Chapter 4
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 4 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I just borrowed them for a while. I promise to put them back when I'm done. Oh, nope, no money either...just for fun.
I want to give a great big thank you hug to EverMystique and DuchessOfArcadia for combing through this to help me make this presentable for reading. You're the best, thank you!
By noon, the sands in the Time-Turner looked normal. Hermione sighed sadly, put it around her neck and looked up at Severus.
He stood patiently, his expression neutral and nodded at her. "It's time, Hermione. You have to go home."
"I know," she said softly. "It'll be good to be back." She meant it, but in an odd way she'd miss this Severus Snape. But much as she'd have liked to stay with him and really get to know him, she couldn't, and he couldn't come back with her. So this was good-bye.
She grabbed her bag, slung it over her shoulder and looked up at him expectantly. She wanted to hug him good-bye, but his posture was so stiff and aloof that she knew it wouldn't be welcomed. "Thank you. You did so much for me this last week. I'll never forget it."
He huffed. "It might be best if you did."
She turned away and sighed.
"You're welcome. Now, go," he muttered softly, dropping his head so that his hair obscured his face.
Hermione set the runes to 'return.' Severus watched her with a resolute air. There was so much she wanted to say to him, but he refused to look her in the eye. She let the hourglass spin, and he vanished as the room spun out of focus.
She arrived back in the little room and wondered what time it was. As she walked up to the common room to change, she realized that lessons were about to be let out. Curious, she hurried to get to her Ancient Runes class. She arrived in the corridor a few paces from watching herself being knocked over when several fifth-years exited the door behind her. Her other self vanished before she hit the floor. Hermione pulled out her Time-Turner. The hourglass felt hot, and the sand looked almost like liquid. It'll have to cool, but I can't be seen. It took a week the first time for it to cool... Would a week still be enough? Or should it be two? I'll start with one. She quickly turned the ring back for a one week jump and prayed. The Time-Turner nearly burned her hand, but it still made the jump. Hermione carefully checked the corridor before running to find Professor McGonagall to tell her she'd miscalculated so that she could be hidden for a week until time caught back up to her.
Cronus Latimer examined the Time-Turner in his hand. "It's been over used, I think. It's still quite hot." He looked up at Albus from across his worktable with a worried expression. "You say she went back a week? Is that all?"
Albus rested his elbows on the workbench from his perch on the padded stool. "Minerva informed me that Miss Granger miscalculated and went back a week instead of an hour," he said, steepling his hands in front of him, watching Cronus turn the hourglass to examine the sands. "She took Miss Granger to her sister's house for the duration of her overlap, and Miss Granger will be back at Hogwarts on Wednesday."
"Odd, very odd," Cronus mumbled. "How many times has she miscalculated?"
"I am unaware of any other miscalculations," Albus stated. "But then I have had many other concerns as of late: Sirius Black for one, the Dementors surrounding the school for another, Minister Fudge's concerns and many interferences, and, of course, many parents who are highly concerned for the safety and welfare of their children. I am pleased to say that Miss Granger herself is apparently in good health and of sound mind."
"Well, Albus, this needs to cool down...but not too quickly... and at the correct temperature. Humidity is of concern...there cannot be any condensation..." Cronus began to stroke his beard as he paced, rambling his thoughts quickly, and Albus smiled. "I'm concerned that the device reset itself..." Cronus stopped and faced the black board that took up an entire wall of his workroom. "And that must be done with...I've never calculated for misuse...Einstein's principle of time relativity... Galilean's invariance of time in Arithmancy principle... to Pilsners' equivalence of rotational time," he said as he waved his hand to make the formulas appear on his blackboard. "I may have to consider Haughton's theory of collateral parallel time dimensions... The setting must be noted so that Miss Granger doesn't return to the time she left. She is waiting out the week in the Highlands. The Time-Turner will have to be reset..."
Albus stood and walked around the workbench to watch the wizard as he added in the runes and numbers that represented the setting of when Hermione returned.
"She disappeared Thursday, approximately at two o'clock. Just after her Ancient Runes lesson. We might add three minutes to compensate for her need to find a suitable place in which to utilize the Time-Turner unobserved," Albus said, adding in the additional information where it was needed for the calculation. They worked together on the calculation for an hour, adjusting the time of Miss Granger's departure time twice, before they determined the equilivent denominator. "Well, yes, the Time-Turner must sit in stasis and cool for a week and a half," Cronus admitted. "But the cooling...that is not my forte."
"Ah, but I can help you there," Albus said with a smile. "I have been mulling it over while we were talking, and I think I know just the spells needed. Of course, it will take two wands and preferably someone with an oak wand with a Dragon heartstring core...the magical complimentary wood to my own wand. Luckily I know just the wizard, and I can ensure you that he is most discrete."
"Whom?" Cronus asked. "There are very few who are allowed within these corridors and halls, Albus."
"Mr. Kingsley Shacklebolt," Albus replied with full confidence in his voice. "I can vouch for the man myself."
Cronus stroked his beard as he considered the suggestion. Albus waited patiently, knowing that his friend would have to consider all the implications of allowing Kingsley down into the Department of Mysteries to assist Albus in Charming the small blue box that rested on the workbench. "All right, Albus. I'll send for his assistance," he agreed at least.
"Excellent," Albus said, his blue eyes twinkling, and returned to his stool to wait the arrival of his Order member.
Severus sat at his desk and watched Hermione work on her potion. Every once and a while she nudged Longbottom or quietly hissed directions at him. "Miss Granger, kindly do your own work, and stop instructing Mr. Longbottom. That's my job, you insufferable girl," he snapped at her. "Ten points from Gryffindor. Mr. Weasley, shred the lemon grass, do not mangle it." Oh yes, a typical Potions lesson with the third-year Gryffindors.
It had worked. The mishap had been avoided and all was normal again. Or seemed normal. Only time would tell if everything worked out. The good thing was that Miss Granger was back, hand spring up to every question he asked, rhetorical or not, coaching Neville at every opportunity, and following Potter and the sidekick Weasley, breaking every school rule possible. He'd had to maintain a fierce acerbic tone whenever he was around her, but so far she hadn't demonstrated any inappropriate familiarity with him or made any innuendo regarding the week they'd spent in each other's company.
He stood and swept around the room, observing the students' progress on the simple Burn Paste. It wouldn't be the superior quality that he produced, but if any of them in the future received a minor burn at least they...well, most of them would be able to relieve the wound. Hermione's was perfect; in fact, he realized that she'd used the same directions they'd used when she'd jumped back, not the one on the board. He frowned at her, and she had the audacity to look up and smile at him, giving him a slight nod. He merely raised an eyebrow at her and tried to look disdainful before he turned to check Longbottom's. His was useless; it would barely receive an Acceptable. Goyle's was dismal, barely passing as was Crabbe's. Malfoy's potion was slightly off color but would turn out adequate enough unless he quit trying to whip it with is stirring rod. Potter's was passable, and Weasley's was... puce.
"When you are finished, bottle the potion in the large flasks on the side table and bring it to me," he said smoothly returning to his desk. "Weasley, don't bother bottling that concoction, it's abominable." He sat down, ignoring Potter and Weasley's complaints about fairness. Yes, everything was back to normal...thankfully. He glanced over at Hermione and their eyes met. Severus stared at her, keeping his expression as neutral as possible. Hermione turned her attention back to her potion where it belonged.
Severus cursed himself. The girl had another mishap with the Time-Turner and had gone back to his time again, not once but two more times!
As he remembered it, she nearly got caught in the cross fire between him, Potter, and Black the first time, and the second time she ended up in Gryffindor tower for a month. A bloody month! Then she disappeared without a trace. She had lived with Lily Evans and Potter...she could have changed the timeline! Who knows what events the girl had changed.
He knew that she'd come back to his time, even knew when, roughly.
"Minerva, give me the Time-Turner and I can fix this," he said, knowing that he'd have to convince himself to take care of the insufferable girl for the additional two times she'd gone back in time.
"No, Severus," Dumbledore said, shaking his head sadly. "This is a problem that is best dealt with in this time, not in the past. Besides, we aren't even sure when exactly Hermione went back to."
"I know where she went, or more acutely, when," Severus said firmly, placing his hand on Minerva's desk. "You don't remember the first time because I hid her. I even remember the second time. I was unable to intervene because the girl showed up right in the middle of a duel between Potter, Black, and myself. I could not prevent her from tampering with anything because your golden boys sent me to the hospital wing."
Dumbledore looked up at him with fire in his eyes. "Explain what you mean by 'the first time,'" he said forcefully. "And why wasn't I told?"
"Because, by limiting her contact so that she only interacted with me...my younger self...and no one else, I was able to ensure that the girl didn't expose anything or disrupt what should have happened, and thus stopped the events that resulted because of her death, that's why," he said dryly.
Minerva placed her hand over her heart as she inhaled in shock. "Her death, surely...?"
"Yes, her death. She died. That timeline was apparently erased because I went back and told my younger self to keep Miss Granger out of sight until she could return, thereby erasing that timeline and creating this one," Severus stated. "I did it once; I can ensure her safe return again."
"Severus, you cannot meddle in time..."
"And what exactly is she doing with a Time-Turner in the first place? Were you even aware that it is apparently as easy to go back a decade or two as it is an hour or two? Each time the girl has gone back, she miscalculates and goes back two decades instead of two hours. So, until she learns how to control the device, I will have to hide her each time until she can return. And each time it takes longer." Severus stood and paced a few steps. "It's not easy you know, keeping her away from everyone. She cannot be seen. My relationship with my housemates is stronger in my sixth-year; I start to be accepted... and Avery, Mucliber, Thortenson, and Rosier become protective of me. They start fighting the sixth- and seventh-year Gryffindors. Even Hurshiser and Rowe... Don't you remember?" He stopped and turned to face the old wizard. "I managed, each time, to keep her a secret. But if I don't go back and tell myself to, it might not happen."
Dumbledore watched him thoughtfully, but Minerva looked outraged. "You hid a thirteen-year-old girl in your dorms?"
"Don't be ridiculous," Severus snapped. "I used an old..."
"Enough, Severus. Minerva, are you listening to him? He has changed his arguments from probability to that of fact. He did go back, and will again," Dumbledore said and sat down on the chair in front of Minerva's desk.
"But, Albus..."
"No 'buts.' You heard him. He said that he was unable to prevent Miss Granger from being hurt when she'd arrived in the middle of a duel, and then he claimed that he was able to ensure that Miss Granger didn't expose anything or disrupt the events of this timeline, just as if it had already happened. I do not think it was a slip of the tongue. Although, Severus, that claim is, in fact, not entirely true. Likely, you prevented a worse wrong by your actions. But, Minerva, I believe that Severus did in fact go back in time to speak to his younger self." He looked up at Severus. "You said that each time it took longer. Explain?"
Severus sighed. "The first time, the sand in the hourglass took a week to cool and return to normal, the second time it took almost two and a half weeks, the third time it took a month."
"You hid her for a month?" Minerva asked in startled disbelief. "What did you do with her?"
"Yes, Minerva, it took a month. We revised together, she on her schoolwork, me on mine. I fed her, snuck her into the bath when she asked me to, and left the soiled bedding on my bed for the house-elves," he explained. "But she was cooperative, mostly. Thank Merlin, she likes to read."
"Which room did you use?" Dumbledore asked, steepling his hands in front of him. "I don't recall seeing her, so apparently you successfully kept her hidden. Did this by chance have any relation to Mr. Pettigrew being accused of ransacking the Slytherin boys' dorm?"
"It may have," Severus replied evasively about his use of Pettigrew's wand the first time.
"I thought so. Very ingenious of you..." Dumbledore smiled. "So where did you hide her?"
"I used an old classroom to hide her where I used to brew my potions as a student," Severus stated.
"Ah, yes, I know the one. Very clever, my boy." He rose from the chair. "Minerva, give him the Time-Turner. Severus, come with me. There is a storeroom in the dungeons I apparently need to show you. Miss Granger should have a proper bed."
On the way to the dungeons, Dumbledore was eerily silent. That could only mean one of two things: either the old man was upset with him or he was mulling everything over.
"Tell me how you accomplished it, my boy."
Severus smirked. Mulling it over. "That timeline doesn't exist, none of them do. When I go back, when I tell my younger self the facts, what little I can tell him, I change the timeline...again. I can tell you that I saw myself appear and disappear as if I'd Apparated, which we both know is an impossibility. However, since the Time-Turner that Miss Granger is using has the ability to return one to the time in which she'd left...a most convenient feature...I would assume that I did the same. However, I know that is an improbability. It took a week for the Time-Turner to cool enough for Miss Granger to return. So, if I'd waited a week in my house while the device cooled, then used it to see myself, and then adjusted the device to return me to my natural time... Of course, I'm speculating."
"Sounds, feasible, though, to go back in time far enough to allow the Time-Turner to cool and then return," Dumbledore mused over. "Still, little is truly known about these devices, since they are so new an invention. The original Time-Turners could only go back in time, and only by a few hours. When I went to retrieve Miss Granger's Time-Turner, I was intrigued by Cronus Latimer's use of combining Runes and Arithmetic calculations in conjunction with the device. I thought that with Miss Granger's love of the two disciplines, she'd be able to prove the piece's use, and Cronus and I could then compare notes." He looked up at Severus with that damnable look of intrigue in his eyes. "I don't suppose you'd care to indulge two old men in what you know? I'm sure Cronus would pay handsomely for your knowledge."
"No," Severus said flatly.
"Ah, well," Dumbledore sighed. "I'll just have to talk you into it."
Severus picked up the plain, brown leather diary and its older, slightly used twin and stuffed them in his pocket. He'd made entries in the older book with what details he could give himself regarding Hermione's bounces back in time. He wrote a letter to himself, explaining why he'd come back in the first place, Miss Granger's death and her staying with Lily, thus causing a castle wide hunt for her after she'd disappeared, warning himself to take the task of hiding Miss Granger seriously. He hoped that this time the plan would work, but he was counting on his younger self to carry it through. As it was, he'd have to spend a month in his house before he could approach the boy. No matter, I feel like I've done this a number of times.
Severus arrived at Spinner's End and looked around. The place was, just as it had been every time he'd returned home, dusty, musty, and dank. Someday, he'd have to dispose of the house. For now it suited his purposes. He cast a series of cleaning and Dust-Lifter Charms on his books. The Dust Repellant Charm had done well; the dust that had collected fell away easily and vanished. He went upstairs to remove the stasis on his bedroom and freshen up all his bedding and curtains. Once he'd finished, he'd see about stocking up the cupboards in the kitchen and check on how overgrown and wild the back garden had become.
That night, Severus took the chance and dined out. Afterwards, he took a stroll down a beachfront walkway. It was odd, having all the time in the world at his leisure. The next morning, he chose to see the Salisbury Plains and have dinner in Romaldkirk.
Over the next few days, he put his back garden in order. But mostly, Severus took the time to visit places he'd always wanted to see but never had. Unfortunately, once he'd spoken to himself, this timeline would vanish as if it never happened. Still, as he watched the seagulls over the rocky cliffs of Scotland, he felt at ease with himself.
One month to the day, Severus pulled out the Time-Turner and snuck into the castle for his self-made appointment with his younger self.
Severus still had a bit of a limp. Whoever taught Black how to turn someone's feet into crab legs should be killed on the spot, and using the Avada Kedavra would be too kind. Madam Pomfrey had put him right in no time, but the awkward angle had strained his tendons and ligaments. Now he had a week's worth of work to catch up and three potions to brew. At least Slughorn allowed him to make up the potions. Right smart of the berk, considering that it happened in his class right under his nose. Severus had the Burn Paste for Slughorn and the Sprain Emulsion for his ankle simmering in his secret room. They would be done and ready to bottle tonight. One down, two to go.
He pushed open the door, surprised to see the room lit. He cursed himself for not having set his wards on the door. He quickly drew his wand and entered, hoping that no one had messed with his potions. The desk he'd made into a bed for Hermione was back to its original form. His potions simmering away in his cauldrons on the heat resistant pads on the desk just as he'd left them. However, in his chair with his boots up on the desk was the wizard, his older self, as bold as you pleased. "Oh, it's you," Severus snapped. "You're back."
"Apparently," the older wizard said smoothly. "I do hope you're brewing this for sale rather than for Slughorn?"
Severus crossed his arms and regarded the wizard, wondering to what he owed the pleasure of his return visit. "I did as you asked. The girl left and no one saw her."
"Oh, I'm very well aware that you were successful," he said, drawing a fresh stem of dragonwort through his fingers, smoothing the spiky-looking leaves.
"And yet, you are back," Severus said warily, never taking his eyes off the man.
"Slughorn burn his hand again in class?" the older man asked with a slight quirk of his lips. "This is beneath you. It's at best a fourth-year potion, hardly worth your efforts."
Severus smirked at him. "Nah, he wants it for the hospital wing, and I get credit for making it."
His older self laid the stem he'd toyed with on the desk next to Severus' ingredients. "Use a common coffee filter to sieve off the comfrey preparation. It'll refine it, and use the dragonwort right after the comfrey oil. It will strengthen your potion."
"You were reading my book," Severus snarled, his eyes narrowed and his jaw set.
The man laughed. "Of course I did...I wrote the annotations myself, years ago. Check the book yourself, the marker will be exactly where and how you placed it."
Severus crossed the room and picked up his book, opening it to the page he'd marked. The piece of green ribbon lay under the same line in the directions where he'd put it. "I was considering adding the dragonwort, but before the oil, and increasing the aloe."
The wizard smiled and set his feet on the floor. "Each time you added the dragonwort before, the potion curdled. Add it after the oil, and the potion will change to a darker shade, but will be stronger and thicker. As for the aloe, I'd increase the calendula if the user has second or third degree burns, but yes, increase the aloe if it's only a first degree burn," he said assuredly. He pointed a finger at Severus' feet. "By the way, how are the ankles?"
"Both are sore," Severus said, clenching his jaw in annoyance that his older self remembered his humiliation.
The older wizard continued to watch him with a calm, relaxed pose, and then pointed to the other cauldron. "Add crushed pineapple before the witch hazel, and include the onion skin when you dice the onion. I also suggest you use lavender oil with the buckhorn," he suggested.
Severus' head tilted slightly, his brow creased as he considered the suggestion, and then one side of his mouth curled as he scoffed at him. "You're daft. You cannot use that with shredded Menkle skin! The lavender oil would soften the buckhorn and change its property..."
"Exactly. Fine, don't trust me," the man said with an offhanded air.
Severus' sneer disappeared. "So why are you here? I took care of the girl as you told me to," he said, walking to his workspace. The potions were fine. Once he removed the Stasis Charm, he'd finish them and start the Burn Paste over, this time using the dragonwort as his older self suggested.
"She'll be back," he said bluntly, and Severus looked up barely able to keep his mouth from falling open.
"She'll what? I thought...when?"
"Two days," his older self stated.
"You sure like to give a guy enough notice, don't you?" Severus snapped. Damn, again?
"Don't get smart with me," the man snapped back.
Severus slammed his hands down on the desk. "Hey, you're the one asking me to stick my neck out for that little girl," he snapped.
"She's important," the wizard insisted, his dark eyes meeting Severus' gaze.
"I know. That's what you said last time," Severus sneered, pressing his hands on the solid wood. "So I have to babysit her another week?"
"Two," the wizard said, nodding once. "Possibly two and a half."
"What?" Severus exclaimed, leaning forward slightly.
The other wizard crossed his ankle on his knee and rested his hand on his leg. "Each time back, it takes the Time-Turner longer to cool down. She uses the device every day."
"You're kidding me?" Severus said, pushing away from the desk and taking a step back.
"You know very well I'd never kid about something like this," the man said calmly, and Severus knew that it was the truth. "There's more."
"Terrific!" he exclaimed, throwing up a hand and rolling his eyes.
"You'll have to keep a diary..."
"A diary, you're full of it if you think..."
"Don't interrupt me," the wizard snapped.
Severus leaned against the desk where he and Hermione had revised together, crossed his arms, and glared at his older self.
"Yes. You'll have to keep an accounting of when she shows up in your time," the wizard said, a tick flicking in his cheek from agitation, "because, unfortunately, I don't remember the exact date and time of each occurrence. I know approximately when and where... What I was doing, but on one of the bounces back, Lily found her. That mustn't happen, as it proved to be disastrous."
Severus' arms fell to his sides and his eyes widened. "Lily finds her? Wouldn't that be better all around? She is a girl..."
This older self glared at him as if he'd lost his mind. "Yes, Lily found her and took her in. Then Miss Granger vanished, unfortunately, the same day Mary MacDonald and three other Muggle-borns were seriously hurt, and a castle-wide search was conducted for the Death Eater who broke into Hogwarts disguised as a little girl." The older wizard pulled out what looked like a pair of diaries. "This one is for you for to write in, especially noting the times when Hermione arrives, dates and places, any notes that will help yourself find her and hide her before she is seen. The second is the one I filled out with what I remember. It's vague, mostly notes and... If you write in this one, you'll have more to give the younger version of yourself when you come back as I have done in this time loop. If you don't, then you are doing this blind. I cannot keep coming back here."
"It's a girl's diary," he sneered, looking at the soft brown covers and snap enclosures with distaste.
"It's small and brown," the man insisted. "Easy to hide and identical. I bought them at a shop near Harrods. Since they are Muggle, there is no magical residue to make anyone suspect them. You know how to conceal your writing without leaving a magical trace on the pages. Once you have finished the year, put it in a safe place that you'll remember, but where no one will look."
Severus crossed his arms and refused to accept the diaries. "Tell me again, why is the girl entrusted with a Time-Turner if she can't use it properly?"
His older self put them on the desk with a soft thud, clearly agitated. "They are relatively new in my time. They are tricky. Going back in time, the rings have to be aligned correctly and the hourglass turned in conjunction with the rune alignment. Miss Granger is a bright girl, usually responsible, but she's an over achiever and trying to prove herself in our world. She wanted to take nearly every subject that Hogwarts offers at the same time, and her Head of House let her."
"Good lord!" he exclaimed, his arms falling to his side of their own accord.
"From what I remember, when I was your age, I started writing in this book and kept it," he said, picking up the used diary. "You kept it faithfully, but you will need to keep the new one in this timeline so that this older, used book will have already been filled out. I'd found it where you hid it...part of the time loop problem. It's a paradox, but will help. That's why I'm giving you my diary and a new one. After the end of your year, burn the old one, and you'll have the new one to bring back to you. You can copy down whatever I wrote that you think you should know."
"This is confusing," Severus said, placing his hands on the desk and leaning forward with his head bowed.
"Tell me about it," the other man said.
Severus raised his chin to look at him. "And why exactly am I going through all this trouble?"
The older wizard crossed his arms. "Believe me, Miss Granger is needed. You can talk about any subject with her or even brew potions with her. She's very bright. Only under no circumstances is she to be seen or to meet Potter, Black, Lupin, or Lily. You got that?"
"Yeah, I got that," Severus said, feeling like he'd been given a heavy assignment, one that he'd have to repeat each time this girl made her miscalculations and thus was dropped in his lap. "Well, at least she's not a brainless twit."
"You have no idea," his older self scoffed.
Severus looked up, dark eyes meeting identical but slightly lined dark eyes. "Wanna bet?"
~ T. B. .C. ~
Author's Notes:
To clarify some confusion: the Time-Turner in this story is more complicated than the book version. Hermione is testing it out for Mr. Latimer, and Dumbledore is just as curious about the new devise as is its creator.
I also tried to show a shift in the time paradox in the way Severus' wording changed because Dumbledore changed his mind and Severus did go back.
Okay, I'll try to clarify the jumps just in case you got lost. (Heaven forbid! I can't let that happen):
The jump in which Hermione died was the first mishap. (Hermione's 1st double jump) Professor Snape went back to fix years later. (Severus' 1st jump when he spoke to his teenage self TeenSeverus1) So, Hermione's 1st jump is cancelled out. As in didn't happen. So TeenSeverus1 waits for Hermione like he's told and hides her. (This is Hermione's 2nd jump2) But because jump1 is erased, only Professor Snape1 remembers it he told himself about it, TeenSeverus1, that it happened; that's why Professor Snape remembers it later on. But he also told his teenage self about Hermione's 3rd and 4th jumps.
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Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
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Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
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It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
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Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~