Chapter 8
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 8 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I just borrowed them for a while. I promise to put them back when I'm done. Oh, nope, no money either...just for fun.
I want to give a great big thank you hug to EverMystique and DuchessOfArcadia for combing through this to point out my numerous errors and help me make this presentable for reading. You're the best, thank you!
Severus and Mulciber walked to Hogsmeade together. Before he'd left, he'd made sure that Hermione had enough food to hold her until dinner time. Up ahead of them on the road to the village, Black and McDonald were walking arm-in-arm next to Lily, who was holding hands with Potter. Lupin was talking with Vargas and Potter as Pettigrew ambled along behind everyone like a groupie. Severus clenched his teeth and forced himself to look away.
"Grates on you, don't it?" Mulciber asked, frowning at the Gryffindors.
"Nah, she made her choice," Severus sneered.
"Mud like her and her filthy friends. Figures they'd be chummy with those blood-traitors, Black and Potter. You'd think they'd know better than to debase themselves," Mulciber continued as if Severus hadn't spoken. "You can do so much better, mate."
"Books or Zonko's..." Severus started to suggest just before Black pulled on Potter's sleeve and jerked his head in the direction of the joke shop. "Second thought, how about the Quill Shop or Honeydukes?"
"Everyone's meeting up in the Broomsticks at eleven," Mulciber reminded him. "Honeydukes is a must, mate. Might get me a quill first, though...and I need some ink."
In the quill shop, Hurshiser was flirting with the blond Ravenclaw Severus had seen with him in the castle. Hurshiser ran his fingers down her long, blond hair and leaned close. "Pick one and I'll buy it for you," he said suggestively.
"And what would you expect in return, Slytherin?" she teased him back.
He leaned closer to whisper in her ear. "A kiss," he said, winking at Severus, and kissed her.
"Fresh," she admonished him, pushing him away.
"Possibly, but you'd like it," Hurshiser said with a smirk. "If you'd let me."
Severus spotted a very nice, black swan quill he really liked, but frowned at the price. He sighed and selected two black Canadian goose quills instead.
Rowe stepped around a shelf of parchment stock with a Ravenclaw girl following him, holding a ream of medium weight parchment in her arms. "Oi, Severus, mate."
"Hey," Severus grunted in greeting with a jerk of his head.
"This is Brenda," Rowe introduced the smiling girl following him. "Going to the Three Broomsticks at eleven. You comin'?"
Severus shrugged, selecting a pack of parchment that he could afford. "Don't feel like being a gooseberry."
"Don't be like that. Come," Rowe said, picking up a white swan feather quill. "We're all going to be there. It's not dates or anything. Well, some of us have, but not everybody."
Severus knew he meant Mulciber and himself. "I'll think about it," he said as he walked to the counter to pay for his quills and parchment.
Avery and Miss Myers passed by the window, his arm around her waist as she waved to someone she knew.
In Honeydukes, Thortenson was teasing Linnet with an elongated, cream-filled caramel pop, and Avery and Miss Myers were piling treats in a basket. Severus bought his favorites and some flossing mints for Hermione. Just as Severus was leaving, the Gryffindor four entered with their dates. He eased around the candy display of every flavor jawbreakers, butterscotch balls, and fruit juice pops in twelve flavors, angling for the door, hoping to be unnoticed.
Lily squealed as Potter opened a chocolate raspberry pop in front of her face. "James, stop that!"
"Oh, Mint tickers!" McDonald exclaimed, trying to reach for a jar on the top shelf. As Black leaned over her to get the jar down, Severus made his escape.
He heard Mulciber call him, and he turned around. "Oi, where you going?"
"Bookshop," Severus shouted back.
"Thought we was headed to the Broomsticks?" Mulciber asked as he ran up to Severus.
"After," Severus said, walking quickly toward the end of the street. The old bookshop was his favorite retreat. Within minutes, he had a pile of books next to him in one of the aisles.
"Sev, mate, it's almost eleven. Everyone will be waiting on us," Mulciber said, leaning on the bookshelf, holding a thin book in his hand as he tried coaxing him to go.
Severus looked up and smirked, knowing that Mulciber hadn't even glanced at the first page of the book he held. "Nah, go on, mate. I want to sort these out first. Besides, I'm not really thirsty."
"Should've made you wait 'til after drinks to let you come in here," Mulciber frowned and pushed off from the bookshelf. He shoved the book on a shelf. "Okay, I'll tell the guys you'll be by later."
Severus Summoned the book to him, curious to see what Mulciber had picked up. It was an old, used book on wandless magic. Severus set it on his pile. Half an hour later, he stood. He had seven books, but only had enough to buy some of them. He sorted them twice before deciding to buy four books: one on advanced potions, another about concealment charms, one that had some interesting enchantment potions that bordered on Dark Arts, and the one on wandless magic.
He entered the street, only to see the Gryffindor group mingling near the Three Broomsticks. Severus slipped into the shadows, watching them for a while, glancing occasionally at the other shops, and then looked up at the clear blue sky. There wasn't anywhere in Hogsmeade he wanted to go, but he didn't want to be cooped up in the castle all afternoon either. He turned and slipped around the back of the shops, headed for the castle anyway.
On his way, he thought about Hermione. She was fun to be around. Sure she was young, but she was smart and funny, excited easily, and made him smile. She was spunky and seemed to understand his snarky humor. It was a shame he couldn't sneak her out and spend some time sitting by the lake or take her on a hike. A hike might not be bad...we wouldn't see anyone or be seen. He smiled as he worked out a plan. He broke into a run and hurried to the old classroom. "Come with me," he said as he burst through the door.
He had startled her. She'd jumped as she whirled around with her wand aimed at his chest. She dropped her hand, then put the wand away in the pocket of Avery's robe. "Come where?" she asked, still breathing heavily.
"We're getting out of here for a bit," he said, walking up to her with a mischievous smirk.
"I'm not supposed to leave the room," she said as she backed away from him and drew her wand again. "Who are you, and where is Severus Snape?"
"I'll Disillusion you and use the Notice-Me-Not," he said with a grin, grabbing her wrist and casting the charms. "C'mon, it'll be fine."
He kept hold of her wrist as he led her, not caring if it looked odd. He refused to get separated and wanted to know exactly where she was. He used a door at the end of the first floor corridor that was usually locked before dusk and led her to the Quidditch pitch, going around the outside of the pitch to a trail he liked that few people knew about. Hermione stayed quiet as she followed him, but her footsteps could be heard clearly in the dirt and gravel of the trail. When they were far enough not to be noticed from the pitch, he removed the Disillusionment Charm.
"Are you sure this is safe?" she asked.
He laughed at her concern. "The hard part will be getting back before dusk without you being seen. But I thought you'd like some air, and we can collect some plants along the way."
She smiled and bit her lip, her eyes shining with happiness. They walked along the trail, jumping and climbing over rocks. He held her hand as they walked along a fallen tree over a rockslide. At one point, they had to climb a short way up a rock face. Hermione kept up with him, only needing a little coaching on the climb. Once at the top, she turned and inhaled in amazement at the view. "Oh, this is so beautiful!"
"I hoped you'd like it. I come up here sometimes to get away," he said, watching her obvious delight with the view of the vale Hogwarts sat in. "You can see the entire lake from up here, the castle, and there's Hogsmeade." He had to admit, the view of the castle was breathtaking.
"I've never seen the castle from this vantage point before," she said in awe.
"C'mon, we go this way," he said, leading her through two bushes that had overgrown and blocked the trail a bit. The trail followed the ridge around Hogsmeade, dropped down, then made a steep climb, and continued on a gradual decline. Severus stopped her in her tracks before she scared off a black scat-rat, a magical crossbreed of a large squirrel with a cat's head and retractable claws.
Hermione squatted down next to him, her thigh rubbing against his. They waited until the animal scurried away. "Will we see more animals?" she asked softly.
He pulled an overhanging branch back to let her pass first. "If we're quiet enough, yeah. This part of the trail comes out near the edge of the forest and through a meadow. I've seen unicorns there."
They saw lizards and a few rabbits as they made their way down the trail. When they reached the meadow, Severus held his finger to his mouth. "The unicorns will let you pass unchallenged. Me...if they see me, the stallion will charge, but the mares just run away. Be really quiet. If they sense us, walk in front of me and act protective, but don't draw your wand."
Hermione nodded, understanding. As they stepped from the trees, Severus stood really still. The bushes and grass were still tall enough to conceal them somewhat. He motioned for her to follow the trail that meandered through the taller grasses. Halfway around the meadow, Hermione stopped. Two unicorns were grazing in the sunshine, the sunlight making their coats shine as brightly as the sun reflected on the water near them. She sighed in awed wonder. Severus gave her a nudge and urged her quietly to keep going. When they reached where the trail turned back through the brush, Hermione turned to see the unicorns one last time, but they were gone. "I saw a dead one once, my first year. But I've never seen one alive. They are so magnificent...I never realized."
He looked at her, his brow creased and his head tilted slightly. "What killed it?"
"I don't want to explain," she said and walked on.
He shrugged and caught up, once again leading the way. "We're going to come out of the forest down by the Shrieking Shack. I'll have to Disillusion you then. Try to stay close to me, okay? I hope we don't run into anyone; if we do, go straight to the castle, but don't bump into anybody. If you follow the trees, you'll be safer than if you stick to the path."
Severus cast a few other spells, including a Silence Charm on her trainers, and then Disillusioned her as soon as the Shack came into view. "Stick with me," he said and took off for the castle. They made it to the gates before there was a problem.
"Oi, Severus, where'd you get off to?" Avery asked as he came walking up to him, followed by Rosier, Thortenson, and their girls.
Severus sighed and told them he'd been on a hike to collect potion ingredients.
The guys laughed, and Avery patted him on the back. "You were missed, mate. Mulciber even went back early to work on his essay, can you believe it?"
Severus made many sly furtive glances about as they walked to the castle, but he couldn't detect Hermione. He swore to himself that he was getting too good at the Disillusionment Charm for his own good. He was pulled along the throng of his friends all the way to the common room, still slyly trying to figure out where she was. They walked to the seats by the fire, and Avery indicated for him to sit next to him.
Severus sighed and plopped down in the chair. "I need to shower, guys," he grumbled. He looked around. Three first-years were revising at one table, a fourth-year was reading by the magical windows, and two second-years were playing wizarding chess.
"You're not that smelly," Avery said the same time Thortenson snorted, "What's keeping you, then?"
Severus felt a small hand touch his shoulder. "Okay, well this is fun, but I'm off," he said, getting to his feet. Avery jumped up too, telling Miss Myers to wait for him as Severus whispered, "Stay close but don't move anything."
Avery gave him an odd look as he headed for their dorm room, telling him about some drunk witch who had been singing in the Three Broomsticks. Severus felt someone bump him and was relieved that apparently Hermione was sticking close to him. Avery walked on his other side, stepping ahead of him between two tables. Severus maneuvered around a chair, getting behind Hermione, and he pushed her in the direction of the dorms, hoping no one saw his hands. Once in the room, he lost her again.
"Severus, you okay?" Avery asked.
"Yeah," Severus stated. "Stay here," he whispered, getting no response back. He hurriedly gathered his stuff and an extra towel. "Ya comin'?" he mumbled softly to the empty space in case Avery thought he was talking to him and exited the room.
"'Course. I'm not hanging around in here," Avery replied, following him out. "What's gotten into you?"
"Nothing," Severus replied, heading for the showers. He felt her hand again when he stopped in the doorway. Sighing, he led her to the last stall and sat on the bench. "You might as well get cleaned up. It seems like most of the house are out somewhere, outside, or still in Hogsmeade, I suppose. My friends will stay in the common room for a while, comparing their shopping finds and snogging their girlfriends."
"Okay," he heard her say. There was a small splat sound as she walked though a bit of water on the floor followed by a few footprints. He felt her robe land on the bench next to him. The sounds of her trainers being dropped next, preceded by the soap, flannel, towel, and shampoo floating away. He took the charm off the robes and shoes and cast a cleaning charm on them as the water in the last stall turned on.
"It's weird trying to wash yourself Disillusioned," he heard her say.
"Do you need help?" he asked, crossing his arms as he leaned against the wall and closed his eyes.
"No," she answered back, and he could see her smirk in his mind's eye. At least this was easier, hearing her wash and not having to see glimpses of her through the slit in the curtain.
Suddenly the door opened and in walked Avery. "What's up, mate?" He smirked at Severus and started to strip. "If you want to get clean you have to get under the water, not stare at it."
"I was just thinking," he said, cursing every deity he knew for his bad luck.
"You can think and shower at the same time," Avery said as he turned on the water. "Severus, mate, is anything wrong?"
"No, nothing," Severus said with a shrug, turning on the tap next to Hermione's stall.
"Oi, what's with that one?" Avery asked, pointing at the stall Hermione was in.
Severus shrugged as he undressed quickly. "Dunno, it was running when I got here. I think that Myrtle-ghost is in the pipe."
"Damn, I hate it when she tries to peek," Avery said as he rinsed his hair out. "So, how was the hike? Did you get anything in the shops before you went?"
"Bought some candy and a book I think might help me solve a problem I'm having," he said as he reached through the curtain dividing his stall from Hermione's and grabbed the soap.
"You and your books," Avery said with a chuckle. "So, you think Hurshiser and Rowe will score?"
This was not a conversation he wanted Hermione to overhear. "Isn't this a first date?" Severus asked, hanging his head, letting the water soak his hair. He noticed a bottle of conditioner someone left on the floor of his shower stall and kicked it over to her.
"So," Avery said as if it was a sure thing.
"No," Severus said. "The girls didn't look like they were as gullible as the ones they usually go after."
Avery peeked around the curtain. "Ten says yes," he said with a cocky grin. "Five each."
"I don't have ten," Severus said with a grimace.
"I'll spot you," Avery said, letting the curtain fall back into place.
Severus reached through the curtain that separated his stall from Hermione's and snatched the shampoo.
"Well, I'm done. See you in the common room?" Avery said, turning off the water.
"Yeah," Severus said, rinsing the shampoo from his hair. He couldn't believe he was washing twice in one week. The things I do for this girl!
Avery walked over and stood behind him. "You're going to be brewing all night again, aren't you?"
Severus turned and nodded, unabashedly giving him an eyeful, knowing it made Avery uncomfortable. "For a while; it's simmering, and I need to bottle it up."
Avery snorted and turned away. "Fine, see you later."
Severus rinsed his hair and turned off the water. He listened for a while as he wrapped a towel around his waist. "Sorry about that. Are you done?"
"I've been done for a while, but I was afraid to move," he heard her say.
"Leave the water on," he stepped from the curtains and walked to the benches. "I tried to freshen up the robe," he said as he held it out to where her voice had come from. "Here?"
The curtain moved, and a hand took the robe. It fluttered and floated as she put it on. Severus had just changed into his robe when Avery walked back in the showers. "Forgot my soap."
Severus glanced up and realized Hermione had ducked into his shower stall. "Don't tell me you're getting forgetful at your age," he sneered teasingly, slipping on his trainers. He Disillusioned Hermione's robe again when Avery's back was turned, barely tucking his wand away when his friend turned around.
"You comin'?" Avery asked at the open doorway.
Severus gathered his things, walked to the door, and pulled it open even further as he motioned for Avery to go first. He felt Hermione brush past him and smelled his shampoo on the air before he followed her out. He turned for the exit, hoping to get her out of the common room unnoticed.
"Aren't you going to put your wet stuff away?"
Severus sighed. "Yeah, after I check my potion," he said flatly.
Avery scowled. "You've been acting kinda strange lately," he grumbled. "What's gotten into you?"
Severus turned and faced him. "How so?"
"You're just... off lately. Are you mad about something? Did Potter or Black do anything in town?" he asked. "You can't be still mooning over that Mudblood, are you?"
"Bugger off! This has nothing to do with Lily," Severus snapped, emphasizing her name, and turned to leave. He hoped that Hermione was following him or was somewhere close. He couldn't see her, of course, but he couldn't detect the shimmer of distortion that would announce her presence either.
A couple of fourth-year girls came into the common room, one of them dropping something that fell in the corridor. Her friends held the door open as she turned around to pick it up. He passed through the door, thanking the fourth-year as he did. He walked toward the classroom, wondering if Hermione was anywhere nearby.
"Hermione?" he whispered as loudly as he dared when the girls closed the door. He walked casually back to the door and tried whispering her name again. Nothing. He turned around, glaring both ways down the corridor, but he couldn't detect anything. What if she's still stuck in the common room? "Hermione?" he asked a bit louder.
A hand touched his shoulder. "I'm right here," she whispered.
He whirled around and grabbed it, pulling her with him to the classroom. He removed the charms once they were inside. "Damn, that was too close! What a mess."
Her eyes were down cast with embarrassment. "Sorry about that. I was waiting by the door for you when I saw the girls coming in and slipped out when I saw her drop her book."
"No, it's fine," he said, feeling a wave of relief. "Next time, we'll have to time your shower better, that's all."
"Actually, all considered, I think our timing was pretty good. Like a comedy of errors that worked out right," she said, laughing. "I never thought I'd see so much of the Slytherin common room and dorms, though."
He ran his hands over his face and cupped his hands behind his head. "One that I sincerely hope doesn't have a repeat performance." He dropped his arms as he looked at her. "You okay? Are you sore or anything?"
"No, I'm fine. Sleepy though," she admitted. "Severus, what's the deal with you and Ha...er, Potter and Black?"
He looked at the wall and sighed. "They are bullies, Hermione. They've picked on me since my first year." He turned to look at her. "I really don't want to talk about them."
"Sure," she said, turning to look at the bed and back at him. "Will you stay a while or do you have to go?"
"I thought you were tired?" he asked, crossing his arms.
She smiled as she walked over and pulled a deck of cards from her bag. "I am...was, but I thought maybe you'd like to play a game of cards."
He smirked at her. "Poker or Go-fish," he teased her.
"Do you know how to play Gin?" she asked as she sat on her bed and began to shuffle the cards.
"Yeah, I do, actually," he said as he shook his head, laughing at her. He sat at the foot of the bed facing her as she dealt the cards.
The next day, Severus watched as Hermione slipped the chain of the Time-Turner around her neck and picked up her bag. "I had a good time," she said as if she were merely leaving from a visit.
"Well, you were pretty tough to take," he said with a smirk, then sighed as he looked at the floor. He really didn't want her to go. "I had a good time, too. You'd better go." He could see her indecision on her face, and she shifted her weight from one foot to the other. She wanted to hug him, he was certain of it, but didn't know how he felt about that. Lily used to hug him whenever she'd leave...or used to when they had been close. He looked at Hermione and wondered if it would be the same, holding her. The silence between them seemed to stretch on for an eternity.
He had a hard time looking her in the eye all of a sudden. She looked sad, as if she were losing a friend. It was how he felt, but he wasn't going to admit it to her. Damn. Just go already, he thought, not wanting to stand here and prolong the inevitable.
She stepped forward and touched his arm, and it was all he could do not to jerk away from her. She wasn't making this easy for him.
"Thank you for everything," she said softly and moved closer.
"Yeah, well, you're welcome," he said, feeling like a wet prat. What would a hug hurt? She lowered her head and looked back up at him as she shifted her weight again. He swallowed as she made a tentative move toward him and reached out. His arms seemed to hang there as hers wrapped around him. Her soft, curly hair tickled his nose. He hugged her back, awkwardly, closing his eyes as he smelled his shampoo in her hair. He thought it would've felt awkward, hugging her, but now that he was holding her, he didn't want to let go. She turned her head and kissed his cheek. Severus pulled away and stared at the floor. "It's time. You have to go back, Hermione."
Her face fell as soon as he'd said the words. She nodded and moved away. "Bye, Severus."
"Good bye, Hermione," he said, knowing she'd be back, just not when. He'd have to check the diary to find out.
She checked the alignment and activated the device.
Severus had no idea how long he stood there, rooted to the floor, staring at the space she'd disappeared from. He turned slowly and looked at the pile of clothes and linen. Maybe he'd ask that house-elf to clean the room after all. Reluctantly, he headed for his dorm room, hoping that his dorm mates were asleep.
~ T. B. .C. ~
Author's Notes:
Gooseberry according to The Best of British: The American's guide to speaking British, a gooseberry is to be the third person on a date or 'a third wheel' in American slang. The site is: http://www.effingpot.com/people.shtml
The Latin used in this chapter is:
Excussum [ to shake out, to search]
Inveni [to come upon, find, discover, to show oneself]
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Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~