Chapter 7
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 7 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I just borrowed them for a while. I promise to put them back when I'm done. Oh, nope, no money either...just for fun.
I want to give a great big thank you hug to EverMystique and DuchessOfArcadia for combing through this to point out my numerous errors and help me make this presentable for reading. You're the best, thank you!
It hadn't taken Madam Pomfrey very long to set Black and Pettigrew right. However, that didn't mean that Potter and Black weren't going to retaliate. Just as Severus had predicted, Professor McGonagall had sent a fifth-year with a note after his Charms lesson, demanding that he be in her office at the end of his last class. Severus had decided to interpret the note to mean his last class of the day, not the last class of the morning. So at lunch, he had told Avery his potion was at a critical stage as he'd rolled roast beef sandwiches and corn on the cob in his napkin and stuffed apples and oranges into his pockets before he'd left to eat in the classroom with Hermione.
He had been heading for the library after Arithmancy when Black and Potter attacked him from two sides. Fortunately, Severus had been wary, expecting something to happen. He'd managed to duck, roll, and fire on Black, thankfully avoiding Potter's hex. He hadn't been so lucky with Black's counter curse. Severus fired a Body-Bind on Potter, but Black's Severing Charm slashed across his left arm, making his blood stain his sleeve.
"Engorgio," Potter shouted. The spell whizzed by Severus' head and bounced off the wall behind him. Unfortunately, it hit his foot.
"Guys!" Lupin shouted as he skidded to a stop behind Potter. "Stop, he's bleeding!"
"So, did you see what he did to Peter and me?" Black snarled, still aiming his wand at Severus.
Severus scrambled to a crouched position, his eyes now focused on Black while Potter was distracted by Lupin.
"Lily said he didn't do it!" Lupin shouted at Black as Potter snarled, "It was his potion! Everyone knows he made it!"
Severus knew that as soon as he moved, one of them would attack him. He tensed up, deciding between using a Stunner or the Jelly-Brain Jinx, choosing a Stunner in case a professor showed up. He had the spell on his lips ready to spring.
"Just because he made it doesn't mean he used it on you!" Lupin said, trying to get his friends to see reason.
Black aimed his wand at him, and Severus sprang up, firing the Stunner as he took off running. "No," he heard Lupin shout as Black went flying backward into the wall. A yellow jet of light hit the wall next to Severus as he started for the stairs.
"McGonagall is expecting him in her office, and he's now bleeding..." he heard Lupin saying as he ran down the stairs as fast as he dared with his grotesquely-enlarged foot. By the time he'd made it to the Entrance Hall, he was limping again. He leaned against the wall. "Damn, bloody Potter!" he cursed as he tried to reverse the Engorgement Charm.
As luck would have it, Avery, Rosier, and Rowe appeared from the stairs that led from the dungeons. Bugger, this is not my day!
"Oi, mate, you all right?" Rosier asked, running up the last few steps, hurrying over to him with the other two on his heels.
"Yeah, I'm fine," Severus snapped, testing out his foot. The foot was still large, but thankfully, not sprained or broken. He tried taking a step toward the stairs, trying not to limp.
"It's Black and Potter again, isn't it?" Avery asked, his eyes ablaze with anger. Both of Rowe's cheeks had visible ticks from his jaw being clenched so tightly.
"You're bleeding!" Rosier said as he reached out a hand to touch his sleeve, but Severus shrugged it off.
"I got off easy. It's just a scratch."
"Where?" Avery asked, glaring angrily. "Where are the snots?"
Severus jerked his head toward the stairs. "Fourth floor," he said reluctantly.
"That means you were outside the library! Those wankers!" Avery snarled.
Rowe nodded as Rosier asked, "You need anything?"
Severus shook his head. "I've got Essence of Dittany in the room. I'll be fine," he said as Avery tugged on Rosier's sleeve, growling, "C'mon guys! I bet they're bragging about it already."
Rowe was already heading for the stairs. Rosier raised his eyebrow, giving Severus one last unspoken inquiry, then turned and followed Avery and Rowe.
Severus stormed into the old classroom and blasted one of the old desks to splinters, which made Hermione run and duck for cover.
"What in the blazes is wrong with you!" she shouted.
"Potter and Black...what else! I got attacked again!" Severus snarled, using the Severing Charm on one of the desks, making deep gouges in the wood. "And I still have to go see Professor McGonagall and get reamed for supposedly using the potion on her pets."
Hermione's soft, brown eyes widened in alarm as she stared at his arm. "You're bleeding!"
"It's a scratch," he replied casually, smiling inwardly at the caring expression on her face. It was nice to have someone care...really care. "I need my Essence of Dittany." He tried reducing his foot again, smiling as the swelling went down. He'd take Pain Potion later if the ache didn't go away.
Hermione ran across the room to get the potion and picked up a rag and a cup. He hoped the rag was a clean one. "Severus, take off your clothes so I can see the cut," she said and turned around. "Oh!" she gasped when she saw that he was already pulling his jumper and shirt off.
"That eager to see me strip?" he teased her. "Well, you only get to see half of me."
She blushed two shades of pink and then turned her attention to his arm. "Oh, my! This is bad."
"It's not as bad as it looks," he said, checking the cut on his arm, which made it ooze more.
Hermione paled slightly. She started to clean his arm with the rag and the water in the cup. "Talk to me, will you? Tell me something about yourself...anything."
"There's not that much to tell," he said, amazed at how gently she was cleaning up the blood. "Use the dittany, Hermione. I can clean off the blood later." He watched her as she examined his cut. Hermione was bossy sometimes, but she had a good heart, which he liked about her. "Just a drop or two on the wound until the skin closes."
"Do you want me to faint?" she asked as she dipped the dittany bottle on a corner of the rag.
He looked up at her, and she swallowed before touching the rag to his wound. "Not with the rag, Hermione, directly on the wound," he told her, realizing she'd probably never used dittany before. "Just put a few drops in the cut, okay?"
She nodded and held the rag under the cut and tipped the bottle carefully so only a single drop of the dittany landed on the cut. Hermione swallowed and cleared her throat at the sight of the greenish smoke that billowed up into their faces. "Oh, gods. Please, talk to me. Tell me something about yourself. Tell me about your parents."
He didn't want to.
"Please, Severus. Distract me," she pleaded and sucked her lip under her front teeth as she allowed another drop to land on his arm. Unfortunately, with her hand shaking slightly as it was, she missed the cut. "What's your family like?"
He could tell that he'd have to say something; she looked ready to faint. "I don't come from a rich family; we didn't have much when I was growing up." He looked at her as she cringed when another drop landed on his cut and changed his mind about talking about himself. "Mum's a witch; she's really good at Charms and Herbology and such. She won a Gobstones medal and a trophy when she was at school. She taught me how to play. But Dad doesn't like her using her wand. He's a Muggle," he said and looked at her hands instead of her face. "He was a doffer at the factory and became an overseer just before he married my mum. He wanted me to be a doffer. Mum didn't...but he did...until the factory closed. He doesn't do anything now but drink."
She'd added two more drops of dittany while he'd talked and was now dabbing gently at the healing flesh. He liked watching her; she had a graceful fragility, which belied the capable witch she was. She was very tender and showed her feelings easily. Her finned-boned fingers were dexterous and smooth and so gentle at times. Her wrists and arms were thin like the rest of her, but he knew that she was stronger than she looked. Just like his mum.
"Where did you grow up?"
"Manchester," he said. "It's just a mill town. Only not many people still live there anymore, at least on our side of the bridge." He flexed his arm and smiled at the job she did. "Looks good." She dipped the rag in her cup and started cleaning off his arm. "You don't have to do that. I can go to the bathroom and clean it."
"Okay." She looked up at him with her kind doe-like eyes, and her lip slid from its confinement. Her soft, bushy brown hair framed her face. It fit her.
"You know, my best mate isn't from a rich family. There's nothing wrong with not having loads of money. Some of the happiest families I know have limited means," she said as he pulled on his shirt.
He turned away as he put on his robe. "It sucks being poor." He sighed as she collected up everything and turned away. "Thank you. I appreciate you doing this."
"No problem," she said, dumping the cloth and putting the dittany away.
Severus walked over and picked up the cloth and cup, and she handed him his vial of Pain Potion. He took a swallow, handing the vial back to her outstretched hand. "Thank you. I'll be back," he said, heading for the door.
Rowe was standing in front of him when he opened the door as if about to open it himself. Severus quickly stepped out into the corridor and closed it. "I was looking for you. Avery's in the dorm room," Rowe said and looked at his arm. "How is it?"
"Healed now that I got some Essence of Dittany on it," he said as he walked past him headed for the common room. "I need to change. Comin'?"
Rowe looked at the door to the classroom and turned to follow him.
"So, did you get Potter and Black for cutting me?" Severus asked, and Rowe's look of concern changed into an evil grin.
"Oh, they'll be limping for a few days," he said, opening the door to the common room. "So, who were you talking to in there?"
Severus mentally swore at himself. "No one...myself...I was really mad. That dittany hurts when you use it."
Rowe nodded and let him enter first. "I know how that stuff stings."
Severus sighed in relief that he bought the lie. If Rowe had opened the door, he'd have to really come up with an excuse for the way the room was set up...let alone explain Hermione's presence. He was going to have to do something about the room, like muffle the sounds and hide the bed.
Hermione paced the room after Severus had gone, wondering why Harry's dad and Sirius Black hated him so much. From what she'd gathered, Sirius Black and Potter ganged up on Severus a lot. Not too dissimilar to Malfoy, Crabbe, and Goyle, except usually only Malfoy was dumb enough to use his wand on her. Crabbe and Goyle only cracked their knuckles and scowled at her, trying to look intimidating, letting Malfoy do the hexing. Of course, Hermione also had to deal with the occasional taunts and hexes from Bulstrode and Parkinson, as well, but when Ron and Harry were with her, all Bulstrode and Parkinson did was sneer and make rude comments.
She wished that Severus hadn't taken the cup. She was thirsty. She filled the pitcher and drank from it, smirking at the thought of how her mum would've scolded her if she'd been witness. Still shaky from having to heal Severus, she lay down on the bed. She was getting so bored just staying in the room all the time. Severus was attentive enough, and he brought her piles of books on all subjects, but the small room sometimes felt claustrophobic.
She fell asleep wondering what Ron and Harry were up to.
The sound of someone rattling the doorknob woke Hermione up with a start. She had no idea what time it was or how long she'd slept.
Whoever it was on the other side of the door was having a hard time opening it, and for a minute she wondered if Severus had locked it. Finally the door opened, revealing half a body holding a pile of books topped with a tray of food. She jumped up and ran to help him. "I'm sorry, I wasn't sure if it was you, or I would have opened the door for you," she said, lifting the tray down.
"I'd rather you didn't," he said with a frown. "Rowe almost came in here. In fact, my friends are getting too curious about why I'm in here so much. We are going to have to do something about the bed." He dropped the books on the table. "Go ahead and eat, I have some things to figure out."
Hermione grabbed her silverware and sat down across from him. He'd brought her a bowl of stew and hot buttered rolls. "Is there anything I can do?"
He looked at the corner of the room that made up her bedroom. "We might have to shift things around a bit. Move the desks and bedside table to the other side of the bed against the wall or hang up blankets somehow. I dunno." He turned back to his books. "If this were a tent or a kind of fort it'd be easier." He looked up. "Do you mind if I borrow some parchment?"
She smiled and fished some sheets out of her bag for him, pulling out a quill and ink as well. She watched him flip through the books as she ate. He had that determined-concentration look on his face that was so intriguing. "I know what will work on the door..."
"What are you looking for?" she asked softly between bites.
"Ways to hide you in case anyone opens the door," he replied. "Protego and Salvio, in case they try using spells..." He drew his wand, aiming it at the pitcher. "Occaeco, Occare..." He shook his head and tried again. The pitcher vanished after the fourth try. He flicked his wand saying, "Finite," and the pitcher reappeared. "Invisum perlucidulus," he said a few times, the third time the pitcher vanished. "Finite. Okay, maybe. Transmitto." Nothing happened. He tried it a few more times. "No... Tramissum caecus...yes, that'll work. Finite."
Hermione watched as the pitcher appeared and disappeared. He got up, and she followed him.
"Circumventum," he said, making circle with his wand. Hermione didn't see any difference. "Occare inclusium, Invisum perlucidulus, Tramissum caecus...Protego totalum. Salvio hexia," he said, casting one spell in quick succession after another. The bed and bedside table vanished. He shook his head and reversed his spell work. "Damn. Finite. Circumventum totalum," he said, making a larger circle with his wand and added the other spells again. This time the desk disappeared as well. Satisfied he turned to face her. "What?"
"That's so amazing!" she said, walking forward until her hand touched the bed. She stepped into the space between the bed and the desk. "Hey, there're back!"
"You're in the ring of the spells," he said, unable to hide his snug satisfaction. "From where I'm standing, all I see are stone walls."
Hermione turned to face him. "So you can't see me?"
"No," he smirked, holding his wand casually. "So if anyone tries to come in here, duck onto your bed. They won't see you. I could add a Repelling Charm so no one wants to get near the bed, but you'd have to fight the effects as well. Come out, I have something to ask you."
She walked out of her magical enclosure. "Sure, what do you need?"
Severus laughed at her. "Hermione, never blindly offer to help a Slytherin unless you know what he wants and what the strings are."
"Okay," she said, nodding as if she understood. "So what did you need?"
He shook his head. "I was hoping you'd help me with the Engorgement and Reducing Charms."
"Sure!" she said enthusiastically.
He laughed and shook his head again. "Strings...remember? What I want is to try them on you. Enlarge, say, your hand and then reduce it."
She shrugged and looked at him expectantly. "Okay, but only if you are going to show me how to do it, too."
He shook his head and ran his hand through his hair. "Oh, my brave little Gryffindor, now you're talking like a Slytherin. Okay, get your wand."
As Severus rounded the corner, he caught sight of Potter and Lupin standing in the bailey talking to someone, or some ones, who were apparently sitting in an arch of the bailey wall. He caught a glimpse of a girl's leg as it swung forward. Thankfully, Potter's back was too him, one hand on the wall as he leaned over her. The sounds of two girls, Lily's laugh and another girl's giggle, rose above the other sounds of the open corridor. "I can't! I have too much revision to do," he heard Lily explain.
"But how am I to treat my girl to a day of frivolous shopping if she's stuck up here in the castle?" Potter asked, his free hand reaching toward Lily.
Severus knew that Potter was trying to convince Lily to go with him. "I'd love to, but I promised Remus I'd go with him on my next trip to Hogsmeade," Lily said.
Lupin turned his head to avoid Potter's glance at him, and his eyes locked onto Severus'.
"You know you want to go to Honeydukes and the bookshop," Vargas said with another giggle.
Severus scowled at Lupin's nod of acknowledgement, and he quickly ducked back around the corner to make a hasty retreat. The bookshop. Lily's second favorite shop in Hogsmeade... Potter will convince her to go. But even if I hope to see her there, she'll be with Lupin and Potter. Severus decided to forgo going down by the lake to meet his friends. He suddenly wasn't in the mood. Instead, he headed to his workroom to see Hermione. He would tell the guys later that he ran into Potter and Lupin and that they hexed him to impress Lily and Vargas.
He saw Hurshiser and Rowe talking to two Ravenclaw girls in the Entrance Hall as they walked up the marble staircase. He smirked at them, watching Hurshiser as he apparently tried his moves on the one with the long, blond braids. "One guess who he's taking to Hogsmeade," he muttered to himself as he ran to the stairs that led down to the dungeons. For the hundredth time that week, he wished that he could ask someone, well a specific someone, to go to Hogsmeade with him. But he knew he couldn't.
When he entered the classroom, Hermione was nowhere to be seen. He called out her name as he scanned the room quickly and hurried over to the bed. Nothing. Damn it, she's not here! He tried looking under the bed and behind it, thinking she might have gotten stuck, hiding from one of his house mates, but she wasn't there either. Angrily, he turned on his heel, thinking she'd defied him and had left the room to wander around the castle.
He took two steps toward the door and heard a tiny squeal. He looked down, wondering what he'd stepped on or if there was a mouse in the room and thought that he'd heard his name. He turned around again and saw her, squatted down behind one of her shoes. "What happened to you?" he asked, pulling out his wand as he knelt down.
"You know that annotation to the charms in your book...the one that increases the spell," she shouted up at him in her tiny voice. "I cannot undo this." She pointed to her wand that lay on the floor a few feet away. "I can't even lift my wand!"
Severus picked it up and held its tip to his wand tip, using the Priori Incantatum to identify the spell she'd tried. The spell she'd cast had a bluish-white tint. The tint indicated the addition of Maximus used in conjunction with a charm. "What spell did you use with it?"
"Reducio," she shouted.
Severus smirked and reversed the effect with her wand, watching in amusement as she enlarged back to her normal height. Thanks to the practice with Hermione, he'd gotten really good at it. "How in the world did you manage to cast it on yourself?" he asked, handing her back her wand.
Hermione blushed in embarrassment. "It bounced off the cauldron. It's on the floor over there somewhere by the desks. Only be careful, it's tiny now."
He stood over her as she crawled on all fours around the legs of his worktable, smirking at her cute bum. "There is an easier way," he suggested, barely able to hide the mirth in his voice.
"Oh, right," she said, sitting back on her heels. She whipped her wand out and tried to summon the cauldron. The one on the workspace rolled off and fell onto the floor next to her. Severus burst out laughing, and she turned around to glare at him. "What's so funny?" she snapped, putting the cauldron back with a Repelling Charm.
"Hermione, you were only twenty-eight centimeters; the cauldron will be about two, maybe three. Try the Locator Charm first, then enlarge it," he suggested. He pulled out his wand, placing it flat on his palm, and said, "Point me." The wand made a slight adjustment. "Excussum inveni," he said, pointing his wand in the direction his wand had indicated. The miniscule cauldron glowed a bright blue in a crack on the floor. Severus swished his wand, and the cauldron rose and expanded to its normal size. He turned his head to see Hermione trying the Locator Charm, making her wand swing around at different things in the room. "You're welcome."
"Oh, sorry! It's just that that was so cool how you did that!" she stammered, looking at him with amazed adoration.
"Hermione, it's only magic," he said, turning his head. He sat on the floor and leaned on the leg of the workbench. She sat down crossed-legged in front of him. "You want me to show you the other one?"
"Oh, yes! Please," she answered him, her doe-like eyes widened with glee.
Severus shook his head as he chuckled to himself. Her enthusiasm and smile were contagious enough to lift Severus' mood.
~ T. B. .C. ~
Author's Notes:
The Latin used in this chapter is:
occaeco are [to make blind , to blind, to darken; to conceal, make invisible, to make dull or numb]
invisus [unseen , secret]
perlucidulus [transparent]
caecus [blind, not seeing; intellectually or morally blind; uncertain, objectless, unseen, hidden, obscure, dark]
transmitto and tramissum [to go across, pass through or over; to leave unnoticed]
circumventum [to come round , surround, encircle]
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718 Reviews | 7.25/10 Average
Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~