Chapter 24
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 24 of 54
beaweasley2Variety Challenge first runner up. Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidentally alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
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Severus entered the staff room and frowned slightly, but imperceptibly to anyone who didn't know him well, at the witch sitting with imperious propriety between Dumbledore and Minerva wearing Pepto-Bismol pink robes and a matching pillbox-shaped hat. He sidestepped his usual chair and sat between Madam Hooch and Flitwick, getting warm smiles from both.
"An' how was your summer, Severus?" Rolanda asked softly.
"Tolerable," he replied, hoping that the meeting would start soon. "Yours?" Severus knew that the flying instructor went home to Düsseldorf evey summer, and he personally hoped that the news from her homeland would be favorable.
"You know, not so good," she said softly, leaning toward him slightly. "Went home. Although the effects of the heat can be felt, it's not as devastating as things in Scotland, Sussex, and Surrey. I heard that Mr. Potter had some trouble."
Severus concealed his reaction to her veiled report. "When does he not?" he asked, the tone of his voice projecting his condescending attitude about Potter's favoritism. "It was resolved in his favor."
"When is it not?" she said with a roll of her eyes, clearly alluding that she held the same opinion as he did. "Do tell the Headmaster that the young birch trees are listening, but many are still scarred from the last round of twig harvest and are not as pliable this season."
Severus refrained from smirking that her not-too-subtle use of metaphor meant that the young wizards and pure-blood families in Germany were not going to join in the Dark Lord's campaign. "Good to know, but why can't you tell him yourself?" he asked dryly, seeing Dumbledore rise to his feet.
"Have you seen the state of the school's brooms? I have to replace the twigs on over forty of them this year alone before the first flying lessons can be scheduled," she said, recoiling back slightly with wide eyes and a gaping mouth. She leaned toward him again. "Only because there is no budget for new brooms...again. Who's the witch with a fly-eating grin in the putrid pink robes?"
Severus chuckled softly only because he could well imagine how much damage fifty to sixty students a year could do to the school's brooms.
Dumbledore cleared his throat. "We're about to find out," Severus replied, turning his attention to the Headmaster.
"I would like to introduce you to Miss Dolores Umbridge, who shall be taking the post of Defense Against the Dark Arts," Dumbledore said, indicating the short, squat, and flaccid-looking witch with a wide-jowled face making an attempt at a girlish smile. Severus was immediately suspicious of her. "If you'd please make her welcome and..."
"Thank you, Headmaster, for that kind introduction," Umbridge interrupted the Headmaster, making the staff stare at her in astonishment. "I'm so looking forward to working with all of you in enlightening today's youth with the important relevant information they will need for their lives ahead of them. I'm sure that you, like me, can't wait to impart the fundamentals of magic in a safe and worry-free environment. I trust that we will work together to strive to do what's best for the students and in making them fine, upstanding members of our wizarding community. I like you ..."
Severus pinched the bridge of his nose as she droned on. When the witch was done rambling, everyone simply stared at her in silence.
"Ah, yes. Thank you, Professor Umbridge. I'm sure we are all looking forward to a productive year," Dumbledore stated, finally gaining control of the meeting. "Now, if I might bring up the matter of staff assignments. This year due to the reemergence of Voldemort..."
The irritating witch in pink coughed.
"We will be increasing the shifts to the nightly patrols and..."
Professor Umbridge coughed again, this time louder.
Dumbledore turned to look at her. "Yes, Professor, you have something to add?"
"Excuse me, Headmaster, I don't mean to be rude, but as of yet there is no proof that anyone of any great significance has returned, let alone a dead, Dark wizard," Umbridge said in a high-pitched saccharine-girlish voice that made Severus want to puke. "I have no idea why such considerations would be necessary."
Even Professor Flitwick rolled his eyes as the Headmaster replied, "Because I see it as a necessary precaution," and continued with the meeting, ignoring the indignant huff of the jowl-faced witch.
Severus had felt the usual headache coming on even before he had his first class of the day. Dolores Umbridge's speech at the Sorting Feast had been, as all political speeches went, mostly falsely polite platitudes and innuendos...but those innuendos had spelled out trouble for the year ahead. The Ministry was interfering at Hogwarts.
Ever since the first staff meeting, Severus had known that he distrusted the new professor, and now more than anything, Severus resented Dumbledore's insistence that he not be given the post of Defense Against the Dark Arts. Miss Umbridge, a stout supporter of Fudge, was apparently holding steadfast to his beliefs.
The Order knew that Fudge was paranoid, and his delusion that Dumbledore wanted to take over the Ministry was escalating. Never mind that Dumbledore had turned down the position each time the current Minister stated intention of stepping down. To date, Severus knew of at least ten times that the Headmaster had refused the post, possibly more. The first time was back in 1932, and then six years later, surprising everyone, when he'd chosen to take a position as Transfiguration professor instead of working for the Ministry. He'd declined the Minister's job again in 1947, two years after he'd defeated Gellert Grindelwald, and at least six more times since then. Heubert Meriwether, Undersecretary to Minister Bagnold, had offered the position to Dumbledore in 1990 before the Wizengamot approved Cornelius Fudge's appointment. How more definite could a wizard be that he simply isn't interested in the post?
Severus walked to his desk and tossed the Defensive Magical Theory by Wilbert Slinkhard on his bookshelf with disgust. It fell on the floor with a thud, but he left it where it landed. The book was pure tripe. Not one defensive spell or incantation at all. Four hundred and eighty-one pages with a twelve page prefix, twenty-nine page appendix, and ten pages of author's notes of useless information and dribble. What a waste of ink. That meant that the students would have a teacher that didn't want them fighting or learning any spells that could be used offensively, let alone defensively. And the Dark Lord is out there, slowly gathering his fold and making plans, and our seventh-years are going out there at the end of the year to face the Dark Lord and his Death Eaters with assertive communication skills and diplomacy? It's pure idiocy!
"Professor, do you have a moment?" Miss Brambila Rusbridge, one of his fifth-year Slytherins asked from the doorway.
"Yes, briefly. Class will start in five minutes," he said, ushering in the girl. Mr. Rayne Boughton and Miss Tracey Davis entered the room behind her, and all three walked quickly to his desk.
"Professor, I was wondering if we could talk to you about... er... Defense?" Miss Rusbridge asked shyly.
"All right," he said, hoping she'd get to the point. He had to be patient with her; he was her Head of House after all, but her timidity around him tested his reserves.
"She handed out this book," Miss Rusbridge replied, holding her Defensive Magical Theory in her hands and looked at Rayne Boughton, her boyfriend, for support.
"How are we supposed to pass our O.W.L. in Defense?" Mr. Boughton blurted out and set his copy of the book on Severus' desk. "Have you seen her book? It's all theory! Not one spell or actual defensive spell in here...unless non-offensive responses and talking nicely to your attacker count. Assertive communication my arse... er, sorry, sir. But this is important, and she acts like we won't even need a wand to learn how to defend ourselves."
Miss Davis nodded in agreement. "She said that she's teaching us in a 'safe, carefully structured, theory-centered, Ministry-approved course of defensive magic,'"* the girl said in a high-pitched imitation of the witch, "to quote the Toad."
Severus narrowed his eyes and pursed his lips in warning, to hide the smirk at her cheek. He liked Miss Davis; the girl had a sharp mind, when she applied herself, but a little bit of an attitude.
"I'm sorry, sir. I meant professor."
"Return after dinner, and we shall discuss this. No more cheek from you, Miss Davis; I expect better from you. And warn your housemates to do the same." The door opened, and he looked up, seeing the rest of the fifth-years filing in. "Now, take your seats. I have a lesson to teach."
Hermione set her quill down beside her on the bed and smiled at it as she remembered when she'd tried to make a spoon out of a broken quill. She'd found the right spell since then, of course, and she'd added the new transfigured spoon to her Potions kit. Professor Snape had been as demanding as always in his classroom, but something was bothering him; she could see it in the creases between his eyes. They were deeper...he was stressed about something, and she fervently hoped it wasn't Voldemort. "Surely he wouldn't summon him away from school? He'd be missed...it'd be noticed," she mumbled to Crooks when he jumped up on her bed.
He sat down and regarded her as if considering how to answer her, then proceeded to wash his face.
Hermione was absolutely disgusted with the way things were going this year. She had sorted out her schedule with Professor McGonagall, insisting that she loved all her lessons and really did want to take all of them. She knew it would be a daunting schedule, but nothing like her third year. Harry kept landing himself in detention with Professor Umbridge, even after Professor McGonagall had warned him to keep his temper. She'd even asked Hermione to try and keep Harry from losing his temper around the new Defense professor. As if that's remotely possible, she thought, sitting crossed-legged on her bed, reading her useless Defense book. She'd wanted to say the exact same thing in class, only Harry had beaten her to it. Of course, then she'd be the one in detention with that woman.
She shifted so she could look at the clock. He's probably still with her. He'll have at least another half-hour to go. Hopefully he'll watch his tongue and not get another. She laughed at the idea of Harry restraining himself and thinking before speaking. Not him. She wanted to ask him if he still had trouble with his scar. It could wait until morning, but sometimes the pain was intense enough to make him hiss. That worried her.
When Sirius had appeared in the Gryffindor common room fire, he'd tried to reassure Harry by telling him that now that Voldemort was back, his scar might hurt more often. That made sense, she supposed. But the information he'd told them about Umbridge, her hatred of half-breeds and werewolves...that was alarming. He's right; the world isn't divided between good people and Death Eaters. But that the Ministry didn't want them trained in combat...not trained to fight...alarmed her a great deal. We're facing a war...possibly, and of course we'll need to fight! We'll have to protect our families, our way of life...I'll be fighting for my life! For my parents' lives! But would they be ready? Not if Umbridge refuses to teach us defensive spells!
She sighed as she looked down at the book resting on her legs. Why no one wanted to believe Harry and Dumbledore about Voldemort's return astounded her. The entire Ministry was acting like Cedric Diggory merely died of unfortunate circumstances from the Triwizard Tournament...and that Harry was an attention-seeking nutter. Of course Percy's letter to Ron had been a huge disappointment. Stay away from your best mate... the git. It was just like him to side with the Ministry against Harry and Dumbledore.
Hermione threw the book down and fell back against her pillows, covering her face with her hands. She couldn't believe what was happening this year. Professor Umbridge's words echoed in her head: "Let us move forward, then, into a new era of openness, effectiveness, and accountability, intent on preserving what ought to be preserved, perfecting what needs to be perfected, and pruning wherever we find practices that ought to be prohibited..."*
"And she had the audacity to tell us that she's going to be giving us a 'carefully structured, theory-centered, Ministry-approved course of defensive magic'* without any intent at teaching us any practical skills at all," she complained to her familiar.
"Grr-meower," Crooks replied in disgust.
"I know!" she replied, idly stroking his fur. She scratched behind his ears as she wondered what she should do about the situation and found herself calming at the sound of his purr. "You're right, of course. I just have to calm down and look up the defensive spells for myself. It can't be that hard, right?"
"Murrower," he said and turned so she could give his other ear equal attention.
Hermione entered the Defense section of the library and gasped in shock. The entire aisle was empty except for two shelves: one on the right and one on the left, both at eye level. She moved down one shelf, reading the titles:
Generation Me: Why Today's Young Americans Are More Confident, Assertive, Entitled.
Assertive Discipline: Positive Behavior Management for Today.
How To Be Assertive: Your Best Defense.
Assertive Communication Skills: Your Best Defense.
Controlling People: How to Recognize, Understand, and Deal With People Who Try to Control You
Preventative Negotiation: Avoiding Conflict Escalation
Understanding Differences and Avoiding Conflicts
Prospect Theory and International Conflict: Avoiding Losing Your Temper
The Anger Workbook
Wands Are Not For Cursing
The Unwritten Rules of Social Relationships and Acceptable Behavior
The Art of Forgiving: When You Need to Forgive and Don't Know How
Anger Kills: Seventeen Strategies for Controlling the Hostility That Can Harm Your Health
What To Do When Your Temper Flares: Controlling Your Magical Outbursts
Overcoming Emotions That Destroy: Practical Help for Those Angry Feelings That Ruin Relationships
Anger: Wisdom for Cooling the Flames and Soothing Emotions
Anger: Handling a Powerful Emotion in a Healthy Way*
She picked up a black and gold soft cover book, Anger Management for Dunderheads, and snorted, shoving it back into place. The entire section was full of books on anger management, self discipline, assertive communication, and building successful relationships. Hermione covered her face with her hands and exhaled slowly. She really regretted not taking some of the books from the Grimmauld Place library... If only I'd been nicer to Sirius, I'd be able to ask him to send me some.
"Oi, Hermione," Fred said as he entered the aisle behind her.
Hermione, startled, nearly jumped out of her skin as she spun around to face him. "Geo...er...Fred," she stammered, her heart pounding in her throat.
"Sorry, saw you in here and wanted to pass this on to you," he said, giving her a note from Professor McGonagall.
He turned to go. "Fred, wait!" she hissed loudly. He turned around. "Are you on good terms with Sirius?" she asked, hoping he wouldn't be too curious as to why.
"Yeah," he replied, his eyes narrowing slightly with a deep crease between them.
Damn, his curiosity was piqued. "If you asked him to send you some books, say on shield charms, protection spells, deflection..."
He crossed his arms as he interrupted her. "Is Miss Perfect Prefect wanting to defy authority?" he asked.
She stepped closer to him. "These books are not going to help me pass my O.W.L.s any more than they are going to help you pass your exams," she stated, pointing to the useless books on the shelves.
"My exams will be set by Umbridge," he stated. "As will your O.W.L.s."
"I thought that they were administrated by the Wizarding Examinations Authority..." He was right of course. "Which is part of the Ministry..." She looked down, staring at his shoes, as she considered what would convince him to help her.
"George and I already asked him," he said, and she looked up hopefully, "and before you ask, yes, you may borrow them."
"Thank you, Fred," Hermione said with heartfelt relief.
"Don't mention it. You and I know what's really going on and know what's coming," he said offhandedly, "no matter what the Toad says."
He turned to leave, and Hermione thanked him again, getting a wave before he disappeared from view. She left the aisle and headed for the Potions section, glad that at least Professor Snape still believed in giving his students a real and practical education.
Severus activated the Floo in Minerva's office and stepped out into his office, simply furious at the turn of events. That false-flatterer, incompetent imposter...her and her bloody Minister had the audacity to pass Educational Decree number twenty-three, appointing that insufferable woman as the High Inquisitor of Hogwarts? That incompetent witch dares to assume she has the right to interrogate me in regards to my teaching abilities? Well, he'd see about that. He'd seen her proposed curriculum...and it was asinine! Not one student will pass their O.W.L.s or N.E.W.T.s...not a one! Well, my Slytherins will... possibly Miss Granger and, of course, Potter.
Umbridge had already inspected Filius' lessons and had found him lacking. What Filius is lacking is stature! Filius was an exceptionally strong and very capable wizard, in Severus' opinion. He is a six-time gold medalist international dueling champion...nine times regional champion...and has numerous trophies and plaques from the Most Honorable Society of Charm Masters. If he isn't overly qualified to teach these dunderheads...who is?
Severus exited his office from the door rather than use the Floo to his sitting room. The walk to his rooms would do well to assuage his temper at present, and he might get lucky enough to dock house points on the way. It was a little known fact that the private residences of the professors were not, in fact, directly connected to their offices. Every teacher was given living space on the sixth floor consisting of a comfortable sitting room, a large bedroom, and private bath, and in some cases a second room for their personal experiments. Severus' personal lab however, was adjacent to his office since his supply closet was down there. It was simply a matter of convenience and very thick stone walls.
There were exceptions: Hagrid, who had opted to retain his hut on the school grounds, Firenze, who had been given accommodations to his preferred specifications on the ground floor, and Pomona Sprout, who likewise requested quarters on the ground floor since there wasn't a Floo to the greenhouses where she worked. Professor Trelawney did have rooms on the sixth floor, but claimed that the windows didn't face in the right direction for her sensitive nature, or some such tripe, so she slept in her tower.
On the third floor, Severus startled two Hufflepuffs scurrying down the corridor for the stairs, apparently, according to their babbling, having just left the bedside of a friend who was laid up in the hospital wing. He also caught a couple in a compromising position in the Armor Gallery, which was another twenty points from Hufflepuff and thirty points deducted from Gryffindor.
On the fourth floor, he deducted ten points each from three students who were running in the corridor, apparently having just been expelled from the library by Madam Pince, and he burst in on two prefects still frolicking in the prefect tub. That was good for twenty points from Gryffindor...each.
In the deep alcove to the photography classroom, he found Mr. Pucey engaged in a sexual tryst with Miss McDougal, which infuriated him as he had to take fifteen points from his own house. However, he did wait patiently, arms crossed and scowling darkly while Miss McDougal dressed before deducting fifteen points from Ravenclaw for being out after curfew and another fifteen for her indecent exposure.
On the sixth floor, he flicked his wand at the door to each of his colleagues' abodes, with the exception of the Umbridge witch and Professor Trelawney's rooms, enhancing the protection and security spells as he walked by. Few of his colleagues used their doorway exits, since each had a Floo connection to their offices, but Severus wasn't going to take the chance that the insipid witch, Umbridge, wouldn't want to snoop around in their rooms uninvited.
Early the next morning, he made his way to the owlery, summoning a dozen owls to him. 'These are for the professors," he said, giving the name of the recipient to each owl as he handed the owls a folded pieces of nondescript parchment. "They should be delivered with the morning post to avoid suspicion."
That done, he turned and went for a leisurely walk down to the lake before breakfast to clear his head.
Lessons in Defense were getting worse, Harry was getting detention now almost every week, and Hermione discovered that reading about spells did very little good if you couldn't practice them. Having overheard both Professors McGonagall's and Grubbly-Plank's review, Hermione knew that Umbridge was taking on too much control at Hogwarts. Dolores Umbridge, professor and High Inquisitor of the school; what a bloody farce that was. It was bad enough that she'd tried to disband all school activities and student organizations and then reinstated the ones she approved of. The woman was insatiable in her desire to control everything.
She'd had enough. Enough to even tell Harry and Ron there were more important things than homework. Ron took the mickey out on her about that one, even insisting she go to the hospital. "Ignorant git. Well, it was a bit out of character for me... but still," she grumbled as Crookshanks climbed gingerly onto her lap.
She stroked Crookshanks' fur as she tried to plan her next move. Getting Harry to agree to teach Defense had been easy enough. He had a reputation to those who still believed Harry and Dumbledore that Voldemort was back, or that was what she'd backed on. Besides, she wasn't popular enough to lead the group, so she'd only be effective as an assistant or collaborator. It was her plan and it was happening.
Still, the group of students that had shown up in the Hog's Head hadn't been as many as she'd hoped, but maybe it was a start. But that posed a bigger problem...where to have the meetings. Somewhere Umbridge didn't know about. It had to be a large enough space. It had to be accessible. And it would be an unofficial, illegal group since Umbridge would never sanction such a group; so, if they were caught, it could get every member expelled from Hogwarts.
They had looked at the map, and there wasn't anywhere suitable. There were several unused classrooms, but since this was supposed to be a secret club...they were out. The grounds were too risky. The cave where Hagrid kept the school boats echoed too loudly, and the sounds of their voices had echoed up into the Entrance Hall. The common rooms...well, were not private enough, and she couldn't very well invite all the Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws into the Gryffindor Common room any more than they could go to theirs. She'd even thought to use the prefect bath, empty of water of course, but was afraid that some of the spells might crack the pool.
No, they needed to find a practical location. And soon.
Hermione entered the Great Hall and sat down between Ron and Neville. "Any luck?" Neville asked as Hermione set down her bag. Harry leaned around Ron to hear her answer.
Hermione shook her head, and Ron silently shook his head as she turned to ask him the same thing. It was frustrating. Hermione had even considered the dungeons...but the idea of them running into Slytherins down there was not a good idea, especially considering the number of Hufflepuffs and Ravenclaws in their group. It would be far too suspicious.
Harry straightened up and picked up his goblet with an exasperated huff. "Don't worry, mate, Fred and George are looking too," Ron said to him softly. "Those two know this castle as well as the Marauders. We're bound to find somewhere we can use...eventually."
Hermione was hopeful. After lunch she waved goodbye to the boys and headed for Ancient Runes. Padma Patil and Mandy Brocklehurst entered the classroom and walked to their usual table, Mandy looking at Hermione speculatively as she sat down. Padma looked like she'd been crying, and her hand was bandaged. When class ended, Padma approached Hermione. Mandy stood aside, looking about her as if she'd rather Padma just leave instead of talking to Hermione. "How will we know when the meetings will take place?"
Hermione hadn't considered that problem in her planning. "Harry, Ron or I will tell one of you from Ravenclaw, and they will have to pass word on to the others," she said, realizing that would be an illogical solution.
Mandy must have thought so too, because the girl rolled her eyes. "Okay," Padma said, nodding. "Tell my sister I said Hi."
"Will do," Hermione replied. She was contemplating any possible way to alert the members of the Defense Club to meeting dates and times when she saw Luna skipping down the corridor and moved to intercept her so as to talk to her briefly. "Any luck finding a location?" she asked when the blonde stopped in front of her.
"No, but I did find a new stairwell," Luna replied dreamily with a smile. "But it's not large enough. I'll check with Hanna in class, but I don't think she knows of a place either."
"Right," Hermione stated as she moved to let Luna go. "I'll talk to you later." It was frustrating. Harry was now eager to start teaching them Defensive spells, and there was a growing interest in the idea of a Defense Club, even though it was still prohibited.
She saw Cho Chang and Marietta Edgecombe in the girls' loo, and Cho had asked her about the first meeting too. Hermione had just shrugged and said that she and Harry were working on it.
After Defense, Hermione maneuvered herself between Ron and Harry as they walked down the corridor. "I saw Luna after Ancient Runes, and she hasn't found a place to hold meetings either," Hermione whispered. "Oh, and, Harry, Cho said to tell you she said hi." Hermione shook her head at the momentary sappy expression that crossed his face. "After dinner I think we should go to the library...I have to look something up."
"Hermione, Harry has Quidditch practice after dinner," Ron informed her.
She gaped at Harry in astonishment. "So Umbridge reinstated privileges to the house team? When?"
Harry shrugged. "Angelina was going to ask her after her class. I haven't heard otherwise..."
Hermione shook her head. "Never assume anything when it comes to that witch. I bet she hasn't just to spite you."
"Oi, that's not fair, Hermione," Ron admonished her.
"No, Ron, it isn't," she said sadly. "I'm going to check on something..."
"In the library," the boys said in unison.
"By the time we leave here, they're gonna put her name on a plaque in there," Ron said, and with a sweep of his hand he added, "Hermione Granger: read every book in here in only seven years."
"Very funny, Ronald," she sneered and ran for the library. When Ron had mentioned fairness, she remembered something she'd read about, a charm that connected objects so two people could communicate with them, when she was in her third year and was staying in the old classroom under Severus' protection. She hoped the library still had the same book.
The next evening, Hermione holed herself up in her dorm, reading an advanced Charms book as the rain pelted her window. She'd found the book easily enough and had smiled at the tiny spiky signature on the borrower's card. This was the same book Severus had read for his essay on communication Charms in her third year.
However, it was really hard to concentrate at the moment, since her mind kept worrying over whether the idea of starting a Defense club was a good one or not. Hearing Sirius' excitement about the club had really made her think. On one hand he was right, it was much better learning how to defend themselves and risk expulsion than being tucked away safely and learning nothing at all.
But the look in Sirius' eyes had alarmed her...the raw excitement as he suggested the Shrieking Shack...the way he'd said that James and he wouldn't 'have lain down and taken orders from an old hag like Umbridge'*, especially since he'd had the audacity to chide her for taking an idiotic chance by holding their first meeting in the Hog's Head. If Mundungus had followed them to the Hog's Head, what would have stopped him from following them into the Three Broomsticks? This Defense Club would have been something that James Potter and Sirius would have done. Oh, get a grip, Hermione. No they wouldn't! They'd have sneaked off by themselves, the four of them, and practiced defensive spells on their own...they wouldn't have cared about anyone else.
She sighed and turned the page, smiling when she read the name of the spell: the Protean Charm. Sitting up and crossing her legs, Hermione balanced the book on her lap and withdrew her wand to practice the wand movement.
Severus was fuming. Umbridge had given her report to Minister Fudge, and now he had a list of potions that the Ministry deemed unfit to teach at Hogwarts. Well he'd be damned if he was going to change his curriculum of fourteen years to accommodate the paranoid delusions of an inept Minister and his lackey... What had the imbecile written? 'Potions of questionable lawfulness or practical usefulness for our future law-abiding citizens.' He thrust the door open as he entered the room, taking some pleasure in making the fifth-years jump and turn to sit properly in their seats, eyes facing front.
"Pass your essays forward," he growled as he walked to the front of the class. He stopped and stared directly at Potter. "I believe, Mr. Potter, that you owe me two essays. I do hope that Miss Granger was of sufficient help so as to complete your assignments on time."
He collected the accumulated essays as they were passed up by the students in the front row, and then deposited them on his desk. "Since none of you were able to produce an acceptable Strengthening Solution on Monday, you will all repeat the exercise today. And since this is your second attempt, I expect reasonable results." He flicked his hand at the blackboard and smirked as the directions appeared. "You have one hour."
He walked around the room when the potions were at the halfway point, checking the students' progress. "Mr. Potter, as Miss Granger so aptly reminded you on Monday, you should be adding your Salamander blood at this stage," he said coolly, giving an approving nod to Malfoy and walking on to the next workstation. He smirked when Hermione leaned over to whisper to Mr. Longbottom, just as he'd hoped for. "Mr. Longbottom, put down the boarbeetles. Miss Granger, you'll be spending the evening in my company tonight, I'm afraid, since you seem unable to let Mr. Longbottom. Do. His. Own. Work."
Although he maintained his usual sneer as he continued the round, checking the progress of each student, he was actually smiling on the inside at the expression of indignation on her face...so much like the one he'd seen when she was hiding with him as a teen...not the intimidated student she had become, and it thrilled him.
A long blue box that held the black swan quill Hermione had given him as a thank you sat in the back of his top right desk drawer, beside the well-worn, brown Muggle diary and the small blue box that held the Time-Turner.
It was because of an entry in that diary he'd kept that he had made the decision that would hopefully not only change the outcome of the war and ensure that the Dark Lord wouldn't be able to recruit as many to his side, but would hopefully change public opinion regarding the reputation of Slytherin House forever.
~ T. B. C. ~
Author's Notes:
Okay, I cheated. Many of the titles of the Defense books are actual books and can be found on half.com, but only because I wanted to use the titles of real books.
The quotes in this chapter which are denoted by an asterisk were borrowed from the American version of Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix. I only used them...they are not mine.
Since I needed a second Ravenclaw female, I used Mandy Brocklehurst. Yes, she's now in the DA, which is only a minor deviation from canon. There are more deviations from canon to follow, just so you know.
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Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~