Chapter 20
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 20 of 54
beaweasley2Variety Challenge first runner up. Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
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Potter survived the first task, thanks to Miss Granger and I, Severus scoffed as he removed his robe. Rumor has it that even Moody had felt the need to give the boy a bit of advice, he sneered, unamused, as he pulled out a clean robe. His morning class had ended with Mr. Walters coating half the students, and himself, in bright yellow goo. Quite a feat for a novice brewing a nonvolatile potion, with relatively benign ingredients, that was supposed to be blue.
However, considering that the term would officially end after Double Potions with the fourth-year Gryffindors and Slytherins this afternoon, he was in relatively mild temper.
Today he'd show the class the Itch-Relief Salve, which he knew that only Hermione would be able to brew with any efficacy. That is if she remembered his trick of pressing the secretions from the sopophorous beans rather than slicing them.
He dressed carefully, making sure his hair lay flat, and proceeded to the Great Hall. Several students were milling around, loitering in clusters along the walls of the Entrance Hall, the girls hoping to catch some bloke's eye and be asked to go to the Ball, while the guys congregated in small groups, trying not to appear as if they were talking about the girls. It was a futile game to be played.
Severus knew that only those brave enough to ask a girl surrounded by her friends would get partners. He was so glad he didn't have to partake in such foolery. Severus scowled at the students, making all the Hogwarts and Beauxbatons students scuttle into the Hall.
He noticed that Viktor Krum was watching Potter, Weasley, and Miss Granger cross the Entrance Hall as they headed to lunch with a predatory look. Severus motioned for the students still lingering on the stairs to hurry along as he casually observed the famous Quidditch player.
Krum's lips stretched into a smile when Miss Granger nodded to him in passing, then scowled as several girls approached him, giggling like besotted idiots. Krum quickly followed along behind the trio, his eyes locked on the back of Miss Granger's head in a manner that made Severus' scowl darken.
All through lunch Severus kept an eye on Krum, making note of his preoccupation with Miss Granger.
"He's such an excellent student," Karkaroff said as he set down his cup.
"I'm sure he is," Severus replied nonchalantly.
"He's taken an interest in one of your students, I think. A Miss Granger, Harry Potter's friend," Karkaroff stated.
Severus turned to glare at him. "I doubt she'd be interested in him," he stated, his eyes narrowing. What is Karkaroff up to now?
"Well, the girl has said yes. In fact, he's even sent her a gift. A dictionary, I think. Surprising she'd need a dictionary if she's supposedly your brightest student," Karkaroff said dismissively.
Severus' mind was distracted as he observed Viktor Krum and Miss Granger, trying to see what she saw in him besides the obvious fame, while Karkaroff extolled Krum's achievements, both academically and professionally. He was round-shouldered, although that could be just from his posture as he bent over his plate to ignore the Slytherin girls sitting next to him. When he did look up, Krum's hooked nose, thin lips, thick eyebrows, and hunched posture made him look surly. Hardly an impressive countenance. Krum asked Hermione and she said yes. So, she likes the rich and famous after all. Figures.
He watched Hermione as she ate, talking with the two imbeciles she called friends. She's too young to be infatuated with boys. Her bushy hair was pulled back by a ribbon, and her bag, laden with books, sat under her seat, but she was still the same little girl he knew.
"... you've never seen a more deft wizard," Karkaroff stated, drawing his attention away from Miss Granger.
Severus turned to look at Viktor Krum again. "I'm sure he is," he stated. Severus noted that Krum, his scowl growing darker each time Miss Granger laughed at one of her friends, was also watching Miss Granger.
Ludo Bagman leaned toward Karkaroff. "I don't think I've ever seen anyone fly like him...they'll write books on the stunts he's pulled. Practically reinvented the Wronski Feint and the Llewellyn Dive!"
Severus tuned out the two wizards as he ate, his gaze flicking between Miss Granger and Krum discreetly. While Miss Granger seemed oblivious to Krum's scrutiny, the girls at the Slytherin table were not. Soon even their attention was diverted elsewhere.
Severus was stationed in the Entrance Hall to make sure that only the eligible students were entering the Great Hall. He stood inconspicuously in the corner with the doors and marble stairs in full view. He'd already memorized the list of Hogwarts third-years that had managed to procure partners for the Yule Ball. It was no surprise that Miss Weasley's name had appeared on the list, with her penchant for older wizards.
He watched amused as Mr. Weasley, in rumpled, antique dress robes, loped down the stairs with Mr. Potter and approached the Patil twins. Both boys looked uncomfortable in their formal attire. Hardly surprising, he mused when a vision in periwinkle blue caught his attention.
Miss Granger descended the stairs with as much poise and grace as any pure-blood debutant, and a smile so radiant it took his breath away. She disappeared in the crowd for a moment, but he saw glimpses of her as she walked across the Hall for the oak doors, stopping to smile and wave in his direction.
"She's lovely, isn't she?" Minerva asked as she approached him.
"She's a child," he said dismissively to hide his smirk at the ring of thistles around the brim of her hat and turned to watch the others coming into the Hall.
Minerva chuckled softly. "Don't look so sour, Severus. It's a party," she murmured, laughing at his darkened glare. "You look nice. Although, it would've been nice to see you in a color other than black. Albus wanted us to all look our festive best."
He turned to face her fully. "I'll have you know that my waistcoat and cravat are green," he said coolly. His Slytherin charges entered the Entrance Hall. Malfoy and Parkinson both nodded in greeting as they passed into the Great Hall to find their seats.
But Minerva had started laughing at his statement. "Oh, Severus, I never implied... oh, dear... that you should wear..." She stopped laughing and wiped away a tear. "It's so dark, it might as well be black."
He scowled at her and turned to look at the students.
"Well it's time to collect the champions and their partners."
"Indeed," he said, not bothering to look at her, knowing she was still smiling humorously as the huge oak doors opened and the Durmstrang students filed in, several breaking ranks to greet some of the students that lingered in the Entrance Hall. He exhaled sharply when he saw Miss Granger walking on the arm of Viktor Krum, smiling as if she was already having the time of her life.
"Good, there they are," Minerva said, pointing demurely and turned back to Severus. "I shall see you inside."
He nodded curtly as she moved away from him.
"Champions, over here please," Minerva called out, and Severus watched Krum lead Miss Granger over to queue for their big entrance.
Severus' seat assignment had him seated at the end with Ludo Bagman and Karkaroff and in direct view of Miss Granger, Mr. Krum, Mr. Potter and Miss Patil. All through dinner, Karkaroff babbled on about Mr. Krum's intelligence, bravery, magical skills, and his lucrative career. Severus could hardly enjoy his prime rib.
As soon as the plates vanished, the music started. Severus slipped from his seat and moved to an inconspicuous spot on the side of the room. He crossed his arms as he watched Miss Granger dancing with Mr. Krum, appearing to have a wonderful time. At least the boy was keeping a respectable distance in proper form during the slow dances. Finally unable to watch her dance any longer, he moved along the wall to the refreshments table to make sure no one spiked the punch.
Not long after the Weird Sisters had started to play their more popular music, Severus saw Miss Granger having a heated argument with Mr. Weasley. He smirked in satisfaction as she stormed off, leaving a befuddled Mr. Krum talking to an agitated Mr. Weasley and a bemused Mr. Potter.
Severus decided to ignore the boys and try and find Miss Granger, casually walking across the room in the direction she'd flown to. Unfortunately, Mr. Krum had more success than he did in finding her.
Miss Granger was sitting on a bench, sliding the edge of a ruffle between her fingers. She looked up at Mr. Krum with a weak smile when he sat down next to her. "Vos your friend, er, makes you unhappy?"
She nodded and accepted the butterbeer he handed her. "He's being a royal prat." Mr. Krum titled his head and she sighed. "I don't really want to talk about Ronald."
Severus drew back, deeper into the shadows and watched them. In this light, and with the way Mr. Krum was leaning toward Miss Granger, Severus was shocked by the apparent likeness between himself and Krum in basic appearance. Minus the foot deformity and posture...we are similar in build, same hair... hooked nose, and narrow face...
He sneered to himself as he looked at Miss Granger smiling at Krum, and remembered how she'd smiled at him that way when she stayed with him as a teen. Every time she'd gotten a spell right or when I'd teased her, she smiled at me like that... Miss Granger's laughter floated back to him. It's not the same as when I was young, he scoffed, watching her get a dreamy sort of look on her face. It reminded him of the time he had read to her on her bed in his lab, and he turned away. He's still not good enough for her. He's just a dumb jock!
He moved through the shadows in the grotto, startling young couples and deducting house points. I couldn't have had her then; she didn't belong in my time. And I certainly can't entertain any thoughts of her now.
He spied Hagrid sitting next to Madame Maxime and cringed. He turned, taking another path, and bumped into Karkaroff. "Not now," he hissed, trying to evade another dialogue on Viktor Krum's attributes.
"But the Mark, Severus, have you noticed? How can you not. He's back, returning... You have to have noticed,"* Karkaroff rambled in a harsh whisper as he followed him.
"Of course I have," Severus stated offhandedly in a soft angry hiss, angry that he was risking everything to discuss their Marks here, in the Grotto, where anyone might overhear them. "I just don't see what there is to fuss about, Igor."*
"Severus you cannot pretend this isn't happening,"* Karkaroff persisted, thankfully keeping his voice down but looking around as if expecting the Dark Lord to materialize out of the shadows. "It's been getting clearer and clearer for months."* He leaned closer, and Severus cringed at the smell of Firewhiskey on his breath. "I am becoming seriously concerned."*
Severus took a step back from the wizard in disgust, but Karkaroff matched his retreat persistently. "I can't deny it..."*
Severus brushed him off. "Then flee," he said curtly. "Flee...and I'll make your excuses. I, however, am remaining at Hogwarts."* He turned and strode away, startling Miss Fawcett and Mr. Stebbins when he blasted the rose bushes near them. He covered his momentary surprise by deducting house points and giving them both detentions.
He spotted Mr. Weasley and Mr. Potter and snarled at them to move on after Mr. Weasley's lame excuse that they were 'walking,' hoping those two meddlesome brats hadn't overheard Karkaroff's fears. Karkaroff and his damn cowardice. Of course I've noticed that my Mark is getting darker! I'm not blind and it itches, irritatingly so. Severus blasted the roses off several more bushes, but neither the shocked exclamations of the startled couples he exposed, nor the deducting of more house points, nor the doling out of detentions lessened his growing temper.
He turned on the path to return to the Great Hall and spotted Miss Granger saying good night to Krum. For a moment he was thrown back in time. She had the same shy tilt of her head, the same wistful expression that she had given him eighteen years ago when she'd had to say goodbye to him. Severus felt like his feet had become mired in mud as he stood and watched, unable to turn away or keep from staring at her. She looked up at Krum, who was leaning toward her much too intimately, and Miss Granger smiled. Krum lifted her hand to his lips and kissed her knuckles, politely enough.
"Good night," Miss Granger said, still holding his hand. "I had a good time."
"I did as vell," he replied and leaned closer, hesitated for a second, then kissed her cheek. Miss Granger turned her face, returning his affection with a quick kiss to his cheek.
Severus turned back to the Hall. Well if he's her choice, I see no reason to be bothered with her, he thought with a dark scowl, giving her up as a lost cause.
The first month and a half of term hadn't been a very good one for Hermione. Rita's article after the Yule Ball had outed Hagrid as being a half-giant, and truthfully anyone who saw the man could have no doubt that he was, except that Hagrid was the kindest, gentlest, most caring bloke Hermione had ever known. He'd accepted her as a friend as soon as they'd been introduced. When Harry and Ron had abandoned her over a lousy broom, Hagrid still treated her kindly.
Sure she'd enjoyed Professor Grubbly-Plank's lessons better, much better, but Hermione's friendship with Hagrid would mean an undying loyalty to him, even if she had to deal with frightful and dangerous creatures. Besides, with Hagrid around, the risks were minimal. Mostly.
But Rita Skeeter was a real scandal-mongering sensationalist, who didn't care whom she slandered as long as her unabashed, self-promotional tripe was eye-catching and attracted readers. In Hermione's opinion, it was nothing but nasty gossip. At least the Headmaster had convinced Hagrid to return to work. But she was tired of the Blast-Ended Skrewts and rather wished they'd burn, sting, or suck each other to death and be done with it.
Then there was Ludo Bagman. Hermione didn't know what to make of the man. He was always popping up, frequently followed by goblins or avoiding Fred and George, and his interest in Harry made her suspicious. He was in charge of the tournament, and according to Harry, he'd been offering to help him cheat.
Now, however, Hermione was getting desperate. This was the second time that the library was not helping her find an answer to a problem or solve a question: how to help Harry breathe underwater. She put Physical Shapeshifting Through Transformation back on the shelf and pulled down the next six books. She sat down at the table next to Harry and began to speed-read through the first book. Most of the spells were N.E.W.T level and would be impossible to teach Harry in only a few hours. That and she wasn't about to risk depleting his magic this close to the second task. At this rate I'll have read the entire Charms and Transfiguration section by the end of the month! Or at least this tournament, she thought with a sigh as she set the book aside and took the next one.
"Find anything?" he asked hopefully.
She shook her head as she turned the page. "Most of this shelf seems to be N.E.W.T. level. I don't think I could do them yet, let alone teach you how to in..." She looked up at the clock and sighed again. "Only two hours until curfew..." Harry looked crestfallen so she reached out to give his arm a reassuring squeeze. "I haven't given up on you. We'll find something, Harry."
She wished that she could've run some of her ideas off Professor Snape, but he had been ignoring her, except in class when he'd once again been his snarky, demeaning, and derogatory self. Hermione had tried desperately to appease him, but he wouldn't even look at her and had ordered her to leave if she'd lingered at all after class. She piled up her books and headed to the shelves to exchange them.
At nine-thirty Hermione was following Professors Dumbledore, Snape, and McGonagall, along with Ron, Cho, and a French girl, who looked like she could be Fleur Delacour's sister, to a small house magically erected on the lakeshore. Hermione looked at the shack and then at her Professors with a rising sense of anxiety. "When do we, er, have to..."
"At dawn, Miss Granger," Professor Snape said smoothly. "You'll be placed in a state of stasis for the duration of the task."
She stopped dead in her tracks. "An hour... under water... How?"
Professor Snape stopped and stared at her. "Three," he replied, quirking an eyebrow at her as she gaped at him open-mouthed. "You will be given a potion that will allow you to rest comfortably as your body is well oxygenated for the procedure. In the morning you will be given potions and placed in a state of hypothermic hibernating stasis."
"The temperature of the water will induce hypothermia, but..." She looked down at the lakeshore where Madam Maxime was reassuring the small French girl and Dumbledore was conversing with Ron. She assumed that Cho was already in the shack, being put to sleep. Somehow, the explanation just didn't seem plausible to her. "But hibernation...it's only sleeping...breathing! I'll drown!"
"No, you will not," he said coolly, then stepped closer to her. "Don't you trust me, Hermione?"
"Of course I do," she replied automatically and looked up at him. There was something in his expression, something angry yet sad. "I...you made the potions?"
"I am the one who devised the manner in which you will be placed in this state of magical stasis," he stated, his eyes narrowing for a brief moment as he watched her face.
"Then I trust you," she replied, meeting his gaze and trying to relax her nerves. He won't hurt me. He won't let them kill me. "I'm just...no one said anything about how we were going to be doing this."
He raised his arm toward the shack. "Shall we continue?"
Hermione was directed to a cot between Cho and Ron. "Do I undress?" she asked.
Madam Pomfrey looked up from Ron's bed. "No dear, only remove your shoes."
Professor Snape covered her with a blanket and picked up a phial from the small bedside table. "Drink," he said softly.
Hermione complied without reservation, looking up at him with total trust as she swallowed the potion. There was an immediate warm sensation from her head to her toes, and she closed her eyes to enjoy the feeling.
She heard him moving around, and knew that he was in the room, working on his potions. The stone walls of the dungeon classroom were chilly, but the covers were warm and plush. She could hear the soft thuds of his boots as he moved about, obviously trying to be quiet and not wake her.
"Miss Granger," Severus said softly, nudging her shoulder.
She wanted to roll over and curl up next to him, feel his arms around her like he'd done last night when she'd fallen asleep next to him.
"Hermione," he said her name in that melodic voice of his. "Hermione, wake up."
She forced her eyes open, squinting at the bright light from the candle by her bed. Severus was looking down at her, a slight crease between his brows that told her he was worried about something.
"Drink this," he urged her, tipping a glass to her lips.
It was a strong tea, and she could taste the orange, sweet cinnamon, chicory, peppermint, anise, ginger, and rosehips...
"Stop analyzing and drink it," he said, sounding slightly annoyed. "You'll need the concentrated nutrients."
"This isn't the potion that will make me hibernate?" she asked against the lip of the glass.
He smirked at her. "No, but a necessary one."
Hermione tried to raise her hand to hold the glass, but her arms felt weighted down and impossibly swollen and huge.
Professor Snape carefully wiped her lip with his thumb. "Stop trying to fight it, Hermione. Drink."
She swallowed obediently and he smiled slightly. "That's my little Gryffindor. Now this one." He poured a bit of a minty, menthol-tasting potion in her mouth that made her lips and tongue go numb. He was watching her eyes intently between each carefully measured mouthful. He wiped her puffy-feeling lip, and tipped her head up to finish the last of the potion.
Strong chamomile and orange oils and hibiscus and ginger flowers filled her nose, and Hermione wanted to sneeze.
"Relax, Hermione, give in to the potions," he said smoothly as everything faded around her except his voice.
Severus watched Hermione's face become slack and levitated her body as Filius turned the cots and shack back into pebbles. Beside him, Minerva, Pomona, and Madam Maxime were likewise tending to the other victims as Poppy did a quick diagnostic check on each of them and added her delayed revival charm. Poppy nodded to him as the light of her charm infused into Hermione's body.
He quickly and carefully floated Hermione to the lake and to the Mermaids waiting to take the victims. Severus was worried that they were taking too long. Hermione...the victims...had to be completely submerged before the potions took full affect.
He looked up at the castle, seeing the library in his mind's eye. He knew that the bloody boy hadn't figured out the clue on the egg. Severus himself had searched the library for weeks to find a way for Hermione to survive being underwater for three to four hours.
He'd known what the challenge was since the first day of term; he'd created the potion that would put the victims into a suspended state until the victims broke the surface of the lake and the revival charm made them take their first breath. It was a very complicated potion, a Dark Arts combination actually, that called for mixing asphodel in an infusion of wormwood with powdered moonstone, syrup of hellebore and Death Adder venom. Three of those ingredients didn't react well to the venom. Effectively he had mixed the Draught of Peace and the Draught of Living Death with Death Adder venom in a concentrated gillyweed secretion base. Even the sopophorous beans reacted strongly with the venom, and their combination was potentially deadly, especially to females due to their higher estrogen levels.
The first potion that they had given the victims to increase the oxygen in the blood worked well with the Bubble-Head Charm for a short period of time. He had experimented with the potion for the Order members to fight the Inferi the Dark Lord had placed in rivers and lakes in the seventies. But while it didn't prevent drowning, it did increase the amount of oxygen in the blood and brain.
He was reluctant to leave the lake for breakfast, opting to remain on the lakeshore. The soft ripples of the surface, eerily black did little to soothe him as it had on his walks in the past. The waters were clear along the shallows, but he couldn't see into the depths. He stood on the dock and waited, keeping his concerns concealed behind his expression of indifference. He almost felt relief when Hagrid appeared with the school boats and the students erupted from the castle as the doors opened.
Severus turned as the students and teachers piled into the boats and sailed over to the stands. He stayed close to Poppy and joined the officials on the lakeshore. Unfortunately, Karkaroff was also sticking close, rather than taking his seat with his students.
Minerva was standing next to Dumbledore and indicated for him follow her to the side. Severus followed, ignoring Minerva's glare. "He got the message," Minerva whispered.
"In time?" Dumbledore asked, turning to look at the castle.
Minerva shrugged. "I suppose so, Albus. Pomona said that Mr. Longbottom has the book, Magical Water Plants of the Mediterranean, and I was in the staff room when Alastor insisted on discussing the task and mentioned that Mr. Potter should use gillyweed while that house-elf in the soccer shorts and maroon sweater...Dobby, I think his name is...was cleaning. I don't like helping Mr. Potter cheat, but I do know he had fallen asleep in the library."
Dumbledore turned back to Minerva and Severus. "Ah, good. Well then, shall we find our seats?" He clamped a hand on Severus' shoulder. "I wanted to let you know that Kingsley said that the Oxygenating Potion is working famously in the trials."
Minerva gave them a quizzical look as Potter bolted down the path crying out, "I'm here! I'm here!"
Severus watched closely as the champions all took their places. After Ludo Bagman moved away from Potter, most likely to reprimand him for his late arrival, and made his announcements, he watched Potter carefully as he took off his shoes and socks.
Potter removed a glob of gillyweed from his pocket. Severus was glad that he'd had the foresight to order fresh gillyweed of the highest quality and had placed it in a clear jar on a low shelf in his store room, then asked that house-elf Dobby to dust the shelves and containers.
His thoughts turned back to Hermione as he stared out at the placid lake.
~ T. B. C. ~
Author's Notes:
Yes, I changed a few things regarding the events and dialogue that took place in the grotto during the Yule Ball when Karkaroff confronted Severus. An asterisk denotes what is a direct quote or copied from the book. I wanted to give this scene a bit more insight since this is a canon Severus moment.
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Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~