Yay for quaffie! It's good to see this up. :)

How have I never come across this before??? I absolutely loved seenig a different twist on the relationship between Severus and Remus, and adore the role(s) Hermione plays. I especially appreciate how she was a little older by the time she went on her mission, so that when it was time for her to testify, she was still unaware of how she had shaped their history.I also love Douglas (snorts at his name!) - he's a wonderful character, and it's always fun to see new bits of magic or magical devices, like the Blaze, its protection on Severus, and effect on Hermione and Remus. I'm so glad this didn't remain a one-shot!

It was very interesting. Thank you!

Realllly great story!!!!!!!! Loved it much!

You and your evil cliffies!  I do understand Severus' thoughts, but I would hope that Hermione wouldn't react that way to him. 

Oh, I hope the next chapter is not yet written because I have a grand idea.  Severus tries to be his usual noble, self-sacrificing, (annoying), good-intentioned blah blah blah self, and turns her away.  She is so angry that she attacks him and knocks some sense into him giving him puffy eyelids and a swollen lip.  Then they can lie in bed together for days on end because it isn't safe for either of them to get up.  Yes, it's decided, LOL.Another great chapter to a fun story (even if you decide to take things a different route)!  Can't wait to see what she is ohing about.  Surely it isn't because she is going to reject him.  Silly man!

Severus always needs the chance to be oh so noble and self-sacrificing, doesn't he? Send him my way, and I'll slap it out of him! :)

Severus, you silly boy!  Would she reject him?!  Oh I hope not.  Oh she's surprised to find herself back in her own timeline, certainly.  LOL.  I can't wait for the next bit.

Dear, dear, dear.  I'm all a fret. I eagerly await the next update.  I can't think that her feelings have changed.  I hope not.  She went into this knowing the man first.Thank you again for sharing~

evil cliffhanger!!!still very interesting though - thanks for the updates

Whoa!  This chapter has me wanting to cheer because he kissed her and being afraid he's about to do something stupid to "protect her from what she thinks she wants."I hope she will put his fears to rest immediately before he has a chance to be "noble" and tell her that he really isn't the one she wants or needs.  Please, Severus.  She wants you.  She needs you.  And you want and need her.This just has to work out.  Please?  With sugar on it?  Thanks for another wonderful and emotional chapter!Beth

Or is it? Severus is always so pessimistic. Give him something to be optimistic about, girl! ^_^

Nothing wrong with him that a good big dodd of slap and tickle with a saucy trollop (moi!) wouldn't cure.....but I digress. Beautifully written last few chapters Quaffie, that even my slow, alcohol-addled brain managed to take in despite all the clever TimePortkey devices and theories. It doesn't take much to confuse me though. Hope you had a good Hogmanay. We spent ours in a hot-tub in East Lancashire with VERY good friends. And yes it was FF! I think the expression is "Madder than a bag of badgers". Best wishes and all the best for the New Year, Love Ali xxxx. 

Beautiful! - among many things, I love Severus the healer, but this moreso, as the culmination of all the intertwined past has come to this moment of new life for him as well as Hermione. Really breathtakingly lovely! Thank you!

Beautiful chapter. Well-done of having Severus remember,  relive the memories and, as painful as it is, having love rekindled and tentatively lost forever, for him, again.

Wonderful banter in their dialogue - HA!, and love it that Severus gives her the alias name, so befitting, and the handkerchief connection!

Love Minerva and Severus' relationship being shown, as well as the further intrigue and mystery surrounding Severus' work, Joanna and Hermione being drawn into the Deapartment of Mysteries.

Beautiful, poignant chapter... wondering how and if his other memories can be restored; so sad... 

Really powerful chapter - the action and dialogues spurring the heat of the scenes on - reading on!

Great dynamic chapter - love Charmaine's involvement with the Longbottom's and Potter's, bringing everything full circle with the prophecy... and the deaths... 

So Charmaine must stay to help them further prepare for the future, while still becoming more emotional vulnerable, knowing what the future holds... it will be a very difficult balance to hold onto... 

Love Remus' randy good-natured humour - it's lovely to think there could have been a time of 'normalcy' and warmth, true friendship and trust... before the storm. Love Charmaine's quiet sadness and foreboding worry. 

Love Severus and Remus' comraderie; the image of Severus having to attend Lily's wedding was quite painful/too much at first, but then got soothed out by his lovely reference to his own marriage and bride... and his love for Charmaine that he was finally able to force her to gear him out.

Love the teasing, humoured banter throughout the story, culminating here, and then the serious dynamic change at the end of this chapter with Severus' bitterness and disappointment sealing the final note.

Wonderful chapter - love Remus' forced transformation; the uncomfortable depiction of Remus in a cage... the beautiful gentle scene between Severus and Charmaine, about the reality of what the Mark truly is and will be for Severus.