Chapter 17
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 17 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
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Hermione arrived back in her time, slightly dizzy from the return and, for a moment, disoriented. She looked up and saw Professor Severus Snape, in his teaching robes, his arms crossed, leaning against the professor's desk as if waiting for her. Hermione looked around, trying to get her bearings. Two wall sconces were lit, illuminating the front of the room where Professor Snape patiently waited. Only two desks stood in the center of the room, one student desk and the professor's desk. All the other students' desks were moved to the side in two clumps of tightly squashed-together rows. Any semblance of familiarity to the room he'd used as a teen was gone. It was like any other old, unused classroom in the castle.
Professor Snape uncrossed his arms and indicated the one desk that stood in front of him. "Have a seat, Miss Granger."
Hermione walked forward, swallowing back the uncertainty she felt at seeing the adult version of her friend watching her with cool detachment. She dropped her bag next to the bench and sat down quietly. Surely after everything they had shared, there would be some lingering effect, some sense of the friendly familiarity between them, but his posture and expression were exactly the same as when she'd left, only sterner, if that was at all possible. She tried to relax and not fidget under his stare.
"Welcome back," he said softly, crossing his arms again. "Did you have a nice time?"
"Thank you, sir. Yes, I did," she replied, her well-ingrained polite habit masking her nervousness. She couldn't read him at all, but then she'd never been able to read this Severus Snape before. The teenage Severus had been much less guarded and more approachable. In fact, she was beginning to miss him, the younger version, even more.
He seemed to be watching her, not exactly waiting...contemplating her, as if weighing a decision. Hermione carefully forced herself to continue looking forward, using the time to examine him as much as he was doing her. He looked tired. There was a slightly dark shadow under his eyes, and his skin was sallow. His younger self was pale but still had a healthier glow about him, a light olive tone. Probably because he went outside more as a teen than he does now. There was also a slight crook to his nose, not all that noticeable except she was quite a bit more familiar with his face now than she'd been before her jumps. Did someone or something break his nose? When would it have happened?
"Miss Granger, what exactly do you expect from me?"
She nearly jumped out of her skin when he'd spoken, tearing her from her study of his face. "I'm sorry, sir...expect from you?" she asked, thrown off a bit by his question.
"You have just returned from spending a month with my younger self, have you not?"
She nodded at his question and gripped her hands tighter on her lap. She tried to prepare herself to listen to what he had to say, assuming now that she might not like it.
He nodded once to acknowledge her agreement to his question. "An entire month where I was your sole companion, provider, protector, and friend. Yes, friend," he clarified when she'd looked up at his admission of friendship, and he continued before she could respond. "For a month and a half, if you count the previous two times to my past, while you were in my company, we had formed a friendship, one that I did enjoy for what it was. However, as a teenager, I looked upon you as my charge, like... a kid sister, if you will. One I had to look after for a while. For you, that was only minutes ago. For me, it has been seventeen years. A lot has happened in my life in those seventeen years, more than you'll ever know. I have grown up, you have not."
She felt a lump lodge in her throat, and her chest felt heavy all of a sudden. "Yes, sir, I see your point," she said, lowering her head to watch her thumbs as she rubbed them on the edge of the desk. She mulled over his words, wishing that she was somehow misunderstanding his tone, but knew that she wasn't. She inhaled slowly, fighting to breathe evenly.
"I hope you can. While I know that you and I are no longer simply academically acquainted, I still am your professor in this time, and as such, our relationship is one of professor and student."
Hermione felt her heart drop a little. He was discounting their friendship. He didn't want anything to do with her, not in this time. She wished fervently that she could've stayed in the past, had some means to support herself. But then, there was so much she'd lose in the present that would be too painful to give up.
"Miss Granger, look at me."
She didn't want to. If she did, she'd see that the Severus she really cared for had grown into this hardened, cold man who hated her. She laced her fingers tightly to hold back her emotions and slowly angled her head to look up at him, avoiding making eye contact.
He seemed to study her for a moment and then relaxed his arms, placing his hands on the desk by his hips. "You expected more."
"I didn't think about this," she started to say, then turned and looked at the place where their worktable had been only minutes before. Their worktable, where they had brewed potions. And the place where the table had been is right behind me. She could still see him leaning his head on his hand as he read, or the smirk on his face when she'd said something that amused him, the way his dark eyes shone when he'd found an answer in a book...
"But you hoped that our friendship would continue."
Her head turned as her gaze returned to his face. "I had... I have only just returned, sir. I haven't had time to think about what I expected. I admit that I have become fond of you, yes. But I... I suppose if I were to consider what I want now, it would be to..."
"Continue as we were when I was seventeen?" he asked derisively with a smirk. "Do you really think that is practical, you and I friends? You are only fourteen, are you not?"
She nodded, not trusting her voice. It's exactly what she'd wanted. True, there was an age gap now, and he was her professor. But, being friendly with a professor wasn't unheard of. A Gryffindor being friends with the Head of Slytherin... maybe that was expecting a bit much.
"And since I know you can do simple maths, I'm thirty-four, an adult, and an authority figure," he stated blandly. "How do you suppose a friendship with one of your professors would be like? Can you honestly perceive that kind of relationship with me?"
She shook her head, wishing she could just leave and run up to her dorm room.
"Please pull out the Time-Turner," he demanded softly.
Hermione carefully took off the Time-Turner and held it out to him. She hated to give it up, but knew that it was too hot to use anyway.
Severus reached out and clasped it by the chain, holding it up to look at the hourglass carefully in the soft illumination of the room. "Overstressed and hot." He lowered his arm, turning to retrieve the small, familiar blue box he'd placed on the desk behind him, and put the Time-Turner in it carefully. Hermione felt her body jerk as he closed the lid with a soft clap. "I'll return this to the Headmaster. You, young lady, are to be sequestered for a week or so with a friend of the Headmaster's until this device is usable again. Since I am well aware that you have completed all of your class assignments, each of your professors have devised enough work to last you for the time that you'll be overlapping. You may give me your essays."
Thankful, Hermione picked up her bag and began to pull out all of her completed essays. Professor Snape waited patiently until she'd compiled them in order and held them out to him.
"Thank you." He stuffed them into his pocket. "Now grab your bag and follow me," he stated and started to walk for the door.
Hermione had to hurry to catch up. "Sir, shouldn't I go pack something?"
He whirled an about face and leered down at her. "Go pack. Have you any idea how idiotic that suggestion is? You're in three places at once as it is: Muggle Studies, Ancient Runes and here! Unless your other self made another bounce I'm unaware of. It's bad enough that you are allowed to be using the device, one you so obviously misuse..." He made fists with his hands and turned around. "You have been provided for. Now let's go before you are seen."
He walked quickly to the entrance of the Headmaster's tower, Hermione hurrying along behind him. "Atomic fireballs," Professor Snape announced to the gargoyle and stood aside to let Hermione climb the stairs to the Headmaster's office.
"Ah, Severus, so she has arrived back," Dumbledore said, and indicated the chairs in front of his desk with a wave of his hand. "Please, do sit down. How was your trip, Miss Granger? I assume that all went well?"
Hermione sat down, holding her bag on her lap. "Yes, Headmaster, everything went well enough, I believe."
"She was nearly seen twice, almost bumped into one of my housemates while impersonating him, but other than that, she was compliant," Professor Snape commented curtly. "You have read my report."
Hearing him describe their close encounters this way made them seem far more problematic than they had been at the time. Hermione looked at the edge of the desk feeling ashamed.
"Yes, I have," Dumbledore said with a twinkle in his eyes. "Miss Granger, would you like a lemon drop? I'd offer one to Severus, but he always turns me down."
She looked up in surprise at the offer. "No, thank you, Headmaster," Hermione replied politely, suppressing a smirk.
"Very well," Dumbledore replied, lacing his hands on his desk. "So, Miss Granger, it seems that we have an overlap we need to correct. If what Severus suspects has happened, the Time-Turner has been overused and needs time to cool, so you must be sequestered, yet again."
"Pardon me, sir, an overlap?" Hermione asked confused. She was in a virtual overlap every day when she used the device.
Professor Snape turned to look at her. "Yes, Miss Granger, you have overstressed the Time-Turner..."
She clutched her bag to her chest, wondering if he was going to be as disappointed with her as Professor Snape seemed to be.
"What Professor Snape is implying is that you must be tucked away until the device cools. I daren't impose on Professor Snape with the task, so I have made other arrangements." He turned to address Professor Snape. "Am I correct in assuming that Miss Granger makes no more errors in her calculations for the rest of the school term?"
"None that I am aware of, but she could very well surprise us," Professor Snape stated with a frown.
"She does that every day," Dumbledore stated with a smile. "Now, Miss Granger, according to your schedule... you have Muggle Studies, Arithmancy, and Transfiguration this morning. Which subject were you going to attend before you had your mishap?"
"Arithmancy, sir," Hermione said with a sense of relief. "I have Transfiguration afterwards and Care of Magical Creatures and Defense Against the Dark Arts in the afternoon."
Dumbledore smiled and held out his hand. "May I see the Time-Turner, please?"
Professor Snape set the blue box on the Headmaster's desk. Dumbledore examined the device, intently. "Interesting. Just like before, not liquid but clearly nearly molten... and translucent." He laid the Time-Turner carefully in the box again and then summoned Fawkes to him, handing a small scroll and the box to the phoenix. "If you would please deliver this note with the box to Mr. Latimer, Department of Mysteries, for me."
Fawkes cooed softly, spread his wings and vanished in a flare of fire.
"Severus, you said before that Miss Granger needed to wait for a month for the device to cool enough for her to use it again, isn't that right?" Dumbledore asked.
Professor Snape shook his head. "I believe two weeks should be sufficient, seventeen, possibly nineteen, days."
Hermione looked at him in stunned disbelief. That is only three weeks at best. Why had it taken a month this last time?
"We'll say nineteen days to be safe." Dumbledore picked up his quill and made a notation on a piece of parchment, then looked up. "Now, Miss Granger, it would be best if you go quietly to your room, pack only that which you need for three weeks, and return back."
"I have already assembled suitable provisions for Miss Granger," Professor Snape stated and turned his head toward Hermione, "including your toiletries, extra books, and your assignments from your professors." He flicked his wand, ending a Disillusionment Charm and handed her what appeared to be a small Muggle rucksack. "Anything I may have overlooked, you may inform the Headmaster of."
"Thank you, sir," she said, swallowing nervously as she accepted the rucksack. He's showing his thoughtful side again, she hoped.
"Wonderful. Now if you're ready, Miss Granger," Dumbledore said as he rose to his feet, "you'll be coming with me to stay with a dear friend of mine. Severus, if you'll please deliver this to Minerva for me, it would be much appreciated."
"Certainly, Headmaster," Professor Snape said and stood to leave. His gaze lingered on Hermione, his dark eyes and the lines on his face seemingly to soften for a brief moment until Dumbledore extended the rolled parchment to him. He nodded once and strode for the door.
Hestia Jones was a warm, wonderful woman in Hermione's opinion. She wasn't much older than Professor Snape, black-haired with rosy cheeks and a fun sense of humor. She lived in a deceptively quaint-looking cottage, which had more rooms than Hermione thought possible, in Maldon near the Blackwater River. The front garden looked overgrown with huge bushes and brambles when Dumbledore first stopped at the garden gate, but once inside, Hestia's garden was a wonder of herbs, flowers, and vegetables, both magical and mundane surrounded by damson, apricot, figs, hazelnut, pear, plum, sweet horse chestnut, and several varieties of apple trees.
On their third day together, Hestia took Hermione shopping with her to get a bit of fresh air and some burdy roots. The fifth day, Hestia took Hermione to the fish market, and they ate lunch in a wizard-owned café on the waterfront. For Easter, she made small, egg-shaped cakes and gave Hermione some festive crackers, two that had real rabbits in them. On their eighth day together, they went to the Blue Boar Hotel on Silver Street.
The hotel was a charming fifteenth century coaching inn, eccentrically furnished as if straight out of Dickens, full of curiosities and antique pieces, including a nude oil painting over a welcoming brick fireplace. They ate lunch in a pub situated down a crooked corridor, obviously occupied by the wizarding guests of the inn. Afterwards, Hestia led Hermione past a small pub with a brewery to a secret stairway that led to a blue door. Hestia tapped the doorknob with her wand, and the door opened, revealing Enchanter's Way, a street every bit as magical as Diagon Alley. Hestia smiled obligingly when Hermione asked excitedly if they could visit the bookshop.
Hermione found a magical journal in the shop and immediately thought of Severus. Although Professor Snape had made it quite clear that their friendship was over, she felt compelled to buy it for no other reason than to give it to him as a thank you gift for everything he'd done for her. In the stationary shop, she picked out a black swan quill, smiling that it looked so like one he'd use.
She spent several days helping Hestia clear the weeds and fanged ivy from her flowerbeds, and on their thirteenth day, Hestia took Hermione to see a nursery for magical herbs and plants. The next day they dressed as Muggles and went to the Colchester Zoo.
They were following the search for Sirius Black religiously in the Daily Prophet. Hestia had known him, describing Sirius Black as a reckless hot-head who liked to cause trouble. His attack on the Potters had frightened Hestia very much, considering how close everyone thought they had been. Hestia was wary of Black, although she believed that the Aurors would eventually catch him. However, Hermione wasn't as confident as she was.
He had been seen in Braemar, Newtonmore, and Aviemore, which Hermione thought was much too close to Hogsmeade. She fervently hoped that Harry was being reasonable while she was away, keeping himself safe from Black. But then she remembered that she'd be returning to the same time she'd left, so she could undo any mistake he'd make, which made her feel better.
Considering what an awful boy he had been as a teen, Hermione felt even more worry for Harry. Black was unscrupulous in her mind, first being the school bully, then murdering his best mate, and now trying to murder Harry... Still, there was very little she could do about it now.
The time seemed to fly, and before she knew it, Fawkes few into the kitchen with a note from Dumbledore, saying that it was time to go back to school.
When Hestia brought her back to Hogwarts, Dumbledore met Hermione at the gate and exchanged her rucksack for her book bag. With a flick of his hand the rucksack disappeared. "It will be waiting for you in your room," he explained when she gasped in surprise.
He Disillusioned her and chatted with her all the way back to the castle about her visit with Hestia, her visit with Severus' teenage self, and her thoughts on transverse time conjunctions and parallel probabilities. Well, he explained his and Mr. Latimer's theories on the time travel theories. She was certain that anyone looking from the windows seeing what looked like the Headmaster talking to himself would surely think him a nutter. He reminded her to remain quiet once they entered the doors.
Forgetting she was invisible, Hermione shrugged and nodded. "Of course, sir," she replied when he'd hesitated.
He led her into the antechamber near the Great Hall and handed her the Time-Turner. "It has been set for you to make a small jump. Precisely three weeks to the day, or so Coronus tells me. I'll be waiting here for you when you arrive, since you have already done so in my time."
Hermione smiled. "Thank you, sir." She activated the Time-Turner. The room around her spun into nothing more than a blur, then slowed to a stop. Dumbledore was sitting across the room in a large over-stuffed armchair, sipping tea.
"Ah, yes, right on time," he stated, setting down the teacup and making Hermione laugh. He walked with her to her Arithmancy class. "You are in your own timeline now, Miss Granger. So there should be no worry of you using the device tomorrow. However, I strongly urge you to refrain from using it for the rest of the day."
"Yes, Professor," she promised and entered the classroom.
After Arithmancy, Hermione spotted Ron and Harry in the corridors with their heads together, obviously checking the map. Hermione rushed up to them, throwing one arm around each of her startled friends and hugged them. "Oh, Merlin I missed you guys!"
"Er, Herm...ouch, that's my foot!" Ron exclaimed as he sputtered her hair from his mouth.
Harry was saying, "Oi, Hermione, it's only...pftt...blimey! It's only been an hour!"
Hermione laughed and hugged them tighter. "I...you have no idea at all, and I love you for it!"
"Girl's gone mental!" Ron said, trying to brush her hair from his face.
She stood back and grinned at them.
"So, can we go to lunch now," Harry said, pointing down the corridor, "unless you're going to strangle us again?"
"Oh, Harry, I...it's... never mind. I'm just exuberantly happy, that's all!" she said, picking her bag up off the floor.
Ron shrugged and began talking to Harry about Slytherin's latest attempted attack on Angelina Johnson. "... She blasted him right through the door! Can you imagine..."
Harry, Ron, and Hermione arrived early that afternoon for Defense. Hermione took her seat, scrutinizing Professor Lupin with a new outlook on the wizard. She just couldn't get past the memory of him just standing by while his friends, Potter and Black, attacked her and Severus, even if they thought she was Mulciber. He'd even moved in to defend his friends, three against two! "Cowards," she mumbled.
Harry was searching through his bag for his homework and looked up at her, startled. "Pardon me?" Harry asked.
"Nothing. Something I remembered from another time," she replied and searched her bag for her own homework, the extra essays that Professor Lupin had given her, one on Dark creatures with incurable infectious bites and the other on nocturnal class level four and five creatures.
Professor Lupin passed by the rows, collecting the essays, Hermione had to try and control the contempt she felt for him. Professor Lupin looked a bit confused by her demeanor when she handed him her papers. Still, once he started lecturing, she focused on the material and not the wizard presenting it. However, when he stopped by her desk, she refused to look up at him. After class, he asked her to remain behind.
"Hermione, I am a little confused by the extra credit you turned in," he asked calmly.
"I don't understand. I did the papers you required of me in my time overlap," she stated, wondering what there was to be confused about. Surely he knew that she'd been sequestered for nineteen days.
He gave her a smile that didn't quite reach his tired eyes. "I asked for a comprehensive overview of all class level four nocturnal creatures. You seem to have written far more than I'd asked for," he said, laying her essays on his desk. "Were you bored?"
She shook her head in confusion. "No, I have my list here..." She pulled out her revision planner and read the list that Professor Snape had given her, reading the Defense assignment aloud.
He chuckled softly. "No, but I have an idea where the extra assignment came from. I'm more than happy to credit you for the work, but I must say, you hardly need it in this class."
"Thank you, Professor," she replied automatically.
His brow wrinkled in confusion. "Miss Granger, is there anything wrong?"
She shook her head. She couldn't tell him anyway, considering he wouldn't remember the incident at all thanks to Severus' Oblivate. "Nothing, just trying to stay abreast of my studies, Professor," she intoned.
He frowned. "You know that you can talk to me about anything, Hermione."
The use of her name startled her. "How could you! You were friends with him...and he turned in Harry's family to You-Know-Who! He even tried to kill Harry!" she said, her voice rising. He just looked at her passively like he had done while Black and Potter had taunted Severus, and she lost her temper with him. "You just stood by and let him attack, and you didn't do anything! Not a thing! You just let him..."
"I assure you, I did no such thing! I searched the castle for him, but he escaped!" Professor Lupin said emphatically, placing both hands on his desk as he rose to face her. "I admit that when I was a student, we were friends. We were in the same house, the same year at school. I didn't have any friends when I came to Hogwarts. I thought I wasn't worthy...Harry's dad, James, and Sirius Black befriended me, no questions asked, even when all the other boys shunned me. But that was twenty years ago!"
Hermione recoiled. His story mimicked hers exactly. I didn't have any friends either, and the other girls avoided me, but Harry and Ron befriended me after the troll incident...no questions asked. Even though all the other kids in the house...in the school shunned me, Harry and Ron chose to be my friend. "That still doesn't make up for the way..." She froze. He didn't know I went back in time to his school years, did he?
"Doesn't make up for what?" he asked, lowering and leaning his head so he could look her in the eyes.
She looked up at him, her eyes narrowing in suspicion. "Are you friends now?"
He frowned and shook his head. "How can I? He killed Peter Pettigrew and was responsible for the deaths of James and Lily Potter. I haven't forgiven him for that!" His shoulders sagged. "James and Lily were like family to me, more than just best mates. They even secured me in the basement...helped me each month and... I owed them so much."
Hermione watched him carefully. He wasn't lying; he truly regretted the loss of Harry's parents. "I'm sorry, sir. I have to go." She picked up her bag and hitched it up onto her shoulder. "I'm... sorry about accusing you."
He smiled and picked up her essays. "Thank you. Sometimes we have to forgive people their pasts. I hope I can earn yours."
"Thank you, sir," she said and turned to leave.
Hermione walked into Potions, not sure of how Professor Snape would receive her. He walked into the classroom, his robes billowing behind him and waved his hand at the blackboard, making the directions appear. "This is your assignment for today. Please note that the ashwinder eggs say gently whisked, not beaten to a froth. You may proceed."
When Hermione brought her potion sample up to his desk, he said smoothly, "Miss Granger, please come see me in my office at the end of the day."
"Yes, sir," she replied and turned to go.
Hermione entered his office. Professor Snape was grading students' papers and didn't look up as she walked up to his desk and sat down in the chair facing him. She waited patiently for him to acknowledge her.
Finally, he placed his quill in its holder, closed his inkwell, and laced his fingers together as he looked up at her. "Regardless of what I may or may not have taught you in your step back in time, Miss Granger, you will not experiment with your potions in my classroom. Is that clear?"
"Yes, sir," she replied politely.
"I expect you to follow my directions precisely in the order that I post them on the board and curtail any questions or comments on any directions or ingredient preparation steps to only that which I have indicated for you to do. You will not question me about any alteration or deviation from the given directions," he continued as if she hadn't spoken. "You will not instruct any student in any technique or variance of the directions I provide while under my tutelage."
"Yes, sir," she replied with a nod of her head. "I understand."
He pointed a finger at her and narrowed his eyes. "That goes for Mr. Longbottom, as well as your two friends."
"Yes, Professor," she said, wishing that he hadn't made that stipulation. Neville needed the help in class. But, he'd specifically stated that I wasn't to show anyone what he'd taught me in the past...not that I couldn't tell them what I know from this time.
"And, under no circumstances, what-so-ever, will you ever call me Severus," he said with another jab with his finger.
"Of course not, sir," she replied in shock. The idea of calling him by his given name was certainly out of the question. She was surprised that he was concerned that she'd show him such little respect.
"You may leave," he said with a dismissive wave of his hand.
Hermione decided that now was as good a time as any to give him her gifts. "Professor?"
"What is it, Miss Granger?" he asked impatiently.
Hermione pulled the carefully wrapped package from her bag. "I wanted to give you this."
"Why?" he asked, startled by the appearance of the gift.
"As a thank you for everything you did for me when I was in your care," she said as she set the journal and quill on his desk.
He stared at the bright wrapping as if not comprehending its existence.
She waited patiently until he gave in and opened the gift.
"The journal is for your potions...the ones you improved upon. I thought that you might like to have a place to write them down," she said and mentally chastised herself for stating the obvious.
He closed his eyes a moment, and a tick showed in his cheek. "I have such a book already."
She bowed her head and reached out to take the book, but he had reached out to take it and her fingers brushed his. She looked up at the unexpected contact.
"Thank you. Your token of gratitude is appreciated," he said softly, his expression softening for a split second, before his body stiffened again. "You may go."
She could tell by the reaction that she'd thrown him off guard with her gifts, and he was... flustered, possibly. She didn't wait for him to open the long, narrow, blue box laying on the journal. She knew he'd like the quill.
Severus still stared at the door after she had gone. He'd done everything he could think of to dissuade the girl from any romantic notions, and she had still given him a gift...two gifts, actually. The journal was bound in magically protected dragon hide, impervious to any potions ingredients, except for acidic dragon bile. He knew that the pages of parchment were of an excellent quality, medium grade, and allowed for any artistic rendering he'd wish to include. The journal would also automatically update the name of his potion entry on the index. The book would even add additional pages if he so desired. It was a very thoughtful gift, more so because she had specified for him to use it to record his own potions.
A long, slender blue box lay on the journal. He ran a finger along the box, detecting only a mild magical signature, nothing threatening. Not that he expected for there to be anything untoward or dangerous coming from Miss Granger. He lifted the lid, and his eyes widened in surprise. An elegant black swan quill lay on a blue satin lining.
Severus fell back in his chair, staring at the quill. His favorite, even if he didn't indulge in their purchase, generally opting for the more practical black goose quills. The quill alone would have been a sufficient gift.
Her voice echoed in his mind as he sat contemplating the rationale behind her motives, 'A thank you for everything you did for me when I was in your care.'
He could think of no reason or any strings that Miss Granger would expect for such a generous gift. He shouldn't accept it; he should summon a house-elf and have the items returned.
His hand reached out to touch the quill with the lightest of caresses. It was perfect, no separating or irregularity in the smoothness of barbs of the feather. Delicately carved silver gilt accentuated the tip with a pattern of wood-grain-like twists and curves. A wizard's quill. He closed the box and noticed his name, 'Professor Severus T. Snape, Master of Potions,' in silver letters on the journal. Personally embossed. Hestia must have told the shopkeeper my full name. Miss Granger didn't know my middle initial.
The chatter and laughter of his next class interrupted his thoughts. He picked up the quill box and journal and placed it at the back of his right hand drawer. "Quiet," he said smoothly, drawing everyone's attention.
Severus turned and glared at Hermione. "Miss Granger, do not hiss directions at Longbottom!" he snapped angrily. She at least had the humility to appear admonished, even if Potter demonstrated his usual audacity and scowled back at him. Nevertheless, she had given her word and had now broken it...again, for the third time this week. "I will expect you back here...tonight! Seven o'clock. Now, do your own work."
When Hermione arrived for her detention, Severus had just finished setting up the cauldrons he intended to use on one of the larger worktables. He turned to face her and smirked when he saw she was tying her hair back with a ribbon with her sleeves already rolled up.
"You have an option, Miss Granger," he said as he indicated toward the sink. "You may either scrape and scrub those ingredient jars..."
Hermione turned to look at the pile of jars in the sink and nodded in acknowledgement.
The fact that she was prepared to meet his worst, without argument or complaint, made him smile. Oh, how he'd missed this girl. "Or you may assist me in brewing the Wolfsbane Potion. Your choice," he stated, knowing full well which she'd choose.
She jerked her head back to look at him, obviously not quite sure she'd heard him correctly. She was so easy to read, but then he knew her so well.
"However, if you choose to assist me with the potion, you will be required to return several nights for the next fourteen days until the potion is in its final stage, and you'll be assisting me with other potions as needed by the hospital as time permits between stages."
Hermione somehow managed to suppress her smile. "I would prefer to assist you with the potion...potions, sir."
He nodded and crooked a finger at her. "Drop your things on the table there," he said, pointing at the workstation closest to his desk. "You will bring your essays or revision materials with you each night to fill in the allotted time between steps if Madam Pomfrey has no requests for me. However, I expect you to follow directions without idle chatter and revise quietly so I may grade my papers. Is that understood?"
"Yes, sir, perfectly."
~ T. B. C. ~
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718 Reviews | 7.25/10 Average
Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~