Brilliant! - love the different detailed reactions of both Severus and Lupin when receiving the Dark Mark; and Voldemort's calculating observations... Mulciber is such a rancid jerk - a little bit of him goes a long way. Thank you! 

Love the eruptive adolescent jabbing and hormonal rough dynamics between Severus & Remus, very believable frustration and reponses of these two stressed out young men. Also, intriguing elements with Remus being curious and fascinated with the new 'Death Eaters' & Voldemort - he did become (in my humble opinion) one the best Dark Arts teachers ('takes one to know one' element) and this is exciting to see it depicted how he could have dabbled/participated and uderstood the Dark Arts so well as he came to be able to. Reading on! 

Mmmn... 'never trust a Slytherin, miss'- love the sparks of a dark, sensual undertones erupting out, throughout the story, but particularly here, turning the tables unexpectedy, uncontrollaby daring as the young man with needs would respond naturally, but also his feeling Charmaine is more his equal and more... and Charmaine's angst/conflict... Best wishes for the New Year, quaffswinegaily!