Carpe Canem
Chapter 14 of 31
quaffswinegailyWho wants to be a Death Eater?
ReviewedCarpe Canem
Disclaimer: At the start of every chapter I have to write that I make no money from this; you already know that.
Voldemort was receiving the new initiates. An air of anxious excitement pervaded the room as each of them approached the dais to be introduced by their sponsor. Before accepting them as Death Eaters, Voldemort drew each young witch or wizard forward. Casting a firm Legilimens, he entered their minds and assessed each one. After they were judged, they were moved quickly into adjacent rooms.
Severus stood behind Mulciber as the line moved forwards and the room gradually emptied. Lucius Malfoy stood at his side, having graciously offered to be his sponsor. Last in the line, behind Snape, was Remus Lupin. No one stood next to him. None of the Death Eaters had offered to introduce him.
Severus could hear the werewolf muttering nervously to himself. "I'm not sure about this. What are we getting ourselves into?"
Leaning forward, Lupin put a hand on Snape's shoulder.
Severus patted the hand in reassurance. "It'll be fine, Lupin. What's the worst that could happen?"
"I don't know..."
"...Severus Snape."
Snape flinched. He had missed Lucius introducing him to Voldemort. Remus squeezed his shoulder, and Severus stepped forward. Bony fingers grasped his chin as Voldemort looked him over.
"I'm not sure if we need any half-bloods in our ranks. Are you worth having, Snape?"
Severus lifted his eyes and met the other wizard's cold gaze, resisting the urge to look away.
"You think you are worthy of a Death Eater's mask, do you?"
Severus nodded very slightly.
"If you take the Dark Mark, you will be tied to me until death. You understand that, don't you?"
Snape swallowed hard and nodded again, unflinching.
Before Severus realised what was happening, Voldemort entered his mind. With brutal force the older wizard pushed aside Snape's school learning, riffled through his early years, then hauled up the memories of Snape being bullied. He took longer examining these, before giving a mental nod and moving onward. Finally, he came to Severus's memories of Charmaine.
Severus struggled, mentally pushing him away. Subconsciously, Severus desperately wanted to keep those private. They were precious to him and not for anyone else to peruse at their leisure.
He sensed Voldemort trying to manipulate his mind in order to view the images, groping for another way to access them. Memories seeped out under the onslaught. Charmaine.
"Fascinating," murmured Voldemort as he withdrew. He released his grip, allowing Snape to slump to his knees on the floor. "Potions and Poisons. That's a dangerous combination, but with the two of you together we would be unbeatable."
He looked down at the wizard crumpled at his feet with obvious disdain. "Get up, Snape, for goodness sake. I will take you, even though you don't have the best breeding. Bring your Poisons mistress with you sometime. I would be most interested to meet her."
He motioned for Snape to move away. "Next."
Lupin stepped forward hesitantly.
"Have you no sponsor to introduce you?" Voldemort enquired with a malicious edge to his voice.
Lupin shook his head, shaggy hair flopping in his eyes.
Severus hauled himself to his feet, coming to stand next to Remus. "I will speak for him."
"Who is he, and what talents does he bring?"
"My Lord Voldemort..."
"My Lord. I like that." Voldemort smirked. "Continue, Snape."
"My Lord Voldemort, may I present Remus Lupin, the werewolf."
Remus shot him a startled look, and his mouth opened to protest.
"A werewolf? I expect your mind will be a howling void." Voldemort's mouth tightened in another smirk.
"How droll, my lord."
"Don't patronise me, Malfoy," Voldemort snapped.
Lucius appeared unruffled, despite the icy glare he received.
"I will accept the werewolf only because he could be useful in future communications with the wild werewolves. Please do not let any of the others know what you are, Lupin. They may panic, and we wouldn't want that, would we?"
Rising, he strode ahead of them into the next room, stopping just inside the doorway. Snape and Malfoy instinctively stepped to either side of him as they entered and stood slightly behind him, waiting. A susurrus of whispers rippled across the room at the sight of the blond and dark wizards flanking their leader, as if it were their rightful place.
Voldemort raised his voice slightly and, holding his arms aloft, invited the gathering to start the initiation ceremony.
Snape and Remus found themselves at the back of the line again. They watched in trepidation as the first initiate stepped forward to receive the Dark Mark. Expecting the Mark to be hot-branded on to the young wizard's forearm, they were pleasantly surprised to see Voldemort gently press his wand tip to the skin. A quiet incantation from the powerful wizard generated the tattoo, which blossomed in slowly intensifying greys through to black.
With an expanding smile and an ecstatic sigh, the initiate swooned into the waiting arms of his sponsor, who carried him gently through to yet another room. Before the door swung closed behind them, the strains of happy singing and joyous whoops seeped through to the waiting line of initiates.
"Well, that doesn't seem too bad," Remus commented.
Snape relaxed a little as the same happened with each new Death Eater.
"There's still time to back out if you're not up to it, Snape," Remus whispered as Mulciber was carried from the room. He gave Severus a feral grin.
Severus squared his shoulders and stepped up to the front. Rolling up his sleeve, he laid his bared left forearm on the table-top.
"What is this?" Voldemort hissed, touching his wand tip to the silver starburst on Snape's skin.
Pain lancing up his arm made Severus wince, and he tried to withdraw.
"No! You are mine now, young Snape, until death. We agreed. Hold him, Malfoy."
Lucius gripped hard, clamping Severus's arm to the table. Delicately, Voldemort touched Snape's forearm again with his wand and started to chant.
A tortured groan escaped Snape's lips as he writhed in agony, trying to escape Malfoy's vice-like grip and the searing pain of the growing Dark Mark.
As suddenly as it started, it was over. Severus collapsed to the floor, sweating and shaking. He cradled his left arm weakly. Remus grabbed his hand and pressed hard on the Blaze. Snape roared in pain as intense cold surged from the silver spot, through his forearm and into the new tattoo. Silvered crystals bloomed around the tattoo's edge before subsiding into a pearly grey, outlining the skull and serpent. Shudders wracked Snape's slender frame as the strange, burning cold subsided.
"Very interesting," murmured Voldemort, peering closely at the variation in the Mark. He gave Severus an appraising look. "Very interesting, indeed."
Straightening up, he smoothed his robes with long fingers. "And now, the werewolf. Stand up, Snape, if you are going to be his sponsor."
Voldemort motioned for the young wizards to approach him.
Severus held Lupin's wrist and pushed his sleeve up past the elbow with still shaking hands. He looked into Remus's warm, brown eyes as he did, with an unspoken question. Remus returned his gaze steadily and gave a small nod. "We're in this together, Severus, mate."
They turned to Voldemort, and Severus held Lupin's arm securely. As the Dark Lord started his spell, Remus yelped and pulled away. Snape's grip tightened, holding him firm.
"Severus, it hurts," Remus snarled, looking into Snape's darkening eyes. "No! Ow!" His voice rose in anguish. "Ow, ow, ow, oowowow!"
Lupin threw his head back and let out a deep-throated howl.
Voldemort finished his incantation and stepped back. Leaping away, clutching his forearm, Lupin growled a string of profanities softly to himself as he wriggled his fingers to relieve the pain.
"Show me your arm, werewolf." Voldemort held out a pale hand.
Cautiously, Remus extended his trembling arm, turning it so they could all see where Voldemort had made his brand. There was no skull, no snake, only a faint greying of the skin and a soft fuzz of fur.
Voldemort inhaled sharply before letting his breath out in a long, low hiss.
"There was always a risk it wouldn't work on the werewolf, but worth the attempt, I think. Yes, I expect it will still have some effect, though maybe not fully." He nodded to himself. "I have had enough experimentation for the night."
Looking up at the three wizards in front of him, Voldemort gave them a thin smile. "Snape, take this young man home. As I said before, I do not want the rest of my Death Eaters upset by his... differences." Turning away, he headed for the door. "Lucius, escort me. We have revels to attend."
Lupin slumped against Snape as the door closed behind the older wizards. He draped an arm around the skinny shoulders of his pallid friend.
Suddenly, the door burst open again. Mulciber stumbled through, looking flushed and intoxicated. He came to an abrupt halt, swaying slightly. "What happened to you guys? Merlin, you look terrible. I heard screaming and howling. It sounded like you'd been thrown to the wolves." He giggled.
"Lupin got a little animated by the ceremony," Snape sneered. "Lord Voldemort has asked me to escort him home."
Lupin scowled at Snape as the dark wizard grabbed his arm and dragged him out of the door.
"Let's go, Lupin, before he realises how close to the mark he is," murmured Snape.
"Owowow!" howled Mulciber behind them, staggering back through to the other room, laughing.
A/N: carpe canem = seize the dog. I apologise if the Latin is not quite right. It has been more than three decades since the dominie (complete with chalk-dust encrusted, academic gown and mortar board) asked me not to come back to the Latin class.
Thanks again to sunny33 for her beta work.
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Damn so he came back cured of the love that he had,but stilled loved them as a friend.I am not sure I understand how he was cured from being dead...did he not really die cause of the Blaze? I loved the story,felt a little rushed at the end,but it was supposed to be a one shot right!! Great work thanks!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thanks for taking the time to read to the finish and review. I wrote this story three years ago, so perhaps would take more time on the ending now. Maybe one day I'll revisit it.
I think they could have been a triad. Do you ever write those stories? You would write a great one I know!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I haven't yet. Maybe one day.
i like the older Snape and I am sure Hermione does too!!Great story!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
He matures rather well.
If he had lived would Lupin have been thier third? I would like to think so...I LOVE this story!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Perhaps... or maybe not...
i love the way you incorporate canon and fanon!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thank you very much. I appreciate your reviews.
poor Severus and poor(Hermione?)
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Indeed.
I never liked Lily, a real friend would have forgiven!! I hate the fact Severus never recoved from her loss and went to his death alone on a dirty floor...Thank goodness for fan fiction!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Fan fiction just lets us explore other options.
i was not expecting the unicorn to hurt our Severus!! I think it is for the good in the long run!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Here's hoping...
Hermione?
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Really?
Response from deedeebug95 (Reviewer)
Hahaha!
oMG, this really could have happened this way!! Poor Severus this is breaking my heart
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
It's certainly a possibility.
like the start of this!! How dare they shave Severus' hair!!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I know. Oily and lank though it may be at times, we do love his hair.
If the professor knew how the dance went, why would she not be prepared to be kissed by Severus? It seems odd that a professor would dance this dance with a student. Obviously she has some kind of magical sight that Severus can pick up on when he touches her. Legilimins? Could they have gotten away with a kiss on the cheek? She should chastise Snotter for trapping her and Severus and taunting him right in front of a teacher. I know I need to just buck and deal with the tragedy that is Silly Lily Evens the idiot girl who has no ability to judge character and Severus Snape. I still don't like it though. F the Gryffindors. I hates them all!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm sure they woudn't have let them go with just a kiss on the cheek.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm sure they woudn't have let them go with just a kiss on the cheek.
Lily is such a little airheaded dolt! She has no common sense! She knows Severus better than that! She should know he wouldn't say such a thing! And that Snotter deserves to be killed by Voldemort. The world is better off without his kind of riff raff. I know that sounds stinky, but I'm a fat, greyheaded, crotchety and cantankerous old broad so I get to say things like that. "That little whiper snaper probably smokes dope like all them other little pimply faced reprobates! All those young people are are on dope, damn it!" That's the mood I'm in and it's late. So I'd better go to bed before I do or say anything else antisocial. If you knew the week I've been having you'd understand. Some little wanker stole my car and got it impounded for driving with no licence and for possession. He also just happens to be married to my idiot, enabling daughter who makes excuses for the little A-hole. I have no idea who raised these damn kids of mine! Just freeking kill me now before I ever have to live with with any of the ungrateful leeches. I'll have bed sores and a wet diaper all the time. I could totally kick that drunk, skinny little ass of his if I wanted to, you know... he's a little putz and I weigh more than he does. All I have to do is knock him down and sit on his face until he suffocates. He just better hope I don't cough, sneeze or laugh while I'm at it! Oops! it's too late. There I went and said something else antisocial. Somebody make me go to bed! I have to work tomorrow so I can buy diapers and wipes for my spawn's babies.If you have to have kids, for the love of god don't have girls! Drama Drama Drama! I'm just warning you now. Kids are over freeking rated. It's time for sleeping pills. I can't believe how late it is and I'm still up bitching... Now you know why I read Harry Potter fan fiction. In my head magic is fixing everything right now and Snape thinks I am the sexiest thing he's ever seen!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I hope this manages to take you away from real life dramas, if only for a short time.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I hope this manages to take you away from real life dramas, if only for a short time.
What special gift does she have? Oooooo, I know! She must be a werewolf! No wait. She does't smell of dog. But maybe she just knows how to keep the smell away. Hmmmmm. Touching Snape's face would have been OK if he had been a 4th grader but, teenager? Does she uderstand teenage male hormone function? Or should I call it a disorder? Just kidding. When I was a girl I didn't know what not to do around boys. I don't think I got wise until my mid 30's. I'm thinking she must be at least that old, however or she wouldn't have been thinking the things she was thinking. Women at the bottom of the hill wouldn't notice such attributes. Interesting.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Teenage male hormones... does anyone understand them?
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Teenage male hormones... does anyone understand them?
Hmmmm. She wants to let Severus know that Lupin is a Werewolf? I sincerely hope she isn't the one behind the prank that almost killed the young Severus. Why would Dumbledore want the two boys to work together? Training them for something? Are you saying that the speech on the first day of potions isn't Severus Snape's original work? I am very surprised he would use someone elses speech, but I guess if she turns out to be someone he truely admires I suppose he might use it to honor her. Maybe it caught his interest so well that it inspired him for life and he uses it hoping to inspire other young people the way he was. I guess we will find out. Black is such an arse! No wait, worse, he's a vulgar dick head. I take it we won't be super attached to Sirius Black in this story. That's fine with me. I read for the love of Severus Snape and the love of Snape/Granger romance.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Hopefully all will become clearer as the story moves on.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Hopefully all will become clearer as the story moves on.
Bummer! They shaved his beautiful long black hair. Hasn't the poor man suffered enough assault to his dignity? I wonder why they let him out of Azkaban for the funeral? Is it to humiliate him? Is he out of Azkaban but under house arrest with guards? It must be shocking to Hermione to see Snape sobbing. I guess you'll tell us how he survived the war. An ausicious beginning!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thank you. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
This has got to be one of the most gorgeous convoluted twisty exciting mind bending epic stories I've ever read!
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Thanks very much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this and appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thanks very much. I'm delighted you enjoyed this and appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
I started reading this just before bed time, telling myself that I'd only read a chapter or two then off to bed... its now 5:30AM and I just finished! I just couldnt stop reading! I loved it. I really enjoyed every word! Great job and I look forward to reading more from you!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm absolutely delighted. Thank you very much. Now, go and get some sleep!
What a fun roller coaster! Thanks for posting it where we can read it.
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You're most welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks for taking the time to stop and leave a review.
Charming story! I've definitely never read anything like it. I love the Portkey idea, and how the story flowed between the past and the present. Thanks.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Thanks for reviewing. This was my first ever long fic. I hope you enjoyed it.
I'm not sure if I loved the story more or the A/N! Fabulous write;)
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Thanks very much. I really appreciate your review. A/N: must remember to give everyone squishy hugs for reviewing...
Thank you for a happy ending - Severus & Hermione wedded, and Remus brought back, as well as Remus finding another special person to love and share/continue a new life with! I can't believe you intended this first to be only a one shot - thank Merlin's Beard that you got carried away or we all would never have had this wonderful, creative adventure in our ff lives - big heartfelt thanks! Looking forward to more of your multi-chaptered works as well as all others!
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
It was a one shot, but the darned thing wouldn't lie down. Normally I struggle to string more than a couple of words together, so this was a bit of a one off. Thanks very much for your encouragement. Cheers, qwg
Ah-ah, Quaffie. I told you quite a few chapters back that you couldn't kill off Remus and you told me to get some new specs or something of that ilk because your prologue dictated that the lovely werewolf had shuffled off his mortal coil or pelt or whatever. Hmmmph. I'd like you to know lassie that I have 20-20 vision....and hindsight and can see through walls too. I enjoyed this ending but I secretly thought that Remus was going to end up with Harry. No??? Anyway thank you for a wonderful story. I have thoroughly enjoyed both Remus and Severus' and indeed our banter over the last few months and look forward to hearing from you again in the near future. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Fie on you, and your xray, 3D, perception... glasses... thingies. It was very tempting to set Remus up with Harry, or in a threesome, but Jo was looking a bit left out. And being a true Aussie sheila used to wrangling crocs and dingoes, I reckoned she'd be able to manage his scrawny, flea-bitten hide.And the bloomin' happy ending fairy took over...I'm away to sink into the slough of despond, or onto the couch, or anywhere out of this infernal summer heat. Thanks for all your edifying reviews.Cheers, qwg
So glad this was more than a one shot! I've loved every minute of it. I'm really loving this unicorn magic. You should explore it more in future stories. Beautifully written and one of my favorite fics.
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
I'm very glad you liked it. The story just kept expanding - in some part due to sunny33, who read the original, and never made a comment, but the look on her face just said 'crap ending, write some more' - so I did (but not exactly what she wanted).As for more unicorns - not sure if I trust the mutant horse much - we'll wait and see.Thanks for all your lovely reviews.Cheers, qwg
Yay for you! Your first long fic and it went out on top. This was an even better ending than expected. I have to have my happy ending, always, and I knew you would let Severus and Hermione end in that fashion, but I was so pleased to find that they were able to have their friend back, even if it was through a portrait. THEN, you went and did one better by bringing him back for real. I, for one, am pleased that this one-shot got carried away. Feel free to let that happen again ...
Response from quaffswinegaily (Author of A Man's Best Friend)
Darn! The happy ending fairy got a bit over exuberant, didn't she? I'll have to go and think up something evil she can't tamper with. I hope you enjoyed the read. Really, it shouldn't have worked - a story about a time travelling poisoner, a dead werewolf and a hard drinking wizard with memory defecit. What a load of tosh!Thanks for all your wonderful reviews, they are much appreciated.Cheers, qwg