Staking The Territories
Chapter 8 of 21
MementoLucius and Narcissa have a little brush.
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STAKING THE TERRITORIES
Quae modo pugnarunt, iungunt sua rostra columbae.
OVID Ars Amatoria
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"And that's the next thing we're going to practise, dear. You're an appallingly bad liar!"
"Lying is for cowards, isn't it?"
She sniggered. "There are loads of things you've got to learn, Severus Snape. For a start: Cowardice isn't necessarily a bad thing. It is much preferred over foolhardiness, for instance. And there will come many situations when you don't want to let show what's really going on in your head. Take your feud with my horrible cousin, for example. You'd have so much more spare time if you didn't always blurt out that you've cursed him and spend your evenings in detentions."
"He'd give me away anyway, and I don't want to give him the satisfaction of seeing me degrade myself and lie!"
"I appreciate your self-respect, but that attitude won't take you anywhere, trust me. Listen closely, Severus, I believe I can teach you some very handy lessons." She winked at him. "Number One know your enemy. In the case of my cousin you probably already know some helpful things like "
"Like him being a total arsehole?"
"That much is obvious, isn't it. But please mind your language, at least when you're talking to me. Anyhow, he is a Gryffindor, and maybe you haven't been long enough in this school yet to understand, but those folks have something like a code of honour. Sirius is an awful person, but one thing he's not a traitor. It disagrees with his self-respect. He wouldn't incriminate you. So let us say old Slughorn is the one to interview you on the case what would you do?"
He shrugged. "I don't know."
"For a start you have to appear genuine, no matter who's asking you. No guilt written all over your face, no pride, no contentment. You must look perfectly unconcerned, and of course, you have no idea what they're talking about until they tell you what's happened. Unless it's absolutely obvious. Mind you, it's not believable when you of all persons are informed that Sirius was hit by a curse and you appear like you were not gleeful. It's all about the right measure. Got me so far?"
"Yes "
"Of course, this is all very obvious; you automatically do the same when you lie to your parents "
"I never do."
She hesitated and frowned. "I beg your pardon? Omnis homo mendax, Severus! What are you, some sort of saint?!"
"My mother... She..." He bit his lip and looked at his hands before raising his head again and adding in a more steady tone, "As for my father oh well. I've preferred defiance so far, you see?"
"Defiance? Why? Because he's a Muggle?"
"Rather because he is a complete jerk excuse the term, but he really is. He doesn't deserve the effort."
"I see... Well, so it means you've got to start from scratch, that's all."
"I'm sorry, but... Do I really have to well learn this?"
She smiled slyly. "Mark my words, dear, but it can only be advantageous when it's your choice whether you tell someone the truth or not."
"True," a well-known voice said, and Narcissa was quite proud that she didn't give a start. She looked up, as calm as ever, and saw Lucius Malfoy standing before them, casually leaning against a shelf. "Listen to her, Severus."
She didn't want to be backed up by Lucius Malfoy of all persons, not him, but what could she do? "Eavesdropping, are you?"
"That's a harsh accusation. Actually, I happened to be searching for Severus here. And when I saw you and heard that you're trying to teach him how to lie, it was just too interesting."
"Was it," she said tersely, every fibre of her body willing him to leave. Didn't she see enough of him already! She couldn't stop him from attending the Potions Club meetings, but why she ought to endure him in her free time was beyond her.
"It was. I wonder what you mean by it though "
"Is there anything I can do for you?" Severus asked and got up, but Narcissa pulled him back. She didn't look at him though; rather, she glared at Lucius instead.
"You're not his servant, Severus!"
"Uh I am, in fact "
Lucius clearly tried to look as nice as he could, still he couldn't help but show his usual sneer. "You are not my servant, Severus, but my aide "
"Boils down to the same thing!" Narcissa intensified her scowl. He must eventually understand that he wasn't wanted here, right?!
He wasn't impressed, sadly, and simply continued in that habitually smug manner of his, "And not only my aide, but my friend."
"You've got a strange concept of friendship!"
"Look who's talking!"
"Do you chase your other friends down to the Quidditch Pitch in pouring rain, too? Only to clip some twigs on your broomstick?!"
"But that's my job," Severus muttered.
"Yes, and do you think it entirely sensible to be bossed around only because of Quidditch?"
"He can leave if he wishes, but it appears he doesn't want to. Unlike you, I don't try to control him and everything else around me."
"I do no such thing!"
Severus had got to his feet once more. "Please, Narcissa "
"Sit down, Severus!"
He exchanged some looks with his great friend, on his part helpless; on Malfoy's part well somehow indecipherable. "Speaking of bossing around, Miss Black! Tsk tsk tsk... However, Severus, I was looking for you to ask if you would be so kind and grease my leather gloves before the next training."
"Certainly!"
"Your homework is more important than greasing his gloves, Severus!"
"And I thought you had already finished, seeing that you were about to give him a lesson on the extracurricular subject of deception. I know you think nothing of Quidditch, so to you everything must be more important. But she is a genius, Severus. I think you'd do well to obey her "
"He needn't obey me! He can do as he pleases!"
"Can he really? He's got up two times already and you've urged him not to, and he has obeyed." He shot her a suggestive smile, and turned back to patronise the kid. "Which was very good of you, Severus; don't worry."
One side-glance at the boy sufficed to see how unhappy he was with the situation. She inwardly cursed Malfoy for bringing him into such a predicament, but that was just like him, wasn't it; he simply enjoyed giving others a hard time! But she wouldn't play his game, even if that meant that he got his way. She shut the book before her with a loud clap, gave Severus a gentle smile and said, "I think we're through anyway, dear. Run along, I know how you guys like Quidditch."
"Is that really all right by you?"
"Absolutely," she said and smiled yet more sweetly, only to glare at Malfoy the next second. "It's fine. See you tomorrow, same time?"
She had hoped that Lucius would vanish with him, but she was bitterly disappointed. He left his comfortable position by the shelf and strolled over to her table, glancing at the books before her.
"You are one busy bee, aren't you?"
"Can I help you with anything?" She was pleased with herself for giving her voice just the right amount of spin.
"You could, yes..."
He looked straight into her eyes, penetratingly really, but she wouldn't allow him to make her look away first. "And...? What would that be?"
He didn't answer and he didn't turn his gaze away; neither did she. Despite herself, she noticed the remarkable colour of his eyes; she had noticed it before, of course, it was impossible to miss. Almost like silver, like a day in November shortly before the sun would come out but never before had she seen his eyes from so close, and for so long. Before she got entirely mesmerised, she arched a brow, inviting him to speak.
"Well... For a start I'd be truly interested in the subject you were just about to teach our mutual friend."
She gave a mocking laugh. "I believe you're already a proficient expert."
He raised his brows. "What makes you say that?"
"Oh please! Do you really mean to tell me that you cannot lie?"
"I'm not a novice like good Severus, admittedly. But I don't think I'm as good as you."
"Sounds like a compliment, feels like a slap." She gave a fake smile. "Well done, Malfoy. I think that is something I could learn from you."
"Actually, I'm just copying you."
"Aww, thanks, I feel so flattered."
"You can. Imitation is the highest level of admiration."
"You truly think you are a gift to human kind, don't you?"
"See? That's what I mean. On the surface you are all calmness and composure, with a seeming glint of politeness here and there. But underneath you are frothing with anger, and still you are very apt in concealing it."
"But I couldn't fool you, eh?" If she forced herself to smile any more like this, her face would become stuck, and for the rest of her life she'd roam the world looking like a total idiot!
"You look nice when you're smiling."
For a second, she thought he was taunting her, but either he was an excellent liar or he was serious, and both unsettled her. "Oh, you should see how nice I look if I'm smiling for real, Malfoy!"
He turned his eyes to the floor. "What would it take me to make you smile for real?"
"Leave?" she suggested dryly, seeing him smirk.
"Why am I bothering you so much?"
"Why do you bother me at all?"
"I would like to know you better."
She burst out laughing. "I bet you would. But let me tell you a secret I'm every bit as nasty as people say I am. There's nothing else to discover."
"I don't believe you."
"I thought I was such a good liar?"
"You do put on a brilliant show, but I know you better."
She snorted. "What would I have to do to make you leave, Malfoy?"
"Go out with me."
She shook her head in exasperation. "Oh, for heaven's sake, what do you take me for?!"
He looked very earnest. "I think you are a very, very pretty and even more intelligent girl "
"If you truly believed that I was intelligent, how could you seriously assume that I'd be so silly as to fall for this rubbish?"
"Will you go out with me?"
"No!" He gave her a long, intense look, but this time she did look away. She packed her books into her bag, rolled up some parchments and put them away too. "Anything else? Good, because I will leave now!"
She got up, shouldered her bag and marched away without looking back. He was right. She was fuming with rage. That guy had some nerve! Asking her out! Pht! And then, she let herself be chased away, from her very own territory! The library was her space! He never went into the library, he'd rather send Severus to get him the books he needed! She stayed away from the Quidditch Pitch, he could have it, as long as he didn't go into the library and
She stopped abruptly. What was she thinking there?! Her space, his territory, for goodness' sake! She prided herself on being a thoroughly rational, sensible person, and ten minutes' conversation with this idiot drove her utterly mad?! She took a deep breath, counted up to ten, checked herself and went on, calmer and as serenely as she could. Still, such insolence! Asking her out! Her! She couldn't possibly feel more insulted. Ranking her with those insipid little sluts he else went out with! And if he was only going out with them, she would not bother, but all this guy wanted from a girl was sex and another trophy, and she would not lower herself like that, never!
On her way to the dungeons, she passed her sister, who was holding hands in broad daylight with the Hufflepuff Prefect, Ted Something. Oh, Andy! Couldn't she at least be careful?! Anyone could see them! That concern wasn't merely rooted in Narcissa's sense of decency and her abhorrence of the public display of caresses, but the deplorable fact that Ted Something was Muggle-born. He was nice, according to Andromeda; that wasn't the point, but their parents would make such a fuss if they ever got wind of this! And did she really, really have to pick a Hufflepuff? A House praised for its utter mediocrity?!
She walked by and uttered under her breath, "Pull yourself together, Andy! Frankly, you need to get a grip!"
Andromeda gave a giggle and stepped a bit closer to her companion. "Why don't you just get a life, Cissy?!"
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Quae... Pigeons that are fighting now, will be billing tomorrow.
Omnis... All men lie.
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I love the relationship Narcissa shares with Severus!
Ah, sweet little Severus!
Lucius is such a Slytherin ... and I love it. This is one of two stories I've been reading currently that feature Narcissa prominently. I think I'm beginning to really love this character, see her as a more filled out, and that is really inspiring.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so, so, so much! That is such an awesome compliment!!!Yes, I love the character very much, too (I guess it shows), and it makes me just so happy to hear that somebody reads this story and likes it - and her. Thank you for telling me!!!
Hmmm. It occured to me that I am now seeing them as people, not just villians. How odd! I do love Narcissa though, she's the bomb!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!And if you say you start seeing them as people, I can't tell you how happy that makes me, because this was one of my principal reasons to start writing this. Thanks for letting me know!
This is adorable Lucissa. Positively adorable! Its so cute! You might want to start giving Narcissa fashion sense though, since in canon she's know for it.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so so much!'My' Narcissa (for all purposes of this story) is supposed to have natural taste; she just doesn't care for fashion magazines etc. But she recognises a good dress when she sees it And thank you for the kind review (and excuse me for taking so long to answer it; I've got so much work in real life to do). I'm really happy you enjoy the story. It was such fun for me to write it. Thanks!!!
A very interesting story that gives us much insight into what might have been.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for me!
Hmmm. Lucius is a piece of work! I really love Narcissa as the source of Snape's personality traits. Excellent!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!!!I'm glad you like it; I thought it fitted to TPT and SWM canon - as a young boy, he could not keep his mouth shut (or open in the appropriate moment), and Narcissa seemed the right character to take over the task; I had bestowed all those character traits to her anyway, as being very controlled, very seclude in her emotional life, and I thought it would make sense for them to bond over questions like this one, because she wants to help him by all means.
Hmmm...lots to think about here. I really like your geneology/character introductions for the Blacks. Very interesting! I adore backstory! Well done.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write it, too. And thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review for me, that's great. Thank you!
I'm hooked to this story!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm so happy you like it! And thank you for taking the time to leave a review for me, that really means a lot to me, thank you so much!
Really interesting taking on the initiation process. I think it was good, the bit about drinking blood was nasty, but Voldemort really isn't the sort for garden parties, is he? It's odd that you've had internet issues, me as well. I was 'off-line' for nearly a week. Horrible isn't it? Glad you're back! =]
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you! I'm glad you found it interesting.Gosh, the horrible internet - at first, I didn't even understand it was a provider problem and didn't complain to them because I thought I had done something wrong when disconnecting the router from the electricity net. Which could have been the root of the problem; I'm useless with technics
Severus is running with a dangerous crowd, and Lucius is in better company! It's nice that he dated someone who could call him on his crap. Narcissa is becoming more isolated. In trying harder to control her, her father is driving her away. Very good paradox!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Well, yes, Severus IS running with a dangerous crowd, but so is Lucius, in every other respect than his current girlfriend.As for Narcissa - well, yes, she is distancing herself to a certain degree from her parents, but I'm not so sure whether that's not a good thing. She's nearly 17 now, and in many respects, she's as much a Daddy's Girl as Draco will be a Mummy's (and Daddy's) Boy. I think it'd be healthy for her to emancipate herself a bit Happy New Year!
The, ahem, true and highly inappropriate translation of the Adam and Eve bit is...."When Adam delved *cough* and Eve span, who was then a gentleman?"Teehee. Lovely chapter, poor Lucius! And come on, little Severus (Savvy????) help them along!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Oh, thank you so much for your help! I corrected it straight away!Well, I'm afraid little Savvy (I always thought of him like that, so it was the natural choice for a nickname for the Septuplet) won't be of much help regarding the future romance. He's done his bit, and he wouldn't DARE meddling with other people's business in this respect. No, no, he won't be the cupid in this piece
merry belated christmas! Poor Narcissa and Lucius, they're at cross roads, i wonder when they'll see each other again. Looking forward to the next chappter
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
thank you so much! A merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you as well!Without giving away too much right now, I think I can safely tell you that they will meet again ;) I'm not sure when I can upload a new chapter because my internet connection at home is faulty, but it should be there in the next two weeks, I guess. Once more: thank you!
Starcrossed lovers....ah, poor things. Can't help feeling sorry for them, even though we know they're going to end up being snobby twits.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
thank you!!!!Well, even snobby twits can have a love life, eh?
The contrast between the two handling their grief is wonderful. Narcissa's situation with her mother is quite sad. Lord Moldy-shorts has made his appearance at last...I don't suppose you could have written it without him, but I was still disappointed to havve Lucius fall in with him. Amazing as always. Happy Christmas, Rhia
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much, and a belated Merry Christmas and a somewhat more appropriate Happy New Year to you, too!Yes, well, it was not really possible to have Lucius not joining up, given later events... Sorry to have disappointed you
Aww, poor Lucius. Karma came back to bite him! How will he soften down old Cygnus, hmmm? Let alone Narcissa...
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
First of all: Being no native speaker of English, I've never heard that phrase before, and it just nails it As for the softening - Narcissa is bound to cool down soon enough; her main reason for reacting so viciously was the emotional strain she was going through. As for Cygnus... Well, he's got two alienated daughters already. In the end, he has no strength to deny his darling child her happiness.
How have you done it? I feel so bad for Lucius, I even managed an *awww* during Mr. Black's rant. He's meant to be a deranged monster...now you've gone and made him human, for shame! LOL Really lovely. The family dynamics give a real insight into future behaviours. I like the multi-faceted story. It reminds me of a twisted food-chain! Really nice.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you!!!!I'm really, really happy to hear you say that Lucius is human; it was my aim to achieve this without denying his negative traits of character. It's far more interesting to write, and I can only hope it makes for interesting reading as well.
Bottom line, men will never understand women. Well ... poor guy really had no inkling of the circumstances behind the behaviour, but really, men will never understand women. Nope. They might think they do (at times), but that's only what we let them believe so they feel more manly.Lovely chapter. Looking forward to the next one ... in fact, going right now to find it and stick my name on it in queue so I get to read it first.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much; I'm so happy you liked it!!!Yes, well, what is true for all men is particularly true for Lucius. Empathy really isn't his strong suit to begin with, although in this case, he didn't have a chance of seeing it coming. What's worse - this time, he'll take her rejection seriously. Her father drove the point home that, especially after Andromeda's 'downfall' (of which Lucius will of course hear later on), Narcissa would never seriously contemplate a guy like Lucius. The tragic aspect about all this is that now he will try to find something else to do and pursue...
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
That is tragic, indeed. However, conflict is necessary to keep readers interested in a story. It is why stories like this attract readers' attention and makes them want to come back for more.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
You know, you're right. It's just that, while writing, I rather followed the more selfish approach, not thinking so much of the potential reader, but what *I* enjoy writing. In fact, I was always rather afraid that I'm procrastinating too much so that many readers might lose patience and interest.
Thank you for mentioning me, I'm truly glad to review for you! And utterly addicted to this story!This was really interesting. I was extremely sad, and feeling so sorry for the Black family. It's amazing how a look at someone's troubles can make you empathize with them. Brilliant. I wonder who her visitor might be? Hmm....
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank youuuuu! I'm really glad to hear you say that you can emphasise with them in this situation; it was my aim to achieve that, but I can never be sure whether it works out like planned. Thanks for letting me know!Ah, the visitor...
Excellent 'argument scene', that was. Poor Cissy, though. She got trampled on, and it really hurts not to be Daddy's Little Girl anymore.
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!I must admit that I had fun writing the argument though; I find there is something compelling about the inner logic of the dynamics that such fights take when regarded from the point of view of each participant.Yeah, poor Cissy. That's what you get for making whoopee
awhh, i was hoping for a better night for lucius and narcissa..
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Well, they must not have it too easily, eh?
Oh, dear lord, its hit the fan....poor Andy. And when on earth shall Narcissa and Lucius get together, since it seems they shall no longer both attend Hogwarts?
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Oh, thing will be getting a tad worse still, I'm afraid. As for Lucius and Narcissa - well, since the outcome of their romance is so totally well-known, I thought I'd have to keep up the tension by separating them for a bit. Which will also give Narcissa the chance to see what was in her grasp so long, and has so utterly slipped away from her. I believe in the saying that one can sometimes only see a thing's true value when losing it.
Well, after seeing the patrilineal line of the Malfoy family, Draco is an absoltue gem! LOL I think it was interesting that both of them are used to being rather dignified in public, and were wrong-footed by their families in this case. It's a clever way you've given them a common ground. I was also intrigued at the mentilon of Narcissa's academic idol. I honestly thought you were refering to Dumbledore... excellent!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!!!Yeah, Narcissa is a bit of an intellectual groupie. She and Dumbledore might have been great friends if she were a hundred years older, but as things are, and with her knowing only his 'old' self, she'd rather idolise brilliant Tom Riddle Yes, Draco didn't turn out half that bad, seeing his gene pool, don't you think? But he's got one material advantage - he'll grow up with loving, caring parents.
Aww, poor Lucius!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Ah, come on - he had it coming, don't you think?
I've heard of doing things the hard way, but Lucius seems to do nothing but spite himself. I am pleased to see that Narcissa is getting more interested in him. He can be charming, an arrogant bastard, yes, but a charming one! This is quite the spell-binding little tale!
Response from Memento (Author of Memento Mori)
Thank you so much!Well, Narcissa IS - always was in a way - interested in him. He would not bug her so badly if she hadn't always been intrigued by him. She's just acutely aware that she has no reason to trust him, so she fights her affection for him. Allowing him to become her friend was a first, guarded step to permit him into her life. After all, she's pretty young - at this point of the story, she's 16, so the greater part of his 'courting' her, she was 13, 14 - she was 15 when joining the Septuplet, while he acts the experienced, elder guy. She's not ready for that. Yet ;)