Chapter 9
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 9 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I just borrowed them for a while. I promise to put them back when I'm done. Oh, nope, no money either...just for fun.
I want to give a great big thank you hug to EverMystique and DuchessOfArcadia for combing through this to point out my numerous errors and help me make this presentable for reading. You're the best, thank you!
Hermione arrived in the small classroom and suddenly realized that she wasn't alone. "Headmaster!" she exclaimed, taking a step back in shock and turning to look in confusion at the unfamiliar man sitting at the desk. "Who? What? Hi."
"Hello, Miss Granger," Dumbledore said, sitting in a comfortable chintz armchair with his elbows on the armrests and his hands laced together at the end of the very same table she and Severus had used. It boggled her mind; it seemed like that had been only yesterday, but in reality it had been twenty years ago. "To answer you, this is Mr. Cronus Latimer, the inventor of the time device you are currently using." The man sitting across the table from her nodded politely as Dumbledore continued. "As to what, it has come to my attention that there seems to be some problem with the device, or you have forgotten your instructions on how to use it properly, as you are apparently experiencing some miscalculations and have been having a few adventures in time."
Hermione noticed that his blue eyes had none of the usual twinkle, and he looked at her rather sternly. "Do have a seat," he said, indicating the wooden armchair across from Mr. Latimer. "We are waiting for Professor Snape to finish his lessons so that he may join us."
Hermione swallowed nervously as she dropped her bag and sat in the offered chair. Mr. Latimer had a journal open in front of him and a small inkwell and quill.
"May I see the Time-Turner, Miss Granger?" Mr. Latimer asked, extending his hand toward her. He had a strange cloth draped over his hand that looked like it was made of water but was as black as night.
Hermione nodded as she removed the Time-Turner and placed it on the cloth. The fabric seemed to shimmer with rippling wavelet rings at contact with the device. Mr. Latimer carefully examined the device. "It's the same as before, Albus. It's been overused...or should I say...strained to its capacity."
"Do you think that is the extent of its ability, Cronus?" Dumbledore asked, leaning forward to examine it as well.
"How far back did you go, young lady?" Mr. Latimer asked.
"I'm not exactly sure, sir," Hermione admitted. "I don't have a reference really."
"I believe Professor Snape indicated to me that she went back to 1976," Dumbledore said. He turned to face Hermione. "You will be forthright and honest with me, young lady. I expect you to tell me the truth and hold nothing back. How did Severus treat you? What did you do?"
Mr. Latimer looked amazedly at the Headmaster, then at Hermione. He picked up his quill and began to write out an arithmantic equation.
"He was nice to me," she answered the Headmaster immediately, watching Mr. Latimer with great interest.
"Elaborate. Were you seen? What did you discuss? What did you do, and was he in any way inappropriate with you?"
"Never!" Hermione looked up and gasped at the questions the Headmaster asked. "I mean, no, sir, he wasn't. He brought me books from the library, and sometimes we'd discuss them. We brewed potions...healing potions and a few of his own. We practiced spells, mostly ones Severus said were my year." One of Dumbledore's eyebrows rose at that comment. "Okay, not all, possibly, but nothing I couldn't do."
"That is not very reassuring, as I am well aware that you are capable of doing spells far above your age level. You will be examined by Madam Pomfrey for depletion of your magical core or signs of magical stress," Dumbledore said in a smooth, even tone, watching her carefully for signs of deceit. "Were you seen?"
"No, I don't think so. There was once when I was almost seen leaving the boys' bathroom," she admitted, then quickly felt the need to elaborate. "But I'm sure the guy didn't see me...Severus had me Disillusioned. Severus would sneak me in really late at night so I could shower. He always used a Notice-Me-Not Charm and Disillusioned me when he did. There was only the one time that Avery entered the showers before I was through, but Severus told him I was Moaning Myrtle and that seemed to satisfy his curiosity. But that's all I can remember."
Mr. Latimer placed Hermione's device on the cloth carefully on the table. "This one is my prototype," he said as he pulled a small black box from his robes and opened it. He pulled out another Time-Turner from the box. "It's an unfinished piece, but the rings are complete. If you would, please demonstrate for me how you set the rings for your jump back in time," he said, extending the device toward her.
"I'm not sure I can. I mean I can approximate," she said, accepting the piece and examining it.
"Try, Miss Granger," the Headmaster said firmly.
Never one to want to disappoint, Hermione tried to adjust the rings as she remembered having set them, struggling to align the runes just right. "I can't be sure, but I think this is right," she said, handing it back. "I was in the corridor after Ancient Runes near the window with the willow tree, and I was trying to keep from being bumped from behind...that's what happened this time."
"And that is how you met Severus Snape when he was a student?" Dumbledore asked.
She felt her face burn with embarrassment. "Well, no, my first jump I saw a Professor Snape who didn't recognize me. He took me to his office to question me, but there was a disturbance, and he warned me to stay put. I was scared and tried to return, but I went further back instead. That's when I met the younger Severus Snape. He knew who I was and hid me...both times."
Dumbledore pointed his finger at the calculations Mr. Latimer jotted down. "Professor Snape started teaching here in 1981," he told Mr. Latimer. He turned his gaze upon Hermione. "How old would you say Severus was, Miss Granger?"
Hermione looked at the wall as she tried to remember how old he looked. "The first jump, he looked twenty or maybe a little older. The other times, he was N.E.W.T. level...sixth- or seventh-year. He's really smart and was always reading the advanced books."
Mr. Latimer wrote a few words down on his journal, checked the device again and made a few more notations. "So you made a second jump back instead of returning to your time?"
"Only the first time. The second time, I jumped back to when Severus was a student," Hermione stated, then had to clarify more accurately what details she could remember.
"Very interesting... seventeen years," Mr. Latimer said, making some calculations on his journal. He looked up at the Headmaster with a thoughtful yet distant expression. "I would have guessed that Miss Granger had made two ten-year jumps her first time, Albus, and a twenty-year jump her second, not seventeen. Only the alignment she's shown me doesn't equate to twenty years, it's more like..." He checked his calculations. "Eight years or so. Eight-and-a-half." He looked up at Hermione. "Do you ever repeat days, Miss Granger?"
Hermione felt her face get warm, and she lowered her head. She looked up at him through her fringe and nodded. "Occasionally, once or twice, but only when I had essays due in all my subjects at once."
"When you made the jumps in time, going back to the seventies, what condition was the Time-Turner in? Did it look like it does now?" Mr. Latimer asked, setting the second device on the desk and moving hers in between them.
Hermione looked at the sands in the hourglass and nodded. "Yes. It was hot, and the sands looked like this, more like shards of glass, not exactly liquid, but more fluid than the opalescent white sand it normally does. When I went back, Severus put it in a blue box lined with some kind of cloth, similar to what you have there," she said with a jut of her chin.
Mr. Latimer smiled and turned to Dumbledore. "If it's our box, then it should be all right." He looked up at them, then back to his notes. "Albus, if she bounced back as far as she's admitted and used the box for a week before bouncing again... that might be enough time."
"Miss Granger, how long were you with Master Snape in the past?" Dumbledore asked as Mr. Latimer added a few comments to his journal.
"A week the first time; this last time, two weeks or so, sir," she explained. "It was hard to tell being cooped up in the room the whole time."
"I don't understand...how long did he detain you in his office when you met the younger Professor Snape?" Mr. Latimer asked.
"Only a few minutes. I activated the Time-Turner as soon as he left his office," Hermione said, realizing he misunderstood her. "That jump I stayed with Severus Snape a week...when he was a student. This time I stayed with him two weeks."
"This time? There was another?" Mr. Latimer was flipping though his journal with his brow furrowed in confusion. "You said she was only gone a week last time she miscalculated, and this jump...when was this other jump back?"
The door opened, and everyone turned to see Professor Snape enter, his robes billowing behind him as he approached the table, and the door closed on its own behind him. "Ah, Severus, join us," Dumbledore said with a wave of his hand. Professor Snape sat in the chair at the desk across from Dumbledore. He was introduced to Mr. Latimer. "Professor, please tell us about your jaunt back in time. Firstly how did you acquire the Time-Turner?"
"I can only tell you what I remember, Headmaster. When I was sixteen, I had two strange visits from myself...well, my older self. The first time he identified himself as me from the future and told me things only I'd know. He explained that Miss Granger had come back in time...to my time...and had been brutally beaten by my housemates and died. He then convinced me to do what was necessary to protect Miss Granger from harm and to hide her until she could return," Professor Snape said smoothly, his hands laced together with his elbows on the armrests as he sat casually in his seat. Mr. Latimer was busily writing down Snape's comments. "The second time, he informed me that Miss Granger miscalculated again and would be back. I made sure to be where he said she'd appear and hid her."
"How did you get the Time-Turner?" Dumbledore asked again.
"I do not recall how my older self came by it, but I assure you, he did have one. He was wearing it around his neck both times," Snape replied calmly, his eyes on the two men as if Hermione wasn't even in the room.
"And the box?" Mr. Latimer asked, looking up with his quill poised in his hand.
"My older self gave it to me the first time I saw him," Snape stated. "He explained what it was for and told me to keep it in my pocket, so I did." He turned to look at Hermione with a casual glance, which made her sit straighter in her seat. "I assume he still has it; is that correct, Miss Granger?"
Hermione nodded, about to say something, and was interrupted by Mr. Latimer. "Did you by chance see the setting on the device, Professor? Would you be able to tell me how the runes were aligned?"
Snape turned to the man and shook his head. "Yes, I examined the device, but I was more concerned about the sand in the hourglass than the setting. I was, however, careful not to change it and used the box I had been given. So, no, I'm sorry to say that I cannot recall how Miss Granger set the device to make such a jump."
Mr. Latimer looked up again from his writing. "And do you remember going back in time, Professor?" he asked.
Snape sighed. "I do not. I know I did, twice, and I remember what he said to me, but I don't remember making either trip. I can only assume that since I went back to correct a wrong, that timeline doesn't exist any longer." Snape told the men what his older self had said during his second visit about Hermione being hurt from a misfired spell from a duel and about living in Gryffindor tower for a month. "Of course, I don't remember either of those jumps as they occurred in his time line, not my own."
Hermione gasped in shock.
"I see?" Mr. Latimer said, his finger moving as if he were writing in the air. "A month? Why a month? Most intriguing. Miss Granger said that each time she went back she had to stay longer, a week, then almost two weeks... Intriguing...quite unexpected. Why was that, do you think, Professor?"
"The sands took only a week to cool enough to flow normally from one side of the hourglass to the other the first time. I was careful to move the device without changing or rotating anything when I'd examine it. The second time, it took longer, nearly two full weeks; she returned the morning of the fourteenth day to be precise. The third time took longer, possibly because of the amount of time Miss Granger had been using it, but that's speculation," Snape said in a clinical tone as Mr. Latimer jotted down Snape's assessment. He looked at Hermione, and for two brief seconds, the span of two heartbeats, she thought she saw a look of wistfulness in his expression before his face schooled into his usual disdain for her.
Mr. Latimer leaned over to talk to Dumbledore, and Snape turned to look at Hermione again. She saw an odd flicker of emotion on Snape's face, almost like the conspiratorial glances Harry and Ron got on occasion, before he turned to address the other men. "That duration was nearly a month if I recall correctly. My older self warned me that each time Miss Granger miscalculated and bounced back to my time, the duration increased. It was his opinion that it was because Miss Granger uses the device every day."
"A third time?" Dumbledore said, his brow creasing as his eyes narrowed suspiciously.
Mr. Latimer's eyebrows rose and he grinned. "Are you certain?"
"Yes," Snape said as Mr. Latimer turned the Time-Turner over carefully in his hands.
"The sand is still crystallized, barely, not liquid yet. Given enough time, the piece might have repaired itself if conditions are cool and dry... If placed in the box, it will cool sufficiently faster." Mr. Latimer set the device down and wrapped it carefully in the cloth. "Albus, I will of course need the box," he said, missing Dumbledore's nod of assent as he turned to Snape. "Unless you still have one...oh, wait, Mr. Snape has it in the past."
"It's in my office," Snape stated. "Since I still had it as a teen, I've kept it all these years. I'll be happy to go get it."
Dumbledore held up a hand. "Not just yet, Severus, I still have questions." He turned his gaze as if staring off into space. "I am in need of service," he said loudly. A house-elf popped in and bowed. "Professor Snape has a small blue box..." Dumbledore looked pointedly at Severus.
"In my top right desk drawer in my office, all the way in the back," Professor Snape said smoothly. "You will have to open it in the same manner in which you rascals open my private stores to dust." The elf smiled nervously, nodded, then bowed quickly and vanished. "I hope the charms are still in effect." The elf reappeared, holding two small boxes, the one Hermione immediately recognized and a long one that looked like a gift box for a pen. Snape took the square box and asked for the other to be returned.
Mr. Latimer turned back a few pages of his journal. "So, what I don't understand is why I have a notation that on the twenty-third of September, Miss Granger made a one week jump back in time, then this jump today?" he asked and looked up at Hermione. "When did you make the second jump you mentioned?"
She shifted nervously in her chair. "On the twenty-third of September, that was the first time I bounced back...the one I told you about. When I returned, I bounced back a week and asked Professor McGonagall to hide me..."
Mr. Latimer and Dumbledore looked at her, obviously confused.
Professor Snape's eyes narrowed, and he sat up, put his forearm on the table as he leaned toward her with his other hand fisted on his thigh. "So you made another jump that day you came back...for a week? Explain," he demanded softly.
She stared at her hands, unable to look him in the eye. "I was worried that I was in too many places at once. I had been using the Time-Turner all that week to get to lessons on time and a few extra turns to complete essays. I thought that if I went back to a day when I had only used it once it would be safer, and then remembered that I had stayed a week with Severus to let the device cool...so I went back a week... so... I wouldn't miss classes," she stammered, feeling uncertain when she looked up at Professor Snape and met his sharp glare. "I thought it would be best."
"An extremely irrational and immature reaction, Miss Granger," Snape sneered, raising his voice at her. "You took an unnecessary risk that could have endangered you...permanently damaged the device."
"Severus, that's not..." Dumbledore admonished him as Snape turned to fully face her.
"Did it not occur to you, child, that this device could have returned you to the proper time for your lessons after it had cooled?"
Hermione hung her head in shame.
"Do you ever think about the risks you take, the dangers you put yourself in on a regular basis? I cannot always be there to save you...to protect you." He slammed his hand on the desk. "You cannot go through life jumping to the first conclusion you come up with without first considering the consequences and other options. You're a brilliant girl, but you do the most idiotic things! I expect such dunderheaded decisions from Potter, but I would hope that you would know better. I spend more time worrying about you..."
"SEVERUS! That's enough," Dumbledore snapped. "We'll discuss this another time." He turned to Hermione and smiled, his twinkle once again sparkling in his blue eyes. "Miss Granger, if you will take out a quill and parchment, I think you should be instructed on how to use the Time-Turner properly from Mr. Latimer."
"Yes, sir, I... under..." she said and froze midway for reaching for her bag, looking at the Headmaster in shock. "You mean I get to keep it?"
"Young lady, in only two months' time, you have given me so much information in the use of my invention!" Mr. Latimer said, smiling in delight. "Albus gives me weekly reports as does Professor McGonagall. This bouncing back decades in time is so exciting! No other Time-Turner has done this. It's beyond my wildest expectations!"
"You have got to be kidding me?" Snape snorted, gripping the armrests tightly and leaning forward. "You're letting her continue using the device?"
"Oh, certainly," Mr. Latimer said, his face aglow with anticipation. "You say she bounces again. Are you certain?" He turned to Hermione, not waiting for an answer. "I'll have to instruct you again on how to realign the Time-Turner for your return and make sure that you know how to read the time variance feature..."
"Headmaster, you cannot be serious!" Snape said in exasperation. "I lost her once and had to go back, and now you are letting her experiment for this old fool..."
"Severus, this device has a safeguard feature that will return Miss Granger from whenever she is," Dumbledore said patiently, his eyes sparkling. "It doesn't seem to cause her any physical harm, and we have you to thank for seeing to her safety." He set his hands on the desk as he rose to stand. "I, for one, am pleased that Miss Granger is so well looked after, but surely with the proper instruction, she won't have another unintentional mishap."
Snape ran his hand through his hair and gripped the back of his neck. "Don't count on that, old man. I still remember her being there."
"We'll see," Dumbledore said, smiling at him, and then turned his attention to Hermione, placing both hands, laced together, on the table. "Miss Granger, do pay attention and be careful with the device. In the future, you will please come to me if you make any miscalculation, no matter how small. I will notify Mr. Latimer myself. And, if you need hiding, Professor McGonagall and I will make whatever arrangements are necessary." He smiled as he looked at Mr. Latimer. "Cronus, Miss Granger will show you to my office when you are done here. Severus, would you come with me?"
Hermione caught the odd look Professor Snape gave her before he turned to follow the Headmaster from the room. Mr. Latimer spoke, drawing her attention back to the device in his hands to listen to him explain the use of the runes when setting the device for time travel.
Severus walked down to his private quarters after leaving the Headmaster, still furious that Miss Granger would still be allowed the use of the Time-Turner. He walked into his bedroom, opened the wardrobe, pulled out a drawer and took out a small brown diary. He turned the pages, glancing at the entries that correlated with Hermione's visits. They were all marked, one with a scrap of parchment she'd used to write down the books she'd wanted him to retrieve from the library, another with a leaf from the first day they'd gone hiking. He smiled as he fingered the brittle leaf, remembering the day with fondness. It had been such a risk, sneaking her out of the castle and back. They had nearly been caught, but it was one of the fondest memories he had. Gathering ingredients in the forest and playing in the snow were another. He turned the pages and removed the Chocolate Frog card she'd given him to read the brief entry.
Severus closed his eyes and inhaled slowly. She was an anachronism that his younger self enjoyed the company of for a little while. In this time, she was his student and completely unattainable. He saw no future for them; he made sure of it on a daily basis. Any association he might have could so easily be discovered and used against him, or worse...against her. The situation with Professor Quirrell two years ago was proof of that; the Dark Lord was still out there, biding his time before regaining strength to return. He had to maintain his persona.
However, he missed revising with her, missed their discussions, having her help him brew potions. She was an exceptional lab partner, even at this young age. If she had been his age, or if he could have afforded to drop his pretenses and tutored her, she'd be an exceptional witch. But those thoughts were futile. She was Muggle-born and worse, Potter's friend. She will be a target, and I have to protect her. He put the diary away and stared at the door. He had failed Lily. He would not fail Hermione.
Severus turned the pages to the entry of Hermione's third miscalculation and read the entry. Date, time, location, who was in the corridor, and the situation all clearly spelled out. He'd even noted what books she'd read and which potions they'd brewed. His younger self had grown fond of her in such a short time.
He closed the book with a snap and placed it back in his drawer. That was the past, this is the present. His job was to teach her, protect her from harm, and damn Merlin to hell, he planned to keep an eye on her and her friends and do just that.
Severus knew he was being unjust, giving Hermione a week's worth of detentions for assisting Longbottom in class, but she did speak back at him, defending her actions.
"But, sir, if I hadn't, then the potion would have made a toxic fume and exploded...either of which would have put all of us in the hospital..."
"Enough!" he snarled, placing his hand on her worktable and leaning forward. "Do not question me about my directions or my teaching methods again in my classroom."
"Yes, s..." she had started to say, most likely an apology, but he'd cut her off again, and doubled her detention.
He hadn't even marked it down in his ledger. Actually he had been furious with her for encouraging Potter to sneak down to Hogsmeade, even though everyone, including himself, was trying to protect the boy from Sirius Black. And they were seen...in front of the Shrieking Shack...Black's old haunt from his school days!
Hermione arrived on time, dressed for drudgery work. Severus smiled. "Miss Granger, I presume you remember how to make the Burn Paste properly?" he said smoothly, indicating the worktable situated closest to his desk that he'd set up for her detention.
Hermione looked at the stack of cauldrons in the sink and back with a confused crease between her brows. "Yes, sir. Of course I do."
"I expect you to brew the potion for first-, second-, and third-degree burns, and I want them to be of exemplary quality," he stated, indicating the three cauldrons lined up for her. He smiled, knowing that the task he was giving her would take her three evenings, not one. "Your results will be given to Madam Pomfrey, if they are adequate."
"And this is my task for my detention, sir?" she asked, clearly amazed by his choice.
"Yes," he stated, smiling. "Unless you'd rather scrub cauldrons all evening?"
"No, sir," Hermione said, smiling back, dropping her bag on the stool next to her.
Severus moved closer to her. "You do remember the changes to the directions in your book?"
Hermione nodded. She was biting her lip as she lit the burner under her cauldron and adjusted the fuel so the flame was blue.
Severus watched her as she worked. As a third-year, she didn't know how to brew all three at once. But if he played this out right, he would be able to have her help him brew the Wolfsbane with him next week. He ducked his head over the essay he was grading to hide his smile at the thought.
~ T. B. C. ~
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Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~