make you empathize with them. Brilliant. I wonder who her visitor might be? Hmm....
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank youuuuu! I'm really glad to hear you say that you can emphasise with them in this situation; it was my aim to achieve that, but I can never be sure whether it works out like planned. Thanks for letting me know!Ah, the visitor...
Excellent 'argument scene', that was. Poor Cissy, though. She got trampled on, and it really hurts not to be Daddy's Little Girl anymore.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!I must admit that I had fun writing the argument though; I find there is something compelling about the inner logic of the dynamics that such fights take when regarded from the point of view of each participant.Yeah, poor Cissy. That's what you get for making whoopee
awhh, i was hoping for a better night for lucius and narcissa..
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Well, they must not have it too easily, eh?
Oh, dear lord, its hit the fan....poor Andy. And when on earth shall Narcissa and Lucius get together, since it seems they shall no longer both attend Hogwarts?
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Oh, thing will be getting a tad worse still, I'm afraid. As for Lucius and Narcissa - well, since the outcome of their romance is so totally well-known, I thought I'd have to keep up the tension by separating them for a bit. Which will also give Narcissa the chance to see what was in her grasp so long, and has so utterly slipped away from her. I believe in the saying that one can sometimes only see a thing's true value when losing it.
Well, after seeing the patrilineal line of the Malfoy family, Draco is an absoltue gem! LOL I think it was interesting that both of them are used to being rather dignified in public, and were wrong-footed by their families in this case. It's a clever way you've given them a common ground. I was also intrigued at the mentilon of Narcissa's academic idol. I honestly thought you were refering to Dumbledore... excellent!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!Yeah, Narcissa is a bit of an intellectual groupie. She and Dumbledore might have been great friends if she were a hundred years older, but as things are, and with her knowing only his 'old' self, she'd rather idolise brilliant Tom Riddle Yes, Draco didn't turn out half that bad, seeing his gene pool, don't you think? But he's got one material advantage - he'll grow up with loving, caring parents.
Aww, poor Lucius!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Ah, come on - he had it coming, don't you think?
I've heard of doing things the hard way, but Lucius seems to do nothing but spite himself. I am pleased to see that Narcissa is getting more interested in him. He can be charming, an arrogant bastard, yes, but a charming one! This is quite the spell-binding little tale!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!Well, Narcissa IS - always was in a way - interested in him. He would not bug her so badly if she hadn't always been intrigued by him. She's just acutely aware that she has no reason to trust him, so she fights her affection for him. Allowing him to become her friend was a first, guarded step to permit him into her life. After all, she's pretty young - at this point of the story, she's 16, so the greater part of his 'courting' her, she was 13, 14 - she was 15 when joining the Septuplet, while he acts the experienced, elder guy. She's not ready for that. Yet ;)