As Mad as a Cut Snake
Chapter 21 of 31
quaffswinegailyTelling times.
ReviewedAs Mad as a Cut Snake
Disclaimer: It's going to get messy. I could take them all home and keep them out of trouble.
A/N: I dedicate this chapter to my Moravian friends, who will be losing their jobs when RAF Kinloss closes (see chapter 7).
Telling Voldemort about the prophecy was the easy part.
The tall wizard listened intently as Severus talked. Leaning forward from his raised seat, he observed the younger man closely. "So it's about a young boy, is it?"
Severus nodded in response.
Steepling his fingers, Voldemort continued. "I wonder why you are telling me this now, and why you appear to be so upset, Severus." He touched his fingertips to his lips as he mused. "Could it be you know which boy this prophecy is referring to? Hmm?"
His gimlet eyes caught the slight shift in Snape's expression. "Aah! I'm right, aren't I?" The edges of his lips moved a fraction in what might have been a smile.
He beckoned to the wizard standing behind him. "Malfoy, tell me which of our opposition have recently produced offspring."
The platinum haired wizard leant down and murmured in Voldemort's ear.
"No, not the Lovegoods, they had a girl, and too young. The Potters... Interesting... Indeed. Thank you, Lucius." Voldemort waved him away. "It appears, Severus, I have no choice other than to annihilate everyone in the Potters' house. That should avert the problem, don't you think? Oh, don't look so shocked. What did you expect me to do?"
"Let me go there first, my Lord, and remove any innocent bystanders."
"You wish to save the witch you had a teenage crush on?"
Severus nodded, avoiding eye contact.
Voldemort tittered girlishly, then leaned forward in his seat. "Let me tell you something in confidence."
He spoke quietly, so only the two of them could hear. "The Potters' house is Secret Kept, and I know the address. Your information has been invaluable. We will attack later tonight, after the revels. I want you to be there, Severus. You must come to..." He bent his head and whispered the address in Severus's ear. Sitting back, he smiled again.
"Now, run along and prepare yourself for the fun, my boy."
*
Telling Dumbledore was harder.
Dumbledore didn't want anyone overhearing this conversation with Professor Snape. Mademoiselle Bien-Aimée had warned him something terrible was going to happen soon, and when it did, he would have to trust his staff all his staff. She had been most emphatic about that, but he still had reservations about young Snape. Severus was not an easy man to like, though so far he had done nothing to cause any mistrust. Albus felt uneasy. He intended to maintain the upper hand in this encounter, so remained hidden until Snape arrived.
He chose to meet at the edge of the Forbidden Forest, out of sight of the school, but close enough to summon help if needed. Dark had already fallen, despite the relatively early hour. It was one thing he hated about living this far north, that and the miserable weather. At Hogwarts, they were as far north as Moscow, or Canada where they have polar bears, for goodness sake. Louring clouds rolled in across the already bleak sky, driven by a howling wind which sent icy rain lashing down.
Snape arrived in full defensive mode, clutching his wand so tight his knuckles whitened. His stringy hair whipped around his thin face in the mean wind.
Dumbledore could not risk duelling with this powerful, wild young man. Instead, Albus disarmed him quickly, for his own safety, before making his presence known.
Severus appeared distraught as he explained how he had told Voldemort about the prophecy, how he had asked the Dark Lord to spare the innocents in the house, how everyone was going to be killed. Everyone, including the love of his life. Falling to his knees in his distress, he looked up at Dumbledore, pleading for him to save her.
Dumbledore was unable to hide his contempt. "And what will you give me in return, Severus?"
"Anything." His voice was no more than a breath on the wind.
"I'll see what I can do, Professor Snape," replied Dumbledore.
As soon as Dumbledore had left, it dawned on Severus the headmaster probably thought he was talking about Lily Evans.
"Shit! Charmaine!" Albus could protect the Potters, but who would protect Charmaine? That was his job.
*
Telling the Potters wasn't so easy either.
"What do you think you're doing, Snivellus, turning up at my door uninvited?" James Potter sneered at the dishevelled wizard, standing dripping on his doorstep.
"Let me in, Potter. This is important."
"You're not coming into my home with my family, you Death Eater scum."
"Please, let me explain."
"I don't want to hear anything from you, Snape." James tried to slam the door, but Snape's foot stopped it.
"Who's at the door, James?" a woman's voice asked from inside the house.
"No-one important, my gilded Lily," James called back in reply. "He's just leaving. You stay inside in the warmth, sweetheart."
Lily's face appeared briefly in the hallway behind James. She gave Severus a quick smile and a wave before disappearing back into the house as the sound of a crying infant increased.
Severus pushed his point. "Don't you realise, if I'm here, your Secret Kept address is no longer a secret. You're in real danger, Potter. If you won't listen to me for your own sake, at least hear me out for Lily's sake... and your son's."
James crossed his arms. "Go on and be quick."
"Someone has betrayed you, and Voldemort knows where you live. He..."
"Do you think we're unprotected, Snivellus?"
Disdain spread across Potter's face. "Our most powerful wizards and witches have been working to safeguard us, your beloved, ex-professor Charmaine among them."
"Charmaine... Is she here?"
"And why do you want to know?"
"May I speak with her?"
"I'm sure she's not interested in speaking with you."
"Please."
"Oh, for goodness sake, I'll get her. You stay here. Don't even think about trying to come into my house." James tried to shut the door, but Snape's foot remained resolutely in the way. Potter huffed. "I'll send her out to you, and then you will leave. I don't want to see your face at my door ever again."
*
There was no need to tell Charmaine. Somehow, she seemed to know.
"Severus!" She threw her arms around him. "I'm so glad to see you. Let's get out of here. You'll be in great danger if we don't go now."
Snape's mouth gaped open.
Grabbing his hand, Charmaine started to run, dragging him to the nearby Apparition point. "Come on. Now."
As they slowed down close to the spot, Severus tried to speak to her. "Charmaine, I'm sorry, I..."
She turned towards him abruptly. "No, Severus. I should apologise for losing my temper. I always expect you to be more mature than you are. You're still so young."
Snape's demeanour became rigid. "So I'm too young. Is that the problem?"
Gently, Charmaine took his face in her hands, gazing deep into his troubled eyes. "You cannot even begin to know the truth, Severus. One of these days, I'll have the time and the courage to explain everything to you. Not now though. We have to go."
"Where?"
"Take me to Voldemort."
*
Charmaine telling Voldemort was the worst.
As soon as they arrived, Severus regretted bringing her. Death Eaters' revels were underway, and the nauseating mix of laughter and screams jangled his nerves. What had started as fun events had deteriorated, over the last year or so, into gut wrenching torture sessions led by the Lestranges.
It was with a sense of pride that he watched Charmaine close her eyes, take a deep breath, square her shoulders and raise her chin defiantly. "I've faced him before, I can do it again," she muttered under her breath. Opening her eyes, she gave him a brief nod. "I'm ready. Take me to him."
She followed close behind him as he led the way.
As usual, Voldemort was not in the main hall where the revels were taking place, but in an adjacent room with a magically enhanced window, which allowed him to view the revels when he wished or to have a scene of his choice play across its enchanted surface. Tonight, he was watching sea-snakes swimming in azure waters.
"Ah, Snape. You have returned in time for our visit to the Potters. How appropriate you should join us."
Charmaine stepped out from behind Severus and drew herself up to her full height.
"Severus, you have brought a pretty witch for me, too. No, wait. This is the Poisons expert, isn't it?" Voldemort eyed her speculatively. "Come closer, so I can get to know you a little better. I could use a bright little witch like you."
Charmaine walked right up to his raised seat, stopping directly in front of him. Voldemort reached out a skinny finger and lifted one of her curls. "Yes. I think I might like this one."
She smacked his hand away. "Don't touch me."
"How dare you?" He drew his hand back to slap her, but she caught hold of his wrist as it descended.
"I dare... because I know you, Tom Riddle."
His features blanched slightly. A tight, high laugh escaped his lips. "And what do you know, Miss Know-it-all?"
"I know what you are planning to do tonight."
Voldemort glared at Severus. "Did you share this with her?"
"No, my Lord." Severus bowed his head, but kept watching Charmaine in his peripheral vision.
"No-one told me what you are going to do tonight. I know. I also know what will happen to you afterwards. I know... because I have seen it."
"What are you? A Divination expert? A Seer?" Voldemort's tone was disparaging.
Charmaine lifted her eyes to his and fixed him with a challenging gaze. "Do you want to know what I know, see what I have seen? Look into my mind, Tom Riddle."
Severus grabbed her hand, jerking her round to face him. "No, Charmaine! He is a powerful Legilimens; you can't occlude him."
She smiled wanly and laid a soothing hand on his cheek. "I know, Severus, but I have to do this." Turning back to Voldemort, she looked him straight in the eyes, pushing the images she wanted him to see to the front of her mind. "Go on then, Snake Face," she muttered.
Severus watched Voldemort hold Charmaine's gaze. Long fingers gripped her chin as Voldemort whispered a quiet Legilimens.
Snape could almost feel the force of the probing as the mental connection was made. Charmaine shuddered, her pupils dilated and her breathing became harsh and rapid. Severus kept a tight grip on her hand.
Suddenly, Voldemort broke the connection. "You are lying!" he shouted.
"Why would I lie?"
"Crucio!" Voldemort's curse was so forceful, Severus felt the violence jolt through her and into him. Charmaine crumpled to the floor, her hand jerking out of Snape's grasp.
A second Cruciatus was aimed at Severus, who fell to the floor, writhing in agony.
Charmaine's lips pressed tight as if suppressing a scream. When Voldemort lifted the curse, a short breath passed across her lips.
Voldemort hissed at her. "You're wrong, you filthy little Mudblood."
Charmaine's teeth chattered together as she struggled back to her feet. Her muscles, still cramping in spasms, scarcely held her upright. She lifted her head, brushed her wayward hair out of her face and stared at Voldemort, challenging him. A trickle of blood ran down from her nose and over her top lip. She wiped it with the back of her hand, smearing blood up her cheek.
"You're pathetic, Tom Riddle. You're a little man with a big complex. I have nothing but contempt for you. I know you will be reduced to nothing. I have seen you destroyed. You may kill me, but..."
"Enough!" shrieked Voldemort, raining vicious curses down on her. Charmaine was flung backwards across the room. Crashing against the wall, she slid to the floor. Voldemort stalked over to her. Savagely, he kicked at her limp body. "You know nothing, you stupid witch!" he shouted, punctuating each word with a solid swing of his booted foot.
Gradually, his fury abated, and he stood breathing heavily. Without looking at Severus and with a voice dripping with venom, he said, "Get rid of her... permanently."
Voldemort strode towards the door. "I am going to deal with the Potters. I expect you to be there, Snape."
Fear swept over Severus. Kneeling at Charmaine's side, he pushed her hair off her face. Her eyelids flickered open, and she ran her tongue over her bleeding lip. "Severus?" Her speech slurred.
"Gods, Charmaine, how badly has he hurt you? I thought he was going to kill you, and I was completely useless." His Adam's apple bobbed up and down as he swallowed. "He... he wants me to get rid of you."
She raised a hand shakily to his tear-streaked cheek. "I think I'm badly injured. This feels worse than last time. You've got to do it, Severus."
"No! Don't ask me to kill you. That's not... that's not a fair thing to ask of anyone."
Her smile was barely a twitch of her lips as she patted his chest pocket. "I know. I'm not asking that of you. Just... send me away."
Understanding dawned on Severus. "The Portkey."
She nodded slightly.
"Charmaine, I desperately want you to stay with me. I don't want to send you away, knowing you will never come back."
Her breathing was becoming more ragged. "Severus, I may not survive."
Making up his mind, he pulled the handkerchief from his pocket. "I need you, Charmaine, but right now I need you to leave even more."
He looked at the small scrap of material. "Where will this take you?"
She shrugged. "Don't know."
"Will there be someone there to look after you?"
Another small shrug. Her hand crept up inside his sleeve, and she pressed her thumb gently to his Blaze. Warmth and bittersweet emotions ran through him.
He held the handkerchief out towards her. "Here, take it."
"Such a charming gift for your beloved professor," she murmured, her head lolling back and her eyes closing.
"Charmaine! Charmaine!" Severus shook her gently, but there was no response. He hugged her limp body to his chest, kissed her hair and her blood smeared cheek. "No! Don't die! Don't leave me!"
Realising he still held the hanky clenched in his fist, he tucked it into her hand and curled her lifeless fingers around it.
And then she was gone.
*
Dumbledore had to be told.
"What do you mean, they're dead?" Snape demanded, incredulity sharpening his tone.
"We didn't get there in time."
"I warned you. You had plenty of time. I thought you were going to keep her safe. I thought... you were going... to keep her... safe," he ground out between gritted teeth. "They're all gone... dead... and you want me to protect her son. He doesn't need my protection. The Dark Lord has gone..."
"The Dark Lord will return."
"How do you know, Dumbledore?"
"Charmaine..."
"Charmaine is gone," Severus raged. "I tried to save her, and she's... gone."
Albus quailed at the young wizard's vehemence.
Slowly, Severus regained his composure. "Very well, I will do as you ask, but you must never tell anyone."
*
Telling Lupin broke his heart.
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Damn so he came back cured of the love that he had,but stilled loved them as a friend.I am not sure I understand how he was cured from being dead...did he not really die cause of the Blaze? I loved the story,felt a little rushed at the end,but it was supposed to be a one shot right!! Great work thanks!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thanks for taking the time to read to the finish and review. I wrote this story three years ago, so perhaps would take more time on the ending now. Maybe one day I'll revisit it.
I think they could have been a triad. Do you ever write those stories? You would write a great one I know!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I haven't yet. Maybe one day.
i like the older Snape and I am sure Hermione does too!!Great story!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
He matures rather well.
If he had lived would Lupin have been thier third? I would like to think so...I LOVE this story!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Perhaps... or maybe not...
i love the way you incorporate canon and fanon!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thank you very much. I appreciate your reviews.
poor Severus and poor(Hermione?)
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Indeed.
I never liked Lily, a real friend would have forgiven!! I hate the fact Severus never recoved from her loss and went to his death alone on a dirty floor...Thank goodness for fan fiction!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Fan fiction just lets us explore other options.
i was not expecting the unicorn to hurt our Severus!! I think it is for the good in the long run!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Here's hoping...
Hermione?
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Really?
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
Hahaha!
oMG, this really could have happened this way!! Poor Severus this is breaking my heart
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
It's certainly a possibility.
like the start of this!! How dare they shave Severus' hair!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I know. Oily and lank though it may be at times, we do love his hair.
If the professor knew how the dance went, why would she not be prepared to be kissed by Severus? It seems odd that a professor would dance this dance with a student. Obviously she has some kind of magical sight that Severus can pick up on when he touches her. Legilimins? Could they have gotten away with a kiss on the cheek? She should chastise Snotter for trapping her and Severus and taunting him right in front of a teacher. I know I need to just buck and deal with the tragedy that is Silly Lily Evens the idiot girl who has no ability to judge character and Severus Snape. I still don't like it though. F the Gryffindors. I hates them all!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm sure they woudn't have let them go with just a kiss on the cheek.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm sure they woudn't have let them go with just a kiss on the cheek.
Lily is such a little airheaded dolt! She has no common sense! She knows Severus better than that! She should know he wouldn't say such a thing! And that Snotter deserves to be killed by Voldemort. The world is better off without his kind of riff raff. I know that sounds stinky, but I'm a fat, greyheaded, crotchety and cantankerous old broad so I get to say things like that. "That little whiper snaper probably smokes dope like all them other little pimply faced reprobates! All those young people are are on dope, damn it!" That's the mood I'm in and it's late. So I'd better go to bed before I do or say anything else antisocial. If you knew the week I've been having you'd understand. Some little wanker stole my car and got it impounded for driving with no licence and for possession. He also just happens to be married to my idiot, enabling daughter who makes excuses for the little A-hole. I have no idea who raised these damn kids of mine! Just freeking kill me now before I ever have to live with with any of the ungrateful leeches. I'll have bed sores and a wet diaper all the time. I could totally kick that drunk, skinny little ass of his if I wanted to, you know... he's a little putz and I weigh more than he does. All I have to do is knock him down and sit on his face until he suffocates. He just better hope I don't cough, sneeze or laugh while I'm at it! Oops! it's too late. There I went and said something else antisocial. Somebody make me go to bed! I have to work tomorrow so I can buy diapers and wipes for my spawn's babies.If you have to have kids, for the love of god don't have girls! Drama Drama Drama! I'm just warning you now. Kids are over freeking rated. It's time for sleeping pills. I can't believe how late it is and I'm still up bitching... Now you know why I read Harry Potter fan fiction. In my head magic is fixing everything right now and Snape thinks I am the sexiest thing he's ever seen!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I hope this manages to take you away from real life dramas, if only for a short time.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I hope this manages to take you away from real life dramas, if only for a short time.
What special gift does she have? Oooooo, I know! She must be a werewolf! No wait. She does't smell of dog. But maybe she just knows how to keep the smell away. Hmmmmm. Touching Snape's face would have been OK if he had been a 4th grader but, teenager? Does she uderstand teenage male hormone function? Or should I call it a disorder? Just kidding. When I was a girl I didn't know what not to do around boys. I don't think I got wise until my mid 30's. I'm thinking she must be at least that old, however or she wouldn't have been thinking the things she was thinking. Women at the bottom of the hill wouldn't notice such attributes. Interesting.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Teenage male hormones... does anyone understand them?
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Teenage male hormones... does anyone understand them?
Hmmmm. She wants to let Severus know that Lupin is a Werewolf? I sincerely hope she isn't the one behind the prank that almost killed the young Severus. Why would Dumbledore want the two boys to work together? Training them for something? Are you saying that the speech on the first day of potions isn't Severus Snape's original work? I am very surprised he would use someone elses speech, but I guess if she turns out to be someone he truely admires I suppose he might use it to honor her. Maybe it caught his interest so well that it inspired him for life and he uses it hoping to inspire other young people the way he was. I guess we will find out. Black is such an arse! No wait, worse, he's a vulgar dick head. I take it we won't be super attached to Sirius Black in this story. That's fine with me. I read for the love of Severus Snape and the love of Snape/Granger romance.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Hopefully all will become clearer as the story moves on.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Hopefully all will become clearer as the story moves on.
Bummer! They shaved his beautiful long black hair. Hasn't the poor man suffered enough assault to his dignity? I wonder why they let him out of Azkaban for the funeral? Is it to humiliate him? Is he out of Azkaban but under house arrest with guards? It must be shocking to Hermione to see Snape sobbing. I guess you'll tell us how he survived the war. An ausicious beginning!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
This has got to be one of the most gorgeous convoluted twisty exciting mind bending epic stories I've ever read!
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Thanks very much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this and appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thanks very much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this and appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
I started reading this just before bed time, telling myself that I'd only read a chapter or two then off to bed... its now 5:30AM and I just finished! I just couldnt stop reading! I loved it. I really enjoyed every word! Great job and I look forward to reading more from you!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm absolutely delighted. Thank you very much. Now, go and get some sleep!
What a fun roller coaster! Thanks for posting it where we can read it.
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You're most welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for taking the time to stop and leave a review.
Charming story! I've definitely never read anything like it. I love the Portkey idea, and how the story flowed between the past and the present. Thanks.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thanks for reviewing. This was my first ever long fic. I hope you enjoyed it.
I'm not sure if I loved the story more or the A/N! Fabulous write;)
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Thanks very much. I really appreciate your review. A/N: must remember to give everyone squishy hugs for reviewing...
Thank you for a happy ending - Severus & Hermione wedded, and Remus brought back, as well as Remus finding another special person to love and share/continue a new life with! I can't believe you intended this first to be only a one shot - thank Merlin's Beard that you got carried away or we all would never have had this wonderful, creative adventure in our ff lives - big heartfelt thanks! Looking forward to more of your multi-chaptered works as well as all others!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
It was a one shot, but the darned thing wouldn't lie down. Normally I struggle to string more than a couple of words together, so this was a bit of a one off. Thanks very much for your encouragement. Cheers, qwg
Ah-ah, Quaffie. I told you quite a few chapters back that you couldn't kill off Remus and you told me to get some new specs or something of that ilk because your prologue dictated that the lovely werewolf had shuffled off his mortal coil or pelt or whatever. Hmmmph. I'd like you to know lassie that I have 20-20 vision....and hindsight and can see through walls too. I enjoyed this ending but I secretly thought that Remus was going to end up with Harry. No??? Anyway thank you for a wonderful story. I have thoroughly enjoyed both Remus and Severus' and indeed our banter over the last few months and look forward to hearing from you again in the near future. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Fie on you, and your xray, 3D, perception... glasses... thingies. It was very tempting to set Remus up with Harry, or in a threesome, but Jo was looking a bit left out. And being a true Aussie sheila used to wrangling crocs and dingoes, I reckoned she'd be able to manage his scrawny, flea-bitten hide.And the bloomin' happy ending fairy took over...I'm away to sink into the slough of despond, or onto the couch, or anywhere out of this infernal summer heat. Thanks for all your edifying reviews.Cheers, qwg
So glad this was more than a one shot! I've loved every minute of it. I'm really loving this unicorn magic. You should explore it more in future stories. Beautifully written and one of my favorite fics.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm very glad you liked it. The story just kept expanding - in some part due to sunny33, who read the original, and never made a comment, but the look on her face just said 'crap ending, write some more' - so I did (but not exactly what she wanted).As for more unicorns - not sure if I trust the mutant horse much - we'll wait and see.Thanks for all your lovely reviews.Cheers, qwg
Yay for you! Your first long fic and it went out on top. This was an even better ending than expected. I have to have my happy ending, always, and I knew you would let Severus and Hermione end in that fashion, but I was so pleased to find that they were able to have their friend back, even if it was through a portrait. THEN, you went and did one better by bringing him back for real. I, for one, am pleased that this one-shot got carried away. Feel free to let that happen again ...
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Darn! The happy ending fairy got a bit over exuberant, didn't she? I'll have to go and think up something evil she can't tamper with. I hope you enjoyed the read. Really, it shouldn't have worked - a story about a time travelling poisoner, a dead werewolf and a hard drinking wizard with memory defecit. What a load of tosh!Thanks for all your wonderful reviews, they are much appreciated.Cheers, qwg