Chapter 14
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 14 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
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Severus was still really angry about the attack. He'd just found a sizable growth of bright yellow, stacked layers of Sulphur Shelf mushroom on the 'wound' of a huge, old tree. He hadn't heard the Gryffindor four approach until it was too late. First, Potter and Black had both hit him with the Disarming Spell with enough force to slam his backside against the thick roots of an old beech tree behind him, which had apparently damaged his kidneys. Then, when he'd tried to defend himself, Potter had hit him with a Body-Bind while Black had raised him up by his ankle with the Levicorpus at the same time that Pettigrew had cast a Flinging Spell. Severus had no idea that being slammed against a tree while being hung upside-down and in a Body-Bind would break so many bones at once, but Madam Pomfrey had mended them all in a jiffy. However, the damage to his kidneys had Madam Pomfrey really worried.
The potion helped, but the discomfort made it uncomfortable for him to lie or sit for too long. Not that Madam Pomfrey liked having her patients pace in her hospital wing, but since his backside had hurt so much, he couldn't stand lying in bed for any amount of time. That, and he wanted to collect the mushrooms before the next full moon, hopefully without being attacked again. And that meant having backup. At least Hermione hadn't noticed his restlessness. Still, he dreaded going to the hospital wing for his agreed upon check up and potion regime. He fully remembered the argument with Madam Pomfrey the night before when he'd refused to stay in bed any longer.
Slughorn came to collect Severus before breakfast and chatted with him all the way to the hospital wing about the remarkable changes he'd made with his last potion. "I sent your Euphoria Elixir to Healer Weston McKenna at St. Mungo's. He was quite impressed, Mr. Snape. He had never considered your use of peppermint to counterbalance the side effects of excessive singing and nose-tweaking...most ingenious of you. I have entered you and Miss Evans for the Hector Dagworth-Granger Most Extraordinary Junior Potioneers award. Two of my top students, both up for it this year. I'm so proud."
Severus was about to say thank you, but Slughorn went into his usual bit about the time when he'd won his Junior Potioneers award. "... had my picture taken with Reginold Waldheim, the Minister of Magic, and the Chief Healer-in-Charge of St. Mungo's himself, not that I didn't have Gordon McDermid as a student back in the day. Did I tell you about him? He was the..."
Severus tuned him out as he considered the best way to escape back to the forest to collect his ingredients.
Madam Pomfrey hovered over him the moment he sat on the examining bed. "I should've insisted that you'd stayed here in bed for four more days, but you persisted that you'd leave anyway to go brew potions in that private lab of yours," she admonished him.
"But, I know how much you wanted the potion I was brewing," he said, pulling several bottles out of his pockets and laying them on the bed.
She took the bottles and scowled at him. "I thought I said you were not to carry heavy things! I should keep you here, even if I have to tie you to the bed," the Healer said accusingly; however, she was smiling despite herself at the potions.
"I'll stay in bed and read," Severus protested.
Madam Pomfrey scowled at him. "You know that you'll be brewing potions all day if I let you go, and I want you resting. I don't want you lifting anything heavy...and that means no lifting cauldrons!"
"I'll have my dorm mates do my heavy lifting," Severus promised, knowing that at least Hermione would help him move the cauldrons. "And I can levitate anything..."
"That falls under heavy lifting, Mr. Snape. Magical or not, there is a certain amount of exertion involved..."
"Madam Pomfrey, I'm sure Mr. Snape will be responsible," Professor Slughorn unintentionally interrupted as he tried, once again, to reassure her. "I shall assume personal responsibility to keep Severus in his dorm room for four days, and Severus will swear that he won't lift anything heavier than his knife, stirring rod, or quill."
In the end, despite knowing her patient so well, or because she knew he would refuse to say in the hospital, Madam Pomfrey finally relented, reluctantly, and accepted the assurances of Professor Slughorn. However, she only released him on the condition that Severus see her for the next four days, before breakfast and after dinner, for treatment.
Slughorn escorted Severus to the dungeons. However, he led him to the classroom instead of the common room. Severus knew it was most likely to assure himself that he had enough ingredients to brew the hospital's requirements for the rest of the school year. Thankfully, Hermione was on her bed, or Severus assumed so, since he didn't see or hear her when they entered the room.
"Good, good, you seem to have everything well stocked," Slughorn prattled on, examining the potion ingredients. "I see you even have snacks. Don't want you to skip meals just so you can get your brewing done, now do we?"
Severus looked at the benches and cringed. All of Hermione's books were stacked neatly and grouped by subject, except for the growling book. Please don't be on the floor. "Yes, Sir," Severus said, hoping that the professor didn't look too closely at the titles of the books.
"Now, let's get you settled in your room, shall we? I don't want Madam Pomfrey to think I went back on my word. I'll arrange with your professors to have your school work brought down to you," Slughorn rattled off.
"Thank you, sir," Severus said politely, giving the man just enough deference to flatter him without sounding like a suck up.
"You certainly have quite a collection in there," Slughorn stated, patting Severus on the shoulder. "Do any need to go back to the library?"
"A few, but I was hoping to exchange some after lunch, sir," Severus stated as they left the room.
"I'll ask one of my students to help you," Slughorn said as he led Severus out the door for the Slytherin common room.
"I'll ask Mulciber or Avery." He wished that Slughorn would go, but it didn't hurt to humor the man. He listened to the professor brag about the healing potions he'd invented for the Quidditch mediwizards as they walked to his dorm room.
"Catriona McCormack, Chaser and captain of the Pride of Portrees, really relies on my Bruise Paste, you know. Says it's the best she's ever used. She should try yours, Severus, and your one for sprains. I've never seen better."
"Thank you, sir." Severus smiled, knowing that if the captain of the Quidditch team The Prides liked his potions, he'd have a steady income for life. Mr. Avery had introduced him to Kevin and Karl Broadmoor, the two Slytherin ex-Beaters for the Falmouth Falcons over Christmas hols, and they both used his potions now. "I'd really appreciate a letter of introduction, sir."
"Oh, Severus, so eager," Professor Slughorn said, opening the door to the common room for him. "Can't wait until you leave school to get started on that brilliant Potions career of yours."
When Professor Slughorn finally left, Severus waited all of ten minutes before he got up to go to the classroom.
Hermione stepped forward to greet him when he returned. "How are you feeling this morning?"
"Better," he said, easing down into a chair.
She tilted her head as she watched him. "You don't look better. You look stiff and uncomfortable."
He shot her a warning glare.
She reached out to take his hand. "C'mon."
"Where?"
"Please trust me," she implored, drawing him to her bed instead of the door, so he complied. "Take off your robes and shirt, and then lie down on your stomach."
He looked at her, his brow creased in confusion as she dug in her bag, pulling out a large tub of liniment.
"Lie down and take off your robes and shirt," she repeated, pointing at the bed.
"What's that?" he asked, indicating the jar with a jut of his chin.
"Something you created for back and muscle pain... I get cramps in my calves, and the Quidditch team uses it for aches, especially when they get hit with a Bludger. Now strip and lie down."
Something in her tone, plus the fact that she said he'd made it, obviously in the future, encouraged him to comply. The liniment was cool on contact, but then she straddled his hips and started to rub it on his back. The sensations were heavenly. The liniment was warm under her hands, and it slowly cooled where his skin lay exposed, but never truly felt chilly. Hermione ran her hands up and down his back in long, firm strokes. He moaned in pleasure except when she rubbed where the kidney pain was. He felt her add more liniment and caress his lower back and sides, gently working the stuff into his skin.
He did not know when he'd fallen asleep, but when he woke, he was still on his stomach on her bed. She sat in a chair, her feet propped up on the bed. "What in heaven is in that stuff?" he asked, surprised that most of the ache was gone.
"I have no idea," she replied, dropping her feet to the floor. "You'll need more tonight and tomorrow, but your back pain will be gone in a day or two."
"Oh, I won't complain about getting more of that treatment!" he said smoothly as he moved and stretched, amazed at the difference he felt. "Hermione, thank you."
She blushed deeply and shrugged. "No problem. I'm glad it helped."
He looked at his watch and gasped. It's lunch time already! I promised to tutor Mulciber... "Shite, I'm late!" He jumped up and ran out the door. "I'll be back."
He returned later, carrying cheese, several apples, pears, half a dozen apple turnovers, and a pile of sliced beef on rolls, enough food for four of them.
"Trying to fatten me up?" she teased him.
"Nope, don't want you to go without if anything happens to me again," he said, sitting down as she set the table. "Take what you want, and I'll put the rest in stasis for you."
"Aren't you going to eat?" she asked, taking a beef roll and a pear.
"Nope, I ate on the way back here," he replied as he turned and put the food on the bench with her other stash. He collected his Potions books and joined her at the table. He'd borrowed a leaf of parchment from Mulciber and had copied down two versions of the Pimple Unction, one from his Advanced Potions book and another Pimple Solution he had found in Magical Remedies and Cures for the Everyday Problems by Sacharissa Tugwood. In Severus' opinion, the Pimple Unction was better, but it was not as quick-reacting as the Pimple Solution, which used bubotuber pus as a base. However, the unction lasted longer. Nevertheless, the girls in his house frequently complained that neither of them worked all the time. If I could just find a way to blend them, use the...
"What are you working on?" she asked between bites.
He looked up from his book. "I was wondering if I could improve on the potion we did in class. I heard the girls saying that it's only seventy-percent effective and only if they don't have a serious condition. I want to see if I can make it better...more effective."
"Oh," she replied, watching him as she finished eating.
He spent a good part of the afternoon reading potions books, trying to find a way to improve the Pimple Unction, and working out several possible variations as she read quietly. When he started brewing, she came over to help, laughing when his first variation almost melted the cauldron.
"It's not funny!" he snapped and glared at her as he tossed the useless cauldron under the table.
Hermione tried to suppress her mirth. "I can't believe that you melted a cauldron, that's all." She picked up his parchment and started to read his notes.
He wanted to snatch it out of her hand, but he refused to look at her if she was going to smirk at him for a simple mistake. "It happens. Salamander blood with the honey and orange peel makes a good astringent, and the camphor and groundnut oil keeps it from irritating the skin. However, I want to add bundimun secretion, but it reacts strongly to the salamander blood and streeler secretion making the potion too hot."
She set his parchment on the worktable. "Doesn't bundimun secretion need to be balanced with raw, sour Gruinard goat milk?"
He looked at her in amazement. "The lactic acid in the sour milk would do that. Where did you learn that?"
"In Potions. My professor mentioned it when he lectured us on the use of secretions in potions, so I looked it up. I found an article in a Potions journal about how lactic acid balances some of the more pungent secretions when two or more are used together in potions. But, it was discounted in Concocting Potions, Both Strange and Wonderful by Helga Grosselin. I have the book with me, since I like to use it as a reference. Dad sent me a copy for Christmas. She has a rather complete index of potion ingredients, their uses and interactions," Hermione stated with a shrug.
"That would balance the bundimun in the Pimple Unction, but it would still be too irritating," he said, crossing out the annotations for the failed version.
"When Lavender got a pimple, she showed me an article in Witch Weekly about how some witch used a cleaning solution with bundimun mixed with tomato paste and it fried her face, so the Healer suggested sour Gruinard goat milk, honey, lime juice, and raw sugar to resolve the..."
He was looking at his notes as she spoke and unintentionally cut her off, muttering, "And with sugar and fenugreek leaves... Yes, that would do it!"
"You're welcome," Hermione said with a smile, sitting at the desk and burying her nose back in her book as Severus tried to work out when to add the ingredients and the adjustments to the timing and stirring rod strokes.
His first attempt turned foul. The second time, he miscalculated terribly. The third potion turned a muted lime green instead of pink, and the fourth was a pale greenish-blue color.
"That's how it looked in the Potions book," she said when he scoffed at the color.
"Green?" he asked.
She nodded in assurance. "Turquoise, or slightly greenish if done right," she said, squinting at him in confusion. "What color did you think it should be?"
He shrugged, saying, "The original version is pink." He set it aside to cool. "Don't tell me you've made this potion, too."
Hermione blushed. "I made a cauldron-full for Lavender because I got tired of hearing her whine about her acne... I didn't use fenugreek leaves or sugar, and mine wasn't this thick. She had to use a lotion because of the irritation and wash her face twice a day."
"I'll have one of the girls try it to see how it works." He bottled his sample and cleaned his cauldron. He'd wait before crossing out the other options until both batches were properly tested.
"I thought a Potion brewer tested his own potions," she chided him.
He crossed his arms and leaned against the worktable. "In case you failed to notice, I don't have pimples."
She turned her head to hide her blush. "I should rub more of the liniment into your back," she suggested, probably to change the subject.
He shrugged nonchalantly and followed her to her bed, stripping his shirt off as he went. He lay down, smiling as she straddled his hips again and began rubbing the concoction in. His last thought, as he drifted to sleep, was that he just had to figure out what his older self had put in the liniment.
When he woke, Hermione was sitting beside him, reading another book. He checked his watch and frowned. He'd never fallen asleep like this in the daytime before except when he'd taken naps as a little kid or had been given sleeping potions. "Damn, I slept right though dinner. Are you hungry?"
"I had one of my apples earlier," she said, turning the page.
He looked at her foot next to his hand and smirked at the nail polish on her little toes. Merlin, she has small feet. "Well, I might as well go get something. Is there anything you want in particular?"
She let her book rest on her legs and bit her lip as she considered his offer. "Bangers and mash... or bangers with bubble and squeak," she said with a smile.
He smiled at her suggestions, suddenly having a craving for them as well. "I'll see if they have any blancmange or tarts with clotted cream for pudding," he suggested, knowing that the house-elves would make them for him if he asked.
The next morning, Severus woke early, still unable to lie in bed for very long. Hermione offered to rub more liniment on his back. He pulled off his shirt and stretched out on her bed, secretly eager to receive her ministrations. When she finished, she sat cross-legged beside him. They talked about the Defense Against the Dark Arts, which led to a discussion on the Dark Arts.
"Hermione, what differentiates charms from curses is really only the intent," he replied to her inquiry. "Same goes for most of the Dark Arts. They are curses, hexes, and charms used with the intent to do bodily harm. It's not always the spell in itself; it's the intent of the caster."
She rolled her wand lazily in her hand. "So whoever is faster...?"
"It's not always speed, but accuracy and determination that wins the duel," he said, rolling over on his side. "The Dark Arts are not as static as, say, Charms or Transfiguration. Once a new Transfiguration spell is discovered, it's written in a book and everyone uses it... unless a slight variation makes the spell easier or more effective."
He adjusted her pillow to make himself more comfortable. "Dark Arts are varied and as unique as the individuals who use them; they are ever-changing and as twisted as the mind that conceives them. To defend yourself, you must be equally as creative, resourceful, and determined. Your attacker might be more fierce and clever than you, so you must be flexible and inventive in your defense."
"Like when you duel, not only do you have to try and anticipate what your attacker will use but you also have to be able to block and cast simultaneously."
"That's part of it. But in a duel, it's one on one. In real attacks, you might be faced with two or more opponents. That's when you have to know how to duck and dodge spells as well." He looked at her and wondered why she was so worried about defending herself.
"Like when you are being attacked by Potter and Black," she stated, and then raised her eyebrows at his annoyed stare. "Whenever you're attacked, you always blame them, and you never say one without the other."
He smirked at her observation. "Because they usually are together. They're cowards, Hermione, and cowards have to have backup to feel brave." He sat up and looked at his watch. "Damn, I have to go. We can talk about defensive spells later, if you like?"
Hermione's mouth curved into a smile that didn't erase the troubled look in her eyes. "Yes, I'd like that very much."
He thought about her statement all the way to the hospital wing. She was right; they did always attack him together. Potter and Black had received a week's detention for attacking him in the forest, and they'd want to retaliate. If he was going to collect his fungus, he'd need someone to watch his back.
When he'd arrived for his scheduled appointment, Madam Pomfrey was amazed at Severus' improvement. He told her it was the bed rest, but he knew she wasn't buying it. He asked her about the experiment he was trying with the Pimple Unction. She was properly impressed, even saying that she'd be happy to help him test his batch. She walked him back to the stairs in the Entrance Hall that led to the dungeons, discussing his hypothesis about the potion.
"I'll have it ready by tonight," he promised her.
"Mr. Snape, while I appreciate your fine quality potions, I don't want you on your feet all day. You're supposed to be resting," she admonished him in a kindly tone.
"But, I can't lay around all day either! It still hurts when I do," he replied, careful to look admonished even if he didn't feel it. "I promised to take it easy, and I am."
She nodded and smiled. "I'll expect you after dinner."
"Yes, ma'am," he replied, turning for the stairs.
Hermione was bottling his potions when he entered. "Thank you, but I was going to do that."
She simply smiled. "I'm nearly done."
He watched her a moment, amazed at how well they got on. She had been with him for three weeks so far, and he knew that their time was nearly up. While Hermione finished bottling the potions, Severus took the blue box from his pocket, careful to keep his back toward her. He removed the Time-Turner to examine the sand and was immediately disappointed. He quietly put it away, closed the box and tucked it back into his pocket, deep in thought. Hermione kept looking at him, but he was too preoccupied with his own thoughts to notice.
The problem was that the sand was sparkling, iridescent, and granular, but not as transparent as he'd hoped. Not quite the glittery white sand that it was last time... Damn. But, it's not the opalescent white sand it's supposed to be. He knew he was lying to himself; the Time-Turner was nearly ready for her to use. But, he wasn't ready for her to leave, even though it was time to let her go. From what his older self had said, he was supposed to have a month with her, and he wasn't going to cut her visit short. Besides, she had apparently heard that her stay would be a month, so what would a little deception matter anyway? What would it hurt to tell her it will be back to normal in a few days...a week? He turned to look at the space where her bed was and sighed. I'll just wait for a few more days. It's not like she won't go back to her time, just later.
"Severus, are you all right?" she asked, making him turn to look at her.
He smiled and reached for the ruined cauldron. "Yeah, I'm fine. I'm going to go replace this. I'll be right back." On his way to the potions classroom to get another cauldron, he decided to see how much Hermione knew about defensive spells and show her some simple ones. Besides, she's more fun than Mulciber or Avery, even if she has to look like one of them.
That afternoon, Severus taught Hermione how to cast the Stunning Hex, checking her every so often to make sure she wasn't straining. He also taught her the Tripping Hex, Legg-locker, and Numbing Jinx. She was an apt pupil, and after several tries, she managed to do them all fairly well. She asked him to show her more defensive spells, so he quizzed her on what she knew, surprised that she was, literally, a year behind. "You're only now learning about Dark creatures?"
"Professor Quirrell taught us the fundamentals of curses, hexes, and jinxes, and how they varied from charms my first year," she replied.
"That's normal for first year," he replied, nodding, waving his hand to encourage her to continue.
"But in second year, Professor Lockhart mostly demonstrated how he fought dangerous beings and creatures... and well... he turned out to be a braggart who only took credit for what other people had done."
"Blimey," he said not sure what to think about her statement. "What about defensive spells?"
"I can use Immobilous, Babbling Curse, Tickling Charm, and the Body-Bind Curse. We learned about Jelly-Appendage curses, but we only read about them. I can do the Jelly-Legs, but I haven't had any luck with the Jelly-Fingers, and I can do an Ear-Ringing Hex," she said, holding her wand casually.
"What about Colloportus...to seal a door, or Impedimenta Curse, Impedimenta Jinx...to stop or slow an person or object, or averting spells like Defensoris or Averrunco?" Severus asked, listing some of the ones he'd learned in his early years of Defense, but Hermione only shook her head. "Infantiae tardus...to make your attacker speak and move slowly, like in slow motion?"
She shook her head again. "I was shown...well, Professor Lockhart demonstrated the Homorphous Charm, to turn a werewolf back into a human, on my friend Harry, and we were taught Expelliarmus, the disarming spell, in a dueling demonstration. And this year, Professor Lup...er," she stammered, then continued, "our current teacher is trying to catch us up on what we've missed from last year."
"You don't want to tell me his or her name. Why?" he asked, arms crossed as he looked down at her. She'd told him the names of her other professors, well, except her Potions professor, but he had a good idea who that was by now.
"Er, no," Hermione admitted, looking at her thumb.
"Why?" he persisted. He wracked his brain for anyone with a surname beginning with 'luper.'
She refused to look at him. "You don't like him, and yes, you know him...knew him. It's not a good idea. I really shouldn't," she said, clearly avoiding answering him.
So, I know him...not as in I will know him... I know him. Severus could only come up with two...no, three possibilities. "Just tell me it isn't Rene Lupperger or Marcus Luppertz or... Remus Lupin," he said, naming the only people he knew whose surname began with 'lup.'
"Okay, no," she said. "Show me how to..."
"No, tell me who first," he insisted stubbornly. "You said I know him."
"I also said that you don't like him very much," Hermione said with a set, determined look that said she was going to be stubborn about it. "Are you going to show me how to block unfriendly spells or not?"
I don't like him? Hmmm. Rene Lupperger had been a Gryffindor prefect and pain in the arse during Severus' first and second years. "Tell me it's not Rene Lupperger," Severus insisted. He knew that it couldn't be Luppertz. He remembered Luppertz from Lucius Malfoy's year: a pure-blood Hufflepuff, a bit of a ponce, but posh, a do-gooder, and not a sharp quill in Severus' opinion. He'd set McGonagall's animals free because he'd thought they were abused in Severus' second year. I'd never minded the bloke, actually, and certainly didn't dislike him. He and Malfoy are still friends, I believe...
"It's not Rene Lupperger," she said, crossing her arms with a huff.
There was only one other person he knew whose name began with 'lup.' "You mean to say it's Lupin?" he asked, stunned.
For a split second she gaped at him in disbelief and then shook her head. "No, I didn't say that either. So are you going to...?"
That's impossible. It's one thing to let that werewolf come to school... It took a moment for him to think. He is one of Dumbledore's favorite four.
"Are we going to duel?" she asked impatiently.
"Yeah, yeah. Go ahead. Try and hit me with a Body-Bind," he said, his mind still wheeling at the fact that the werewolf was teaching at Hogwarts. But, she did say that Dumbledore and McGonagall were still at Hogwarts in her time... Shite!
Hermione's Body-Bind caught him unawares. "Are you all right?! I thought you were ready?!" she exclaimed when she removed the hex.
"Well, I am now," he snapped, annoyed with himself for being distracted. He turned his focus on her, assuming a dueling stance. "Ready, go."
~ T. B. C. ~
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Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~