Meet The Malfoys
Chapter 3 of 21
MementoIt remains to be seen who's the more sympathetic member of the family - junior or senior? One hates all women, the other can't get enough of them.
ReviewedMEET THE MALFOYS
Neminem prope magnorum virorum optimum et utilem filium reliquisse satis claret.
SEPTIMIUS SEVERUS
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He gazed at the pretty girl in his arms, once more pleased. She was very pretty. A pretty sight to behold, yes. She was breathing gently, her chest was a perfect study. When she was asleep like this, he sometimes fancied himself in love with her. Sincerely. And why should he not be, as pretty as she was? That question, of course, was a total sham.
He closely regarded each single bit of her, top to bottom, starting with her hair. One could tell that she took great care of her appearance, that more than one spell was needed to make her hair so shiny, so smooth. Right now it was the tiniest bit greasy, and it only made her look even better. The glossy strands softly curled over her temples, half-hiding her ear, pouring down over her shoulders and tickling her trim stomach. Her face was even and symmetrical, and when she was asleep, irresistibly peaceful. One could see whatever one craved in these features when she was sleeping. She plucked her brows to perfect shape; there was nothing in this face that... Indeed, artful care had made her every feature perfect, yet, at the same time, meaningless.
Smooth skin with just the right measure of tan, a great figure, perfect hair right out of a commercial. Not a single hair astray, not even now, after spending the night with him. He gave a dry laugh, but stopped at once. He mustn't wake her up. He liked her better when she was asleep.
In love?! What a ridiculous phrase to use. Maybe she was in love, though he doubted it, but he most certainly wasn't. And neither was she. Either he was getting a little soft in the head for being so sentimental, or for some other reason unfathomable, he had lately formed the distinct notion that love requested a certain depth. Which this girl lacked entirely. As shallow as she was pretty, she surely had a mad crush on him but she couldn't love him.
A small part of his mind was aware that she wasn't quite as stupid as he wanted her to be. Annoying, silly, mindless sure. But acknowledging that she was more than a pretty, brainless doll would also mean that he would have to take responsibility for his actions, and the greater part of his consciousness strongly disapproved of so much consequence. Taking her seriously would mean... well, what, really? Breaking up with her because he was deceiving her about the depth of his emotions for her? This wasn't true for a start. He had never pretended to take much interest. And he'd break up with her anyway. It was astounding how long they had been together, if he thought about it.
He chewed on his bottom lip. She was pretty. Perhaps he should have a bit more fun with her before telling her that it was over? Waste not.
'Diaboli virtus in lumbis', his father always said, right? On the other hand all the girls he went out with were uncommonly pretty. One could claim that he wouldn't do as much as sit down next to a plain girl at dinner. Why were these girls so silly, eh? He'd dump her, she'd cry and complain and tell all her friends what a bloody jerk he was and still he'd have a new girlfriend before the end of the week. Appraising her, he went through his list of eligible objects. Who was going to be next? He could make his pick as he pleased; half of the girls in school fancied him like mad, and there was still a long row of candidates that he hadn't disappointed yet.
But could he? Could he really pick whomever he liked? His jaw tightened and he winced back he had bit his own cheek. What would he say? He rehearsed the lines he had uttered so often his cheek was still hurting he must be bleeding, he was tasting the blood and a sudden thought darted through his mind. Why not do it differently this time? He was easily bored, and dumping a girl needn't be boring, right?
He stirred and carelessly reached out for her shoulder. "Wake up."
She blinked, thoroughly confused. "What is it?"
"I thought it'd interest you to know that it's over."
She made no reply, looking even more confused. This was going to be fun. Most of the time he didn't bother, but he knew very well what girls liked, how they wanted to be touched. All a mere matter of practise. His right hand cupped her face, carefully teasing, his left hand caressed her back. She closed her eyes again and enjoyed his kisses.
She gave little hums of pleasure, snuggling up to him, and with his most sardonic smile he asked, "You like it?"
Her only reply was a moan of delight.
"Relish it. This is the last time."
Her eyes flew open. "What?"
"It's bye-bye time."
"What?"
He brushed a kiss on her temple, still smiling broadly. "You heard me, didn't you?"
"Heard you?"
She was trembling and he took her in his arms, lifting her up. "I just told you that it's over. I'm breaking up with you. I'm dumping you. Call it what you like."
He hadn't really stopped kissing her when carrying her out of his bed and over to the windows, a fact of which she was utterly oblivious. "Breaking up...?"
"Yes. You see, I've made it a rule not to go out with a girl for more than three weeks, and you have expired that date for almost an entire month already. You may feel flattered if you wish."
Rather unceremoniously, he fumbled with his wand and pointed it at the window, opening it with a little flick. Another flick, and her robes, shoes, and underwear rose from the floor and hovered over, and out of the window, where they fell on the snowy ground. Her cloak was the last to go; she watched with wide eyes but no quick retort, until all she had left was Lucius' old Tornado T-shirt, which she was wearing.
It had sufficed anyhow. He should have tried this ages ago he had never enjoyed another break-up as much as this one. She was still speechless, and tears slowly welled up in her eyes. She stared at her wand, which he had pushed into her hand, and Lucius laughed.
"It's called dumping, dear," he drawled, brushing a kiss on her quivering lips. "Ever wondered why?"
So saying, he dropped her out of the window, too. He half expected that she wouldn't muster enough wits to use her wand, but before he had to soften her fall himself, she finally swished her wand and saved herself from further harm. He had to cast a Shield Charm to keep her from smashing the windows; standing scantily clad in the two foot high snow, she screamed all kinds of curses up to him, but seeing that this was not getting her anywhere, Chloe stamped her foot one last time, gathered her things and trudged away, down the swept way, lifting her arm for a rude gesture at his last remark "You can keep the T-shirt!"
Still sniggering, he took a shower, got dressed and went down for breakfast.
"Tell that chick to eat in your own room," Abraxas growled without looking up. "I don't fancy strangers at my table."
"I know, Father."
"If you know, why is it that I always have to endure your petty affairs?"
"Be glad you won't have to endure this particular one again."
This did the job. Abraxas lowered the Daily Prophet and threw his son a long glance, partly quizzical, partly amused. "Well, I must say I'm not sorry to hear this. I'd be even more delighted if I could deceive myself sufficiently to believe that no other replica is already waiting in line."
Lucius sat down and grinned. "Envious, are we?"
Abraxas laughed heartily a sight that did not occur too often. "I pity you sincerely, boy. No such annoyance known as women. I wonder when you get enough of 'em."
"You're an old man, Sir. I reckon you've long forgotten the easy pleasures of youth."
The smile vanished as quickly as it had come. "You're one useless cad, boy. Fooling around with these mindless cows, as mindless as you are yourself. When will you finally start to make some sense of your life?"
"Soon enough, Sir. When you're dead, at the latest."
He knew that this was too much the moment he had said it. Abraxas could put up with some cheek when he was in good humour, but this was not one of those rare occasions. Old he might be, but still bloody fast when it came to retribution and Lucius had no chance left to react. In the blink of an eye, his father had produced his wand and thrown a curse at him, making his cup of coffee explode right before his face.
The humiliation was far worse than the actual pain. Hot liquid in his lap, splinters in his face and hands, he hurled a sequence of fierce insults at the old wizard, fumbling for his own wand to clear up that mess. He siphoned up the coffee, mumbled another spell to remove the splinters from his hands and reached out for one of the silver plates instead of a proper mirror to take care of his face.
"What's wrong with you?!"
"What is wrong with you, Lucius? Seriously, boy! You have no respect."
"Respect?! Are you crazy? Why the hell should I have respect for a fool such like yourself?! Iratus filio ipse te obiurga, Pater!"
"Careful, sonny." Abraxas' voice had sunk to a menacing gnarl. "I may be old, but I haven't lost any of my power. You don't want to mess with me."
"Stop calling me sonny, Father!"
"If you started behaving like a grown-up, I might give it a thought."
He found the hopefully last piece of porcelain and removed it, turning his head this way and that and checking his reflection in the plate. He mumbled a healing spell to prevent scarring and the bloody spots vanished one by one, leaving no visible trace. He was pretty good with healing charms; they were inevitable with a father like his.
"A couple of scars would do you good, sonny," Abraxas cackled spitefully. "And spare a dozen broken hearts, possibly!"
"Why do you worry for them if all girls are so bloody useless?"
"True. Yes, indeed, I have to admit you've got a point there." He sipped his coffee. "Why should I worry for other men's daughters when I've got enough worries for my own flesh and blood?"
It was always the same old story. His marks, his Quidditch results, his lack of interest in the proper things. No matter what he did, Abraxas could never be content with him, and he made no secret of his disapproval. Lucius didn't listen; he had heard that speech too often. Study harder, practise more blahblahblah. In his first year on the House Team, they had won the cup. Abraxas hadn't cracked as much as a smile. In his second year, he had broken the old school record and scored twenty-seven goals in the first forty minutes of a single match. Abraxas hadn't even mentioned it. In his third year, he had been made Captain, they had won the cup the third time in a row and not lost one match. Abraxas had merely sneered and muttered, "If you trained more, you might be a good player one day."
He had felt so damn good when getting up, and one breakfast with his father was enough to spoil his mood for the rest of the day. Merlin, he couldn't wait to get back to school. He was so displeased, he truly felt like going out, finding a new girl to drag home, only to spoil the old trout's day in turn. This was no struggle of adolescence Mr Malfoy senior and his son had never felt anything but mutual dislike for one another. The only reason why Abraxas had got himself a wife and produced a son was the need for a continuation of the ancient dynasty. A misanthrope by nature, he despised anyone and could hardly endure the sheer presence of others, let alone a child tormenting his nerves and ears. Or a wife.
Lucius could hardly remember his own mother. Shortly after his birth, she had been equipped with ample of money and sent on a journey, from which she had never really returned. When he was younger, she had sometimes shown up at Christmas or his birthday (but never both in the same year), and since he was eleven, he hadn't seen her again. She had gone back to her family in Southern Germany Lucius had visited her and his grandparents two or three times, but in all honesty he felt as little urge to see them as vice versa. Elisabeth had got married to her husband for the motivation of unimaginable riches; he had married her because her family was ancient and her blood untainted. That was all. And one day Lucius would do the same. Two thousand years of pureblood ancestry must be continued. He'd propose to one of those cows, and he'd have a son. This was no fantasy or wishful thinking but genuine fact a handy curse of old had taken care of the business. There could only ever be one Malfoy in each generation, always a boy, thus preventing the division of the family fortune, and consequently, these riches had accumulated beyond imagination. He was only sixteen and already a made man, knowing for a fact what his future had in store for him. And if there was one thing for sure it was this he would be a better father than old Abraxas!
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Neminem... It is a well-known fact that only few of the great have fathered a good, competent son.
Diaboli... The devil is in the loins.
Iratus... If you're angry with your son, blame yourself, father!
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I love the relationship Narcissa shares with Severus!
Ah, sweet little Severus!
Lucius is such a Slytherin ... and I love it. This is one of two stories I've been reading currently that feature Narcissa prominently. I think I'm beginning to really love this character, see her as a more filled out, and that is really inspiring.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!
Hmmm. It occured to me that I am now seeing them as people, not just villians. How odd! I do love Narcissa though, she's the bomb!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!
This is adorable Lucissa. Positively adorable! Its so cute! You might want to start giving Narcissa fashion sense though, since in canon she's know for it.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!
A very interesting story that gives us much insight into what might have been.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!
Hmmm. Lucius is a piece of work! I really love Narcissa as the source of Snape's personality traits. Excellent!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.
Hmmm...lots to think about here. I really like your geneology/character introductions for the Blacks. Very interesting! I adore backstory! Well done.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!
I'm hooked to this story!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!
Really interesting taking on the initiation process. I think it was good, the bit about drinking blood was nasty, but Voldemort really isn't the sort for garden parties, is he? It's odd that you've had internet issues, me as well. I was 'off-line' for nearly a week. Horrible isn't it? Glad you're back! =]
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm glad you found it interesting.Gosh, the horrible internet - at first, I didn't even understand it was a provider problem and didn't complain to them because I thought I had done something wrong when disconnecting the router from the electricity net. Which could have been the root of the problem; I'm useless with technics
Severus is running with a dangerous crowd, and Lucius is in better company! It's nice that he dated someone who could call him on his crap. Narcissa is becoming more isolated. In trying harder to control her, her father is driving her away. Very good paradox!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Well, yes, Severus IS running with a dangerous crowd, but so is Lucius, in every other respect than his current girlfriend.As for Narcissa - well, yes, she is distancing herself to a certain degree from her parents, but I'm not so sure whether that's not a good thing. She's nearly 17 now, and in many respects, she's as much a Daddy's Girl as Draco will be a Mummy's (and Daddy's) Boy. I think it'd be healthy for her to emancipate herself a bit Happy New Year!
The, ahem, true and highly inappropriate translation of the Adam and Eve bit is...."When Adam delved *cough* and Eve span, who was then a gentleman?"Teehee. Lovely chapter, poor Lucius! And come on, little Severus (Savvy????) help them along!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Oh, thank you so much for your help! I corrected it straight away!Well, I'm afraid little Savvy (I always thought of him like that, so it was the natural choice for a nickname for the Septuplet) won't be of much help regarding the future romance. He's done his bit, and he wouldn't DARE meddling with other people's business in this respect. No, no, he won't be the cupid in this piece
merry belated christmas! Poor Narcissa and Lucius, they're at cross roads, i wonder when they'll see each other again. Looking forward to the next chappter
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
thank you so much! A merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well!Without giving away too much right now, I think I can safely tell you that they will meet again ;) I'm not sure when I can upload a new chapter because my internet connection at home is faulty, but it should be there in the next two weeks, I guess. Once more: thank you!
Starcrossed lovers....ah, poor things. Can't help feeling sorry for them, even though we know they're going to end up being snobby twits.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
thank you!!!!Well, even snobby twits can have a love life, eh?
The contrast between the two handling their grief is wonderful. Narcissa's situation with her mother is quite sad. Lord Moldy-shorts has made his appearance at last...I don't suppose you could have written it without him, but I was still disappointed to havve Lucius fall in with him. Amazing as always. Happy Christmas, Rhia
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much, and a belated Merry Christmas and a somewhat more appropriate Happy New Year to you, too!Yes, well, it was not really possible to have Lucius not joining up, given later events... Sorry to have disappointed you
Aww, poor Lucius. Karma came back to bite him! How will he soften down old Cygnus, hmmm? Let alone Narcissa...
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
First of all: Being no native speaker of English, I've never heard that phrase before, and it just nails it As for the softening - Narcissa is bound to cool down soon enough; her main reason for reacting so viciously was the emotional strain she was going through. As for Cygnus... Well, he's got two alienated daughters already. In the end, he has no strength to deny his darling child her happiness.
How have you done it? I feel so bad for Lucius, I even managed an *awww* during Mr. Black's rant. He's meant to be a deranged monster...now you've gone and made him human, for shame! LOL Really lovely. The family dynamics give a real insight into future behaviours. I like the multi-faceted story. It reminds me of a twisted food-chain! Really nice.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you!!!!I'm really, really happy to hear you say that Lucius is human; it was my aim to achieve this without denying his negative traits of character. It's far more interesting to write, and I can only hope it makes for interesting reading as well.
Bottom line, men will never understand women. Well ... poor guy really had no inkling of the circumstances behind the behaviour, but really, men will never understand women. Nope. They might think they do (at times), but that's only what we let them believe so they feel more manly.Lovely chapter. Looking forward to the next one ... in fact, going right now to find it and stick my name on it in queue so I get to read it first.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much; I'm so happy you liked it!!!Yes, well, what is true for all men is particularly true for Lucius. Empathy really isn't his strong suit to begin with, although in this case, he didn't have a chance of seeing it coming. What's worse - this time, he'll take her rejection seriously. Her father drove the point home that, especially after Andromeda's 'downfall' (of which Lucius will of course hear later on), Narcissa would never seriously contemplate a guy like Lucius. The tragic aspect about all this is that now he will try to find something else to do and pursue...
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
That is tragic, indeed. However, conflict is necessary to keep readers interested in a story. It is why stories like this attract readers' attention and makes them want to come back for more.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
You know, you're right. It's just that, while writing, I rather followed the more selfish approach, not thinking so much of the potential reader, but what *I* enjoy writing. In fact, I was always rather afraid that I'm procrastinating too much so that many readers might lose patience and interest.
Thank you for mentioning me, I'm truly glad to review for you! And utterly addicted to this story!This was really interesting. I was extremely sad, and feeling so sorry for the Black family. It's amazing how a look at someone's troubles can make you empathize with them. Brilliant. I wonder who her visitor might be? Hmm....
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank youuuuu! I'm really glad to hear you say that you can emphasise with them in this situation; it was my aim to achieve that, but I can never be sure whether it works out like planned. Thanks for letting me know!Ah, the visitor...
Excellent 'argument scene', that was. Poor Cissy, though. She got trampled on, and it really hurts not to be Daddy's Little Girl anymore.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!I must admit that I had fun writing the argument though; I find there is something compelling about the inner logic of the dynamics that such fights take when regarded from the point of view of each participant.Yeah, poor Cissy. That's what you get for making whoopee
awhh, i was hoping for a better night for lucius and narcissa..
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Well, they must not have it too easily, eh?
Oh, dear lord, its hit the fan....poor Andy. And when on earth shall Narcissa and Lucius get together, since it seems they shall no longer both attend Hogwarts?
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Oh, thing will be getting a tad worse still, I'm afraid. As for Lucius and Narcissa - well, since the outcome of their romance is so totally well-known, I thought I'd have to keep up the tension by separating them for a bit. Which will also give Narcissa the chance to see what was in her grasp so long, and has so utterly slipped away from her. I believe in the saying that one can sometimes only see a thing's true value when losing it.
Well, after seeing the patrilineal line of the Malfoy family, Draco is an absoltue gem! LOL I think it was interesting that both of them are used to being rather dignified in public, and were wrong-footed by their families in this case. It's a clever way you've given them a common ground. I was also intrigued at the mentilon of Narcissa's academic idol. I honestly thought you were refering to Dumbledore... excellent!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!Yeah, Narcissa is a bit of an intellectual groupie. She and Dumbledore might have been great friends if she were a hundred years older, but as things are, and with her knowing only his 'old' self, she'd rather idolise brilliant Tom Riddle Yes, Draco didn't turn out half that bad, seeing his gene pool, don't you think? But he's got one material advantage - he'll grow up with loving, caring parents.
Aww, poor Lucius!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Ah, come on - he had it coming, don't you think?
I've heard of doing things the hard way, but Lucius seems to do nothing but spite himself. I am pleased to see that Narcissa is getting more interested in him. He can be charming, an arrogant bastard, yes, but a charming one! This is quite the spell-binding little tale!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!Well, Narcissa IS - always was in a way - interested in him. He would not bug her so badly if she hadn't always been intrigued by him. She's just acutely aware that she has no reason to trust him, so she fights her affection for him. Allowing him to become her friend was a first, guarded step to permit him into her life. After all, she's pretty young - at this point of the story, she's 16, so the greater part of his 'courting' her, she was 13, 14 - she was 15 when joining the Septuplet, while he acts the experienced, elder guy. She's not ready for that. Yet ;)